Visual Novel General #7397This general is for the discussion of English-translated Japanese visual novels.All posting of untranslated visual novels belongs on >>>/jp/E-celeb shitposting is not allowed.Kindly use spoiler tags appropriately when discussing plot spoilers to facilitate smooth discussion.>Having trouble with your VN? Try the following before you ask for tech support:1. Be in Japanese locale2. Read the Readme3. Check https://rentry.org/4chan-vn-help4. Copy error messages with CTRL+C and paste them with CTRL+V into DeepL5. Google it>FAQs, Recommendations, and Other Useful Things:https://chartanon.github.io/moechart/https://files.catbox.moe/j3dd0n.png (embed)https://github.com/marisukukise/japReader>Need a novel with a specific element?https://vndb.org/g>Download Links:https://rentry.org/4chan-vn-linksPrevious thread:>>550889869
thats a tough question
>>550929923The plan wonThe plan fucking won
>>550929861Rewrite is NOT the game you should be emulating if you're trying to prove that Key can still write a good full length VN. Rewrite is the game that ruined everything for Key. It's not just about the switch to all-ages, though that was a damn shame in its own right. Rewrite was also fucking ugly, none of the characters' motivations made any sense, none of the jokes landed, they had way too many writers who never talked to each other, and the plot took 40 hours to "get good" (in this case getting good means letting Romeo write). Rewrite was a fucking tragedy that took Key eight years to recover from.
>>550930539>none of the jokes landedThe comedy is the only good thing about it
>>550930583rewrite was not funny desu
>>550930583You're welcome to have your own opinion on that front, but I respectfully disagree.
Painfully formulaic routes, I guess the writer just took one and applied it to them all
>>550930539>they had way too many writers who never talked to each other,The main agenda was set by romeo and it's his fault for not communicating his vision properly with others. He just asked r07 to cook something quick without explaining any of the shit properly. It also didn't help that he prefers to not meet anyone in person.
Maeda-sensei, tasukete!
>>550930583eops have no idea what romeo humor even looks like
>>550930710let's be real, it's not like r07 would be able to write anything decent even if romeo personally guided him
>>550930785gaikoku slangu wa truth nuke desu
>>550930785dumb fucking negromasa.
>>550930785Yeah but Romeo is supposed to pull everyone together. R07 talks about how he didn't even receive documents related to world building elements. Key management lost trust in romeo after this because he's clearly not the leadership type.
2spooky.
Is everyone forgetting that Key released a pretty decent VN like two weeks ago (which I might be the only person that read), and Tsui No Stella (which was excellent) before that? They've had a great track record recently.
>>550931094>Tsui No Stella (which was excellent)It was mediocre for those type of stories
Which heroine would you like to do this to you?https://files.catbox.moe/ggbeqx.png
uhh.... Key without Jun Maeda sensei...... and Hinoue-san art........ is not Key @____@@
>>550931094this chud general hates emotional nakige stories for some reason. they act like they're too manly for key works.
>>550931094is that haruhi
>lure you in with ridiculous image>immediate smash cut to jump scare for fraction of a secondShit they actually got me with that one, I started.
>>550931094Those writers aren't working on Anemoi, though.
>>550931225There's one later in the game that actually really fucking spooked me. I thought I was unspookable.
>>550931206I had watched a few episodes of a Key anime adaptation and it was boring and the girls were all stupid.
No wonder this route is way longer than the others, we're actually giving every girl a ghost story and we haven't even hit April 8th yet. What the fuck is pacing?This isn't a criticism, I'm enjoying this. And if the ghost stories turn out to be foreshadowing future events, I'll eat my words.
>>550931206>uguu died>please cryRiveting ass storytelling
Wait, you're telling me nobody ever told Haruks about the time her mom accidentally bashed her head in while trying to murder her best friend? I guess it's understandable she wouldn't remember, but you'd think somebody would mention it at some point. Come to think of it, she'd probably have a massive scar on her head as a result.
>>550931553didn't actually read the vn award. now go read clannad.
The parallels between rewrite and ima are very interesting
The parallels between subahibi and ooe are very interesting
>>550931621I'd read clannad if kyou was the main heroine
>>550931621>bro get a tradwife>bro make babies>bro she's died but we can revive her with dragon ballslmao
>>550931621isn't that chud propaganda about le traditional family values?
>>550931553>[adjective] ass [noun]I'll wait for an intelligent White person to have something to say about it
What does /vn/ eat while watching a VN play with automode on their big screen TV?
i fucking hate you shitposters.
Jesus this horror segment is actually getting pretty spooky, this is a weird turn for the VN.
Anons want a tardwife, because mentally able girl wouldn't stand them.Merry Christmas
you eops act too uppity for those who will never get to play the peak of this medium that is oretsuba
>>550931715Oosaki did the raping, Takuji got raped. Interesting.
VNs based on Yasuke the officially historically recognized black samurai?
>>550931930chachamaru’s bush…
>>550931881I don't auto, I don't like big screen TV but I will make a burger now because I'm hungryyes I eat burgers and drink cola at this hour
>>550931965translate orestuba, ima, and albatross, onegai!!!
Russian heroine doko. I wanted sex with russian heroines....
>>550931881I only eat meat.
>>550931917You can literally tell the exact moment the shitposters woke up and went back to their usual shenanigans.
Ima took a big oretsuba in albatross
Someone else needs to blogpost something. I can't talk to Shigatsu Youka guy because I never read that one.
>>550932090favorite meat and how do you prepare it?
>>550931985Nonehttps://vndb.org/c?q=yasukeJust play that shit Ass Greed game
>>550932017no, eops don't deserve them. they require high iq and i don't want eops to pollute their discussion.
>>550932097>sunday morning in e*ropenoticing
>>550932131Why are you talking to yourself? Smh my head...
>>550932117stewed beef
>jopmong woke upGeg, keep shilling your non-lifechanging kusoge.
Russian heroine doko
>>550932189>all lowercasers are one personretard
>>550932112>implying he is here to discuss the VNLiterally only him and the other guy read it. He knows that 99% of this general is not clicking his spoilers or reading his posts. At least other JOPs have the decency to post random screenshots and say nothing.
>>550931957I also can't stand tards. Suffering...
>>550932236ignore him lowercaseGOD
>me talking to /vn/
JOPcord woke up
>>550932232why doesn't the mc ever ask these russian heroines about their opinion on stalin and communism
>>550932240I'm clicking his spoilers AND reading his posts though??
>>550932306We all 'dachis in here.
>>550932306Why don't you read a VN already translated so you can talk with your friends?
>>550931990
>wake up>eat squid or whatever this was again>critically consume every single one of moeanon's blogposts>jop some moji>go to bed
>>550932386>>550932240What is wrong with you retards? He's the only JOP who refuses to join those gay ass JOPcords because he's loyal to /vn/. The other JOPs just come here to shitpost. He's here to read VNs.
>tfw no erina wifewhy live
It's JOP o'clock
She's totally going to turn out to be real and plot-relevant way later on, isn't she? This whole ghost story sequence was to hide the one that actually mattered amongst several that didn't.>>550932112Just talk about a VN you've read, I'm sure I could talk about it because I might've read it too.
>>550932397Poor girl must feel awful standing next to such a superior specimen.
>>550932514i like how ririkoschizo/original ooefag is quite open about how he only opens /vn/ to take a shit
I PERMANENTLY LOCKED MYSELF OUT OF MORE CONVERSATIONS WITH MIKA AGAIN FUCK
>>550932631
>>550932738This is the power of jopge…
>>550932640as in he only opens it to shit on /vn/ with low quality posts, or only opens it on his phone when he's taking a shit
>>550932232Nine years ago, when the leak happened.
>heroine quite literally shouts buhi on climaxJesus fucking christ, I'm not even making this up, this fucking game is making me feel nothing but disgust towards the irish.Mc is a trooper
This was actually bugging me, but I just went Droga gives them superpowers I guess and dismissed it. But if she's bringing it up, maybe there were more accomplices and Natsumi's parents only did the original double kid murder? Or maybe I'm overthinking it>>550932774I will say, I like the VN, it's excellent, but the fact that it has conversations locked away in a sub-menu that are constantly updating and if you progress too far in the VN you can lock yourself out of them permanently is not my favorite aspect.
>>550932946>literally shouts buhi on climaxwhy?
>>550932946>doesn't make a soundpost
>>550932983sorrry, dont know how
>>550932981Don't you shout "buhiii!" when you cum?
>>550932946>this fucking game is making me feel nothing but disgust towards the irish.
>>550932954>I will say, I like the VN,You say that about every VN...
>>550932983Bro is tech illiterate
>>550932954Every time there's a missable convo you get a notification, when I was reading it every time I got new 旬 I would just go a catch up on the entire backlog. Blacked out ones are not missed, they just unlock once you have enough 好感度 with Mika-tan
>>550933087There's plenty of VNs I don't like.I've been complaining nonstop about Bobby's redesign. Am I still jerking off to the game? Absolutely. But I don't like his new design.
>>550933287>There's plenty of VNs I don't like.Name one that isn't nukige
Finally got to FSN UBW's H-scene. Okay, why it's so garbage? Instead of it being a climactic scene it kinda ruins both characters. They just randomly stumble around like drunk elephants, make all kinds of wrong choices, and didn't really enjoy themselves. Okay, some might make 'it was their "first time"!' excuse, but this necessitates doing thing "properly" a second time... Except there wasn't a second time.Yes, I heard FSN's H-scenes were "bad", but I expected just cheesy and awkward dialogue, not... this.
>>550933287but you still like it
>>550933451>why it's so garbage? nasu is a bad writer
>>550933487I thought Nasu wrote only Fate route, in other routes he was just a director/producer?
>>550933451>.. Except there wasn't a second time.read F/HA>>550933567He wrote the whole VN.
That's just a photo with a filter man. The dude took a train to tokyo, snapped a photo, and then got to write it off as a business expense.
Pencil skirts…
>>550933705AhemSOVL
>>550933804I should reread rwa soon
>>550933349Yuzuriha, despite the multiple years of delay, was horrifyingly unfinished and felt like they ran out of money/time and just released what they had. It would randomly cut to h-scenes and cut back, like they did the h-scenes early on in development but then had no idea where to put them. Absolute mess of a VN. And trying to tie it in to Ayakashibito at the end was tacky.It does have huge tits, though.
>>550933889>YuzurihaThey've made a Flowers spin-off?!
It is astonishing how much effort the author put into this horror sequence, it has a crazy amount of unique backgrounds and character art that isn't used anywhere else in the game. Guess you can do that with the soulful photofilter bgs.
>>550934051kek
Trap Xmas in a few days!
And this is the last heroine. Took them long enough to introduce her. She is the oppaimouto of the oppai miko earlier, and her personality is being chuunibyou as fuck. She spends her free time reciting Dies Irae in a dark room with one candle lit.
>>550933889desu it's literally the only VN I see you shit on from time and time
>>550934227Shame about the balloons.
VNs where I can have sex with characters of dubious age?
>>550929923Why take down fan translation if you're never gonna touch the game?
>>550934271No it isn't, there's actually quite a few VNs I think are bad, several of which are very popular, including one I loathe so much that several years ago I promised myself I'd just stop talking about it online because I was spending far too much time shitting on it when I could be reading VNs instead. But in the past half-decade or so I've just gotten pretty good at only reading VNs I think I'll like, and I'm usually correct. Yuzuriha is one that sticks out because I'm astonished the Ayakashibito devs making a chuunige with huge tits could fuck up that bad.
>>550934360NN LOVES taking down fan-translations, even if they have no intention of doing the game themselves. They took down the houkago cinderella translation despite explicitly stating they'll never touch the game. The company just actively hates fan-translators.
>>550934384I mean the Ayakashibito writer wasn't involved and there was a big list of like 10 writers instead so
>>550934360I think the excuse was the shutdown order comes from Yuzusoft themselves.Either way the best way to TL nowadays is to shut the fuck up until it's done.
>>550911514My wife's game!
>>550934480wait a second one of the yuzuriha writers is working on anemoi now lol
>>550934384>including one I loathe so much that several years ago I promised myself I'd just stop talking about it online because I was spending far too much time shitting on it when I could be reading VNs instead.doki doki? I saw you defending umineko and steins gate one day so It's not that
>>550934281It really is. The best character design is the one where they don't staple cartoonish tits on. Don't get me wrong, I appreciate some nice oppais, but the rest of the body has to match. This artist doesn't have the skills like Koku to draw meaty girls.
>>550930539Rewrite is great from the start though, shitposter.
>>550934589...from the start of Akane's route
>>550934568> I saw you defending umineko and steins gate one day so It's not thatI don't remember that and I think that was probably someone else.
Finished Episode 2 (Downfall) of Mamiya last night. That ended on a truly great twist that I did not see coming. It was initially totally baffling. But the game then explains it in a very unique way using its credits sequence. Even after that it took me a few minutes to put it all together, e.g. what exactly pic related was referring to. But once I gave it some thought everything clicked and a lot of things made sense.There had been several things bugging me about this particular character, for most of the game really, but I wasn't able to come to any solid conclusion. But after seeing the twist I was able to remember at least one substantial clue from earlier in the game; you'd have to be reading very attentively in order to recognize the inconsistency, though. Anyway, this is a game that rewards you for reading carefully and paying attention, which I appreciate.Going on to Episode 3, a few questions remain (I'll give my theories)1. Who/what is Mamiya?I think that Mamiya is the Spectator imprisoned in the Library, and the story Natsume is interacting with is the story that the Spectator decided to interfere with.2. How did Natsume die?No clue. But I'll let this slide into my theory for the next question.3. Who did Samejima target after he became MAMIYA?Since he didn't target Suou it had to be someone else. My guess is that it was actually Natsume. Natsume knew Suou as a child so that would give him a possible connection to Samejima, and could also explain why Natsume died. We know Natsume didn't have a particularly normal life, everything points to him being rather lonely, so I think that would create an opening. But he'd remember, right? Not necessarily, because Natsume's memories aren't complete, having lost some when he passed the River of Oblivion (for example he doesn't remember how he died).Anyway, I'm very excited for Episode 3 (Doomsday Dreams).
>>550934623Keep your shitposts contained to the cord, brownoid.
>>550934717yeah maybe I'm wrongbut say the name of the VN, I'm curious now
They keep mentioning the big sakura tree that appeared out of nowhere 60 years ago, and how there's an identical one in Arata village. I still have absolutely no idea how the sakura trees - or the sound that heralds the end of the world - has anything to do with what is otherwise a fairly contained murder mystery. Like, genuinely not even a clue of how these could possibly be related. Considering we already have a super drug, I guess it'll have to be some kind of magic? I can't think of anything else.
>>550934765meant for >>550934589
>>550934384>several of which are very popularMy impression is that you dicksuck popular ones a lot. I think you liked subahibi, sakuuta, oretsuba, muramasa and all the other popular JOPge. Are you talking about umineko?
>>550934765Was the irony of complaining about shitposting while typing like an underage tard intentional? Not everyone likes your favorite game, get over it.
>>550934765Just filter the shartyteens.
>>550934765>>550931870Why are keytards so fucking racist? I swear keyshit has the chuddiest fanbase.
moeanon please don't blueball us and tell what VN is
https://cunnyx.com/dr_crack96/status/2002262340402594172?s=46>>550935059This is just like Muramasa.
>>550935178It's probably fat morgan and umineko
>>550935178read the filename
>>550935279kek
We need girls kissing girls in moege.
>>550935445girls(male)
Admittedly this is a pretty cool way to make an entrance.
>>550935538I can't take those balloons seriously, holy shit
>>550935535No. Girls kissing girls while the male MC jacks off and cums on their faces. They then get disgusted and glare at the MC like they're about to kill him.
>>550935178e-celeb shitposting is not allowed.Retards like you are the reason why we're stuck with posters like ABdul or makinasis.