Yuri Hime does it again:First chapter:>Pretty cool setup>Rapechad>Nice rapechad scenes>Actual chemistry for the characters and background that feel like it might set up some kind of dynamic and developmentSecond chapter:>Fuck all nothing relevant happening. No, lifting someone up to see what the world looks like from 180 cms tall is not plot>Only rapechad scene was imaginationIt's like these artists just have a setting in mind when they start and nothing else to go for so the second chapter will just be about nothing by default. What did they even do in the second chapter? I pretty much forgot because of how inconsequential it was. I forgot the ending punchline already and I read it 15 minutes ago.
>>286148948Why didn’t you use the Yuri Hime thread?
1 to 1 yuri is boring
>>286149584I didn't check for it and I don't want to interact with those people.I want to be among cool people who hate Yuri-Hime and think it's shit and I manage to get these cool people in this thread about every month when I make either this thread or about how much the newest Citrus is once again shit.Cool people are cool; cool people wear shades; cool people are sexhavers who want to be raped. Yuri-Hime fans are none of those things.
>>286149893Yuri-Hime fans hate citrus too, so what exactly is this complaint? They’re also posting pages like >>286145204, so I don’t get what you’re talking about.
>>286148948I'd be lying if I said I didn't get the same impression when reading chapter 2. I think the extra long first chapters might be throwing some authors off about how they need to pace things.
>>286150104Yeah well every time you tell them this they all rush in to defend it and they're just in general a zealous cult and obnoxious to talk with about fiction in about any capacity on anything.They're mostly just a super defensive cult and their perception of the fiction they're reading is utterly misguided to begin with.
>>286151074I feel they just have no pace or end goal in mind.They have two characters and the only thing in their mind is:>Eventually they will get togetherAnd then the first chapter is out and then they sit down and think>What shall I do for the secondWhat did they they even do? They were in that classroom and one lifted the other in the air and they talked about something I forgot or something.
>>286151074Or it’s throwing off the readers who expect as much to happen in 30 pages as previously in 60.
