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It's good, but it's held back by being 10 episodes long.
It felt like the characters and plot never had any time to get their footing, so the plot is completely rushed in the last 3 episodes and many of the characters are left underdeveloped.

I understand that, as a vidya adaptation, they were probably under the assumption they would only get a mediocre success, but such a big cast and such a big world can't fit in in those times constraints.
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series should be 6 episodes at most
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>>281827344
>and many of the characters are left underdeveloped.
I'll assume this post is genuine but what else was left to develop?
>Becca's brother was a goofy guy and his death was the start of things going wrong
>Dorio was... I forgot to be honest
>Maine's death basically changes David and his send off was pretty decent
>Kiwi's whole thing came back to bite her in the ass at the end but she was accepting of it
>Rebecca was completely ride or die with David, despite being ignored and despite everything he does is completely suicidal
>David's final send off was great, pushing himself so far thinking he's special and managing to gain some level of respect from Smasher (just don't look at the game with how quickly he goes down)
I'd say it's perfectly fine imho. I don't think there needed to be episodes dedicated for each to talk about their problems, it's ultimately David's story.
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>>281827344
True. Episode 4 should have been split into two, with some of the stuff in the montage being shown in real time. And another episode should have been added right after the timeskip to ease on the endless exposition and let the characters breathe a little.
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>>281827344
kill yourself
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>>281827583
>Dorio was... I forgot to be honest
Maine's gf and tard-wrangler.
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>>281827344
>but it's held back by being 10 episodes long.
I completely disagree. The show tells a very compelling story because it stays focused and doesn't get sidetracked with useless stuff. every scene is concise and does its job, no more is needed.
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>>281827583
>I don't think there needed to be episodes dedicated for each to talk about their problems
this right here. So often do I see people say that every side character needs their own arc or development. No they don't, brother.
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>>281827583
>>281828353
A couple of things
>Maine is held as very important, but I felt his character didn't have all that emotional impact
>Adam Smasher is the final episode villain, but he was merely mentioned once 3 episodes beforehand
>We get a timeskip where David becomes a millionaire and famous, in a pretty jarring way

It felt like it was rushing.
I don't think Pilar or Rebecca needed more, but a couple of things needed a little bit more imo.
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>>281829434
Wrong place, wrong people
it's your brief time with the chooms that makes it special and so memorable
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>>281829434
i also found it odd that David got such a nice looking place when his goal was moon tickets



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