post Malfoid / Draconia/Dracaena Malfoy content and fanfictionprevious >>223943364
>>223949932sorry you arent capable of any type of joy and fun. for anons who are, which is your favorite? for me its the foyege, bottom right. she is perfect
>"RON YOU WERE RIGHT, SHE'S FLAT"
>>223949911Ok so how would you make Draco and Dracaena coexist then? As twins ?
>>223949970No I wouldn't. It's a funny meme but that's it, Draco doesn't exist anymore.
>>223949970I'm firmly against it so I won't be answering.
>>223949959bottom left, I guess
>>223949959What reference image and/or prompt are people using to produce the one in the bottom left? Or the way she looks in picrel? She's so fucking beautiful, I need to know the secret sauce. Not for lewding reasons but because it's the kind of pretty I just want to stare at, like a painting or a sculpture
>>223949959Anybody know what the top right foid is from?
pureblood supremacy
Do slopfags only do it to piss off anons or do they actually enjoy the shit that they post?
>>223950010idk any of that but here's the clip its from and its also my second favorite because its the type of pretty i was attracted to in the young days i was capable of feelings. bottom left maturing into bottom right, yes please
>>223949991How come ?
PROTECT THE NEW CANON BY ANY MEANS
>>223949970They wouldn't but you could make some fucked up situations where they could've been twins, the male twin dies, and the male twin is now some schizo delusion in the surviving twin's head.
>>223949970Yes.Can easily do the key moments in the series with draco and have dracaena as the love interest that changes the story appropriately.The added family drama on top would add more to both characters and allow for exploration of the pureblood inbred wizard population.
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>>223949970I don't really see the point. I mean I guess you could do something like Jaime and Cersei (minus the incest) where they start out really similar but diverge as Malfoid slowly changes for the better. But honestly just sounds like a mess.
>>223950010>Malfoid surrounded by the Weasleys>as if she would ever stoop to that levelUgh. Just go and generate your Ginny/Harry shit
>>223950010I would say that they took Foyege's model and modified it a bit. How she looks in the 2nd episode, not the first.Btw, this one unsaucable right now>>223940084>>223942563
>>223950004based
>>223950115Even without marrying Ginny Harry is more-or-less adopted by the Weasleys and she's just going to have to accept them as her in-laws.
>>223950054Because the vast majority of Draco's story still works for Draconia
I went into chinese youtube and found a really sweet one. Malfoid meets the Weasley family 【我把食死徒家的大小姐带回了陋居(1)】 https://www.bilibili.com/zh-Hans/video/BV1Wxnh6EEzc/?share_source=copy_web【我把食死徒家的大小姐带回了陋居2】 https://www.bilibili.com/zh-Hans/video/BV1S2Hg6TEJf/?share_source=copy_web
>>223949932Trannies jumping on a new trend and making it all about their twisted ideology isn't new
>>223950110That's probably a bad move on her part
>>223950165Thats true. However you can still have Draco in the story but he won't be as relevant
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>>223950153>>223950010>married a half-blood> wears makeup even in pajamas like a whore.> hang out with blood traitors in the shithole, they call home>craves their approvalJust some lefty tranny fantasy as is
>pushing for some meme with both Draco and Malfoid in the story>trying to engineer a situation with cross-gender polyjuice usage>"nooooo they need dating experience" from the previous thread and whatever that "why does she have to be 10/10" chimpout a couple of days ago was>AI slop spamAll of the above are all psyops for the purposes of sabotage or derailing
>>223950254>just listed everything that these threads are actually made of
>>223950254>>AI slop spamThe reason the Malfoid trend has lastest this long when most social media fads die off within days is because it is the first trend to embrace industrial production of memes with AI, it has destroyed the competition in the attention economy just like the factory btfo the independent artisan in 1800.The future is now.
>>223949911lmao that's pretty good
>>223950327No, actually. The AI shills are hard at work tying itself to the malfoid trend and like a feminist taking credit for work of others and claiming it as their own victory and an inherent virtue of their cult. >>223950174They litterally started it. But normie girls and harry potter stans have run with it and made it something else. The trannies are desperate to make it a tool to manipulate normgroids. But it's only revealing how much the normies hate all media they've taken over. The harry potter show is going to be hated while this fanfiction universe is going to take off. I suspect Rowling will be writing some of the fanfiction about this and lurking in many malfoid social media bubbles.
do you think malfoid would get the ick if her boyfriend sometimes cried
>>223950339bro, It’s pretty obvious. Half AI-content featuring an asian-Malfoid. That's why no one seem to see anything wrong with her be married to a halfblood. and other shit
>>223950393in a perfect world, no
>>223950393they always do and never tell you this
>>223950140women are garbage
>>223949959For me foyege is the worst. Korean hentai bait model, not classy at all.
>>223949970I mean >>223949984, I'm sure could be wholesome but it wouldn't be as good than Draconia alone. For me, where she really really shine is in breaking the segregation barrier that subtly exist between the House Slytherin and the rest. It works because of Draconia's position, which is basically the queen of the Slytherins, the same way Draco was the king, and because of the reciprocal semi-public love between them.If Draco still existed, the tension would remain due to his rivalry with Harry, and the Slytherins would persist being seen as unfrequentable nazis.With Draconia being with Harry, Slytherin maintain their beliefs but aren't ostracized anymore.Maybe Rowling created the House system to cover the fact she really wanted to isolate the Slytherins because of their conservative beliefs.The mere existence of Draconia and her mutual love for Harry blows the fuck out this crypto tyrannic system conceived by Rowling, and the different Houses now cohabit in harmony.
>>223950417"vampired billionairely" always makes me kek
>anon(male): the AI cultists are attempting to take credit for a movement largely spearheaded by trans activists, which is ironic in light of how the Galfoy meme (no, I will *not* be using the 4chan slur) is actually only of interest to genuine AGPs. >me: hot snobby blonde go plap
>>223950406that would be niceimagine having a girlfriend/wife who actually cares about you as a person and not just the image she envisions you as>>223950416yeah i hate real women so much it's unfathomable
>>223950416Malfoid wouldn't
>>223950484>imagine having a girlfriend/wifeyeah, imagine haha...
>>223950442not quite as peak as bouncing boobily, however
I know people like a peacock patronus for Malfoid, but hear me out...>battle of hogwarts>harry is believed dead>dementors closing in>in a last act of defiance she draws on her memories of harry and finally casts her patronus>it's a doeIt just makes sense in the context, as well as thematically.
>>223950552To be honest I don't remember how patronuses work
>>223950580I think the animal can change if you really love someone. Snape's changed from whatever it was to a doe like Lilly's.
>>223950533i dont want a gf/wife unless she's like malfoidbut no women like that exist in this universe. they're all vapid, dumb, fat whores who don't do anything besides scroll instagram, buy slutty clothes, and get their vaginas blown out by 50 different men until they hit the wall and settle for a balding male feminist who will buy them more slutty clothes so they can cheat on him (and then blame him for it because he "wasn't man enough" or she "felt unloved")god i hope a nearby gamma ray burst sterilizes this fucking planet down to the last bacterium
>>223950552I like the idea of being a doe as well
>>223950393There are times when it's ok but it's the sort of thing where, if you have to ask, the answer is no.
>>223950416Only if they are on birth control. It fucks them up. Normal women will see a man they like crying and go into breeding/matron mode. Squeezed out a few tears after telling a made up story about losing my child hood pet and managed to plow a karen with fantastic tits. She realized I was full of shit when she asked what the dogs name was and I blanked.
>>223950115>>223950234She would change as aperson and leave that pure blood shit behind.
>>223950626>god i hope a nearby gamma ray burst sterilizes this fucking planet down to the last bacteriumI've been waiting for an asteroid to hit earth for more than a decadesure in 2 weeks more, right...
>>223950377> The harry potter show is going to be hated while this fanfiction universe is going to take off. Your perception is skewed because you spend so much time in certain corners of the internet. Most people don’t hang out on X, Reddit, 4chan or fandoms. The series will more than recoup its costs. That's the only thing is matter to Rowling and WB. The Cursed Child was written absolutely terribly, yet it still sold out, even in its printed edition. Even the game turned out to be quite mediocre, yet it saw massive sales.>while this fanfiction universe is going to take off. lol. If you look at the AO3, you’ll see there’s always been a massive influx of people into the fandom all this years. but it doesnt metter. it isn’t nearly as powerful as you think.> I suspect Rowling will be writing some of the fanfiction about this and lurking in many malfoid social media bubbles. she’s far more likely to write something exact opposite. She hates girls like malfoid and pansy - something she has stated on many occasions.
>>223950552>a stag and a doecute
>>223949970There’s already a great piece of fanfiction about this:https://archiveofourown.org/works/8815684/chapters/20212441
>>223950637>Normal women will see a man they like crying and go into breeding/matron mode.rightand then you woke up?
>>223950626iktf. at least we have a global economic collapse on the horizon
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>>223950617it's only if you go through a drastic change, Malfoid should still be the prideful stuck up giga stacy which is why peacock fits
>>223949970>>223950107My experience with other fanfics so far is that Malfoid is already somewhat overloading the narrative by herself. You really don't have time to be messing around with Worst Malfoy while you're trying to write Best Malfoy into the story.
>>223950636makes sensei shall be finding a tall bridge shortly
>>223950651That’s the most naive thing I’ve ever read
>>223950636>There are times when it's okand that would be?I saw a whore saying that he saw her bf cry at his grandma's funeral and it gave her the ick
>>223950727you ain't gonna do shit lose the weight.
Hear me outMalfoid is a cute Mtf
>>223950656Where do you think most of the people who are still into harry pottter are anon? Social media spaces and places filled with people that are deeply entrenched in social media spaces. They can't escape it. And WB and Rowling knows it. Of course it will recoup losses and make some profit. It looks beyond cheap as fuck and are getting blackrock bucks for certain messaging and changes to the script. It's making money before it ever takes off. Lastly, mary sues are always hated by her. However malfoid acts like a posh and evil version of hermione from the book.
>>223950712>Malfoid is already somewhat overloading the narrativeYou calling her fat?
>>223950653>>223950688if i have to suffer so should the rest of the worldespecially whores and their enablers
>>223950677Setting the plot aside, the writing itself is unironically so better than whatmost modern Malfoid fanfics.I wonder if this is because everyone has become too reliant on AI, and has stopped practicing their own writing skills.
>>223950626Stereotypical Malfoid post>>223950637Based
>>223950758>cute>mtfmen aren't cute you nasty fucking faggot
>>223950735The whole point of her character is that she changes, she hates being forced to be a death eater and hates seeing where the pure blood shit brought her family. And constantly losing academically to a mudblood also affects her, even got her ass kicked by her.
>>223950765>Malfoid after being told to put down the butterbeers
>>223950796>Stereotypical Malfoid postwhat do you mean by this
>>223950217I can't see any part of this scene and not think "my cumshot fighting the femboy's diarrhea".
>>223950735Besides, the thing between Harry and Malfoid wouldn't work long term if she continues being a massive cunt to Harry's friends and continues spouting pure blood supremacy shit at home.
>>223950778My strong feeling from the update schedules on a few Malfoid fics is that everyone's just scrambling to get the shit done. You can go really, really fast when most of the plotting is already done for you. Some of the writing may just be that it's the first draft.
>>223950865Stereotypical of a Malfoid enjoyer, I guess I should clarify>>223950871There's a second layer to it though. There's pureblood wizards, halfbloods and mudbloods, but then there's also wizards vs muggles. She'd just graduate to level 2.
>>223950758Harry would vomit.
>>223950761Are you actually stupid?The primary paying consumers of HP aren’t chronically online weirdos. They are normie-parents who actually would buy merchandise from the series and keep their subscriptions active for their children. Warner Bros. are having massive sales of HP related content in China and across other non-English-speaking regions. Like "Harry Potter: Magic Awakened", for instance, launched in Asian markets first, bypassing Europe and North America for three or four years.Normies are TA, not the anons.
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>>223950992Trannies make a tranny draco as a gotcha to rowlingNormies take it over and the fags are seething because normies are openly shitting on all trannies and queers attempting to re-appropriate their fag agenda OC.
>>223950651She would stop calling Hermione a mudblood to her face only
>>223950975C(rabbi)(Goy)le
>>223951045It's entered into the public subconscious and the internet is not a small thing no one has heard of anymore. Like it or not it's a major player when it comes to the popularity of a product and you pretending otherwise is insane.
>>223951110they didn't create it. They're trying to snatch it like they do everything
>>223950905>Stereotypical of a Malfoid enjoyer, I guess I should clarifyoh, i thought you meant it in the sense that she would agree with me/say the same things
>>223951133Yes they did. Just like they created the tranny spiderman thing.
>>223951110they didn't create shitit was some artist from korea that started it and when trannies tried to make him draw malfoy as a tranny, he gave them the middle fingerthat's why they started hating on everyone that draw malfoid
>>223951133Normalfags didn't invent it either, it's ours originally
>>223951176Honestly this idea is just about as old as Harry Potter fanfiction is.
OP hereI'm going to sleep now, possibly for quite a while. Please keep making these threads wizards.
what if dobby was a gril
>>223951171>Yes you are correct>But here's some pedantic bullshit that doesn't prove you're wrong
>>223951201What is this, a Malfoid for ants?
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>>223951191Even back in the 90s people could tell Draco was a catty bitch
>>223951229It do be like that
>>223951201fuck I suck at making thesehttps://space.bilibili.com/zh-Hans/39605824?spm_id_from=333.788.upinfo.detail.clickCan someone more competent do it?
>>223951169nope. they were seething from the beginning
>>223951243lol you can literally hear the seething through the screen
>>223951176>>223951191>>223951236It's really so obvious, I'll always wonder why Rowling never thought to fuck her bullies with her protagonist's penis.
>>223951243>>223951257Kys retards, no one cares about your troon drama garbage.
>>223951267
Nig Fury was also the variant and he became canon.
>>223949970Draco wouldn't serve any purpose in the story and it would needlessly create a social web of nightmarish complexity. Remember, the reason why Malfoid works so well is because Draco is a girly character without depth and character growth. You could re-invent a male Draco alongside Dracaena, but that would shift everything else in the story orders of magnitude more. Stories are like a butterfly effect: change one small pre-condition early and the chains of plausible future events changes radically.
>>223951248why is her angry and cold face so hot?I'm so stupid for liking it...
>>223951262>that posttrannies and queers being insane. not entertaining insane just disturbing..
Do you think Lucius would accept Potter as son in law? Would he force Potter to take the Malfoy last name?
>>223950140It do be like that.
got it finally I think, again I'm shit at this so if someone else can do it>>223951294all high class women have it
>>223949911>>223951359ywnbaw
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whats the endgame for the yearning? obviously finding a real malfoid gf is impossible because of our degenerated culture. so is it just committing suicide?
>>223951345not in a million yearsbut the banter between them would be funny as fuck
>>223950832Realizing that you shouldn’t humiliate/insult others based on their blood status (and that Voldemort is evil, being death eater suck, ect. ) is not the same thing as smearing yourself in the filth of impure blood, destroying traditions and severing ties with your own family. Especially marring an orphan raised by muggles, someone whose friends and entire social circle promote values alien to your own, and who, on top of that, hates your own family. >And constantly losing academically to a mudblood also affects her, even got her ass kicked by her.lol. What a load of bullshit. Were you homeschooled or something? Or you from asia? Because of her attitude toward her studies, Hermione doesn’t have any female friends. Malfoy would probably try to keep her grades down, even if she were a straight-A student. To the average school girl, being a nerd is just repulsive.
>>223951383we deny the real women the yearning
>>223951383yearning is the end itself, or fixing society
>>223951383Sculpting Malfoid as our own Galatea, yearning until we gracelessly expire
>>223951383I'm just waiting for the yearning to passsomeday it willI hope...
>>223951359Their heads look weird as fuck.
>>223951288>Draco>without depth and characterI'm rereading the series this is very true, at least in the first three book. It feels like he has no internality, he's just placed in front of Harry to oppose whatever he's doing in a given moment. One of the only times you get insight you get into his inner thoughts is when he speaks in the shop scene without knowing Harry can hear him, and it fits Malfoid perfectly.>“What’s the good of that if I’m not on the House team?” said Malfoy, looking sulky and bad-tempered. “Harry Potter got a Nimbus Two Thousand last year. Special permission from Dumbledore so he could play for Gryffindor. He’s not even that good, it’s just because he’s famous... famous for having a stupid scar on his forehead....”>Malfoy bent down to examine a shelf full of skulls.>“...everyone thinks he’s so smart, wonderful Potter with his scar and his broomstick —”>“You have told me this at least a dozen times already,” said Mr. Malfoy
There has been a lot of discussion on the Sectumsempra scene but I think this fixes most of the problems
>>223951436It's been weird finding out that making lots of babies is primarily a male interest, but it makes sense now.
>>223951469Kek!
>>223951469>thatsapenis.gif
>>223951469>50 points to Gryffindor! *twinkles*
>>223950992> anon is too Illiterate to grasp the concept of "death of the author."I’m embarrassed to even be in the same thread as people like you. You’re just like those fat, pathetic neckbeards on youtube, that throwing tantrums over topics they couldn’t even be bothered to read about on a wiki,
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>>223950631Snape's is a doe too.
>>223950747Never, for you. (See: "if you have to ask...")
>>223951410i've already been doing that for the past decadeonly now i'm finally realizing that good women don't actually exist at all. years of being lonely had lowered my standards to the point where i even started thinking i'd be okay with a fat ugly girl as long as she wasn't a whorethe yearning has raised my standards back to where they should've been, and god does it feel hopeless>>223951421i dont think society can be fixed, at least not in my lifetime. it would require a total cultural and economic collapse that would wipe the slate clean, and then it would require people not to once again become degenerate hypersexual consumerists who scroll through instagram thots all day and talk and dress and act like ghetto subhumansi've yearned for fictional characters for a long time, malfoid is just the most perfect one. and i'm tired of just yearning. i want to know what being loved feels like.
>>223951469Cheer, cheers! 100 points to Gryffindor!
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>>223951404What the fuck is this drivel? Can you even form a coherent thought fucking retard?Let me explain the Hermione thing since you are such a fucking imbecile, through her entire childhood Malfoid has been hammered with the notion that she is better than mudbloods because she is pure blood, she MUST be better because she is pure blood. She would not be keeping her grades down because she HAS to represent her superior family, yet there is in her classes a mudblood girl who constantly proves herself to be better than her, and that would fuck with her mentally.Please spend another 40 minutes writing an incoherent ramble as a response so i can just hide it in two clicks without reading it.
>>223951469Lmao. Why does he hate dobby so much?
>>223951562well, I'll never have a gf or wife anyway so it was more of a question out of curiosity
>>223951430i see
>>223950168>>223951248>all of the characters are white>except Malfoid who is a kpop starDon't know what to make of this
>>223951430>Sculpting Malfoid as our own Galatea>Makining AI-Malfoid GF>She leave or selfdelete on day 2
>>223951645Her face looks like she came off a korean assembly line.
>>223951404Harry is a half-blood and the Malfoys married half-bloods in the past.And holy sheit femanon, how many times do we have to say Malfoid is not supposed to be representative of the average hoe? Her caring about her grades is based on Draco doing so. The problem with Hermione is not having good grades, but being seen as a know-it-all. On that point, I agree that Malfoid should't come off as a tryhard, but that doesn't mean she would get lower grades on purpose.
>>223951469/r/ the Warwick Dav- I mean Professor Flitwick version of this
>>223951645she looks too much like a chink in thispart of malfoid's appeal is that she's white yet not subject to the degenerate culture the west has ruined itself by embracing
>>223951670I think it's because chinks and japs are the main producers of the high-quality AI slop. I have no idea why they in particular latched on to malfoid, but I welcome all participants
>>223950552I like it more when she retains some individuality.And her patronus changing to emulate Harry's doesn't remind me of James and Lily, it makes me think of that cuck Snape.
>>223950697Yeah it's hard to explain why peacock just fits but it seems to. It's very dramatic, could even represent her father or family in some way.
>>223951562which is why (real) women are evil disgusting creatures and i hope they all get flesh eating bacteria in their vaginas
>>223951624Basically, if you are strong and have a very long and deep relationship with a woman, and she knows how hard something hits you, and even then your emotions are restrained from what they could be and you don't break down bawling in public indulgently.Alternately, you get a pass if you are a black guy. I don't know why. Black guy crying about his mom doesn't seem to give the ick (but I think that's more of a condescension than anything else)
>>223951838and in case any anons choose to not have a good Malfoid Monday
>>223951724It serves as a sign that she's more than just a Slytherin.(Peacocks eat snakes).
>>223951724infinite slop works
>>223951275>using this image for something other than rage-bait on XSeriously, this is some closet-gay denial shit. It’s as if you’re inadvertently admitting that you see Malfoid as tranny Malfoy, so you feel the need to further assert that your fantasies are fully anti-tranny
>>223951907>if you call me out that means you're on my sideEither post Malfoids, or fuck off.
>Japanese and Koreans actually bother to draw her>everyone else is lazy as fuck and uses AII understand using AI for videos but holy shit get it together
>223951907Imagine raiding malfoid threads for a month trying desperately to kill the meme with lies and failing pathetically every single time.
The consensus seems to be they get close/start a relationship in book 4, things sour in book 5, low point in book 6, and a variety of options for reconciliation in the last stretch.I was wondering, How would you go about planting the seeds for romance in the first three books? They're still too young, I think, but surely you can give their rivalry some distinct flavour to make the following relationship feel more earned?
>>223951383You have not yearned nearly enough. Be patient. Practice it daily. Yearn enough and you will come out Lovepilled. At that stage, you will find physical reality to be far more malleable than you though! It's like magic, but real. >>223951469The Sectumsempra scene's main problem is that nobody has been able to make a good re-write of it. Heavy physical violence made a lot of sense for Male Draco / Harry. Not for Malfoid, especially if they have dated or have grown to love each other.The advocates of Sectumsempra are just desensitized to extreme gore and vulgarity. Harry Potter is here giving a thousand cuts to the girl he loves and she will forget about him nearly killing her with torture in... about 6 months, when Voldemort comes to school and is mean to Harry. You can have a "low point" in a enemies-lovers without bloody, medieval torture. At least have Snape or someone there within five seconds to make the medieval torture a bit more temporary if you insist that some type of physical torture is mandatory for the plot. Having Malfoid be unbothered by torture would reflect very poorly on her character. What is she, trailer trash npc that falls for Harry no matter what he does?
>>223951959Don't attack people who respond to the troll, just ignore
>>223952010I like the idea of her helping to save Buckbeak, and it being the first time she and Harry really work together on something.If you want even earlier, you could have her be the one possessed by Tom's diary in CoS.
>>223951243>pedo satanist with a fire emblem pfpI hate those colonists
>>223952051I never really liked sectumsempera even in the original.
>>223952010the 3 big events are>going into the forbidden forest as a punishment>dobby breaking harry's arm>buckbeak
>>223952010I would keep the first two years as pure rivalry.>>223952051Sectumsempra is supposed to be an accident, Harry wasn't aware of its effects.
>>223951469>>223951592>>223951602I don't know why dobby abuse is so funny, but it is.
>>223952132I remember coming across this cute little comic where Harry and Hermione have already time traveled, and they're outside Hagrid's hut, and they hear a sound, and it's Malfoid in a cast, trying to pull Buckbeak away.I wish I'd saved it.
>>223952051>The Sectumsempra scene's main problem is that nobody has been able to make a good re-write of it. Heavy physical violence made a lot of sense for Male Draco / Harry. Not for Malfoid, especially if they have dated or have grown to love each other.Harry doesn't know what the spell does, he just does it recklessly. He hurts someone he thought he didn't care about anymore and it shocked him that he did, realizing he really does still have feelings for her. >Having Malfoid be unbothered by torture would reflect very poorly on her character. What is she, trailer trash npc that falls for Harry no matter what he does?She gets even more depressed thinking Harry really does hate her now
>>223952172I read a fanfic like thatbut that one changed a lot of things. Instead of harry and hermione going back in time, it was harry and malfoy lol
>>223952010>How would you go about planting the seeds for romance in the first three books? They're still too young, I think, but surely you can give their rivalry some distinct flavour to make the following relationship feel more earned?Malfoid is a spoiled girl, always gets what she wants. Harry is the first to reject her and call her on her shit. They always argue and compete with each other, that naturally brings them closer. A moment in the Dark Forest where they meet Voldemort and Harry protects her despite just arguing with her I think would plant the first seeds.
>no malfoid/slytherinits joever
>>223952010>How would you go about planting the seeds for romance in the first three books?Through one of this guy's bullshit scams in book 2. The dueling scene comes to mind.
>>223952193>>223952172here
>>223952212I don't like the idea of her helping save buckbeak, it goes too far in the opposite direction. But maybe she becomes aware of what they are trying to do and looks the other way.
>>223952203do you really think they're gonna mention something with the name "foid" in it?
>>223952173>>223952051Sectumsempra is rock bottom but also a turning point.>Harry goes to her afterwards and apologizes, explains about the spell, tells her he never wants to fight her again, basically admits to caring about her>She apologizes for the way she's had to act, finally explains why that she's being forced to be a death eater and that she didn't want him to hate or get himself killed trying to save her>big emotional moment and they're finally on the same page
>>223952240there are a few comics like she tries to secretly help out in her own way.
>>223952010>Malfoid immediately makes the first move before they even start school while they're robe shopping, perhaps unaware of who Potter is aside form the fact that he's a Hogwarts student. Perhaps Harry even thinks she's pretty at first, until she starts running her mouth about Hagird and half-bloods.>Thus she's blindsided and taken aback when Harry chooses Ron over her. Begin the seething!>Being a natural broom rider, there should probably be more of a chase before she throws away Neville's remembrall.>Chamber of Secrets: Malfoid's blood purity snobbery should peek around here. After Hermione stands up for herself, and Malfoid sees that Harry isn't buying her brand of magical superiority, this should start her on the path of introspection, at least over the summer. Prisoner of Azkaban: She torments Harry by pretending to be a dementor. Becomes the dementor who is kissed. HER FATHER DOESN'T HEAR OF THIS. He does hear about Buckbeak. Malfoid wants Hagrid to face consequences, but balks when her father wants the animal killed. Thus she participates in the rescue when Harry and Hermione go back in time. I reckon it's best she stays out of the Marauder business, and instead makes peace with Buckbeak and rides him to drive off werewolf Lupin. Naturally, once they're back to their respective houses it's business as usual. >Summer: Harry gets a very passive aggressive letter. But the fact that she's writing at all is a start.
>>223952096>If you want even earlier, you could have her be the one possessed by Tom's diary in CoS.This is a choice I very much like, although the plotting becomes tricky since Lucius is the one behind the plot and while he's an asshole he's still a family man. He can't be too big of an >I'm evil!type character.
>>223952051>scene's main problem is that nobody has been able to make a good re-write of it. Heavy physical violence made a lot of sense for Male Draco / Harry. Well, finally, someone else has fuking noticed this. It’s such a bizarre scene involving a female character/love interest for many reasons.There’s really no need for him to follow her all the way to the girlroom. After all, the only natural reaction for a girl to have upon finding a boy in the girls' restroom is to scream and call for help. Even if Malfoy didn’t do that, Myrtle would have alerted every teacher in the vicinity within a second.In my view, a heated, hysterical argument between them because she’s on the verge of a breakdown. - during which they either confess or hurl cruel things at each other - would be more than enough for drama/angst. That alone is more than enough to widen the chasm between them.Malfoy could even end up injuring herself while running away, which would then pave the way for a reconciliation in the hospital wing.
>>223952277that won't work, she needs to be forced to try to kill Dumbledore still. It's only after she doesn't do it that Harry realizes there is good in her still
>>223952344I don't know why this pic reminded me of anakin in episode 3
>>223952277I’m about to throw up from this stupid, infantile writing.
>>223952336Boring.
>>223952051>>223952129The Sectumsempra scene is Harry's fault because he used a spell he had no clue of what it would do other than the "lol use it on people you hate" scribble. And Harry had no earthly idea what Malfoy was up to, or what he was going through, only later finding out he was crying to Moaning Myrtle of all people.If in the Malfoid version we go by what has been crafted earlier in the threads about the Lucius events in Goblet and Order starting to strain Harry and Malfoid's relationship, something else needs to happen for Harry to be angry abd reckless enough to use a spell meant for his "enemies" on someone he supposed to care about and have somewhat better understanding of than the canon counterpart. Otherwise you can't have that scene happen logically.
>>223952391what do you suggest then?
>>223952395>The Sectumsempra scene is Harry's fault because he used a spell he had no clue of what it would do other than the "lol use it on people you hate" scribble.Yeah that's why I hate it. I realize Harry is supposed to be flawed and reckless but what he did there was beyond retarded.
>>223952395He doesn't willingly use sectumsempra. That was the first thing that popped into his head since he was practicing that spell for days at that point in time. Even in the original story he has no idea what it does and is horrified by what happens to Draco.
>>223952129Can't say it was my favourite either but at least it makes sense in the original context. Draco Malfoid is an annoying mosquito, a Death Eater. He was recently the top guy of evil Dolores Umbridge. It was plausible for idiot Harry to use a spell that was meant "for enemies" against someone like that. >>223952165Accidents have to be believable. Draco was a genuine enemy to Harry, Malfoid isn't. Not in the Half-Blood Prince.Not using spells without having clue of their effect is year 1 stuff that Harry should reasonably know. He's almost ready to duel with Voldemort. Yet the idiot Harry is here torturing his future wife big oopsie style. The girl he has loved for years more than he has admitted to anyone. Why not use Dobby or something useless for target practice. I simply do not want to see Malfoid bloodied on the bathroom floor.
>>223952211Malfoid would hit puberty hard the moment Harry speaks to that snake.
>>223952395How about this, Harry and Malfoid start seeing eachother in book 6. They get really close, maybe share a kiss whatever just before Christmas vacation. During Christmas vacation Lucius finds out about the relationship and demands Malfoid to end it, fearing what would happen if Voldemort would find out, Mafloid begrudingly agrees to end it. Vacation ends they are all in school again and Malfoid meets Harry and ends the relationship, Harry takes it badly demanding to know why and Malfoid dodges the questioning leading Harry to believe it was all another cruel joke, that Malfoid hasn't changed and just toyed and played with his feelings the threw him away just to hurt him and he gets really angry.Then Harry goes into the 'Malfoid is a death eater and i'll prove it' thing which leads to the sectumsempra scene.
>>223952361the Lucifer arm angle and Anakin also feels conflicted
>>223952466>practice the spell for days>doesn't actually use it until he is in a situation that he created because of his own ill informed obsessionhe's still a fucking retarded
>>223952461Malfoy shot first. Harry panicked and used the first spell that came to his mind after being shot at. The entire thing is Malfoy's fault. So much so even Snape just heals him and chews Harry a new asshole. What would a person like Malfoy do at that point if he'd beaten Harry there? Take him straight to the Death Eaters he was in contact with. Harry's panic saved his life.
>>223949911Tf is this garbage
>>223952516yeah, that's what I was thinking about
>>223952461The spell was on his mind, and the other spells he learned from the book were pretty harmless. It was in the heat of the moment, and he instantly regrets it.What about Malmoid trying to cast crucio at him? I think that should be removed. Alternatively, Malfoid does cast it but it barely affects Harry because she doesn't really mean it.
>>223952518So? He's supposed to be a flawed protagonist, not some Gary Stu. Draco was about to use the torture curse against him obviously he isn't going to take it lying down. >>223952522>Malfoy shot first. Harry panicked and used the first spell that came to his mind after being shot at.Finally. Someone else who actually read the book.
>>223952466this, I don't under what's so hard to understand. He doesn't mean to hurt her so badly, he was retarded in that moment and he knows so too. Also it's important as how Snape figures out he has his book. And up until this point he has been thinking the Half Blood Prince was his bro. Helping him with potions and teaching him fun spells like the dangling from air jinkx. He had no idea there was such dark magic in it and it realized he seriously fucked up trusting some book. It's his lowest moment.
>>223952466>>223952461>He doesn't willingly use sectumsempra.Yes, he does. That he didn't know what it did, doesn't absolve him from blame.>>223952165>Sectumsempra is supposed to be an accident, Harry wasn't aware of its effects.It's not an "accident" it's Harry being completely fucking retarded and using a combat spell without knowing even what the hell it does. It wasn't even very convincing that it was Sectumsempra that won the battle, Draco was about to use crucio and Harry hit him before he got it out. Perfectly reasonable to assume Harry could have hit him with pretty much anything at that point, to save himself and beat Draco.
>>223951383>whats the endgame for the yearning?for AI to get good enough to roleplay with us without us prompting it, basically BR2049 JOI IRL
>>223952173Get rid of the scene with the her Cruciatus and Sectumsempra - just scrap it entirely. It’s cringey and immature. Honestly, it baffles me that you don’t grasp why any form of physical violence (whether accidental, in self-defense, or born of hysteria) is completely unacceptable.It doesn’t matter that he/she didn’t know or her didn’t work. It completely ruins things for them, trust.and romance especially. You can write as many apologies or internal monologues as you like, but a character’s actions reveal their true intentions: Draco wants to torture his "crush," and Harry mindlessly carves her up like a pig just because he decided to test a new spell on his "beloved." In the original, it works because they’re both boys who hate each other.
It's not like Luke and Ben moment where Luke thought for a long time and thought murdering Ben was the way to go. Harry just threw out the first spell he thought.
/malfoid/ is convincing me that everyone's favorite edgy scene with Sectum Sempra needs to be exsected from the book. But then how does Harry find out that Snape is the Half-Blood prince?
>>223952606>get rid of one of the strongest scenesWhy don't you shut the fuck up, you big retard?
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>>223952612>that pic still existsmaybe I sort of like the sequels
>>223952586>He doesn't mean to hurt herit makes less sense for harry to use it on Malfoid if they are in a relationship vs the main canon where Harry just hates Malfoy unconditionally>>223952565>Draco was about to use the torture curseHarry casts the spell before Draco even gets half way through casting the spell, Harry doesn't know he's about to get crucio'd
>>223952612why did you have to remind me of that shit?
Also, dare I say that the main reason the Sectum Sempra scene no longer works is purely that Malfoid is Malfoid and not Malmoid? There's some sense here of>You're not supposed to hit girlswhen discussing it. What seemed at least understandable when used against Malmoid suddenly becomes completely unreasonable when used against Malfoid. And it's because you're not supposed to hit girls.Even if Malfoid were a straight villain there'd be a sense that Harry was too far over the line doing that.
>>223952622Nah. Sectumsempra has to be kept it. It's very iconic and shows their relationship reaching rock bottom
>>223952586>this, I don't under what's so hard to understand.It's not that anyone doesn't "understand." There's nothing you are explaining that isn't already understood. In fact I probably even understand more than you imagine about why people love the scene. It's still retarded, forced drama because Harry's actions are utterly ridiculous and unbelievable, even against male Draco much less Malfoid. The "he trusted HPB" "no idea it was dark magic" "draco was about to use a forbidden curse on him" excuses pass sanity check. Seriously what kind of retard uses any kind of weapon in combat without knowing what it does?
>>223952659They're not in a relationship at this point, Malfoid is a death eater and pulled away from everyone. She's on her mission to kill Dumbledore to save her family. Her attempts have gotten Ron poisoned and Alicia cursed, Harry suspects she went evil and thinks she is loyal to her family of death eaters not knowing her real motivation
>>223952659You would have to rewrite waaaaay more of Harry Potter for Malfoid to be someone Harry would ever go for in a million years. Harry immediately dislikes Malfoy. From the moment they met. The first thing Malfoy does is shit on Harry's only friends and family in the entire world: Ron's family, Hermione, and Hagrid by going on a blood purity rant like an autistic chud and bragging about money. There isnt one single positive interaction between any of them. She'd need to be rewritten as basically a guest party member during some major shit early on. And shed have to drop the blood purity shit publicly early, Harry would not get the hots for someone who gets their jollies off calling his best friends slurs to their face.
>>223952173I'm not even against Sectumsempra, it ought to be included in some form. The image of Malfoid with a 1000 cuts would be so iconic that people outside the Malfoidverse would know the reference. That visual imagery is intensely powerful. But it can't go too far. "Have Snape conveniently there to save her fast" is just a quick example of how to damage control idiot Harry's retarded action of nearly killing his future wife. There's "recklessness" and then there's not using unknown spells on people you love. Neither deleting or incorporating the unchanged MaleDraco-version of Sectumsempra is ideal. The golden plot is twisting it just slightly to make it less nauseating, while keeping it shocking enough to make anyone's blood boil. >>223952336For the book format it might enough to just do shouting, but to perfect the story for visual media (movie/series) it needs to be iconic and memorable. That is the strong point of the Sectumsempra. Powerful visuals.
>>223952689you can keep it so long as you give Harry a reason to use a dubious cursed written in the back of a potions book on your girlfriend in the heat of the moment
I can't really say anything about the sectumsempra scene. I'm just waiting to see it happen in the fanfics I'm readingof course, I don't want to see malfoid suffer but that's just the simp in me talking
>>223952700>Seriously what kind of retard uses any kind of weapon in combat without knowing what it does?A FUCKING TEENAGER, LITERAL SCHOOL KID
>>223952565>Finally. Someone else who actually read the book.I read the book. None of those dumbass excuses work. It was shit writing. Rowling wanted intense drama and irony involving Snape, Draco and Harry and this was her clueless womanlike way of doing it.
>Harry can NEVER make mistakes!>You can't enter a girl's bathroom!! That's rude! Even if she is a death eater!!>There are no such thing as extenuating circumstances!!Why are some people so retarded about sectumsempra when it just works?
>>223952700>Seriously what kind of retard uses any kind of weapon in combat without knowing what it does?Read the god damn book, the spells from the book up to this point have been mostly harmless. • Levicorpus: A jinx that hoists the target upside-down into the air by one of their ankles.• Liberacorpus: The counter-jinx used to release someone suspended by Levicorpus.• Muffliato: A charm that fills the ears of anyone nearby with an unidentifiable buzzing sound to prevent them from overhearing conversations.• Langlock: A hex that sticks the victim's tongue to the roof of their mouth, silencing them or stopping them from casting verbal spells.• Toenail-growing Hex: A minor hex that causes the target's toenails to grow at an unnaturally fast rate.Harry thought the Half Blood Prince was his friend, he had zero idea Sectumsempra would be that deadly
>>223952775I think they are simping for their malfoid>you can't sectumsempra my malfoid it makes me saaaaad :(
You guys are putting more thought into this than Rowling did into writing the original series.
>>223952722>"Have Snape conveniently there to save her fast" is just a quick example of how to damage control idiot Harry's retarded action of nearly killing his future wifeSnape is under an unbreakable oath to protect Malfoy, he has been tailing him the entire time. It's why he was able to drag Malfoy from the Slughorn party so fast as well. I swear you retards just watch the movies
>>223952689Actually, I got it. Change the rest of the scene around it. The problem is that Sectum Sempra is following from a conversation which establishes who is where and what they're doing, which adds more intent to Harry. Too much intent. He can still be angry and angsty and all but he can't do it knowing for sure that it's her.Instead, Harry enters the bathroom not knowing who's in there and Malfoid hides. He gets his wand out. He asks who's there. Nobody answers. The air is thick with tension. She jumps out of a stall to cast something at him, violent or less violent, he spins around and the first thing that enters his mind is Sectum Sempra, which he casts before he resolves who it is. Much to his horror, it's Malfoy. She can understand this in the moment as him really hating her, so it tags pretty much all the bases for what people want.I think there's some other stuff you'd have to change around it but the kernel of the idea works.
>>223952722Harry to put it simply has no reason to give a fuck. He's disturbed by what the spell does but Malfoy still started it by casting an unforgivable curse at him immediately. Harry was fighting for his fucking life so he used a spell "for bad people" because he was staring down death itself.
>>223951863in other words, you must be an emotionless automaton 99% of the time, and you can only show a little bit of emotion 1% of the time, but not too much or she will instantly find you disgustingi hate women so much
>>223952747This, I have the book too and it's still Harry being an idiot walking in on Malfoy as he is trauma dumping to a ghost. The whole Malfoy shot first doesn't matter when its Harry engaging the confrontation first and then in his hatred for Malfoy stops giving a fuck and does something reckless. The whole scene was just misery porn, and it makes less sense in the Malfoid version.>>223952719>They're not in a relationship at this pointno one other than you thinks that with all the fanficing going on.
>>223952722>"Have Snape conveniently there to save her fast"This is another thing I'd write out if it were me. I'm not sure how Harry fixes it on his own but I'd like to see him fix a few more of his own problems, especially by that point in the story.
>>223952805This and the YA dystopia books that followed Twilight. For all of Rowling's failings, at least she didn't half-ass as much as those books did.
>>223952845Yeah same. Snape can still put two and two together when he sees that she's been nearly split in two by a dark curse cast by Harry.
>>223952845Yea this was a cop out in the books, but ultimately it has to be Snape in some form that helps out because the Sectumsempra counter curse needs to be applied fast or the damage becomes permanent.
>>223952816Doesn't Snape have a job though? A job that isn't tailing Malfoy everywhere?I get your logic, but it's still just a bit too convenient.
>>223952843Malfoy was in a public fucking bathroom with the door unlocked, anyone could've walked in on him. If I walk in on you mid trauma dump and you shoot at me im gonna do anything i can think off to make you fucking stop its a restroom not your goddamn therapist office. Go to the slytherin chamber or at least enchant the fucking door to not open for a few minutes malfoy, youre practically a woman already, no need to rewrite you at all actually and harry would never pick your smelly dead bloodline because youre a bitch to his friends.
>>223952743Nope. Teenagers don't pick up a mysterious grenade-shaped thing that says "use on your enemies," carry it round and pull it out randomly when you get into a brawl in the bathroom. You don't throw it at the other guy and then pretend like it's his fault when the grenade blows him to pieces and shrapnel slices your own face to ribbons. "HE WUZ A TEENAGER" is no excuse.Also, have you all fucking forgotten what Harry has been through already in the other books? He fought monsters and enemies every single year he was at Hogwarts, from Trolls, Dementors, and a motherfucking Dragon not to mention Voldemort himself. Harry (unlike Draco) had actual combat experience. He spend much of 5th year training other students in practical defense, culminating an all-out battle with Death Eaters in the Department of Mysteries.What kind of total retard really thinks Harry would not realize a spell "for enemies" might be really dangerous?
>>223952871technically his "real job" is being Dumbledore's triple agent spy, the hogwarts job, being Voldemort's assassin, or even being Malfoy or Potter's babysitter are just means to the end.
>>223952871He was potions master and classes werent in session at the time so he can go wherever he wanted. And no one in that entire school could or would stop Snape from fucking off from class anyway. Reminder he 1v3'd the absolutely strongest teachers and they couldn't lay a finger on him. Snape is terrifying.
>>223952890>Malfoy was in a public fucking bathroomHe was in the girl's bathroom, Moaning Myrtle's bathroom specifically. Totally not an eyebrow raiser
>>223952891Harry fell back on survival because Malfoy was literally trying to kill him. Stop defending the little twerp who should've gone to Azkaban for life. Thats how serious Crucio is. And as if Malfoy would've stopped there. Harry remembered the spell and wanted Malfoy to stop. If Malfoy had died, Harry wouldve gotten away with it too, their wands have memory in the core and an Auror can detect what spell was used recently. So theyd have seen Malfoy spamming Crucio like an asshole and Harry would've fucking walked.
>>223952891>Teenagers don't pick up a mysterious grenade-shaped thing that says "use on your enemies," carry it round and pull it out randomly when you get into a brawl in the bathroom.Sectumsempra spell written in Snape's book is nothing of the sort what the fuck, you are reading so retardedly into this goddamn. The way Harry understands the for enemies text is like this: For enemies ;)He reads into it like it's written in wink wink nudge nudge way and he has no reason to think otherwise from how friendly HPB seems from everything else he wrote into the book and the other spelss he already used.
>>223952779>tripling down.Moron, YOU are fooled, because you're retarded and Rowling knows it. Harry shouldn't have been that stupid. He was, and that's (part) of what makes the scene shit.>Harry thought the Half Blood Prince was his friend, he had zero idea Sectumsempra would be that deadlyWhy should friendship have any fucking thing to do with it at all? A friend can still teach you a deadly spell that you can use in a situation where deadly force is actually called for.And hell, what if it did nothing? It turned out to be an extremely dangerous slicing spell, but what if it was just a slow-acting stomachache that wouldn't be noticed for days? Harry would have wasted the spell and been crucified by Draco. No, there's no salvaging it from being a stupid thing that Harry would have never done.
>>223952891>What kind of total retard really thinks Harry would not realize a spell "for enemies" might be really dangerous?Apparently JKR, because that's how it's written. You're ignoring context though.
>>223952203GOOD. Fuck normies and fuck any thots trying to grab attention from the Malfoid trend.
>>223952805Maybe Rowling planned this all along. Notice even the gay wizard who likes knitting patterns loves dead-naming Tom Riddle and it makes him mega-seethe?
>>223952891And add to his "HE WUZ A TEENAGER" isn't and excuse, it's a REASON. Teenagers in real life do stupid dangerous things without thinking all the time, every day.
>>223952996Half the narrative point is to punish the fact Harry had spent the whole book getting all his solutions to problems from the HBP. He grew careless.
>>223952775I don't care that you want your extreme melodrama, I understand the emotional appeal. Just don't try and tell me the scene's not retarded.
>>223952960>Malfoy was literally trying to kill him>tweaking out about killing Dumbledore all bookMaybe from Harry's point of view because everyone is out to get him, but Malfoy was a pussy through and through.
their relationship never recovers after the sectumsempra incident and they both deeply regret breaking up for the rest of their lives afterwards then never end up together again to blueball the audience for maximum tragedy points
>>223952686The scene works in the context of original Malfoy because it’s logical:a) they hate each other b) they want to inflict pain on one another, both overtly and covertly. b) they’ve gotten into physical fights before, but this time things just went a bit too far.d) It leads to nothing but even greater alienation.In fact, keeping any phithical fight with Malfoid is some a gay-coded shit: where two guys or trannies fight like greeks, only to realize they’re both into cocks
>>223952775Even the largest dummies in the military understand that you shouldn't point your wand (unloaded gun) towards people without expecting to hurt them because accidents can happen. >>223952779It's a bit like chemistry book: you absolutely should know very well that basically most of the stuff is harmless, but you would also be Down Syndrome level to cook chemicals and use them on others without having a single clue what they do. Judges would not buy "recklessness" as an excuse.
>>223953073Someone with an east Asian IP made this post
>>223953073They would never get to that point. The sectumsempra scene is the least of their hypothetical ship problems. Harry is not a japanese beta who gushes over a tsundere who treats him and his friends like shit. He'd been treated like shit his whole fucking life. You'd have to completely rewrite her part from minute 1. By the time Dumbledore's Army was standing up, she'd have to be taking Snape's role as a double agent basically.
>>223953023It's an excuse, not a reason. You can't just invoke "teens do stupid things" to excuse any completely nonsensical behavior you feel like. Given Harry's experiences from books 1-6, book 7 provides insufficient reason that he would ever use a random spell in a combat situation with no fucking clue what it actually did (whether it was more OR less dangerous than he guessed). Him spending the whole of book 7 obsessed with Snape's book doesn't justify it at all. >>223953049Yeah and it's absurdly overkill, the mistake doesn't actually make any sense for Harry to make.It's shitty writing and you should just stop trying to defend it on anything but raw emotional grounds. Stop pretending like the scene is genuinely earned, because it's not.
>>223953098>a)>phithicalYou alright there, anon?
>>223952731The other spell he used from the potions book merely flipped the person upside down. He didn't have any reason to think it would shred Draco like cheese. >>223953104Whoa! It's almost like one of Harry's characteristics is being reckless.
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>>223953162He also had no idea it would do anything useful, either. What if it just put a single tiny pimple on the end of his nose?>It's almost like one of Harry's characteristics is being reckless.Yeah, but usually not retarded and by book 7 well-established to have become very effective and capable under combat pressure.
>>223953157no. i am on 4chan again; something is definitely wrong with me.
>>223953210>usually not retardedInvading the ministry and getting his godfather killed in book 5 was pretty retarded. >become very effective and capable under combat pressure.After all the things he went through for 6 years and in the hunt for horcruxes.
>>223952997>You're ignoring context though.No, you are. And yes, she wrote him to be retarded for that scene and it's a bad thing.You can still enjoy the emotional impact of the scene and its fallout, but it's very poorly earned. Don't fool yourself into thinking otherwise.
The reason people want sectumsempra in is because the image of Malfoy lying there vulnerable, dropping her icy persona and asking Harry "Do you hate me this much?" creates a lot of yearning for a lot of people. The way I would do it is separate the whole thing into two distinct scenes. One is the bathroom confrontation, which is just words and angst. Then a second scene where Harry sees someone sneaking about, maybe sees the tattoo and suspects it's a Death Eater. They have a duel during which Malfoid realises it is Harry and stops, before Harry throws the sectumsempra at her. He then tries to heal her himself but in the end Snape has to do it since it's his spell.
>>223952243they don't have to say "foid"
The Sectumsempra Incident is necessary for their romance because women literally can't fall in love with men that can't kill them.see:>>223951369
>>223953138There is no point arguing with your philistine ass anymore, you have been told in detail why your point of view sucks, painstakingly people in this thread have explained to you why you are wrong.Can anyone imagine if this guy directed the thing, everybody gets along, no paranoia, no deterioration of group dynamics, thing defeated everyone lives happily ever after. His version of Romeo and Juliet, everyone just talk things out, nobody gets heated, nobody does anything, Romeo, Juliet don't die, everyone lives happily ever after.Please never write a book, people would die of boredom trying to read it.
>>223953284>yearning school girlplease tell me that's AI...
>>223952805Rowling made a children's story. Malfoid is a Myth that will endure much longer. All the greatest myths are stories made by the collective across a long period of time with basically no identity left of the original author.>>223952819Harry reflexively using a spell he has never used in a high-pressure situation is another thing that simply doesn't pass the bullshit detector. Professionals in combat actively train to keep their head cool and not resort to base instinct in panic, which is not a place where you do creative things for the first time.
>>223953098>Harry feels hurt and betrayed that Malfoid has joined the Death eaters (after they were maybe getting close)>Malfoid wants him to leave her alone because she doesn't want him getting himself or her parents killed trying to help her, and doesn't want to see his disgust and hatred for her>she duels him to get him to back off, not to hurt or kill him>it escalates>in the heat of the moment and under the influence of the HBP he goes for the sectumsempraI don't see the issue.
>>223953286malfoid is already in love with him at this point so it doesn't make a difference
>>223953284>Plus size
>>223953324>Professionals in combat actively train to keep their head coolDo you think Harry is like... SAS or something? He's a kid.
>>223953350>GET THAT MUDBLOOD BITCH OFF THE TRAIN
>>223953368so I wasn't crazy, the AI is literally using henry cavill as potter lmao
If people are so desperate to keep Sectumsempera they should weaken it to do less damage to Malfoid. Still a gruesome spell however.Otherwise just don't do it. As people have pointed out, in the original it's one boy following a boy he hates into the boy's bathroom and them casting spells at each other. There's already two reasons it doesn't work if you make Malfoy a girl and they actually love each other.People are so addicted to the imagery that they don't understand the lack of logic to the scene.
how is everyone coping with not having a malfoid gf tonight?pic related is literally me except the skin colour
Dobby deserves one fucking win damn it
>>223953368Dobbybros... we finally did it
>>223953380The people generating the pics are indians they love cavill
>>223953391It feels much better when you realise pretty much no one else has a Malfoid of either.
>>223953385>and they actually love each other.He follows her because he loves her and is concerned about her wellbeing. Amazing how people like you don't understand simple rewrites.
>>223953249>Invading the ministry and getting his godfather killed in book 5 was pretty retarded.Severely reductive summary of what actually happened.Harry basically had a binary choice: was the vision real or not?Once he had mistakenly trusted the vision, the main stupid thing he did was try to use Umbridge's fireplace to check on Sirius (which, itself, was actually NOT a stupid thing to do and was done at Hermione's urging). What he should have done was go to Snape or used his two-way mirror.So the question, when comparing to sectumsempra, is whether it's believable Harry would have made those mistakes. And the answer is pretty obviously yes. Harry didn't think of Snape because he tries to avoid thinking about Snape whenever possible, because Snape is most definitely not his friend. And who knows why he didn't think of the mirror. Maybe Rowling had forgotten he even had the mirror. That's kind of a major plothole tbqf.Every other decision from that point isn't really retarded. It's desperate because it's a desperate situation.None of that is remotely comparable using a random unknown spell in a duel.
>>223953426i wish it did, but it doesn't really. i still yearn
You guys are so dumb. My outline is superior to all the ideas itt.Now I just have to learn how to write.
Do you have any particular hairstyle you like on Malfoid?
>>223953505i like her best with simple straight hair like in the pic you posted
>>223953293>you have been told in detail why your point of view sucks, painstakingly people in this thread have explained to you why you are wrong.Yes, and I have responded to each one, thoroughly obliterating every invalid defense of the scene. Indeed those shitty lame arguments bother me even more than the scene itself. I even have given you an out, allowing you to just accept the scene as an unearned but powerful emotional moment with heavy irony between Snape and Potter, but you can't fucking do it. And now you have descended into pathetic crying.
>>223953526women are disgusting creatures
>>223953385If they have a duel, I would just chuck sectumsempra from it completely (it's still plot relevant since Harry tries to use it on Snape). Have them both throw around much less serious spells and then Harry unintentionally knocks Malfoid into a spike or something. She bawls her eyes out, he gets all guilty, Snape shows up. Although I still prefer doing it this way >>223953251 because having Harry and Malfoid recklessly hurling spells at each other is a hard sell.
>>223953468Based potential man
>>223953434It's honestly a pretty good twist since before, any visions Harry had from his scar were to his benefit. Voldemort figuring out how to twist that to his advantage is a good Voldemorty type of move.
>>223953432>it's ok to follow women into the bathroomAn actual tranny post
>>223953526handmaid's tale truly ruined women
>>223953391>how is everyone coping with not having a malfoid gf
>>223953505Fivehead with a hairband for the first two years, after that she learns what bangs are and becomes much cuter. She strikes me as the type who'd wear it up most of the time and carefully arrange it only for special occasions.
>>223953538You have responded to everyone with pure nonsense.It all boils down to this, you in your autistic head seem to have a mental block against the idea that a teenager in the heat of the moment in a very emotional state would do something without thinking, something stupid, something harmful.You cant seem to be able to understand this and how it makes perfect sense.
>>223953572No, seriously, how do I write?
>>223953505i like something like this
>>223953600My arguments are straightforward, logical, and based on principles of writing and character development.Your argument has boiled down to a plea that I accept a carelessly vague and open-ended possibility that "a teenager COULD somehow possibly in the heat of the moment do something without thinking" as a "reason" why the scene "makes perfect sense."That, my child, is pure nonsense.
>>223953505you can never go wrong with a ponytailbut I guess that's not something she would wear everydayyour pic is good as well
There was a clip where Harry gives Malfoid a stuffed ferret. Any chance anyone has it?
>>223953707>stuffed ferretkek all I thought about was the ending of the hockey Olympics with the Canadians getting emotional support plushies for losing to the US
>>223953526females were a mistake
>>223953649Unironically just do it a lot. Read through what you have written, decide what is shit about it, learn from it. You have to be good at being self-critical and introspective, lots of writers are miserable fucks because of this. It isn't one skill either; there's character development, pacing, atmosphere, dialogue, narrative progression. Different writers have different strengths. You just improve by looking at what you don't like about your writing and doing it again until it is better.
>>223953649You're doing it right now?!?!?!
Can anyone recommend some decent fanfics (not AI, preferably completed)?There are literally thousand of works under the tag "Female Draco Malfoy", but the most-liked ones are kinda trashy: like up to 80-90% copy-pasted text from Rowling (or worst, processed through an AI), with 10-20% poorly written filler (always in a different style if it's not an AI) ?
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>>223953789The one I like most so far, up through almost all of book 4;https://archiveofourown.org/works/94081816
>>223953778Writing is scary. I have a general outline of what I want the theme of my Malfoid story to be, and I have some scenes written out (in my mind) but others I have no idea of how to solve.>>223953785No, I mean... how do I write dialogues, and actions, and emotions, and describe the environment and stuff... I suppose I should just copy Rowlings style in this case.
>>223953819I love pantyhoses so much, bros
>>223953582yeah
>>223953829In that case I'd start with writing the scenes you have and seeing how it looks. Don't worry too much about how they'll connect, you're just getting a taste for it. Then write out more bits as you think of them. Eventually the idea for how to do the whole thing will become clear. Then it's just the tedious work of actually typing the words into your computer terminal.Think always of how you want the reader to feel.
>>223953819as soon as its finished, I will replace all the chapters in the originals with the rewritten ones and then read through the entire books again
>>223953707Imagine one of the most horrific moments of your life: a sadistic teacher suddenly transforms you into an small defenseless animal, spins you through the air, and slams your fragile little body against the ground nearly breaking your bones.Or even shoved into a fat classmate’s underwear in front of everyone. You can’t scream. You can’t even breath. You have no control over your own body. Only pain, humiliation, and an inability to fight back.Then your "crush" (or boyfriend) keeps reminding you of this like it's a fuking joke.
>>223953789The only completed one I've read is Waltz for One, and while it is really good if you like angst and yearning, it is just a self contained thing and not a complete retelling of the story.
>>223953391pic is me including the skin color(spiritually)
>>223953908if i was harry i would personally crucio moody for that shitand i WOULD mean it so it WOULD work
>>223953819>GuardbroAre you trying to bait me? That’s the shit I was talking about.>>223953909 Thanks, I’ll try it. judging by the first few paragraphs, it actually looks like it was written by a human.
>>223953819I can't take this guy's writing style seriously. Not after he chose to randomly insert a hardcore lesbian make out sequence.
>>223953908in the clip she rolls her eyes at him >very funny potterbut ends up cuddling with it in bed
There was an AI duel between Malfoid and Harry, they were spamming spells, randomly Malfoid shot spells into the ground, but she summoned snakes to fight. It was pretty cool but I can't find it anymore. Anyone know what I'm talking about?
>>223953819>>223953997>>223954019I read a good chunk of it and I wasn't a big fan of how he was developing the early parts of Malfoids story.I'll keep following because I want to see how he'll solve some of the pivotal moments.
>>223953871Poor Peter, but hey you miss all the shots you don't take
>>223953789to get a decent fanfic, you have to write it yourself
>>223954019What, no complaints about Chudley Chuddington? It wasn't THAT graphic and it ended up being plot relevant. Plus story relevant, with the conversation on the Yule Ball dance floor.I'm open to hearing about whichever ones people think are better though. I'm caught up on that one.
>>223953578It happens in year 1 with the troll and Hermione too. But you're not gonna talk about that. KYS
>>223954100That’s not how it works. Writing is a skill, just like drawing. Even if I have an interesting plot in my head, I still need the skill to craft it Just because I can string words together into sentences doesn’t make me a decent writer.
>>223954100I'm writing a fanfic about Bin Laden working with a group of dark wizards and the 9/11 attacks being a double attack on both muggles and wizards in america..of course people in the deep state know that wizards exist so they work with them to fight back.they learn that one of the UK death eater who escaped somehow gave the secret of the horcrux to that mysterious group and they turned it into a sort of hivemind/soul merging spell that make them very powerful and hard to kill.Potter and Malfoid are recruited by the magic CIA as consultants to find the death eater that they know.ton of fighting, all sort of monster in caves, entire villages being used for masse sacrifice etc... political intrigue with russian wizards helping the dark wizards.
>>223954267>inserting amerishart retardation into comfy British literature Gross
>>223954267ok this is epic
>>223954267>I'm writing a fanfic about Bin Laden working with a group of dark wizards and the 9/11 attacksand that's as far as I got before I lost my spaghetti laughing, holy fuck never change /tv/
>>223954267>a group of dark wizardsDo they know kabbalah magic by any chance?
First thread of the day was malfoid. Last thread thread of the night is malfoid. Goodnight, keep yearning.
>>223954300well I need some "good" wizards and soldiers to die fighting the dark wizards.the UK has like 10 wizards who can fight... it's not enough.>>223954399nah, their goal is to become a living Allah and reign over the world. so first they need to take down Iran and SA.at first the magic mossad helps them but it goes bad for them so they go cry for help to the magic cia.
>>223954267Fun fact, the Potter Bloodline actually has a line of wizards that live in America, including a famous Auror named Abraham Potter in the late 1600s
>>223954498>america>the good guyslol k
>>223954175It all feels like the author taking advantage of the trend to insert his very own yuri relationship fetish into the work. Making it heavily plot relevant for the pairing of Harry and Malfoid is just icing on the shit cake. Might as well be a writer for the hbo series.
>>223954536I did forget to mention that Rowling, or whoever was doing Pottermore, knows nothing about the timeline of American history so suspend your disbelief for a while while reading that side of the garbage extended universe.
>>223954267Can't wait for the sequel where they supply US backed militias in Libya with wands to overthrow Gaddafi because he wants to stop trading in Gringotts-minted Galleons.
>>223954185I'm gonna talk about this.Hermione was crying alone in a restroom, the only one who followed her in there was a disgusting vile troll. Do you catch that? A fuking predator going into a girls' restroom after a girl.Rowling wasn’t exactly subtle in her writing, because the point is to teach children what bad people are actually like.Who else cornered a girl alone in a girls' restroom? Tom Riddle.The main villain.But who was blamed for this? Who could enter the girls' restroom to do something bad to Myrtle in the eyes of society? An half-giant, the kind of beings that magic racist assumes are half-beasts driven by filthy instincts.
It's over
>>223954536that's nice.I'll include that when the fat american wizard who's recruiting/briefing Harry talks about the history of the magic cia.
>>223954636why am I laughing at this dumb thing
>>223954632>Don't say yes if you can't say no
>>223954538I'll grant that if and only if it keeps coming up. Otherwise I think he's been doing good.Also, it's been most of an hour, no one has suggested one they like better and the only other response to that post was A Waltz for One which isn't even really a response to the question. Nobody else wants to take a swing at a recommendation?
>>223954666Other than that the only one I checked was Pokeman'shttps://archiveofourown.org/works/93774621It... has its own charm LOL
>>223954654it's a great concept.Harry will become very good friends with some of the american soldiers and at the end it wil be sad because he will have to erase their memories.
>>223954267In the sequel, the conspiracy theorist Lovegood writes a book claiming that 9/11 was an inside job orchestrated by the magic government itself.
