New WSJ seriesRead it here:https://mangaplus.shueisha.co.jp/titles/100682
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>>285734415anon?
>>285734415>>285734548Sorry, it's going to be a bit slowI'm still dumping Dr. Kino
>>285734611Welcome back, Deku
>>285734939ENTERHer clothes make her look like an isekai'd girl desu
>>285734983>Already treats MC as her piggy bankWhat a slut
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>>285734321>yokai, entering from the yokai world
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>takes forever and cant stfu while dumpingkys OP, never do this again
thanks op for being the biggest retard in 4chan
>>285735273>>285735287>>285735317I'll do it every week just to piss you off kek
>native isekai in shounen jumpShuiesha has fallen....
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>>285735343absolute boykisser behaviour
>>285735376I'd kill for Tower Dungeon style manga in Jump desu>>285735379
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Is the author a rookie?So far I'm liking this >>285735015She's cute, CUTE!
>>285735675He has one axed series I think
>>285735669>>285735675Nope, the author has had an axed manga in WSJ before, called Shadow Eliminators (I forgot what's it called in Japanese)
>>285735675>Is the author a rookieNo his last work was Shadow Eliminators which got axed
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>>285735843I like this guy, he's funny
>>285735129Glad I wasn't the only one who's kind went to that, well first it went to the other one that had the same opening but called them something else, the the one with the headphones mascot sidekick
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>>285736003Deku???
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The mc is cute if a little boring, but that’s forgivable for the first chapter. I don’t like that he’s strong enough to oneshot a dragon from the first chapter. Party leader guy is cool and funny, and the girl is cute but boring too (like mc). Overall I think it’s got potential, have to see what the author does next
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>>285734321lol this made me think of the bone collection intro
>>285736334It's funny because Under Doctor's art is also a bit Horikoshi-ish>>285736360>>285736387Granny really taught him ransengan
>>285734321Ok, it's not dumb the characters are fun. Kinato isn't like Deku, he's not a loser and he's actually cute for real. He overall gives off more Tanjiro vibes honestly. >>285736003>>285736040This part here is very dumb though so I'm looking forward to what the author will do to distinguish between his magic and everyone else's because this one felt like a bullshit excuse to me.
>>285736453ONESHOT
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>>285735067i laughed.
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>>285735129>>285735905>>285736408/a/ is a hivemind kek
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>>285736453>>285736484I think I woulda preferred if he was melee only and had to learn how to use ranged attacks in a later arc. Like if he jumped on the dragons back and dislocated its wings here it'd be just as impressive but show a limit in his power.
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Last page. Thanks for reading, see you next week!>>285736655So, what do you guys think of this series? Does it have a potential?
>>285736641Might have been a bit too similiar to Under Doctor, at least in looks.
This is really cute honestly. I like how it has this funny and heartwarming feeling instead of the "everyone hates him because he's weak but actually he's the strongest now" wishfulfilment. Also love how braid guy was actually nice and friendly even before he knew the mc was strong, it's not like most of the cheat skill manga at all.
>>285735379>>285735446I made the same mistake as the fake adventurer as I was reading because seitai wasn't in kanji until this page >>285735602
>>285736466>distinguish between his magic and everyone else's because this one felt like a bullshit excuse to memost people shoot magic out like a gun probably, he redirects magicOf course by chapter 20 he will do the same shit everyone else is doing but a thundred times stronger
>>285736718KINOTO, this is the next big thing, it should easily reach at least 50 chapters.Add four more cute girls.
>>285736718Thanks for dumping, this was a very comfy first chapter. The characters being so likable is what makes it work for me despite the generic premise.
>>285735067I really really don't like her design. It doesn't fit and isn't cute, and she is annoying
Does anyone remember how many copies did Shadow Eliminators sell? I think it wasn't doing too badly compared to current lineup, right? Like 20k or something? >>285736778It's been a while since the last time I read Shadow Eliminators, but I think I like this duo MC more than in Shadow Eliminators fujo-pairing.
>Its one magic/quirk/devil fruit per person thing againMan, they still don't know how to make a magic system after all this time? Just make an energy source with techniques anyone with it can learn, and an individual power unique to each person. How hard can it get?
>>285736298I ship it.
>>285734321>回撃のキナト>Kinato's MagicIt's amazing how many words would just end up translated into magic without any flair
>>285735067>"Throw that book away"wtf, is he gay?
>>285736840She looks like she's wearing a sailor seifuku. I wonder if the editor forced the author to add her or something.>>285736816Shadow Eliminators added some sexy girls near its end iirc. I hope we get more sexy designs.
I dont really know what to think about it. For a first chapter it really didn't make me feel anything. I'll give it time to grow tho.
>>285736719>Both are punchy healers>Kina and Kino>One week apartAlready got everything else going for it may as well go all in on Acupuncture vs Chiropractor
>>285736718It was better than I expected. But it's hard to tell from the first chapter what the primary goal or antagonist is going to be. Art and characterization feels decent enough.
>>285736334Now we nave Doctor Vash and Doctor Deku.
>>285736718Not quite as dogshit as I was expecting but my expectations really were incredibly rock bottom.I'll give it a fair shot but I really didn't like that he's already dragon level from chapter 1. Could have been a kobold or even band of kobolds he had to keep from coming to protect the dragon or attack the childhood friend or something while the mentor dude did the dragon
>>285735926>Earring>Scar>Ponytail>CharismaticDamn, I like this guy way more than Kinato already
>>285736122>these holes were made for us!
>>285736972We don't really have an antagonist or goal yet (unlike Under Doctor which already foreshadows it in the first chapter). My little nitpick is that it was implied that magic users can be sold as slaves, as if they're not strong as fuck. But hey, it leads to the gag page >>285735843so I think it kinda worked.
It was a good idea for the mangaka to shift to a more gag and kodomo style manga. The characters are a lot more endearing than in SE.Still, while it was a bit funnier I would say it's inferior to Under Doctor, because that one had a few different conflicts set up right at the start, with his dad and internally between his two skills. In this one the traffickers are defeated, everyone is supportive, and the MC already has a strong attack. It could work as a standalone oneshot. I'm also not sure what he's planning with the girl. If he increases her bitchiness she'll be hated, if he tones it down she'll be too bland. And that first page was awful. Well, it's good enough to tune back in next week.
>>285735129My immediate thought, it's even framed the same way visually
>Now editors ask newbies to add girls in sailor uniform insted of homo boys.Is wsj finally healing after fujohomos kgbkek and ichishit?
>>285736718It’s not super grabbing and pretty generic but it has a fun vibe and some funny moments
>>285734983>>285735067Her design clashes and clashes bad, like they couldn't come up with something better...
>>285737106the adventurer guy is hot though
>>285737056Same here, he’s also really good looking
>>285737056it's fine, the love interest should look better than the protagonist
Kinoto's magic resembles Gyro's steel ball, Scanning and hardening will likely appear too.Worship the spin.
>>285734415 I also do massages for a living. I hope we get to see more of that throughout the series.
>>285735343Twice in one chapter
>>285735789SENSEI???
>massage ability>uses it on some ugly guy instead of the childhood friendThe mangaka sucks
>>285737125I don’t mind the fanservice, but if they wanted fanservice for her, couldn’t they have done it in a more genre fitting way than half naked schoolgirl? I hope she’ll get a outfit change soon
It's been two hours, where's the porn
>>285736484>disrespecting dragons againFrieren and this shit. Why the fuck are they still doing this to us?
I like it. It's light hearted and silly. There's too many recent series that are emotionally completely flat with blah blah boring constant exposition and I feel absolutely nothing reading. Otr is like that. Gonron is like that.
>>285737106In the one shot that went up today too, sailor outfit that doesn't fit at all, was a nice one shot though.
>>285737210Tell me more, how many girls have you Dong'd? >>285737237Yeah, the guy should use his power like master Luo Dong
>>285735446Same with Dungeon Meshi, it feels like people with ACTUAL ideas don't bother with Jump anymore
>>285737210Is it mostly just old people and dudes? Working as a masseuse is probably one of those things like being a male porn star that's not actually exciting.
MCs magic is really lame.Really my main complaint, it just feels like the author either immediately pivots away from it, he turns into a punch wizard which is really overdone, or the series has to be incredibly convoluted to continue his magic.
>>285737315Although she did switch to more fitting clothes for the climax, but several pages before you would expect her to
>>285737410*Several pages after
>>285737106Fujo sell, broBoy love bromance, Girl love fusjo shit
Shadow Eliminators had an awfully rushed start too, come to think of it. The mangaka might just be challenged.
>terrible title>hyper uninspired first page describing the most generic definition of mana-mage>hyper uninspired MC design>hyper uninspired main girl design who straight up wears a seifuku>hyper uninspired entire page describing the most generic definition of manga fantasy adventurer>generic fake adventurers plotline copy pasted from Fairy Tail ch1>mentor has 95% the same hairstyle as the MC>generic dragon >MC’s magic that isn’t made for battle randomly turns out being op and one shots a dragon in an uninspired way>the main girl does absolutely nothing of the chapter>joins generic shonen organizationEven taking in account the incompetence of the author, how does this even get approved by the so called biggest shonen magazine? Does the editors have so little standards? Did they say nothing and make this bad on purpose as a joke?
>>285737125I think it's pretty obvious it was envisioned as an isekai and they didn't change her design when they ditched the idea.
>>285737212It's a common trope probably even before Bone Collection that exposed it to so many but I don't think I've ever seen it twice in one chapter like this
>>285737525The last time retards like you came out in droves bitching that a manga was too generic to be in WSJ, it was Kagurabachi. How did that one go, again?
>>285736655>Granny doing the white supremest hand sign
>>285737222My first thought kek
I like under doctor more at the moment, but the characters in this one are better I feel
>>285737015Also I do like the idea of MCs abilities being more based around mana and flow and stuff compared to other mages
>>285736718It's very generic "native isekai" for lack of a better descriptor. It's fine, but I just don't see it lasting long without a stronger hook. It feels exactly like one of those light novels with incredibly bad titles like "My therapy massage magic can actually slay dragons???" or something.
>>285737640Are we gonna pretend Kagurabachi’s ch1 is on the level of this? Kagura got meme’d on because of the dumb looking teaser artwork that didn’t even represent well the series.
>>285737331>Tell me more, how many girls have you Dong'd? I try to be respectful and proper with my clients. Undressing and leaving your body exposed to a stranger can be scary for many people and some even told me they have had bad experiences with masseurs, like getting groped and shit. However, learning kinesiology and how to do massages helped me with some tinder dates as I would give girls full body massages.>Is it mostly just old people and dudes? It's mostly older women. Men don't like getting touched by other men and young women usually feel intimidated by the idea as well. It's a shame because I believe construction workers are the ones who need my services the most but are trapped in a culture where getting a massage by a man y faggy. I am studying kinesiology so that I can work for a sport club
>>285737525>mentor has 95% the same hairstyle as the MCThis is great>the main girl does absolutely nothing of the chapterBulma, she Bulma hit Goku with some lead but CF here hit him with the boobs
>>285736718wow so he's even a cuck just like Deku
>>285737812>Is it mostly just old people and dudes? Meant for>>285737388
>yet another people fight series but native isekaiJust axe the entire magazine.
>>285737835More like mentor dude is a wingmanOr do you mean getting cucked by everybody because she's gonna be receptionist?
>>285737756>Kagura got meme’d on because of the dumb looking teaser artworkNah dude, the first two chapters got meme'd to shit for being super generic and edgy
>>285737724I think the big advantage this has over LNs of similar premise is nobody ever called MCs magic useless, besides vaguely the bandits
>series opens with the MC making men feel good
>>285737889I recall the first chapter of kgb being generic but really effective in establishing the tone and story. This one is generic but I feel like it feels more like a oneshot than a chapter 1
>>285737084>as if they're not strong as fuckGoing by this chapter it seems only the MC knows about mana flow as an art and no one else is able to do it, considering the other guy here was defeated by a mana draining rope.
>>285737582What trope did Bone Collection expose?
>>285737724Those manga sell millions
>>285737889Not like Kagurabachi isn’t an exception, most series that starts bad gets worse and then gets axed quickly.
>>285737935Those are the fun parts though
Nips love it lol. Might be a hit.https://x.com/search?q= 回撃のキナト&src=typed_query&f=live
Cute. I really like jien. The group dynamic has potential
>>285736387>I don’t like that he’s strong enough to oneshot a dragon from the first chapter. I would have mentioned from the beginning that he has been using a magic ball to absorb all the stress of his patients for years. I hope it was just a one time only before recharging
>>285738158Those are the parts that made people so wary of this manga the moment they saw the words support magic.
>キナト、なろう王道ファンタジー枠が果たして生きていけるのかが気になるので楽しみGlad to see the nips also note that this just feels like your usual videogame fantasy webnovel.
Main girl is awful.Remains of all those annoying ecchi female leads, but at least they offered tits and ass.
>after being betrayed and nearly sold into slavery, the guy with the weakest magic learns he's actually the strongest and joins the adventurer's guild!I can't believe this kind of plotline finally snuck its way into Jump.
>>285734321This batch (so far) hasn't pissed me off as bad as the last one
>>285738820Yeah, last batch was horribleGonron was so awful it baffles me how they approved it. Osonoe could be a good slice of life comedy a la gintama but the art is super rough. I didn't even bother to read JK Yuusha. But it helps that I didn't have high expectations of this batch and just went in blind.
>>285736484I'm not sure I understand the logic. His magic is about manipulating the flow of mana, so if he has a hacky sack filled with mana, he can manipulate it and send it flying at high speeds.But isn't everything in this world filled with mana? Shouldn't he be able to manipulate the dragon's body in the same way as the hacky sack?
>>285734415>>285734611>>285735273>>285735343This clash of clothing styles is absolutely hilarious.I guess it's okay so far since it's so comedic, but once the story inevitable tries to be serious, it is going to be really distracting.
>>285736718Again like with Under Doctor they're a step up from Hero/Mage/Egg, that batch is fucking rancid
>>285736453>>285736484Heh, nice desperation on the fumble-save
THIS IS HEAT!!
>>285736816How about a few chapters of pretty boys and then a chapter 19 axe instead?
This looks like shit.
>>285735843>>285735890Both main characters having almost the exact same hairstyle dooms this to be axebait
Pretty good start. Good pacing, cool funny and bro Sasuke, I didn't bother with the girl yet because she isn't bitchy about being a bitch, she is asking for stuff and not demanding it. Magic was very underwhelming and it was supposed to be the main thing in the first chapter. I hope they develop it further. But just the pacing alone already mogs Otr and the other slop.
>>285736718Very forgotten and boring, I give this series u19. To think Otr died for this, really disappointed
>>285739426I first thought they were brothers/cousins looking at this>>285734415
>>285736861>>Its one magic/quirk/devil fruit per person thing againI didn't really get from this chapter. I thought it just turned out the MC hasn't learnt anything other than change the flow of magic
>>285736718It's complicated. Imagine playing a generic rpgmaker game but everything is so well polished that you find too little things to complain about. Everything that goes on should be considered generic yet somewhere in the mind, nothing is telling me to stop reading it.
>>285737525Still mad about Kawaguchi's second failure huh? Let it go anon
>>285737724>for lack of a better descriptorFantasy? The genre is literally the oldest and biggest genre of literature
>>285739890There isn't a single page in the entire Otr run better than any page on Kinato's single chapter.
Kagurabachi ended up being full of yandere boys.This manga will probably end up full of handsome chill boys if not axed.
>>285734321>you share this board with browns who think this uninspired generic native isekai slop is good
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Chapter 1 established part of the power system and world building. I want to see how the author intends to twist itself out of being treated as a generic fantasy. From the writing style, it seems that the author already have the power system planned out instead of just being random magic casting.
>>285737106Yeah, seems they've finally realized fujoids are a dead audience.
>>285740224Come on, show it to me. A single good Otr page.I mean, besides the final page. That one was good but only because it meant that shit finally died
Medical protagonist reminds me of Xillia's JudeStill remains to be seen how things go from here but I like it so far. MCs having the same hair color might be one of those imperceptible docked points but I think the comedy is fun and the art is cool
>>285735067I'll keep reading this as long as they keep showing her fat thighs.
>>285737106How do you not see adventure guy x mc? Its right there, the fact that the female lead tagged along is because otherwise it'd just be a handsome guy and a cute twink adventuring together.
Beta MCdropped.
I liked it but I'm cynical on whether a first chapter with such a naroukei style can make it in this sort of magazine.
>>285736718the 2nd male's design should've been the MC'sthe actual mc and the heroine's design is so uninspired.i just dont know how they came to those garbage when the artist has drawn better designs before.
>>285740301 I think the MC untying the rope like how he relieves a kink was very creative but the chapter felt rushed overall. They should have mentioned the massage ball absorbing people's stress from the beginning. Aside from that the characters feel shallow and the main character becomes and adventurer just because.
>>285734415The mc and the mentor guy having almost the same hairstyle does worry me that the mangaka came in with the idea that this would get axed so he probably didn’t put much thought
>>285741048You lost fujocuck, let it go.
>>285741285What are the chances of the mc switching like with Dr. Stone?
>fujoshits and waifubrowns fighting over some native isekai slop that will soon get axed either way KEKYPOW
>>285736718I'm not especially sold on any of the trio (Linae asking for a BBL got a snort out of me but her outfit is really bad), nothing's super stand-out about it really. Humor's eh, world is very generic, art is solid. I might keep up with it just to see if characters I enjoy more get introduced curious if the mangaka will try another megane, or if there's an interesting future goal. To steal a comment; "It feels like a great comic adaptation of a mediocre Narou work."
>>285737525>MC’s magic that isn’t made for battle randomly turns out being op and one shots a dragon in an uninspired wayReally? I actually liked the fact that his magic made the dragon sick instead of straight up killing him. I think if they lean further into the concept of his magic creating status effects on his opponents instead of being straightforward attacks, this could have some potential.
>>285741893it didn't make him sick it knocked him out
>>285736718Good start, picked up. Too bad Isekainajimi is already NTR coded
>>285742146>I just realized that "sentai is sick" wasn't literal
>>285734321>>285734415This just makes me miss Shadow Eliminators :(
>>285735675He did Shadow Eliminators, which got axed (RIP).
>>285735494Don't fall for it, they'll just use you as fodder. All adventurers are the same.
>>285742763Stay home… the medical field needs you…
>>285735789This is why you NEVER EVER trust random adventurers.
>>285736193It's just one dragon.
>>285742652Shadow Eliminators was like the kind shitty ripoff of JJK you would find in some C or D-list magazine. It had nothing going for it except for the ecchi that was introduced late to desperately save the manga.
>>285742900>Shadow Eliminators was like the kind shitty ripoff of JJK you would find in some C or D-list magazine.It really had nothing in common with JJK at all.
>>285736718>letting the gold digger come along
>>285737106My guy, this author's last manga was literally the definition of homo. I'm pretty certain Linae is only here to trick the normalfags into picking this up whilst the guild leader and Kinato shack up.
>>285737274>usWinged rats leave my fucking board.
>>285743111Imagine believing this cope after shadow elims flopped and slopped
>>285737274>dragonthat is a wyvern
>>285741301The author is probably rushing ahead because he tried to do some set up chapters with Shadow Eliminators (we don't even know what the "Otherworld" really is until a few chapters in) and that was likely a big contributor to it getting axed.
>>285743152Shadow Eliminators got axed because it came out whilst there were a bunch of other "shadowy organization fights monsters" manga coming out at the same time and by the time Shadow Elim got to the stuff that made it different (that it was closer to being a sort of cosmic horror story than anything else), it was too late and most people had already dropped it for the other stuff. Which ironically did worse than Shadow Eliminators during its run.
>>285736718Thanks OP
>>285736718Decent art puts it above your usual u19.Gives me Mashima vibes.The artist isn't a newbie, right?
>>285743451Nyo he did shadow eliminators (axed)
>>285743451>Gives me Mashima vibes.Needs more boobage for that
>>285743270it flopped because fujos don't read manga
>>285737812>It's a shame because I believe construction workers are the ones who need my services the most but are trapped in a culture where getting a massage by a man y faggy.need to introduce yourself as a "curandero" to them (assuming they're spics), sounds less gay and more mystic/traditional
>>285743980He added like 3 different female characters at once for waifutroons during the last few chapters and it still didn't got him more sales to escape the axe. So either waifujeets also don't buy manga or it flopped because it was genuinely a dogshit series that was just uninspired exorcist slop.
>>285744053KEKYPOW fujoLARD is melting down because not only is shinobi a straight chad manga, not only did Ichi pivot to straight chad impregnating loli god tier arc but now even the shadow eliminator author has dumped them by giving their new MC a cute big titty childhood friend.The sheer shame you cucks must endure is beyond hilarious
>>285739014>Osonoe could be a good slice of life comedy a la gintama but the art is super roughThe problem is not the art, early Gintama looked funky, it's that the characters have zero charisma.
>>285736484>character is known for using the fundamental circulation of energy for therapeutic purposes, charging a ball>later uses the ball for offense
>>285743980>>285744180>falseflagging /dbs/ shitter is the one shitting on Shadow Elim to cope with the fact he does not put his money where his mouth isExplains a lot.
>>285744944Shadow eliminator got axed, you can't refute this at all, meanwhile shinobi and hima-ten are still alive, fujolards can't ever cope with or acknowledge this fact because they know their influence on jump is pretty much dead.
>>285735015>>285735067Reading this for her. What a turbo qt.
enough with the narou slop
>>285745271>Shadow eliminator got axed, you can't refute this at all, Nobody was trying to do so. You are arguing with someone in your own head.
>>285737249That's what I'm saying, I don't mind fan service, I just hate that's she's dressed like a normal school girl and not something more in line with the setting
>>285736718I vibe with it. It would be nice with a more traditional "fantasy" manga that actually has some staying power.The main issue with isekai derives is that1. Completely uncompelling characters2. Their premise never have any fucking staying powerHere, the characters were decent enough. Bland maybe, but strong energy. I like when the MC actually immidiately goes "hey wait a minute my magic is awesome" instead of being a mopey doormat. I like when the captain said "you just blew away a dragon" and the mc is actually forced to concede the point. It makes it seem like the writing could be less self-indulgent than isekai trash, and in doing so, maybe the premise also has some staying power?
I need a doujin of magic Deku concentrating all of the guild captain mana into his penis for him to fuck him in the ass
>>285745635Then my original statement is true fujoLARD the author realized you guys don't actually buy or contribute to a mangas success, which is why it was axed meanwhile hima and shinobi LIVED
>>285736718The art is good and the writing is fun without being obnoxious but that's about it. The MC is terribly bland and his power seems like the usual cheat-code power you find in so many fantasy and isekai stories. I really dislike Linae. She seems tailor made for NTR doujins and her design is atrocious, it's a fantasy story, did they really have to put her in a generic school girl uniform? Jien seems fun but he feels like the kind of character to die early. All in all, I rate it axebait/10
>bland MC with a "weak" power that's secretly really strong>token cool dude deuteragonist >annoying, generic waifubait in a serafuku who is only there to generate porn>generic not-isekai fantasy settingIt's probably going to be successful
>>285736193>>285736298>>285736520This is pretty badVery uncool, very drabI would not have let this pass if I were the editor. Everytime something should be cool a shitty reaction face ruins it
I give it three volumes.
>>285736718The setting is incredibly generic but the characters are likable and have chemistry with each other which is arguably more important than the setting. Might actually be one of those comfy mid carder series like Megu was.
Will this series be Jump's savior? Art is nice. Premise seems good for promising adventures and fights.
>>285738310>ywn have a boyfriend and girlfriend dedicated to cheering you on all the time
>>285747511No?This is fucking dogshit, actually what the fuck are you talking about?
>>285735343Damn that guy's dripped out.
>>285747511It's pretty boring and generic. Which is on par for current jump except a few titles.
>>285739034Probably, there's your escalation of power, multiple techniques this chapter mentioned not being safe for humans
>>285739036I reckon she might get changed for the receptionist job, my original thoughts were that her design was left over from an original pitch as an isekai but now I think it might just straight up be that they wanted the magazine cover to trick isekaifags into picking the issue up.
>>285746466Demon lord soon.
>>285740199*There isn't a single page in the entire Otr run without the loli better than any page on Kinato's single chapterFixed that for you
I'm not sold on Kinato's personality. I feel like I've seen his type of character a million times before.Linae's design sucks balls and doesn't fit with the setting at all, but I like her personality. She seems like more than the usual one-dimensional female supporting character.I like Jien's personality the most. He's funny. I do think the similarity between his hair and Kinato's is an issue, however.
>>285742456Poor anon
>>285736484Would've posted a more creative use of mana redirection, like making the dragon's breath backfire or giving it crippling back pain or something
>>285740721If only Linae were some baddie like Milla instead of generic next door neighbor.
>>285734321This was generic garbage
>>285740224The only bait is believing Oturd is better than anything. Amemiya has already mogged any Kawaguslop in just one chapter
>>285734321soon to be Kinato's Axed
>>285750155>Amemiya has already mogged any Kawaguslop in just one chapterTRVTHNVKE
>>285736718Close enough, welcome back Fairy Tail
>>285737525you forgot>generic isekaislop JRPG setting with zero worldbuilding potentialbut otherwise summarized it well
>>285740199Otr was ass but this is definitely worse
it was cute and funnyI hope the femc becomes a competent fighter
>>285735843>>285735890>>285735926Cute, I hope we see them shirtless next chapter.
>>285747687This is the designated biCHAD manga.
>>285747511This is worse than Nue and Under Doctor.
>>285737889Kagurabachi had memes. What memes does this generate?
>>285751783Nue is way worse, dont fool yourself kiddo.
>>285751819Senpai is way more attractive and was showing her panties while this shitty childhood friend doesn't.
Hope this manga appeals to the yumes as much as possible.
>>285735926>>285736298>Jien>those faces, that attitudeIs he going to be called Jiji?
>>285753590Jiji is best boy so I hope so.
>>285753581I hope you kill yourself. This is supposed to be a shonen magazine.
>>285736718Literally the only good thing about this so far is Jien. That's not a good sign. There were also way too many times where I could immediately tell which manga an idea came from, like the Mob Psycho background character, the KnY and One Piece reaction faces, the very obvious BNHA influence, and the slightly less obvious Dandadan influence. It's kind of distracting desu.
>>285754325Cope and mald, Yumes are the future.
Decent enough to give it a chance for 10 chapters or so but looks pretty generic.
>>285736718Very fun and lighthearted, perhaps too much. The dragon didn't feel like a threat, stakes are low so far and no real hook. Designs are generic, mentor guy looks based but too similar to the MC. Speaking of, the mc is good natured but doesn't really feel like a cuck like deku or tsuna, which I really appreciate. Power system seems generic so idk if fights will be interesting enough. I'm jot asking for hxh or JJK tier but you know, I hope there'll be some substanceI'll see how it goes. Oh yeah didn't care at all about the girl and the village which feels weird. It's like the writer checked a series of boxes instead of fleshing things out. In comparison the first chapters of yuyu hakusho had me teary eyed when I read it 2 years ago (I'm 27)
>>285736453>>285736484>has unique not overtly battle orientated power>actually he can just throw power balls>actually his power is the control of all powerwhat will dektwo's 6 magic powers be?
>>285736718The mentor character is extremely likable. I also like the initial idea of the protagonist's power but I think they really really jumped the gun at having him use a ranged attack so early. I expected him to like, jump on the dragon's back and make its wings cramp up or something.Also the main heroine's outfit is extremely jarring in how much it clashes.
>>285735343>Guilds instead of guildWorld building is already ahead of usual isekai slop
>>285757089I think the captain isn't a true mentor. That's why he got introduced early.The MC has support magic, so he will need an ensamble cast to support. That's likely going to be the "hook" of the series. The MC:s design gives credence to that too. He got a fairly muted design while the captain clearly "pops out"
>>285758131A small addendum to my own post. People say this is native isekai, and sure I see that. But doesn't the setup remind you guys of gacha as well?Basically all gacha game has a bland mc. Then they surround that bland self insert with a ton of more interesting characters
>>285755044So why do they have to read a magazine made for teenage boys if they are such a big and highly valued market? Surely they would have enough magazines that cater to their tastes that they could read instead?
>>285758008That just sounds like people building private armies, this may not end well.
>>285736392Oh is that ball a physical object he filled with his mana?Nyohohoho
>>285758772It's just mercenary companies
>>285758131>The MC has support magiche threw a rasengan at a dragon and 1 shot it, there isn't going to be any interesting support role shit outside of him also being the healing bitch
>>285759483>MC does a few standard adventurer monster slayings and dungeon delves and such>Then his guild is commissioned to go fight a war and he's suddenly off to the battlefield
>>285754558Oh yeah zoomfag, those recent stories created all these shonen tropes
>>285759492So the white mage can throw out a Holy. He's still the support for now.
>>285760455If the point was he is support then the fight would've been won by showing off his various support skills. If the idea is he's a white mage they could've made it so he needed protection to charge up a big spell. Instead he was given a magic death ball that he can flick around, cause its just a standard "my lame healing skill is actually op combat!" bullshit
>>285737889>>285737969Kagurabachi redeemed its overt edginess almost immediately with this single panel in ch. 2
>>285737756>teaser artwork that didn’t even represent well the series.What are you even talking about?
>>285760780Now you are just jumping to conclusions. You've seen one chapter where he weekly throws an enhanced massage ball and then bounce it on a big lizard.Chill
>>285762378>Now you are just jumping to conclusionsSays the guy predicting a massive cast where the mc uses powers in fights in a way we haven't seen. The ball is even in the spread, that's going to be his deal.
>>285736718Thank you for posting, OP!
