Previous: https://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/83356825>Request, write, or share stories and provide feedback/critique when appropriate. All writers are welcome, SFW and NSFW.>Instead of asking for interest or worrying about a fetish, just post your damn writing/request and see what happens. You might get lucky.>Complaining about fetishes is dumb and stupid in /trash/. Use that negative energy for requesting, reading and writing instead.>Please tag stories so readers know what they're getting into. Nobody can force you to tag stories you share or make. However, people are MUCH likelier to skip a work if there are no tags present.>Try to bump the thread if it gets to page 9, but feedback is always appreciated for posted stories, for author or reader! Those are the best kind of bumps./wfg/'s Masterbin: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ccAAmGecQiEE5ywZc4S4d1347WuMPEsF3DbSNAS4LRo/editLewd Thesaurus shamelessly stolen from /flg/https://rentry.org/lewdsesaurusRequest Dump: Find/Post requests here toohttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1nyDKegfYhIvlv7ZvGoxswIVkiG5lw1lrOeDFvZbw_WU/edit?pli=1General grammar tutorials and key noteshttp://theeditorsblog.net/fularchives/https://theeditorsblog.net/2010/12/08/punctuation-in-dialogue/https://theeditorsblog.net/2014/04/08/keeping-adjectives-in-line/https://apostrophe.how/Tips on Improving Prose:https://jerichowriters.com/prose-style/
>>83796348Previous thread storiesUpward Trendhttps://archiveofourown.org/works/86523421>M/M, Expie/Milkie, Caring, Bad TagsGreat Achievementshttps://archiveofourown.org/works/86592736>Furry, female OCs, Urination, Scent Kink, Public Nudity, No Sex, LitRPG elements, WIP (12.5K words so far)Cagedhttps://archiveofourown.org/works/85802271?view_adult=true>#Human Female, #Canine Male, #Love, #Bestiality, #male/female, #FemDom, #MaleSub, #Female Top, #Male Bottom, #Extreme Piercing, #Chastity, #Permanent Chastity, #Needle PlayFaunling story ch.1 drafthttps://pastebin.com/acKaNM9W>Vintage, tags unknownGirlfriend Game version 0.8 (5 main routes completed)https://www.deviantart.com/samaster/art/Girlfriend-Game-0-8-Release-1346265726>tags unknownJCTTG: The Forces of Good pt. 4https://www.deviantart.com/samaster/art/JCTTG-The-Forces-of-Good-pt-4-1347346661>medieval fantasy, isekai, melodrama, conclusionLink anything I missed
>>83796396From #365The Little Tinkerbat that Couldhttps://archiveofourown.org/works/47769337/chapters/225001706>Shantae (series), Tinkerbat/Shantae, Wedgie, humiliation, exhibitionism, thighjobREGULAR BOT REVIEWS: 2002 TRAVAIL GEORGIAhttps://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQgiMptPdEaB9w_M0DvlymPhWsDXZprJt5QX9omGvc6QJnyxs0bBE9ndrP-Q3glRtS-KXn0i8-lhmI9/pubREGULAR BOT REVIEWS: 2001 WAKEMAN PIONEERhttps://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vRkj2wqBoEtn6fSeoAt_zuoVEz3tdBPPo1jRMlyRgbUmxKIieh84bAxIq_c4FcLl70FJtxDUJKGabji/pubSECONDHAND FUTURE: GENERAL ROBOTICS M1https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSJagcUpxYdVX6REVQNzA2UdyHRjd9Ks8CwTJ3URXPq4kLmm05Wny_CNQ9LgA3FuJIxH8aH7nqQQjZj/pub>comedy/worldbuilding flash fiction, review styleGood Companyhttps://rentry.co/dmoqbhx8>Pseudoregalia, Femdom, Lingerie, Public Sex, Cunnilingus, Cowgirl, Creampie. Mhuman/FAnthroSparring Matchhttps://rentry.co/nmvan39g>Tags: Pseudoregalia, Maledom, Wrestling, Rape Roleplay, Fingerfucking, Creampie, Mhuman/FAnthroCartomancy>Eindride tells Princess Luna's fortune. He doesn't like what it says.https://rentry.org/mlp_cartomancy>tags: SFW, mlp:fim, romance, Luna, Human, RGRE-adjacent, 28k wordsUntitled Storyhttps://rentry.co/v2w62pkr>Tags: attribute theft, portal (object), cock theft, futanariWhat Falls Below Must Eventually Be Foundhttps://archiveofourown.org/works/77309001>Hazbin Hotel, anal, oral, hate sex, size difference, piss, rape/non-con, trauma, interspecies, sadism
>>83796396>Faunling story ch.1 draftI'm sorry it took me too long to actually read this. I liked it, it's pretty well written already. Superb characterization of both leads. The only criticism I have is that having the names Nadia and Nadiya in one story gets a tad confusing.
So back when Digimon Story Time Stranger was out, one of the most reoccurring pictures made was of boys and men bonding with DemiDevimon as their partner, and it jumps to them evolving into a very sexy, evil female digimon, but retaining most of their initial personality, most basically unaware of how their new form affects their friend.I'd like to request a writing that explores that sensation a bit. I'm thinking of a man (or boy) who takes a DemiDevimon under his wing after DemiDevimon's 'friends' basically beat it up and left it for dead. Maybe a time skip happens to show that a now-healthy DemiDevimon sees the man (or boy, now teen/adult) as boss and some of those cute friend interactions? At most they get in trouble together, eat together, play together. Best friends. They get ambushed by DemiDevimon's 'friends' one day, but actually hold them off well enough. But when they do something that would cause great harm to the man, DemiDevimon warp digivolves into Beelstarmon to fend them off. But now she doesn't know how to change back, if she can even do it at all. This makes the man feel things as the same mannerisms, different body from his partner make him ask many questions about his tastes.Can be clean, erotica or smut, up to author, but I do think confronting the feelings should happen.>Suggested tags if lewd: vanilla, groping, fingering, friend to lover, creampie, belly play/kissing, licking, cunninglingusBeelstarmon/DemiDevimon personality isn't fixed, so they can act any wayyou want. But if you are curious as to some details:https://www.grindosaur.com/en/games/digimon-story-time-stranger/digimon/beelstarmonhttps://www.grindosaur.com/en/games/digimon-story-time-stranger/digimon/demidevimon
Requesting a forbidden romance between a human girl, and a large (talking) male snake. Pic related for size. The snake is in love with the girl and makes the first move, but she turns him down initially because that stuff is very forbidden, and she only sees him as a friend. However, he eventually manages to seduce her and they start a secret relationship. Sex and anatomy should be 100% accurate in the beginning (I can provide descriptions of how it works). As their relationship develops, they can find new ways to spice things up in the bedroom. Let me know if interested, I have more details to discuss.
>>83796396>JCTTG: The Forces of Good pt. 4>reflects very poorly on my proffessionalityProfessionalityI think I missed an earlier part from the last time I read this, but a decent end to the fight. Seems like whatever is bugging Beck hasn't been solved much but eh. You're playing the long game for that one right?
Write a wholesome sex scene between a married christian couple having missionary sex with the lights off for the purpose of procreation.
>>83801860>finally get the itch to do some writing again and check the thread>see this postwell i hope lovey dovey romance between a married couple with kids is close enough. i'm simply gonna have to write it now
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>>83801168Thank you! I know the word 'proffessionality' was a fake one after I wrote it, but I figured the Void-Father would be the kind of person to use it. And yes, I'm planning to carry on what's going on with Beck in the next Ninja minisode. By the way I finished the PDF version. https://www.deviantart.com/samaster/art/Jayden-s-Cursed-Tabletop-Game-PDF-Compilation-1350274593>complete story, isekai, ftf, mtg, orc girl, elf girl, goddess, emotional drama, comedy, uncensoredHere is the complete version of Jayden's Cursed Tabletop Game, with several typo fixes, a bunch of bonus images, every single chapter, AND completely uncensored!
>>83801168>>83803246By the way if you didn't read it, there's a two-part epilogue in there as well, but if you don't want to download the PDF (which 654 pages, and over 70,000 words) you can check them out here-https://www.deviantart.com/samaster/gallery/94621047/jayden-s-cursed-tabletop-game-
>https://www.deviantart.com/samaster/gallery/100776563/corruption-goddess-love-storySo I want some feedback on a story I've been posting for a while, because I'm a bit stuck to proceed. This is the Corruption Goddess Love Story, which is what it sounds like. I'm at nine chapters thus far, but they're pretty short. So far no-ones really commented on the story, though judging by view counts it's pretty popular. So I don't really know what the audience likes or wants to know, so I don't know how I should proceed right now. I'd really appreciate it if someone can crack it open to tell me what they think.
>https://www.deviantart.com/stash/01isjf8dfmluThis is another one I want some feedback on, it's a draft for the Pink Bloodmoon chapter. My main concern is that it's too short, as I think it's otherwise good, but I think I'm at a stopping point, and don't know how I'd continue the scene. Which is why I need a second pair of eyes to see if it's good as is before posting.Here's the rest of the story until now if you need to catch up->https://www.deviantart.com/samaster/gallery/97682402/pink-bloodmoon>medieval fantasy, worldbuilding, bimbofication, slow-burn, erotic horrorYou only need to check out the Day 1 chapters, of which there are only two, if you want to catch up.
>>83803356>>83803482>>83803572so do you just have an llm 'write' for you or what? you always post these incredibly shitty ugly slop pictures with links to deviantart and your deviantart is full of them too, and there's so many words in all these things so quickly i find it hard to imagine how you're writing that much if you really are.
>>83803827Oh no anon. As someone that's pretty good at sniffing AI writing, he writes all that stuff. AI does make those pictures if they aren't using the koikutsu/3d program, but his style of writing is something that a machine can't really replicate well (script writing, mostly).And while I do admit the pictures kinda rub me the wrong way and could bring with it the poisoned well situation when it comes to the tech, the way he writes is unique enough to stand out and not be genned.My only issue with the AI pictures is that it's part of an extended worry of authors being too dependent on them to use as descriptions as opposed to just describing the character/scene outright.But in this case with the 3d program, it's probably the closest thing to a comic with more text than anything.
>>83803827Okay. I'm fine with using AI images because I'm not an artist, but I write EVERYTHING myself. The only extent I've ever used AI writing is just as an ideas board. If anything I found my writing output while I wasn't on these threads to be much lower because I've been struggling for inspiration. Typically I try writing two or three times a week, and I hop off between stories because I find it easier to distract myself with something else than keep banging my head at a wall where I'm stuck. If there's something specific that you'd like to ask about my writing process or my output, I'm happy to discuss it with you.
>>83804073I certainly don't believe it's a high-grade tool to have AI images, but we should admit that the axiom 'a picture tells a thousand words' is very true. I would honestly consider trying to portray everything with imagery, except I think that there is an issue of appealing to the lowest common denominator. Quite frankly we should admit that more people are gonna check something out if there's an image of AI anime titties than a lengthy paragraph of text explaining those same tities. Though what's more is I feel I struggle to put titilation into words, and I think that it's easier for me to do that in image form, both with Koikatsu and AI. I would actually use Koikatsu exclusively if it was more flexible. But honestly I struggled hard to use it for the recent fantasy themed story and I've decided to avoid them moving forward. There's limits on what I can do with more monstergirl styled characters, limited fantasy outfit options, and I'm pretty much having to make maps from scratch for fantasy locales which more time and effort for not a lot of payoff for it. I'm gonna keep it mostly for more urban fantasy stuff, because it suits itself WAY better for that role.
>>83804257>Quite frankly we should admit that more people are gonna check something out if there's an image of AI anime titties than a lengthy paragraph of text explaining those same titiesi fucking despise that this is the world we live in and i wish anyone who's serious about writing would stay as far the fuck away from this shit as humanly possible, and i absolutely fucking hate seeing this shit anywhere near real human words and works. in an ideal world ai slop would turn anyone far away from this shit, but if you're just writing generic tranime shit the audience would probably fall for it.
>>83804327It is what it is man. But as said, a picture tells a thousand words. It's both why books have covers, and why people have to use the phrase 'don't judge a book by its cover' because people DO judge books by the cover. Personally I'd prefer to use dishonest techniques to try to get more eyeballs on what I consider 'good' writing (of course I'm biased with my own stuff) than let it fall by the wayside to all the other stuff on the internet. I perfectly understand the distaste for AI, and I don't even really disagree with it. However, I do think that the only REAL use case for it (because companies want to hype it up as the literal second coming of jesus christ) is for niche porn stuff. To pull a quote from Raegan though, I suspect you and I are 80% allies and not 20% enemies.
>>83804257I personally hold the belief that if 'a picture tells a thousand words', then the inverse is also true, 'a thousand words paint a picture'. Sure, a pair of tiddies with text would make for a great attention grabber (and that's how some books get you in, if the illustrative covers or commissions for cover art on them have anything to say), but I like to think that the people picking up a story to read is expecting text to read, not actual pictures of tits in the text.Still, you are right that images are easier to consume for the eye than text, which is the nature of people. But I think that is also what makes writing words that paint said picture all the more delightful and worth it in the long run.It's also a pretty likely reason why there aren't a lot of requesters in writing threads (not just this one). It's quicker to consume an image than it is to read a story from start to finish. But I like to think that the people who give time to read that story have a lot more passion on the subject thank a quick horny thanks on looking at a drawing made for them. Pictures can be fine and has been used in texts (mostly maps, or very key objects), but I feel that a lot of authors rely too much on it and the tool becomes a crutch or a shortcut instead, which to me, just feels disappointing in the long run.It would be hard to capture the tainilizing effects of big boobs consistently in text, to be fair. How to don't without things getting stale, repetitive, excessive, or just boring is all par for the course as part of that writing process. How much to balance is all part of the process.Still, I respect your commitment to the bit, and I see your works as comics moreso with your writing style, so the choice for that is always up to you. It won't stop me from reading what you make now and then unless it has a kink I don't like.
>>83804533>a picture tells a thousand wordsAI slop says, very succinctly, that you don't care about your own work, you don't care about your readers, and you really just don't care about anything at all except for, as you're even admitting here, clicks and views from idiots who fall for it. That's just pathetic man, really. Even if your work is GOOD having the first impression being low effort ai slop taints the whole thing and sets the expectation that it's of low quality. Books have covers to sell mostly, sure, and in recent years there's a whole lot of books with ai covers on them. Most of them are either extremely low quality human writing or llm slop. Not a good thing to associate yourself with.
>>83804582I appreciate it. I'd certainly admit it's a crutch- regardless of if I'm using AI or Koikatsu, or another source. That said, I see it as a tool I can use, and tools aren't bad. For instance the koikatsu stuff which is most like a comic allows me to focus almost exclusively on Dialogue and I can keep things at their most snappy. This is a case where I think the tool aids my writing style. Then I have the World's Strongest C-Class which typically has an AI image solely as a tone-setter, and usually isn't there to convey any real narrative information. In that case I do want to rely on the readers imagination more to fill in the blocks. I don't see it as a 'one-size fits all' thing, I think that there are multiple approaches to this sort of issue that are equally valid. >>83804603Man I kinda take the opposite view. Low expectations are GOOD because I can EXCEED them. I also don't particularly care about the caliber of my audience. Like think about it- how does it help on my end if say I was writing for an audience exclusively of lit proffessors? I mean that'd be cool. But on my end what really changes if it's a lit proffessor verses a zoomied out iPad kid? So long as both people have read it and enjoy it, I feel like I get the same experience either way. I'd also point that I'm not trying to publish a book, but I'm posting on DeviantArt, and this is all fetish stuff. Now, I DO put effort into my stories. Because I personally want to. I find it engaging. In fact- I'd honestly wager that my emphasis on complex storylines and melodrama probably do far more to ward off readers than seeing AI art does. I can picture it quite clearly-
>>83804739>Oh hey, here's a random story, and it's got a bimbofication tag! Let me pop on in real quick. >Okay, let's take a quick look here... okay there's one image with big boobs... but it's mostly just text... well let's give it a quick skim to see if it's worth jacking off to>Huh, this seems to be expecting me to have read the previous chapters... and there's a lot of worldbuilding here that I don't care about... >Man when are we gonna get to the sex? >Oh great, we're dealing with some cringey character drama, and I don't give a fuck about these characters I don't know.>Alright, dropped, I'm not reading a fucking thesis for something with only one big titty image and no fucking sex.Now I'm not trying to argue you in the sense that I think you should really change your opinion or approach, and I very much respect the allergic reaction to anything AI. I just want to point out that not everything I, random internet douchebag, does has to conform 100% to the purest ideals of writing. But hey, if you specifically want to dissect one of my stories and tell me it's shit, I'd be glad to go over specifics.
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>>83801860I'm writing a story about mormon futais that close enough?
>>83801860But, i like animal girls (and to a lesser extent animal boys)
Also, i use AI for images all the time, i can't draw at all, but for writing? AI is a thesaurus. A single word replacement at MOST. Ideas, context, principles, foundation's characterization, everything is me.Weird i find using AI for writing as cheating but for images its fine. Maybe artists feel the opposite? Zero thoughts in their head but they can draw LOL!
>>83807069Incredibly indian post, please don't post here anymore.
>>83807092British coloniser, deal with it pajeet.
>>83807092Wait, are you a worthless cunt who has zero ideas of your own but you just so happen to be able to draw?
>>83807069Of course, a tool would be useful in covering for an area you have limited or no experience in. If you're passionate about a particular medium, you'll find more pleasure in doing it yourself rather than having someone (or something) else doing it for you.
Where I'm at with the Cursed Clussy Carnival->The group of four have entered in the restaurant having met a few of the characters here>Sit down to order and discuss their actual task at hand>I've decided the hot old lady in this instance has a bit of a musical theme, so after ordering she actually sings a dramatized version of their backstory>Currently figuring out how to transition from point 2 to point 3. Way I'm doing it is that Maria doesn't work at the restaurant, she works at the Rodeo (as a Vaquero) but she's helping out while she's there. I'm thinking she's pulled away at some point by another relative (one with more native-american heritage). And Cal decides to excuse himself to the bathroom to snoop, bumping in to two more family members on the way.
