Chapter 5
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>>283967839>Surely this will affect the heart>>283967879>Ack! My heart!I don't know why this got a laugh out of me
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>>283967941>i dont eant to kill the demons!!!!can this manga get any worse?
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>>283968173Gonron the moron
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>>283968208>It's fast sleepsasuga translator-kun
>>283967721>>283968250I really like the composition of his spreads. That's a boy btw.
>>283968250ENTEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEER
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>>283968250why does every single shonen manga have the protagonist join An Organization Of People Fighting [this manga's stock enemies]
>>283968250Ah finally
>>283968285Egg of chapter.
>>283968285I was disappointed when Gonron didn't take that other girl as a wife. This makes me feel relieved.
why the fuck are wsj serializations getting worse and worse
>>283968335What a dogshit chapter. It feels like it already get axe noticed.
>>283968335The last panel feels ominous. They're going to die, aren't they?
>>283968398>>283968431>>283968197>waaaah it's so bad, I'll continue reading it every week!can you fuck off from here already you fucking schizo
>>283968285The protagonist looks like a chick. For what purpose? Clearly not for yaoibait.
>>283968561>The protagonist looks like a chickAlmost, he looks like an egg
>>283967721Heaven forbid Gonron have the slightest bit of strugle in a fight
>>283968250>cover girl finally shows up chapter 5>but only as a teaseActually fuck now i'm starting to wonder if cover girl actually is a man like some people were saying
>>283968768>girl
>>283968296There's a manga running in jump RIGHT NOW where the protagonist finds himself in opposition to the main group fighting the same people he is, or more to the point they find themselves in opposition to him, which might happen here for a while too
>>283968285Was he not allowed to draw an actual kiss? I thought at first it was interesting doing snuggling up close instead of a kiss but then there's a kiss sound effect
>>283968735These aren't fights yet, just jobbers.
>>283968545this is my first time coming in those threads or reading a gonran chapter retard
>>283968838And the worst lie award goes to
>>283968826It's chapter 5
>>283968838dont reply to the avatar feggot
>>283968825>actual kissCan't show such filth in a christian manga
>>283968545it still fucking dogshit.
>>283968296Can you think of an scenario of people fighting for the same cause ARE NOT banding together?
>>283968908cope faggotyour shitnga is getting axed soon
>>283968838>>283968975>talking to himselffucking schizo
>>283968296not only that but also "using [this manga's stock enemies]'s powers"
>>283968140Kino page.
>>283968825They aren't married so you can't show them kissing
>>283968768>girlwhy are so many people manga-blind? You only have to read 10 or so shonen manga to instantly tell who is a bishonen and who a girl.
>>283969179I don't really mind this but this being treated as some shocking reveal in the last chapter of blood wing hunter was hilarious
>>283968838>>283969049Who are you trying to trick?
>>283968296One day we'll get a series where the MC founds the organization without it being some twist time travel reveal.
>>283968825Their cheeks are too big and get in the way
Bring back the trap
>>283968335The background clashes with the characters way too much. Feel like the assistant just make the background however they like without trying to match the art style
>>283968434Reminds me of the PT flashback in HxH so probably yes?
>>283969986It got way better than the first chapter, the lineart is less thick and blends better. Still not the best but it's passable.
BTW of Gonron fails they can have this guy draw HxH while Togashi writes it. It looks really similar.
>>283969986I kinda like it, it's like games with 8 bit characters and detailed 3d-ish backgrounds
>>283968826Were five on and he keeps having outright stomps
>>283970226Not just the lines thickness, the characters have a thin white stroke around them, which makes them look like stickers on the page. Usually they use a white fog instead
>>283969986This artist prefers not to use backgrounds based on his previous works. But I guess Jump paired him up with an assistant who didn't know how to complement his artstyle so they clash. But it's getting better I think.
>>283968296Because it worked for Naruto/Bleach/HxH/JJK/etc.
>>283970902>Kaijuu no Buki ShokuninDamn I forgot all about that because it didn't go anywhere.
>>283969986The assistant seems to know how doomed this series is and is resume padding.
>>283970902The white outline usage there is much better. It's used where it's needed
>>283968296because it's an easy way to introduce new "competent" characters, people are not as into fist of the north star type shit, and if you want a story about building a teamjust go play a jrpg
>>283968250SHE IS HERE
>>283972307>SHE
>>283972307>she
I consider all this a prelude before the title drop, and the real story begins when they meet up with the sword guy. He must be very important given he's on the very first color page.
Fanart.
>>283972505>6 chapters in>meets sword guy>become allies by ch.10>"Our Story is just beginning" The Endwould be funny if this got the same ending as Kaedegami
>>283973567The axe is likely but I hope egg survives.
>>283973500we won
Gonron's wife
>>283973567We'll see if Saito gives it 0 promotion as well.
>>283974043thats a man
>>283974857That's the joke
>>283968285what a weird way to show a kiss..
IMMA CHARGIN MAH LAZA
>>283973500Even in fanarts the dragon head struggling to hold the sushi knife on its mouth looks retarded kek
>>283976452nah
>>283968250E N T E R
>>283976701E G G T E R
I'm gonna miss her.
gon gon
>>283979500etat your eggs
>>283968735>>283970454Japan is of the same opinion
>>283980707we're still in the prelude phase
>>283977696she should have joined
This manga would be better with more egg puns.
>>283975701maybe the kid doesn't really have any experience giving kisses to her saviors, hm?
>>283981995Actually amazed there aren't any
>>283968250If edgy girl(male) is a cool rival will the manga be saved?
>>283968296I mean in One Piece the "Organization Of People Fighting [this manga's stock enemies]" are the actual villains but I do agree every other new jump manga seems to be falling for the trope.
>>283982124I doubt it, no one fuck with this
>>283982172It's a shame because even if the rest of the manga is meh I do think Mr Egg is kind of fun as a concept and character.
>>283981995>>283982086Is every human having an egg-shaped head not enough to you?
The way the heads are drawn in this manga is a bit old fashioned
>>283982384thats good
>>283967697The art for this manga bothers me. The characters look like they're awkwardly floating in front of the environments instead of looking like they're a part of them. It looks like the character art was drawn first without thinking of how it should mesh with the background, and then the background was added by assistants later for panels where the main artist cared enough to give them space to work with. For a good example of a newbie mangaka who knows how to integrate characters and environments is Tohru Kuramori, the author of Centuria.
>>283968208>fast sleepslow sleep
>>283970966HxH has the hunter association but they don't really have enemies. The whole thing is largely just a strong guy association for certifying strong guys and giving them a "I can do whatever I want" license.
>>283968793Which one?
>>283982212No, I need a retarded 4Kids-tier translation.
>>283983644Mage next door, as of the most recent chapter
>>283967941Never trust evil women, Gonron.
>>283968250MYSTERY EGGAS
>>283982622>The art for this manga bothers meSame. The characters look like this, it you replace the little boy with a little girl.
>>283982622But this guy isn't a newbie, he's worked since 2016, albeit with no notable works
EGGNO
>>283982622see >>283970902
>>283970278It’s either by an assistant or someone highly influenced by Togashi. He draws faces identically to modern Togashi style.
>>283968250Otr is well and truly fucked now
>>283987859>now
>>283987789looks nothing alike
>>283986935kek
Eggcelent.
>>283987859Both will die
>>283982622>>283986991last week chapter had translucent characters because the author fucked up the layers, that's a classic beginner's errors in digital art
>>283991413If you seriously think the mangaka is drawing those background mooks, you need to learn more about manga making. You can clearly see the background isn't even finished behind them.
>>283991846All the characters and creatures here are drawn by the author, dumbass
>>283992272>you need to learn more about manga making
