I didn't like the big twist being it was a dinosaur bug with time traveling magic.It ruins the entire story. Everyone here could have written a better plot.
>>286215466Write a better plot and get published then
>>286215466I didn’t mind at first.I thought it was going to be just an eldritch explanation to see how the power of titans originated.It felt also very Bloodborne-like since it turned the titans into something similar to the scourge of the beasts where humanity interacting with alien’s biology turns them into mindless and manovrable monsters.However, what i didn’t liked was the worm to turn into the fake out boss that was needed to be killed to put an end to the power of the titans and please the NTR Snuff fantasies of a ghost loli.That part was trashImagine if we had to kill the presence of the moon so Mergo can see lady Mary kissing German’s head and put an end to the Scourge
>>286215466The worm plot would have been fine if it actually went somewhere
>>286215466it really fell apart near the end
>>286215466>humans are titanzWhat the heck? fucking dropped at this tweest
