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Within our Nation Arc 11
It really starts off with a bang this time with after another timeskip, Sabrina's gym trainers beginning their assault on the Rocket Hideout. TR does unsurprisingly well at first but Sabina's gym trainers manage to free her pretty early in the battle but for some reason they didn't kill her pokemon despite that being a thing TR does. Honestly I' still kind of disappointed we didn't get a scene of Tsuyu's pokemon being killed. Well due to that she ends up holding her own against Jessie and James's mega Swoobat and Malamar. Dabi goes to town on some people with a Megamachamp and I'm surprised he doesn't manage to catch any bodies here Jessie and James bring out their whole teams but still don't manage to touch Sabrina despite her.
I think one of her gym trainers does die, although the text doesn't specify if Casca actually kills her hostage. Either way her Dugtrio goes down allowing the psychics to teleport out but Dabi follows them back to the gym. Sabrina continues to do well until the loser with the shadow pokemon re-activates his psychic dampener, which promptly explodes, but that gives them enough time to dogpile Sabrina who's forced to flee leaving after telling Hoshi the obvious truth that the Johtonian conspiracy was all in his head.

Oh yeah, earlier before that Jessie and James explain their plan to reveal the original Kanto-Johto peace treaty, which will...? Do something I guess we already know that Johto isn't up to anything so I don't really care, besides their Free the League guys who represented Team Rocket's views within acceptable mainstream politics already disbanded so it's not like they have any legitimacy if, and big if, they both beat Clair, and their attack on the league is successful.
Even Hoshi knows giving the average TR grunt any amount of authority is a terrible idea, although he dismisses it because it's a smart thought and he's very dedicated to being dumb.

>>59625398
After the attack they find Doc Hypno with all his teeth and pokemon knocked out, before beginning their assault on Saffron City itself with the help of a bunch of Karate men ala Boxer Rebellion. Although I'm surprised a huge ass explosion didn't already set off the city in a panic and it took the TR and Karate forces moving down mainstreet to do that.

Anyways once the action starts it cuts to Puce's parents, who are pretty dedicated to make sure the one who caused all of this pays. Cue Hoshi being punched in the face.

Anyways the raid goes worse then they planned, they couldn't hold the pokecenter so were forced into the old dojo, and despite repelling the Military Police temporarily they took a lot of casualties, although no named characters, only mobs. After that Hoshi helps Jessie and James plan for the attack on the League.

Also apparently Silph Co.'s creation of the Porygon destroyed the internet. Lol. Well that's my assumption. Clair vague posts about Cilph not rebbling, which means they will rebel, and they created the Jet and Pearl Ball so they seem to be antagonists. From there it's not too big of a leap to assume the creators of the Porygon were involved in the creation of Porygon.exe and wanting to blow up the internet seems like something a villain group might want to do for whatever reason.

Of course Hoshi's plan involves getting more people who know and cared about him hurt, with the team eventually running into Nerine and the guy she knocked out who she's now working with. I would've insinuated their banging as well since that'd be funny but lol.

Puce thinking that she'll only be committing treason if she loses is funny, no one is going to be accepting of Team Rocket as the new rulers of the country. The Inner Ministry is right about that.

>>59625400
Anyways Puce is such a bad tainer it's funny, she even brought Nerrine's pokemon along expecting them to listen to her when she's the one who tried to strangle Nerine. So of course that bites her in the ass, eventually forcing Hosho to deal with Nerine. She escapes, almost killing one of Hoshi's pokemon and dropping a truth bomb on him at the same time:
>You’re a two-bit gangster with delusions, Hoshi Mutsu
At least someone said it.
I still would have liked to see Nerine get killed brutally, that'd really fuck up Puce and I'd love the reaction to Hoshi doing it too. They also fight a bunch of cops.


The interlude is a bunch of gambit pile ups, other than that Blaine is trying to stop Bill. You go old man.

>>59625394
In my dice rolls I remember I pulled Xatu which I would have introduced as my Renegade Angel analog instead of the immense and terrible flesh for a desert themed pokemon.

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Do they do the haka in Hokubu?

>>59625615
XRA Xatu is funnier but not as sex as a Maractus.

>>59625617
Natives are all dedge so probably not. The natives in the north fishing villages are all transplants from Alola (and elsewhere) so they wouldn't.

>>59625633
>New Zelander creates his own pokemon region based off his homeland
>Genocides the natives and thoroughly erases the haka
It's like poetry.

>>59625398
>>59625400
>>59625405
Whatever WONfag is paying you it’s not enough.

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An early release of the second nsfw omake for Mahogany because I want some feedback for later:https://rentry.org/MahoganyLemon2
Read, if you dare.

Also if you were looking forward to pokefucking I have to apologize, blame Pofag.

>>59625820
He pays me in attention and answers to my odd questions.
That reminds me, I came up with an analogy regarding WoN.
You know how in PoPT innocuous world building details like Galar's corruption and Leon doping will just exist to flesh out the world? Well, if that happened in Within our Nation then Chairman Rose would show up, say something about how Eternatus is a giant that predated Arceus' creation of the Cosmos, and its corpse was used to create the Poison-type, and then he'd re-enact the climax of pokemon Ghost Grey's postgame.

>>59625394
>>59625615
Going off this logic I rolled a freaking Swirlix, so Tobio would be still have a canine partner in a sense. But it would not be as effective at dealing with ghosts.

What makes a Pokemon an evolution or prevolution? I could just let this be if the Eviolite wasn't a thing, but clearly the Eviolite is reacting to something.

E.g. what makes it so that Tandemaus can use the Eviolite but Maushold cannot? What of Slowpoke and its evolutions?

>>59626267
I vaguely remember Mega Evolution lore mentioning there was some difference in the energy of a fully evolved pokemon, and its because of that difference that unevolved pokemon can't mega evolve. I can't remember what it was though.
But I wouldn't recommend wasting your time putting too much accuracy into the fine details Gamefreak's canon. Either don't address it or make up your own logic, you'll have a much less painful time that way.

>>59626267
That's a pretty good question, anon. Its one that many Pokemon Professors dedicate entire lifetimes studying and I doubt we'll ever seen some grand unified answer that works for every Pokemon.
Though without a sample of my own to verify this theory, this is the best I, (you), and we, the theoretical isekaixenobiologists, can think of:
In organic Pokemon, an Eviolite is a thyroid like organ that does two things.
1. Increases stem cells production.
2. Reprograms stem cells into specialized "armour" cells
Now why does this not work for Pokemon that are at their final evolution?
I think it has to go back to stem cells. Stem cells are the ultimate jack of all trades, capable of turning into any other cell in the body. However at a certain point in most animals, the body massively slows down or even halts on its production upon reaching adulthood. This is simply because further development is not needed.
Therefore we can assume that final evos have a much lower ratio of stem to normal cells compared to their pre-evolutions. So low in fact that the Eviolite can't stimulate the body into producing more SCells.
However there a massive elephant in the room. Inorganic Pokemon also benefit from the Eviolite and lack "cells". But I don't have any models that let us see how an Inorganic operates so I cannot say for certain nor propose any ideas. For now.

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>>59625405
Neat to read your commentary on the fic since I likely won't end up reading it myself. Here's to Hoshi's contunied fuck ups.

>>59626409
Random theory. 'Inorganic' pokemon also have cells, but like how plant cells are very different than animal cells they have a 'stone' cells or something like that.

>>59626267
it's all about potential

>>59626438
How does that work with ghosts and Porygon?

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>>59626571
datafags for some reason think living beings turning into data makes sense but not inanimate objects

another win for us shrinkchads

>>59626583
>>59626571
More like everyone forgot this was a thing once bag space stopped mattering (then bag space returned in Arceus but you just had a crate)

>>59626583
...except inanimate objects (held items and clothing) are also affected by pokeballs and the likes.

>>59626475
Unlike actual spirits, Ghost Types do have a body, and health associated with it. Porygon does also have a physical body.

>>59625394
what actually happens when you throw a Poké Ball to an already caught Pokémon?

>>59626431
He actually does have brain damage from snorting Dexus stuff, it allows him to increase his psychic powers and commune with the evil god. Even someone as bone headed as he is realizes it's a bad idea. That and I don't think his Mega Ratticate having it's connection with him severed while she was mega'd helped.
Really the whole rob a police station and a war museum plan was kind of dumb, they get like two voltorbs are four artillery pieces out of the mess and only because they had Kadabra teleport them out last moment. Mind you ani-teleport things, called baffles, exist so that was just them getting lucky the MPs didn't have any baffles on hand.

Also I forgot to mention this, but two of the additional gambits adding to the pile up in the interlude are a Clefairy cult and Casca's dad trying to destroy a bridge. Steven even says that there has to be something in the fucking water, and considering that Dexus' body is on top of Mt. Moon I don't doubt him.

>>59626703
It doesn't work because... it just doesn't, okay!?

>>59626587
Silph co is just a knockoff capsule corp

>>59626745
Reading about fics I haven't read is so funny, what the fuck do you mean with Mega Raticate?

>>59626703
You hear Oak's voice in your head telling you now it's not the time for that

>>59626766
I'll paraphrase my DMs with the author
>(Megastones are) the remains of ancient bacteria (DNA-based life) that learned to live inside Pokémon, and, after death, became infused with bits of Dexus (pokemon satan Deoxys) himself by happenstance. With their unique biology, they were able to feed on one type of energy and transform it into another, and the stardust amplified that into the ability to transfer both types of energy at once, effectively making a 'perfect' version of the flawed clones Fuji and his pals made – so long as the two donor organisms remain sufficiently synced up.

>A specific stone only works on one species because that was the species the bacteria parasitized in life, and alternate stones are different strains that provide a subtly different energy flow. Artificial stones are cultures of forcibly evolved modern bacteria subjected to artificial fossilization, and they need radio waves to kickstart because it hasn't worked out the exact method to fuse them with the stardust, so they need to be impregnated by Dexus energy through use for a while before a natural, radio-free transformation can happen.

So any pokemon can be made into a mega with the right bacteria culture in an artificial stone. Not really how I imagine pokemon evolution, or Megaevolution works, but I'll explain that in another post since the topic came up up-thread.

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>>59626762
in the Pocket Monsters manga, Oak's lab is literally the Capsule Corp building

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>>59626790
this manga also predicted Mega Starmie

>>59626703
the ball explodes

>>59626703
In Gen 1 the trainer actually just blocks the pokeball themselves I think.

>>59626703
In my headcanon a Pokeball, when catching a Pokemon, writes some sort of unique ID based on stuff* on the critter. A conventional Pokeball being thrown at another already caught Pokemon would essentially read the same biosignature and just refuse to complete the process. A suitably villainous team with resources at their disposal could make their own Pokeballs that just don't bother with the handshake and capture it regardless, but it's kind of walking around with criminal evidence on your person.

>>59626267
I imagine that a pokemon more or less has an organ, or something biological about them, that primes them for evolution and their whole multi-stage life. Like there's a genetic potential inside of them to evolve. Eviolite takes advantage of this process by essentially hijacking the normal process that stores energy for evolution and allows the pokemon to use it defensively by doing thing like making them heal faster.
But like the other guy had said, by the time they fully evolve, they don't have any potential for evolution left.

>>59626343
I imagine Mega Evolution works on the same principles, firstly when the stone is absorbed by the pokemon it adds a new genetic code programming for evolution. Then an influx of energy from the outside allow that potential evolution to be realized, which it normally can't since the fully evolved pokemon lacks the other parts necessary for the evoltuion.

>>59626267
magic

>>59627074
There is the snagem machine that steals pokemon in orre

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>>59627099
dubs of truth

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>Gym Leader Fraud: Night Out
'Nother battle. I want the next one to be more important, then have a battle with an actual character after that and not a literal who.
https://archiveofourown.org/works/88650066/chapters/249407801

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>>59627099
MERASMUS I AM GOING TO CLAW YOUR BALLS OUT OF YOUR THROAT

Fitting with the theme of Hoshi hurting everyone he knows and loves in his quest to restore Kanto with the help of team Rocket, this arc he brutalizes his other Aunt he and Moony share as well as her husband, Huck. And he's still doing the:
>I'm doing this for Kanto, the veterans, and everyone!
Speech in his head as he kills pokemon, removes his aunt's fingers, smashes a veteran's face in, and brutalizes his family. The funny thing is people he's not related to don't get it nearly as bad. Which is a real shame as we also get Huck and Denju's backstory and they're really cute together. Also Hoshi is literally the end of his bloodline, his aunt is infertile and the other Aunt (whose fingers he broke), is too gay to ever touch a man. It's a bit of an even bigger shame both of them live, although Casca and Ryan also break her fingers even after shooting her. I hope she bleeds out. Sort of like Nerine, I like them so much and their deaths would hurt the main cast so much I kinda want to see them dead.
I sort of hope Hoshi is rendered infertile by the end of this just to twist the knife even more, having him be the one who drove his clan to extinction.

Although he does kill some non-family members, Kantonian Soldiers.

Anyways, of the team Ryan is freaking out since the MPs and Police are bringing out guns now and his Cyther got lit up like a christmas tree. Kenny isn't doing so good. Casca is probably regretting not forcing Hoshi to run earlier. Puce has at least admitted to herself she's a bad person who's weak, selfish, and pathetic.
Honestly she's kind of cute, which means she's definitely the type of character I'd hate if she was a guy. Oh yeah she and Nerine, have this whole twinsies thing where they give their pokemon the same name by accident because of how similar they are, Nerine just happens to be on the side of good, tries to be a better person, and is an actually competent trainer.

Also I can't believe I missed it, but the Free the League people, their acronym is FTL, Faster than Light. Lol, I knew they were TR's mainstream wing but that's funny.

On another note, it looks like my guess about Silph CO. working with the Inner Ministry was correct, but I didn't think Koga would be working with them as well considering how they're obviously evil. Although the connection between Slyph Co. and the IM makes sense, Dr. Hypno worked with the Inner Ministry and Porygon-anonyms. Silph Co. created the Porygon in 1995, meaning that the Inner Ministry would have had access to them, so that's how Dr. Hyphno made his Porygon.EXEs. Silph Co. made the pokeballs which caused Clair to put in place her restrictive legislation, and the reason they didn't heel was because they were trying to make things worse. Even if that inadvertently caused the Hoenn-Sinnoh-Kanto-Johto alliance to strengthen, meaning they need to take over the country in one night or get invaded. So the Inner Ministry and Silph Co. also have a hand in his mother's death.


Of course the ministry has its own problems, turns out using a Masterball on Articuno while being an unworthy trainer gets you cursed. So that happened to their leader and wherever Ghetsis fuses the three birds together that times three will probably happen to him.Even them getting Hoshi who they plan to make in the messiah only seems like a bandage on the wounds as they and everyone else knock heads. They didn't even know Dexus wanted Mew, while Bill doesn't seem to have been let in all of his wife's plans, and she didn't know what everyone else was getting up to either.

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>>59627354
>>59627354
Oops. forgot pic.

Really it's a big shitshow. I still don't know what's made Hoshi special, the Inner Ministry guys even mention how one in every few thousand has high levels of stardust in their system like he does, but Hoshi has something that makes him even more special. So I'm sort of expecting a big revelation about Hoshi's mother since she's the only one here we don't know anything about, maybe she's Mewtwo?
The arc ends on all hell breaking loose anyhow.

During the beginning of Arc 13 we actually gets some confirmation of casualties, namely Articuno appearing in the center of Celadon's political area killed a bunch of people. While Bill brings out a suped up Ditto to counter, copying Articuno.

The authors says Arc 13 should be the last but I don't believe him. He's already gone 40K words over what he meant to write so he kind of has a track record of writing more than he means to.
Personally I expect another 1-to-3 arcs after 13.

>>59625827
>pokefucking
Think Clair can take Dragonair's doubles?

Have you ever read a non-smut/relationship-oriented fanfic with no stakes?

>>59626703
A pokeball "claims" a pokemon's soul (or souls, if we're talking about entity clusters), making it impossible for another pokeball to catch said pokemon (only exception being the Dark Ball).

>>59627267
>Geodude was tougher than Beedrill in close combat, and immune to any Poison Powder
Rock and Ground Types aren't immune to Poison, only Steel and Pokemon with Immunity ability are. Yes, I'm the same guy who cried about Powder moves affecting Grass Types

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>>59627354
>I hope she bleeds out.
Gotta admit your unhingedness with how much you want Hoshi to kill his family has surprised me.

>>59627090
this could add to certain things, like maybe the reason regional variants can evolve or can't is because the organ has evolved to be more dormant or active at a certain stage.

Perhaps some Pokemon like Tandemaus havd a special adaptation where having the young of their kind closeby makes said organ less active, and in the case of Maushold/Tandemaus specifically said organ is linked to its ability to reproduce and proliferate, but once they grow and Maushold can "devolve" and produce more offspring.

In a similar fashion, a mutated Shellder would either absorb the energy produced by said organ, which would explain Mega Slowbro, where while Mega Evolution causes the dormant organ to become more active and produce evolution-related energy, the mutated Shellder just drains it away which is why it expands further rather than any change from the Slowpoke.

>>59627453
A relationship fic with no smut, or a fic with neither?

>>59627474
I'll powder your moves

>>59627482
Well it is also something the author has been playing with for awhile. Hoshi doesn't have a direct hand in Surge's death but is related to it. He broke Tsuyu's fingers and killed her pokemon. Following that example the same thing happened to his Aunt and Uncle, alongside both of them being shot.
Even with his extended friend group there's his Nerine, his hardass boss who cared for him, Goose the veteran.
All of which he has excused saying that if he wins his actions are justice. By saying to himself the Johtonians are planning something, all the while he refuses every outstretched hand that is trying to help him.
Now as the story reaches it's climax his justifications are being peeled away one-by-one. Dr. Hypno who he worked with is responsible for his mother's death, when he worked for Silph co/the Inner Ministryalthough Hoshi doesn't know that yet. Clair repelled the trainer licences legislation and is working with Steven to undermine Silph co. Even with Jessie and James getting their hands on the documents proving Team Rocket was thrown under the rug during the Indigo war that doesn't change the fact that 90% of the grievances with them are their continued terroristic actions, most of which are against their home country instead of Johto.

Team Rocket is already going to lose with the new Ghost-type elite 4 swarming the Inidgo League HQ with his ghosts and grabbing the rockets there, while the ones in Virdian City are being arrested right now. Hoshi being directly responsible for the death of his family would be the final step. He has no excuse and his actions were never justice.

I want to see Hoshi's spirit crushed and he be forced to come to terms with the reality of his actions. Actually getting arrested is a so-so thing in my book, I think the funniest ending would be Hoshi getting drafted into being a spook for the Indigo League.

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>I hadn't arranged any part of this today; it just turned up out of the blue. Yet whenever I thought about stepping back, something quietly kept me rooted. Seeing it all fall into position bit by bit is what made staying feel worthwhile. And right then, a realization came to me that felt too meaningful to leave unsaid D C (it sava alli sun 12) no spacee

Wow the comment bots really are just phoning it in.

>>59627542
>drafted into being a spook for the Indigo League.
With you mentioning the ghost swarm it made me come up with this random interaction between two random characters.

"You're being mandatorily recruited into the ghost division."
"Your drafting me? But I don't even have any ghost pokemon."
"You misunderstand." *Pulls out a gun and shoots him.*

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>>59625394
How many years in prison could I get for carrying adulterated Stardust?

>>59627625
You'd get the capital punishment instead:
Death by dying

>>59627625
Stardust is a rich person's drug so you wouldn't go to prison.

>>59627671
They don't do capital punishment. They use secret spook humanball tech to capture criminals and leave them in the pc to rot.

>>59627619
That happens in In Mine Own and I wouldn't be surprised if it happened in Pokenormal/

I have Silver deficiency

>>59627770
>"What did you say?" Clair said warningly. I felt the pulse in the air clear as day, but some silly little dragon in human skin wasn't going to scare me.

>"I mean, I get it. Clair Wataru, basically the little sister of Lance... and inferior in every single way. I'd be seriously pissed off, too, if nothing I did could match up to a genuine freak of nature. Why couldn't I be that one in a million? Why did we have to be born in the same generation... why did we have to be cousins?"

>I watched with a winning smile as veins immediately formed on Clair's face.

>One thing you don't do around me is try to bully Jasmine.

>"What did you just say?" Her voice came out in a low growl, sounding almost as animalistic as the dragon's they raised. Clair clenched a fist; I did not doubt that she could probably bench double my body weight and more.

>Did I care? Well, ask Articuno if I did. You'd probably get flash frozen the moment it realized you were talking about me.

>"Your inferiority complex must have started when you were a kid. I know I'd have a lot to say to someone who needs to be repeated to, so those stuffy members of your clan must have been killing themselves when they had to repeat themselves constantly to you. You heard exactly what I said, so don't ask me to repeat myself," I drawled, friendly smile on my face as my daggerlike gaze stared her down.

>Her eyes flashed, and she immediately reached out, grabbing the scruff of my coat with a snarl. Like I predicted, she easily hoisted me up, forcing me to stare at her face.

>"Ah! W-Whitney, come help please!" Jasmine shouted, turning and banging on the door.

>"Watch your tone, child. I will not allow a novice to speak to me as if we are equals. Do not think that just because my cousin favors you, I will allow you to say what you wish," Clair spat.

>I was utterly unfazed.

>>59627816
>"Hoh? So you do recognize me... and would you look at that, the little brat is upset that her big brother Lance thinks other people are more interesting than her. You must be frothing at the mouth at the fact I get along so well with him," I said mockingly.

>Clair's voice grew increasingly feral. "I am loath to strike a child, but I will not hesitate to put you in your place."

>"Can't hear you over the sound of you drooling over your brother. Is it Wataru tradition to wear capes that stupid, or are you just following in his footsteps so that he can notice you? Bit freaky, don't you think?" I retorted.

>That seemed to do it. I watched in amusement as Clair raised a hand before I reached out. She let out a shout of surprise as I pinched a nerve that almost instantly made her collapse on her butt.

>Thanks, Janine.

>I touched the floor easily as she dropped me, dusting myself off as if I didn't just get hoisted off the ground by some Amazon of a woman.

>"Don't touch me, you 2nd-rate Wataru," I scolded, listening to Whitney and Jasmine's gasp of horror.

>Clair's eyes went bloodshot, sharp teeth bared as if she were going to tear into me. The gym leader lunged at me, only for a sheen of purple to wrap around her, halting her in place.

>"This is unbefitting of you, Gym Leader Clair. I would appreciate it if you did not attack my student. This is your only warning," Sabrina intoned emotionlessly.

>>59627453
So a slice of life without relationships?

SI-lver badmouths his superiors like System users badmouth their system. Both are babies on the bottle screeching at their caretakers lmao.

>>59627825
Yeah, I'm writing one and need material to get inspired and not steal from it

Hiatus is over, which means new PoPT for those who partake.

https://archiveofourown.org/works/66210784/chapters/249452311#main

>>59627816
>>59627820
Clair bashing never gets old

>>59627908
I haven't seen a lot of slice of life but the first thing that jumps to mind is the Emiya cooking show anime. Which is a weird slice of life where instead of a murder game the characters all chill and eat food. Its like it actively removes the stakes from a concept with stakes.

The most important bit I wanna ask is the 'why' of your concept. What is it delivering? Even slice of life is providing something to the audience. Comedy, romance, warm fuzzy feeling. What are you pursuing?

>>59627927
>Prince of Poop Town meets the Admiral of Assville
Kino.

>>59627474
I know what I’m doing is pretty headcanon-y but I think it’s kind of dumb for a rock to be affected by poison.

Biologyfags can't explain how ability swap works

>>59628402
Abilities are powered by Aura. Skill Swap/Entrainment/whatever messes with a pokemon's Auric signature.
>b-but biologically—
Aura comes from an organ in the brain, which accesses the Aura dimension.

>>59628402
I can. Most ability swap mons are psychic, so they are using their psychic powers to temporarily alter the pokemon's biology.

>>59628446
>temporarily
>alter the pokemon's biology
So they put the magnets back onto magneton afterwards?

Biologically explain Mold Breaker

So the fact that the baby Kangaskhan can Mega Evolve implies that being a baby is an entirely seperate concept from evolution and devolution right?

I guess it makes a bit of sense, considering that official material shows us baby Nidoran. These are outright Nidoran rather than a Nidoran prevolution.

Yet at the same time there are prevolutions referred to and meant to be Baby Pokemon and them evolving is meant to be seen as growing up. In fact, they very blatantly have no Egg Group to reflect the difference between sexual maturity and not.

>>59628447
No need, everybody knows psychic powers are just mind magnets. That's why they are resisted by steel types.

>>59628607
Simple. All pokemon abilities are a form of mold. Mold Breaker mons have anti-mold chemicals in their natural secretion.

I have a college degree.

>>59628607
mold grows on the pokemon's brain and breaks it, so they forget that abilities exist
like unaware kind of

>>59628672
>>59628680
Fucking resident evil shit

>>59628692
I actually have a paras zombie in my fic coming up.

Realistically explain Chilly Reception

>>59628795
It's an Unownchian pun

>>59628795
Right after you biologically explain Trick Room

>>59628798
Domain Expansion

>>59628798
Anti-matter and False Vacuums

>>59628795
that might genuinely be magic.

>>59628798
teleports the battle to australia where speed stats are upside-down

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>>59627955
Where's some classic Clair bashing, all the Clair's I've seen lately are too competent.

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>>59628795
It's not ACTUALLY telling a joke so bad the universe makes it start snowing. It's about replicating a state of mind in the user's brain (only psychics learn this move btw) that is what primes them to create the snow. However, the Slowking line can learn Snowscape regardless, so maybe it's the switching aspect of the move that's important. Maybe when in a depressive mood the Slowking species will teleport themselves to a safe place (inside of their pokeball), the same way Abra teleport to safety when threatened. A crafty trainer could have weaponized this fact to create the move.

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>>59629453
Then why can Rodney Dangerfield use it

>>59628056
>why?
Because I can't find a fic that fits my sense of humor so I'm making one myself

>>59629459
Implying he isn't psychic

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When you are within a nation.

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I don't have the time for drawing rn.
If you can't read the text:
>Rhys, what are you doing?
>Auramaxing
>What??
>Shut up dragonfoid
This is probably out of character for Rhys to do, so I interpret this drawing as him just ragebaiting Clair, or at least being a troll.
I'm also having difficulty drawing slanted eyes so that's bullshit.
Also made two prequel drawings of Deevee a few days ago during break time.

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I wondered what a one week old Eevee would look like and I think of something like a kitten: eyes closed, tiny ears and tail and clumsy.

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And here she's three weeks old and the EVIL dreams has turned her into the Devious Eevee.

>>59629748
Having just started mohagany I love clair's reaction to this.

>>59629453
>Snowscape
What's Snowcape? We have always called it Hail

>>59629994
this is how you catch an isekaijin

>>59630112
It's an important part of the International Police's kill on sight efforts to eliminate them before they can attract Ultra Beasts.

>>59629748
lol. You have the official Mahogany approval.

>>59630160
>International Police's kill on sight efforts to eliminate them
Why is the IP xenophobic?

>>59630219
why aren't you?

>>59630219
Because Ultra Beasts are attracted to Isekaijin, it's a preventative measure. I got the idea when reading a crossover with Limbus Company titled, 'A Pokemon Trainer's Unseverable Thread'
I didn't like because it woobified Sora.

Only third rate isekaijin get isekaid via ultraspace. Real ones get grabbed by legendaries or even circumvent the need for one entirely by crossing over via the dream world.

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>>59625394
do future Paradox Pokemon have souls?

>>59630387
No, they lost their souls to Necrozma when it forced them to undergo Biotransference.

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>"Nutrition on Pokemon is really important!"
>typical Pokemon delicacy

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>>59630487
but nutrition is so powerful that eating a sandwich makes you find more shinies and earn more XP

>>59630272
Why not "cleanse" the fallers by removing the Wormhole energy instead of murdering them?

>>59630514
because it's easier to kill them, it's not that hard to understand

>>59630514
Because the wormhole energy is made by Giratina, which makes Fallers satanic.

>>59630289
if you weren't born in the Pokemon world to begin with, you don't deserve to be a trainer

>>59630526
>fic where Fallers are a common fraction of the population and are discriminated by everyone
It's impossible that no one has thought of this before

>>59630528
Sounds like something for a Knosuba style fic.

>>59630387
Know, God only gave souls to his chosen people (Woopers)

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>>59630514
Kill Fallers. Behead Fallers. Roundhouse kick Fallers into the concrete. Slam dunk a Faller baby into the trash can.

>>59630528
because it's dumb anon

It's like mutants in X-Men being an allegory for racism or jews or something, even though they all have super powers and it makes no sense they would be discriminated like they are, even more so when you look at the real world and see judges letting felons out onto the streets for free because they are minorities.

>>59630943
yeah that always sucked, at least the little bit of consistency with them seeing Spidey or the Hulk as threats and menaces made this make a bit more sense.

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>>59630528
>Fallers use their meta knowledge and cheat skills to pool considerable resources, get together and make their own Krakoa/Israel/new Homeland
What does it look like?

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Chapter 30 of Spice and Fox is out. Sorry for the wait. Had a death in the family + general writing trouble with this one on top of that. Super rough chapter, I'm sick of spending time on it. If all goes well I'll have the next one out in two weeks, as per the former release cadence.

https://archiveofourown.org/works/21307454/chapters/238424126

>>59631050
>Faller lands in the pokemon world
>immediately tries to "unlock their aura/psychic powers"
>immediately dies of qi deviation because that's not something you can just casually fuck with
It's a self-solving problem.

>>59631081
that's why faller stories are so OP. Selection bias only leaves the ones who are talented enough to make the heaven's jealous

>>59631073
Sorry about the tough times, anon. I look forward to reading your work.

>>59631050
It's Lord of the Flies.

>>59631073
That sucks, take care of yourself.

>>59630517
Oh, it's easy to understand, except it only makes you evil for prefering murder for convenience reasons.

>>59631166
You gotta do what you gotta do

>>59631166
Isekaijins aren't Pokehuman
A simple blood test is all you need to tell the difference.

>>59630943
Sure but fallers don't have superpowers, meta knowledge doesn't count

>>59631187
Yes, but how do you tell a Faller apart from a Non-Faller?

>>59631205
Small eyes, large noses, black/brown/blonde hair but never green/blue/pink

>>59631205
they can't stop talking about nutrition

>>59631170
>>59631185
If that's the case, then any crimes committed are valid since all that matters is whether or not it solves a problem.

>>59631264
*any crimes committed by the League are valid

>>59631264
>>59631281
>"he's starting to believe"

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>>59631264
never heard of the end justifies the means, kiddo?

>>59631205
They have the dexterity to move beyond predetermined animations. For example, only Fallers can scratch their ass. Normal pokehumans are unable to do so.

>>59631305
Everything about a Faller is uncanny, like something trying to imitate a human.
Their hair and fingernails grow noticably faster, just a week passes and there is a visible stubble on males. They heal slower and injured more easily.
Their actions are more subdued. They control their emotions better than most and appear more calm. Even during extreme circumstances, they under react.
Despite that, their body never stops moving. Eyes twitch and dilate in response to light. They blink faster and more often. A Faller's chest constantly expands and contracts while their fingers tap and knees shake to some unknown rhythm.

>>59631205
they're ugly, like really ugly

>>59631394
Like Isekai Ojisan where natives thought he was an orc

>>59630943
>t's like mutants in X-Men being an allegory for racism or jews or something,
Isn't that just Bloodliners like from Pokemon Reset Bloodlines.

>>59631073
Readin'

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>>59631298
Surely did, just wondering why one should even oblige to any rules or ideals when they don't matter.

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>>59631520
>"Only my rules and ideals matter because they're mine and you suck while I rule"- Ghetsis, probably

>>59631520
unrelated but I like when villains know they're evil and love being evil

>>59631572
That almost never happens. Even Giovanni is being tainted by the misunderstood and "redemption" arc tropes.

>>59631631
How? By abandoning his own son to raise a French manlet?

>>59631645
A few fanfics just made him a good guy who only did evil out of desperation like in New Normal, and I've heard that Pokespe also outright made him a good person with virtuous goals to the point even the land itself blessed him as a chosen hero.

>>59631658
To be fair, the implication that Giovanni has changed for the better has existed since Gen 1.

fic idea:
what if Arceus was bad? and Giratina was misunderstood?

>>59631658
I think I saw a video on that years ago, something about him being a good guy trying to stop Mewtwo? I thought it was lame, although I do see Giovanni as a character who became evil, motivated by jealousy, greed, and pride into becoming who we seem him as in RGBY.
But you're misremembering special, in the manga people having N-like powers is just something that happens, the entire E4 and Yellow have the same ability and it's a side effect of their birth.
He is briefly good when he teams up with Celebi, but the second the mythical cures him of his fatal illness he fucks off to be evil again. He even fucks with Deoxys and makes an evil army of the Deoxys twins from the manga.

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Are Fallers okay if they're not from (our) world, but just alternate versions of the pokeworld instead?

>>59631754
If arceus was bad then what would evil arceus's role be?

>>59631954
Our world is just an alternate pokemon world. Its the world where instead of being a woman Arceus was a man.

>>59631754
What if Arceus was good and Giratina was bad, but then Giratina learned to be good and Arceus devolved into evil?

>>59632071
>>59631754
What if...humans BAD, and Arceus BAD, and she gets off on it?

>https://ujamer.github.io/myrddin/
saw this posted in a fic

now you can generate your own forum chapters, just use AI to fill out the fields

>>59632158
Satanic.

>>59632158
Holy kino

>>59632158
Why use AI when you can just fill out the fields yourself?

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>>59631225
>the scottish faller in the corner

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>>59631284
No neo, i'm saying that once you're ready it won't be a crime

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>>59631545
>mfw that's literally every government on the planet

>>59631298
Shut up Hoshi and go back to ruining your family.

>>59631073
>Proton is alive all these years alter and running an email service.
Well what do you know?

>>59632399
I was very close to calling it RotonMail or RotoMail instead (or similar) but screw it. The guy doesn't have a trademark on particles and it gets the idea across.

>>59632406
So you're saying Protonwas cucked out of the name?

>>59632412
I always thought those were their codenames

>>59631754
I'm doing this unironically. Except Arceus actually good?

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>>59632548
>fic does a 'badguy is actually good!' plot
>MC helps the misunderstood badguy overcome the secretly evil good guys
>badguy reveals that he was only pretending to be misunderstood
This has got to have been done already. How many times can we toy with the audiences expectations at once?
>badguy was actually good, but pretended to be bad so they can take the blame and let the MC finish them
>was only pretending to pretend to be evil so that the MC would stumble upon the false truth that they were secretly good and unknowingly continue on with their fiendish scheme

>>59632811
What if the bad guy was actually a bad guy and the MC who teamed up with them was just delusional.

>>59632815
Anon and N, best friends and each others tard wrangler.

>>59632838
I was talking about Within our Nation, the MC becoming a villain and his massive cognitive dissonance is the premise.

>>59632815
That sounds like the same thing I said.

>>59632815
What if the bad guy working with the bad guy was a good guy who was working for a different bad guy but had to keep his cover working for the bad guy by pretending to be a bad guy when he's really a good guy trying to be a good guy by helping the other bad guy?

I went cross-eyed reading that.

I got crossbred reading that.

>>59632932
So before reading that you were inbred?

>>59632992
No, partway through reading it I was molested by a Vaporeon

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This is why I like the treasures of ruin.

>>59633086
>Hmm yes I will take this pokemon that has historically been the downfall of at least one mad tyrant and use it to further my own mad tyrannical goals
>Surely nothing can go wrong

>>59633097
That's different. They were weak. I am stronger, wiser!

>>59632218
Not schizo enough

>>59632122
What if God was Hoe (with capital h)?

>>59633097
Ghetsis is already insane so ruination doesn't work on him

>>59633445
Chien-Pao would just stab him with his teeth swords

>>59633457
Ghetsis has a Hydreigon with max power Frustration, he knows how to handle hatred-filled Pokémon

>>59633457
Why would Chien-Pao stab the very source of his fascination/food? Ghetsis is one of the most hateful and hateable fuckers in the entire pokeverse, and the only one who didn't say sorry. Chien-Pao is going to town on that hate just like Enamorous latched onto Cogita because she was a virgin lusting after the dead hero.

>>59633461
Chien-Pao is something much worse than hatred. It's grudge-driven justice. It will kill Ghetsis with an ice-cold heart, simply because it's the right thing to do.

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>>59633445
just like Cyrus is not affected by Darkrai's nightmares because he's a freak and enjoys them

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>>59633465
>It's grudge-driven justice
that's Wo-Chien

>>59633470
Aren't they all like that? Wo-Chien is just the most in your face about it.

>>59633501
>As time passed, each of the treasures were corrupted by negative human emotions: grudge, hatred, fear, and envy respectively, gaining life and cladding themselves in dead leaves, snow and ice, dirt and rocks, and fire to create their respective bodies, becoming the Legendary Pokémon Wo-Chien, Chien-Pao, Ting-Lu, and Chi-Yu.

If you were to take off parts of a pokemon's body, at what point would the body part change typing?
For example, drawing blood from a Fire type. Does the blood lose the properties of Fire? And if so, when?
What about putting that blood through a filter to extract the water. Does the become Water type?
What if the Fire type used Burn Out before the blood drawing?

Explain this all biologically, realistically, and through the lens of nutrition.

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>>59633665
they would turn into Normal type, needing memory cores drives to change its type

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>>59633665
Those are intriguing questions, Anon.

>>59633802
SI-lver needs to bash this woman and arrest her for crimes against Pokémon nature

>>59633834
You might mistake her for someone else. Someone as careful as Miss. Fool is unlikely responsible for such mix-ups.

>>59633855
I have Dusknoir eyes, meaning I can see the real name and lifespan of every person

>>59633516
Chi-Yu is aligned with a villain of one of my future stories.

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Currently on break.
This is roughly how I interpreted Celot.

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After that one reread, this is now how I think he (might) look like.

Shit, forgot to colour in the sunglasses.

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I am genuinely retarded wtf!

>>59634155
>>59634148
>>59634147
His neck looks spacious enough to fit Chien-pao.

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>>59630487
waiting for festival of champions ch 20 translation to drop

>>59634147
Who this?

>>59625394
Currently trying to make an in universe fanfic about Missingno without it being "Then hyperrealistic blood happened" that stories always tend to use

>>59634387
Why not? Hyper realistic blood is fun.

To be fair, Missingno isn't a blood conducive entity. I've got plans for the big M myself but since that would be spoilers I can't really give advice.

>>59634418
Because it gets all over your clothes and the stains are hard to clean

>>59634387
I remember when people were stacking dlss5 on top of dlss5 to turn games into graphical abominations. There was one comment that stuck out to me, someone said that this resembled the whole hyper realistic shtick that creepypastas spammed without a care.
In this case I think it would be interesting to interpret 'hyper realism' with trying too hard.
Blood is too glossy and dark at the same time. It clots in weird ways.
MissingNo was used to clone items and pokemon right? Maybe in its attempt to appear realistic, it makes some mistakes in other ways. A potion stills weighs the same after being used because it doesn't account for the liquid inside being used up. A Charizard's flame burns at an inconsistent temperature because it only registers things like fire as 'hot'. Skinwalker stuff.

>>59634475
Interestingly enough the whole hyper-realistic thing started with Squiward's Suicide, in which the term was used to describe those matte paintings from Spongebob, and/or those gross-ups.

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>>59634475
>>59634498
I'm 100% sure most creepypastas originated from video game corruptions

>>59634147
>>59634148
>>59634155
Feels like you channeled the Revolver Ocelot DNA for it, nice work!

>>59634337
Celot, an antagonist from the threadfic In Mine Own

>>59634148
Didn't know we had a drawfag. Do you do requests?

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>>59634567
CCbro pops in from time to time. Idk about requests, he usually gets inspiration from reading a fic and wants to draw something from it. Pic was when he drew the various Squirtle line mons that kept popping up in threadfics (by coomplete accident).

>>59634214
Interesting, image you put in my head... :)
>>59634515
>Revolver Ocelot DNA
Who tf?
*looks it up*
Huh, I thought Celot just meant Ocelot since he's a kittykat appreciator- I wonder what he think's of the Litleo line?
I honestly viewed him before as sort of like Dante from DMC 3 (Like Pokémon, I have never played it and I don't even know what it is about really) but of course the hair slicked back (as well as a more brash look idk.)
For the pretty boy version I kinda used Jinshi from Apothecary Diaries (I watched it like one time and forgot most details. I genuinely don't know what it is about threadfics that make me lock in).
>>59634567
On average no, I don't take requests. I don't really like putting more on my plate than necessary and I'm already doing full time work as a wagie so I might genuinely take weeks doing something or I may even forget about it. It's essentially like >>59634797 Pobro puts it:
>he usually gets inspiration from reading a fic and wants to draw something from it.
(I've yet to actually draw the proper Squirtle line drawing I want which would include the trainers.)
I guess if I rock with you and I 'know' you (i.e. I read your fic) you could ask me for sumtin, but no promises. However usually I'm not even around so it may be hard to ask me simply.
Anyway I'm off to bed before I start fucking up my typing like a written drunkard.

Okay writefags (and ideafags who may or may not write anything), the recent upswing in Malfoid content has got me thinking: would genderbending an antagonistic/rival character change anything about your story at large? How would the relationships dynamics change in the story? Would your MC end up romantically with that gennderbent character?

>>59634926
>would genderbending an antagonistic/rival character change anything about your story at large?
UST increases tenfold. That's about all.

>>59634926
Been sick as a dog the past few days and unable to write, so I’ll go first. I’m Pofag

Genderbent Hyde would’ve been absolutely wild to write. If obvious best girl wasn’t the endgame, I probably would’ve picked FemHyde. A lot of the arc 5-7 plots would’ve gotten moved around. FemHyde would be as bad to Ian if not worse in early arcs, but after him saving her ass and her realizing he literally keeps the town fed and could be doing literally ANYTHING else and be in a better posiition, she’d break a little and begruddgingly allow herself to view Ian as the “one good Unovan.” Obviously the revelation he’s a not real Unovan would completely shatter her and yearn for Isekai-jin dick. My whole plan for Hyde in Arcs 5-7 would have to be re-done involving one of my last big reveals I got. But FemHyde would absolutely have been entertaining. If I ever write another longfic I may try something like this.

>>59634926
Well considering I did write some Malfoid I feel uniquely qualified to answer this, but in Mahogany... well Rhys wouldn't like a genderswapped Clair for the same reason he dislikes Lance but would like a female Lance. He's a jealous little shit, overly passive, prideful, and s hypocrite. If you swapped Rhys than she'd hate all possible permutations except for male Clair who she'd be yearning for 24/7.

>>59634949
>UST increases tenfold. That's about all.
What does that mean?

>>59634926
I fear that far too many people would ship Kuzey with Lonnibel if I went that route...

I'm actually not even sure how I'd write Celot as a woman, too much of his DNA is rooted in a very gendered variety of little shit kid brother energy. A certain dynamic that I haven't explored yet would probably wind up much more catty but I'm not certain she'd actually be all that different.

No comment on Oberon.

>>59634926
It wouldn't change anything but I think it would be a little sadder because now it's about an aging starlet attempting to graft together an extra act to keep the show going.

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>>59634926
I've been thinking about genderbending a certain schizo and put it into a correction fic.
Not many ideas and not much to connect them with so i abandoned it until further notice.

>>59635007
FemLance flirting with Rhys only to piss off Clair would be funny to see Clair’s reaction to. Although that’d be about it. FemProton would be more interesting I reckon.
>>59635027
>ship Kuzey with Lonniebel
I could see Lonniebel being lightly flirtatious but ultimately resigned to not getting Kuzey (although she’d probably say things like “when this is all over and you’re 18, let’s talk”).

>>59635109
>FemProton
I'm gonna guess you mean Petrel? I actually hadn't thought of it now, despite having thought of a potential older sister character for him, but now that you bring it up... well I think she'd have one-sided feelings for Rhys and dislike Clair, not for yandere reasons though.
Rhys and society in general can be kind of sexist towards women, and Inujinin, both in low-expectations and expecting them to rigidly fit within the roles they're assigned. So despite Petrel still being skilled and smart neither Rhys nor society would fault fem!Petrel for her placid attitude. That lack of expectation would mean she's generally more resentful of the people around her, instead of ignoring them. Rhys wouldn't fault her either, and would pity and acknowledge her instead. That would sort of spur Rhys to, in general, be less passive, but at the same time that overpowering sense of pity would prevent him from viewing her romantically even if he would go out of his way for her.
Then enter Clair who's stronger, more conventionally attractive, and has everything Petrel wants, on top of being an air-head who takes those things for granted.

Plot wise this transfers the loyalty Petrel would have towards Giovanni to Rhys, so things go off the rails pretty quickly.

Damn, distracting me from editing again. At least writing is going well.

>>59634926
I have a gender bending and pregnancy fetish, so I sometimes just write smut where a dude gets turned into a chick and knocked up. I actually have characters in the past who's whole schtick is going around fighting other dudes to turn them into chicks to add to his pregnant harem when he wins.

As for gender bending rivals/enemies in my fic... I can see it working for one character. It would actually make the love triangle even more hilarious because the rival getting cucked out of the MC's love interest instead leads to the love interest cucking the MC from her. Alternatively, MC now gets to knock up both of them.

>>59635027
>Celot
Actually, for some reason a female Celot made me think of an adult Jane from Crystal Light. Though I'm imagining a bit more sane and classy Jinx from League of Legends. She does have a Meowth.

>>59635109
I forgot who Lonnie was until this comment before thinking it was the dumbass of the three shitsketeers.

>>59635522
Who the fuck starts a post like that? I just sat down

Writefags, if you weren’t writing about the region you’re writing about now, what region would it be?

If I wasn’t doing an old homebrew one, I’d probably write about Galar. Mostly just to dunk on GF’s absolute shit-tier writing for that game/region.

>>59634957
What if Ian was a girl? Would Hyde start obsessing over Isekai-jin puss after the reveal?

>>59635729
A fuckall wilderness with connections to Mega Evolution and potentially Terastalization... I'd have to pick Kitakami. It's got the Tera links and shares a country with Sinnoh & Kanto, two regions that do a lot of Mega Evolving.

>>59635729
Unova but with Ultra Beasts and the Treasures of Ruin. If not that then Orre in a Konosuba-esq Isekai way

>>59635756
isn't that Suzy-Marie's whole point?

>>59635729
Probably would be doing my own homebrew region so I can create a religion that allows people to say "goddamn it" without breaking kayfabe, or maybe one of the regions from writefags in this thread. I think the Hokubu gym challenges are cool, so that'd probably be my first pick.

If I had to choose a 'canon' region I'd pick Orre.

>>59635756
No, he’s still an Irida simp.
>>59635951
No. She’s a “what if Ian appeared on the easier side of the island and had everything handed to them” case. Although the Rainbow Rocket manipulation helps justify it a bit.

>>59635695
I was just answering the question. Not my fault you sat down in the middle of the conversation.

What is your MC's Pokemon Smash or Pass result?

>>59636375
As in, which Pokemon they’d fuck or who’d want to fuck them?

>>59636375
from barely-legal Lasses to single mothers of Youngsters.
Wait, you mean Pokémon creatures? None unless you count human Latias

>>59636375
More than he would ever admit.

Have you read any new Pokemon fic? Emphasis on the Pokemon part

>>59636623
Within our Nation/WoN
>Emphasis on the Pokemon part
No such fic exists.

I updated sellouts__________. Time to binge horror movies.

https://archiveofourown.org/works/73703406/chapters/250211226

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Yeah, I'm working on it right now. In fact, I'm just about to post it.

>>59636623
Started mahogany. It's mahoagony!

Yuck yuck yuck.

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>>59636996
I'll post it right when I get this one thing figured out. The plot.

>>59637021
Same except it's pretty okay.

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>>59637041
haha same
I was just about to almost start writing the harry potter story I've been pondering for a couple months but it featured female draco malfoy and if people think I'm jumping on the bandwagon I'll die
So now I have no choice but to work on my pokemon story that I'm also somewhat close to almost starting...
I've already got the main characters thought up and everything! I just need to figure out things for them to actually do and reasons they would interact and whatnot but that's all easy stuff so it should be coming out soon™

I feel as if the more I try to think of a serious story the further I get from actually coming up with one whether I'm satisfied with or not so I think I'm going to give up on it and instead write something stupid and semi-episodic

>>59625394
I really want to write a Halloween/Spooky fanfic. Should I use the Pokepasta (or god forbid FNF) characters or make a meta haunted game story?

>>59637088
Don't worry we love jumping on trends here, also what's with Lance's head? Is some sort of bird going to hatch from it?

>>59637110
it's a custom gym leader who totally isn't lance I made years ago for a custom gym leader thread
I just thought it looked funny at the time and figured it would enrich my post, giving me twice the results for half the effort

>>59636695
Congrats Selloutsanon.
>>59637088
>I feel as if the more I try to think of a serious story the further I get from actually coming up with one
Allow yourself to take things seriously if the story wants to be, anon. Not everything has to be “leh heckin’ ironic and shizz.” You can include plenty of intended funny moments (or have it be comedic in general), but just be genuine to what the story in your head wants to be. And good luck on the story’s development!

>>59636623
I just read Spindle, which is technically new. It's pretty cool.

>>59637021
I'll get around to full re-editing the first arc eventually!
Promise!

>>59637128
Senior, your heartfelt words have helped me reach enlightenment. This junior will walk through fire and water to finish his story, or my name isn't Anonymous!

>>59637041
Reminds me of how I mapped out an entire continent with several different nations and their cultural histories for a vore tabletop setting I made.

>>59637134
I’ll rub one out in your honor. Namaste, Anonymous.

>>59637132
I'm just messing, I don't dislike it.

>>59637132
>>59637139
On that note, I can't tell if Rhys is a badass or a bitch.

>>59637141
A bitch, but that's mostly a personality problem. Capability he can be impressive when spurred to action, but since he's so neurotic and single-minded, he tends to not act.

>>59637160
Rhys and Kuzey really need to meet and kiss whoa hey who said that

>>59636375
He's your classic modern khv (literally me???) so save for exceptions like muk the limit would be passing a carisma roll to bypass his relatively low power level

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>>59634926
you tell me
shitpost made for TLTD, Cyrus ain't like that in story, a tragedy I know

>>59637041
>the stuff english teachers like
>the stuff normal readers like
I feel this so much, but when you say normal readers, do you mean like, normalfags, or those guys on webnovel sites who will ditch your work immediately if they don't get a character that is perfect and badass and powerful from the get-go and they have to wait for a good chunk of character development?

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>>59637569
yes

>>59637569
Nta but I figure there has to be some level of power fantasy involved in order to get larger engagment if you’re not doing a shipping or Ashfic (as retarded as that is in the fanfic community). Pokemon has a really good way of balancing power fantasy-vibes early on while also leaving room for exponential growth and development though: give the MC a powerful Pokemon in the first 10 chapters. There are still 5 more mons to improve upon so you have lots of runway, but the (more or less) average reader who’s looking for the more power fantasy aspects will still be placated. One thing I’ll say is great about the vocal part of the Pokemon fanbase is they actually got on me about using Sawsbuck in battles too much.

>>59637596
Every work of fiction is like that

I was editing my novel sized fic tonight. Not sure how the page count jumped from 414 to 435 all of a sudden. Must've been something with the formatting when I started adding headers, page numbers, a table of contents, and a temp cover page with the title.

I only managed to cover about 40 pages though. There was a bunch of early stuff that just needed little adjustments here and there.
The tone of the story really does shift dramatically once my MC gets other characters to talk to.

>>59637918
How do you manage to not edit your work until it's finished? Every time I write a paragraph or two I force myself to read the back and check for spelling errors and awkward sentences.

>>59638029
nta but I don’t edit anything until I finish a chapter, otherwise I’m just going to be combing through my work all the time. I write the whole chapter than draft and edit it so I at least have a skeleton to work with

>is named Silver
>doesn't have silver hair
Fucked up, huh?

>>59625394
Are there any good long fics involving Silver? No shipping

>>59638345
>is named Silver
>has Silver Eyes
kino

>>59638364
I only know of These Silver Eyes

>>59638364
Finding good Silver fics is probably as hard as finding good Ash fics, they're inexistent in the great SI era

>>59638345
You're going to lose your shit when you hear about Red, Blue, and Green.

>>59638517
>Is named Red
>Is autistic
>Is named Blue
>Is a faggot
>Is named Green
>Is a schizo
No, that actually checks out

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I'll spare you guys my crash out, but I did draw this Dragonite during break time.

>>59638692
>Shiny Dragonite with a staff
Is this from Crystal Light? Fuck I really gotta get to it. Still sick as hell but my mind isn’t as foggy so I’m reading through SELLOUTS and running amok in his comments slowly but surely.

>>59638718
CCfag labeled the drawing as nonthread so probably not. I wouldn't know, I haven't read Crystal Light and don't think I will. Crossovers tend to be dogshit.

>>59638739
>It’s literally right there
F.

>>59638517
At least they were color coded clothing?

>>59638718
Oh no no, anon! My (one of the chill) coworker mentioned finding Dragonite cute and cuddly and I said fine imma draw dat and then she kept demanding more cutemons like Eevee and Mew and then also Charmander before I said fuck off my break's over. (Seriously have you ever seen how GOOFY his canon smile is :D)
>>59638739
>I haven't read Crystal Light and don't think I will. Crossovers tend to be dogshit.
KYS nigger, CL is comfy and competently put together and makes both elements fit well (granted, I've never even so much as touched something with Final Fantasy, but those foreign materials blend well with Pokémon). I will not tolerate this bullshit you subhuman.
To put it in more words; if you want a fic where the battles are neatly done, the setting and the characters are charming and you want the Pokémons to also have distinct personalities (in spite of the language barrier, which is also an interesting element to the fic. IMO does this really well too.) then Crystal Light is one to read through.
Don't you ever talk smack about CL without having read it you literal goblin.
Anywho, sayonara shitheads! Have a good evening/day!

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>>59638718
No Dragonite in Crystal Light yet, but there is plans for one and it is probably pretty obvious what its place will be in the story.

>>59638739
I make a hobby of taking dogshit ideas and making something good out of them. And I think I've done a good job so far, but there isn't much I can say to change your mind if you're set on not reading it.

>>59638825
>>Crossovers TEND to be dogshit
He's right you know

>>59638029
I used to do periodic re-reads when I finished a chapter, but then life got in the way and it became either keep writing or I'll never get the story written.
Now that the first draft is fully written, I'm doing a full start-to-finish re-read. I'm trying to fix as many typos and grammar errors as I can find while adjusting the tense and tone so it all lines up properly. As well as making sure I don't have any continuity errors.

There are a handful of scenes that I have notes to do more massive re-writes for, but this is just proof reading.

>>59638849
As does fanfiction in general.

>>59638825
Based CCbro mini-crashout.

>>59638029
By not having autism

Crossovers can work, just make sure the power level in your story gets balanced, like in the aweful Justice League x RWbY crossover movies or the DB/OP/Toriko crossover

>>59625394
Your fic now has an original movie, what is it about?

>>59638963
Like an Adam Sandler movie about friends and family and having the hottest piece of ass as your wife despite being a retard

>>59638990
Mahogany?

>>59638963
>Original movie for PoPT
A prequel with two different major storylines (I think it’d have to be non-linear to make any sense). One starting with Keahi and her four Cinders attacking the Lake of the Sunne, Tapu Bulu and Island Alphas stopping them, but the Ultra Rift manifests. POVs go to different factions as things fall apart across Ula’Ula (Breon’s coma, nightmare re-awakening, Sinclair’s road to piracy, Nanu going into the Ultra Rift).

The other major storyline is too much of a spoiler to say now, but it’s basically Surge’s tragic backstory. Think Rogue One vibes Ends with him and his guys occupying the Hokulani Observatories.