A thread for the creation and discussion of fan fiction and other fanworks - anything that involves a story and/or reading. What've you been reading? What've you been writing? What would you like to see more of?>Thread question:What are some ideas you've considered for fanfics based on other fanworks?>Previous thread:>>59092237
>>59105749>TQWilliam from Spice and Fox getting cucked by the background character who was making out with a Gardevoir.
>>59105749https://rentry.co/PokemonIsekaiMonoCheat: Blessed BloodAura Type: WaterStarter: Hasty Male MudkipBasically use Mudkip use water attack to mix in the blood of other gifted with water so I can drink it and gain their abilities like fucking Alucard from HellSing.
i've written a document explaining the basics and mechanics of the mainline series, though the latest edits were made 10 years agohttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1i6kt7ed4Rm2jbAGmC0LL4FKLcf34dTf7ruG3IJCHhV8/edit?usp=sharinghow well does it read?
Can humans learn how to perform a Protect, considering literally every other pokemon can?
>>59105910What is the purpose of this? Who doesn't know the basics of pokemon or would need it explained?
>>59105926Hyperbeam to the fucking face bro, that's all you need to know.
So hear me out. What if there was a log about the breeding process of Paradox pokemon. Ancient paradox are wild and savage and Future paradox are organize and efficient?
>>59105910Why share it today? Just found it again and wanted to share?
>>59106096Paradox sounds more cooler for describing ancient prototype breeding and courting behaviors and comparing them to modern day counterpart behaviors. Paradox is pure robofucking and/or robot design; better crack those engineering knuckles, anon.
The way I see it, Paradox Pokemon being converted from their normal counterparts fits better, perhaps with the exceptions of the Legendary-based ones since there's a bunch more Iron Crowns than Cobalion.
>>59105749>tqIt felt like the highest compliment I’ve received as a writer when someone wanted to write fanfiction of my own fanfic on QQ (or at least be heavily inspired by it).
We have hints or proof that Zacian is a girlie. Is there anything definitive about Zamazenta being a dude?
>>59106202They're sisters>source?I impregnated them both.
>>59106006>>59106119my 6-year-old nephew recently became obsessed with the series, and i want both him and his mom to have a decent foundation to build off of
>>59105749What's your opinion on creating relatives for official characters? Like a sibling or even children
>>59106398Which one, the old anime or the new one?
>>59106405It's whatever, but if it's self inserting as the new relative then I cringe hard.
>>59106405>NEGLECTED NARUTO >WRONG BOY WHO LIVEDThey can be hilarous
>>59106409i meant obsessed with the franchise in generaland i started him off with the indigo league, not just for nostalgia but to again, lay a foundation
>>59106420Why not start with LGPE?
>>59106006Apparently CCfag.
>>59106398Go with LGPE; starting with PL:ZA would be a bad idea and they will ask too many questions that they have to browse the internet for guidance. Believe me, It happened to by 8 year old nephew. Plus LGPE have multiplayer support, so it's easier for you to lend a helping hand.Indio League was too early as many of the aspects were change since them (Animals were no longer a thing in the world of Pokémon), plus it would lead to a multiseasonal rabbit hole. I get going with the foundation NoA laid before you, but I don't think it's a wise choice; Go with Horizons as they may end the moment WiWa rolled around. Plus it's self contained, as opposed to Ash's adventures that relies on the game's plot.
How do you view our writefags?
>>59106727like Greek gods
>>59106727like fags who write
>>59106795>>59106822These are one and the same.
>>59106927Greek gods couldn't write, any evidence to the contrary is propaganda.
>>59106931Then how would they know they're being praised? Society could just insult them in text form.
>>59107059>most stories are about how the gods are shit heads
Is religion or tpoics about god something that your fic explores or nah?
>>59107222Yes. Buddah and Jesus both get name dropped.
>>59106795The gods must be crazy.
>>59107222It will, there's a religious cartel (the church) that runs the country and does whatever the fuck it wants and i will introduce them at the start of the chapter i'm writingI have plans for them in the future chapters
>>59107222God has appeared in more chapters than my villain at this point, so yeah probably.
>>59106463>>59106711i'm planning on getting him lgpe for his 6th birthday in june, so that's not far offin regards to the anime i think the indigo league would be close to the best springboard he could have before getting into actual games, but i want him to see what the world he's gonna jump into is like before he actually doesthat said i don't think it's too imperative to bring him all the way up to speed before winds and waves release; i want him to feel at home with the series first before he jumps into something ENTIRELY new
>>59107562What fic?
>>59106398At six years old, it might be best to just dump him in the world and let him explore it on his own.
>>59107591In my own, I think you're too concerned with everything being planned out for them for the 'best' experience. I speak from experience of wanting new fans to enjoy stuff I like 'the right way', but a very painful truth is that part of the joy of experiencing a new thing is doing so in your own way. Especially with something that is near and dear to our hearts that we experienced in very special ways, we want to recreate those experiences for others so they can know why they are so special to us. But we can't recreate our experiences for other people. They are going to have different experiences, and sometimes they will be just as special to them and sometimes they will never hit that level of specialness. The uniqueness of having our own moments that are personal to us is part of what makes those experiences special.So, I'm not saying that you can't curate their introduction to the series. I'm just suggesting that you gotta keep in mind not to be too railroady in their exploration of the series. You want give them the opportunity to explore the world of pokemon in their own adventures, not be a tour guide through a theme park. But I have faith that whatever happens you all will be fine.
>>59107639So pissed that you just succinctly ninja posted what I was trying to say here >>59107639
>>59107655>>59107651
>>59105749Are Battle Royal events staged like real wrestling?
New PoPT for those who partake. First chapter of Arc 4 ended up being more of a doozy than i first thought. The second train twin enters and makes quite the impression.https://archiveofourown.org/works/66210784/chapters/170669461
>>59107687>SpoilerDoes he have a threesome with Ian and Hyde?
While I imagine putting someone to sleep during a battle might take a while, should it be considered a win once you do?Would a hypothetical fair play rule ban the use of sleep moves that aren't self induced?
>>59107741No, that's stupid. Sleep only lasts a few "turns", so it can't be long enough that it's an automatic win.
>>59107741Any Pokémon worth their salt is taught Sleep Talk to combat against sleep and hypnosis (4 move limit is an abstraction btw). Young female trainers are also taught this move to help them combat against perverts who camp out in routes with Hypnos, it turns them into sleeping kung-fu masters.
>>59107741A sleep Pokemon is not defeated yet
>>59107755Since the species of a Pokemon is decided by the mother's species I think it makes more sense for female Pokemon to be rapists, rather than the males.I think it would hold true for human/Pokemon interbreeding as well, a woman would always give birth to human children while a female Pokemon wouldn't give birth to human children imeven if their father was a human.
>>59108002>not changing this in your ficBesides, we have a semi-precedent in Nidoran. How can they be a natural species without ditto if the progeny isn't split?
>>59108016I'm just saying, I prefer female pokerapists over male pokerapists so I'll use whatever logic to justify it.
>>59107755Or you know, just have a Chesto berry
>>59106202all pokemon are female in relation to humans
>>59108002>>59108118This is a health advisory. Pokemon biology considers all bottoms female for reproductive purposes. The resulting eggs will be the same species as the bottom.
>>59108197Isn't there a species of same sex lizards that do something like that?
>>59108197>Pokemon biology considers all tops female for reproductive purposes. The resulting eggs will be the same species as the top.>Due to this tops have been known to force themselves on human males.ftfy
>>59108763I approve but likely for very different reasons.
What are some fics that you are surprised aren't a "inspired by..." creatorfic in the fandom?Game of Champions gets frequently mentioned here as one, but surely there's more... right?
>>59108937And what are your reasons?
Are the Ultra Space Wilds (NOT the worlds where the actual Ultra Beasts are) part of the same world, or are they different worlds?
>>59109403The game's are self contradictory iirc. We're lead to believe there's a multiverse thing going on due to the Ultra Ruins and Rainbow Rocket, but it saying "You've travelled #### lightyears" also leads us to believe it's more like Minecraft's Nether and is both its own world as well as a shortcut from A to B.
>>59107741In a League battle I’d imagine in practice sleep is basically a free hit before the Pokemon wakes up.In a free-for-all with Team Rocket it’s probably as good as a KO though
>>59109435I know the Ultra Space Wilds exist seperately from the main Pokemon world.It's more like, are the Cliff World, Water World, Rocky World & Cave World of the same planet or are they four different worlds?
>>59107222I’m surprised I don’t see more worship popping up in stories.
>>59109493>"Oh my Arceus" is everywhere in fics>but people actually practicing the faith are nowhere in those ficsThe fandom is intelligently designed to annoy us
>>59109053Futa on male mpreg.
>>59109654Disgusting, I want a pokewoman to try and failing raping me so I can turn the tables on her.
>>59109489My understanding is that they are different worlds.
>>59109675I had figured, and I want to see cute boys impregnated with pokemon. But hey, you asked.
>>59107651>a very painful truth is that part of the joy of experiencing a new thing is doing so in your own way.>I'm not saying that you can't curate their introduction to the series. I'm just suggesting that you gotta keep in mind not to be too railroady in their exploration of the series>You want give them the opportunity to explore the world of pokemon in their own adventures, not be a tour guide through a theme park.i can understand this - my first game was platinum done with a fucking action replay and to be honest i wouldn't trade that experience for a traditional onethat said, i don't wanna railroad him for the sake of refining his first experience, i want him to feel welcomed into the series without him feeling too overwhelmed or getting confused - my scheme is not about making sure he doesn't GET lost, it's about making sure he doesn't FEEL lost, if you know what i meanbut on the other hand i will admit i might be a bit too excited about a series i grew up with becoming a part of someone else's growth
>>59109754Hey, no reason not to be excited. Humanity has been passing down our passions since the dawn of time. You seem like you have a good head on your shoulders so I'm sure it will all work out.
>>59109508meanwhile cause TLTD is set after Mr. Fugg's Wild Ride they all swear by the skies insteadmost do anyway, the rest see he's a FRAUD
>>59109508I almost put it there but replaced it with something else. That being said it's pretty obviously inspired by other English-speaking cartoonies using an in-lore substitute for "God" because YOUKNOWWHO thinks that anything that mentions "Oh my god!" is too mature for kid brains.
>>59105749>What are some ideas you've considered for fanfics based on other fanworks?There's this comic called "A New You" about an Eevee who evolved into a Sylveon by accident and hates it. He gets forced to dress as a cheerleader by the girls and hates that too.In my mind, an idea formed where what if there were a Ditto student in the same school who could transform into him and be his double to help him maintain his "secret identity" as the new cheerleader and also really mess with the boys who bullied him.This warped into thinking about what the life of Ditto is like. They can be anything, whatever they are at the moment is what they have chosen to be. In what way would their identity develop differently than someone who has a set form? The common factors of gender and species have no impact on their sense of self. I know that's been done already in other fanworks, but I'm not pulling any inspiration from those.I was thinking about this months before Pokopia came out. Some parts of this idea I'm now currently exploring in the fic I'm writing, but not in a way that was directly inspired by that fancomic.
>>59109489by real-world metrics, they should be distant planets
Would you fuck your chracters?
>>59109922We'll never know what's on that horizon.
>>59110129yea i would, next question
>>59110129The pokemon ones yeah.
>>59105749Fanfic where Ash gets Pikachu pregnant
>>59110133>>59110136Would you marry them forever and ever?
Officer Jenny sexo
>>59110189I would rather them marry (and loyally fuck) their fated lovers for the ones that do.But yes.
Which is the better setup for a "human living in the wilderness with no other humans" short series?>A girl falls into the Ultra Space Wilds. Eventually, an Ultra Recon Squad agent eventually finds her during his patrols towards what is meant to be the end of it and prepares to take her home, but she's been enjoying her life away from home so much she hestitates>This is a world akin to Pokopia and maybe Mystery Dungeon - Pokemon rebuilding human civilization and all - where a girl who believes she is the last surviving human pops up. Perhaps a Pokemon such as Lapras or Slowking serves as one who translates her speech.
>>59110358>Pokemon rebuilding human civilization and allYOU'LL NEVER MAKE A POKEMON OUT OF ME!
>>59110399>sees a lighthouse hidden in the sand>"Huh, the Pokemon must've built this structure that does not directly point to human ingenuity eons ago."
What kind of story structures do you like? (For writefags) Not even to imply spoiling your fic. Maybe a structure you don't use but do like.Classic Hero's Journey? A series of Three Act's? Maybe not chronological?
>>59110399to the human balls you go then
>>59110433I always use Hero's Journey.
How many pages (or I guess how many words) do you usually make Pokemon battles? I want to see if I'm making mine too short.
>>59110459I try to avoid battles, mostly because I suck writing them but also since they're not the focus of my fic
>>59110203Same, but my MC is a self insert, so i have that problem solved
>>59110433I could try and define a type of story, but it's really anything as long as it's got a happpy ending
>>59110399Does your story have a musical?
>>59110433The MC is going through a Hero's Journey but the plot itself is Arced.
>>59109874I'd read that if it was smut.
>>59109922I think it was in relevance to Ultra-wormholes; namely how far did you travel through them.
>>59110528Yours doesn't?
>>59110459Battles really depend on the pacing of the chapter they’re in. Some battles are quick and relatively painless for your POV characters’ Pokemon, sometimes they’re a back forth struggle against a wild Pokemon that can take up some time. I had a 6v6 fight that also took up two chapters by itself and was about 8-9k words total. The battle’s place and importance to the chapter as a whole will determine how long it should be. If it’s not crucial to the chapter, speed that shit up. For relatively unimportant battles, I’ve started a few chapters in the middle of a battle (usually to showcase training has occurred or it’s gonna be a slower chapter so I wanted to liven things up with a notable wild encounter).Battles can take as long as they need to take, but only if they’re written compellingly (shit rule, I know). I’ve always found that each attack, each landed blow needs to be able to alter the status quo of the individual bout. Or maybe a better way of saying it: there should be the idea present that one side’s momentum can be disrupted at any time. If it doesn’t shift momentum or the status quo, the landed blow needs to be noticeably building to that in some way, the faster the better. Also I want to note that if one side can’t really alter/disrupt the opponent’s momentum, end that quickly. Your readers will likely be able tell it’s a foregone conclusion anyways.One of these days I ought to write out my “tips and tricks to Pokemon battles by Pofag” essay. It’ll probably end up being too wordy and all over the place like most of my writing is.
>>59110686Yeah, I'm a bit insecure in my abilities to write battles, but generally I try to write then short since I don't have a mind for them. Although I try to make them frantic since they're short, as well as limit my exposition, even if I inevitably get caught up in exposition anyway.
>>59110459As many words as it takes to effectively set up the 'cool shit' of every battle. To me, battles are vehicles for 'cool shit'. There is cool shit I want to happen in the battle, and the battle is in service to this cool shit. Battles are after all one of the major selling points of pokemon, so if they are a major part of your fic then you gotta keep in mind that the battles themselves should be one of the main attractions. They aren't something you should be adding as an obligation to get out of the way, they are the reward you give your readers for reading your story. They don't all have to be grand or the focus of a chapter, but they should be fun or interesting to read.
>>59110433I tend to think more in terms of “how close is this part of the plot to its final conclusive state at this juncture” is a more helpful way to think about longer stories than act structures.I also think the Three Act structure is just a strictly better version of the kind of thing that the hero’s journey is getting at, since it’s a lot less prescriptive. I’ve got a character who would never, ever in a million years run from the call, and you can’t have that if you’re following Campbell to the letter.
>>59110433>Classic Hero's JourneyI used to like this one then "muh subversion" happened and you just know the journey wasn't worth it and le epic twist will happen
>>59111000Monomyth >>>>>>> KishotenketsuThe Hero's Journey doesn't have a twist in it. It's usually played extremely straight.Kishotenketsu, on the other hand, is why JP endings are so dogshit At least in the eyes of the western audience
>>59110358>>This is a world akin to Pokopia and maybe Mystery Dungeon - Pokemon rebuilding human civilization and all - where a girl who believes she is the last surviving human pops up. Perhaps a Pokemon such as Lapras or Slowking serves as one who translates her speech.Ever read fanfics where humans appear in NieR: Automata? Then how they suddenly have an entire harem where he fucks all androids because they just want to please the last human? Don't go there bro, like sure, the human-like group is a thing but just don't
>>59111297Hey, wish fulfillment is all in good fun as long as your honest about it. If there's an audience for Pofag's 600 pound life stories something more mainstream like a harem is bound to have one as well.
>>59111297There's nothing wrong with harems
>>59109489Ultra Wormholes connects to other worlds, so it's more or less far far you travel through it.
>>59105749Should Pokemon wear leashes?
>>59111297>Ever read fanfics where humans appear in NieR: Automata? Then how they suddenly have an entire harem where he fucks all androids because they just want to please the last human?Those fics are based. Peak wish fulfilment.
>>59111297I like the one where the guy instead tries to hide he's human as long as possible for that reason, and makes it into his 40s before being found out because he fixed up an old pod and started making fishing and philosophy livestreams which led to increased scrutinyand then he rejects all advances anywayand then the author disappeared because we can have nothing good in this world
>>59111490If they're into pet play, sure, why not?>>59111517>and then the author disappearedHe was taken away by the robots, he is now head of their harem
>>59111490only if you want to humiliate them
Would it be alright if I posted my oneshot PMD fanfic for some review? I've got a new style I love to write in but I'd love to hear more general feedback on what works and doesn't.
>>59111615Sure, why not, it's the weekend.
>>59111619Cool then, and I'll also post the accompanying art for extra (You)s. All art is done by my friend, not myself, by the way. The second one is much longer but more stylized and what I'm aiming for for in my future stories. As Above>https://rentry.co/gs-above/and So Below>https://rentry.co/gs-below/I know PMD in this thread is relatively atypical so I get if people aren't all that interested, and I appreciate whoever does read. But for those who do, please heavily critique what could be improved, especially in regards to the stylization of the prose. Thank y'all in advance.
Oops, I also I neglected to mention its a dark-fantasy re-imaging of the typical PMD setting since I know that's not everyone's forte, my bad.
>>59111682Time to save this for later
>>59111517Sounds like spacebattles if you ask me>They all look like super models and want to fuck me>But I won't because I'm morally superior
>>59111490Leashes are a form of handholding for those without the means to hold hands. Besides, a leash doesn't really hold the same degrading meaning when it's attached to a monster that could effortlessly swing you around like a ball-and-chain using only its neck strength.
>>59111682Only read as above so far. There's some repetitive phrasing here and there>The sound of loose gravel beneath hooves was an unfamiliar one for the road leading into the venerable city of Noe. Ages ago, perhaps the sound of a sawsbuck making its way towards the city of Noe would have been familiar>The duo had seen much in their journey across the new continent, but it was clear that life here had taken the greatest hit from the demonic incursions from the hellish portals that have been cropping up across the globe.But it's pretty okay, I'm not all too familair with PMD, but maybe you should also try posting it here.I'll comment again later on So Bellow.>picrelWhat a cutie. A delusional Sawsbuck and a chuuni, liar Vaporeon with breedable hips is an interesting duo.
>>59111716nah he just isn't interested it isn't even a moral thingit isn't like they were pushy either, it was more part of the humor
Bump Anyone knows any good war story?
>>59112440War as in canonical stories or war in the fanfic story itself?
>>59112628Fanfic, preferably.
>>59112628Fanfic, a real canon war ends with magic genocide and a shitty "immortality"
When it come to smut with Pokemon, do you want want your monster to be feral, anthro, gijinka, or it doesn't matter to you?
>>59112752I like humanoid pokemon and anthro, Gjinka doesn't translate well to text desu.
>>59112752Humanifications make me think 3rd worlder or inbred mouthbreather involvement. Like I'm 98% certain there's a direct correlation between aggressively off model porn and low IQ.
>>59112752Personally if I'm reading a pokephilia fanfic I expect and prefer the Pokemon to be mostly on model. Anthro Pokemon are fine in their own right, but you don't need to put beeg tiddies on a Gardevoir for it to be hot.Gijinka or moemon stuff doesn't appeal to me much at all. Most of that is because the fics I've read about the topic were garbage. I might have just been unlucky, but I can't think of one I liked.
>>59112752I lean towards gijinka a lot, but that's mostly because I prefer human sex. For Feral... I don't really feel up to the task for Pokemon.
In the latest Mastersex...>Korrina beat Sabrina>Korrina then beats Serena after awakening her Arc Suit>Sabrina beats Chuck, Brawly, Maylene and Bea back to back>Then also beats Riley>Sabrina wakens her Arc Suit off-screen>Arc Sabrina then beats Arc KorrinaI'm biased, so I wanna ask for a second opinion, but Sabrina definitively comes out looking better here, right?
Running into a funny dilemma. I had a high level trainer-character reveal he has a Master Ball, the intention was that he had a Legendary, but most readers think he’s going to catch the Legendary he was referencing when he revealed it (he was trying to explain he could counter the Legendary being referenced). It seems like a good misdirection with him having an occupied Master Ball and not addressing it until necessary.Would it be better to leave the ambiguity there or to get the specifics out? The MC will have to fight the Legendary in the ball
Also, for the Aurakeks.A crumb for relationship between Aura and Psychic powers.
>>59113053>>59113053
>>59113050>pre arc korrina beats pre arc sabrina>pre arc sabrina beats every other fighting gym leader>post arc sabrina beast post arc korrinawhere's the logic other than selling gachas to the whales
>>59112752It should be on model, with a little artistic license (necessary given pokemon are never depicted with sex characteristics). I can live with fat garde-tats, but it very much irritates me when a more animalistic pokemon is fully anthropomorphized. Takes away the whole draw of them being magical, intelligent monsters with unique biologies.
>>59113062>where's the logicCharacters powerlevels can change after their training arcs.Korrina won the first round because she had more Mega mastery than Sabrina. That gave her the edge. Sabrina's training was also on mastering Mega'ing.
>>59113065Oh yeah, and Sabrina only Mega'd against Riley. And she fought Bea last meaning she was not at 100%. In case you want some Galarfraud slander.
>>59113065I mostly find it a bit hard to believe that Korrina is that much stronger than every other fighting gym leader. This had to be paired with some new ultra rare costume for Korrina or something.
>>59113082it's because she appears in ZA DLC so they had to hype her up
>>59113050So why exactly is Arceus going around giving power ups to almost everyone? Like what's the deal, they're gonna face someone above multiverse conqueror Giovanni?>>59113053>>59113054So they're really the same thing? Guess I'm going for some force vibe then, less gay of course
>>59113082Aside from what she got in Mega Dimensions because I think it takes mastersex devs around 6 months to put an event out, I don't think any fighting type gym leaders have been hyped up as strong trainers (other than Bea being one of your opponents in the galar elite four replacement) so Korrina being the strongest one as a trainer because of her being the mega evolution successor isn't that weird in my opinion. The weirder thing this establishes is that Korrina has never met Olympia imo.
>>59113082Popular characters get favored, it's that simple
Or maybe power levels never make sense and trying to scale the characters is retarded.
>>59113082She's the Mega Guru. That's a pretty good upscale.
>>59113052Nah, fuckin surpriise'em.
>>59113101>>So why exactly is Arceus going around giving power ups to almost everyone? Like what's the deal, they're gonna face someone above multiverse conqueror Giovanni?No reason yet.Sync Stones Ultimate started to appear in Pasio, possibly related to space-time rifts, and Arceus is like "show me thy bond" so now people are trying to prove themselves worthy of Arceus, all while Volo is egging everyone one since he wants to have a salty runback at Arceus again.
>>59113177>titles make you stronger
>>59113212but a explosive vest does
>>59112787but gijinkas are canon in at least two Pokemon mediums
>>59113212The title doesn't make you strong, what you did to earn that title is what made you strong.
>>59113295Did no one else bother with Mega Evolution in the mastersex universe? Weird.
>>59113303did you forget that Korrina's grandpa is the descendant of the first Trainer to Mega Evolve a Pokémon?
>>59113306How would that benefit her? It's not like Z moves where your dance skills and understanding of hakuna matata ohana matter.
>>59113313she's the current Mega Avatar
>>59113313she's from a special bloodline that has affinity with megaevolution
>>59113313she was fated to eat the mythical mega-mega fruit
>>59113411>After One Hundred Thousand Mega Evolutions, I'm Invincible! Human Men Only Affect The Speed I Activate My Keystone!
I have recently started lurking this thread and got into reading fanfiction again after a long break. Caught up with my first threadfic, which was POPT. Interesting premise, with one of the only instances of good faction writing I've seen in fanfic. Ian's team has character, with Wartortle/Blastoise being my favourite. Ironically Sawsbuck feels the least fleshed out of the six, despite his massive importance to the story. Human characters are generally good, even if they don't quite match my read from the games. I feel like I never really got sold on Tupp actually being Ian's best bro for some reason. Maybe they needed more quiet moments to shoot the shit. Decent prose. Run-on sentences were probably my most consistent gripe, but they weren't common enough to really shit me off. Plot is very good, doesn't get too big too quickly and really draws you in with consistent revelations and developments. Could do with less relationship drama, but w/e.Overall: held my attention more than BoC/10
>>59113313She's actually from another planet where the strongest mega warrior race lived
>>59113313Her father died sealing Mega Ninetails inside of her.
>>59113463New thread reader? Tempted to shill my works.
>>59113463I like Spice and Fox but it seems to cater towards the a different type of reader, still I'd recommend it.
>>59113463Thank you very much for reading and for the kind words anon. BoC was a massive inspiration for me (mostly the fights), so that really hits home for me.>Run on sentences and more quiet moments with TuppNoted, anon!
>>59113424Peak
>>59112752On model or you don’t really love her
You know what, writefags, shill me your shit!
>>59113779Sure, why not. It's still pretty short right now, but I finally published the first three chapters of Pokemon Mahogany after working on them on and off for a while.It's about a thinly veiled sioc going on a pokemon adventure with his childhood friend and love interest Clair in a pokemon world mostly based off the games.
Pokémon eat Pokémon btw
>>59113779Sick. I've got two going on right now.Crystal Lighthttps://archiveofourown.org/works/63406333A fantasy story about the knight Wol, his partner Blastoise, and their friends as they explore the land and try to uncover the mystery of a tragedy that befell their friend, a prophecy of the ancient evil behind it, and the legendary Warriors of Light. A retelling of Final Fantasy 1's story but as a pokemon story. Don't let the crossover nature scare you away, FF1 has such barebone plot and characters that you don't need to know anything about FF to enjoy it. Final Fantasy games don't share settings, and FF1 was pretty much an unlicensed Dungeons and Dragons game. So if D&D Pokemon sounds interesting then give it a look.PokeNormal: Files from the Celadon Extranormal Detective Agencyhttps://archiveofourown.org/works/66247705A horror themed detective comedy following former conman turned assistant detective Tobio and his excitable Poochyena as they try to protect Josalyn, a girl who is being hunted by ghosts, and her Raticate. The CEDA specializes in paranormal incidents, but somehow the detective that Tobio works for has been erased from his and everyone else's memories. Explores a lot of the 'weird' aspects of old gen 1, set in Kanto roughly 30 years after the events of Red and Blue. Horror vibes, but much more comedy focused.
>>59113779Ooh, I'll throw mine inIn Mine Ownhttps://archiveofourown.org/works/59572648/chapters/151934926An adventure/mystery fic set 9 years after X & Y, following a boy named Kuzey Ferris, who along with his Charcadet "Crest" moves back from Paldea to his family's old chateau outside of Lumiose City after his parents, a pair of genetic researchers, vanish. Fresh after moving in with his aunt, Kuzey crosses paths with two girls who share the same face, yet have no memory of who they are or where they came from - and are pursued by cloaked men. In trying to help his strange new friends, Kuzey is pulled into a tangling mystery of the origin of these girls, the disappearance of his parents, and a king who would remake the world, "In Mine Own."
>>59114060>king
>>59113834Do you have a single fact to back that up?
>>59114060>genetic researchersMewTwo genes? Oh wait, it should be Zygarde genes
>>59114120Kuzey's/the MC love interest is more likely to have pokemon genes, Kuzey may have been a case of his mother artificially impregnating herself with a clone of Kuzey's dead uncle.
>>59114136>clone of Kuzey's dead uncle.That seems like a pretty big leap from 'a crazy person thought he looked similar' but I'm not caught up yet.
>>59114149>Tfw I thought of the clone thing because Kuzey was the spitting image of Hugo and his parents were genetic researchersWould’ve made the title being “In Mine Own” even more intriguing but im also fucking insane so it works both ways.
could you clone a dead person by putting their bones in a fossil revival machine?
>>59114275Yes, but they will be revived as a rock type pokehuman.
>>59114319I can live with that
>>59114324What have they done to you Mr President?
Hpw would your characters react to your comments/commenters?
>>59114384Not mine but, I don't think Will from Spice and Fox would like being called a cuck. He also wouldn't know who Gordie is, but since he's bisexual I don't think Will would be that weirded out, depending on his taste in men.
>>59114384Would pay to see Hyde’s reaction to the “Has Ian fucked Hyde yet?” guy. Also to see Ian’s reaction to CCanon’s legendary crashout on Chapter 8.
>>59114384Kuzey would be deeply fucking annoyed by everybody agreeing he's a coward, and especially over all the praise Celot gets. He's evil, he's a kidnapper! Stop saying he's cool!Vi would eat up the adoration and post a bikini pic on her socials to amp up the thirst.
>>59114481I'm more interested in how Kuzey would react to the speculation around his birth and Oberon being his missing aunt.
>>59113779Spice and Foxhttps://archiveofourown.org/works/21307454/chapters/50740379A mostly slice of life (turned ESCALATION) fic that follows William and Fennekin through the rain-locked region of Hokubu. Delayed starting his trainer journey until nearly adulthood, the story follows as their bond develops through frontier misadventure, terrible weather, and various interactions with the local villain team. Kind of meandering through the first handful of chapters but people have said good things about the comfiness.
>>59114488I don't think he's ready for those kind of revelations. He hasn't even figured out who he's looking at in the mirror. God I am so excited for when you guys get to read what's really going on, I need to buckle down and finish this chapter.
>>59113779Was going to wait till I finally uploaded the new chapter buthttps://archiveofourown.org/works/63818623/chapters/163647754
>>59114460Reminds me I need to get caught up on PoPT, I guess for humors sake I'll have to post my reaction to whatever happens as well.
>>59114481>Kuzey would be deeply fucking annoyed by everybody agreeing he's a coward,He absolutely deserves it though.
>>59114537It's also Emma, Vi, and Sycamore's fault, none of them should have been sleeping alone when Kuzey got ambushed and almost murder raped.
>>59114539>Kuzey got ambushed and almost murder raped.Deserved that too.
>>59114539>>59114542IMOanon, please make smut of this, I'm beggin you bro!
Random question but do we know how long do Pokémon live? It's just that the Pokopia Ditto got me curious since it should be hundreds or even thousands of years old
>>59113779not the author but I post it here because it annoys the authorTo Live is to Dreamhttps://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/to-live-is-to-dream-sinnoh-pokemon-trainer-quest-now-having-escaped-the-eterna-forest.979188/A character heavy journey quest (ie people vote on actions) that follows a homeless 10 year old orphan as she yearns for something greater than base survival.It's set in a more grounded take on Sinnoh, a flawed utopia hiding some serious rot in Jubilife. BoC is a major inspiration for the worldbuilding.Give it to the end of Ferry Point to win you over. It's extremely character growth centric, and you mostly see surface stuff before then.tl;dr: feral gremlin street child learns she can be something greater than an urchin
>>59113779>>59114869it also takes full advantage of being a questthis can be a good and bad thing for uswe're currently brawling over a fucking SUNKERN
>>59114723Some species are confirmed to live longer than humans, others don't have a listed lifespan. So it's on the author to decide.
>>59114869I enjoy it but it's a pain to listen to if you mostly use text to speech because the quest actions clog up a couple hundred thousand words across the current draft. Otherwise, would rec.
>>59115434AI was a mistake
>>59115516nta but I use good old microsoft david for my text to speech needs, no "AI" bullshittery involved.
>>59115533I can't even be madhow do you live like that?
>>59115516Nigga audiobooks have been a thing for decades.If anything AI is a boon for this since now you can make it so your waifu is the one reading it for you.
>>59113303Knowing how to Mega =/= Mastering Mega.Whatever vague anime bullshit "mastering" it entails.In short, stop being a pedantic nitpicky akchually autist.
>>59115561It's not as bad as you might think. Sure it gets some pokemon names wrong, but it's easy to tell what it means and honestly it's kinda funny when it does something like calling Glameows "Glaymohs".Then again I grew up on microsoft sam machinima shitposts so maybe I'm just built different. Either way, at least I know Microsoft David isn't burning down forests to sing his beautiful song to me.
>>59115573>Whatever vague anime bullshit "mastering" it entails.But what is she improving on? Even the simplest shonen tells you what they're improving. If there's nothing that needs improving then just turning it on without going berserk is the end game.
>>59115603Nta but, I don't know, synchronization? Because unless ME uses the trainer's aura there's really nothing to master
>>59115637What? What do you mean, nothing to master? A mega evolution pretty much changes a pokemon into a whole new pokemon, you've got to master how to properly utilize the mega evolution in battle.
>>59115603ZA puts mega on a timer so trying to extend that for as long as possible would be ideal.Or you can try "pulsing" the mega evo. For example, you could have Garchomp turn Mega off for a speed boost and then turn it back on for the attack boost.
>>59115651Has that ever been a thing outside the Korrina arc in XY tho? Like in PokéSpe X didn't have to train to master it
>>59115603>>59115651Again, could you stop being a pedantic nitpicky akchually autist?It's vague unstated vibes anime bullshit. We're on a fanfic thread. Come up with your own fanfic reason if you're that dissatisfied there's no real given reason.Good lord.
>>59115663Some of the Mega is bad and hurtful actually mention how those harmful side-effects are the result of botched megaing.
>>59115659That's badass, I love it when in shows/manga the hero will detransform to avoid an obstacle or something and then turn back on a dime
>>59115659I see someone's got the Prince of All Saiyans on the mind.
>>59115665>We're on a fanfic threadFucking this, I'm tired of having to read the same shit everywhere.Make your villains evil pieces of shit, ignore Kusaka and Ohmori's dindu noffing dramaIf your character is attractive there's nothing wrong with multiple persons being attracted to themYour starter is a popular mon? Who fucking cares, what's with the shitmon obssession to hammer how different is the MC to everyone else?
>>59115698Based, people need to stop asking if they should do something and ask how they should do something.
>>59115698B-But then the literally who trannies on SB will call me a pedo and hurt my feelings :c
>>59115665>We're on a fanfic thread. Come up with your own fanfic reasonThat's what I'm doing by poking the nest you bellsprout.
>>59115708But SB loves pedos
On the subject of mastersex, how would you feel about the more normal battle mechanics unique to mastersex being used? i.e. things like zones, rebuff, break, move up next, stronger versions of x items (this is technically in the main series but no one remembers wonder launcher anyways), or items that set field effects rather than things like sync moves, buddy moves, or arc suits
>>59115729Are any of those different from just treating battles as real things? Zones sounds like environmental factors, rebuff/break sound like clashes of sorts, move up sounds like repositioning, etc.
>>59115729Most of those are too "gameplay mechanics to spice it up" to be good for use.Sync Moves are just not-Z Moves and Buddy Moves don't even have a explanation at all whatsoever. They're 120% a purely gameplay mechanics.I think only Sync Stones and Arc Suits are well defined and clear enough with established lore and story to be used in general without too much trouble or having to do reverse logic on the concepts to come up with a definition for them.
>>59115665What the fuck is your problem? I'm just pointing out a fact. Even in a meta sense, when playing the games in a competitive scene knowing what a mega's capabilities are utilizing them effectively is a skillset.
>>59115757>What the fuck is your problem?That you're fucking retarded.>I'm just pointing out a fact.Yes, we know there's no real defined reason. I stated as such myself, too. For the third time, it's just anime bullshit.Difference being is that, again, for the third time, I'm not acting like a pedantic cunt for stating the obvious and like if everyone in the room is a retard for not being able to notice it (everyone noticed it, it's just not worth mentioning and not that much of a big deal).>Even in a meta sense, when playing the games in a competitive scene knowing what a mega's capabilities are utilizing them effectively is a skillset.Good job. You were able to bullshit a possible reason. Now you can expand upon it rather than keep being a snorting redditor.
>>59114451>but since he's bisexualWait, what? Did I miss something in the story?
>>59115843>My magnum opus was a large, printed canvas of a suggestively posed Machoke facing the power rack. >Machoke-wave blasted from the speakers on my phone as I lifted the weights, electronic meme track bouncing off the walls of the Pokemon Center's gym room. It played at a volume that I'd only ever dare play while alone.>I met her gaze, unflinching. My mind flashed back to the suggestively posed Machoke poster on my bedroom's wall.>Machoker [OP]>Work Harder is great. Replace the UUUUUH-UH with variations of 'Machoke-choke-choke' and suggestive, breathy 'Machoke~?' and you pretty much have how I pictured it.Hmm, I wonder if Will has a thing for a certain species of masculine pokemon?
>>59115859Maybe he just thinks Machokes are cool, anon. You are reading into things too much.
>>59115867Maybe, but is the same will who took it up the ass from Gordie while Braxien watched. There's no straight expnation for that.
>>59115871They were just really good friend.
>>59115744I was thinking about it as more of a way to add more to battles and bring them closer to treating them like a real thing without going all the way. To give you an idea of the things I referenced, zones are field effects for types that don't have a weather or terrain that boosts the power of their moves, rebuff is a status-like effect that either makes moves of a certain type not as effective when raised or more effective when lowered, break is a temporary debuff that makes physical or special moves stronger against the affected pokemon, and move up next is an effect that increases the power of a pokemon's next physical, special, or sync move that can stack up to 10 (I don't think this one would translate well).
>>59115871Sometimes bros just sodomize bros. Nothing homo about it.
>>59115867YOU JUST KNOW
Mahogany anon, chapter 2 definitely started giving me the vibe I think is mandatory for journeyfics, which idk how to describe it other than to just post this comfy ass vid.https://youtu.be/BoZ0Zwab6Oc?feature=shared
>>59116121It's just the OG adventure feeling before the franchise became standarized, sanitized and babified. Where it's not your journey anymore, a call to adventure, a coming of age, but a adult supervised tourist hallway. Nothing all that crazy, well, perhaps it is nowadays, specially so for all the zoomers and newfags who didn't grew up with the real Tajiri™ vibe on the franchise.
>>59116121Thanks, the Anon who provided me with an idea for a footrace really ended up helping me tie that chapter together and get the vibe I wanted.>>59116155Yeah, I'm just really nostalgic for Crystal and the early anime and wanted to get something properly adventurous. It feels like newgenners are also hamstrung since without the limited graphics to let the mind run wild with the environment, Game freak is limited by occasionally odd art direction, and messy 3d environments, which really hold back the environment being a character unto itself. A core part of any journey in mind.
I just got done writing the same scene twice from the perspective of the audience and then the performer.I didn't want the actual description of the performance to get padded out by what the character on stage was thinking and feeling, but those aspects are thematically important for the story I'm writing.So I had to turn back the clock to fit them both in.I'm not sure if I like actually having to say "turning back the clock" in prose or not though. I'll have to sleep on it and see if a better idea comes to mind.
>>59116278And Mahogany-anon, I didn’t want to drop UB spoilers for PoPT in the comment section but I’ll do it here cuz I’m so far away from getting to UBs but I’m hyped for the idea I have in mind. Aether Paradise was abandoned because Aether accidentally made an equivalent of an Ultra Storm magnet so there are constant Ultra Storms there and the place is overrun with UBs roaming around the premises like a massive house of horrors.
>>59116393I came.
Eat or die
>>59115694He's just sayan
>>59116677Post fics with vore so i can filter them
Let's play a game.>https://littlerootdreams.com/custom_pokedex.htmlIf your fic is set in a region or area that is not of an existing region, create a Dex for it!
do you ever read a fic so badly written you suspect it's AI?
>>59116947If something's that badly written or seems like AI it's usually an instant drop for me, and I say that as someone who reads Xianxia trash.Only exception I made was "Bunnies, Land Sharks" because I was morbidly curious how rough the AI's romance would get. Didn't get much further than halfway before I had to give up from the romance cliches.
Chapter 21 of Spice and Fox is out. Next one on the 15th, though it might end up delayed.https://archiveofourown.org/works/21307454/chapters/213698421
>>59116947I usually just look for em dashes and "it's not just x, it's y" or descriptions that use "x, y, and z"Makes me feel bad sometimes since there's a chance that they just write like that. Slim if written post 2024 but still.
>>59116990>Will is retarded alongside being bisexual>Soren is smarter than himNTR proceeding smoothly, unfortunately he beat up Soren which is -1 NTR point so this chapter is only a net of +1 NTR.
>>59117154I've been using em dashes since I was but a wee child, I'll not be stopping because of a few clankers
>>59116371>Concerned about padding out a scene with descriptions>Does the exact same scene a second time just from a different POVAnon, are you retarded?
>>59116371If only the performer's perspective is that important, why include the audience. You can always describe their reaction if that's important, even if the crowd has characters that are normally PoV just signpost them by having the performer take notice of them.
>>59116371>I just got done writing the same scene twice from the perspective of the audience and then the performer.That was unironically one of the biggest complaints about the One Piece anime, it's annoying to be honest.I was reading a novel where that happened and I dropped it because what's the point? Glazing your MC? Random quirky explanations?
>>59117697>>59117616>>59117803One section is focused on the performance itself and the reactions to it, the other section is focused on what was happening behind the scenes backstage to make it happen.The performer is the MC but the audience are also part of the main character group. I wanted to give them some spotlight, but writing the perspectives together felt like it lacked proper character focus.
>>59117616>Doing the exact same scene multiple times just from different POVsOnly works in a Rashomon like story
>>59117284I use em dashes too but I still treat them as an early warning sign that AI might be involved since they weren't that common in fanfics until recently. I'll look ahead to verify and if the vibes are off then so am I.
>>59117859In proper performance fashion, there should be people bustling before the performance getting everything ready, fixing issues, encountering issues, building suspense, etc. Protagonist can see this from their own eyes.During the performance, they could be totally locked in and only noticing the audience if there is gasps or murmurs or similar. An audience member that they know can just give them audience impressions via dialogue after. That might be a more genuine way to do things.
>>59116863I wanna make a dex relevant to the story instead of the region, but i'm worried that the order of the mons will give spoilers.But hey, if once i'm done with the story anyone wants to adapt my fic into a romhack the dex will be ready at least! you're welcome btw, but you gotta add sex to it
What porn tags do your OCs search
A 4chan post ended up as a Hollywood movie...this proves wasting your time on 4chan instead of writing or producing your own shit is worth it btw.
>>59118512Pokemon backrooms fic when?
>>59118536That's literally just pokemon mystery dungeon but with an extra dosage of TRAPPED.
>>59118536It's called Glitch City you philistine. And it already has shown up in my fic.
how do you handle people not being able to write dialogue correctly?>"character A's text," said character A, to which character B said, "character B's text."its so fucking annoying! separate your dialogue!
>>59118782Once you read Moby Dick you get used to it. You should probably read Moby Dick anyways it's a good book.
>>59118782I simply do not read if they do that.
>>59118536You could probably find some shitty pokemon creepypasta that does that exact thing
It's the ragebait day. I can't wait for a billion fics on my follow list to suddenly rise from the dead, only to post a shitpost chapter, and then go back to being abandoned
I can feel it bros, most will use the hoverboard in fanfics
>>59119269I think fics would rather just let the wheels work as wheels.
>>59119221Fuck now I need to do this with a fic I haven't updated in a while.
>>59118136>I wanna make a dex relevant to the storyI'm kinda-sorta doing that? Where the non-native Starter that my character brings to the first place is part of it. Of course, like how later Dexes split based on DLC & Biomes, I'm doing the same.My MC's starter is a Legendary, so I'm wondering if I put it at the back because Legendary or at the front because starter.>spoileris it a humansex fic or a pokesex fic?I myself had considered doing the same for my fic albeit some liberties like what a remake or a Legends game is to the original, for a different experience. But maybe some other time.
>>59119431>My MC's starter is a LegendaryDefinitively at the start, either n°1 or n°10 after the other starters (if you picked 3 mons with 3 evo stages, non conventional starters are fun)I wanna say, the most fitting place would be at 000 like victini in the unova dex... if the site can of course, because to me it looks like it can't.
Would you say professional trainers have stronger bodies than civilians who only keep their Pokémon as pets and contestfags?
>>59119581Yeah, it's cooler that way.I've tied it to the Bond phenomena; the stronger your pokemon and the tighter your bond with them, the more kickback you might receive. Not enough to be on par with them, but enough to bully lowbies and human civvies.Helps explain a lot of anime feats too
>>59119581Oh definitely. Even ignoring the endurance that getting struck by Pokemon all the time brings, there's still the obligatory exercise that adventuring and training brings.
Has Araquanid ever been in ocean environments or is it solely a river & pond Pokemon like real Diving Bell Spiders?
>>59119621I think any Water-type Pokémon can live in either saltwater or freshwater without issue
>>59115516>AIRetard do you seriously not know how audiobooks and ereaders work
>>59119635yeah they pretty much universally use AI models to generate voices nowadays, even wholly locally run versionsVoicebank: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ECFxAoURWBoAI: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ph9IyU3jikceven the vocaloids are AI voices now, go look up Synthesizer V or Vocaloid 6; all the olds ones like Teto and Miku got swapped over to models based on those instead of the old voicebank approachhere, you can compare old Teto to new Teto in this song, check 3:20 for the really old versionhttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sqK-jh4TDXo
>>59119431>is it a humansex fic or a pokesex fic?humansex is soooo last millennium, get with the program grandpa!
>MC gets stronger than everyone else by "putting in hard work" and "being friends with their pokemon">we're supposed to pretend no one else is doing this tooIf I had a dollar for every fic like this I'd be rich enough to afford a ps3 with exactly one game.
>>59119829you forgot the mewtwo genes
>>59119829Why do you think there'll always be greater hurdles? Why one cannot forever be the very best?
>>59119781Pokemon are our FRIENDS. With benefits.
Fics that have a funny captcha
Fics that have a creatively bankrupt april fools and if the federal government owns a site at least they should out the effort to make fun things happen every once in a while
>>59119829I don't usually like writing champion type characters, but when I do I like to make them at least a little unhinged. e.g. uses a polyphasic sleeping schedule and pokemon rotation to ensure that at least one pokemon on the team is training at literally all hours of the day.
>>59120011Fics that are written by gay newfags
>>59120159 See >>59113779
>>59120255lel
>>59119829But that's how it works in the games and manga, no idea about the anime to be fair.Anyways Pokémon fans like when their PC/MC is the strongest ever by doing the minimum or some dark shit nobody "knew" like with foxfucker, strugling? I'm sure someone here already wrote an underdog and got people shitting on them compared to the average power fantasy MC, blame shonenshit with its fake underdogs.
>>59120879>I'm sure someone here already wrote an underdog and got people shitting on them compared to the average power fantasy MCYes, our resident cuck... wait, I think we have several now. Our resident humiliation ritual fic.
>>59120879PoPt, Prokenormal, and Spice and Fox all for the description. Although of the three two of them are regularly slandered.
>>59120902
Pofag is the CEO of HUMILIATION RITUAL.Spicefag has a Phd in Cuckoldry (also excellent in monsterfucking).IMOfag is a disgusting creature of lesbomancy and femdom. Also snuff.PokeNormalfag I haven't read, neither his Crystal Light. (Maybe (in the former) they fuck ghosts?)CCfag I haven't read. (Maybe fucks mentally ill retards?)Penfriendsfag I haven't read (I think monsterfucking?)Saulfag has a bachelors degree in Humilaition Ritual.Mahoganyfag is into fvcking dragons (also Sneasels/Weaviles.)
>>59121143Is there a snuff scene waiting for me in IMO?Mahogany would be better if that parenthetical were true
>>59121155No that was shitposting, but it almost gets there with Kuzey lmao.
>>59120928Nobody shits on pokenormal though, I only write likable main characters.
>>59121155>SpoilerPerchance a threesome would suffice?
Fuck, look at those hips manWhere are my Sabrina stories? Fuck...
>>59121227be the change you want to see, anon
>>59121227Sabrina will appear in my fic eventually. She’ll have dark goggles on because she gauged her eyes out to enhance her psychic abilities.
>>59121251And she still jobs to Missingo. What a fraud.
Any fluffy fics here? Feelgood anything?
>>59120928Kuzey from IMO inversely is stated to have the book smarts to be an elite trainer, but he's held back by lack of experience and being too hesitant to seize on advantages.
>>59121290You're right, man three out of four of our underdogs attract slander.
>>59121251Wouldn't it have been easier to take a page out of X-Men and have her train martial arts or something? It works there, even Charles knows Kung Fu
>>59121303Charles is also a rapist and a shitty father.
>>59121304But a powerful psychic, also that applies to Emma too and almost every mutant because they're pieces of shit that the first thing they do is to have a massive orgy in their new home almost every day, and while that isn't the problem, it was proved that they're bad people at their core, would abuse their powers like crazy and do hate everyone that isn't a mutant.
>>59121251Mine will mind break herself to keep THEM away. It won't work.
>>59121143You're gonna have to amend that list, add Sabrina torturer to IMO and Pokenormalfag. Sabrina is only close to appearing in their fics unless Giovanni also took her to Alola alongside Surge in PoPT.
>>59121303I need her twisted and corrupted specifically.>>59121317Delicious.
>>59121330You've misidentified me, I haven't mentioned what I'm gonna do to MY Sabrina in IMO.
>>59121430>Clair is saved in exchange for Sabrina being sacrificedAnd the monkey's paw curls.
Is Sabrina going to be another Squirtle?
>>59121143Read my fic so you can properly shit talk it.
>>59121461Now we really do need a threadfic Bingo, that way Sabrina torturer can be put alongside Squirtle.
>>59121251couldn't she just use a Twisted Spoon?
>>59119899I just think it's boring if there's not a reason for it. Being the only person to try gravity training or balancing nutrition is like the bare minimum but some fics don't even do that much.
>>59121543>he hasn't replaced his eyes with spoons
Just punch harder, that never fails
>>59121836Good old punch harder. Never fails.
>>59121836kinda
>>59121862Can he even use aura? If not he should shut the fuck up
>>59121877His innate tardation is so powerful that aura bends to his will without him needing to command or even be aware of it.
>>59121886But did he ever tank an hyperbeam to the face? Rocket grunt can
>>59121836guns are better
>>59121921What if you got a gun with punch-powered bullets
>>59120879I'm sure that's just Pokemon fanfiction being largely written by young, inexperienced writers and/or autists. Half of them are probably Sonichu-lite IRL.
>>59122040You would think that, yes, then you read modern japanese stuff with "le WEAKEST but ACTUALLY STRONGEST" and LitRPG
Next thread should use a picture of Sabrina given how all the writedaga are planning on torturing her.
>>59122088>writedagaI don't know why this sounds so funny to me.
>>59122088Sabrina's FRAUD status?
>>59122133I just misspelled writefags
page 10, new thread>>59122142
>>59122143I know, but the 'daga' is just goofy!
>>59121258Dimensional penfriends, but i'm not that far into the story yet.Although something lurks into the future i planned, even with the promise of a happily ever afterHave a link!https://archiveofourown.org/works/62970124
