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Harry Potter troons need to stay in multi-player where they belong.
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>>98680295Isn't Harry Potter the opposite of troons? It's created by the chuddiest woman alive.
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>>98680306So chud, that everyone is black and brown in the new version.
>>98680306>>98680313So the Harry Potter author is chaotic neutral?
>>98680306Go discuss it in multiplayer.
>>98680320No. She is just a feminist. But an old one.
>>98680320The Mold and its intentions transcend human taxonomies
>>98680344Mystery Box
I've noticed that a CYOA unnecessarily filters people if it has a disadvantage section that comes too early. This one technically counts, in the GURPS sense where having any personality at all is disadvantageous, so does /cyoag/ think that it would repel readers if I made this the second set of options shown, right after 'race'?
>>98680344Lawful evil dark elf.
>>98680366FFS, here's the file that I meant to show. Don't mind the 00FF00 squares, those are just placeholders.
>>98680366And I noticed cattle prefer pill pickers and genies since they have 0 attention span.
>>98680344Chaotic neutral elf is the worst by far.
>>98680383This reminds me of...
>>98680383What is this? A companion creator? Reverse course. Custom companions are shit. Premade ones are always better.
>>98680344true neutral is the only way.
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>>98680435>t. troon
>>98680425So Anon can be a manwhore but she can't?
>>98680497Obviously not, she's a woman. By definition she cannot be a manwhore.
>>98680497Women sleeping around has NTR marked all over it, while harems are what the Lord intended. They are not the same.
>>98680344mystery box
https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/0BxR5CDFOxGsDOXVXX0l1QlFQSmM?resourcekey=0-m3Sgz0KfXboCE4P9KMHZ4Ahttps://imgchest.com/p/dl7p68mg34o
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>>98680298>SettingCanon>FamilyMuggleborn >HouseRavenclaw>WandPinePhoenix FeatherAverageSupple>Magical TalentCharms Affinity Physical Charm Affinity Mental Charm Affinity Enchantment Affinity D.A.D.A Affinity Offense Affinity Defense Affinity Dark Arts Affinity Transfiguration Affinity Conjuration Affinity Vanishment Affinity Herbology Affinity Magical Creature Affinity >Spells & PotionsSpell Creation Everlasting Enchantments >PerksImmature Dotty Hardworking >WealthPoverty >PetOwl>CompanionsMultiplayerOlivia Strand (Love Interest)Jason Walsh (Rival)>School LifeLibraryDetentions >ElectivesStudy Of Ancient RunesCare Of Magical Creatures>AdventuresStudies Ill Fated>SchoolHogwartsAm Wizard, do spells. Not really much to say here, I'm just really really really good at magic at the expense of basically everything else.
You can’t beat Dumbledore
>>98680590>Dumbledorecanonically loses to the cock.
>>98680569>MugglebornPrepare to get bullied, you filthy mudblood.
>>98680598cocksleeve....
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>>98680598>bullying the soon to be greatest wizard of the ageWell that's certainly a choice you can make I guess.
>>98680308Who's your favorite companions?Sienna Moretti is a S-tier companion/life interest
>>98680629Hettie Hughes/Olivia Strand
You can’t beat Orsted You can’t beat Bell You definitely can’t beat Dumbledore
My own mental constructs are bullying me into severe depression in my dreamsCYOAs for this feel?
>>98680681none. you are the problem.
Post Conquest
>>98680702What did I do
>>98680629Don't stick your dick in crazy anon
>>98680756Never ever
>>98680569>shitty anime pictureIgnored.
>>98680629Claire Rosier.She is so beautiful she is accused of being part magical being whose whole magic is being super beautiful. Great social skills and not bad magical talent, eugenics win this one, she is perfect for a beautiful bloodline.Her problem is her personality, but thats due to environment rather than inherent. You have plenty of time to make her less shallow and self interested.By the way, am I the only one that feels bad for Andel Beaufort? The cyoa itself treats him like such an ugly guy when is at worst an average teenager. He looks ugly because the rest of companions go from above average to model looking. But in a class of teenagers, in a normal one, you would see him not sticking out for being ugly or anything. He even reminds me of a guy in my class that had a gf.
>>98680644You can beat orsted thoughJust not in a 1v1
>>98680644The cyoa literally lets you be 2x in talent to dumbledore. Pick fighting magic to have an affinity and be once in a lifetime prodigy, you are stated above Dumbledore and Voldemort in talent.
>>98680778She's only crazy to small minded folk. She has what most wizards lack, and are suppressed from expressing: curiosity.Why does magic work the way it does? Most wizards would shrug and say it does. Why would you want to incorporate new spells and new methodologies when old ones worked just fine? Because of what we can accomplish when physics are not a concern for us. Sienna understands this on a subconscious level, and her curiosity unnerves people.She is also incredibly adorable. Imagine her rushing up to you in a corridor at school, breathlessly telling you about a new potion or a spell she found in the library books, or something cool in the forbidden forest and she drags you along on another adventure.Then during the school holidays you send her a letter inviting her to come see cool muggle technologies and she rushes as soon as she can and excitedly listens to every word of a plane museum tour. You take her to odd places like hydroelectric dams and factories where she asks blue collar workmen endless questions about the machines, her eye sparkling with curiosity and glee.As the school years go by, we practically become inseparable, always talking about the new experiments in enchantment and potions we're doing, talking about the magical creatures we're going to observe until one night in our later school years, while we're both hidden in a copse waiting for a threstal gathering, with the stars bright above us.. something clicks, and we can't keep our hands off of each other. We're exploring, experimenting and the threstals are forgotten and we're focused on each other for the rest of the night.The next morning I expect the conversations to be awkward, but she just approaches it with the same curiosity she does with any other subject.After we graduate, we travel the world to find ancient magics and working towards our magnum opus, incorporating technology and magic seemlessly, and popularising it with wizards.
>>98680828I think it's the lack of socialization that also kneecaps him. If he's desperate for approval and wants to throw money at it, that kind of builds a reputation and bad people take advantage of that. Kids can be cruel, but we don't have to beClaire is pretty cool too, but it would probably be hard to get her to be less shallow if she naturally attracts sycophants
>>98680644>You definitely can’t beat DumbledoreWe've been over this before. Dumbledore's political game is terrible, and he'd rather scoop out his own eyes with a soup spoon than share his secrets.So you don't make it a power match. You take the fight into the social arena, where Dumbledore loses over, and over, and over again. Once he's been fired from Howarts, and appointed the new wizarding ambassador to Guinea Bissau, you've won. He's stuck in one of the poorest countries in the world, a long way from the center of things, and his reflexive secrecy means there won't be a proxy fighting on his behalf. Take your victory lap and enjoy it.
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>>98680630Explain your reasoning
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Here is a hypothetical. A distant being is curious and wants to settle a bet with one of its drinking buddies. You get to wake up with a fusion of Supreme Telekinetic, Supreme Body, and Supreme Inventor, however, one day later, Tok gets a fusion of Supreme Biokinetic, Supreme Sorcerer, and Supreme Telepath. For the duration of that one day, Tok will be hidden in his own invisible pocket dimension which will collapse afterwards, so while you could theoretically use the time to hide or protect your loved ones, you could not kill him ahead of time. He will know your identity and that you were responsible for giving him these powers, but is otherwise himself.Would you take that deal?
>>98681098Sure. After one day, seal my capacity for receiving communication to protect against Telepath speech 100 and go kill him.
>>98681098I don't give an iota of a fuck of what tok does so long he fucks off
>>98681098>Supreme Inventorjust invent the "kill tok machine" and insta kill him once he gets out
>>98681098. . .What have you done to Tok, that he'd value revenge over enjoying his new powers?
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>>98681169Backgrounds
>>98681176Skills
>>98681184Magic
>>98681191Equipment
>>98681196British witches
>>98681201German witches
>>98681205American witches
>>98681207Greek and Italian witches
>>98681215French witches
>>98681224Missions
>>98681224>68why are they ugiler than other countries
>>98681229Map
>>98681236If memory serves, Italics had problems sourcing images that all looked like they were in the same military. France is fanart of various characters fron other shows in the scout uniforms from season one of Attack on Titan.
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>>98680298I'm trying to relook at my build for this to see if there's much i'd change, and frankly harry potter is just kind of boring for cyoas. I don't mind the movies, but for making a build its just not very compelling.
>>98680528What do you think could purify the corruption in Bethel Abrahams? Do you think a Moon or a Sun could manage it, or maybe a Chained could seal his madness?
>>98680681Are You Still In Pain?https://imgchest.com/p/qb4zk2834jm
>>98681308He is fucked up by MGoD directly, and Her symbolism makes corruption extra hard to deal with on top of her being a Pillar. Realistically, only if She decides to remove it Herself for some reason. Well, maybe if Primordial Hunger is willing to help... But I'm not sure.True gods are mostly helpless in this case.
>>98680644huh... all of that is quite easy with the powers cyoas grantorstead just use time magic to go before his timeloopBell just kill him when he is low levelDumbledore he is just a human in the end, like he was killed in the story itself.
>>98681098Sure I would take the deal. Me an Tok don't have lethal beef with each other and we share Dragon autism.
>>98681396Fair enough.I would like to try and find a way to purify him.Maybe might try to make a deal with her and then scam her.
>>98681405I understand.Of course, the true nature of fate is chaos, and all sorts of things are possible, but so far everyone who's tried to use Her has ended up being used by Her instead, so I don't like your chances even if I want you to succeed.
>>98681098so what your saying I get a whole 2 days of prep time with potentially the whole of earths resources at my disposal. While Tok is stuck alone in a pocket dimension with nothing for a day?Both biokinetic and telepath requires flesh being and horde tactics for setup and sorcerer is the most prep-intensive discipline, especially without any material. While you have supreme inventor for prep, with the ability to use most of the worlds resources. Plus supreme body is a direct counter to sorcerer as they can literally just dispel magic trough punches. In those 2 days you will have created something to kill Tok.
>>98681165The best nations are the Fellan Witch Empire and the Union of States. The FWE controls trade and an insane amount of territory, absolutely dominant. The US is in a great position and should maintain its status quo, which it can do with minimal effort. I chose the FWE because it has better Witches.>Commanding Officer:Gender: FemaleNation of Origin: Fellan Witch EmpireBackground: WitchcraftMilitary Occupation: Magical CorpsSkills: Combat Veteran, Common Knowledge, Magical Knowledge, Mana Generator, Spellcasting, Strategy, TacticsMagic: Summon Familiar, Summon Golem, Crystallization, Crystal Mastery, Elemental Wall, Elemental Trap, Corrode, Force, Major Heal, Body Strengthen, Cure Poison, Physical Ward, Elemental Resistance, Light Weight, Hidden Sight>Subordinates:Amy Cornwallis>Events:Archives of the First Witch
>>98681423>the true nature of fate is chaosGood point, the Key of light is BS enough it could help if we managed to get one (which seems an hard objective, considering even CoI couldn't enforce it).More seriously yeah, tricking MGoD seems hard, and obviously removing her clutches from Bethel will be especially hard.Now that I think of it it becomes especially dangerous in my mother's little reincarnator build, considering it is chained, which is hard-countered by MGoD.As another option maybe Pseudo-God Almighty Adam might manage it?
Rolled 9 (1d9)>>98680344Roll.
>>98681499>Chaotic EvilDespite the label, one of the better ones.
>>98681405>Maybe might try to make a deal with her and then scam her.She reversed this on the GOO of scamming and the omniscient GOO, I don't like your chances
>>98681530>the omniscient GOO,Did she scam Primordial God Almighty? Seems to me they worked together pretty well.Then I might try to aim to Uncertain Mist through the Genie, without it the invasion can't start.Anyway a pretty important thing is that she doesn't know certain things (like my rank reinforcing the astral barrier), meaning she could be tricked by exploiting this.
>>98680798Fool.
>>98681444Interesting . . .offhand, this might be the first female build I've seen for Witches & Inquisitions. Thank you for sharing it
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>>98680681Occult
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>>98681165They are just angry homosexuals. Tok likes hot babes and this makes them seethe.
>>98680304yobber
>>98681440You can kill Tok without doubt. You have telekinetic plus inventor, so like you can instantly create any machine with both, and Body being the strongest power.The problem is to defeat Tok you have to kill humanity. And your powers are not suited for recreating life like biokinetic. So humanity dies.Nobody should take the deal
>>98681505Nah, one of the worst ones.Doesnt like you, thinks of you as a dildo, forces you with magic. Doesnt care about the baby.The only way for a person to be happy with this is to be Tok's levels of depravity.
>>98681948NG > CE > LN > LG > TN > CG > LE > CN > NE Based in part on:* appearance* style of speechEg objectively LG should be above CE, but LG's style of speech is irritating to me. Imagine living together with a person whose natural style of speech is consistently irritating to you, it's hell.
>>98681992Based just on those two things LE would be way higher, given she is the most beautiful one and she just speaks normally.And taking into accounts personality, CE is AT MOST in the bottom 3 of worst ones.
>>98682043LE is a dark elf. When dark elves have appeared elsewhere in Baalbuddy's art, they've been unmistakably the D&D kind of dark elf, with S&M culture undertones. I don't really like that.
In Dragonfall, if you have Digging Tier 3, Flight Tier 3, and Wingless Flight, are you effectively unable to be trapped in an environment?
>>98682104Steel prison. You need blink tier 3
>>98681926hmm... well technically depends where the pocket dimension is localized in? you could either move the planet away from the pocket dimension so he spawns in the void of space or move a portion of humanity off the planet. Technically Inventor should allow you to repopulate humanity.
>>98682110Muscle Tier 4 solves that issue
>>98682104For the most part. You would be very mobile at the very least.
>>98682222Checked but it's really the muscles that make it true. Anon doesn't need flying or digging to break a cage. A dragon could also do stuff like become incorporeal with spirit form.
>>98681926Actually Supreme Body can kill Supreme Telepath without resorting to genociding humanity. His reality warping punches have the ability to harm immaterial entities and selectively target them by piercing through the collective consciousness. Supreme body is OP as fuck. Its essentially the Anti-Superpower.
>>98681098>Supreme Sorceror + Supreme TelepathBasically unbeatable, he could shunt himself into every single mind and make a world-wide casting ritual with every single human.
>>98682441Supreme Body loses to Saddam Hussein. Just do the minecraft first trick trick and bury yourself until they give up. it's actual shit tier"Only" telepath/inventor/sorcerer can outright kill him but there are so many way to circumvent him it's not even funny. If you don't attack directly he can't hurt you. At full stealth, every single power can fuck his wife from the next room over while he watches in impotent horror
>>98682687They have super senses so I doubt that'd work
>>98682687>Supreme Body loses to Saddam Hussein. Just do the minecraft first trick trick and bury yourself until they give up. it's actual shit tierAnon what the fuck are you talking about
>>98682687>If you don't attack directly he can't hurt youlol that's cope. His aura doesn't just react to direct harm but to perceived "resistance". It doesn't matter if Bio, Telepath, or Sorcerer are acting via mindcontrlled proxies, flesh golems or hidden in pocket dimensions millions of lightyears away. Because those are "resistances" that can be easily circumvented via more punching. Just face it, Body bullies the rest of the Superpowers so hard its unfair.
>>98682748If I wasn't sleep deprived i wouldn't be here
wowan ;_;
>>9868023610 page oc tomorrow. Surinical btw
>>98682848Yummy yummy slop
>>98682529you had two whole days of prep time, with supreme telekinetic + supreme inventor you could have easily teleported everyone off planet.
>>98682848>10 page oc tomorrow. WHEEEEEEE>Surinical btwwhoooooo....
>>98682909>he didn't read the descriptionIf you tried to use supreme inventions for humanity it would fail. It only works when used for you, and like, a few other people. And even then, it takes time to do shit.Supreme Sorceror is literally the most broken one of all of them. The literal only scenario where you could possibly beat supreme sorcerer is if you both started on earth at the same time, and using Supreme Body, you INSTANTLY went on metroman-tier superspeed and looked through every single inch of the earth to find and kill the sorcerer before he has the time to put himself somewhere you can't reach him and cook up a spell to smite your assWith supreme telekinetic and two days prep time? Forget it, you're fucked.
>>98681642> this might be the first female build I've seen for Witches & InquisitionsReally? Surprising. Do people not want to be witches?
>>98682969>Do people not want to be witches?People don't want to be foids
>>98682969People dont want to trade their wee wees for power senpai. Then again, i think you could have guessed that.
>>98682966supreme inventor has a really easy loophole, just get an AI to invent tech for you.
slop doesn't count as oc btw
>>98682998I'm pretty sure that would still count. There's not really any other way about it, Inventor is just really limited and Sorceror is stupid broke. I have yet to see anyone think of a way to beat him outside of the scenario I outlined.
>>98683004should work, there are always loopholes to be found. You can make a super helmet that makes a person super smart and creates the tech for you. There is some limit of what products of your inventions no longer count as a part of your invention. Because if anything you modify counts as your invention then you can simply modify your enemy and they will insta die when trying to use their powers on a global scale because they are now your invention.
>>98683059I imagine it wouldn't work the same way you're not allowed to use rituals to speed up rituals as a supreme sorcerer, aka "It just does"Still though, the whole idea is very interesting. It's fun to think about a scenario where a bunch of random cunts get ridiculous superpowers. If you just go straight to "kill everyone before they have a chance to kill you" game theory it gets kinda boring.
>>98682966>If you tried to use supreme inventions for humanity it would failTo be clear, that only happens if you try to directly hand out inventions. You can still help people indirectly the same way the sorcerer does (I.e, you can cast a spell that helps people in some manner, but you can't hand out the ability to cast that same spell).
>>98683076well that's the limit of the supreme sorcerer, it shouldn't apply to the supreme inventor, because we aren't applying supreme inventors limit on how many humans it can be accessible to the sorcerer. Like there isn't anything preventing the inventor from making a self improving AGI. Huh... that might work actually, if you only make a self improving reality warping machine whose only purpose is to kill your rival. It might be able to kill them the moment their pocket dimension bursts. As it doesn't even violate the accessibility rule as you are the only user.
>>98682999At least 2 slop-heavy ocs were popular: Facility (by Peil) and Entropist.
>>98680306She's 100% left wing minus the transgender issue.If you don't completely tow the line when it comes to insane suicidal social leftism, then you get labeled as a right wing fascist. It's ridiculous.I can't wait until humanity is allowed to advance far enough to become a species ruled by merit and passion, instead of conformity and fear.
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>>98682848What's the genre?
>>98682969>this might be the first female build I've seen for Witches & Inquisitions>Really? Surprising. Do people not want to be witches?A lot of builds were optimized around getting the best team of witches they could afford. And while going/staying male may mean losing out on a personal arsenal of spells, it roughly doubles the number of witch tokens the player has. That allows them to afford all of the low level witches from their country, two or three of the veterans, or some mix of the two groups.
https://imgchest.com/p/qb4z9axzd7jWhat boost would an arcane elemental form give you?
>>98683411Oh, Tok, I have a question, actually. Can the Pact gifts be rescinded, destroyed or taken from you?
>Tok still coasting off Dragonfall all these years laterThe sign of a failed author that has lost his mojo.
Dragonfall was made by a ghost author who is now deceased. Tok plagiarized it. This was revealed to me in a dream.
>>98683411Why did he remove the Tier 4 spell thingy in the latest version? It was a fun gimmick similar to Walkblessed and probably contributed to its initial popularity. Does he just hate fun?
>EA still coasting off Entropist all these years laterThe sign of a failed author that has lost his mojo.
>Tank still coasting off OR all these years later.The sign of a successful author still in his prime.
>>98683525But anons love blood magic and magocratic convention? Also Worm and the others
>>98683534Yes anon that's the joke.
>>98683543Yeah but I was hoping to use that as a chance to accuse anons of being tsun for Dido
>>98683552>being tsun for DidoNo I'm actually a Yandere for Dido. That's why I became the First Sinner.
>>98683534magocratic was good until the remake made it a garbage tier reformist propaganda mess
>>98683575lol diety
>>98683509This is because Tok is a soulless sex pest who hates magic and wants to destroy all semblance of whimsy and wonder in his creations.The biggest evidence is when he said that magic is bad and corruptive and that it will destroy the universe under excuse of balance but did nothing to nerf the infinite ember breeding fetish loophole.
>>98683575Which domain chain is the best? I feel like Strength, Order and Protection is overall strongest contender for the king title in the pantheon. But I'm leaning towards Change, Luck and Chaos since I love divine tricksters and Change is a pretty busted domain.
>>98683576pragmatist*
>>98683601but magic fixes magic
>>98683411I gotta finish my build then i remembered the ring of bonds is essential but because i am not a half-baked scalefag i can't use it
>>98683152wrong, they weren't popular ocs because they weren't ocs
>>98683575>Divine Ideals:Life, Fertility, Love, Beauty>Domain:all>Followers:Natural Invocation, Everyday Ideals, High Clergy
>>98683796>actually wanting to be a giant lizard???
>>98683534>but anons love (tankista slop)Lol, lmao
>>98683915DenialGOD back at it again.
>>98683638Something unpopular/weak seeming and cooperative to maximize your piece of the pie and share followers, hence >>98683807.
>>98683895it's a dragon cyoa
>>98683807Nice Aphrodite build. Unfortunately you exist to get railed by the chad war god and bear his children. I'm sorry, I don't make the rules.
>>98680528how tf does runaway knowledge consume potions? like with the artifact I assume you just pour the potion on it or something but how do you, as a literal hallucination in peoples head, drink one?
>>98683941Indeed, united in love, the world shall have peace and harmony.
>>98683411Dragonfall build>ContinentIxtacotac>SpeciesScaleborn>SizeSmall>ColorGreen>Breath AttackSpirit Breath>FeaturesTail (Tier 4)Senses (Tier 4)Elemental resistance (Cold) (Tier 1) (From Legendary Lungs)Magic (Tier 3)Brain (Tier 4)Lungs (Tier 4)>Legendary TraitsIndestructibleProfane>Rare FeaturesEnduring FeaturesHumanoid Hands (from Scaleborn)Controlled Mutation (64x)>DietMeatSea CreaturesPlantsBugs>DrawbacksWeak SpotElemental Weakness (Acid)HoarderNocturnalWhelpHumanoid Stomach (from Scaleborn)HornyGuardianTelegraphed BreathArcane GlowWeakLeaking BreathEnvironmental IncompatibilityDragonite WeaknessScalelessDeep SleepRavenous>SpellsBestow Immortality (Tier 1)Leyline Circle (Tier 3)Pocket Dimension (Tier 1)Alter Environment (Tier 3)>CompanionsObranaskZinthiaCelestineTianaSangirVesiliaDelathwinnIllenwynnMorriganMetztliItotiaXixiZyreeToziLezeliOjoxxotlAamontepYanyaFujiChimonGoroMeili>PactsAsihlliel (Tier 1) (Ring of Bonds)Malgoroth (Tier 1) (The Vorpal Blade)Finally finished my build (until I decide to change something).
>>98684041Explaining a bit the build.The cores of the build were taking people in need of the wish (and quickly, I'm sorry for Vanrir but I can find him and befriend him, I have the senses to do that) and taking a lot of controlled mutation (the number I set on was 64 because that's the amount I need to make a fusion breath of all the types), I then went for legendary features (which I cannot mutate) that interested me (knowledge is power so the mind reading from breath and the senses 4 interested me, lungs let me visit other settings, to help out there, and tail+enduring features allows me to create materials as strong as dragonite, hoping it can be worked. Earlier I went for Mana too, but I realized that leyline circle meant I can cast any spell for free, so I don't need that much mana), from what I heard differently from broodlord I need to actually have enduring features to make it stick.The diet is the section I will most likely revise, and was altered last second to account for certain things, I would like to be able to taste all kinds of food, but it's inefficent (I would prefer to go for eating sunlight, but scaleborn stops me).I hope to manage to learn counter spell Tier 3 and pocket dimension Tier 3.The Ring of Bonds was a must-have for me, and the Vorpal Blade might be useful in future, but it was really painful not taking the first deal of the Vlokaardjem, or stealing the comically powerful Corruptive breath.My first legendary trait was already explained, the second is, despite me not liking fighting, if in future an evil hive minded dragon appeared, and it was the only way to stop him.
>>98683450Not Tok but they can't be rescinded (otherwise Megumin couldn't steal them). The items and companions can potentially be destroyed/killed or taken though. It's a big incentive to use soulbind and bestow immortality. I have been working on a no magic build and have realized how restrictive it really is.
>>98683601Not a big Tok fan but this is a misrepresentation. Magic is corruptive in theory to give Andea a reason to be how she is. In practice it's fine and she is freaking out over nothing. Also anti-fun? You gotta be kidding me. Dragonfall is an extremely high power setting and allows for absolutely busted combos. If you want anti-fun try playing with a real DM and try using "wish" for anything substantive in a D&D campaign. He has had to make some rulings and balance adjustments but only in the case of really serious exploits.
>>98684041nice drawbacks, cool revolting abomination you've created there, good job powergaming
>>98684179Thank you? Sorry I don't get too much sarcasm on the internet.Anyway all the drawbacks I took were ones I was ready to deal with and wouldn't annoy me too much (ravenous is the most annoying).
>>98684041>>98684105Nice build anon. As for missing out on the Vlokaardjem you can still make a pact with them in the future.
>>98684205Yeah, I need to find a way to reach out to them tho.Same for a few others I like, like Memnoph, but Vlokaardjem giving a direct mission that objectively improves their position, rather than political objectives, made them more directly important to me (and I can resurrect the dead, so sacrificing my firstborn was a secondary worry).
>>98684215>Yeah, I need to find a way to reach out to them tho.Glachiildir has you covered. I wouldn't even think it is necessary to take him as a companion.
>>98684041>Environmental Incompatibilityspecificy
>>98684201He is just an anon who spergs out over any build he thinks takes "too many" drawbacks.
>>98684294On the same token you would want Aamontep for Menoph (you would actually have to have him as a companion tho).
>>98684294Oh, I thought about Morrigan probably not being old enough, it's true I probably should search for Glachiildr and ask him (and as long as I manage to enter a range of 1000 km I should be able to sense him).>>98684298Oh, right, bext iteration of the build I will probably change it to desert.I'm also thinking to reluctantly give up on all the pacts I previously mentioned and stealing Sakura from the spirit king (I would orefer to not have him as an enemy, but I'm not dumb enough to take his deal), probably the only case of stolen gift effective on a companion.>>98684305Thank you for the explanation, I can understand how the long list of drawbacks I took can be annoying.>>98684323Well, luckily enough I have Aamontep, I would find it too cruel to keep him sealed like that.
>>98684305i'm not sperging, i understand with full clarity and reason that drawbacks and their prevalence is a disease on cyoag by every metric, where literally every single anon is obliged to take twenty drawbacks each because that is the only way to stay competitive, irrespective of if it makes any narrative, aesthetic or logical sense for such a character to have so many, often wildly contradictory and unrelated issues all in one and the same personhood at the same timepeople make limbless ugly blob monsters with numerous personality derangements then spout on about how none of that matters because they have top tier magic circuits and talent, so they just blanket assert they'll "solve it somehow" or ignore it because "so long as i'm not literally incapable of doing anything the points are worth it"
>>98684346On Morrigan it's not about age but belief. Morrigan follows Ravvena who is a member of Ordins Pantheon (but his enemy because he is the God of Winter and she Summer). Glachiildr is specifically a follower of the "Old God's" (Vlokaardjem) and got his powers at the very same mountain described in their T2 pact.
>>98684346>only case of stolen gift effective on a companion.I always thought Senestra was specifically meant to be stolen because waifuing her up causes her to become a fallen angel.
>>98684374>i'm not sperging>Proceeds to spergLol
>>98684374Could you please describe how I'm a limbless mutated freak? I took mainly drawbacks about being vulnerable and weak, stuff I don't care too much about, with a few more because I needed them.Heck I didn't even take the "be ugly" drawback, which is pretty objectively a minor issue.>>98684382Oh, yeah, I meant old about her being of the newer faiths, as opposite to older traditions.Completely missed Glaachildr was specifically mentioning that mountain, good note.>
>>98683575DOG, Patron God of Dogs. A dog is a Comforting presence that Loves and Protects the Lives of their family.>Divine IdealsLife, Love, Protection, and Comfort>ServantsWild Aspect>FollowersNatural Invocation, Everyday Ideals, and Sacred Wards>Sworn EnemiesThe Undead & Vampires
>>98684374>anon picks a drawback>NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO YOU ARE BECOMING A LIMBLESS FREAK AIEEEEEEEEEEEEE
>>98684396I'm not sure of how feasible that would be, but might be possible, and better than siding with Ordin for sure.Anyway I was wrong, wasn't thinking of Sephillia.
>>98684374Oh no, people take drawbacks that they think they can deal with. The horror.
>>98684431>Completely missed Glaachildr was specifically mentioning that mountain, good note.Yea stuff like this is why it's Toks best cyoa, lot's of little world building throughout.
>>98684446You are mostly right, stealing say Ashiielwyn would be a really bad idea.
>>98684454Agree on that.>>98684464This made me wonder, if you fullfilled Delathwyn/Blackthorn's wish, but stole a gift from Ashilliel, what would she think of you?
>>98683796>I gotta finish my build then i remembered the ring of bonds is essential but because i am not a half-baked scalefag i can't use it
>>98684489guess that will do
>>98684431>Weak SpotWhat narrative purpose does this serve? Why do you have this, what epic story or revealing tale is there for you to have a weak spot? There obviously isn’t any, you just chose this one because you thought it’d be a none issue, “free points” and so on yeah? It isn’t fine, it is akin to a hideous wound which makes your dragon look ridiculous and far more difficult to take seriously, on paper or in the mind.>Elemental Weakness (Acid)Ah yes you are weak to acid. Why? Why oh fucking why in God’s name are you? “Because I picked it”? Thank you, your greed is really quite revealing in showing how little actual realism or depth there is to your characterization here.>HoarderBRILLIANT! A PERSONALITY DRAWBACK! gimme gimme gimme You’ve now made yourself a sucker for impulses contrary to yourself, a drive which is unjustified barring the directive of the CYOA which states de facto you are so. Now at all points, in the future going forward you’ll have to grapple with your hoarding tendencies, for endless eternities going forward. You got ten whole points for it. Nice job!>NocturnalRandom nonsense for the sake of it. Why are you this way, are you connected to a goddess of the night? Did being nocturnal say anything meaningful? Obviously not, it’s just another couple points to add onto the pile, because you imagined it would cause no impediment.>WhelpAbsolutely hilarious, you’ve made a mockery of yourself immediately. While your antics are already clownish, now your self insert also happens to an infant while undergoing all the issues above and below. A massive gaping wound, rubbing up to lizards as though you were a dog in heat, OH! And you’ll be protecting a location all at the same time! The people will rejoice with a stalwart poodle like yourself ready at hand to defend them!these just being the first five drawbacks, and already the impression you give is of a mewling cretin deserving of being thrown into the trash
Great, we have a new autist now. How does this keep happening?
You've heard of the trolley problem, but now it's time for the brawler problem.You're empowered and become an extremely capable hand to hand fighter, with a fighting style tailored to your ideal. You are capable of dodging, catching, or even swatting bullets out of the air. While you are empowered beyond the limits of a human, your mental and emotional state is unchanged. Similarly, your technique is instinctual. You didn't train to become this strong, so your actual experience in combat is unchanged. The more history you have with actual fighting, training, and combat theory, the more refined your movements will be. Similarly the better your mental state, the more control you'll have over yourself.Do you take on the following challenge?A bunch of cultists are trying to summon an otherworldly being to bring destruction upon the world. You have to put a stop to it solo. The ritual site is located within a cave, however the ritual room itself is grand in size, with moonlight shining through an open ceiling which covers the altar where the creature will be summoned. The room is filled with cultists, some of which sing and chant from balconies that are dug into the cave walls.You'll be facing a lot of weak opponents, but they are numerous and unending. It’ll feel like you’ve walked into the lair of the queen ant, and though they may be weak they are unafraid of death or pain, and are fanatical zealots who will stop at nothing to kill or restrain you. Most are completely untrained and unarmed, though some have daggers, and a rare few are capable of magic. These magic wielding cultists can either lob magical projectiles at you with the strength of a rifle bullet, empower their cultist allies to mutate and become imbued with demonic strength (enough to rip a man in half which you can also do even if your ideal is speed-based), temporarily reduce the damage of your physical strikes (Your punches feel softer even if you hit with the same force as normal.) (1/2)
>>98684582Carcasses attract flies...
>>98684585About five cultists scattered throughout the room are channeling their magic to uphold a barrier preventing you from disrupting the ritual, and they must be taken out first before you can defeat the head priest who is defenseless.If you fail to stop the ritual, you can still defeat the being as it's weak from its arrival. It can absorb cultists if they willingly give themselves to the beast (which they will so long as they are conscious). It fights like a brawler, and has sharp claws that can scratch at you, as well as a thick tail that can be flicked like a whip. It is also capable of conjuring flames out of thin air, either covering its own body with it temporarily (though this harms it), or hurling it at you.. Cultists will not attack you in the second phase, as they consider you to be no match for their god.Note: A random person will have to fight this cult one day if you do not. (They are enhanced in the same way you would be.) Are you okay with entrusting the fate of the world to another somewhere down the line, or do you take on the challenge yourself?Skipping phase 1 is allowed. The cultists will do you no harm if you let them summon their god.The false god can not be cheesed. If you’re relying on one gimmick to win, you’re going to get your ass handed to you. All vital organs are metaphysical, and can not be reached by you, you’re going to have to break it and make it bleed the old fashioned way.The fight will be broadcast to the entirety of the world, as the cultists have hijacked all electrical communication systems.The false god will partially react based on its confidence. If you’re doing too well, it may try to overcompensate for the gap in skill.(2/2)Music to set the mood:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VmB75z9mhsghttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=86rCNkENNaA
>>98684585>>98684589Thanks italics but I'm not reading all that
>>98684585What do you mean, "Do you take on the following challenge?" The world will literally be destroyed. There is no choice.
>>98684602In post two it's explicitly said that you can let some random person deal with it in your place.
>>98684585>You have to put a stop to it solo.why
>>98684628Because you're transported to the area by magic or something.
>>98684585why wouldn't i take the challenge? sounds fun.
>>98684585>Do you take on the following challenge?Yes.>A random person will have to fight this cult one day if you do not.>Are you okay with entrusting the fate of the world to another somewhere down the line?No lol. Land on a kid or elder and it's over.
>>98684696>a random little girl empowered by the brawler problem singlehandedly obliterates the cultists and their godcute
>>98684561Seems to me you missed in Dragonfall I just dropped in, my egg just hatched, I can't have a lore justifying my choices, as I wasn't a part of the setting till now.Yeah, Hoarder is a bit bad, but not too much.Most people are born as children, me doing the same isn't an impediment to me, and I don't particularly need to immediately showing myself publically (and even if I did both factions I'm considering to be a guardian for would respect me deeply anyway because of what I did during the dragonfall).Also scars are cool.
>>98684582He has been here for awhile. You start to recognize specific autists if you lurk enough. Mostly he has complained about CC builds that took a lot of Drawbacks which initially seemed constructive but overtime it became clear that he just hates drawbacks conceptually and wasn't weighing builds individually.
I think tomorrow I'll try and make a build for Dragonfall.
>>98684826>I think tomorrow I'll try and make a build for Dragonfall.Good, we rarely talk about builds now.How are you thinking to make it?
>>98684817Don't bother feeding him anon. You took the Drawbacks you thought you could handle and were worthwhile for what you were going for. His desire for builds to be thematic is on him. He should go to the MP general if he cares so much because on here we self insert and try and make the best build for ourselves. If that means a Dracolich that knows Kung-Fu, is weak to cold, and stole Divine Radience? Then so be it.
>>98684858Thank you for the suggestion, and fun comment.
>>98684858people are of course free to make whatever incoherent nonsense they like, just don't argue it is anything more than that, yeah?
>>98683208One could perhaps argue that anti-transgender ideology is something of a poster child for being ruled by conformity and fear
I am at a crossroads, anons. What should I do?>More detail, but also more pages and more jittery flow>Less detail per section but somewhat neater page outlook
>>98685068more pages is fine
>>98685068The second option is generally the way to go. Most authors do not have a problem filling up pages, but they do have a problem with adding pointless filler that makes the CYOA bloated and unfocused.
>98685033bait
>>98685076>Yeah i could elaborate on this very important detail>Oops i reached an arbitrary word/page limit guess no one will ever know tehehehe
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>>98685082True tho. But bait
>98685088bait x2
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>>98685083I'm just saying the more pages a CYOA has, the fewer reposts and builds it will generally get. There are exceptions, but that's the general rule. Like I love long CYOAs like Dawn of a New Demonlord, Dragonfall, or Sylens Witcher CYOA. But CYOAs like Traveler’s Tale, Starry Knights, Anime Highschool, Isekai Form CYOA, Universal War, and Seoul 2030 are such bloated garbage.
>>98685076>>98685083Both can be true. It's a balance.
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>>98685099>>98685115Yes, which is why I said:>The second option is generally the way to go.
>>98683411Would eyeless sight improve your vision if you already had Tier 4 Senses (Sight)? Also how bright does Arcane Glow get with Tier 4 Magic?
>>98685012>just don't argue it is anything more than that, yeah?But they are more. They are often the strongest combos. Go to the multiplayer thread and refuse to buy a good spell or something in a wizard cyoa because it's not the right element thematically.
same.
>>98684478She'd still be pissed off at you, she's an ungrateful bitch
>>98685127I have to say, this is probably my favorite. It's got great pictures, cool idea, minimal fetishbait. I'm a little surprised every time I encounter it
>>98685146>Also how bright does Arcane Glow get with Tier 4 Magic?You are the sun
>>98685287but i hate the sun...
>>98685298too bad sunny boy
Rolled 6 (1d10)>>98680344Rollin' rollin' rollin' rollin'
That was close...
Rolled 2 (1d10)>>98680344Lets give it a shot then.
Where the white women at?
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>>98685441Imagine being a second class anthro K-9 police officer and getting blackmailed into providing certain "services" for stressed out human female police officers...
11 pages into OC and I am realizing I am never going to get this done
>>98685432Joining the FBI
>>98685579kek
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>>98685537sounds like you need to trim some fat off.
>>98685537Only some non descript amount of pages left you can do it anon!
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>>98685645Fat OC is best OC
>>98685432>Class:Domestic (owl)>Freedom Papers:Reward>Bonuses:Worldly, Handsome, Clever, Strong, Independent, Enhanced Senses, Charming, Young, 3 White-Collar Skill-Softs (literature, philosophy, theology)>Job:Uplift Rights Activist>Housing:Downtown Apartment>Possessions:Net Uplink (Better x2, Secure, Invisible, Secret Memory Cache)>Drawbacks:2 Debts>Credits:1,000>Endgame:Change the WorldPublish books, poems, exegeses, etc. under the pseudonym of "The Hermit" to promote change.
>>98680435>true neutral is the only wayhttps://youtu.be/k8ws_APXilE?si=vi7-kVobqn7PMc-A
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>>98683411I'll make a build only if Tok rates it
>>98684178>If you want anti-fun try playing with a real DM and try using "wish" for anything substantive in a D&D campaign.I just know your dumbass was deservedly kicked from the table for some dumb bullshit you pulled
>>98684585I've done a few years of mma, and untrained opponents are okay, but I would really rather have a weapon or two rather than just fight hand to hand. Positioning would matter if there's a finite number of the cultists, but it seems there aren't.If I could have a melee weapon, like a montante or a battle rapier, I could probably do this.Montante would let me create space to get to the chanelling mages, and kill them.But the cultists being unafraid of death and pain makes this super tricky because literally nothing is stopping them from just rushing me and pinning me to the ground. Maybe I could create enough momentum to be like a car and just rush through them?
>>98686115>I'll make a build only if Tok rates iTime difference. Tok's probably gone for the night.
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Anyone heard from EternalAnon in the last four-five years? Is he still doing okay?
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>>98686125Nope I was the DM. Just pointing out that the amount of shenanigans allowed by Tok is really quiet high. People love to bitch about him but he is really quiet generous.
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>>98683411Actually going to make an image build. Probably won't be ready until next thread.
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>>98686263>Nope I was the DM>quiet highUh-huh sure buddy whatever you say
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>>98686277Is your DM fucking Dr. Who or something with a British accent?
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>>98686290Schizo babble
>>98686356Kek
>Important antagonist to a CYOA is your possessive friend who is malding over you not joining their personality cult and really wanting to be banged by you (as an important sidequest) but can only vocalize it into "Reee's" and spergout on everyone else thus kickstarting the events of the CYOA.>Another antagonist is malding because they can't get over you ignoring them, has an obsessive one-sided infatuation, and is stuck with a simp that follows them around as a lackey.Thoughts?
>>98685432>Domestic (Aye-Aye)>Retired>Enhanced Senses>Friends>Worldly>Clever>Strong>White-Collar Skill-Soft (Computer Science*)>Blue-Collar Skill-Soft x2 (Electrical*, Plumbing)>Illegal Skill-Soft (Lock-Picking)>Corporate Gig / Criminal>Hobo Commune>Basic Firearm>-Gauss Gun>-Suppressor>Less-Lethal Self Defense Weapon>Basic Body Armour>-Heavy Armour>=Environmentally Sealed>Basic Net Uplink*>-Better Uplink x2>-Secure Uplink>-Invisible Uplink>Tools of the Trade>Multi-Tool>Auto-Senses>Gecko Pads>Elective Cybernetics (Arm)>-Enhanced Cybernetics (Finger Probe)>-Built In Weapon (Gauss Gun)>Vehicle>-Better Vehicle (Utilities Van)>-Counter-Theft Measures>Tasteful Furnishings x3>Disabled (Smell*)>Deformed>Addiction (Methamphetamine) >Animal InstinctsYou've got to love the furries. What a strange subculture. I grew up reading Redwall, so thankfully that will always be my model of an anthropomorphic animal. Not the comparatively lame cartoon depiction, but the classic cover images
>>98684843Image build, as god intendedI'll get started now
>>98686464corporate facilities department plumber/electrician/cable guy, gas accident deformed, NDA, retirement, falls in with hobo friends from work under the city, expansion of hobo encampments, thievery, meth smoking. I also forgot to put Power as the goal. King of the Underworld
>>98686445For some reason i got reminded of italics.
>>98686470Eh, I never made an image build, I wouldn't even know where to start.I was more thinking buildwise which direction do you plan to focus on?
>>98685070I want to do something specific, with the number of options per pages that I cannot do if there are more pages. As much as it pains me, I've got to trim the hedges.>>98685076It's a hard bullet to chew and has taken a lot of whittling, but I think I'll be able to make it work. Slightly more abstract wording to compensate for lack of exposition. The choices should carry the soul of it, even so.
>>98686327Sorry - got distracted.
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>>98686522We'll see once I take a look at the options, but I'm the kind of person who prefers to stay far away from fighting and hide in the shadows.
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>>98686562Fair enough, I too made a build that aims to avoid fighting as much as possible.
>>98684636okay well in that case things will work out fine because of magic or something
>>98683411Trying to understand Tok's ESL babble, are the first two legendary features free?
>>98686710Yes. One of them can be anything but the other has to be a feature you got from your species.
>>98686445Husanon or Italics, take your pick.
>>98686710One is free no matter what.A second one is also free if it is an upgrade of something your Species gives you, e.g. a Western Dragon can get free Scales or Wings as Legendary but not Claws.
>>98686729Or flight, that's what he was having difficulty communicating, it can be down stream of another option (namely flight comes from wings).
>>98686725>>98686729Then how much does a second T4 cost if it's not a species specific upgrade?
>>98686753its just free
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>>98686774bird yeahhh
>>98686445extremely woman coded, miss me with the interpersonal drama
>>98686445I really need to make my 'Good Morning' Cyoa.
>>98686242I've never finished an Eternal Arms build, but I get closer with each pass. I skew towards the Doomsday Watch, and options that unlock new tech and abilities. I don't care if Eternal Arns lives or dies, you see. My priority is making sure the wonders unleashed by this war survive, and that no one blows up the planet.If I have to step in to help with the other objectives, I will. Takeshi and his Misfits are going to be highly visit, as will Eva when she starts controlling drone armies. Not sure about the Harvester Box . . .
>>98686445Is it gay? Is it yuri? Is it futa?Do you get to customize the antagonists or yourself? Cute anime girls can make almost any scenario work.
>>98686810Cyoag always assumes male pov
I was halfway done with a cyoa but then I was overcome by cringe, feeling the premise to that cyoa in particular is cringe and making cyoas in general is cringe. I think I won't retire from cyoas but I will try to make some uncringe but also uninteresting cyoas instead.
>>98686845Don't ask 4chan for permission.There are a number of analytical (destructive) processes meant to chew it to tatters and spit it out wrong.
>>98686845Good luck surinical
>>98686881Not what I meant. I meant, I got this far without feeling the slightest bit of cringe, and then it suddenly kicked in. "This is so cringe. Am I really the kind of person who would produce this?" and suddenly it's difficult to proceed. Many of my favorite cyoas of old are cringe in similar ways but doing it by myself feels like a different thing.
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>>98686478lmao same
>>98686893I found out why I dislike AI text. It's reddit coded- advertisements built-in, one ups popping up like mushrooms and basedfaces gushing like your mom last night.
>>98686893Thanks for putting it in imgchest so I dont have to see several pages of slop staining the thread
>>98686893>art that looks like old anime>powerfantasy>all the rulers of hell are females so you can fuck themEven after appealing to the lowest common denominator, he still gets immediately shat on for using AI. Surinical is the most abused and bullied Author. Poor fella :(
>>98686992I don't dislike his cyoas because of the AI, I dislike them because at their core they are reddit-tier slop and not interesting or fun at all.Polished turds thats all they are
>>98686893Looks more like some shitty corporate infographic than a cyoa...
>>98686992>art that looks like old animeAnd its still uncanny AI stuff >powerfantasyThe writing cant save the vibe murdered by the art.Its fine having bad art. Entropist is a hideous cyoa full of terrible slop art (to use an example). But entropist is evocative, the shitty aesthetics dont undermine the power fantasy its trying to sell. The writing is ass and the art is bad, which means you dont have that intuitive fantasy created (which is what you need to make a powerfantasy engaging, create a scenario where someone wants to imagine themselves). >all the rulers of hell are females so you can fuck themWhich doesent matter because theyre not hot (because the art is uncanny AI). Surinicial is clearly good at using AI, much better than any other authors. But his attempts at pushing the aesthetic capabilities of it are imo paradoxically counterintuitive, the more he tries to have an actual aesthetic and design the less approachable the work is, which means the inherent downsides of the medium he chose become more significant. If he wants to make slop he should just embrace it and make slop, it has a track record of working (once again, see entropist). If he wants to make "art" he should abandon his AI and go scour pixiv or whatever, and he can be discount italics like he clearly is trying to be here (italics isnt very good either, but hey hes popular). As is this is just discount ZBG but with shittier art, an unappealing aesthetic and a cyoa too long for a shallow low thought power fantasy.
>>98686845What's the premise anon? I shall judge it in your stead so you can be free of the cringe burden
>>98687028>his attempts at pushing the aesthetic capabilities of it are imo paradoxically counterintuitive, the more he tries to have an actual aesthetic and design the less approachable the work is, which means the inherent downsides of the medium he chose become more significantIn english doc
>>98687001they aren't even polished, that's where the ai complaint comes in, if you want polished turds go look at aromage cyoas
>>98687053Hes trying to make his cyoa "art". This is fine, theres a couple authors who try that (think NO). But when you do that you arent as simple and evocative. Basically: think of a simple image of a generic western dragon, you know what that dragon is, you know what it does, the image can be bad, the description can be bad, but you know enough about dragons (and probably think dragons are cool) so you can fill in the gaps fine enough on your own and the cyoa just gave you the prompt "imagine a dragon". This is the advantage of "bad looking" cyoa like entropist or toks stuff or those really old cyoa. They deal with generic stuff that you know enough about that they basically just need to remind you of a thing you like. Surinicial is trying to be more than that, hes trying to make something that creates on its own, rather than simply tells you "hey, you like edgy stuff right?". But because hes choosing to work with the medium of AI, hes limited by its shortcomings (and his own writing). So by distancing himself from the base "prompt" level of cyoa he makes them less impactful and engaging (despite their technically greater aesthetic fidelity and quality).
>>98686893holy kino
>>98686893Dunno if i should pick acedia or escapism
>>98687082? but nobody's posted OR yet
>>98687056>if you want polished turds go look at aromage cyoasI don't appreciate you insulting my woman like that.
>>98687056I bet you like Tok cyoas with taste that bad.
>>98687111>>98687129name a good author or forever hold your peace
>>98686892Cringe is a reaction to unwanted behavior. Ie. you notice that you'd not fit in- you're the wrong genre.So, assuming your CYOA isn't bad on its own merits* you should strive for feeling Punk enough to go through with it. *or R*ddit's and Deviantart's if you use AI
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>>98687111it's the best compliment she can get
>>98687028>Discount ZBG???? i don't see the similarity
>>98687136Aromage.
>>98686893Thank you for the OC, anon.
>>98686893Thank you for oc
>>98687177You dont see the similarity with the premise of "you are now a magical god-king of some nonsense magic land and must pick a waifu to strengthen your dynastic claim"
>>98687311Pretty sure the cyoa goes more in detail about how are you gonna shape your nonsense magic land
>>98687324Probably, ZBG was basically just a bunch of waifu descriptions while this has like 16 sections or something.
>>98687330...Have you actually read the cyoa? The waifus are in no way the focus. And there isn't an epic battle royale to see who gets to kiss you and stuff.
>>98687333god no, it looks like ass and has a fucking chapter list on the first page
>>98687335Then why the fuck are you casting judgement upon it?
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>>98687056It would seem that you've upset members if the aroturd eater community.
>>98687410>samefaggingembarrassing
>>98687138It does use AI art.
>>98686893(Un)Holy fuck, I didn't think it was ever going to release! Thank you Surinical, thank you!
>>98686893I'm fine with the art as long as it isn't horrid, but did he use AI to write this?
>>98681642>>98681646Clock Keeper AND Occult, finally a man of taste!
>>98689926I really like this cyoa, but I can't put exactly into words why. It's not just the fact that it's 40k, since there are other 40k cyoas that I don't feel that much about.
