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>Every time something must be explained for the story, characters, or their arcs to move forward, there is either a flashback or an info dump that breaks the tension.

>Every time characters do something we don't think they should be able to do, we are proven wrong by a random flashback in the middle of the action or a random info dump (usually by a third-party character) that breaks the tension. An example of that is Luffy vs Doflamingo during the second exam. The author gave us some bullshit explanation (a flashback) how Luffy can beat Doffy , even though we know that Doffy is supposed to be very weak. Another example is everything related to the Haki and Gear.

>Before the fight, when Luffy talks about G4, there is a 5-minute info dump about Haki. The author is not talented enough to naturally explain everything, so he needed one long scene to give us all the info we would need.

>Flashbacks in general are a huge problem. There are like five of them every episode for no other reason than just to show us the past, usually interactions between the island resident victim and the villain.

Manga authors, when they decide to make a manga, always focus on art, and writing is always supposed to be the "easy part". Well, it isn't, and the story structure in OP, which is still top 1 on MAL, proves it.

This show is no better than Naruto, which also suffers heavily from random exposition. How the hell did it get a 9.3 rating on MAL? I know that your average anime fan is a huge retard, but holy shit. The characters and plot aren’t bad enough to offend me and not good enough to make me care, but the story structure is very amateurish and just laughably bad.
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>>284505352
Because of sunk cost
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Shonen manga is literally for Asian teenagers. Literal children. No one ever said that your 40 year old neet ass shall find it captivating and complex. It's your own fault for having such retarded expectations
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>Naruto
>MAL
>being a retard that begs people to make you care about popular thing you don't like instead of just dropping it, filtering it, freeing up that mental real estate and moving on with your life
mindcucked by FOMO
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>>284505352
The true bloating and flashback fiasco truly started getting annoying from the Timeskip, especially with Dressrosa on ward.
Now it reached stupid tier level with Wano and everything related to Imu, which might be one of the worst and most boring villains i’ve ever seen
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>>284505438
BUT I'VE BEEN PIRATING IT SINCE I WAS TWELVE
THEY OWE ME
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>IMG_TrannyNaruturd doomkek
>In charge or not being a bitch ass mobile nigga
Never happening. All mobilefags, screenshotfags and Socialmedia spammers should get the rope, no exceptions.
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>>284505438
it is morally wrong to write shittily
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>>284506603
>necrobumping
take the L, OP
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>>284505352
Fuck off, disingenuous hack/midwit.
Not because you are wrong, but because you chose the worst example, it sounds like this isn't even your own criticism.
Luffy pulling hakiman hax out of his ass v Doffy is just the readers finally getting payoff on the multi year long tease that was Luffy's capabilities after training. We all knew Luffy had a lot left in the tank, he had hardly been challenged since the time skip, every "loss" he had were just down to luffy not taking things seriously.
With Doffy, he finally had an opponent he could not steamroll so he had to pull out the stops. Every reader knew damn well Luffy were going to have to start actually trying and start showing off what he had learned.
As for flashbacks, it's really down to what they are supposed to give context to, that decides their placement in the arc. In the case of Brook, we needed context to his relationship with laboon, so we did not need to hear about it until after the arc finale.
Now with Loki, we're getting context before the final showdown with the GK and Imunko. So we're getting it mid arc. Sounds more like your gripe is with the concept of flashbacks in general.
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>>284505352
Currently 500 chapters in
When does it get good?
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>>284506628
>necro
this is 4chan not phpbb. im always going to shit on flashbacks though and even japanese wouldn't accept them in the past.
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>>284506680
>self-reporting that you're too much of a newfag to remember a time before reddit and too much of a poser to have ever touched an anime forum
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>>284505352
>Complains about toei's adaptation
>Blames the mangaka
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>>284506675
500 chapters later
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>Keeps necrobumping
LOL, shit thread



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