Hey there!I'm writing a novel for a contest on HoneyFeed but my page views drop like a rock after the first chapter. I'm new to writing and would love some advice/feedback from anyone who reads a lot of Isekai or has some insight to where I'm losing my audience.TL;DR why is my book bad?www.honeyfeed.fm/novels/25397
>>282236949>>>/lit/ and start with the Greeks
>>282237462I thought to post in /lit/ but figured since it's an anime themed book there would be more light novel readers here on /a/. Most of the posts I'm seeing on /lit/ are western