Visual Novel General #7627This general is for the discussion of English-translated Japanese visual novels.All posting of untranslated visual novels belongs on >>>/jp/E-celeb shitposting is not allowed.Kindly use spoiler tags appropriately when discussing plot spoilers to facilitate smooth discussion.>Having trouble with your VN? Try the following before you ask for tech support:1. Be in Japanese locale2. Read the Readme3. Check https://rentry.org/4chan-vn-help4. Copy error messages with CTRL+C and paste them with CTRL+V into DeepL5. Google it>FAQs, Recommendations, and Other Useful Things:https://chartanon.github.io/moechart/https://files.catbox.moe/j3dd0n.pnghttps://github.com/marisukukise/japReader>Need a novel with a specific element?https://vndb.org/g>Download Links:https://rentry.org/4chan-vn-linksPrevious thread: >>568357432
Good night, /vn/
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>>568421317good night sir
>>568421137Right off the bat:1) A good number of them don't really think a student x teacher relationship is wrong or otherwise just don't care to comment on it. 2) Most of them don't find him gross or creepy, people just like to post the screenshots of the girls who do. Two of the three first main heroines you meet are trying to jump his bones 24/7. In-universe the MC is considered fairly handsome with enchanting eyes. 3) Even to this day 3 million words in, he has not had sex with like half the class. (This is apparent from the menu but I'll spoiler tag it anyway).So even at a base level what you imagine to be repetitious is not the case. But regardless, trying to guess what an entire game is like based on a few people posting screenshots, WHILE ignoring all the screenshots which don't suit the narrative in your head, are hardly going to give you the right idea of what it's like.
>>568421487yeah its really only maya and yumi that call him gross/creepy
>>568421123The rise of EVNs
>>568421487Maybe you should try a different shilling strategy than spamming endless screenshots of the girls calling him creepy and having sex with him, if that's the impression you're giving people
>>568421639it will only continue if this fanza bs spreads and japan doesnt get their shit together
>>568421659NTA but at this point that's unnecessary, there are already several anons reading it and it keeps being mentioned in every thread by anons like you
>>568421659I've posted basically close to no screenshots. But I observed this same kind of pattern happen elsewhere. It doesn't really matter if people post a huge range of screenshots covering content of all sorts of types (and they have been). People have an image in their head of the work being such-and-such way, they interpret all screenshots they see in this lens, remember the ones that match the pattern, forget/ignore the ones that don't, and ultimately conclude what they imagined was true. It's simple confirmation bias. I mean, just as an example, someone was posting about Molly talking about World of Warcraft. That is neither a screenshot of a girl calling him creepy or having sex with him. But even if someone posts 100 of those screenshots, it just takes a few of girls calling him creepy, then someone who wants to support that narrative will ignore all 100 of those and focus on the creepy ones.Generically speaking, it is a sexually charged game so obviously there will be a lot of innuendo and sexual banter in the game. But that's pretty much just a human thing and barely a notable or unique aspect of the game. Nor is it actually a huge amount, people just remember those more.
>>568421659It worked on 80% of anons in this thread, it's okay if it didn't work on 20% like you
I've never seen a schizophrenic samefag this hard to shill his EVN. He can't possibly think anyone will fall for it, can he?
>>568406957Shion has perfect boobs. And in any other moege she'd be the stacked heroine. It's the other 'kano girls who have abnormally big titties.
>>568422293Pro schizophrenic running 3 visibly different versions of the game and maintaining continuity on each playthrough alongside different filename conventions for screenshots... What a pro!
>>568421123disgusting
>>568422351yeah that anon got it wrongthis is not a single man effort, it's a whole cord raid.
>>568422351>3 people suddenly picking up evn trash>not a raidpick one
>>568421896ironically flood was one of the best "shills"
>>568422437>>568422478It's such a deep, invested cord raid that they decided to eschew a discord entirely. Instead, they organize and meet entirely on the underground forum known as 4chan. They secretly decided as regulars of /vn/ to post a visual novel on the visual novel general and save time by simply talking here. No chance of getting caught in discord screencaps if they all organically exploit their status as thread regulars to blend in. Damn, it's fucking genius.
Catbox check
>>568422596Ridiculously retarded damage control
>they're not raiding us because they're raiding usbravo, I visually novelized that one>>568421487screenshots and >>568421948 prove to the contrary, that the game has no value besides repetitive sexual innuendo
>>568422832Admittedly, it would be funny if it was an actual discord raid, because then it would mean the bulk of on-topic visual novel posts in this entire thread are coming from outsiders while all the actual thread regulars post untranslated games and rant about Mumbai.
>>568421123[comfort cute hags]
This reminds me that Misha would definitely be a LiL heroine
LiL blogposters have the same vibe as 1788 troon
>>568423347HFK
>>568422921You do know that's actually true right? Where do you think you are?
>>568423389Mumbai general, apparently
>3 million words>only 658,000 of them matter
I don't know how I did it but my twitter recommended page is now filled with nips blogging about Yuzuge and smoking ramblings
weird how all the LiL blogposting stopped at the same time huh
>>568423619What is the connection between those two things?
>>568423708Yet I'm awake. How could this be?
>>568423708I'm reading silently, but I can blogpost if you want...?
Why is no one blogposting Manosaba now that a translation is out?
>>568423708They got their OP and are satisfied for the day.Only a matter of time until we start ignoring LiL threads like the spam they are.
>>568423959I'm about to continue
>>568423198Rikka fucks off in every route for a certain reason. Not really a spoiler cause it will happen literally everywhere
>>568423959why would anyone read it using an amateurish fanTL filled with random memes and injokes when an official TL has been announced
>>568424240Because people are stupid and do stupid things
Posting untranslated vn screenshots seems more off topic and spam to me, but whatever, it's been a long time since anyone here cared about anything
>>568423960I wonder if small-minded people just enjoy fighting wars. They get thrills out of an imagined other and valiantly attempting to vanquish them. The reason people are so mad and vocal about LiL is because it is a 'worthy adversary' for this kind of fighting. It's an EVN, 3D, has controversial subject matter... Plenty of elements make it a fun foe to fight and attack. That's why it inspires so many people to write long bitchy essays about how annoyed they are about it. Meanwhile, Mumbai posting is just a dull evil. There's nothing fun about attacking fans of blacked porn, charisma-lacking namefags, offtopic posting... Maybe you will spare a few words or two shaking your head at them in a post, but it'd be no fun to devote more energy than that.It's really grim how animalistic people are at the end of the day. They care not to make the world better even when they claim to care about thread quality or what have you, they care for whichever drums of war are the most fun to beat as they charge forward no different from our cavemen ancestors battling against other tribes. Humanity will never advance.
>>568424284I care about you, anon
>>568423734You tell me dude
>>568424307No one likes your shill lol, I'm animalistic when I see your mom>dvll
>EOP reading a WEG tries to troll a JOP but instead just annoys other EOPsSo JOPs won again by doing nothing? How do they keep getting away with it?
>>568424551The angriest ones aren't exactly EOPs
>>568424551>JOPs wonJOPs wasted years to learn a language for a medium they're not that interested in in first place. JOPs lost by default.
>>568424776Steam doing it again...
>>568424823I'm having the time of my life playing HRPGs and RPG Maker kino constantly thank you very much.
>>568424776My lesson in moege...
>>568424683oh right these used to be the "jop hours"
Since off topic posts are allowed can I blogpost Lego Batman here?
>>568425204[Go ahead].
>>568425204Hell yeah
>>568425204Sure
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lzkR7vMoq3M
>>568425204Off topic posts aren't allowed here.
>>568425725https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=plSZ65TlIdk
>>568424776owari da
>>568421123
>>568421123>This general is for the discussion of English-translated Japanese visual novels.Should this be rewritten now?
>>568426774Dunno, but I'd say we should put this one in>Be nice to your fellow prisoners.
'ppai
>>568426183ema gets all the good fanart
Comfy.
haven't been here in a good 6months+. any good 'ge recently? was anemoi any good?
>>568427737Good, but not THAT good apparently.
>>568427682Ill be comfy if I had a wife like Orie
>everyone's asleep
>>568427737
>>568421123That shit looks so fucking bad. Can we go back to ironic redman shitposting instead of whatever this is?
>>568423959The "translation" is bussin fr ong.
>>568428805
>>568428890I prefer OPs like >>568313458 instead
>>568424015We will be reading.
>>568421123Lord Byron never gives up
>>568423959We are waiting for Mr. Israel's translation
>>568424776Qureate remains the only company who can pull offf simulreleases.
We all playing LiL here. Flood malding.
I love Karen
The simulrelease...
>>568432389jops won again
The writing in arc 1 was kinda flat, and I don't know if it was intended or if the translator just sucks, but the shift in tone when arc 2 starts is quite pleasant. Perhaps I was too hasty
EOPs only get to fuck moege heroines after the JOPs deflowered them.
When is someone going to announce the best Hooksoft title
>>568433192Pink foreheads...
>pink posted>thread suddenly gets betteri'm nooticing
>>568434112Uwaa...
>>568427737New KokuKINO https://vndb.org/v57252
>>568434134We love zoomette heroines (Katan and Coco) here.
Talent
>>568434778Yes. Zoomettes are very cute
>>568424776JOPs won.
>I've been shilled into picking up an EVNIts so over bros...
>>568435447Are you into grooming young girls?
What a dumb bitch
Mr Beast would read LiL.
>>568435447Nigga listen.https://dl.betterrepack.com/public/#list-koikatsuHere.And pick a real vn.
Kara no Shoujo 3 is half price on steam so i bought it. I played the first 2 like 5 years ago so I got chatgpt to summarize the plot for me. It did a pretty decent job I think, considering I googled a summary and couldn't find anything. I don't know where it pulled the summary from? Japanese translated to english? Did Chatgpt read Kara no Shoujo? Or did it just pull everything out it's ass and I'm none the wiser because it's been so long since I played the first two...
Coco came to a smart conclusion. That was a quite morbid reason to pop the balloon.
>>568435763So is the fantl okay so far or do u wanna puke?
>>568436264Any ukrainian vn
>>568436189For now it seems good, but I think some of Coco's dialogue could've been handled better though
>>568436264Yup that's a LiL bro
>>568436264ZATO
>>568421123>lessons in love suddenly mentionedAfter all these years huhToo bad it ended with chapter 3 and everything else is not canon. Read it from 2022 to 2024, it would’ve deserved its own thread but it’s way too niche even for something so “popular” on certain platforms. Also the author is a cunt and is probably losing money as it’s not as popular as it used to be, hence the shilling, I have not even seen it mentioned on 4chan once in the past 6 years lmao and NOW someone is trying to shill it after the “popularity” started to fade?
If my daughter became a dyke I wouldn't look at her either
>>568436504it's because the cartel read it and all gave it 9+ ratings
She's tired of playing Danganronpa and just wants to have sex with the other girls in the pretty prison estate
>>568434112True but not enough for this Hellscape of a general.
>>568436906IS THAT PRISONER 65AIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
>>568436572> the cartel Whoever that isAnyway, chapter 1 is a slog, chapter 2 and 3 are good, if you can bear with the narcissistic personality disorder of the author seeping through his flowery literature major language, and everything after that is… an artistic misdirection or simply his retarded personality making it unable for him to end it while he’s ahead. Now he’s left meandering on his slog of a story too afraid to finish it because it would cut his monetary supply of like 10k a month from subscriptions. Sorry for dropping “deep lore” I haven’t posted in a vn thread in years. Ima leave now and leave you guys to it. If
The 1st chapter ends with Nanoka shooting the owl after one of the girls got executed. It was a pretty fun chapter and the trial process was fun as well, I wonder when will Hiro appear again though. I also wonder if there's romance in the vn.
>>568437195>hasn't read it in years>"everything after that"
>>568431321Key released a game in English before it was released in Japanese.
>>568437350Yes. I’ve read 5 updates after chapter 3 ended. And I’ve spoiled myself a bit on the general happenings accidentally. And it’s uh, you know. Shit.
>>568437195>gachafag
>>568437469the 2025 content is the best part of the game by far
>>568436906PRISONER 65??? THESE HELLISH NUMBERS KEEP HAUNTING ME!!!
>>568437452Had to check to refresh my memory on the timeframe, but they released Harmonia in English 3 months before the Japanese release.https://vndb.org/v16510
>>568437195>gachaGOD
>>568437574It was ass so maybe they were ashamed of it or something
>>568437258Coco is my spirit animal
>>568437452Key released the new Planetarian in french, spanish, italian, japanese... before english lmao
>>568437615It was okay. Kind of like an inverted rehash of Planetarian.
>someone dislikes something 3 carteltrannies liked>defence force comes instantlyWhy it started only now? Years ago anons were shitting on Sakuuta or said that Music+us is a slog and at best there were couple repiles calling them retards. Now there is active effort to shut every opinion that defies cartel hivemind. What exactly changed in last 6 years?
>>568437802Yeah well that was the problem it was just Planetarian but worse. I heard Stella of the End was similar too.
Nanoka definitely has the coolest ability for now>>568437663She's very cute, I like her design and colors a lot. Her eyes look funny at times
>>568437942wait so is it human translated or AI slop?
>IS THAT PRISONER 24601?
>>568437834How many visual novels have you read this year?
>>568437860Well I don't disagree with you. I never read Stella because I figured it would be more of the same thing. It's written by Tanaka Romeo, though, so maybe I should try it at some point. I'd honestly forgotten it existed.
Sorry for wanting to rape you, Miria.>>568438029It's human translated
>>568437834They're praising an EVN for once so people can actually read it and form their own opinions and not have to worry about any of the discourse that comes with translation.
>>568438109Hmm, might give it a try then. Though I'm still hesitating since some people said it was a meme translation
LOL what happened to Miria is pretty funny.She was forced to swap bodies with the man who wanted to rape her, and now that man lives inside her?
>>568438040Nanoka is not the only one who got dragged into the UmiMasa wars.
>>568438235It's not a meme translation, although I don't know what lines got changed and how important were the changes
>>568433017The translation is both shit at times embellishing at times flattening, and the writing itself was flat
Would be funny if Witch Coco kept her zoomerspeak.
They're very cute, especially considering Miria's circumstances.
How is LiL's translation
>>568439263It's an EVN so, uhhh.......
>>568439263Perfect translation of English into English, honestly. Everything from the original is conveyed 100% verbatim.
Still not reading it, just like uminegro
>>568439334maybe anon is a ROP asking about the russian tl. i've heard it's pretty good
I assume Margo was a hostess
Where's the manosaba translation?
>>568439432
>>568439334I mean English to Japanese. I'm a JOP.
Tarot is fun, I wonder where the next bad end will lead me. Margo is quite charming.>>568439541Here >>568355913
>>568439725thanks putting this one right next to the cuckchad patch in my folder
It was really surprising when I found out that the russian weeb community is quite large
I'll give you my body it's ok
I fail to see what any of this has to do with the most important thread topic (dekai oppai.)
>>568435447Enjoy Be sure to grab the progress mod if you get stuck, want to be warned of missable scenes, or just want to speed progress along https://f95zone.to/threads/lessons-in-love-progress-and-guide-mod-v0-57-0-cckerberos.106973/
where's the negromasa translation?i want to check something.
>>568440313Those are some big cannons
This bad end wasn't too interesting but Margo is nice..
>abdul is also reading lil now
>>568440427How unexpected @__@
We must return to core principles.Oppai.Dekai.
>>568438652Every single Coco line is a memelation.The line immediately after >>568437942>...After we were brought here, I spent every waking moment hunting for the mastermind. Then my magic kicked in, and I saw it. Someone in this room has been playing pretend this whole time.>; ……捕まってから、私はずっとその黒幕が誰かを探していた。<br>そこで魔法が発動して、私は視たの。<br>ぬけぬけと少女のフリをしている人物がいるのを。entirely omits the fact OG says 'pretending to be a girl' folding it into 'playing pretend'>>568438109is also completely wrong in tone>; ――おじさんに、その体をくれないか。>Kid, let this old man have that body of yours.making it sound like some bad actor demanding it when in the og its a gentle question>>568439461>smallis completely made up>>568436547>; レイアは舞台の主役でい続けなければいけなかった。<br>そうしなければ、意味がないと思った。>stay the leadStar of the stage, not just the lead in a play.>; それでも、どんな魔法を使っても<br>――母は、レイアを見なかった。>how much magic she burned throughwhat magic she used, different connotation of her trying everything, not just her magic.>>568440376preceding line directly mentions sadism>; 悲しみにくれるエマとシェリーの姿を目に、<br>ひっそりと<ruby="しぎゃく">嗜虐</ruby>的に微笑む少女がいた。>While grief swallowed Ema and Sherry whole, one girl watched from the edges with a quiet, predatory curl at the corner of her lips.turned into predatory>; (……やっぱりいいわね。<br> 可愛い子たちが破滅していく様って……)And the line on your image is mostly made up garbling both the first and second sentences for no reasontl;dr most of the lines are wrong to varying levels
>>568440427>abdul is a subhuman who'd pretend to be retarded and do everything to derail the threadImagine my shock
Damn, Aisir is really angry because he was banned
>>568440725The guy doing this just looked at lines and came up with what's approximately being said, typed it out and called it a day with no regard for what the text actually is. Per self admission he thinks his job is to make the plain boring jp script flowery. Because god forbid the author having any say in what he writes, no, japanese cannot be flowery and the localization gang has ot save it.
>>568440853Why was he banned?
Is this the first time someone releases a fantl right before the official one's out? It's certainly the first one it's so shit, but I can't remember if this didn't happen to baldr or something
>>568440725should have learned japanese, LOL
>>568441169He's being treated like a plague by a bunch of cords now
>>568440725Well thank you for clarifying some things and going into that much detail.I'll still keep reading this translation even if it wasn't done properly. I'm really enjoying the story and I don't want to stop reading it. When the official one comes out I'll gradually skim it to see how different it is.Coco's lines are funny even though they're botched.
>>568441169Called the translation bad, got into an argument with a bunch of zoomers dogpiling him, the translator showed up super mad, some people took sir's side, the channel was locked and he got banned after a few hours of silence
Translators and their buttbuddies dislike it when you call their shit translation work bad, apparently it's called stirring drama and being a troll nowadays
>>568441791The official one will probably take just as many liberties as this guy has. Maybe with less zoomer Coco. Although, you never know.So if you're not going to learn Japanese, you're getting a distorted version of the story one way or another.>>568441304I bet it's happened before. Translators are pretty autistic and stupid.
Manosaba really reminds me of The Promised Neverland. I like that about it a lot.>>568442476>So if you're not going to learn Japanese, you're getting a distorted version of the story one way or another.True, I can't deny that.
>>568435074Her route lacks depth desudesu. I have no problems rereading Misaki's but I just can't do hers
>>568422340Shame that didn't stop her from losing.
>>568442260I think the important thing is knowing how to say things, if you behave like a 12 yo everywhere you go, that will obviously have consequences.
>>568442627Wrong
>>568416557>First band was Gothic Lolita>Second band is Dark Lolitahonestly i thought we'd get more variety
>>568421123Last time i talked about that vn i was called names you don't deserve to read it now
>>568442837Schizo.
>>568442690We will demand a recount.
>>568416557Arisa and Ema are insanely hot>>568442736Margot, Reia, and Hiro are insanely hotFucking waste of an allagesge
>>568442917It's so sad that it's all ages
>>568435447Enjoy the aural aesthetics of the writing
Too cute
>>568441304I dunno about VNs, but most fanTL groups doing a manga will drop it out of courtesy if an official TL comes out. Those are usually groups though, and not just one guy doing it as a hobby.It's also different because they can just stop when the official comes out, and not have all their important and valuable time/work wasted
>>568442665Toning down critique and wrapping everything up isn't going to get the point across either though, since what are you going to do - list every single mistranslation? Tone it down to the point where they barely register it as complaint? If you have a lengthy discussion on it you'll be accused of the same thing by the buttbuddy whiteknights anyway. There's no winning move there
>>568443306Thinking of any argument as something to be won is precisely the perspective of someone who needs to mature
>>568443263Most fanTLs do it too, unless they have a finished product on release or it's some patch leak drama. Very common courtesy and sense
>>568443263Groups do it because they can be DMCA'd. Can't do anything to one random guy on Discord. Well, I guess you could subpoena Discord, but if he lives in Bolivia you'll never get to sue him
What a sad bad end.The hollow just wanted to get into Miria's body to escape its fate.
>>568443474Mature and do what, stop talking to people? It's them who are immature. And it's not even about winning it, I don't care about convincing people - some retard or another always asks me to elaborate or w/e and people just dogpile because 'how dare you say something was wrong'. Every single time someone will keep whining about how the valid complaint is exaggeration or that it's in bad faith or whatever and keep escalating it. Muh mob mentality.
>>568443263Why not take down all the MTL patches of manosaba then as a courtesy
>>568444107Maybe it shouldn't have killed her then, fucking dumbass
>>568443554The guy does official work for shiravune, should get him fired for committing the biggest TL work no-no
>>568444174I thought the hollow managed to swap bodies to commit suicide that way?
>>568444174It can't helped (haha...)
>>568444134Grow up and have productive discussions where you can agree on areas for improvement, instead of adopting a hostile stance and automatically becoming defensive when others disagree with you. If you're not trying to convince people, I don't understand why you spend so much time doing that everywhere.
I'll continue reading later. I'm taking a liking to Margo.
>>568444532>I'm taking a liking to Margo.OH NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO HAHA NO ONE TELL HIM NO ONE TELL HIM
>>568439613Doesn't exist. It's a psyop to have "JOPs" read 300+ hours of English. The psychology of the average "JOP" is like described in that Byuu kiwifarms post, they just do what their ingroup does.
>>568442736We want the Bang Dream audience
>>568444435Maybe they should grow up and stop adopting a hostile stance whenever an issue is pointed out so I don't have to hide my opinion on things instead, how about that?>whyI see someone submit a shit translation, I go mention it to the parties involved and the people who will be reading it, simple as. Informing people is good. Calling shit out is good.Unless you like Coco speaking like she belongs in oretsuba and leftoid garbage all over the translation like in yunyun. It ain't a hard concept.People being retarded ain't my problem.
>>568445010Dude, you're 7 years older than me, so it's actually kind of funny that I have to tell you this. I really recommend you be a little more self critical and realize that maybe the problem isn't always other people.
>>568444673O_o
I would simply translate it properly and not add in any le epic heckin' garbage.
AIsir won."Translator" with a fragile ego lost.
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>>568446497That's how it always should be, but a lot of people just can not help themselves when it comes to "opportunities". They feel the need to insert themselves or do degrade something in any way.
>Deleted
>>568446903no-no words bad.>>568445235and just fyi im perfectly aware, you don't have to 'tell me', it's a conscious choice. I just chill on alts if I need to lurk somewhere.
Translators are failed writers so they feel the need to insert their own shit into their translations
George Henry Shaft is the only good translator
>i'm not trying to convince anyone
>so mad he had to actually reply twice
>>568447296Many (read: all me) can understand this message.
>>568446274I'm more amused that the person that did that one horrible MTL "translation" and asked for donations at the end and decided to go shit on a human-made PATCH.Like what you did isn't even a proper patch since you need to use Luma, and there are missing lines, even more untranslated portions about important context and evidence, no QC, not even a single proper editing pass for polish...If you want to ask for money, fine, but the bare minimum is an actual standalone patch that you can apply to the game itself for convenience. Absolutely shameless. At least the human translation solved all the issues that yours couldn't. Asking someone to alt-tab breaks immersion and shouldn't be a thing. It ruins the fresh experience of a reader. The same goes for UI elements being improperly rendered, etc. What about reading long chunks and seeing if it flows naturally? What about ruminating about word choice and tone? What about consistency across trials? It didn't even bother with Coco's "atishi" or even Noa's third person speech. From the rentry, I quote: "MTL couldn't keep track of speaker names due to the unity engine outputs so I'd have to manually fix all the lines - ain't worth it."In other words, you couldn't give two fucks about doing a good enough job even knowing that a problem exists.
>>568447296I shall defend my opinion with a hundred pages, don't care if you agree with it though, just let me think things
>>568421123kino
>>568447441If you needed help to repay the costs of this absolute hack job, you shouldn't have bothered with making it in the first place, especially since we already know an official translation is on the way. It would be understandable if we already had the official TL and it somehow was garbage, but this isn't even the case.Back in the day people did translations out of passion and love for the work, but the person that dumped this into Big AI couldn't even bother to QC their own shit properly with a single full proper pass after. From the rentry, I directly quote: "It's missing a lengthy editing pass to localize it more and smooth it out. Ain't doing that though..."This shows a lack of meticulousness, a lack of attention to detail, and a lack of love and respect for the original writers.Fucking hell, there isn't even a proper executable file. The poor soul that engages with this still needs to use LunaTranslator to hook it.And at the end of all that you have the gall, the gumption, the absolute lack of shame and humility, to ask for donations for GPU costs? For something outsourced to a machine, for something that you couldn't even bother to package neatly with a ribbon on top?On top of that, you're over here getting defensive and saying that "it's not the end of the world" instead of "yeah, I tried my best, this is what I can do"? Did you even attempt to try and do things like add subtitles to the voice-only parts or edit the game files? Or did you just want a quick surge of dopamine and recognition from the fleeting illusion of a job well done?The person that made this is a clown. You are a clown for attempting to attack someone else's translation. And if you are the one that made it like I suspect, you're a jester twice over.
>Nabokov felt a kind of curatorial protectiveness of great works in their original languages. The mortal sin of the translator, he wrote, was to sacrifice what he called “absolute accuracy ” for the sake of readability. “A schoolboy’s boner is less of a mockery in regard to the ancient masterpiece than its commercial interpretation or poeticization,” he wrote. “The clumsiest literal translation is a thousand times more useful than the prettiest paraphrase.”Was he right?
>>568447816No
The duality of translatability...
>>568440359For you.
>>568448028
>>568447979Soon...
>>568447816>lolicon with militant views on translationsHe would fit right in here
>>568447441>>568447795>bunch of lies>can't even get the release date right>doesn't know to what extent it was editedStill mad I c. It doesn't matter how hypothetically bad the TL I offered was, it still doesn't excuse you making that turd bubby. I wish I could run GPT on my GPU though>whining about atishi>doesnt convey it eitherkek>>568447816He's close
>>568448187So much this
What happens if the character speaks japanglish wwww
>>568437195If what...? IF WHAT!?
>>568448338>loliconyou didn't read it
>>568448604The Cartel(tm) got him, R.I.P.
you can accept that there can ve more retards in the worldcomplaining about turd from the cord doesnt make you any less retarded for shitting out an mtl "patch" and begging for money
>>568448373I stand my point. Translating a work that's gonna get an official translation isn't beneficial to the company and hurts the sales if the translation is low quality. Only attention-whores do that. I don't like the MTLs, I don't agree with many translation choices in the tl, and I think you should all take it down out of respect for Acacia. But one of you has a GPT-generated JSON file and a coffee tip jar, the other has a memeish translation that's unreadable for many. But only one of you actually tried to do a good job.Oh, and what I said in those other two posts is a copy paste of somebody's comment on that post you made on reddit. Thought it was on point
Nothing wrong with recouping costs for something you made publicly available, cuck
I would simply read the work in the original Japanese.
I'm more concerned about future translations of other Acaciage desu.
>>568449009>recouping costs for using free gmail accounts
I gave 2€ to AIsir so he's richer than you all now
>>568422340Not long enough.
>>568448818>no it was anti lolicon!Woah. My brain is expanding rn.
>>568449173How are you going to eat lunch then huh
>>568449173I gave him a blowjob
AIsir owes me a rimjob
>>568449009The real cucks are EOPs who hook up your MTL slop into Luna and decides to pay you money so I'd advise you to not insult your customer base next time
>>568449370Did you spit or swallow?
>>568449185It was typical unreliable narrator plot where loli seems to want it only because you see events from pdf POV.Also, Nabokov said if he didn't have a son, he would make it shota story.
>>568449483He's no ninja butler, let it go.
>>568423619I liked 1 cosplayer, and now most of my feed are AI generated cosplays...
>>568423619go back touristwhy is this place filled with redditors and twitter zoomers
Need more edgy protagonists wearing black trench coats
>>568449150>gmail for APIretardbro...
>>568449680
Manosaba Cosplayers (do not look up)
>>568449863Don't remind me of the gay tranny porn.
>>568448965>But only one of you actually tried to do a good jobYeah, me. And unlike yours I made mine last year way before the official was announced.
>>568449806>what is free trialsRetardsis...
You people are all so embarrassing...
>>568450073>trials>for APINyo.
>>568450150go back tourist.
>>568450168no im not
>>568450181zoomer hair
>>568450232>>568450181AIsir, please give him a broccoli haircut
>>568450169Maybe on planet retard.
>>568450181Honestly would make for a cute trap
>>568450746bussin
>>568450746JOPs look like this?
>>568440725Half of these are valid, half are you being a literalist and pretending it's objective>entirely omits "pretending to be a girl"Actual miss. That's plot-relevant information and shouldn't have been folded into "playing pretend." Fair hit.>making it sound like a demand when it's a gentle questionThe guy is asking a child for her body. "Gentle question" is one way to read くれないか, "creepy restrained politeness masking something sinister" is another. You picked the blandest possible reading and called it the only correct one.>"small" is completely made upFair.>"star of the stage" not "lead"You're arguing synonyms. 主役 is the lead role, the star, the protagonist. In context she's the center of attention on a metaphorical stage. Both work. This is not the gotcha you think it is.>"how much magic she burned through" vs "what magic she used"どんな魔法を使っても is "no matter what magic she used." The fantl added intensity. Your version is flatter but not more correct. Neither of you nailed it.>"predatory" for 嗜虐嗜虐 literally means sadistic. "Predatory curl at the corner of her lips" is an embellishment. But your version of that line probably read like a dictionary entry, so I'm not sure what victory you're claiming here.tl;dr you found like 2 actual errors in the entire script and padded the rest with "he didn't translate it the way I would have" complaints. Meanwhile your own patch has speaker tracking issues you refused to fix, missing lines you refused to go back for, and a death curse that reads like a passive-aggressive Yelp review. Glass houses.
>>568450746I look like this yet still no zoomette wife
>>568450873>death curse that reads like a passive-aggressive Yelp reviewKEK
Why is Alsir arguing if he doesn't even know Japanese?
>>568449960>Yeah, meYour own rentry says "it's missing a lengthy editing pass to localize it more and smooth it out. Ain't doing that though." Your own rentry says you couldn't track speaker names and decided it wasn't worth fixing manually. Your own rentry lists missing lines you never went back for. You asked for coffee donations to cover the GPT bill. "Tried to do a good job" is a wild thing to claim when your own documentation reads like a list of reasons you didn't.>I made mine last year way before the official was announcedNobody's giving you a medal for being first to publish something unfinished. The other guy's patch has problems but at least he bothered to sit with the text. You ran it through a machine and called it a day.>unlike yoursBro... I don't translate shit, genius. I'm just an anon who opened both and compared. Not everyone who thinks your MTL is bad is the same guy.
MTLing a VN for your personal consumption is based. MTLing a VN to release as a fanTL is cringe.You should know the difference by now.
apparently katan finished playing anemoi recentlywe will be reading a review
>>568450873>blatant AI postwhy tho
>>568451350would he read totsuraba and jack off to katan
>>568451430BAKA BAKA!
>>568451204>name trackingNoa's speech is still correct, she refers to herself via her own name. What I talked about was making it all-encompassing i.e making her refer to herself by name even when she doesn't. It's technically standard practice, but not necessarily right and im not a fan of it.>missing linesNo such thing, schizo.Can't tell if retarded or just aiposting but am done
>>568451268Edited MTLs are based thoughever
>>568451487bratty zoomer needs rape correction
>>568451458He said he might play it if he has free time, he seems busy with work and family.
>>568451785Then why did aisir's TL turn out so bad?
>>568452064He knows neither English nor Japanese.
Lots of me's itt rn
>>568451707>No such thing, schizo.About untranslated textBacklog could not be embedded so it's accessed via Luna's 6th button - history text. Right click has some options to hide untranslated text etc.A few choices are untranslated due to hook issues, I added the translation to the dialogue line.Map "The wall" is the untranslated one, as for the three buildings/rooms the order is Salamander (fire spirit)/Undine(water spirit)/Gnome(earth spirit), couldn't fix their display. The fire spirit/salamander is due to ruby text/actual in-game spelling.During the trial parts there's a few short lines that did not get hooked and couldn't be displayed - usually just some short agreement or disagreement - 2 in the first trial and like 5 in the second, notably one 'because we're witches'(majo dake ni) silly joke by Coco.One by An-An has an objection, but it should be obvious enough from the objection choice text. I'd like to find it but there's no way without anyone pointing it out to me, screenshot it into GPT if you really want it translated.Later in the game I added the missing lines to the next line with a "-previous line" text, but im not going back to find them and do that for the early trials.There's also a few voice-only cut-in lines but they're even simpler disagreements/interruptions.Objections are also color coded for disagreements/agreements etc, the small text (object/agree/etc) couldn't be embedded.I think I got all the bad choices but might be missing some for choosing the wrong person in trial 1 and 2, so if you encounter a few missing lines there use OCR or something.Let's not talk about the missing text making about 20% of the rentry. You're a clown, eat-a-dick-imasu
in today's /vn/:>LiL blogposting>LiL shilling>MUMBAImasa posting >e-celeb discussion>JOP e-celeb spam
>>568452115That applies to 90% of people making MTL patches.
>>568452064It wasn't by glorious opus. it was a sinful work of the GPT devil
>>568452214The best part about gacha-coded artstyle being the futue of this medium is that you'll never be starved of choices.
I'm considering trying Lessons in Love this weekend.
>>568452296So there's missing lines because the subtitles don't say 'yes' or 'no' in a couple points? lmao The rest as you pointed out are all accounted for in the rentry
>>568452667there is neither homosex nor white woman heroine in LiL, kageakijeet.
>>568452667Based KageakiAryan
Oppai are the future. Oppai are the past.
>>568452795>nor white womanI don't like LiL but isn't there Irish heroine?inb4 Irish aren't white
Honorary white woman I guess
>>568452795I'm straight and white, thank you.
>>568453009yeah, there is. not sure why people love making up things about games they haven't played so much
Time to save this thread with a good post.
>>568442917There are plenty of hot girls not trapped in all age ges anon, they aren't special
>>568453263No one is hotter than Ema
>>568453263Such as >>568453262
>>568452667You're allowed to be an avatarfagging EVN blogposter in the general for English-translated Japanese visual novels?
>>568452403All on topic posts
>>568453262cute jops.jpg
Hello? I want to speak to the manager.
>>568453381I am a blogposter of high quality games.
Where's the image of Alsir's Manosaba patch getting deleted
What did the guy do with An-an's lines anyway, are they colored?
>>568453524Did you miss beliar saying these are allowed a couple days ago? Yorhel was wrong to delete it.
>>568453585I saw one of her colored lines
>>568453451she is busy, chud
>>568453676It's a coup. Beliar has no right.
Bring back 13 Sentinels.
>>568453262>cute lolis with huge vulvas and big clitsFinally.
>>568453676So where is it?
>>568453381VNDB should have never allowed EVN's. We're feeling the consequences now.
>>568453585The fan tl colors stuff instead of using []
The new Underwater Ray Romano VN is out.https://store.steampowered.com/app/4264260/
I'm ready, once again, to get my daily dose of life changing kino
>>568454337This is one of your worst raids yet, congrats.
>>568454337I wanted to give LiL a try before 30 shills appeared with their Reddit commentary. It's nothing better than Lord Byron's blogposting of Tsui no Sora!
>>568454402Narita is literally me. Shame that he's unvoiced.
>>568454318Bets on how bad it will be?
>>568454318Is it a VN or a JRPG?
>>568454543He's fully voiced, though, including in H-scenes.
>>568454502What exactly constitutes 'reddit commentary'? Most of the blogposting has just been SS's
>>568454565JRPVN
KIMIKAAAAAA!!!
>>568454543I could've sworn he was voiced, huh?
>>568454642I'm animalistically fucking your mom
>>568454546Only in /vn/ can a highly acclaimed studio finally release a new game and faggots will be like "teehee, how bad will it be? me no buy, sir :^)".
>>568454318>priceUhhhhh..... I think I'll keep reading th2 instead.
>>568454704He is fully voiced(part of why he's so memorable), that other anon is tripping
>>568454719I played Monochrome Mobius on release and it was fucking ass. I love the original trilogy, by the way.
>>568454630>>568454704>>568454824I didn't actually read Hello King, but I remember someone complaining about that. Or maybe not? Anyways, thanks for the clarification.
>>568454704He is indeed voiced.
>>568451458Seems like a game he'd hate.
>>568454759Ryuugames welcomes lost lambs with open arms
>>568114274>This changed quof's life
>>568452403Didn't ask, uminegro
>>568454873You should read it, I thought it was really good. Just stop after New Division because the extra content after that is bad.
>>568454974... into their botnet/bitcoin farm.
>>568452403negromasa mentioned
>>568454296So how does it handle her actual commands then, when they were the only colored text?>>568454174I didn't reupload it, the only reason rentry is still up is for posterity - I think people should wait for official or read the youtube one.
>Heroine can't cookKino every time
>>568455145>I didn't reupload it because they'd take it down again
>>568454974No, I'll wait™
>>568455145Normal text in brackets are in an ugly orange color. Anan's commands are still purple.
What JOPge should I read next?
>>568455251Again, Beliar confirmed you can upload script text the same way you can do partial interfaces.Yorhel misunderstood and thought they were some unspecified lunatranslator file if I had to guess? You can reupload it if you want or wait till I upload the totsuraba or k3 file>>568455364>not even color coded for An-anthats so cringe
>>568455368Rance X
>>568455174
>>568455174In Honey Honey Honey, they made it so the girl's food comes out scorched into a black lump, but they didn't have the balls to make it actually taste bad. I consider that pretty soulless.
Drunk sex with her would be fucking kino
>>568455575>they didn't have the balls to make it actually taste bad. I consider that pretty soulless.That's actually sovlful because it's subversive.
I guess it's time.......
>>568455575>Honey Honey HoneyThat VN is absolute dogshit outside of the h-scenes so you can't expect much
>>568421487Thanks for clarifying this but I'm not gonna play it mainly because of the lack of Japanese voice acting.
>>568455368Muramasa
mmm do I want to include the hag?
>>568455762welcome to the club brother, download it from f95 so you get the most recent version and the progress mod(highly recommended)
>Blushing after getting praised by another manNTR
>>568455917Not into NTR.
>>568452667Enjoy your kamige, Kageakibro.
>>568427908Do we know and have access to the font that Yuzusoft English releases use? I'd like to use that font for VNs with ass default fonts like Chrono Clock.
should I do it chat?
>>568455697But it's subversive because they can't risk the protag being mean or the girl feeling bad.Soulless.
Still not reading your patreon scam, niggerman
>>568456465Yeah, do it, leave.
>>568452667The LiL hype train is never stopping bois. HFK>>568456465LOCK THE DOOR
>>568456104Thanks, I want to try reading for a few days without the mod first, if it filters me too hard I'll use it
>>568456505Leave my cat alone, he has nothing to do with this.
>>568456465Why would you not fuck a milf with small tits?
>>568456465fuck the hag
>>568456254what ge is this?
LiL shilling is Lord Byron's revenge
>making choices at the heroinekek reminds me of Shione's route from Renai RoyaleAlso, literally the dilemma I have everyday kek
We do be reading LiLKINO
>>568456465LOCK THE DOOOOOOOOOOOOR
>>568456382Didn't ask, tranny.
>>568456624https://vndb.org/v3896
>>568456521I did it out of curiosity and got guilt tripped and shamed into rescinding my choice>>568456547>>568456573>>568456583Ok I'm fucking the hag even though normally i would never do this on principle
i'm reading LiL for rokuhara
>>568456885Did you just respond to your own post?
>Ok I'm fucking the hag
LiL bussers
>>568456981Mind your own business
I guess...
>>568456809
>>568456885not fucking the hags does have very long term consequences. wouldn't want to miss out on kino
>>568456720Ayaka is literally me.
Need more chuunige
>>568457272You stick pens up your ass?
Need more chungusge
Mission accomplished. Pube lovers will eat good if you're into that kind of thinghttps://files.catbox.moe/ntkan6.png
HOLY SHIT WITCHER 3 IS GETTING A FAN DISC
>>568457495I FUCKING LOVE HAGS
>>568457495Bro this looks fucking terrible. Why would you link this?
>>568457562I've tried like 4 times but I've never been able to get though the game, dunno why
>>568457495>stubbleaaieee dont shave
>>568457484You don't?
Need more trapge.
>>568457562The cord will be blogposting that one next.
>>568457753Nah, I'm not gay.
>>568453263No one is hotter than Hiro.Especially Witch Hiro.
>>568457495>hag>looks like a kidnormally yay but this time nay
>>568457484Only dildos and prostate massagers
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pYW1Md8LcQk
>>568457495>Tatted up whore
>>568457814cuckler...
>>568457835which kinkoi girl do you self insert as
>>568457896normally nay but this time yay
>>568455368Japanese translation of https://vndb.org/v48511
>>568457814Is that goat milk?
Stop sitting like that
>>568458298>female protagonist>mobile UI
>>568458226Ria b/c I'm a Sylviefag.
I really didn't expect this scene. Guess I should've known...
imminent rape
>>568458540NTR!? In my kokuKINO!? Say less, 'senpai!
>>568458451>female protagonist>implyinghalf of this general is reading manosaba thoughever
>first lines of sasara's routeI already feel tired
>>568458372I like sitting like that...
The review's up too: https://vndb.org/w17034
>>568458910>halfit's just one anon blogposting
The oppai will have to wait, for now. Frustrating, but these things happen.
>>568458918>what she should have never lostHer virginity?
>>568459051sloploverman
>>568459391>9.5 LOVEPICAL-POPPY!This might contain the greatest cast of heroines I have ever seen in a VN. Ever.DJ tamaki won
Is there any good example of prose-ge without flowery/purple prose bullshit?
Need more MAMA
>>568459494Manosaba.
>>568459473Damn right she did.
https://litter.catbox.moe/s7zxr4ekpljkeuu5.jpg
>>568459494... any game? Setoguchi probably or the guy who did asairo - Shumon. Though it looks more like masturbation over japanese than actual prose
How do I have sex with women other than paying for their time
>>568459494Isn't that romeo?
>>568459759you still genning your wife? its been like 2 years by now, no?
>>568459759Can you do Karen blacked?
where is dull?
need more trap NTR, doko
>>568459891>>568459924I got this off twitter, sorry
>>568459819I'm not interested in 3dpd.
>>568459379She turned a picture into scrap; shit's scattered around with the wind but then she realised she shouldn't have done this... pretty cool eh?
>>568459494sakurai
>>568459814nta but setoguchi's prose is pretty lifeless and unimpressive.
>>568459943Cuckiaki...>>568460000holy quads
>>568459494maruto ge
>>568460005That's some sappy bullshit. She made her choice, so what's there to piss and moan about?>>568460000Nice digits.
>>568455042KEK it really did
>>568459494what are you even calling purple prose, maybe masada? what else is there?
>>568459494On a scale of Hemingway to James salter to faulkner, how much purple do you want
>>568460352We do be reading all of those.
>>568460352Stephen King.
Every man deserves a niece like Ami
>>568460332Sakumoyu would qualify
>>568460039It's still prose and fits the non-flowery
>>568460030link or didn't happen
>>568460772Stop molesting that cardboard cutout of an underage girl.
>>568461002oh, yeah. from what i've seen of it i have no desire to read that and don't understand the people who like it
>>568459494Doesn't exist. good prose = "how can I write this shit using the most contrived and overwrought metaphors/similies and paraphrase it in 5 different ways".It's all about trying to show off their knowledge of obscure vocab and kanji.No focus on other aspects of prose.
>>568460772So flat...
>>568457495>pube stubble
>>568461534you must not read much
>>568461534>good prose = "how can I write this shit using the most contrived and overwrought metaphors/similies and paraphrase it in 5 different ways".It's just that VN writers praised for their prose by JOPs tend to be like that
>>568461631What kind of dialogue is this? I thought eroge protags were just supposed to say "Your body is beautiful" and then the girl was supposed to say "IKUUUUUUUUUUU!"
>>568461631kek
English is the only language for prosekino
>>568459632>biological mom and her mom friendsbetter than the daughters already cant wait
All VN heroines should go お゙っお゙
>>568462051>no kanjikinoSoulless.
>>568461962Wrong
>>568462140thank god the writers can't resort to cheap kanji gimmicks to easily impress the mob
>>568462051You only know English, though? If you don't understand a language at a high level then the prose is never going to be kino for you.
Unknown pink appears.
A threesome is good.
>>568461631julia was goated
>>568461878This is the only prose available to the japanese and their shit awfully limited language
I want to experience VNs how native Japanese speakers experience it. Are there full English-voiced VNs with Hscenes or anything close to it? Preferably by competent voice actresses. Learning Japanese isnt enough since theres still the translation time in your head
>>568456465This world was made for you
>>568462458Very true
>>568462438That orange one is the best girl in the game btw
>>568462537>to the japaneseto you cus you dont know the language
>>568459814>asairo>>543707407
lol
>>568462404Best girl, by the way.
>>568462804She looks more fun (and punchable) than Sasara that's for sure.
>>568462551Bro you don't translate in your head
What is this LiL? The shilling worked on me i want to try it
>>568462308I know 3 languages, and English isn't even my native language. English's ability to absorb international influences quickly has made it highly sophisticated and expressive unlike any other language. Not to mention how almost every prose movement in the last two centuries has left its mark on English literature. The same is not true for most languages in the world.
>>568463010>The only thing to do is behave modestly. Then she stops crying [...]is this MTL?
>>568463183>English literatureDon't care still not reading EVNs
>>568463183Are you high?
My favourite prose?>It was a strike like lightning.
This thread is like a puppet with its strings cut.
>>568463445HFK.
You cannot escape pinks
Read some real literature if you want good prose
>>568463183>sophisticated and expressive unlike any other languagePyccкий mogs it tho
>>568452115He's Poland what do you even expect? It's hilarious how he goes around calling people ESL when he's equally as bad.
>>568463610So this is the power of English...
>>568463161It's very unique to describe but you will get it after your third year ingame.
>>568463628He's a country?? HFK
>>568463628>some schizo is now an entire countrywtf
>>568463401Prose, on.
>>568462082Her daughter looks just like her
>>568463401I feel hopeless that my life will never end.I never belived it even once.
>>568464096HFK
>>568463161300 hours SoL loopge where pdf teacher manipulates menhera JKs into fucking him and something something schizo gods, christianity bad because writer's mom forced him to be catholic when he was 10 or something.This is what I got from all shill posting.
Rin is waifu material. Homegirl acting like a wingman
>>568464175Either the shills are really bad at shilling or it is actually this retarded. Either way I'm not interested in it.
>>568442736Margot and Nanoka traded hats
>>568464213>now he's trying to hide the koikatsu modelsMight as well read a book if the art is that bad, man.
>>568463610translate it to japanese
It's funny how even Muv-Luv Extra has more interesting prose than LiL.
>>568464587That says a lot
>>568464587there's nothing interesting about this line so muv-shit really is just as bad as EVNtrash kek
>>568464587>This changed anon's life
>>568464587Fucking DEEP.
>>568464348that's just a screenshot of the backlog, schizo. everyone knows what it looks like, there's no hiding it
>>568464587This has to be shitposting, please let it be shitposting.
Post some tadashii proses
>>568464863Yes everyone knows it's ugly
English can eat shit
>>568465046MHBST
>>568465023And yet, it is the most read visual novel todayHFK
>>568465046HOLY THIS
>>568465138Whatever you say, Lord Byron
>>568465023must be really good if everyone likes it despite it being ugly huh
Romancebros won.
Getting stepped on by a hag, lucky Sensei.
>>568462082IFLWW
>>568465280Tfw no
Hanako, my beloved
>>568465618Best girl
Flood tranny melty.
>>568464089better version of the daughter, like it should be
>>568465240Make your own thread, Mr. offtopic spammer who definitely isn't getting a kickback from patreon bux.
>>568465618Bacon
>>568465681Route is probably worst tho(Shizune is quite bad too, but character-wise even it is better)
>>568465802How many visual novels have you read this year?
>>568465802visual novels are ontopic in the visual novel general
>>568465845I seem to recall that the version that adds deleted content is better?
Who is this lowercase sissy that shills LiL
>>568465986$0.02 has been added to your account.
Narehate jumpscare
>>568465986>This general is for the discussion of English-translated Japanese visual novels.
>>568466109floodtroon
>>568466054Beta routes are better character-wise(it helps that initially Hanako had TWO routes, yes, not endings but full routes), although Bad Route is clearly reminiscent of game being made by 4chan(too edgy sometimes, although I would say general idea and Hanako's detailed backstory was good)
>>568466109half of the thread. the other half shills it in uppercase
>>568466319We will be making a new thread at 749 posts and removing that line from the OP.
>>568466413Nice, I should probably give it a try. It's been so many years since I read that, it'll be like reading it for the first time
>>568466319>silence when jopge and other evns get postedlol
>>568466523Don't forget >>568427003
>>568466568uwa
>flood is mad that anons are playing a visual novelLmao, cannot make this shit up.
>>568466568Now this, my dear friends, is good art.
Just bring /weg/ back already
>>568466552People shit on jops more than anyone.
We love JOPs here.
I need to fuck this girl right now jesus christ
>>568466880Sure, go to >>>/aco/ and fuck off. Total wegger death.
>>568466779I've never seen an EVN that isn't repugnant, so I can't blame him on this one.
>>568467009Pure...
>>568466568No one else does it like them, hope we hear more about the new one soon
>>568466880It's dead for a reason. Not enough interest here WEGs to sustain a general. Plus like JOPs they'd get more attention here so there's no reason to leave.
>>568467009Imagine 3D rendering your character and STILL drawing the eyebrows on top of the hair. How does that even happen in a 3D render, for fucks sake?
>>568467102https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q_9VMaX61nI
Lessons in Love wants to be yurishit so bad but the dev can't make it yurishit without fucking up his finances
>>568467281Isn't he a yuritard
>>568467009If you like Rin, you probably should wait for a while before doing lewd stuff with pure gyaru.
This girl needs a refresher on how dangerous it is to be this coy
>>568467192I think there's an option for eyebrows to show through hair in Koikatsu.
>>568467320A massive one actually he would take Sensei out in a heartbeat if he could that's why his next VN is going to be yuri only
I miss the days when I would spend thousands of hours in koikatsu VR
>>568467102Making steady progress. I'd give you the juicy details but I can't pay for stuff on ci-en/dlsite anymore.
>>568467369I don't mind spoilers, what happens if I lewd her early? I lock myself out of rin scenes?
Floodtranny, you ok? You have been malding nonstop for a while now.
>>568467552Hag KINO!
The spammer who made the thread unusable for months is still here, right? I can't help but notice that he's not throwing a tantrum about EVN shilling. It's almost like he's on their side.
>schizo sensei>schizoge>taking an advantage of girls>meta commentary on eroge>resetsSo...LiL is nu-Sayooshi but with SoL?
>>568467470his 3rd vn planned is the one that's yuri only, quit making up shit
I don't think I'd be able to control myself, this girl is just too fucking much
>>568467693Based on having read the first 30 minutes, yes
>>568467694Ok then what's his 2nd going to be then?
>>568467753You have to resist, brother
>>568467693Sayooshi could afford to pay an artist, though.
>>568467556Yes, and some parts of her events play differently and have a few different lines in the dialogues, mostly she is guilt tripping you and in general more guarded and less friendly.
>>568467846a cross channel clone supposedly
God her flirting game is too much for me
>>568467991I only remember him mentioning a remake of that demo he first made before LiL and that yuri one unless he's turning that demo into a full VN
>>568468129Should be sexable in that form.
>>568467991really? lil already feels inspired by C+C
>>568467928I guess that makes sense considering Rin has a girl crush on her. When would you say is a good time to lewd her? Day 100?
>>568468125No one talks like that.
Uta-chan is always cute.
>>568468225yeah, that's what he's doing. doesn't really matter since that's several years away
>>568468239She'd be less scary
>>568468336After the beach event
>>568468257Because it is and SubaHibi too
>>568468384Turn on your monitor.
>>568468384Best meido
>>568467281>Lessons in Love wants to be yurishit so bad but the dev can't make it yurishit without fucking up his financesAny vinnies like this except not yuri but BL?
>>568467928How is Chika not the most popular character in LiL. I don't know if my willpower will hold if she keeps dropping lines like this
>>568468338>anon discovers 99% of VN dialogue
>>568468565Any chuunige.
>>568468565dies irae
>>568457562Who is best girl?
>>568468670Shani
>>568468565Ask kageyakijeet, he is our resident expert on homo games.
>>568468438this one?
>>568468125This really feels like if reddit was a 300 hour vn. Right down to the way they italicize text.
>>568468438To be clear, after the event chain where the whole class goes to the beach. There's an event on the beach before that.
>>568467281Wait until you find out what happens to the lesbian girl
And how!
>>568468815Nope. It's like a whole beach trip vacation arc. But you need to wait for a while to get to it.
>>568469045Made for shotas.
>>568468565hanachirasumuramasa
MUMBAImasa
>>568468565uminegronamsaba
>>568469085Jesus that long? How much time is that in game, 1 year?
>>568469045I remember I was going to read this until I saw it had MMF scenes.
You'll just have to take my word for this, but she is constantly in motion like jello in an earthquake. And I'm not sure if it's safe to post "clothed" nipples that are obviously swollen red nipples.
>>568469372it's around 20 hours into the game
I knew my cursive knowledge would come in useful one day
>>568469443>And I'm not sure if it's safe to post "clothed" nipples that are obviously swollen red nipples.Seems fine to me. People post areolas all the time and are fine.
>>568469415What's the point of making a female character but not giving her spitroast and double penetration scenes?
>>568468125godawful dialogue
>>568469372for me it was shortly before day 200
This LiL shit looks so easy to make. Just koikatsu and renpy? At that point /vn/ could probably write a VN.
>>568469581ok that's not too bad
>>568468401is toheart2 an mtl or what the fuck is wrong with this translation, why are all these screenshots so fucked
>>568469678It's literally just a double handjob
>>568469740Many have thought this, and tried, and failed.
Yep, everybody has been saying this about Sensei.
Well that doesn't seem like very priestlike behavior.
>>568469839That's so fucking lame. Removed from the backlog
>>568469740Making the VN is easy, but shilling it online is the hard part.
>>568469740where the fuck is Redman/Stay Night
>>568469768No but Ittaku did it over the course of about 10 years and he's a bonafide weirdo. It's a case where his ability noticeably improved as he went on too so it's clunkier in common or early routes than it is in the later routes.
>>568469740Lil has a lot of clones that have failed when they realize that it wasn't really as easy as it seemed.
>>568469740Making the vn is the easy part. The hard part is managing your shills and getting paypiggies to fund it.
>>568469693ok aaron sorkin
>>568470076>Lil has a lot of clonesExamples?
Uoooohhh, so plump...
>>568470076sometimes even famous eroge companies somehow manage to forget that a vn needs to have a good writer to be good, so i suppose you can't blame rookies
>>568469740At the end of the day you have to be able to write something that people actually want to read, which is harder than you think it is.
>>568469740You have to carry the bad visuals with a good plot and that's why it succeeded making an interesting plot is hard
>>568470063Impressive people manage to slog through that shit when it's this visible off random screens, like oldass google translate literal outputs
>>568470032It's hilarious in hindsight how much that guy was seething at the charmareians dev for making his own VN but never delivered on his own. Made so many edits and "doxxing collages" only to fade away into obscurity.
>>568469768Why should I care? It's fine enough for me. That's why ESLs have superpowers. Maybe he had enough of miyake shousuke trying to force telenovela tier drama in every nook a cranny of the script.
Holy fucking hagKINO!
>>568470371I love ToHeart but the translation made it downright difficult to read. It felt like getting something off Beast's Lair back in the day.
Chimani a cute.
>>568470483>it's been 4 years alreadywtf
Thank god he doesn't have a face. That would have ruined everything.
There was a time when I complained about some vns, lns or anime for being too repetitive and I thought that if it were me, I could write something better... that's when I realized that I didn't even know where to start. Funny times.
Gameplay? In my visual novel? It's more likely than you think.
>>568470758Why is being bad with technology such a common heroine trait?
>>568470549does this count as NTR? also what ge, it looks good
>>568471009I'd do it myself but I don't know any good artists
Me on the left
The brain is wider than the sky
>koikatsutrue chads use their IRL friends as spriteshttps://store.steampowered.com/app/1492980/Shut_your_teeth/
>>568471197You can simply write a web novel
Wow, it's almost like I'm grooming a little girl that doesn't know about sex. Isn't that the dictionary definition of "kino"?
>>568471236your cute
That's cheap.
>>568467552fuuuuuuuck cant wait
>Plays key shitMaybe I'll just go fuck Chika as soon as possible after all
>>568471276I don't have friends
>>568470494Im an ESL and I wouldn't read that.>>568470506it's so autistically weird with how many decent lines it has, flip flopping between good and awful
>>568471378Web novels have art anon and you are shooting yourself in the foot if you don't have good art. It's the first thing people look and the determining factor in whether they will give you a chance
That line goes SO fucking hard, man.
>>568471628dont pretend to have standards mtlpig
>>568471776Flowers reference.
>MUMBAImasaKEKAROOOOOOOO
>>568471776Groomer line
>>>568471009>I could write something better... that's when I realized that I didn't even know where to start. Funny times.Just imagine heroines you want to fuck and build a plot from here
>>568471826>
>>568471879hack writing
>>568471826GEEEEEEEEEEEG
>>568471757No? You don't need that in web novels. If you're really confident in your writing, you wouldn't need anything else to reach the reader.
>>568471941This is literally how many vinnies are created
>it's uncensoredWow! I will be running to Steam and buying the whole series immediately!
>>568471628You're leaving the ESL realm; grab a few drinks before reading
>>568471782You're too used to shovelware mtlslop to realize MTL reads way better than that
IDBLT.
>>568470358>>568470303>You have to carry the bad visuals with a good plot and that's why it succeeded making an interesting plot is hardThis is cope btw. Look at r07 shit, it got popular simply because of luck/availability, his writing and plotting are nothing special, his art is horrendous and yet he managed to become le iconic writer.
>>568471115it's up there with "girl who sucks at cooking" trait for terrible carryovers from the 00s. jap writers just want a retarded bumpkin
>>568472056vinnies that people only read for the art maybe
The plot thickens...well not really since it was pretty obvious she wants to smash Chika and keeps trying to set me up with fat-futaba. This presents a dilemma for yours truly gozaru
>>568471941The black pill is knowing that hack writing is what pays the bills. Just look at LiL.
Art doesn't exist.
>>568472376broski, even obscure 3000 hours long jopshit plotge like Shigatsu Youka started from "I hate sakura trees and like cute girls, I should write a vinnie about that"
>>568472404The WHAT pill?
God, I hate mushrooms. What VN should I write? hmmm
I miss Karenschizo
I fucking love sakura trees
>freeze frame>shift into past tense narration>OP music starts playing as the scene fades to blackCINEMA! IT'S FUCKING CINEMA!
>>568472436>>568472640Where's her game NN
>568470032wasn't there some shitty quick VN with AI slop images featuring sex with tohsaka rin?
Reading VNs all the time really makes you retarded
>>568472043The only thing more saturated than the web novel space is light novels where everyone and their mothers is competing for a slice in the attention economy. You need something to grip people in and make them more willing to check out your writing. You think solo leveling would have gotten anywhere without it's art?
room doko?
>>568472790the most retarded people here don't read anything doue
>>568467009Is that girl from Class 09 yes this is same game yet still it's posted. Just make your own general. What's wrong with retarded zoomer/milengen idiots, Katawa Shoujo created their own while it'd atleast pass somewhat this is just itchioslop.
>>568472401I can't put spoiler tags atm but I'd highly recommend not fucking Chika before the beach trip and making saves at different points in time because you can brick your run accidentally
>>568472676Same.
>>568472902you will never pass evntranny
>>568472918You can just type the spoiler tags manually...
Third reset event was KINO af. Also it's very fucking dark and disturbing if what I suspect happened to Ayane is actually what happened. Like wtf dude.
>>568472790No, it's just that 4chan chuds here are retarded. It's not the fault of the VNs
>>568472918will the progress/hint mod help with avoiding bricking runs? If not what are some important choice points where you recommend I save cause I fucking hate long convoluted systems that have multiple brick points that necessitate a restart in them if you fuck up like kns or totono
>>568473009meant for LiL spammers
>>568472819What the fuck is Solo Leveling? Last I checked the only LN anyone cared about was Toaru.
>>568473019I don't remember how because i visit 3 chans and they all make spoilers differently so i'm used to the keyboard shortcut for this one.
>>568472819I think we're not talking about the same thing. Do you just want to prove you can write something good or do you want to make a living from it? Most people simply write as a hobby and share it online.
>>568472881Actually they're the most accomplished individuals
>>568465225What? Lord Byron?
>>568473424>>568473424>>568473424MOVE! MOVE! MOVE!
>>568473223The rin brick is that you can date get her to fall in love with you or not.The best save points would be at the start and half way through every chapter. I am currently on a restarted run myself because i didn't make good save intervals and i need to collect a secret back in chapter 2 to get what i want in chapter 4
>>568473050
VNs for this feel?https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Db5uQx9xGD4
>>568473170Jopcord trannies are also retarded
>>568473259A web novel>>568473267Why does wanting to prove to oneself and others that one can write something good and making a living from it have to be mutually exclusive?
>>568473259it's a korean manhwa not a LN. it literally won anime of the year for 2025 crunchroll awards
>>568473223The biggest brick is if you refuse to fuck Ami since it locks you out of shittons of normal events and ??? events.
>>568473596That's true
>>568473664Crunchyjew awards are meaningless. They are rigged and the company is likely going to die after pulling that stunt with cloudflare among their other bullshit
nice body
>>568473641I feel like the discussion has strayed too far from the original point...
>>568473919>the company is likely going to die after pulling that stunt with cloudflareWhat happened?
>>568473719What about refusing to fuck Sara? And who in their right mind would refuse to fuck Ami?
>>568474062>What about refusing to fuck Sara?No hag kino then.
>>568474062the only character you don't miss out on much for not fucking so far is maki
>>568474062You're basically not supposed to refuse fucking anyone if you wanna see 100% of scenes however if you fuck chicka too fast you brick Rin and there's another sex scene that I'm still not sure if it was good or bad to get I'm testing that before saying for sure
>>568473990I don't think it has. Experiencing financial success from your writing works as like a self affirmation and confidence boost in your own skills. It will also allow give you more avenues to experiment/expand and just overall give you more motivation to keep doing what you do. Thus if I ever write a web novel, I'd want to invest in a good artist to really help bring my characters and setting to life and make people more willing to engage with it and support my future endeavors.
>>568474572Any VNs like this except it's a woman who fucks every single underaged boy she comes across?
>>568473475what's that chapter 2 missable? I check the wiki while reading but just in case
>>568474045Just google crunchyroll controversy
>>568475003Fuck off, mate. Don't bring up shit you don't know anything about.
>thread gets made>still herewhat is wrong with you all>i wanna quote somethinghave you heard of cross-thread quoting
>>568475203>>568475203>>568475203New thread is UP, lilchads.
>>568474695When you fall into the endless mall dimension you have to visit a certain secret place and meet someone so you unlock more secrets later
>>568475329thanks
Why are they so cute?
>>568475227Why do I have to spoonfeed you and risk getting reported for off topic? It's fucking 2026, ask grok or gpt if you are too lazy to do basic research
>>568475329that's chapter 3
>>568475280hfk
>reported for off topicGeg
>>568475441>risk getting reported for off topicNTA but you're on fucking /vn/ lmao
>>568475441Why do you bring up "off-topic" in the first place if you're too much of a little bitch to follow up on it? *spits*
>>568475482IDBLT
>>568475490>>568475542You act like people haven't been given 3 day vacations for off topic before or 'trolling'(most common excuse done by mods)>>568475586Jesus christ look up Crunchyroll and Anime Kai on google. I just did half the work for you
come talk to me about onions beans and basedbean meal and having sex with homeless trannies m? What's wrong with creating your own space? uhm i was here before you but now I get my dick up at this 3d model telling me we will potentially have sex (in english) and it was always about this, it was always about this in the first place
>>568475848NTA but people here blogpost gacha, manga, anime, and even EVNs.
>>568475848Maybe 2 years ago
>>568475978Its literally one guy
>>568475978>and even EVNsThat's the worst part
steins shit lost
We love DanganKINO here.Kaede is so hot...
>>568476917>Kaede is so hot
>>568477083Why isn't he an MC? Looks much cooler than zoomer schoolboy
>>568476917My wife Miu is hotter
>>568477301everyone's wife*
Somebody left this at page 10... I should pick it up just in case.
uminegro lostnamsaba lost
negromasa lost lessons in mumbai lost
Gather around everyone, gather around! I bring exciting news!Today is May 27th aka the DAY Hanamaru Mari finally won!Many have dreamt of this day and I'm here to tell you dreams DO come true!
Fuck pinks
>>568478503Die.
If I was a janny, I would ban anons who ruin Mari gets.
I love oppai lolis, especially Yuki!
I love pinks the most!
MUMBAImasa lost
Why are there so many vns about highschool
Mari!
>>568483554Because feminists get mad at companies who release vns with grade school or middle school settings.
BOOOOOOOOOOOM
FUCK NIGGERS FUCK JANNIES FUCK JOPS FUCK EOPS FUCK MIDAMASA FUCK UMINEGRO
Yeeeeeeeeeey
EVERYONE LEAVE THIS THREAD NOWWWWWWExcept YOU! >>568485519 You stay and help me win!
Still not post in a LiL thread, nope
mari is cute!
>>568486758>>568487901She LOST
mariiiiiiiii
Quof lostLiL lost
mari mari mari mari
ichijo, rokuhara onahole
MARI
