Chapter 10: Hannya
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>>285041072>heOwari da
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B-but....I fapped to her....
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>>285041589EGGTER
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>>285041458Now you've got the gay>>285041657She's cute but damn that's a slutty outfit. Are we really in that much danger?Also last arcs oneechan also had that hair so maybe she also ate drakarch hearts?
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>>285041798That's all, eggbros.
>>285041072this should've been chapter 4 at the latest, you don't take 10 chapters to introduce the first recurring characters
>>285041657yeah, its axed
>>285041657yeah, it's saved
>>285041657>>285041950Yeah it's over.
>>285041657too little too lateGonron Eggxed
>>285041657Brown supremacy.
>>285041657>Author's desperate attempt to avoid being axed.
I remember anon saying he would do this but I certainly didn't expect him to actually deliver>>285041444
>>285042491>no timestampI will never believe that someone that white would browse this board
>>285041657She cute, a nice way to crush the blow of main girl actually being a manbut both of them should have appeared way eariler
>>285041657He shouldn't bet all his chips on a single girl, he needs to add a harem to satisfy everyone's taste.He needs at least one with big tits, a muscular one and to bring back the trap from the second(?) chapter. I've also heard there's been a hag renaissance lately, so the big tits one can be it and tease some ss with the protagonist or the rival.Plus maybe a neet girl that focuses on logistics back at dragonkiller HQ.
>>285042602He's Australian.
>>285042800This is a pretty desperate attempt at introducing the good guys organization trope where the mc will meet fellow warriors and senpais, which clearly shows how this mangaka doesnt plan much ahead, this should have been introduced from the beginning
>>285043027idiot
>>285041225He was a bad guy too. No need to defend him
>>285041426this guy has eaten and looks far more like a drakarch than Gonron, but just because he said to let the bad guy die in peace he deserves death?Kinda hypocritical.
>>285041854>/a/ complains when manga is too quickly paced>/a/ also complains when it takes it timeI'm more concerned with how many one and two chapter arcs we had. I'm fine with it taking its time but those 10 chapters should'ce been two arcs at most, not four
>>285043295This is all one arc.
>>285043295I don't mind the pace. For me the biggest flaws are the MC having a bowlcut and the background art highlighting how amateurish the mangaka is compared to his assistant.
>>285041072>heWomanbros... its over
>>285043385The background situation has largely been fixed. It looks good now.Bowlcut is now the sovl of the series.
>>285041831Axe soon, eggfag.
>>285043454>fixedFuck no, just look at this page >>285041714 the background is super detailed but the characters still look like poorly defined globs
>>285043487Of Otr? Yeah, we know.
>>285043527your shit series will end up u19.
>>285043295both can be shit.go study something like the kishotenketsu and you'll see why gonron doesn't work.tell me something, what can you tell me about gonron as a character? who is he? what are his interests? what would he be doing outside of his quest?for example just about luffy i can tell from the first 10 chapters that he's a bit of a screwball, but has a strong, personal moral compass. he values personal freedom and he's a surprisingly good judge of character despite his naivety.
Chocolate waifu
>>285041657https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qwWjST_4zU8
We're only on chapter 10? It feels like it's been so much longer. An eternity with egg...
>>285041854New mangakas have shit pacing and can't understand you introduce the world through CHARACTERS not NPCs loredropping
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>>285044535what a lad
>>285041657brown tomboy pussy!>>285042629I still dont know why people thought the titless, sasuke expy was a girl
>>285041657I am suddenly very interested in this manga
>>285041657>>285041778didn't notice this was a a leotard, kinda hot
>>285042035I remember this one. too little, too lateBL tier if I remember correctly. the one case of a good design actually stuck in a shitty manga even if she just happens to be a Harribel expy
>>285042035sauce?
>>285041072>heYAOI IS BACK ON THE MENU BOYS
>>285041854Yep, last two chapters have been refreshingly good, but we're in too deep to escape the axe
>>285041854it's the MMYY curse all over again
>>285043940Thats old news gramps. Since Fire Punch its been about making disjointed storytelling and what this anon said>>285044244Some times its kino, most often than not it isn't. But considering the success it had as of late, you can hardly say its the wrong way to do it.>luffyYou can't be serious. Thats shallow af and GE's mc already has enough personality shown to rival what you said. You are just the wsj thread slice of life anon aren't you?
>>285041778There is no need to say that out loud for her.
Fujos....won...
It's still the best of his batch.>>285046901Shadow Eliminators
>>285048950just tell me something about gonron, go on
>>285049721He loves his egg
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Oh Gonron Egg, Gonron Egg
>>285041778>Thigh highs>Sandals>leotard>genki brownGod bless em but she should have been there much earlier
>>285052304it's only been 10 chapter
Can fujos save the egg from getting axed before it's too late?
>>285052940I believe.
The Egg will live.
>>285052940>>285053735Nope, it's already dead. Cope all you want.
>>285053956GONRON WILL LIVE!!!!
>>285053952seethe harder
>>285049721He's a bit of a screwball, but has a strong, personal moral compass. He values personal freedom and he's a surprisingly good judge of character despite his naivety
>>285041072Thanks
>>285041657>>285041778God I love me a brown genki tomboy
>>285041657we were already back but now we're here to stay eggbros
>>285048950Fire punch isn't disjointed at all though, it's a clear continuous descent into madness
>>285049071Important info for doujinshi artists though. She can quote that line like a mantra in...various situations.
>>285042035>Shadow Eliminators>introduce ancillary antagonistic brown girl late>get canned>Ichi the Witch>introduce main brown girl immediately>success>Gonron>introduce ancillary antagonistic/side heroine brown girl late>????Guess we'll see
>>285059275Good thinking 99
>>285041831Thank you for posting.
i believe in eggfu
>>285059421Playing the long egg.
Err, so who the fuck is Hannya? I thought that's the eggfu's name but it's not. I then thought it's the brown girl's name, but it's not.
>>285062083So in Japanese the chapter is called 般若 (Hannya).Let's see what that means:>hannya; mask of a grinning, horned demoness (represents a woman's rage and jealousy) Maybe you should translate that shit, fucking troonslators? Or give a note?Anyway, looks like she is confirmed to be a girl after all.
Imagine waking up to this in the morning
>>285062891I can fix her.
>>285063026Let it go
>>285063292We can believe
>>285063292see >>285062286
>>285041657WE WON EGG BROS
Any fanart of Nell?
>>285062286There's no way the translators haven't seen the discussion about the gender, they must have gotten clarification from the mangaka
>>285064691Translators are lazy cunts and I doubt they communicate with mangakas
>>285064691>they must have gotten clarification from the mangakaLMAO
>>285064576There is now a chance.
>>285065580Lets fucking go
>>285062286hannya masks arent worn exclusively by women dumbass
>>285067788Fuck you we will have a kuudere tomboy and a genki tomboy
>>285067788She's not wearing a mask, she IS the "mask", hannya, and hannya is a demoness, retard
>>285068359So will her face turn green too?
