Chapter 11: Teeming Woods
this shit is next, now that Otr is axed
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>>285375059WOOOOOO WE LOVE THE EGG HERE
Axe soon eggfag
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>>285375059>gonorrea egg
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this shit is gonna get axe anyway, so why bother dumping it?
>>285375172That's actually pretty interesting, maybe some interesting stuff like this should have been happening in earlier chapters
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>>285375085>>285375347>>285375431>>285375472fuck off schizo
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>>285375059the author's biggest mistake was waiting so long on introducing the secondary characters. Episodic pointless adventures are fine but they won't engage the audience if they aren't used to introduce and/or develop a main cast. Like for example dragon ball also starts on mostly episodic plotless adventures but by chapter 11 we already have bulma, roshi, yamcha, chichi, and other important characters introduced. Here we've mostly only focused on Gonron and Ohma.
>>285375356completely different proportions to gain coomer trackholy desperation lmao. the author got the notice
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Why does this manga feels like a Demon Slayer imitation?
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>>285375569non of this matters if you make one of the ugliest MCs ever created and nim him fucking Gonron! no kid will ever say "omg i wanna be like Gonron"
>>285375646>tourist who only read demon slayer reads his second manga: "wow, getting massive demon slayer vibes from this!"
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>>285375756Until next week, eggbros.
>all those scribblesgoddamn did the (already meh) art degenerate hard this chaptereither the author submitted it late or he's given up
>>285375569I think I'd rather a story that spends its first character building a good and solid relationship between their mcs rather than immediately showing more secondary characters that no one cares about except for their designsThing is, here it didn't work, those characters were boring and dind't do shit to make the audience like gonron and the egg, they're still plain characters with nothing elseThe art this chapter was somehow even worse than usual too
>>285375059>>285375789Another decent chapter, but it's too late now. Looks like they're setting up for another arc but I wonder how much time they have left.>>285375473>>285375569this
>>285375059>I may be dying, but I should get the Human Liberation Army's headcount exactly right before I die. It'd be embarrassing otherwise.
>>285375676>>285375792He lives in your head rent free so I guess he's good for something.How many more times are you planning on posting in this thread the exact same shit over and over again? Fucking obsessed sperg.
>>285375792All the time he had was clearly spent on drawing this first panel here >>285375356
>>285375756Is he going somewhere with the saying out loud the numbers and contents of their regulations, it's a bit less weird this chapter than it was last chapter but still, is this damage control for how awkward the one last chapter owas?
>>285375925calm down nigga, lmaoare you the author?
So is it a guy or girl?
>>285375460wtf is even happening in this panel, which part is humans and which part is the tree monster
>>285375789Cool chapter. The art is getting much better. I hope this dude is a girl tho.
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Was it the author or the editor responsible for how bland this manga is so far?
>>285375789hope it axed under 14. >>285376061I would said both since they don't know what the fuck they doing with this turd.
>>285376061I'm blame author for blandess but the editor really should have stepped in on taking so long to show the supporting cast
>>285375801That’s what the first chapter is for. Zoro was introduced in chapter 3 of One PieceSasuke in chapter 3 of NarutoZenitsu in chapter 6 of Demon Slayer
>>285376331Roshi was chapter 3 of dragon ballyamcha was chapter 7
>>285376331>>285376387completely different timesDB and OP would be axed today for how corny and childish they are
>>285375994definitely a guy, brown wouldn't have been introduced here otherwise
>schizo keeps replying to himself
>>285376524Yep, it's like they saw the speculation over gender and chucked a girl in to soften the blow of the reveal
>>285375994Clearly and obviously a girl pretending to be a guy for a reveal that she's actually a girl. Do you people even manga here.
>>285375569He doesn't understand that you should create the world through a main cast not loredump using NPCs for too long
>>285376657Bath moment next chapter where Gonron accidentally walks onto the bath and discovers she is hiding massive boobs and the manga is saved
>>285377363kino trope
>>285375356Nah this manga needs more fujo pandering instead of this.
>>285377597Yep, also le chocolate girl is just contrarianism, a cool/hot dude and hot white skin girl trope will always be more popular
I swear that at each new chapter it becomes easier to identify the parts drawn by the author and the parts drawn by the assistant
Good chapter maybe a little rough artkeep winning eggs
gets better with every chapter feel like it might be gg with the next batch coming tho
>>285375646It's more like pic related but absolutely worse in every regard. Both MCs even got decapitated before they got their powers[/spoilers]
clearly a chick
>>285381303>>285381382pure sex
>>285381382i love her
>>285375845have this slop. It's not like the series will inspire boatloads of fanart anyway
>>285375845>>285381303>>285381382>>285383096Embarrassing arts, just like this series.
>>285383309>egg lives rent free in his headembarrassing obsessed schizo
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eggnog
>>285387191Touka would be proud.
>>285387191Ngl, I'm in love with her. I hope we get some more moments with her before the axe.
>>285385197Gonron Egg is a metaphor for surviving in WSJ in the current era.
>>285381303oh my
>>285383309I think all that art was nice, even the really rough one of the girl naked has more talent in it than this manga did
