how to avoid reddit writing in your game story?
do the opposite of what class of 09 the foot side did
Define reddit writing.Like making lots of pop culture references?
>>746482316If it reads like something that could get upvoted a lot on reddit, scrap it.
Emily mating press correction.
>>746482316those were the simpler times
>>746483379You mean when the evil women had the common courtesy to be hot?
>>746482769you know what it is.
>>746482316Don't go to reddit while you're writing it, I presume
>>746483459>evil womenchai tea
>>746482769I guess if it sounds like high schoolers in the 2000s it's reddit
>>746482316by plapping your momits the only way
>>746482316That's discord tranny writing not reddit writing.
Jecka sez
>>746487631*paizuri correction
>>746482316Just say nigger and no one will accuse it of being reddit no matter how reddit the rest of the writing is
>>746482316The best way to avoid shit writing is to not have hate in your heart. Being a petty little bitch will make you want to dunk on your enemies/ideological oppositions. This just comes off as immature and childish. Truly great writers know how to represent life as it is without grandiose exaggerations, self insert bullshit, and kitsch. Of course, no writer can avoid this entirely, they always draw from their own lived experience, but they can reflect upon and minimize the impact.
>>746482690Flipside was the opposite of Reddit writing. If Reddit wrote it, the game would have been shitty yurislop where Jecka le heckin fixes Nicole.
they should kiss
>>746482690But Reddit hated it. So that means more foot scenes.
>>746487983An actually based solution would be akin to how the Jeffrey dies ending plays out, only with more focus on the relationship with Nicole instead of the foot fetish shit. Basically where Jecka has to come to terms with the fact that her friendship with Nicole is built on a lie and that the closer they get the more controlling and abusive Nicole becomes, culminating in endings where one kills the other.
Why are American women like this?
>>746487681women don't get corrected from paizuri, only shotas do
>>746482316>>746483459>>746487681hugging jeckakissing jeckapatting jeckatelling jecka everything will be fine
>>746483059Emily unironically and literally can be fixed
>>746482316>>746482690I guess but this seems like a cautionary tale about going too far in the other direction.
>>746490160This is literally another example of macks' using hot women to validate his weird opinionated takes on society, men, other women etc. , everything makes way more sense when you realize the dialogue was written by an extremely insecure loser.
>>746491147That sounds like loser talk, smug oppai brats should be corrected.
>>746491357That's the spirit, anon.
>>746492325Shes 1 genuine smile and hug away from being fixed
>>746492363Just have to keep the voices away.
>>746491458Thats literally something that women think
>>746492398Just change her voices to yours
>>746492478And also get her to ease off the junk.
>>746492508Eat gummy bears with her instead
>>746482316The moment a slur pops up you're safe from any accusations
>>746491458No wonder considering his got his dick mutilated at infant age. Not surprised he'd be extremely insecure about it.
>>746492565Or show her funny internet videos.
>>746482316put the nigger word somewhere in it.
>there are anons itt that think you can fix organic mental disorders like what Emi haslol lmao
>>746482316unapologetic racism, race realism and tranny bashing.
>>746487681forcing jecka to watch infant circumcision videos!
>>746482316Be born as a japanese person.The rest of the world can't write anything worth shit anymore.
>>746487983>shitty yurislop where Jecka le heckin fixes Nicole.that's pretty much literally what happens, the only real difference to the hyperbole is the "fixing" is turning her into a jaded asshole like most westoids
These games are the definition of immaturity. I don’t think SB has lived a full life, you can tell
>>746490160Only Muslims and Jews do circumcision, what is she mad about? The guy not being a jew or a muslim?wtf?
>>746494797>Be born as a japanese person.Japanese writing is the worst in the world thanks to tranime. about half their population has terminal anime brainrot and no social awareness, thus no idea how to write humans interacting.they're so cringe they're like redditors on crack.
>>746495621>cries about jp writing>posts a trannylation, aka, westoid writinglolyoure agreeing with the idea westoids can't write worth a damn
>>746495738it's just as cringe in Japanese you stupid weeb faggot.because it's an autistic, senile japanese man trying to write in his cringey fanfic anime OC while lacking the necessary social skills and understanding of the scene from the original movie.
>>746496002>it's just as cringe in Japaneseah yes i totally trust the word of a westoid on this topic when it's blatantly obvious westoids have an extreme anti-japan agenda and hate boner towards japan, this totally changed my worldview on something westoids are well known about being straight up fucking liars about
>>746496002This is true. Fundamentally Sora is a Shonen protag shoved into stories he doesn't belong in. It's why despite Toy story 1-3 being good, the toy box world is awkward shoving Sora into because his unnatural blatant acknowledgement of concepts like love and friendship which TS1-3 had the sense to be subtle about.It's why when Sora says "My friends are my power", it comes off like a barney special, absolutely no nuance or subtlety.
>>746482316i want to get into this because crazy women like it where do i start
>>746497408by watching video essays about it because said foids are not playing it either
>>746497464:(
>>746491357>>746483059that just means the press never stops, sounds good
>>746498247Can't stop, won't stop.
>>746482316Don't be a redditor.
>>746490160Actual correct response to that though.
Dunno
best ship
>>746499551Ari is just kind of lame, she's a doormat where Nicole's concerned and annoying the rest of the time. Emily is just as obsessive with Nicole but at least she isn't a pushover.
>>746491458Pretty sure amerimutt women are just that
>>746494957Dude literally 80% us males are circumcised
