Do you play MMORPGs to pass the time? Do you no longer have fun with it? Lost your friends? No fun guilds anymore? No good banter in public? Is everyone a bot trying to steal your hard earned cuurency on cheap or expensive items? Well look no further!Come join the RX guild and play those blues away with players dead set on the ultimate goal: World Domination! Watch Braveman's raid stream as he attempts to control his most problematic before it all goes to shit: executive Black General!Ii Orc no Hi storytime for those who missed it:>>282421161 (Dead)Previous threads:https://desuarchive.org/a/search/subject/Zannen%20Black%20General/Complete raws:https://mega.nz/folder/bIdWHTIL#e407XM6tlOtB6v1FwuNklg
Seems captcha made me wait 5 mins for me to post. Then my net died shortly. What. Anyways.Chapter 168 yeah.
>I'm afraid it's been... 9 years.
>IT'S HAPPENING
>ENLIGHTENED
>>284420864I didn't know bras exosted that could hide how perky every girl is in this series
>>284420969Is it rape if the rapist is asleep?
>>284421020JIN had to bust out the bra that could contain the over excited nips.
Chapter 169 yeah.Oh baby.
Braveman is a changed man.
And so General wins her first ever battle against a mentally unstable Braveman.
Aaaand done! Danke fer comin'!TOMORROW. SHOTA HUNTER
>>284421011weak to kisses?
>>284420894She is such a pain in the ass
>>284420969Devilish
>>284420894>V has come to
>>284421114I wonder if this really happens
>>284421382good for him
>>284420969Evil won...
>>284421114Raw pls :)
>>284421345He's literally me.>>284421429Sota HunterLow kickBest match
>>284420894>getting laid up hasn't changed her a bitgetting laid would
>>284420913>he's lying on top of her>she's violently thrusting up and downYeah, it looks like that.>>284420969>nothing ever happens in this mang->s o m e t h i n g h a p p e n e d
>>284420969YesThis is rape
>>284421165I wonder if JIN purposely draw his expression shadow a bat
>>284421429Danke OP
>>284420969It's so over for him.
>>284423602
>>284423906Transmator added reference then.
>>284420969I would die
Some progress, finally
>>284421382I just now realized her long hair is back
>>284425347Whatever was in that IV-drip sure made her recover fast.
>>284421230Uoooooh general lips
>>284421114>>284423906>>284423999I see no problem there. It's a reference for kids like me.
Jin does good lips
>>284420894sleep sexual harassment
>>284420969She looks so content, like she had a good dream
>>284420894Inside her what?
>>284421294General was always this cute, so what did Braveman see before?
>>284428826He just constantly saw her in her marshmallow gremlin form
Is General always calling other girls sluts projection of her just being able to read girls.
>>284429532She a) knows the inner heart of a woman, b) is the mouthpiece of Jin describing his character motivations and artistic direction.
>>284421429Thank you for posting.
>>284421345Like something from a horror manga.Hilarious.Do your best Braveman.
>>284426717It's also completely made up
>>284428826Somewhere between a slobbering dog maniac and a marshmellow gremlin.
how will she ruin it bros?
>>284431674She does say trying to take over the world but it is a reference to clothing.
>>284431896>but it is a reference to clothing.how does that one work?
>>284431965Braveman is suppossed to retort as the straight man so this is just some nonsense she is saying that won't mean anything when Braveman doesn't react.
>>284420969
>>284429532its either projection or envy at the ones with boyfriends
>>284431674And?
She needs something.
>>284420913Honestly, nips have a thing with smell I will never get.
>>284420969RAPE! BRAVEMAN HAS BEEN RAPED!
>>284421165This is a great "it was like he was looking at walking garbage"
>>284421382Braveman is literally me
>>284421294What a lovely young woman, I sure hope she doesn't open her mouth to say something weird
Braveman cause Generals muscleman fetishGeneral caused Bravemans lip fetish
Next chapter soon.
>>284421093Really reminds me of a Haku MMD model
>>284421093>virgin killerBM doesn't have a hope
Chapter 170 yeah.
Shota hunter is coming out in full force.
>PTSD intensifies
I love the running joke that General's go to move is just a low kick
>>284441363>37CJesus my pasty ass would melt
>>284441541Best legs in the business.>>284441587What're you? A Fin? Nor?
>when your friend had enough of your shit
Chapter 171 yeah.
>>284441619>What're you? A Fin?Surely not, it would be 1am every time you post for me if I was.
>>284441706Had a brother of a thousand lakes here. Thought you were that same guy.
And so Boss gets marriage proposals and arranged marriage meetings.
>>284441788Even Scientist-san has her moments of playfulness I see.
General's knowledge and admiration of Boss just made her the best project wingman for Secretary
Ah shit.
Dat cute, surprised Secretary.
>>284441822Secretary-chan, that's not a good tactic to keep your man.
>>284441967Based Boss-kun, death to haremfags!
Aaaand done! Danke fer comin'!TOMORROW. VOLUME 12
>>284441883Any girl who's default expression is 83 is always 100% playful
>>284442016>foreshadowing>>284442115Kiitos ;)
>>284442115Thanks anon.What's your plan for volume 13? The deadline looms
>>284442170Posting the raws. I thought I could save up some cash for a commission but Christmas is just that one thing that fucks your wallet on top of rent and other bills. I honestly dunno what's an "affordable" commission for a full volume.
>>284441927Look at this sad Secretary-san.Help cheer her up by replying with "Don't worry, Secretary-san!"Super cute chapter, thanks OP.
>>284441852>All men love haremsIs this foreshadowing an ending where Braveman gets a General clone harem?
>>284442486Don't worry, Secretary-san!
ngl I miss the shounen arcs and the jonkler
>>284441420thai kicku~what was that show called again? The one where they have to shut up because library or something?
>>284442839Dexter's Lab library episode?
>>284421093>>284441096>Can't find the model name>The only video I know it was used for has been private so I can only get a terrible bit rate of the video.Pain...Also it must e the lips and hair
>>284442839gaki no tsukainever found it that funny personally, it's mostly misses
>>284441652It's ok for General to lust over Braveman in totally inappropriate ways, but Kuchizake-chan can't gobble up young boy balls in a similarly perverted manner without being called a villain by actual villains...It's not fair bros.It's not fair.
>>284441758Oh hey it's the guy who bought the robomaid again
>>284442016>minion 1 fodder
>>284442243Uh, I got cash to spare BUT I think trannylators are niggerfaggots so I ain't sharing.Raws are fine, just try and get some discord fanboy loser to give you a rough translation to greentext or something.
>>284442839>>284442879Oh I thought it was anime. Hitoshi was my man. That "woooooooo" with a straight, deadpan face will always crack me up.>>284442897It's implied that he does fund them for upgrades of the maid. Which is why the Boss is getting marriage proposals because these are the rich business men. The fact that Dorothy is with the mecha yakuza for interaction evaluation is also proof of that.>>284442963I'd never wanna do it that way anon. I'd also use my money over yours anyway. I stopped using discord for quite awhile. I only peak into it every once in awhile.
>>284442879The batsu game new year shows is very 'if it ain't broke don't fix it', It makes it when you think they're going to subvert expectations, only to boomerang back to the status quo, more funny.Like Masahiro Chono slapping Hosei.
>>284441363>>284441385>>284441448
>>284443980tall tits, forgot to type that part in
>>284444002Understandable when tits are involved.
>>284443008For some reason I always thought they were just orders for different kinds of robo maids and not actual marriage proposals.
>>284442889Viallins are never fair, bro. Villains are never fair...
>>284441852My grandfather had 3 wives, so liking harems is built into my genes.
>>284442115Is the girl on the right meant to be the kusogaki?
>>284447934Yeah, you can tell by the signature smugness.
>>284442243I have a rough-ish (though non-MTL) text translation of vol. 13 almost finished. There's 2,5 chapters left, so I am fairly sure I can get it done by the time 13 starts. I have a lot of other shit I gotta do though which has delayed my work.
>>284448501Also, once I get the roughs done for the last chapters, and made an editorial pass over it, I will post it as a pastebin link in the current thread. If some other Anon wants to do a pass over it then, they are welcome to do so.
>>284448501Thanks anon
>>284448501We are so back
>>284441448General has optimised her low kicks.
>>284442889Little boys can't fight back
>>284441992one step forward, three backRX will get a cute intern who completely backgrounds Secretary and monopolises Boss if she doesn't become more accomodating.
>>284442933Minion 1 gets all the chicks it ain't fair.
What can we learn from this manga about Jin's preferences for women?
>>284442115Danke OP
>>284448501
>>284441908All the characters being wingmen for each other is really nice...Just noticed there's no filthy love triangles/polygons or things alike, each person has that one other, and the rest is either jealous or supportive. Nice.
>>284425347And thank god for that.
>>284448501You can do it anon.VERY IMPORTANTIts totally ok if its just text, better that, than delay the typesetting and editing and all that. Raws and translations in post body would be hugely appreciated all the same.
Guys I'm worried. We're almost at the end of the manga and RX hasn't even taken over the neighborhood that park is in. How will they even take over the country? Do they need to work with the other villain teams to take a city?
>>284441385I wish they'd get actual names, or leave them untranslated at least, because reading stuff like Eight Foot Tall-chan and Slit Mouth Woman-san is really annoying.
>>284441541Fear not the man who has practiced 10,000 kicks, etc.>>284441532>melon-splittingBut she just threw it at her like a dodgeball...>>284441992Scientist is deceptively quick.>>284442075>who's responsible for this!?>oh right, it was meI love this gag.
>>284455658Makes me think, how many people actually have names in this and no some codename or overly descriptive name, right now I can only think on Litch.
>>284441992Scientist is a source of troubles herself, so of course she can see trouble coming
>>284459707Her troubles are the best entertainment.
>>284458655and suzutanaka san
>>284455658Can't go confusing the gaijin with moon speak.
>>284442016Underboobs are nice
>>284464513That. And the wonderful view of the mound sticking out from the swimsuit.
<< It's time. >>
Chapter 172 yeah. This point is new territory for most anons.
>>284466599Bunny suit General sure is dangerous.
>>284466855She definitely is.
Jesus. Poor Minion 3. Getting zapped by a cute alien girl constantly.
>>284420806Adorable sleeping General.
>>284466848looking cool
Chapter 173 yeah. Looks like things are getting serious plotwise.
>>284466782Eh? Lien?
>>284467175But General became kinda superhuman on her own, didn't she?
>>284467242If we go by the alien's rules, people like General who developed a super human complexion through outside reaction and thus mutation, would not count because that is just borderline endurance training of the extreme kind.
Ya know, this alien tractor beam is way efficient. Not only does it pull targets into their trajectory, but also phases them. I just wonder if it is much more stable than the beam teleporter tech of Star Trek.
>>284467502>>284467536General Morden all over again
Aaaand done! Danke fer comin'!TOMORROW. ANAL DEVASTATION
>>284467693Thanks OP.
>>284467606But does General get stripped on an operating table?
>>284467693Nice try OP, but I see through your ruse! General's fine, it's definitely going to be alien girl probing #3
>>284467502I HAVE TO GO NOW. MY PLANET NEEDS ME.
>>284467831Damn.
>>284466915>>284466970NUMBER 3! NOOOOOO!
>>284467066Spaceship previously seen here >>284442016
>>284467145Tagging-along-man
>>284467234I have my doubts that "cringe" was used in the raw.>>284467348Cute warmongering alien
>>284467536
>>284468211Yer doubt was right.
>>284467925
>>284466970Scott Sterling!!!
>they let general onto their shipthat seems like a terrible idea
So the monsters were the result of genetic engineering too, right?They probably just got an extra-strong dose of the stuff that gives people powers.
>>284469291a possible plot hole in THIS manga? Surely not.
>>284455658For once I'll defend the trannies here: an average jap reads hasshaku as eight feet, same with slit mouth, and they'll react accordingly. These things CAN be translated into peasant language with no problem, so they should. Things like san, chan, kun etc are alien enough for English that they're better left as is.
>>284466970>He can't even screams anymore! Grim
>>284467104>UNGAAAAA>BUNGAAAAABroken scientist chan is Omega cute.
>>284467234>Violence against own kindSo the aliens are the retards with a reductive view of """"humanity"""", disregarding all the subgroups within it, like races or social classes that DO have genuine reasons for conflict.In short, they're libtards.At least their threat assessment is sound.
>>284467606Metal slug?!Jin probably played the hell out of that one too, seems right up his alley.
>>284466970Yeah. Poor Minion 3
>>284468095I thought that was a joke about her hat
>>284469626I can't agree at all. It's clumsy and unpleasant.
>>284466536Almost forgot this had an "anime"
>>284470288Unpleasant is subjective, but calling it clumsy is objectively incorrect. Its accurate and causes no issues for understanding. Would you rather Secretary san was "translated" as "Hisho san"?
>>284470517It's clumsy because people who speak English don't refer to other people that way, and attaching the honorific to it makes it even more so. It's an unnecessary mouthful.
>>284467536lol wtf
The 3 minions actually being the same characters instead of a mod of goons was the first first that impressed me enough for me to read the rest
>>284468049Number 3 is the only one without a gf, right?
>>284471436>Final chapter spoilerThis panel is probably the only clue to their relationship so far
>>284470887>It's clumsy because people who speak English don't refer to other people that way, and attaching the honorific to it makes it even more so.Japs do refer to caricatures that way.
>>284467502>Abducting GeneralAliens just asking to get kicked in the shins.
>>284466507Ayyyyy
>>284467234Hey that's a cool Kame-san
>>284467693Danke OPIt's time for Minion #3
>>284472507I thought JIN was just shipping for bait, but never thought #1 and scientist actually went togetherI like JIN
He needs to draw NTR
>>284474216No.1 is a sturdy test subject.
>>284421294He's so cooked.
>>284466507uncharted territory
>>284474459Go away
>>284421230It's criminal we won't get these scenes animated.
>>284466648The RX world is getting project blue beamed?
>>284466995>>284467030felled by a low kick...
>>284467145>he carried several tonnes of hard to grip space junkhe's an impressive beast
>>284467348So general got the OPM awakening?
>>284474459normalised titty rubbing?pervert
this shit is still going? did they hook up yet?
>>284476095It ended a few months back at vol 13
>>284476095Braveman STOLE a kiss from General and is now being taken to court for RAPE
>>284420969Braveman's ruined for marriage
>>284466599Wanna pound that moon bunny
>>284476825Please do not lewd minions 1, 2 and 3
>>284467693Thank you for posting.
>>284466915>>284466970>No.3 NO!>No.3 NOT AGAIN!>No.3 N- ok this has got to be intentional.
>>284467693so is it wearing a mop for hair?
>>284480158I don't like how the aliens become humanoids
>>284466724The mesugaki could have been a great addition to the regular roster if managed properly.
>>284466970I'm happy number 3 found a girlfriend, even though she seems pretty flat
>>284431674Cry about it some more.
>>284470887So you just want exotic japanese words so you can pretend they're given names.
>>284442243You'd have to be literally retarded to commission it when it's gonna get translated anyways. Literally just burning money. Just posting the raws along with >>284448501 TL should be enough.
To be honest, this translation has been just fine. It has its problems, but I'm not paying for it anyways, so I don't really mind.Certainly not nearly as bad as others I've seen (official and scanlations). I really really don't understand the vitriolic hatred I've seen for it in these threads.
>>284480819Same. I'd like better but I'm not that miffed.
>>284480187Maybe humans became alienoid through gene modding?
>>284472507That's proof enough for me.
>>284480187>>284482541Ah yes, who came first, human or timelord.
Zannen.
>>284480700No, I want them to have shorter names that aren't annoying as fuck to read.
>>284486148What is wrong with slitmouth? Without honorifics there isn't any awkwardness at all.t. English as first language
>>284487604If they just called her Slitmouth, that would be fine, but they don't. It's like if everyone referred to General as Female Executive Black General every time they referred to her.t. English only
>>284448501thank you for your work
>>284480819It's just an extension of the (mostly ESL) culture war against localization coming from /v/.
>>284455658That's a complaint that should go to JIN, not to the translators.
>>284491952The biggest sign someone is an ESL is when they obsess over proper grammar.
>>284492812Really? Because half the people I work with are ESLs and they can barely speak English properly. Some can barely TYPE English.They're not getting anal about farther/further, whereas I want to kill people who type "thru" or use shit like ofc in office communication
>>284480819>I really really don't understand the vitriolic hatred I've seen for it in these threads.Its just by association, and we all expect some higher standards than putting shitty memes and anglosphere/normie references where they don't belong.Or translating things plainly incorrectly as happened a few times (e.g. translating kiku as listen, instead of ask, when the context made it clear it was "ask").I dunno about translations to other languages, but at least when manga are translated into Polish (my native language) they practically never pull this shit and just try to accurately translate the work. English is often laughable in comparison.If the general landscape of jap->eng translations was better I doubt many people would care. But we live in a world where Lucoa, a giant titty slut pedo dragon, had her dialogue changed to insert feminist talking points about patriarchy.
>>284492812The biggest sign is just fucking up grammar or talking/typing weirdly, what the fuck are you on about?
>>284492812I think there are grammar/spelling errors unique to native speakers, and ones that are unique to ESLs.
>>284493807Censorship is miles away from the occasional woolseyism.
Thoughts?
>>284493999>Implying western """adaptations""" are anything like that, instead of incompetence and leftism malicePlease get out.And never come back.
>>284493807I understand you have autism, but the kind of changes you complain about are as old as the concept of translation itself. In fact, I think I've gotten less than half the references or memes you guys hate so much, with no detriment to my understanding or enjoying the manga.
>>284494134>just because I posted it means I agree with itAre you literally retarded? Do you have no theory of mind? Fucking nigger.
>>284480819>>284481702Most likely the irrational hate comes from election tourists who were indoctrinated to hate any non literal translations due to be inundated wit the worst of the worst translations and being told those were the norm.
Chapter 174 yeah.E N T E R
>>284494174>I posted a thing, even though I don't agree with it, but I made no clarification on what my stance is eitherSasuga mr retard, sasuga.What are you, a woman? Or just a grifter?>>284494142>these kind of changesI was talking about actual errors and normie pandering at the cost of the original, and these are never forgivable.When its stuff like making a character say "cringe" or referencing pinkie and brain *where it actually fits* I have no problem with it, that's other anons bitching about it.
>>284494279I mean, even when reading a 'quirky' translation, an experienced reader should be able to get a feel of the actual dialogue choices that were underneath, and understand why changes are made.
>>284494282This is gonna be pure kino.
>>284494299I posted 'thoughts' because I wanted to see what people thought of the related picture. How could it possibly be more clear and concise than that?
>>284420738Either show her naked already or axe this manga
>>284494337So you're just a grifter that pretends he doesn't understand the implications of his post in context, thanks for exposing yourself.Now fuck off or shut up.
>>284494393Nah, you're just a belligerent nigger that looks for any excuse to beef with someone else.
Chapter 175 yeah. Things are going south fast. For the aliums.
The RX budget being put to good use.
>>284494584ENTER
>>284494450>Ayy mindbroken by General's delusional mindLove to see it
Look who's come out to play!>>284494905The best mindbreak is another unhinged mind.
Balor going final boss attack.
>>284494614>>284494642>>284494745>>284494876Seeing RX finally show some claws is amazing.
>>284495057
Aaaand done! Danke fer comin'!TOMORROW. CRASH LANDING
>>284494496Have you ever been so hungry you could eat a city-sized pancake?
>>284494559RAW CHECK
>>284494642Mk. II doesn't melt the person who fires it, I see
>>284495174Yes. And never finish it.>>284448501I didn't reply in time but you are a lifesaver anon. Mind if I ask a question about translation work?>>284495196It does say something about Independence Day.
>>284494312It's not even 'quirky' stuff, but localization in general they've been trained to hate now.I remember the first major translation war that was waged over Ted Woolsey's work, yet some of his work aged like fine wine.>>284495196>>284495307The Japanese know about Independence Day and associate massive UFO's with the movie.https://youtu.be/8CpRdMC7jCQ?si=9ntxQKICPY3azhzP&t=294
>>284495196>>284494559Personally I don't mind the reference here, but I am interested if it was in the original as well.
>>284495057The hero organization really is going to job to whole series huh?
>>284495057>>284494678Alien chan is probably shitting herself right now
>>284494393Grifter implies financial incentive, you fucking retard. Not "thing I don't agree with".
>>284495324>>284495318I just really wanted to know if it was there too.
>>284494678The masked face of a man who realizes that he has a tiger by the tail and he can't let go
>>284495147I'm guessing this is around the time Jin got told to wrap it up? The new antagonists haven't even finished introducing themselves and they are already getting obliterated.
>>284496016At least a gag manga can get around this sort of thing
>>284494642The mecha mountain gang isn't going to like this...
>>284495147Danke OPI can't believe this daily is coming to an end
>>284493954>>284495318>WoolseyQRD?
>>284495318The TL for this has largely been good aside from some genuine mistakes. The obsession is indeed very annoying
>>284497899Ted Woolsey was the primary English translator for several of Squaresofts more popular games like Final Fantasy. People retroactively despise him for his localization choices and not doing a direct translation of every bit of text.
>>284494331Genuinely a cool page, shame he couldn't even make it through the chapter without jobbing.
>>284498630>>284497899He's considered the father of localization. Also he had several other factors running against him for Final Fantasy VI. First, he had to translate the entire game by himself with only a script and Japanese cart Square sent him. And he had to do it in 2 months.Second, the game already maxed out its cart's memory and Japanese characters take up much less space than English characters, so Woolsey had to cut Final Fantasy VI's translation in half due to character limits.This didn't mean removing scenes, but cutting the amount of text in half, so things had to be much more succinct. Also he was known for adding in humor as well. A lot of people were upset with it, but it also grew on people so he's got a strong following that defends his work.
>>284480819If I like a thing I don't like it when others reduce its quality.
>>284486148>>284488752You are retarded tho, author gave them names and it's not up to any translator to "fix" that.
>>284494528>Welcome to Earth! *punch*
>>284494528>>284494559I like the paneling here
>>284499369I for one am quite happy with her as our representative in the greater galactic community
>>284495057For the love of god, please leave Omega alone!
>>284494642Meanwhile the eyepatch beam punched a hole right through it. Although, it was from the inside.>>284494876>Note: The admiral and the ship are one.I love these dumb gags.>>284494940General's doing a Die Hard.
>>284500263Die Hard being a favorite movie of Generals would fit pretty well.
>>284500838But does she consider it a christmas movie?
>>284495761The hero org really only still exists because 4/5 villains are dangerous weirdos instead of proper criminals.
I like tall woman but her chapters should've been more ice woman or other hero character chapters before we got into the ayy lmao endgame.
>>284494474Ouch.>"Um, could we like...not have damage to the ship feedback to me or something?"
Kinda want to see an eventual bonus chapter with the surviving aliens joining the villain league.
>>284500960And we have Pervert Turtle, Sexy Grandma, Maso Bunny, Bodybuilder Shark and unkown bear(?) to thank for this peace.
>>284494971I get the feeling that cyclops is the most powerful character. Too bad you only get one shot
>>284420738cool
>>284494642>>284494678It didn't melt the user this time, great progress!>"We are a threatening evil organisation now. I honestly didn't expect to get this far."
>>284498483The fact that someone would genuinely believe Japanese don't know about (or even like) Independence Day is baffling to me.
I don’t want it to be over soon…
>>284499369You mean Erf
Hero and villain butt
Honestly, making it so that the admiral can feel the battle damage physically seems to be a dumb idea nonetheless.
>>284505439Okay smart guy lets see your intergalactic spaceship
Thanks for introducing this manga to me, haven't had such a good laugh for some time.The slime being stretched also made me laugh, poor guy.
>>284494402>telepath controlI see where this is going...
>>284504547ERX
>>284494940>>284494971>>284495057Good boy, he finally gets to contribute.
>>284467175Oh no no no, dont tell the other chuunis at the villain league, it would devastate them.
>>284495147Thank you for posting.
>>284494971>>284506227Seriously, what exactly happened to Balor?He's a nice kid that somehow turned into one of the strongest monster.Don't tell me his is still in contact with his (loving) family and this monster benefit group is just for him to make friends?
>>284494282Is his chair made from psichic energy? Kinda like that meme of the big brain chair
>>284494474>Small alien gets shot in the head>Just a bump>Yet the laser perforate a spaceship hullH-how?
>>284494971The final boss is actually acting like a final boss
>>284496016>>284496042The mysterie will always be, was Jin wrapping up things since the manga got canned or was this the joke all along.
