Stories:By Apocobat>Krusie Week 2024 https://archiveofourown.org/works/52919020/chapters/133861048By Anonymous>In The Lockerhttps://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/83362953/#83417436By Greenswordsman>Sides of a Storyhttps://archiveofourown.org/works/83623251By Anonymous>Pranks for Nothing!https://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/81994332/#82050675By Cosplayanon>Liminalityhttps://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/81673298/#81677740By Greenswordsman>The World May Never know™https://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/81432621/#81442508By Greenswordsman>Quicksilver in the Windowhttps://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/81083073/#81083417By Raconza>Night Falls Over Hometown: A DeltaNoir Storyhttps://archiveofourown.org/works/77546651By Raconza>Without You in the Darkhttps://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/78166688/#q78219783By LizardBro>Wingman Chronicles 2https://rentry.co/hw7ruhqbBy Raconza>Dragon's Duethttps://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/76483080/#76493589By Indianon>Susie's Birthday Favorhttps://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/76323890/#76331238--->The Game Where She's Fromhttps://deltarune.com/>/SUS/tories archiveshttps://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1nI5kjwhC_44dEeyeanKV8KUiGbdC8LEA>/sus/ archiveshttps://drive.google.com/drive/folders/17Qgvvtr2m4J-8Y30AFzCXBERWA_-YKc8?usp=sharing>Veth archivehttps://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1Y5s7tN_xpgcFLKPomLA0UXK5i3k3kSjs--->Last Thread:https://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/83790840
The new Jelly Krusie is what my poor heart needed. Bonus points for best new girl too.
>>83806698I like unrelated but not sure about having them in the OP image...
>>83806720Anon there's been like three threads with them in the op by this point
>>83806718Kris' chud daughter...
>>83806720I'm both ways on it, but I appreciate the likeness to Kris and SusieIt's a power level that should be controlled and hidden most times tho
>>83806698vile evil beasts
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NN2TOdiPtG4
>>83806718Kris and Susie's Home for Chaotic Neutral Children
>>83806730Aqua functions as a throwable that Kris can use from their inventory
>>83806698I wonder how Kris and Susie would react to their alternate counterparts.
>>83806749>>83806698WE NEED to do a band segment with them and have Dirk ape a murdoc outfit
i'm all for a soossnoot game but making the human look like a reject gorillaz cast member is kinda meh
reroll your requests. Got a little more time.>>83806751lmao
>>83806900In between yellow and blue is the mystical third color green
>>83806943Kris and Susie (And or whoever else you think would be fun for) dressed as their favorite superhero
>>83806943Netskie imitating Veth.
>>83806943I'm a sucker for more Krusie, so maybe seeing Kris and Susie having fun with Aqua like she's their kid could be cute. Bonus points if they realize awkwardly (but cutely) that their chemistry might extend into being cool parents one day as well too.
>>83806948she's the best
>>83806943Veth playing Patty Cake with Aqua, but Aqua has a knife in her hand so Veth is trying not to cut herself.
>>83806943susie assuming an apelike pose
>>83806943kris and susie meeting dirk and juniper in a silly fashion
https://x.com/BrianRoemmele/status/2072080037537566775Found an inspireation for some basic enemies for Unrelated.
>>83806943Kris and Aqua bonding over playing bullseye with throwing knives
>>83806943Your favorite Ch5 scene. Comical, tragic, heartwarming - I don't mind which
>>83806840>Susie and Juniper would both lick a giant salt cube together >Dirk and Kris would stare at each other for the entire time > Crowley and Berdly would not be able to tolerate each other as they are very different variants of nerds>Eve and Noelle would just read together>and Ralsei gets the cuck chair since we don't have a parallel for him
>>83806943Dirk being put in a headlock by her
>>83807167Dameon is Ralsei's parallel
>>83803837
>>83806698not a regular here but i remember a japanese krusie artist called komu, wanted to ask if he has reacted or given his toughts on this chapter?
>>83807291
Father dad has now be colored.Now it's time to try and make some "Monster designs" anyone got any ideas?
>>83807291Impressive
>>83806943Aqua and Kris fusing to become the ultimate Kris That or aqua meeting her veth equivalent while Kris and Veth observe
>>83807347he looks like he says this peace is what all true warriors strive for
>>83807347He looks like he has some sick wrestling moves
>>83806943Veth seeing Kris + Aqua and contemplating never getting to have a childhood
>>83807291Even when I'm in a completely different general you still bring life to my awful one-off posts; we really mustn't continue meeting this way. But great work ethic!
>>83807347well I would rip some straight out of some obscure ttrpg stuff personally, that robot anon posted a bit ago reminded me of an old school dnd monster, the odopi
>>83807291Power move.
>>83807347What is>>83807260 supposed to be?Also football (rugby for non burgers) girl?
>>83807287No, Anon Dameon is an Asriel parallel not a Ralsei one if were to make one, we could make a reflected version of her, like how Ralsei is
Aqua was Kris back before Dess’s rude girl conversion therapy(the bat). It’s why Kris will never let Noelle meet aqua because aqua will want a kiss and a hug
>>83807414are you...? the same guy from the other thread?
>>83807347>"Monster designs"Sea urchin with a "shirt" that has sleeves for each of the spikes
>>83807291Hahahahaha fuck
>>83807426Some dude wanted a wrestling girl so I just made a wrestling boar.>>83807418Sweet lord how would I turn that into a something tame or in the vain of deltarune>>83807470No no I DID make make Dameon as a parallel for Ralsei and not Asriel. I mean Asriel isn't even in the game rn so>>83807551I respect it I'll see what I can do
>>83806948>>83807019I missed the whole "Gaster is Green" thing, what was the logic behind it?
>>83807414>But great work ethic!The great Iron Sus was there, the great Iron Sus! Okay. Alright.
>>83807347Anomalocaris and Hallucigenia sparsa
hand it overthat thingyour delta soul
>>83807418>>83807347if we are going down the tragedy's angle, maybe we could ape silent hill kinda and make monsters based on the locations' past and specific concepts maybe a collapsed mine could have undead canaries harassing you or a gas enemy that is based of carbon monixide poisoning i mean from what we have set up it seems to be a very rocky and very old town so there must have been some mining going down
>>83807599does every monster have to be some unique twist on something, could there not be normal goblins and lizard people and shit>>83807654ooh I like that
How do you think Veth would react to Kris getting cucked in chapter 5?
>>83807681veth already cucks kris by wearing shoes
>>83807599> Some dude wanted a wrestling girl so I just made a wrestling boar.I was the original requester and thanks for the delivery, she’s cute and I hope she’s plays a big role in Unrelated
>>83807681we already know
>>83807654That would probably be a enemy creature within the Dark world like zones we're calling Downpours. I like the concept though there is a quarry and mind in the town so it works.>>83807671I mean if I can make it work in then why not?>>83807681I believe Jelly made a comic about this no?
>>83807681messy emotions
>>83806869yes
>>83807715Methy emothyunth
>>83807712canary monsters, and trapped miners that are like helmeted silhouettes with pickaxes
It brings me great joy to see this thread is still alive and... if not kicking still fighting the good fight.
>>83807712is there gonna be a school area? paper monsters ah-la D&D's scroll mummy?
>>83807347Like, enemies, or NPCs? Because for enemies, it’s probably better to know where we’ll fight them before we start designing any, so they can be thematically appropriate.
>>83807347For characters or enemy mooks? For the former I think a Sphinx would be pretty neat. So long as we keep the Human head (for that uncanny look) instead of just making a talking lion.
>>83807347>Now it's time to try and make some "Monster designs" anyone got any ideas?like how "Monster designs" are we talking here, like something from Amnesia: The Dark Descent or hot girl monster?or both?
>>83807811>>83807820Yeah I mean more NPCs I realize when I say "monster designs" it kinda gives off the concept of like things you fight, but like enemy monsters are probably gonna be way more themed to the location/situation they're based on.
>>83807795Thesaurus-Rex (T-rex made from books)
>>83807850I was literally going to suggest a dinosaur monster somewherethe town's history of tragedy is millions of years old lol
>>83807837Talking more Undertale style NPC Monsters. Fighting Dummies, talking ghost, fuckable kickstarter reward spider women.
>>83807347>anyone got any ideas?Since there's a lake, I'd love for there to be a lake monster. BUT taking this Anon's question >>83807837 into account, it could be invisible like the water enemies from Dark Descent. It can have a design that's never shown or only faintly allude to its real appearance when partially submerged, but I always thought the idea of unseen characters casually "existing" in a world of otherwise weird designs was compelling.
>>83807890ok, then idea. there is a rat king that is a rival to Dread Danger because he want to be king of the trash and have no idea who is Dread First at all.could be a joke character
>>83806698Veth is greyNot Susie is greyIs it time for more grey in life
>>83807978>"prithee, step down from your throne and let one with a true lord's heart take it, this kingdom should only go to one whomst represents its subjects">"yo yo yo I aint king of no kingdom see, we all equals here man, straight egalitarian shit"
>>83807347On a scale from Katawa Shoujo to Pokémon Clover, how referential do you wanna get about 4chan in general?
>>83808024Copies are monochrome.
I'm also posting this here. You can't stop me. (I was not paying attention, and posted in a dying thread.)>>83805767Pink and Cactus are just a different, but similar flavor of Susie and Noelle.Darkner Krusie. Krinctus (Kris + Pink + Cactus)
>>83807671>>83807839A travelling goblin who is currently staying in the town on his way to parts unknown. He likes to steal the small packets of coffee that you get in hotels, carries around a briefcase full of them at all times, and is constantly buzzing on caffeine.
>>83808048I know it's not exactly what you mean, but the image of this dude but as a goblin came to mind and I laughed https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=st21dIMaGMs
>>83808034Leaning closer to Katawa Shoujo>>83808048I"ll see what I can run>>83807975Could be fun I'll see what I can cook up>>83807978I'll try something out!
>>83807795Maybe a library dungeon where we get introduced to Eve as a party member, as the place is a literal documentation of all the town's sorrows over the years, and funded by the Crowleys, it would be a perfect downpour area as you descend into it a mix of paper constructs and other stuff maybe book bats?
>>83807975I like that
>>83806991Suddenly this world is kinda nice>>83807010play play play
>>83807839Damn, and here I was ready to rip off half of the Kingdom Hearts II bestiary.Anyways:>Invisible woman with a jewelry obsession/profession>Big sphinx schoolteacher (banned from library)>Electric ghost appliance salesman>Two-Goblins-In-A-Trench-Coat (the third is happily married and they're struggling to make the gimmick work without her)>Talking Animated Sword/Suit of Armor couple (Butlers for the Crowleys?)>Catfish Mermaid
Decided to do some UNRELATED fan art. I really like Symeon's design, but I wanted to make it a bit more daddy. Asgore was my favorite in Undertale/Deltarune, and so I hope Sym is done right in the game. Also tempted to make an Unrelated counterpart to Rudy.
>>83807975>be the new guy in town>this fucking thing is your neighbor
>>83808246Kris we gotta crack that foxNothing personal just don't think about it too hard
>>83808272bubble buddy?
>>83808073In that case, I wanna keep the wind theme going with a bird, a skeleton bird, with sickles for wings
>>83808287Waterwraith from Pikmin 2, a legendarily evil motherfucker in the annals of Nintendo history. If you know, you know.
>>83808246That tempting butte...Thanks I love it. I love the additional Green too. She's great
>>83808040Maybe on your broke ass printer but my copies are in glorious technicolor.
>>83808257Dadgote
>>83808246The addition of Green brings me joy. Thank you, Jelly.
>>83808257i really love all this "UNRELATED" stuff but I can't stop thinking what will happen if kris just somehow pop up in that world.maybe he can get a GF
>>83808287nta but it's a monster from the pikmin seriesthe area you initially encounter it in starts with an invisible timer and once it hits a certain limit, that creature falls from the ceiling and begins slowly patrolling the area, totally invincible. it's one of those "radical tone shift" bosses in an otherwise peaceful or unthreatening setting, although pikmin can be pretty brutal in conceptyou can to beat the shit out of it at the end of the area though
>>83808257I had originally avoided doing specifically those facial hair placement because I felt it just pushed him too far into being Asgore, but I can't design that they look damn good. lovely stuff man. I might have to run it.>>83808249I like some of these I'll see what I can do>>83808302This feels very "Enemy monster"
>>83807347I honestly would love to make some, but I don't wanna be annoying. I like getting weird with designs.
>>83808246Susie trying her hardest to summon her inner Toriel but then remembering THAT FUCKING SKELETON
>>83808378Yeah I meant it like a harbinger of the storm or something on that nature for the dungeons/dark worlds, if you meant more townsfolk how about Rob Zombie but as a horse? Maybe even a genderbent Rob Zombie as a horse
>>83808246NetskieVeth copying her buckteeth but otherwise having flawlessly pronunciation for whatever reason feels like a great segue into the copy seeing itself superior to the original. Man... a copy of a copy. You know that's gotta be weird for all parties involved.
>>83808378I just thought, Deltarune has all its enemies based on the possessions that are around the dark fountain, valued things, what if the enemies in unrelated were based off of trash and discarded things? Stuff that was thrown away. I think it allows for trash mobs (pun) while also having lots of room for thematic potential and meaning
>>83806751How will her romance play out, I wonder?
>>83806751very ghoul school
How many aquas are in just 1 Kris?How many aqua’s can Susie afford to buy if the store has 500 in stock?
>>83808640But first we have to solve for x
>>83808378Thanks! I'm glad my Sym sketch was of use to you!
>>83806751Queen of the itty bitty titty committee
>>83808681You also have to divide by N(Noelle)N of cours wants to by some as well for her cactus and herself. N arrived at the same time as Susie
>>83806751Should the lisp carry over
>>83808640>How many aquas are in just 1 Kris?Considering that Kris' Aqua phase lasted only about 1/3rd of the way through their life so far, a single Aqua would be worth about a third of a Kris.Unfortunately, a Kris is priceless, so you have to go and try to third an infinity.>>83808715Noelle's pocketbook, while undoubtedly deep, is still not literally infinite money.
>>83808771willow has a different textual quirk where all instances of W are replaced with VV like old germanic
>>83808861I want some character to ask how she manages to do that in her text box.
>>83808558>>83808378Any thoughts on this? I'm imagining like, the evocative imagery of a buildup of waterlogged discarded things forming a clog (or dam, "DAMNED"?) and the flood rising around it, and connotations of confronting the past, polluting with carelessness, etc.
>>83808861>she writes her name like VVillovv
>>83808957Oh I think it's a good idea for monsters as a base enemy type that just exist throughout the game with no specific theming beyond just "Rain" Even the name damned is really solid. I mean I suppose I'm over here just trying to make a decisions on how weird the regular world just is. If I decide it's more undertale than Deltarune then we can probably go for a bunch of far more whacky things beyond just regular monsters (Living objects could easily be applicable)I really am starting to lean on the idea of just going nuts and just being wild with it.
>>83808957So... what you're saying is... we have to unseal the Fountain... of emotions?>>83809007I had the idea that rather than a full on other world or a full on crazy regular world, where these manifestations begin cause a kind of insidious breakdown of reality where time and space distort. So the world has a baseline amount of magic that is exacerbated to actual fantasy horror levels when things begin to get weird, and then you get distorted locations and strange entities.
>>83809081Yes that is what downpours are if I understand what you're talking about
>>83809118Oh, neat. Sorry I'm not fully caught up, and my brains been spongey lately. This is fun.
>>83809081>>83809118I know it's more pure horror, but in the mouth of madness would be a great inspiration for this, as the town slowly breaks down into more and more monstrousness and crazyness
>>83809214Yeah the concept of The Wailing getting so bad that it creates a giant storm that brings floods and bridges the downpour with the town on a major level would probably either be failstate stuff or end game stuff.
May I suggest we keep the weirder designs be relegated to the enemies? I prefer if the regular townsfolk are all animals or more conventional nonhumans as a better contrast.
>>83808837You forgot to carry the A(aura), Aqua has at least a fraction of the aura Kris has meaning Kris still indulged the A of aqua for longer than we know
>>83809420Enemies? Who's been talking about combat shit?
>>83809458like.... for the enitre time? but we should talk on how combat is gonna work and how our party is going to function, should we make it like UN/DR? or something more Trad like a basic rpg
>>83809567I thought the general consensus was to make it a VN because that's enough work as is.
>>83809567I wasn't sure there would be combat, but it would be weird to have such a threatening background stuff without it...
>One of the main antagonists
>>83809583It would kinda be weird if there wasn't i mean we have been literally talking about having downpours as dungeons if we just wanted a VN we would have gone with a more light tone i would think >>83809600Yeah, I mean if we are going with this aesthetic, it would be kinda weird if we didn't
>>83809609>breaks crowley’s legs midway through the game
>>83809420you saying you don't want dumbshit like this walking around town? You're not based?
>>83809722well if there is combat then I would say 100% just do turn based, that seems far easier than making minigames out of it. Otherwise we're making something more along the lines of corpse party, spooky stuff going on but without much player interaction outside of dialogue and item use>>83809773woah he's cool
>>83809773He looks like he has a hellacious grating German accent
>>83809805
>>83809567I think it depends how much you wanna stray from "Deltarune but with blackjack and hookers", and most importantly, how competent is the guy programming this whole thing. Personally I don't mind keeping it simple, something that anyone could make on RPGmaker, even if just as a proof of concept before making a more complex game
>>83809773He can be the lancer expy and he only shows up in the dungeons.
>>83809829ja
>>83809609a biker gang would be cool
>>83809773Hell yeah, this guy takes the bus to work every day and stands right in front of the handicap seat.
>>83809914oh in this town, there's totally a seedy biker bar on the edge of town that doesn't bother to card the teens as they enter
>>83809773>be me, cactus man>sitting at corner store sad>see rainstorm >happy cause water>bunch of young guys beat up some giant water monster>sad cause no waterThis is the ballad of cactus man
>>83809964would carding even be a thing in a town like this? Place is so small and isolated that generally everyone knows everyone already
>>83809964Ah yes the Ruined Delta Bar with blackjack and hookers (This is a thing I will add yes)
>>83809981true enough, but as a teen your three options to hang out are the ancient arcade in disrepair, the scary biker bar, or the remains of a logging camp that ran out of money (I only say this because that is where I hung out as a teenager, tons of felled trees and stumps making a flat bed in a little creek, perfect place to hang out)
>>83808246Weird idea.Veth later disguises herself as the netskie impression of her using leaves and seduces Kris as a way to do it without being herself. If that makes sense. The leaves fall off mid way through the make put session.
>>83809964And it has a rivalry with the family friendly restaurant built next door to it which also has a rivalry with the chinese restaurant built next door to it which has a rivalry with the japanese restaurant built next to it which has a rivalry with a bowling alley for some reason
>>83810017Hey, there's always the graveyard!
>>83810097are we...is this just south park?
>>83810109dude freaky shit happens in the graveyard, I heard that they people that run that place dig up bodies, and bury anyone that gets suspicious in their place.
>>83809856Maybe make a demo, get some feedback on integration and mechanics, then go back to work. Also, RPG Maker would probs work best a lot of good games are made with it i don't think Ren'Py would work well with RPG stuff, since I have played some in the past and its super duper jank>>83809989bar questline maybe to help fix it up? get some arcade cabinets and maybe some other games as rewards? i mean, downpours could have all kinds of valuable loot we could use to help the town if we want loot from them to be taken back to our world >>83810097>>83810110Let's not make it too goofy. This is a town marred by huge tragedys in its past but some humor would be good
>>83806704It has been quite a while. Hope everyone is enjoying Chapter 5. Decided to dip my toes back into fic writing again. Feels good to contribute once more. I hope you enjoy.https://archiveofourown.org/works/87770866
This UNRELATED stuff is pretty cool.I like the idea of these two exploring their old creepy town together, finding spots that only they know about.
>>83808246I NEED to plow that imposter vethalso mom susie is very cute
>>83809989>>83810097>>83810183What if there were multiple gangs/cliques you could join? You could join the biker gang but you could also join groups like a weird new age cult or a tech bro’s startup company.
>Kris is (YOU)R mom>trying to fuck big purple Dino lady in the apartments 2 blocks over>deer lady next door has been trying to hit on Kris as well as the Dino, she has been paying Kris thousands just to babysit (YOU)>(YOU) have minor input on things as Kris will not hesitate to drop kick you for saying or doing stupid shit in front of eitherHow are you getting Kris laid? If you can do it without fucking up anything you win
>>83810273Good shit, anon like the noelle crashout. Have you just come back to the thread?
>>83810273yussss the boys (writers) are back in town
>>83810273Welcome back, brother. It's nice seeing the thread shaping up again.
>>83810130Yeah, that's called SLANDER. My dad says to turn the other cheek, but he's got like ten and I don't so FUCK YOU
>>83808362>kris and noelle clip into UNRELATED in ch5 weird route
>>83810310oh fuck i was sketching the same thing lmao, this UNRELATED thing got me really interested, i do hope it doesn't die as a concept
>>83810498kickass
>>83808246I like to imagine that Aqua is just as clueless about what "moms" are as most other things, so Susie could do basically anything and claim it's a "mom thing".
>>83810341All the main characters feel like they’re part of their own cliques so maybe those could be part of>Eve is a member of a book club that meets up in the library on saturdays>Juniper I think is part of a baseball team>Crowley is definitely a card carrying member of his drama club
>>83810498Very Nice
>"This is how you truly get into Deltarune"Nope we just like the purple dinosaur
>>83810596what about our boy? is he a new kid in town, or is he one of those floater/loners?
>>83810498love the art anon >i do hope it doesn't die as a concepti probs won't, it's just too interesting i think it might though >>83806698>IF OP ACTUALLY PUTS THE DAMN ARCHIVE ON THE GEN https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1R63hcqMc2fJ_ZAZJlzcgtsxVavObJmS-
>>83810616>Optional: Undertale
>>83810679i mean it was just a demo for deltarune
>>83810596>CrowleyLiterally card-carrying.Like, business cards, not just a membership card.He printed them himself.He has five in his wallet and at least fifty in his house at any given time.He is begging you with his eyes to take one and come to their performance of Alice in Wonderland on next Thursday.
>>83810663Maybe dirk and batty hang out at the dying strip mall or some alt adjacent hangout spot
>>83810357I check in every now and then, but it's rare that I say anything unless I have something to contribute.>>83810402Thank you, glad to be back in the saddle for a time.>>83810403I agree, always fun to see what comes when a new chapter drops.
>>83810698They have to be laminated too, that's how you know he means BUSINESS. Full on american psycho card scene
