Previous: https://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/82928235 >Request, write, or share stories and provide feedback/critique when appropriate. All writers are welcome, SFW and NSFW.>Instead of asking for interest or worrying about a fetish, just post your damn writing/request and see what happens. You might get lucky.>Complaining about fetishes is dumb and stupid in /trash/. Use that negative energy for requesting, reading and writing instead.>Please tag stories so readers know what they're getting into. Nobody can force you to tag stories you share or make. However, people are MUCH likelier to skip a work if there are no tags present.>Try to bump the thread if it gets to page 9, but feedback is always appreciated for posted stories, for author or reader! Those are the best kind of bumps./wfg/'s Masterbin: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ccAAmGecQiEE5ywZc4S4d1347WuMPEsF3DbSNAS4LRo/editLewd Thesaurus shamelessly stolen from /flg/https://rentry.org/lewdsesaurusRequest Dump: Find/Post requests here toohttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1nyDKegfYhIvlv7ZvGoxswIVkiG5lw1lrOeDFvZbw_WU/edit?pli=1General grammar tutorials and key noteshttp://theeditorsblog.net/fularchives/https://theeditorsblog.net/2010/12/08/punctuation-in-dialogue/https://theeditorsblog.net/2014/04/08/keeping-adjectives-in-line/https://apostrophe.how/Tips on Improving Prose:https://jerichowriters.com/prose-style/
>>83356825Previous thread stories:The Little Tinkerbat that Could https://archiveofourown.org/works/47769337/chapters/225001706>Tinkerbat/Shantae, Wedgie, humiliation, exhibitionism, thighjobREGULAR BOT REVIEWS: 2002 TRAVAIL GEORGIAhttps://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQgiMptPdEaB9w_M0DvlymPhWsDXZprJt5QX9omGvc6QJnyxs0bBE9ndrP-Q3glRtS-KXn0i8-lhmI9/pubREGULAR BOT REVIEWS: 2001 WAKEMAN PIONEERhttps://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vRkj2wqBoEtn6fSeoAt_zuoVEz3tdBPPo1jRMlyRgbUmxKIieh84bAxIq_c4FcLl70FJtxDUJKGabji/pubSECONDHAND FUTURE: GENERAL ROBOTICS M1https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSJagcUpxYdVX6REVQNzA2UdyHRjd9Ks8CwTJ3URXPq4kLmm05Wny_CNQ9LgA3FuJIxH8aH7nqQQjZj/pub>comedy/worldbuilding flash fictionGood Companyhttps://rentry.co/dmoqbhx8>Tags: Pseudoregalia, Femdom, Lingerie, Public Sex, Cunnilingus, Cowgirl, Creampie.Sparring Matchhttps://rentry.co/nmvan39g>Tags: Pseudoregalia, Maledom, Wrestling, Rape Roleplay, Fingerfucking, Creampie.Cartomancy>Eindride tells Princess Luna's fortune. He doesn't like what it says.https://rentry.org/mlp_cartomancy>tags: SFW, mlp:fim, romance, Luna, Human, RGRE-adjacent, 28k wordshttps://rentry.co/v2w62pkr>Tags: attribute theft, portal (object), cock theft, futanariWhat Falls Below Must Eventually Be Found https://archiveofourown.org/works/77309001>Hazbin Hotel, anal, oral, hate sex, size difference, piss, rape/non-con, trauma, interspecies, sadism
>>83357121From #364.X:Hexed in Hoelbrakhttps://rentry.org/femcharrhexedinhoelbrak>M/F, HMOFA, Charr, Guild wars 2, >Implied Hypnotic Suggestion, Mental Magic, Vaginal, Anal, Oral, Magic clones, Public sexJCTTG: Armies Rise pt. 3https://www.deviantart.com/samaster/art/JCTTG-Armies-Rise-pt-3-1322243397>medieval fantasy, isekai, melodrama, Resisting TemptationsAdult Activitieshttps://archiveofourown.org/works/83391201>Five Nights at Freddy's, Clown Fucking, Public Sex, Soft Prostitution, Multiple Guys on One GirlCursed Clussy Carnival by SAmasterhttps://www.deviantart.com/samaster/gallery/94752862/cursed-clussy-carnival>Clowns, Clown Girls, mysteryWhite Lion Chapter 8: Nia the Galehttps://www.deviantart.com/missingidentidy/art/Chapter-Eight-Nia-the-Gale-1329721417Tags: dark fantasy, vampires, adventure Link anything I missed
my haunt has returned
For anybody who had any interest in proof.py (automated proofreading tool) from an earlier thread, Gemma 4 MTP support is in llama.cpp now. Substantial performance boost for 31B, nothing much for the 26B MoE (testing on pure CPU only). Also 4bit QAT (quantization aware training) models are out. Benchmarks look disappointing but could be worth checking out if you're memory constrained.
avoiding late stage abortion
So back when Digimon Story Time Stranger was out, one of the most reoccurring pictures made was of boys and men bonding with DemiDevimon as their partner, and it jumps to them evolving into a very sexy, evil female digimon, but retaining most of their initial personality, most basically unaware of how their new form affects their friend.I'd like to request a writing that explores that sensation a bit. I'm thinking of a man (or boy) who takes a DemiDevimon under his wing after DemiDevimon's 'friends' basically beat it up and left it for dead. Maybe a time skip happens to show that a now-healthy DemiDevimon sees the man (or boy, now teen/adult) as boss and some of those cute friend interactions? At most they get in trouble together, eat together, play together. Best friends. They get ambushed by DemiDevimon's 'friends' one day, but actually hold them off well enough. But when they do something that would cause great harm to the man, DemiDevimon warp digivolves into Beelstarmon to fend them off. But now she doesn't know how to change back, if she can even do it at all. This makes the man feel things as the same mannerisms, different body from his partner make him ask many questions about his tastes.Can be clean, erotica or smut, up to author, but I do think confronting the feelings should happen.>Suggested tags if lewd: vanilla, groping, fingering, friend to lover, creampie, belly play/kissing, licking, cunninglingusBeelstarmon/DemiDevimon personality isn't fixed, so they can act any wayyou want. But if you are curious as to some details:https://www.grindosaur.com/en/games/digimon-story-time-stranger/digimon/beelstarmonhttps://www.grindosaur.com/en/games/digimon-story-time-stranger/digimon/demidevimon
there's a gnat in my room and it keeps flying by my face
how soon is too early to release a story i plan to update somewhat regularly. i keep telling myself i need to finish the next chapter or no one will read it because it gets better in this next one, but i might end up with the whole thing written before sending it out.
bump. will post something within a few hours i believe. hope you like these guys, wfg.
>>83369372It's fully acceptable to release chapter by chapter from the very beginning. If you're worried that it's not good enough, maybe you need a stronger hook.
>>83369372It depends on your goal. If you are fooling around and having fun, do whatever.If you are trying to maximize readership and what rewards are attendent to such, there are some general rules of thumb. Build up a lead of at least 5 chapters before you first post. Then you pick and stick to a posting schdule. Weekly, twice weekly, or daily are suggested. Posting more often means better numbers, but not if you become cavalier with your schedule.
What tips would you give to a brand new writer?After writing the first chapters of several different stories, I feel that pacing is my biggest problem. I spend too much time setting up the background and all of the character details in the beginning, when I should be getting to the "meat" of the story faster. This seems extremely important in order to not immediately lose a reader's interest, especially since I'm attempting to write erotic stories. People usually seek those out with a certain purpose in mind.Maybe this isn't something I should be thinking about as a complete newbie, but what is the best way to make sure your stories reach potentially interested readers?AO3's tags feel like a nightmare to dig through most of the time, and doesn't seem to have much of an audience for the anime-esque stories I aspire to write.
>>83374660As a beginner, I recommend writing short stories rather than chaptered projects. Focus on actually finishing your stories. Not only is it good practice for tackling longer narratives, but that feeling of successfully finishing a project is one of the best motivators to keep working on other stuff.Learn to edit. Pacing is one of those things that can be easily tweaked later. Finish a draft first, then pinpoint the areas that feel off and figure out what to change about them. Learn to pick out details that seem unnecessary and can be cut out if needed.As far as finding an audience, I find it works best to have a community that you're writing for. On 4chan, that usually means having a target general where you drop a link to your work. My usual stomping ground is /scaly/, so I write stories about lizards and share them there.
As promised here is the thing.https://archiveofourown.org/works/86523421Upward TrendA milky destined to die finds his own personal escape from the gray planet, but a small wrench is thrown into his plans when a clumsy experiment crashes through his window. Tags: M/M, Expie/Milkie, Caring, Bad TagsIt is smut, by definition, but throughout it there's a focus on story and a budding romance in a hopeless place. If you like it or hate it, please let me know. And, because this is wfg, if I've majorly fucked something up, please let me know. Either in writing, prose, plot, whatever. Or if I fucked up my posting to ao3, it's my first time uploading there.It's unfinished, and I have at least 4 more chapters planned. If all goes well, I should have the next chapter up within a few days.
>>83375713>gray planetMore like GAY planet amiright?(Sounds hot I will read it)
I wish I could writebump
I am looking for smut focused on muscle worship, penis expansion, and ridiculously large ejaculations
been thinking about a bog standard TG story, but it's a couple who temporarily swaps into the opposite gender and use the chance to coach each other on what feels good, to improve their sex life when they change back
>>83377433but you're writing right now!
Last time I got a lot of writing done, I'd find time in the evenings to make and drink tea while doing it. Maybe I should revisit that idea.
>>83375898>sounds hot i will read itmaybe not quite what you were expecting yet, proper smut soon. (page 10 bump)
>>83378809Pretty cute idea but I am a degenerate that requires more than just TG to get off so you better include them cuddling and holding hands too
>Hyperfertility>Stomach deformation These tags make me thing pic-related.
just woke up bump
>>83387252anon, there are limits!
>>83387252explicit descriptions about how different spooning feels for each other are definitely on the table
>>83384453I used to sip on a cherry smoothie brand during writing exercises, but the company that makes it seem to be no longer interested in selling it. Shame.
Worldbuilding, crime and punishment in fishron society. Their societies are basically just big polycule-communes where they mostly mess around and fuck all day so it's not like crimes happen very often, but they don't have hands to build jails when they do. Currently thinking that petty criminals will be marked for a few weeks with some kind of shame-token like a big bulky chunk of driftwood on a rope or something like a broken ships' wheel around the neck. Something uncomfortable that makes it difficult to get around and acts as a constant reminder of the crime. Then more serious or repeat offenses would involve physical disfigurement like the docking of one ear in an obviously intentional way in order to permanently mark the offender as a problem individual.I think it's kind of funny to have the goofy dolphinsealiondragons to be like fuck it bite their ear off as soon as crimes happen tbdesu. For the other stuff I kinda hope that it's not too cliche for the ocean guys to go straight to boat-themed punishments, but the imagery looks kinda cool in my head and shipwreck salvage seems like the easiest way for them to access something durable and really wearable considering they can't do any real crafting on their own.And then for really serious stuff like murder they literally just beat the perpetrator unconscious, disfigure them, drag them off shore, and cast them into the sea into permanent exile. And that's kinda like the death penalty in its own way since they're all too interdependent and individually vulnerable to survive on their own for super long
>>83356825I'm not giving up on you. You can do requests.
>>83397890I mean, yeah? People can do requests. It's in the OP.>Request, write, or share stories and provide feedback/critique when appropriate. All writers are welcome, SFW and NSFW.It's just not really a priority? People can toss an idea for a thing to write, but whether anyone picks up an idea to actually try is always in the air.
>>83396720hwhat is a fished-ron?
>>83356825Here's some magical realm for anybody interested:Great Achievementshttps://archiveofourown.org/works/86592736>Furry, female OCs, Urination, Scent Kink, Public Nudity, No Sex, LitRPG elements, WIP (12.5K words so far)I have some ideas for how to continue, but no firm outline or update schedule. New chapters will arrive when I feel like it. Any feedback appreciated.
>>83402963as a non-brit, are there any key words or writing grammar notes to keep in mind while reading?
>>83403436I don't think there's anything that would be impossible to figure out from context. The two dialects are similar enough and modern culture has a lot of shared media from both sides of the Atlantic.
>>83357148I think you missed me,First draft so far so it has many problems but the story is mostly laid out.https://archiveofourown.org/works/85802271#Human Female, #Canine Male, #Love, #Bestiality, #male/female, #FemDom, #MaleSub, #Female Top, #Male Bottom, #Extreme Piercing, #Chastity, #Permanent Chastity, #Needle Play
>>83392596Nice, I've got a similar WIP idea but the two start off as just roommates (with one wanting more and the other mostly clueless)
>>83405032Not the OP but I've done an occasional OP myself. I know a miss happens on occasion. It ain't intentional!Added to the MB as well.Thank you!
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>>83375713Thanks for posting in the /v/ thread, I loved your story! Shame the thread got deleted so I wanted to repost my reaction to your first 4 chapters because I liked them so much and just in case you missed it. https://arch.b4k.dev/v/thread/740842174/#740878604That was sooo cuuutee!! I really enjoyed it, Anon. I had a smile on my face most of the time reading it and can't wait for you to write more. Emergency milky saves the day! Sawian's impressive healing abilities really come in handy here don't they? Sam will be good as new in no time. I really enjoy all the comfort and petting and cuddling and good happy warm mushy positive feelings, especially after how negative other fics can be. My poor pained heart needed the warming up.How you wrote how Oat and Sam got their names was really cute and funny. Imagine a Milky post-shower fluffed up like a big poofy cloud with sharp blue eyes, very cute. When Sam was crawling over to Oat for pets and patting the bed for Oat to sleep together this pic kept popping up in my head. https://arch.b4k.dev/v/thread/740842174/#740860947 Too cute.Still, I'm wondering where Oat plans to go with the rocket? It's natural to want to leave the Grey Planet, but I have no idea where they could go. Still, I wish them the best.
>>83415156hey, thanks for reading and the kind words. more petting and dumb loving (like kissing!!!) is on its way, dont worry. i was really shocked how there was so little of mostly uplifting stuff like this, hopefully i can keep filling the void. i saw your post and the other way too kind posts in that thread but didn't want to reply and thank you and take up more of the thread and such, but it ended up getting deleted anyway so.>that picabsolutely one of my favorites, like he's asking what you're waiting for>puffed up milkywould be even cuter with how much they seem to care about their appearance, not many get to see them looking that vulnerable.>rocketwell, of course it can't get very far with how small it is and the reliance on old fashioned rocket tech rather than any fancy ftl stuff, they'd be lucky to have enough fuel to slowly drift towards something in the same solar system. i'm not certain i can both do where they're going and what they'll do justice, and make it fit into this story, but we'll see. what happens in that cramped space though is what's really important, right?i've got the next chapter almost ready, and didn't want to make this post till i had it uploaded lol, but it'll be out sometime later today almost certainly. i'll throw a post in the v thread when it's up, if there's one by that point. really hope they can keep skirting by, hopefully it takes some time off this time.
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>>83385918Jokes on you I loved it. It was adorable.>>83375713Very nice and cute, but please stop randomly mixing present tenses in the middle of your story.
fuggin power flickered and shut down my pc while i was planning my chapters out reee
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>>83428274is that gabriel ultrakill?
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>>83428306As if Gabriel would let his face get crushed by anyone's thighs unless it's V1
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>>83396720Those things are cute and I think I've maybe seen you post them in other threads. Do they also interact with humans in your setting or am I misremembering
>>83375713Two new chapters posted for Upward Trend here.>>83415156I'm a day late, but I hope an extra chapter makes up for it.>>83422831>please stop randomly mixing present tenses in the middle of your story.That's probably my biggest enemy, tied with my overuse of commas. I do try and avoid it as best I can but it's annoying to find in proofing and despite myself I keep switching to present tense. I double and triple checked the last two chapters for this problem specifically, if there's any present tense feel free to mail a complaint to me directly. And to make even more use of this post, what's the etiquette like for replying to comments left on your work on ao3? I'm torn between replying to none and feeling bad about it and replying to all of them with thanks and a nudge that I posted new chapters, and feeling like I'm annoying or bloating the comments somehow.
>>83439088NTA but I wouldn't reply too much to comments. The only times I reply to comments are if they ask a question about something or if it's like a really long review, since those take a bit more time and effort than "good chapter bery nice." or "shit chapter bery bad." Ultimately it's up to you whether or not you want to respond but saying thank you to every comment gets redundant. Trust that your readers know you appreciate it.
>>83439088>what's the etiquette like for replying to comments left on your work on ao3?If I feel like I have something to say for a reply then I doAs the stories get older I usually don't reply to stuff like simple praise, but that's often because I see it a couple days later (weeks, even) and feel weird replying so late
>>83356825His collection needs dickbutts...
Im currently writing my first draft when i realized it would make more sense to change something earlier in the story. But there are a few scenes later on that would require me to do that exact thing i wanted earlier. Basically a seed for something like half way through the story but really it would make more sense to plant it earlier. >if i made a mistake in a first draft should i pretend i fixed it and carry on like so, or keep the mistake as is and fix it in the second draft? >Even if it makes way more work later on and the fix is only swapping one scene out?
>>83444400If you can already tell that not fixing it now will cause more trouble later on, then just fixing it is the right move. Can you think of any rational reason why not changing it might be beneficial in the long run?
>>83444498Tbh I'm not certain it would fix a whole lot, but planting a seed like that takes time to bear fruit. It doesn't make sense that someone you call from out of state would get to you by the next day. Like it's possible but unlikely they could get to you too soon. Plus the scene i planned on putting it in doesn't feel very substantial and think it would help more there. Basically I want some guy to mail a letter earlier in the story so later it can have them be mailed back something in a time that makes sense. And took out the scene of him getting donuts on the way because the donuts shop he went to could really just explained in a passing sentence. I plan on having him keep checking for a response throughout the story but it would make more sense to add it as early as possible.
>>83445929You can view the change as fixing a chronology issue. The timespan for this postal round trip was too short, so you're moving the start point backwards. Adjusting the timeline like that is a major change to the story's structure, so it makes sense to do it as early as possible to avoid excessive rewrites. Plus, it sounds like you've already made a solid argument for the change. It really makes no sense to wait until the second draft to do something about it.
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>>83436679"Interacting" is a word that could be used to describe what goes on yeahHumans really don't get on well with any of the critters for some reason, politics amirite (an average dragon has enough magic stuck to it to light up an entire city block if you just catch it and scrape it all off)
Is there a repository for works about growth and transformation?
>>83463743Probably topic generals. There's /tfg/ for transformation, and Micro/Macro could have some growth. I think there are also giantess threads, but I don't see one on the 'log right now.
>>83463743The only specific fiction site I know of for transformation is docs-labOther than that I just do specific generals as the other anon mentioned, and trawling Ao3 with a specific set of tags
>>83439088>oat and sam>together>safe and sound >in a small private confined space>having confessed their love for each other>and with nothing to do but express and explore that love for MONTHS straightGod yes IMAGINE
