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A thread for the creation and discussion of fan fiction and other fanworks - anything that involves a story and/or reading. What've you been reading? What've you been writing? What would you like to see more of?

>Thread question:
What are some things to keep in mind when writing romance?

>Previous thread:
>>58910512
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Who is the Jeffrey Epstein of the pokemon world?
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>>58923100
>What are some things to keep in mind when writing romance?
Never, and I do mean never ever, put some NTR bait character because they will burn you alive or fuck off and leave you with raw autism as new readers
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>>58923100
>What are some things to keep in mind when writing romance?
It's more interesting to read a romance between two characters than one character and a Love Interest. Give both characters things to do that occupy their focus besides getting with each other and it'll feel more fleshed out.
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>>58923100
>What are some things to keep in mind when writing romance?
Please God give them both a reason to like each other. Chemistry is downstream from that.
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>>58923114
Not sure, but I am absolutely giving the leader of the evil team in my story a name ending in -berg or -stein, now.
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>>58922794
Which fic, I know Pokenormal had Blaine got one-shot, with Red and Leaf possibly being dead as well. Or is this IMO/PoPT? I haven't them yet.
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>>58923184
In Mine Own in this case.
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god lacey is such an ugly character
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>>58923114
He secretly runs several human and drug trafficking operations on his off-shore island mini-city. He's constantly scouting and grooming promising trainers to invite to his island, and then to his sick and fucked up parties, where he films them for later blackmail and leverage.

Anabel was his Ghislaine Maxwell before
becoming a Faller and losing her memories btw
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Alright so
>There's an actual government
>The Champions aren't the supreme leaders or the military head because we don't know if that's even a thing in their world
>The police is incompetent
>The Interpol is too busy using fallers as bait to control the ultra beasts
>Any retard can be forgiven from attempted genocide by saying sorry and sometimes can get either a vacation in a tropical paradise or a high role
>Loansharks are the good guys for some reason
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There are only two Fallers in my setting, and both are characters from Gen 9

They have nothing to do with my fic, but are also the reason it happens at all.
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>>58923119
Does this only apply to males? What if I make another girl show up and try to compete in the mc-bowl?
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>>58923331
What if your MC is being fought over by another trainer and his starter?
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>>58923308
This is a world where 10 year olds can pay taxes and travel around the world with their Pokémon and no adults supervision as long as they have a Trainer License.
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Which Rival would you say has the most potential for interesting storytelling if isekai'ed/reincarnated as? In your opinion, at least.

Blue
Silver
Trace
Brendan/May
Barry
Bianca
Cheren
N
Hugh
Calem/Serena
Hau
Gladion
Hop
Bede
Klara
Avery
Marnie
Nemona
Arven
Penny
Carmine
Kieran
Urbain/Taunie

Hard Mode: Come up with something with the Rival you think would have the least potential for interesting storytelling.
Date Must Die Mode: Same thing but the Rival you dislike the most are the least interested in.
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>>58923396
Since the personality is getting overwritten, it comes down to which characters are in the most unique circumstances. So Silver, N, Gladion (I think? I never made it far enough into Ultra Sun but I think being the big bad's kid is probably a big deal), Marnie, and Penny are choices you can work with.
The ones with the least potential are the ones who are essentially just the PCs. The difference between becoming Protagonist!Brendan and Rival!Brendan is nothing. The only thing I can think for them is always being one step behind the real protagonists, either by circumstances or by magical means.
I don't really have a least favorite rival, unfortunately. I guess any of the ones that are so friendly they don't feel like rivals, like Hau and Bianca? Maybe someone with a tough personality gets shoved into them and the world has to react to Hau being a huge asshole all the sudden.
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>>58923396
N, Gladion, and Arven actually have a backstory to work with.

Isekaijin and N, who both have a misguided view on the Pokemon world, would make for a hilarious duo.
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>>58923396
Silver if he has mewtwo cells
Real answer: depends on if it's a merging of consciousnesses or a complete takeover
Like the other anons said if it's a complete takeover you're more choosing based on the character's relatives.
If it's a merging than it'd be fun to read about someone getting torn between Hau's hakuna matata no fucks given always chill and a power-obsessed ragemonkey or something else that clashes like N and a human supremacist/homfa adherent, Silver and someone who thinks the mafia is awesome, etc.
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>>58923444
Yugi/Atem dynamic
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>>58923114
Bellis or Lear I suppose since they operate around Pasio, the master ex island.
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Chapter 18 of Spice and Fox is out!

Next one at the end of the month and it'll be a normal length, too. Happy Valentine's!

https://archiveofourown.org/works/21307454/chapters/203836961
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>>58923396
>my face when the rival I included in my story isn't even included on the list
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>>58923696
>Happy Valentine's!
you monster. the end of the month can't come soon enough
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>>58923396
Wallybros...
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Total Valentine's Death
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Thinking of a Pokemon zombie apocalypse
>Humans and Pokemon can be infected, mostly by bite
>The virus kills the host and zombifies it in about an hour
>Zombie Pokemon are mostly mindless beasts that don't really use actual moves
>If a zombie ingests enough flesh and blood, they will get smarter and more resilient to their body's rot, this goes for humans and Pokemon



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