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Dumping the first of WSJ's newest batch of three, Gonron Egg by Shuhei Tanizaki.

Chapter 1: Egg of God
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>>283313169
Thanks, OP!
Honestly this looks kind of promising.
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I liked it.
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I think it's 7/10. The art is good despite the meh design.
Too much exposition. I will give it some chances but the Japanese audience probably won't.
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>>283313242
There it is
The Gonron Egg™
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I guess I'll follow this. I just rather want more battle fantasy than some boring romcom or sportshit.
Too bad it's hard to make a good one that rivals 2000s battle manga
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>>283313312
holy shit it's the rape potato from made in abyss
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>>283313169
Art style is very reminiscent of Seven Deadly Sins.
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>>283313366
Same, it's a pretty good chapter too.
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>>283313377
Probably his assistant or something.
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This shit remind me of Orient
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The battle transformation looks atrocious. I hope they change it later.
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>>283313278
Is this a fucking joke? Two pages of copy pasted perspective shot with slightly different expressions.
Holy shit, that's a future new member of U-19.
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>>283313312
I think it's good that it gets the exposition out of the way and introduces the egg really early on instead of wasting a chapter on it. Mangaka knows you have to move the plot quickly from day one.
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>>283313454
he should change the MC Fucking hair or some shit
Also the pacing is atrocious
like, this shit both too fast and too slow
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>>283313475
I like that their teamup makes sense from the start, the premise made it sound like it was some random dragon egg, this is much better.
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>>283313508
how fucking tasteless and retarded can you be
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U19
if you believe anything else, you are mentally challenged
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This reads like a one shot.
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>>283313475
When I saw the synopsis on mangaplus I was a little concerned about the moral implications of raising a child away from its people to turn it against them so I was happy to see it was already intelligent and on his side
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I really didn't like it. I gave it a fair shot but its just far too similar to other setups.

His 'battle' form looks like shit and turned me off immediately
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>>283313169
i thought it was going to be grimm medieval fantasy kino but it's set in a modern post apocalyptic world...
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>>283313402
>fastasy setting but with japanesse aparment.
Such a fucking uncreative thing the author made. I'm so looking forward to seeing this turd end up at another U19 club.
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>>283313211
Was not expecting Post Apocalypse
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>>283313169
This was a ROUGH first chapter. Not Bone Collection-bad, but definitely down there. WORDS WORDS WORDS WORDS yet somehow it said nothing.
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>>283313169
the sister looks like a big boobie shortstack here
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>>283313242
Can I offer you an egg in this trying time?
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>>283313725
>>283313767
>>283313804
Armin moments, the meme is real
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>>283313767
probably the only good thing of this entire chapter was the fact that they actually beheaded the main character in a somewhat graphic way. It did surprise me. Everything else is super mid.
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Wait, is the yellow eye supposed to be a blind eye?
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>>283313835
Yeah, I was done here. This is a horrible design. This is the kind of design you see in manga about making manga where the design intentionally looks awful
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>>283313835
I miss Oversouls
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>>283313244
Me too.
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>>283313835
Wow anons weren't lying about the battle form being shit
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>>283313835
drawing this every fight is going to be a pain.
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>>283313835
LOL

LMAO
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>>283313906
And it also looks so fucking ugly. He could've done something simpler that also looks cooler.
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>>283313835
Oh that's bad
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https://youtube.com/watch?v=kH2j6dKPwxo
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>>283313906
good thing he wont have to draw it for too long
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>>283313278
A heckin Madoka Meduka reference???
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>>283313835
>>283313893
Yeah, it definitely wanted to be Shaman King, but it just doesn't work.
It's trying to do way too much for a base form.
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sorry but the name of MC, the design, the combat form are horrendous to look at
gonron
really?
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I can see people seethe at the series if it doesn’t get axed.
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>>283314028
MC is like 25 years old also
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>>283314049
And that's all for the first chapter.
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>>283314083
Pretty great.
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>>283314049
>using status effects
you didn't beat the Drakarch
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EGG FEELING EGGMIN'S MASSIVE EGGS
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>>283313184
Don't even get to see the dark haired QT in the first chapter? ugh..
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Only way to save this from axe is if the egg transform into a cute loli
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>>283314083
Designs are awful, could've been better.
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>>283314083
>ten years or so
let's see how the author retcons this once he gets axed withen the next few months.
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>>283313906
Meanwhile Yujikuna looks simple and menacing
I dunno why new mangas can't just draw a normal design
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>>283314062
where did you get this from?
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>>283313610
It really does. I wouldn't have been surprised if it was repurposed but I didn't see anything like that. The exposition is way too overbearing. It makes it look more like a manga about sitting and talking to an egg.
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>>283313804
I think this should have at least had the egg take on the boy's body or something, rather than just copout reviving him.
Like a "you'll live on with me together" type deal rather than just flat out bringing him back. Then you could play into some Ship of Theseus weirdness as the new composite being wants to still find the sister.
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>>283314083
Shit chapter, can't wait for u19.
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Felt like the entire chapter was just exposition. Didn't really get a sense for any sort of interesting dynamic between Gonron and the egg, why was Gonron so ready to die for it when his personality seems to revolve entirely around his unwillingness to submit? The monster designs are good, but you don't really get a sense for the scope of the world and how the drakarchs have altered it (disappointingly, it seems to just be post apocalypse Japan with some embellishments, but surely there could still be something to establish?) The panelling is very uninspired too, pretty much the manga equivalent of shot/reverse shot conversation scenes in film for most of the chapter.
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>>283314083
Thanks for dumping
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>>283314145
>timeskip
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>>283314118
Anon....that's a man
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>>283313835
Very 2000s design
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>>283313169
He got mismatch eyes from the slave work.
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>>283314152
The drakarchs arrived 20 years ago.
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>>283313742
Me too, it will separate it from the other series
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>>283313835
Every new manga make this same mistake. Overdetailed battle form that looks so generic. You should start simpler. It's not like Luffy hits gear 5 in the first chapter
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>>283313742
Let’s hope it’s not another Astro situation.
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>>283314197
so? thye could have arrived before mc was born
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>>283314222
And even then G5 is simple looking
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I was kinda into it but the battle design and the kill were lame and I didn't feel a thing when MC killed the complete monster that ate his mother and father. How am I supposed to care about him killing a monster of the week next time when that didn't hit
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>>283314168
They just want to drop the synopsis asap and move on to the next plot
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I wish this was +Natural
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>>283314265
The MC had shockingly little emotional investment in the whole situation. He didn't even seem to really give much of a shit about dying.
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>>283313242
No set up? Just dumping us right into the plot? I'll accept
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I am invested in their journey and goal. And most importantly is I curious about the egg to hatch.
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>>283313835
>all that shit
>his weapon is a fucking katana
why even bother
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>>283314083
Thanks for dumping, I liked the chapter. Frankly it's rare for a new manga to hit the right notes from the start and make me want to keep reading, Gonron Egg accomplished this.
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>>283314455
Swords are the most popular mc weapon for a reason. I do think the dragon head on the sword looks a bit silly though. He can fine tune the design later I guess.
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>>283314488
you are an absolute faggit, holy shit
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No shot he's drawing that every week
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>>283314455
I do think the design would look cooler with a lance or a halberd or something.
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Is the author a man or woman?

>>283313312
The humanoid one reminds me of meruem
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>>283314052
I'll at least give it 3/5 chapters
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>>283313767
>the head looks like an egg
i mean, cool thematically but you ended up giving the mc a shitty haircut for the sake of this
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>>283314062
He is noticeable shorter than the adults, he is likely a teenager
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So THIS is the state of Jump in 2025. No wonder Saito isn't quick to axe a failed series, he doesn't have any replacements.
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>>283314028
Gon Ron
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>>283314028
We call him Armin or he-man
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>>283313435
Can't wait for the inevitable "we've reached 20% of our goal but our story continues!!!" ending
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Gonron Egg
>>283313169
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>>283313804
Wasn't he just ready to let one kill him and give Omha up to him
>>283313835
Damn. that's enough detail, He's going to regret that design once he has to draw it on a weekly schedule
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>>283314455
It's not even a katana, it's a knife the mooks used, but enlarged. Which is why it looks silly as shit.
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>>283314935
He will only use that transformation rarely in key moments in the manga
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>>283314935
>once he has to draw it on a weekly schedule
he wont have to
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>>283313169
why do all the humans have thick powerlifter bodies if they're being slave starved
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>>283314921
Nah this is a
>Huh? He's HATCHING? NOW???
ending
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>>283313835
too busy, this is not a design you bring to a weekly serialization
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>>283313835
Laaaaaaaaaaame
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>>283315023
They get tons of protein from eating ze bugs
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>>283313966
Fuck I was holping the dragon skull was a shield or something. Having it be the sword 's Really it looks like a giant knife hilt is so awkward.
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>>283315023
They were eating hell's bugs, it probably affected their development.
Goron was literally eating for 2 without problems.
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>>283313184
She can’t be the egg since the prince is right there in the egg ok the same spread.
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>>283313169
Both of his eyes are black here.
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>>283313169
I like the idea of demons being used as food kek
Also I wonder if the egg is lying. So far it looks more interesting than the jump lineup
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>>283315138
It is a flashback, he also lacks his scars from work
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>>283315126
>She
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>>283315154
Yes its very obviously a flashback. Just pointing out that he didn't always have one yellow eye.
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>>283315061
It probably looks like a giant knife because it is one. It's like he took one of the slaves' knives and enlarged it.
And now that I've said that I realize that they beheaded the dude in one fell swoop with what is essentially a kitchen knife, that's pretty fucking metal.
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>>283315154
Is that his kid sister maybe?
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>>283315223
Yes. It's pretty fucking obvious. Tentacle man is also in the process of eating their parents.
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>>283314083
I hope he slows the pacing way down. Unless he's laready planning to get axed so he's speed running the story
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>>283315223
Nigga look at their hair. Yes.
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>>283313475
I wish Agito would behead Ohma in Kengan
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>>283315023
Protein maxxing
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10 years at least
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Baited
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Sasuke first nakama
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>>283313835
aaand axed..
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>>283315455
Femsuke
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>>283315455
Just be a guy for fujobait and avoid the axe, no more tranny shit
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>>283313835
i don't think the author has to worry about having to draw all that shit for too long
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>>283315455
Looks like a fat bitch
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Don't ask me how I know this but this manga will somehow avoid getting axed early and will go on for ~150 chapter
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Kaedegami died for this.
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>>283315737
And nothing of value was lost.
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>>283313169
Kagurabachi died for this?
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So are post apocalyptic manga just cursed? FOTNS seems to be the only one that ended up being any good
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>>283315737
Kaedegami died because Saito tried to fuck the author
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>>283314151
Ichikuna looks normal also
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Axe status?
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>>283315963
U1, it is already axed.
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>so many kaedefags salty

Your manga is fucking dogshit, U19, deserved

Deal with it
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>>283313169
The art is pretty good, but I really feel like this is gonna need more hook in future chapters to survive. Like how Nue's Exorcist eventually pivoted into harem comedy nonsense.
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>>283315737
good, this is already better
noly good thing kaede had was the art
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>>283313584
>Ohma
>Agito
AIEEEEEE YOU GOT IT ALL WRONG
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>>283315839
It is a lost trope, similar to older sci-fi elements found in manga.
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>>283315839
One Piece is pretty good
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>>283313835
Aaaaaand dropped. Can't wait to see the U19 edit in a few months.
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>>283313966
>omae wa mou shindeiru
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Author comment.
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>>283316061
They need to exploit the male rival like, add some hot God who wants the previous King back, some cute girl and that's it, right now jump lack adventure genre, dunno why authors are going for the romcom or hags angle
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>>283316321
he cute
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>>283313835
lmao how did the editor even allow this?
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>>283313624
FJMT tier back- foreground dissonance
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>>283315023
Probably the authors fetish, the main villain hard his armpit exposed here >>283313624
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This is worse than all of his oneshots...Why?
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Still better than kaedegarbage that can't even draw fucking action lol
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>>283316952
Probably only had 3 weeks to finish it.
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>>283316054
So that why there's so much shit flinging
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Why are kdgfags mad at gonron egg? It’s not the fucking series fault.
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>>283317097
Something to vent their anger on.
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Armong is hecking based. This manga is so peak!>>283313876
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>>283316952
yeah, i was thinking the same. the monster weapon one shot would've made for a much better serialization unironically
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>>283313432
>casually mention hell exists
Is it separate from Gandala?
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>>283317097
anger is all they got
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>>283317331
Probably the six realms of Buddhism.
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Gon if he ron
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>>283316952
Because this is an actual weekly manga he has to draw weekly and not just a oneshot?
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>>283314163
probably would just get called a csm ripoff
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>>283317497
I don't mean just the art. Setting, character design...
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>>283313340
Not sure why but this reminds me of ero-guro fujo art.
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>>283313184
I just noticed she has a sword.
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>>283317497
the first three chapters are done ahead of time
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>>283317635
>Setting, character design
What about them? What characters have we seen other than the MC? None. Same with the setting. In a oneshot you present everything right away. Wait at least 10 chapters before passing a judgement on a weekly manga.
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>>283318095
The egg prince
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I'll give it another chapter but man this was a very lukewarm start
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shit chapter, also lordanubis I know you're here dumb fuck
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Good chapter. I liked it.
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>>283318178
Who has a great design.
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What the fuck is this
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You WILL love Arumin
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>>283313835
Author should just change his hair to this spiky look
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>>283318236
Who?
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>>283316321
So the requirement for serialization is letting Saito fuck you in the ass?
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i like the chapter anons
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There aren't any other explanations for pic related to get picked up, so that must be it
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>>283313835
A plain comparison to this masterpiece.
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Trash, This will be axed for sure
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>>283313835
It's sad how the author's protagonists became more overdesigned and uglier with each new work. The weaponized shota and the masked guy with tons of weapons were 10000 times better than this because they are relatively simple yet have potential for creative fights.
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>>283314083
I was saying all three of the new jump titles would be U19, and honestly I still see it. I liked the chapter and hope this series survives because I love a good post apocalypse battle shonen, but the MC's battle form sucks.
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>>283314197
>>283314241
>>283316150
We have arrived
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>>283314083
>Kdg dies for this
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>>283319325
I like the first one the most
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ONIONS UN TROLAZO ME GUSTA EL PEDAZO LA LA LA LA
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>>283313340
you know, despite being rulers and all they're still just eating slop out of a bucket like everyone else
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>>283313184
What in the heck kind of character design is this
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>>283320294
could be worse
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>>283319121
Nice. Nice effects and a beautiful sword without having 50 shapes like skulls, spines, claws, tentacles and oversized knives all in one. Still stands out enough from other "power up pose from magic sword activating" panels.
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>>283313835
KINOOOOO
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>>283313432
Toriko coded
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>>283315061
It IS a giant knife. It's just an oversized tanto.

The dragon head is like a gauntlet.
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>>283313184
You can see her clearer here
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>>283320384
>silly design for a video game aimed at small children
vs
>over designed clusterfuck of ideas for a serious plot about demonic abominations that eat people
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>>283318544
*Eggumin
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>>283320860
Oh, you can better see the background too.
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>>283313169
His hair looked better when he was a child.
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>>283320860
At first I thought he drew her right hand as a left one and now I can't unsee it.
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>>283313184
great art, horrible character design. especially for the main character
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>>283313169
my issue is that it revealed too much. we know what the egg is, we got a bunch of lore dump for future plot points and we kinda speedran the introduction.
i am not feeling this much
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chapters alright, pretty standard setup
kinda feels like chainsaw mans plot with seven deadly sins art
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>>283321183
>>283320860
>Her
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>gonron
>that character design
I really like the art and imagery of this manga, but the author really messed up the name and design of the MC.
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>>283318735
Kdg author didn't like it so she got axed
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This shit is 100% getting axed
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Normalize double page posts.
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>>283317635
We're less than 5 chapters deep chill out
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imagine how bad every other series that got pitched were if this got serialized
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>>283321708
I believe in that conspiracy that some editors will let something through because they know it's bad. Sabotage just so they can let their own series flourish.
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>>283314083
I sense a 10-year timeskip coming in chapter 18. "And their adventures continued...The End"
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>>283313835
Holy overdesign, Batman.
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>>283313835
Ok, picked up!
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>>283314083
ten years!
kek
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>>283321788
that wouldn't be the first member of a batch, the first member is usually the one the editorial has the highest hopes for
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>>283321394
wots team draco guv
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plot is ridiculously shallow for so many pages and setup
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>>283314083
Felt wery amateurish but it also felt like the mangaka's heart was in it. I hope he gets better fast before any axe.
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>>283313835
There is no fucking way you could continue to draw this level of detail for a shounen series
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>>283314083
Kind of insane to be at this level for art, but so unaware of how to pace/create a oneshot. How do you not just read a ton of successful oneshots and learn from that?
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I feel like you're overblowing how complicated the bone armor is. They're all rather simple shapes and the author """cheats""" constantly this chapter by leaving the most complicated part, the head arm, out of frame.
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>>283313169
I liked it but the MC's hair and transformation design is gonna kill it. Hopefully the author will ditch like Otr did
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>>283313966
The design is honestly not that bad, it looked a lot worse because of his pose
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>>283322720
Still, I can see the author simplifying the design anyways, that this first form was unfocused and wild with the power so as they try to control it better as the in universe explanation, it becomes smaller and simple to draw.
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>>283314007
>MC has poison attribute
I don't remember that ever happening. Pretty cool
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>>283315023
They are not starved tho.
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>>283316061
>eventually pivoted into harem comedy nonsense.

It was like that in the very first chapter anon
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>>283322617
The art is "good" but the designs are awful
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>>283314083
I like it
Alot more interesting than most of whats running in wsj right now
I dont think the japs are gonna like it though, theres not enough moe, no tits either
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>>283322955
Still too early, not uncommon for the protagonist's power to be "poisonous" for the specific demon/alien/fae enemies but for nothing else, and will this poison be used as poison like you would see other poison users? Creating noxious gas or poison pools? Or just a sword coated in "poison" that is the reason he can damage them but never really infects the enemy body? Because if a fight can drag on without the demon dying from the first early wounds that should have it poisoned then it is not really poisonous.
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How does Saito keep greenlighting garbage like this
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>>283313432
>You vill eat ze bugs
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>>283313835
Don't worry you only have U19 weeks left that you will have to draw
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>>283313835
Overdesigned
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>>283313184
Very ftm coded design. Women will lap this up. It wont die.
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>>283314083
>I don't want to hatch for ten years at least
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>>283317097
Babies first axing I guess
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>>283323372
You are right, too early, but I'm hopeful because the villain thought he was fine and ended up rotting. And the egg said Agito killed his father while saying Miasma is a special quality of his. Anyways, even if it was the case, I don't think that can really work in the long run. Its cool but impractical for a shonen
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>>283313184
>>283313169
>there were people who genuinely like armin's design
How?
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How hard will /wsj/ seethe if this somehow succeeds?
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>>283325060
people seethe everyday about ichi and kgb
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>>283321251
We have to speed run the early plot and world building or else Japanese Zoomers...Gen Alpha gets uncomfortable that "nothing is happening"
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>>283314083
I like how he doesn't seem that bothered about his imouto.
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>>283313835
WSJ has artist like Tosh and the guy from Yuuna sitting around doing nothing and instead of giving them work, they just let this horrible shit go live.
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>>283325626
>the guy from Yuuna
I'll never fucking forgive Miura for that ending and the epilogues
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>>283323503
Kaedegami mommy time died for this
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>>283313725
>>283313767
>>283313804
brink of death btw

>>283314083
What generic dogshit. The drakarch and mc monster designs were cool, but the personality of the MC, the egg, the bad guy, the bitch, and the world are all cardboard.
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>>283313584
I feel like I've seen a lot of dead parents and protect little sister lately
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>>283315737
>>283315817
Isn't it replacing Ping Pong Peril and Eikiden Bros? Because yeah, this slop is in that ball park, but not Kaedegami or Kagurabachi. I thought both of those lacked substance, but egg really takes the cake.
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>>283323372
Normally it is a damage boost.
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>>283327269
can't be replacing PPP since it's still going
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>>283325352
But this is way too much exposition squeezed together

Even stuff like MamaYuyu, which was axed, managed to put in a good 1st chapter by putting the information at a decent pace
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I don't mind the setting or parts of the writing but the MC design is meh and the writing feels way too generic. I don't see this lasting past 50 chapters.
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>>283327269
PPP was the best of the batch. It deserved to live over Harukaze Mound
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>>283327522
never forgive Saito
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>>283325060
It's clunky but it doesn't make me cringe while reading it, so I wouldn't be out of sorts if it succeeds. But that's not really what you asked. To be more direct, /wsj/ would constantly seethe over it because /wsj/ seethes over everything.
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This is Team Draco
https://teamdraco.official.ec/
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>>283314265
this, feels generic
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>>283328326
Oh
The Jiangshi X's assistant, huh?
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>>283322617
it's a lot easier said than done
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>>283313835
This is such a fucking eyesore. I liked Abrolom's design and I was looking forward to seeing other drarkarchs, but, oof.
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>>283322617
He is ex-assistant
They never got trained on how to write
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Oh, this is putrid. How bad are their options if this is what's getting serialized?
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>>283316321
I can see the light being drained from his eyes already.
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>>283328716
This is awkward, the first in the batch is normally the one that has the highest chance of living and they have the most confidence in. If you think this is bad...
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>>283328716
people said the same thing about kagurabachi, give it a few chapters and it might take off
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Editor Sugita (joined the company in 2012)
Responsible for: Kiyoshi, Gonron
Launched: Davide, U19, Cloaca, Agravi, Taipara, Coulombs, Tenmaku, Kiyoshi, Gonron (New)
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>>283329549
roboco doko?
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Kaedegami died for this
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>>283329549
>Cloaca
The fuck
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>>283329211
Kagurabachi became a success due to le edge meme energy which was there in the first chapter and first arc. All this has is eggs.
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You have to eat ALL of the eggs
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>Gonron Egg
>His head is an egg
>His eyes are also, apparently, eggs
>Everything is an egg and I'm beginning to think the author only knows how to draw eggs
So how exactly did this get the green light? Is this what the shizos mean when they say "the absolute state of WSJ"? Are we truly beholden to the worst timeline?
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>>283313835
There it is . U19 confirmed
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bruh, this is just Orient with shit art and shit design
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>>283313184
the name already tells me is gonna get axed
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>>283329549
>Launched: Davide, U19
Owari da...
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>people acting like this is particularly bad
I don't get it.
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>>283313925
How is he even swinging that sword around with that dragon hilt (?) going almost all the way to his shoulders?
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>>283313169
stop reading shonen
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>>283329906
The power of a good name really can't be overstated. And this one SUCKS. See you guys in 16 weeks when it's officially shitcanned.
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>>283330805
But I enjoy it, anon. Just like I enjoy literature of so many other demographics, genres, and subgenres. Reading is fun, anon. I don't want to stop reading just because of a bad egg.
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Theres no way fujos latch onto this
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Man this being the leadoff serialization of the round is rough
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>>283329046
>Literally all obvious axebait
Jump is doomed
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>>283330805
Never
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>>283314083
I liked it.
Decisive hero, cool Conan'esque premise, questions lingering.
Also i really liked Drakarch of this chapter, he gave away Nurgle vibes. Drakarchs overall is cool take on typical angels thing.
Makes me wonder if the heaven people has fucked up with experiments and turned into or summoned these creatures.
Overall interesting chapter, will check on the second one for sure.
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>>283313211
>>283313242
I'm sorry but whatever my thoughts on the chapter are aside, whoever at jump OK'd this character design needs to be immediately fired. What the fuck is even the point of having the editor system if they're going to allow that FUCKASS haircut.
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Killing evil demons
Good
Killing evil humans
Bad
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>>283329046
third one is straight up narou slop. even the title is one of those self descriptive shits
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>>283313584
Demon cumdump.
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>>283315295
>>283316150
>>283319483
>read this slop out of boredom
>reach that page of those names being mentioned
>immediately freeze dead still
"We" are "too far gone".
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I believe in eggmin
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>>283330491
Gonron will be rich when he betrays and sells Ohms.
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>>283325060
I’ve already seen kdgfags blame it. And seeing past series who made it out of axebait. It will definitely attract haters because they predicted weong.
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>>283314083
Overall very average (as it's fine enough to read, not particularly amazing or bad) with a very ugly OC design who feels like what a 13 year old would make in a character creator to try and be unique (obnoxiously bright hair colour, weird haircut, heterochromia + face scar).

I can't call axebait yet until we see how the next couple of chapters are handled.
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CHADMIN
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>>283327404
At least goron egg is going to include the fucking egg
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>>283313617
Thats the less interesting, safer and more generic option, so its a good thing you're not a writer
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>>283325060
>if
>somehow
I'm sure folks are thrilled to read more of this extremely original story and stellar visuals
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>>283330805
It's the only thing getting translated
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>>283313169
JP Twitter is not fucking with it at all, I keep seeing "It's a worse Otr"
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>>283313925
>>283313835
i like the design bu the MC looks lame as fuck which brings it down also for a first form in a weekly manga will punish the author a lot,unless his main thing is ablet o draw this kind of stuff
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is it post modern era? why doesn't they just nuke the invader
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>>283335514
They're not wrong, tho.
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>>283335935
otr is hard to follow and the action is just as shit though
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>>283336018
MALDING
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yep kino manga fuck the butthurt haters
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>>283337178
I liked it, I don't get what people's problem with it is
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>>283313278
>>283313432
>>283313475
>gandala, the land of the gods
>devilbugs originally from hell
>gandala has become a living hell
So is Gandala also Hell, or is there a separate Hell?
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So its like a serious beezlebub. I didnt hate it
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>>283313278
>child of man...
>you must embrace me and caress me
groomer egg
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>>283335935
>>283335514
good that means it's gonna be a hit in WSJ. otr is shit, has shit sales and toc so they clearly wrong
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>>283339397
Same. I miss Beelzebub
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>>283313835
first chapter and not enough aura to stay relevant...
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>>283314083
Thank you for posting.
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bump
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>>283329549
This could go well.
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>>283329549
>cloaca
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Shall be following this since I'm not a jaded piece of shit.
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I just hope the mangaka serves the part he actually wants to get to justice
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>>283313169
Sex with the MC.
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>>283313312
Cool demon designs.
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>>283317097
They got axed and so they're lashing out.
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>scarred muscle shota
this will get 10000 ryona doujins
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>>283313475
>oh yes I am definitely a heavenly prince and I will surely repay you as soon as I can, just keep rubbing me until I hatch
poor protag fell for a classic scam
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>>283313835
>literally a Shaman King oversoul
there are limits to plagiarism, not to mention revealing it so early is dumb
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>>283323607
I chuckled, anon.



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