Did I fix his design?
>>58789260Remove the bright green things from the wings and stomach and it'll look pretty good
>>58789260don't love the udder hands
>>58789260is this inspired by carbuncles?
>>58789260She looks even worse
>>58789260The mega already fixed the design
>>58789328>SheHe.
>>58789354She* ftfy
>>58789260>his
>>58789260give her big boobs
>>58789260Give him a fat cock
>>58789260It looks fine but the base design didn't really need fixing desu
>>58789260Lose the stomach thing
>>58789508>we want the Crawdaunt audience
>>58789260I will say that the linework here is more akin to the Gen 3-4 Sugimori art compared to the work Ohmura did in Gen 7 and whoever is doing it now, where the lines are much smoother.
>>58789260Change the wings back to pink and i'd be fine with it
>>58789266I agree with the stomach thing but I don't mind the green things on the wings - they remind me of something to channel the energy part of the wings out of, similar to Ultra Necrozma, or even like a modifed humerus - something to give structure to the wings.
>>58789457This
>>58789573The stomach star reinforces his cosmic origin
>>58790139I think the tail star and alien look/color can accomplish that on its own
>>58790149Tail star is too Shinx-like.
>>58789260looks ok (except the hair) but what is the concept behind it?
>>58789260>clefable if it was a turnetmon instead of a real pokemon
>>58790194Cosmic/Alien Fairy
>>58790162Remove both. It already has stars on the wings, anyway. The stomach star is way more superfluous than the tail star.
>>58789260the problem with making so many normal types fairy is that NORMAL types are (were) supposed to look NORMAL and mundane compared to other types.
>>58789464>>58789457Both of these
>>58789260
>>58791453in general, give wings fairy aura mist around them, turn them transparent pink, and give him sparkling star on belly, tail is whatever
>>58789260Misses the acorn theme