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I don't hate Fallout: New Vegas, but sometimes I notice some unnatural lines:

"A free woman. It's... been awhile since I've seen a woman who wasn't a slave. I forget myself -are you injured?"

Something like “A free woman, are you injured?” would be enough. I already know the Legion enslaves women — show, don’t tell. I get it!

I think The Frontier did even worse, but some dialogues in New Vegas are also a bit bad. Still, I like NV’s writing overall. But is afar of being perfect.
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>>3870270
>1 sentence: good
>2 sentence: ...mhm le bad!
You're needlessly picky with your gripes.
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>>3870270
they had to write for extremely poor Bethesda voice directing so the lines need to supply their own context or the VA will never get it
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>>3870272
The entire Fallout New Vegas dialogue has things like that, this was just an example.

>You're needlessly picky with your gripes.

Yes, it is true. But at least I just did a 4chan post and not a 4 hours essay in YouTube.

"A free woman. It's... been awhile since I've seen a woman who wasn't a slave. I forget myself -are you injured? Because, as you know, women in legion lacks of rights, is not like RNC, women here are mistreated, and also, there is no feminism move, as you can see, so therefore, I'm being slaved by the opressive machist cesar's legion, were again, the women has not a single previlege of being free."
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>>3870276
>a 4chan post

Which is arguably worse these days. Also you're just conjuring up shit in your head and using it as a make-believe of an argument. Stop getting angry at hypotheticals you dumbass.
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>>3870284
I making objetive critics, you are the only one angry defending a dialogue.

Touch grass.
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>>3870270
Bait or retardedness. Can you genuinely not fathom that that woman was probably gang-raped and her entire family killed by tribals, she has been living life on auto-pilot to cope with the constant misery, and suddenly an obvious reminder of life outside this hellhole strolls about in front of her?
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>>3870375
>that that woman was probably gang-raped
I bet she enjoyed it.
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The PC in new vegas has zero personality, and it's really annoying when contrasted with how good the NPC writing is. You basically just ask questions and prompt the actual characters to do anything



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