How would you have fixed Overlord?
>>284107967I don't even think about Overlord
>>284107967Not make Ainz a beta on the inside. Or at least have his lich racial trait walk him away from it.I want to hear *inner* thoughts that start to sound more and more based. Not just outward speech.
>>284107967I would have something happen to his henchmen. Obviously they don't want them to die, but you could have them captured or perhaps teleported very very far away.Everything is so focused on just the current place they are messing around with, missing the opportunity to make the world feel more alive.
No need.
The story needs stakes. There is literally no scenario where things go wrong for this guy. He's invincible and his subordinates would stay loyal even if they found out he's an idiot. He has enough gold and scrolls to resurrect like a million times even if he dies. It was so boring even the author got bored.
>>284107967just make the maids fight some shit, they can actually lose
>>284107967full rewrite after the end of 1st arc. No other way.
>>284107967Killed myself before ever experiencing itThe blueballed feeling, much like with Highschool of the Dead is not very niceits despair inducing
>>284107967Everytime I hear someone talk about this they are talking shit about it, but then how is it the most popular thing to ever exist?
>>284109600It's the ironic type or moral busy bodies that have a huge hate boner for it and constantly need to tell everyone how much they hate it and it's the worst thing ever. Up to you how you treat them with that information.
>>284107967no lizards archigher stakesmore progression
>>284107967Yasei no Last Boss fixed overlord already.
>>284107967Not used godawful CGI for the big battles
>>284107967>How would you have fixed Overlord?Just making a web novel adaptation instead of censored LN adaptation.
have it go into permanent hiatus after volume 13
>>284110996What are the main differences?
>>284111020Vampire sex slave training
>>284107967Don't goof around moralfagging while being OP, in The Eminence in shadow it works, but not with this set up. I watched only season 1 btw
>>284107967More Momonga adventures.
>>284111020More rape.
>>284111020Sex and violence, if you haven't yet figured out how angsty writers tick.
>>284107967Get him an actual dick to bang the girls
>>284107967More Demiurge degeneracy and political games.
>>284109600the author hates it because the editor made his shitty webnovel good o algo
>removes the rape>editor made his shitty webnovel goodWhy are all tourists this retarded?
>>284111020Shalltear isn't a virginLNs are better thanks to that little change
>>284107967The worst part about Overlord is reading about Yggdrassil. No MMO will ever work like that so that always broke my immersion.
>>284107967Make it 96% about Mare.
>>284107967drop the video gay gimmicksmake it a story about an actual super powerful lich that is transported to a different world.shenanigans ensue.for extra drama make it so that he is 100% evil at first but through his disguise as the hero momon he softens up to humans and the other races.
>>284107967What is there to fix? Give the anime adaptation more care (no using CGI to cut corners) and maybe spare Clementine once or twice.
>>284112754Every time the MC starts ranting about how things used to be back in the video game i cringe so hard i feel like I'm going to collapse into a black hole of cringe.It's obvious that Overlord was written by someone who has never played a single video game in their lives.
>>284107967I'd have killed off Albedo early as a motive for Ainz to desire total world subjugation.
>>284109600>how is it the most popular thing to ever exist?the premise is fairly unique and has tons of potentialgod-tier character designs and musicseason 1 was mostly excellentepisode 1 with its slow pacing and resigned atmosphere was masterful all they had to do was actually give him worthy opponents instead of squandering it all, see this >>284108868
>>284110884I can tell from the title alone that it didn'tbut I'm open to being convinced otherwise
>>284112754>>284112984Just admit it would be great if there was a game like that.
>>284108868I am quite certain demiurge would not stay loyal
>>284115357CEASE YOUR SLANDER!
>>284107967Add a lot of Shalltear slice of life.
>>284107967Get rid of the harem shit aspect.
