Chapter 3
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the editor should be banned from the industry just for the hair alone and the fact, that the MC is called fucking GONRON and not the eldritcvh Egg
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>>283653408kekWas the author Togashi's assistant? His artstyle is very similar.
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This would have been a 10/10 chapter if the MC had an appealing body but all these muscles ruin it.
>>283653800Togashi? I was about to say he was Nakabas assistant. This >283653859 looks straight out of NNT, especially the retarded bolt-on tits
>>283653859Damn.I'm liking Gonron so far, it's the best newbie we had in years. Competently structured and to the point with a strong forward momentum, this is how a manga should start.>>283653879Yeah it's like a mix of Nakaba and Togashi imo
>>283653961same here, fellow manga enjoyer. this manga is a return to form, HUZZA!!
>>283653800was going to post the same, they definitely use the same type of pen at least
>>283653859Why is everything in this chapter so blurry? It makes it too hard to read. What the fuck was the editor thinking?
>>283654075Are you one of those people that just complain for the sake of complaining?
>>283653828>>283653859it this what they call toxic yuri?
>>283652945>gonorrea kingLmao
>>283653288>>283653331>he realized the design was shit so he's just fighting with heart power now
I still cannot stand>gOnROn>seriously, gonron?>that lame ass hairstyle>gon fucking ron, is the name>what the fuck>combat form design
>>283653859Rosemon?
>>283654245My complaint is still sound.
>>283653696>There will come a time when all mankind welcomes my rule.I dunno man that sounds ominous.
>>283654611Armong Egg didn't sound that good either
>>283653866Muscles is good, he just needs to be better at drawing muscle
>>283654748Eh it's probably fine right
>>283654748I don't trust that egg
>>283653622Yanhomo egg
man, the character art and background art clash so much it's kinda obvious there's a very skilled assistant helping out this newbie
>>283655106It's much better this chapter. The first chapter was kinda hilarious. I'm sure they'll find their balance.
>>283652945Now the whole batch had been outits time to vote which one is the winnerhttps://strawpoll.com/7rnzVA8e3nO
>ohma 5 seconds after hatching
>>283655348Yeah, I'm thinking Oma and Goron will become enemies.
>>283655040>I don't trust that eggI've seen this opinion multiple times, but seriously, it can only get better from here on. All of mankind is enslaved and can get eaten just for looking at the local ruler the wrong way. Even if egg is evil, it would either be equal as bad or better.Plus Egg is part of the title and the main powerup, so of course it's a good guy, or at least will be once he reveals his true power
>>283655887I don't think the egg will be evil, like the rest of drakars. I'm thinking more like he's gonna be hellbent on ruling over humans whereas Gonron will chose a different path, and they will become antagonists of the series.
>>283652985He looks better with his hair tied back
>>283652945Chapter was terrible, it feels like the author alraedy got the axe notification and is speedrunning shit.I hate that fucking annoying egg MC already looks like a faggot and the egg still has to cockblock himwho looked at the drafts for this and ever thought it was worth printing?Kaedegami died for this FFS
>>283656300dumb retard
>>283656332at least my dick still works and I can tell good and bad manga apart
>>283656286Literally anything is better than the Armin bobcut. Btw something I noticed is that the backgrounds look really good despite the characters looking mediocre, I guess the assistants are doing their best to polish this turd.
>>283656300retard-kun, EVERY single series in shonen jump that wants to have a series get greenlit needs to submit the first 3 chapters. Meaning all of these chapters were finished before the first chapter was even released.Not to mention it takes much much longer for the committee to decide which series to axe or notRead Bakuman sometime, it will help you not sound like a retard in the future
>>283652945>>283652951>>283652985Is it me or does the background art look much more finely drawn than the characters? The lineart quality of foreground and background kinda clash.
>>283652945I like this manga.
>>283656576stuff like backgrounds and crowds are the part of the manga where assistants have more input than the mangaka. Every time you see a manga where the scenery looks great but the characters look like ass that's the reason why.
>>283656496your point? These first three chapters are terrible, Kaedegame was injustly axed and this shit came right after, why can't I compare them? did your masters at the comittee not see that coming?
>>283654075To be fair this isn't an author problem the US Scans for Jump are lower quality across the board than they are for everyone else for some reason
>>283656670The chapters are good and Kaedegame was axed because it was shit.
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>>283656916>The chapters are goodAre we reading the same chapter? It doesn't get any better.
>>283653200Sexo unironicallyHe looks so much better with a different hair style
>>283657223I bet that the reason why the author gave him a bobcut was to fit the egg theme of the series and the editor didn't have the guts to tell him that was fucking retarded
>>283656300Kaedegami was fucking dogshit thoBoring ass plot and story sugar-coated with pretty art and design
>>283657223>>283657367He already gets a new haircut when he transforms. The bobcut is there on purpose to make the transformed form look cooler.
>>283657445>and story sugar-coated with pretty art and designyou can't even say that about this egg shit lmao
>>283657668take your axeslop cope somewhere else
>>283657196No accounting for your shit taste I guess.
>>283657740Enjoy your soon-to-be u19 then, eggfag.
>>283656670>your point?that>it feels like the author alraedy got the axe notification and is speedrunning shit.makes no fucking sense you idiot, I have never even read Kaede whatever the fuck and I don't care about comparisons, but I care about people not being fucking retarded, with that I mean you
>>283653408Alright this page was funny.
>>2836538593 chapters and he we still haven't seen the other person on the color page. What's up with that?
>>283658174Soon.
>>283656300It honestly felt like he got it by chapter 1 with how fast the pacing has been. Feels like the mangaka doesn't have faith in his own work
>>283657495too bad that the bobcut will give most people an ick so strong that they won't even bother to give the series a chance. It's the same thing with how ATLA flopped in Japan just because Aang is bald.
>>283658314he transforms in chapter 1
>>283658193I wonder who can he be given his uniform in this planet of the apes tier world
>>283659056Obviously there's some kind of resistance.
>>283659216Yeah but again, would there be an organized resistance to the point of uniforms in this world?
>>283659056>>283659216maybe one of alien guys actually lives in a super rich place, and this guy >>283658193 is a high ranking slave/soldier for him.
>>283658419>the mc only looks ridiculous 80% of the timewoah, great point
>>283660172wasn't the argument
>>283654075>Why is everything in this chapter so blurry?That's just Mangaplus/Viz's shit quality images. The raws are much sharper and with twice the resolution.
>>283656821Has anyone been this disrespected in death?
>>283660330>all J+ chapters go to 2100>all WSJ chapters go to 1145I don't get their logic
>>283660336Yes.
>>283660336Don't people to this day still piss on Margaret Thatcher's grave?
>>283660336Wait til Trump dies
>>283661204>TDS
>>283653696i hate how often he smash cuts to something and has gonron narrate what happened
>>283653696>They must REALLY hate the drakarchs.YEAH NIGGA I WONDER WHYAxe this thing already.
>>283661351retard
This piece of shit series will be axed under chapter 14 or less.
>>283660231It was. Because for the most chapters we will only see him in his transformed state for a few pages at best.
>>283661655It will beat Chagecha's 8 chapter axe
>>283661252There are a lot of people who really don't like him and have no respect for the dead
>>283661655>>283661836>retard
>>283661730It literally wasn't.>let me move the goalpost
>>283661836That was a very special case.
>>283652945art is terrible
>>283652945cute
>>283662138>That was a very special caseqrd?
>>283653622He missed out
hopefully village wife comes back
>>283661351Its fits anon. Everyone he knew was mindbroken and brainwashed. Its like the christian or muslim god. He will sentence you for eternity in hell or rain fire on your ass if eas meat on certain days or pork at all, yet peope worship them as benevolent gods
>>283663091Sawai ended it on his own accord after intense early backlash
>>283664292heh
>>283654748I feel like it's REALLY obvious Egg has ulterior motives
>>283656821'irk in 'onron thread~
>>283653800>togashis assitantwtf now i cant unsee it
>>283653200i'd buy this manga if he stayed with that haircut and only wearing a tiny loincloth/towel.
>>283653622I want to see this cutie again.
>>283653622kek I look forward to the egg cockblocking him many more times
>>283653622>GONRON FINDING ANOTHER WOMAN? NO I DONT WANT THAT>EVEN AFTER I HATCH I WANT HIM TO STAY BY MY SIDE FOR 10 YEARS ATLEASTbravo isayama
>>283656821>>283660330Is there any reason for why VIZ scans are such low quality STILL
>>283656469It could end up being a CSM Part 1 situation where Fuji had a ton of good assistants
>>283656658This is like when I found out about DOPs in movies, my world view shattered
>>283653200Wait, so you're telling me that in this page, the assistants did 80% of the work and the mangaka just drew the ugly misshapped character?
>>283652945This Egg is sooo poached.I'm not usually one to call out something as axebait, but this series has got nothing going on, three chapters in.
>>283669419nyes
imagine having a yee yee ass haircut so bad that a manbun is a better alternative
>>283669373>DOPswhat?
>>283670727Directors of PhotographyI always wondered why some directors made good movies and then shit ones, and turned out the good movies had good DOPs and the bad ones had bad DOPs
Does this series have literally any potential?Is there anything in the mangaka's past that might imply competence?I cannot understand why the editors at shounen jump have gotten so bad. All of the problems with this feel like either things that should have been caught by editors or things that were put in by editors
>>283670818Reminds me how Kaiju no.8 had an entire year of publishing where the author fucking forgot that the MC exists. Torishima should send all current Jump editors to a boot camp to teach them how to do their fucking job
>>283670933He forgot fucking Naruto existed during early Shippuden
This series reminded me of a much superior manga about a lonely warrior fighting grotesque monsters in a post-apocalyptic world
>>283652985Is adding periods a new thing for Viz? I never noticed it before.
>>283671459>assistants trying to pad out their portfolio quick before the axe
>>283653859Thank you for posting.
>>283669419well, he also wrote the script and drew the storyboard, but I get what you meanaccording to Bakuman, assistants are usually being paired with authors based on skill level and style, but I guess this time the editor figured "his art is so shit, we need something that stands out" and hired him a real good assistant
>>283652945The attempts to sneak humour in were pretty clunky
>>283666325thx
