Chapter 72 is still WIP.Read the raws here:https://takecomic.jp/episodes/4bd4e803c97aaAdd suggestions, feedback and corrections for the TL draft here:https://docs.google.com/document/d/10CM7IiuFNLZElgx3xnlX3SC0-5DjgAeXFUQXHg87TUs/edit?tab=t.0
>>287241684WIDE
Clean 1https://files.catbox.moe/pmlq2h.rar
Clean 2https://files.catbox.moe/fuuywx.rar
Hello, one of the TS anons here. I thought I'd have some time to work on this. I genuinely did. But without going into too many details with my IRL life I've basically been right now shafted to do the workload of multiple other people now, and now have to deal with that bullshit. I'm frankly pissed, especially how it now coincided with the chapter, but can't ignore this. Since it'll be what I'll have to focus on the next week or so I'll say this is the first chapter I don't think I can work on it at all in a while. I'm sorry. Other TSanon, I trust you with your approach, and don't worry if working by yourself means it'll take longer to release, don't try to rush. I'm especially sorry since I said I had some free time, a few days ago I thought I did.
Clean 3https://files.catbox.moe/rb018x.rar
>>287242062I hope things go better for you TSanon.
>>287242062Shit happens man, don't worry about it. Somebody has provided some help with the cleaning so that will speed things up considerably. I have all day today and tomorrow to work on it. TLanon can be the last line of QA for my work before it gets uploaded but hopefully he won't need to do much.>>287241972>>287242042>>287242085Thank you for these, this will help a lot. I assume these were AI-assisted but the resolution and image quality looks good at first glance. Some of the cleaning is a little sloppy in spots so I may redo it myself here and there but again, big help regardless.
>>287242062DOn't feel too pressured, anon. YOu don't owe anonymous faggots on 4chin anything. Take care of yourself first
>>287242357You're welcome. Its Photoshop healing brush tool.These pages don't have sound effects. Be careful.
>>287242512No worries, I've got a process for checking that. I can add the SFX that didn't need to be removed back in easily.
>>287242062Don't worry. Best wishes!
Sex with Srajo
Sou desu, watashi wa Fluffzen.
I love my wife Nanachi!
So the stake for Nanachi will be getting older by Frapsm, which means shorter lifespan from now. Layer 7 monsters are joke. Even a Corpse Weeper or Madokajack would do bigger damage by such direct hit.
>>287243740Steak for Nanachi, yes
>>287243469
>>287243740I want to see you deal with the Tenmaku on your own
>>287243774STOP BEING FAT>No
>>287243740One of her legs is a bag of bone shards now
>>287243740Reg dispersed an entire flock of corpse weepers without them being able to injure Riko. And Madokajacks are the strongest creature in the abyss.
I like that even with this reveal about Hail Hex's activities, the teams don't really have a reason to oppose eachother. They're in the 7th layer so it's not like Hail Hex can go back to hunting delvers
>67: attacked by octopussy>68 to 69: rescue mission>70: rendezvous and first aid>71: sniper intermissionI'm surprised. In my mind, Nanachi got attacked last chapter, so it didn't feel like the "Nanachi is fine" reveal took that long. I didn't expect her to die, but it still took two volumes, so I kind of understand the guys with beef about stakes.
>>287244901What's their problem anyway? Srajo is a white whistle and yet she acts like a foreign delver. Her only idea of how to approach the dig site in the 2nd layer was to fight their way in. She's apparently so hated and mistrusted that she couldn't just walk up and say, "Howdy, Habo. Mind if I take a peak?" Why does Orth still recognize her as a white whistle?
>>287241684chubbychi
All cleans checked and ready for TS. I'm going to take a short break.What do we think of the state of the TL? Ready to start putting on the pages? I'd like to hear TLanon's opinion if he is around.
>>287244963This very clearly parallels Riko's injury in the 4th layer, but the big difference is they got out by the skin of their teeth in that one and just barely managed to escape by making Riko get hit by the curse. This time though they fought back against the creature and gave it a decent injury to scare it off so I think that's likely the reason it felt way less dreadful. Since it felt like there's some ability to fight back against it. But at least in terms of Nanachi's condition, there was a solid moment where people thought she really might just be dead like how Riko seemed to die for a moment.
>>287245098>Why does Orth still recognize her as a white whistlethey are called Sovereigns because the delvers guild recognizes they can't do shit about them. The white whistle teams just do whatever the fuck they want. If Ozen wants to hang out in a tree house, get drunk, and diddle little boys, that's what she's going to fucking do. If Boner wants to set up an industrial child slopper, he's going to slop them kids. The guild does not get a say it
>>287245773I'm around, still very iffy on some wordings since I want to avoid implications that are not there and not miss implications that are there. Particularly around Srajo's buying fights sentence and when she talks about the joint expedition and the wording of 本命, but I think in its current form the TL is 99% alright so if you want to start TSing go ahead, we'll do one last dump thread and if I can figure out anything more appropriate after it I'll fix things before upload.
>>287243740tbf a shorter lifespan doesn't meant shit since Nanachi is on a final dive and means even less now that they're in the 7th layer. I'm just waiting to see how they're going to carry her down to the bottom. Nanachi-backpack? Nanachi-wheelchair?
>>287244963I don't. This is either the next worst injury anyone in Hello Abyss has suffered after Reg having his arm cut off or the worst. So the very first creature they encountered in the 7th layer was about as bad an experience as being betrayed and sucker punched by a white whistle.
>>287245928Alright will do. I'll send the PSDs as per usual, should be done very late tonight or mid-day tomorrow. It just depended on how late into the night I feel like working.
>>287246261Thank you for your work, anon o7.
>>287245912>they can't do shit about them>The guild does not get a say itWe know this isn't true. The guild compelled the Annihilator herself to go on a dangerous mission all the way to the 4th layer while pregnant that had the predictable outcome of killing her child. And Ozen didn't want to go either but was forced to. They tolerate Bondrewd's human rights violations in exchange for all the work he does for them like building the Idofront, blazing easier trails through the abyss, and taking out threats like the amaranthine deceptor infestation in the 4th layer. The white whistles get a lot of leeway to do their own thing like steal special grade relics or conduct human experiments. But they are still expected to serve the interests of Orth and the delver's guild. And the leeway they get just highlights even more strongly how bad Srajo's relationship with the guild must be. They're OK with Bondrewd, but not her. So why even recognize her as a white whistle?Even if she used to be on good terms with the guild and even if they don't want to admit a white whistle went rogue, just tell everyone she went missing and is presumed dead. Then tell everyone that there is a group of foreign delvers impersonating hail hex led by <insert description of Srajo> and that they are to be avoided at all costs and their location reported to the guild if they are seen. The guild still telling baby delvers that Srajo is one of them while she's going around killing red whistles and black whistles seemingly know to kill her on sight just seems off to me. Like the guild has some ulterior motive for her.
Put the bird mask on already you bitch!
>>287246848that's for when they encounter each other as enemies this time at the bottom after parting ways
>>287246848She only wears that when she deploys the anti-soul gas.
>>287247223Handholding sex with Marulk.
Streamanon has a question for you guys...
WHAT THE FUKC
>>287247802H-handholding!?
IS THIS
>>287248666Broccoli maybe?
And I'll be happy to translate this one.
>>287248641Prushka and Meinya?
>>287248641>we might get a whole chapter in dream landYAY
>>287248905Looks like the bun with the hat, but it could be.
>>287245098>>287246560The reason they couldn't get into the joint delving site was specifically because Habo appointed Ozen to it. We already know there's bad blood between them, they've fought before and Srajo is implied to have lost. So she couldn't just ask to get in.Due to the soul erasure, Srajo's killings aren't immediately traceable, the guild might not even know it's her. Even Cravali, an expert black whistle, didn't know the delver killers were Hail Hex before reading the professor's notes. I wonder who the professor even is to have this information or why he's keeping it under wraps.
>>287248666looks like a penis
>>287249130There's nothing to suggest bad blood. I always interpreted it to be a friendly sparring match between Ozen and Srajo (and to help humble Nisha). All the white whistles know most of the evil shit each other are doing also (they may have secrets but they do keep each other informed). They just look the other way. I would be that Ozen knows about it, same like she knows most of the crazy things about Bondrewd. And telling Riko to stay away is just good advice knowing all the stuff they're doing.That being said, if something is claimed for Ozen, they know better than to interfere because that becomes threading on someone else's claim and they know to stay out of each other's way (for the most part, Bondrewd is curious enough to fuck with Srajo given how valuable Juusou are).
>>287241684still going?
>>287249130>The reason they couldn't get into the joint delving site was specifically because Habo appointed Ozen to it.I don't buy this. Both Bondrewd and Ozen were more cordial with fugitive red whistles than this. It shouldn't even be a matter of secrecy. She's a white whistle. She should have the highest security clearance. And there were even umbra hands in the expedition. So presumably if Bondrewd had wanted to visit he would have been allowed. And it makes sense that she would be unwelcome considering she hunts down and kills delvers and employs kill on sight abominations in her crew. The question is why bother tolerating her in name if you're not going to tolerate her in practice?As for the guild not knowing about the killings, I had considered that. But Cravali is a delver who has to be half under cover because he works for a faction that is openly hostile to Orth. If he can figure it out, then I would expect the guild, who owns the overwhelming majority of special grade relics, regulates all comings and goings to and from the abyss, and has white whistles at their beck and call to have the means to discover this as well.
It looks like he drew a loli without bangs spanning the whole page. What do you think could it be a new character?
>>287252448isn't that just prushka?
>>287252950Idk, he didn't display it in full-screen.
Rude
sex with my big tiddy fluffy wafiu faputa. <3~
>>287254205her boobs are not that big
>>287254897Of course, they are anon, you're just having a Mandela Effect moment, I mean, how she would feed regs 20 babies without plenty of space for mild :^)
>>287246560when did they say guild wasn't cool with Srajo?
>>287246560I could have sworn it was said that Lyza could have refused but she was too adventure brained to let pregnancy get in the way
>>287255513she got knocked up during the adventure it took 10 months
>>287255485It's never been stated directly. But the fact that Srajo felt like she would have needed to sneak or fight her way past a mixed crew led by Ozen to see the 2nd layer expedition site strongly suggests they are not on good terms. And if they know about her delver hunting it would make sense for them to be hostile towards her. Even Bondrewd isn't hostile to delvers in general. He only experiments on foreigners and freaks.
>>287255513>>287255557Both wrong. Lyza had gotten pregnant just before the expedition but was not allowed to refuse to take part.
>>287241972>>287242042>>287242085>>287242512I feel as though I did not express my gratitude nearly enough earlier so let me rectify that now. Thank you VERY much for these. I always forget how long this takes until I'm sitting down doing it again. I'll still have some pages to finish tomorrow but I should be able to get over half of them done by the time I go to bed tonight. Without these I bet I'd surly be struggling to get them done by a reasonable time tomorrow night.
My beautiful sosuwife Faputa...
Riko
>>287245098>Why does Orth still recognize her as a white whistle?Because she is. White Whistles are half gods in the eyes of plebs/delvers, and even if they are bad people you cannot delete them or revoke their title.
She wants you to put suntan lotion on her and touch her breasts.
>>287258596>you cannot delete them or revoke their title.Unless you're Srajo
>>287245773>>287245928>>287246261Thank you, Anons!
>>287256318A true hero anon to do their bit to help shoulder the yoke. It's reassuring to see!>mfw Frying Pan might now about my obsession with fluff
The moment after detailed Faputa died and Blobputa born.
>>287259927Why do you keep coming here knowing we all wish you'd get cartel'd? We all hate you, ESL
something just occurred to me, an anon was saying that the balm may be related to polishing white whistles because of Poriyon, but since it was directly tied to the word Balm in english I wonder if it can't be like embalming for corpses, since Cravali was getting around to talking about Srajo and Tepaste was sensing that it'd get awkward based on only that.
>>287259322My own personal 9/11.
>>287260093I want to believe it is personal.I for one love mite-form puta
>>287260402>I for one love mite-form putaJust you wait until you have experienced it for more than a year
>>287259992this
>>287260735I picked up at the start of the village arc and I'm a bun-hater >:)
>>287260030As for me I think Tepsate may be involved in white whistles production
>>287261252>and I'm a bun-haterThen Faputa despises you and refuses your worship, sosu.
>>287261376If that is really true I'll accept destruction & devouring like a worshipful narehate villager
My daughterwife looks good in anything
>>287261720>If that is really trueAnon... Faputa likes Nanachi, she was the first to ran to rescue the bun, attacked the Tenmaku to provoke it into Sherumenae sniping range, them offered herself as pillow, etc. Faputa does not hate Nanachi, you shouldn't either.
>>287261864She pretends to care in order to win Reg, but in reality she’s just waiting for the bun to die
Imagine replying to bait
How did it take him 9 months to make this chapter if it was just dialogue... it's so over...
>>287246560It seems some of them still want to be part of society, they're not completely detached hermit monsters and Oorth wants them around because they're actually scary military assets, I'm certain no one wants to be a political enemy of the person with the forgeting coffin.
>>287261806it's because of the twirly hair
>mfw Nanachi still alive
>>287263271Why?
NnaaaSosu soon.
Alright, got 6 hours of sleep after getting 2/3rds of the pages done. I will continue shortly and hand things over to TLanon when I'm done. It'll still be a few hours.
>>287264063Thank you TSAnon, I hope you were able to rest well.
Tepaste sex
>>287264063I guess some TL discussion is still ongoing but the TL is almost finalized aside it.
>>287264255When did Cravali record her armpit scent?
>>287264288As any armpit lover would - while licking and sniffing it
I buyfagged the volume 11posting its cover would get you banned
I did read the first TL draft dump. Is the Forgetter the same relic that Tepaste was hidden in from the Orb Piercer?
>>287265258yep
>>287243594>posting off-model art, no wide headI doubt you do
>>287265371Then how wasn't Tepaste forgotten?
>>287265515Why do you think that? It's just storage with a weird name.
>>287265651Isn't the forgotter responsible for the killed people in delver hunting?
>>287265701
>>287265701>
>>287265845Sorry
>>287261277but that has nothing to do with that they're talking about
>>287266263That phrase about the makeup doesn't make sense.
>>287266337it's not about makeup, it's about embalming
>Look at my necklace! Nice, right? I killed a lot of Red Whistles for it.
>>287265943Nah, only those who do nothing make no mistakes
>>287267322Reg should incinerate all the ww
>>287267322I blame the red whistles for picking the fights with her. They read too many sadistic shota doujins and thought they were way tougher than they actually were. Not everyone can be like white whistle Aki, Sovereign of Hag Pussy.
>>287268205>Aki, Sovereign of Hag Pussy.Who?
>>287268205>Akiwho?
>>287268611>>287268572no one tell them. It's funner if they never find out
>>287269047Anon...
>>287264255Eyes like a fucking siberian husky wth
Initial TS completed. I'm going to do another pass of self-QA and then I will share the PSDs here via catbox links for TLanon.I tried to keep the font size larger where I could while still trying to maintain an aesthetic size to available space ratio. My only concern with this chapter was the amount of quotation marks fucking everywhere and the different ways they have been handled previously in different contexts. Sometimes we bold the font, sometimes we layer the text in different sizes for things (like relics) with double dual names. Sometimes it feels appropriate to include them in the text, other times not. I went with my gut a lot of the time.
>>287267322I kill red whistles bling vs I kill myself bling
>>287270225Thank you, Anon!
Take care of yourself first TLanons. Don't go out of your way for the trash of the internet.
Bondrewds nicer than Srajo atleast the people he killed served a purpose.
>>287270611The people Srajo erased probably are still serving a purpose. Nisha is storing them as fat.
>>287270611And all of them joined him willingly, Nanachi is an unreliable narrator.
>>287271895We don't know that all of the ones that join Bondrewd were willing. The Umbra Hands/Shrouds are, but a lot of the failed people were likely not.
As it turns out, I probably need to learn a thing or two about slimming down the size of my PSDs but that will have to be done at a later date. For now here is the finished TS. I do not think I missed much if anything at all.https://files.catbox.moe/m6gy22.z01https://files.catbox.moe/ekx9ee.z02https://files.catbox.moe/qauoev.z03https://files.catbox.moe/4upaoy.z04https://files.catbox.moe/v2dj88.z05https://files.catbox.moe/ilz887.z06https://files.catbox.moe/gcei6q.z07https://files.catbox.moe/tn4mk5.z08https://files.catbox.moe/qdp34g.z09https://files.catbox.moe/4kvxij.z10https://files.catbox.moe/bzvkly.zip
>>287273183Good work anon!
>>287273353Thanks!
>>287273183My hero
>>287273183>https://files.catbox.moe/m6gy22.z01>https://files.catbox.moe/ekx9ee.z02>https://files.catbox.moe/qauoev.z03>https://files.catbox.moe/4upaoy.z04>https://files.catbox.moe/v2dj88.z05>https://files.catbox.moe/ilz887.z06>https://files.catbox.moe/gcei6q.z07>https://files.catbox.moe/tn4mk5.z08>https://files.catbox.moe/qdp34g.z09>https://files.catbox.moe/4kvxij.z10excuse my retardedness but what are all of these?
>>287273815A zip archive divided into volumes. You need to download all of them and extract them at the same time.
>>287273815These are viruses that will instantly delete system32, whatever you do do NOT click on any of these links. If you are lucky it might simply install a virus that makes people say "the links are perfectly fine they're just images of the translated chapter" but dont trust them, they would have posted the images directly into the thread if it wasn't a virus
>>287273815dolphin porn.
>>287273944Ok it took me a moment bc I had to rename them all but I managed to extract them and damn I did not even know you could find that much dolphin porn out there.
>>287274296>I had to rename them all but I managed to extract themOh fuck, I didn't even think of that. Sorry for the inconvenience.
>>287265413
>>287273815If you combine them all it makes mustard gas
>>287273183Slowly going through them QCing and fixing a few wordings here and there. My PC is a little slow with printing the pages since the quality is way higher than usual so it'll take me a bit, but when I'm done I'll dump for a final collective QC.
>>287265169?
>>287276587UOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHH BOY NIPPLES EROTICCCCC !!!!!!!!!!!!!!UOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHH BOY TUMMY AND NIPPLES EROOOOOOOOTICCCCC !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!THIS BOY NEEDS CORRECTION !!!! I WILL PIERCE AND SLAP AND HIT HIS TUMMY UNTIL THIS FAULTY ROBOT WORKS PROPERLY
>>287276144Awesome. How did I do overall? I have been doing half chapters and the shorter extra chapters since we got this figured out a few years ago, I don't think I've done a full main chapter yet.
>>287276144Taiki
>>287241684Last chapter I read they were traveling with Srajo and Nanachi got kidnaped, how far behind am I?
>>287276806you are 5 chapters behind
>>287276764Looks solid, there wasn't anything too crazy on the typesetting end in this chapter either way but I haven't seen anything that would make me want to strangle you. Only thing is there was probably a better way to TS the squiggly lines ~
>>287276824Damn.
>>287276587that's the sleeve
>>287276869illiterate newfag
>>287276908probably but I hope you know what I mean
>>287276930
>>287276967Should spoiler to be safe but other anon is dumb, NSFW official art is fine so long as spoilered and not full on loli/shota sex or something. But even then, Merchant Philo got "that" chapter/doujin posted without any problems.
>>287276967that's the backside>>287277003ok no more "jokes", I'm too dumb
>>287277133the frontside is tamer
>>287241684>when your dog gets stung by a bee
>>287277003Shame we won't be able to post the final chapter here on account of the 20 pages of passionate ReguRiko sex.
>>287277206>The priestess group wants a pure virginal maiden to inherit the priestess title>Reg is delivering Riko to them>To save Riko from the fate of becoming the abyssal priestess he'll have to have passionate love making sex with her.I believe it.
>>287276587Riko back erotic! loli bare shoulder blades ToT
Ok, pages are done printing. Should I dump in this thread since it's still early or make a new thread?
>>287277435here
>>287277435This thread.
>Error: Maximum File sice allowed is 4 MB.Fuck
>>287277508Use PNG To JPG Image Format Converter from windows. It's about 3 MB.
>>287277508post a third of a page at a time, it's the only way
Ok have a folder just for the JPEGs now. Starting dump.
>>287277709
>>287277727
>>287277709putting on the ost right now
>>287277748
>>287277775cute riko
>>287276830Yeah the way CCWildWords shunts the tilde up to the top is really ugly and I think previously I had switched them to a different font but when there are so many it is hard to figure out what to do with them regardless of the font. I had that thought, but I guess I just ended up brushing over it in the end.
>>287277775holy shit off by 2.
>>287277799
>>287277727i need that faputa in the bottom panel.
>>287277814
>>287277748the fuck is iunno
>>287277508>>287277531>>287277645For future reference, it is possible to do pngs. Some get wary of this quality concerns but most the time it's fine and definitely won't be worse than what jpeg does; you just can't do it for heavy web-color gradients, or color images. Works great on normal monochrome pages. Won't work with spreads at this resolution size, though.
>>287277847
>>287277871
>>287277799>Pass-keeTS-sama, I...
>>287277003>Merchant Philo got "that" chapter/doujin posted without any problemsHm? HMMM? Did the fox finally get knotted?
>>287277892
>>287277871this is one of the coolest panels in all the manga
>>287277912
>>287277937
>>287277892I wonder if Reg got the pendant out of that?>>287277912Sleepy nuggets
>>287277903Just following orders. Check the google doc and come up with a suggestion for an how an english translation of a japanese manga is supposed to handle characters being confused about english borrow words.
>>287277966
>>287277977>I wonder if Reg got the pendant out of that?he got it from his sister
>>287277863How did a little baby find its way onto the internet? Isn't it your nap time?
>>287277995I'm still not sure what's up with the tense on Yata's sentence. If the fact it's not in past tense in japanese means they didn't actually try to get through the defenses and he's making an educated guess with info from after the fact. Or if they did try and got repelled by Ozen's combat squad.
>>287277775That>Aah~~~~~looks bad in my eyes.Just leaving one should be enough in most cases.
>>287278039
>>287278063
>>287277799i wonder what is tepaste thinking in that last panel>didn't really plan to come out as a fetishist in front of kids todayor something
>>287278091
>>287278039it seems like they didn't attempt to get in there, maybe less about fighting their way in but being wary of prying eyes for whatever they were gonna try to do (steal it possibly or opening it)
>>287278109
>>287278136
>>287277985Different T/L here. It works fine as-is. Unless you choose to ignore it because it isn't ultimately important and can probably get away with it, it only comes down to how you want to spell it: pass-kee, pasky, etc. >>287278039It's fine, he said でした which is past tense です. Sounded like to me they considered going, saw the scale or heard of its scale of the expedition, and decided it wasn't worth it without trying too hard.
>>287278166
>>287278220
>>287278240
>>287242062we love our TL and TS-kuns... take ur time fren
>>287278263There's GOTTA be a way to make this name shorter lmao.嘘が書けない紙片>嘘Lie>が書けないCannot write>紙片Letter
>>287278263>and even Bigittethink this should be "and even from Bigitte's" (place)like saying people from Moe's
>>287278101>i wonder what is tepaste thinking in that last panelThat's the fun part, I don't think she was thinking anything at all
>>287278321
>>287277814Faputa really hates Srajo.
>>287278321I just copied what you had.
>>287278345
>>287278321just skip "scrap of"
>>287278367>>287278352I know man, it's not on you. I'm just trying to prompt suggestions to come up with a shorter TL for its name.Also another slightly contested TL on this page.If we're going for what Srajo means with what she says here:“What idiot fights fairly when someone picks a fight with them?”“A fight is something where you take as much as you can take from the other”but with some cooler wordplay.
>>287278321Lie Free PaperVeracity RecordCandour AccountTruth Note
>>287278439
>>287278321how about>Fool-proof scrapor>Lie-proof scrap
>>287278335Tsukushi likes to punctuate his jokes with a textless panel of a charcater just staring into the distance dying a little inside.
>>287277912I wonder what's up with the weird bulbous paneling in the last panel?
>>287278458
>>287278321missed an "I">The moment I saw that name
>>287278166Who's the scholar?
>>287278436best suggestion so far
>>287278350I mean, i wouldn't trust soul lich hag either.
>>287278474
>>287278367>be carefulCapital B
>>287278321There's lots of things you can do. Like "scraps of paper" can be shortened to scraps, papers, or paper scraps. Similarly, a small piece of paper you write on can also be called a slip.The second part requires far more creativity.>Slips of Lies Unwritten / Unwritten Lies>Paper Scraps That (can) Tell No LieYou can remove the negative and make it positive>Papers of Veracious WritingFeed your inner chuuni.
>>287277911https://exhentai.org/g/3576494/65111788e6/
>>287277937>Thereafter, there was not a person who had seen the NighogrThis is very different from the initial TL. Was that wrong? Also this just sounds kind of awkward. Is it saying no one ever saw the Nighogr again?
>>287278439>stripping at a moment's noticeSLUT
>>287278548our heroes and hail hex
>>287278467me too, I think Riko's soul is trying to come out or something to that effect, given what Cravali is saying there
>>287278557Yes, it's just saying no one ever saw him again. But in fancy fairy tale phrasing.
>>287278525
>>287277996I don't believe Reg would steal from his sister there's clearly two pretty pendants!
>>287278525"without even a name"so he's not talking about the 7th layer... ?does he know something we don't?!
>>287278467Riko's danger-sense is going wild
>>287278458Don't really like how the second bubble in panel 3 flows. >plunder ... from them.Them is refers to the opponent but neither of the previous lines mention the word.
>>287278600>>287278557>Is it saying no one ever saw the Nighogr again?yeah like a "He was never seen again" But with the phrasing more focused around there being *no one* that had seen him.
>>287278550>>Slips of Lies Unwritten / Unwritten Liesthis is a little misleading though, just removing scrap of might be the best option like the first anon suggested
>>287278600forgot the image, crap.
>>287278548>reading_chapter_dump_with_anons.jpg
>>287278548faputa is 100% onto sarjo
>>287278670
>>287278696
>>287278652Trust me, if you worry about something being a "little misleading", your translations are going to sound like ass. Over-explaining is just as much of a bad habit.
>>287278696NANACHONKERS
>>287278726that's stupid, kill yourself.
>>287278722Nice to see everyone acting civil over translations.
>>287278696NONCH HUNGERS
>>287278490Jiren
>>287278459>Lie-proof scrapI like lie-proof. I think "Lie-proof paper scrap" would be reasonably clean rather than forcing 書ける into the translation, though maybe another option is "lie-proof writing paper" or something. Notepaper gives me too strong of an image of ruled spiral notebooks, but maybe that's just me.
>>287278766
>>287278766it's all in good fun
>>287278696poor puffy bun
>>287278321You think a person remembering someone who was deleted has any ramifications for their soul? Him all of a sudden remembering everything about the guy makes it seem like it's undoing the deletion. Like maybe him seeing the name allowed the abyss to recreate the guy's soul.
>>287278797
If someone posts a zip/tar of the scanlation properly compressed to under 4MB, I can dump with a pass next time to speed up dumps.
>>287278822
>>287278474So, Srajo had big fat cat squeeze the life out of anyone who tried to approach her circus?
>>287278842
>>287278842MITTIESALLTHEWAYDOWN
>>287278865
>frapam wear a frilly dress and a big bowtieshe must have been so cute and funny before
>>287278548Family selfie
>>287278894>>287278898Sorry to say anon but she was probably a noodle from birth.
>>287278898>beforeJuusou are born like that, chuddy
>>287278928
>>287278865Panel 5, maybe Hoh?Panel 6, bubble 1, capitilize It's.
>>287278873mitties titties
>>287278948
>>287278898guys, we have a speedreader over here
>>287278978
>>287279001
>>287279001why is Riko sitting like that?
>>287279027
>>287279033Maybe her butt hurts.
>>287279049
>>287279027how will they cut this important frame in the anime adaptation
>>287279076
>>287279027"is in place"
>>287279104
>>287278947ywnban
>>287279049To save Nanachi
>>287278948Panel 3 >Can you tell...>>287279049Panel 4, capital Nanachi
>>287279130Dump over o7 Thank you for everyone who contributed, I will wait a couple hours then gather whatever last suggestions are given on this dump and upload to dex + give a cubari link afterwards.
>>287278928>>287278947>>287278996it's one think to be born a monkey, but a fluffy three eyed worm?
>>287279130I don't get this line. What is Riko remembering in her dream?
>>287278754You realize that "immutable letters" is the author-endorsed translation of that line, right?
>>287279130wait what, does that mean she doesn't remember what she speaks with Prushka about in these "dreams"?
>>287279203damn speedreader...now kill yourself for real
>>287279197She doesn't remember the white whistle room and what happens there when awake, but remembers what's happened the previous times she's been there when she is actively in the white whistle room.
>>287279228これだからできないやつはなぁ
>>287278474>Who would suddenly attack someone who offered their help?What does this mean? She uses the test to prevent betrayal? And why is she answering this in response te Reg pointing out she also killed red whistles?
>>287279229Ah, so she's not aware of the Prushplace while awake? Got it.>>287279130Then maybe add a little clarifcation like>Seems like... whenever I come to this space/place...>I remember/recall>what happened here before...
>>287279130...enhance
>>287279229I think she does remember some of it when she wakes up but's like a dream
>>287278696chubby bunny
>>287278525Man, this chapter sure brought me a whole lot of copium about Cravalli not being gone for good.
>>287279165Thank you for your work anon
>>287279259競売名がなんなのかでもしらないガイジに言われたくないバカヤロ
>>287279027I wonder how much princess poop cost in the village.
>>287279328
>>287279441lewd
>>287279313That's where the crux of translation comes in. Riko could have slipped in a "before" perfectly naturally in her dialogue, but she didn't.
>>287279366Are you seriously trying to argue that the author didn't translate 嘘が書けない as "immutable" and 紙片 as "letters" because it's an in-lore auction name?
>>287278894"Mebbe you shouldn't do that, sosu."
>>287278321>Circles are roundOmg, It's not a joke? How did you interpret it?
Can't wait for shit to go down and Faputa to claw Srajo's eyes out.
>>287279575Are you telling me that Zoaholic is literally the translation of 精神隷属機 ?
by the way, any recording device? no, your cellphone is a Mythographer
>>287278548Meinya in the middle of the mythographerWhat could it mean Meinbros?
>>287278583and slutpaste
>>287279674she is a legend
>>287279674if your rub meinya on the device, it will unlock bondrewd's secret stash
>>287278928>>287278894>>287278865I wonder if this is related to the harden time thing
>>287278600What didn't come up?
>>287279878read the next page
>>287279622While not a direct translation, because it never is, you can reverse translate it to see how it got there, yes. Like Zoa there is a homage to the four Zoas (and by extension the concept of Emanationism), with Holic being a mental addiction to it. You can argue that holic on its own is 精神隷属, with the Zoa part not even making it into the kanji. He just drops 機 because it isn't necessary, and likely couldn't find a cool way for it to fit anyway.But that also doesn't matter, as just because one not being a direct translation attempt by the author does not mean the others also are not.
>>287279609
>>287279027why not do the beast charms
>>287279064From what?
>>287280257what you're arguing for is that we obscure the meaning of the usage of the relics because Tsukushi who doesn't even know english that well used a certain translation as its auction name because he is a chuunibyou and which doesn't really match the kanji provided>But that also doesn't matter, as just because one not being a direct translation attempt by the author does not mean the others also are not.and yes, it means that auction names are not direct translations at all. They are related in a way and imply how the relics are used or whatever but you cannot tell me with a straight face that "Immutable" is a direct translation of 書けない
>>287280325you got one of those birds they make charms out of with you?
>>287280325only the dread owls can be made into beast wards
>>287278865>"They have command over space and time">TheyWhere are you getting that from, translatorxister?
>>287278928>time manipulationWhy are juuso so fuarking strong? Why would Srajo reveal this info just like that to Riko and co? What are the chances of Hello Abyss coming out on top in a fight?
>>287280677Tell me where we get confirmation of the noodle's gender anon?
Imagine a woman randomly giving birth to a pool noodle.
>>287279210Cute and fragrant
>>287280812Faggot
>>287280499That's the thing about it, he already correctly translated "けない" as "im-". While 嘘が書 does not mean "mutable", he's still conveying it as an unchangeable concept, in this case truth. Either way, it's not something completely dissociated with the kanji meaning. He didn't call it "yellow stick", make up his own word or something else blatantly irrelevant; he followed a certain logic to get where he did.Things are always things "lost in translation" and it goes both ways. Such as ゾアホリック having denser meaning than 精神隷属 suggests. Similarly, the author probably didn't intend for "juusou" or "narehate" to not get translated, but instead translators chose to make them their own exotic terminology by not translating them.
>The passkey is Tepaste's armpits>Not her boobsGay
>>287280801>Why would Srajo reveal this info just like that to Riko and co?Peace through strength. She's keeping Team Riko in check by letting them know just how bad they'd be fucked if they decided to react badly to the revelation that they hunt delvers. They can either STFU about it and accept the help, or get the ZA WARUDO
Sorry if anything is too nitpicky. Also a couple cleaning misses.Page 1:There's a dot in second to last text bubble.I think "Is this also something we borrowed..." would flow better.2:Dot in "hear and smell too!?" bubble. It's also grammatically a bit weird, I'd do "There's sound and scents/smells too!?"Commas in "Well, if you ask me how, ..."?4: Dot at the bottom of the triple bubble.5:"With" sounds more natural than "via".Smudge next to "predetermined sound".11:"In the end the bird having left the cage" doesn't flow very well. Maybe "In the end, having left the cage" and move "the bird" to the next bubble."As thanks for letting it out, the bird invited the Nighogr to its hometown"? Currently the phrasing kind of sounds like a third party is involved.Isn't it a hometown that "should no longer exist", or "was assumed to no longer exist"?15: Smudge between "At the"20: The parent or child part sounds weird. A bit more in line with 覚えていられなくなる: "Whether it's the closest of their friends, or even their parents or children, everyone becomes unable to remember them"?29: "first, we gotta get our bellies full" or "we gotta get our bellies full first".31+33: Squished text should probably be squished horizontally instead of vertically in English, since it's indicating fast speech.38: "farthest from humans" should be "farthest from human" I think.41: "In Frapam's own way, they've been impacted by finding themselves unable to move when the twins were in danger, and by Nna-chan's selfless devotion".44: "Marking is in place." I'd move the "As" to the previous bubble so that "And as long as..." is together.45: Comma would help in "If Nanachi-san's condition changes in any way, please don't hesitate to wake me up."48: This sounds like it's singling some event out. How about "It seems like whenever I come here, I remember this place again", or reverse it to "It seems that I don't remember this place until I come here again".
>>287281117The problem is that her outfit lets her tits air out too much, so she doesn't really build up a good boob sweat
>>287280377Reghand squeezed it too much (for stress relief, of course)
>>287279165Amazing work anons
>>287281401I agree about the squished text
>>287281098even if I were to accept your approach to translating chuunikun, there's still the issue of removing what would've been the kanji themselves which unnecesseraly removes a substantial amount of information that is avoidable, a normal reader would not be able to tell that what they're talking about is a relic and one which has been auctioned off at some point. So this would make it an immoral translation atempt and we would be regressing to narehatescans levels of simplification and obfuscation.
>>287281711>>287281401I just need to know what font TS anon used for it because the text is already rasterized.
>>287282133Comparing to >>287201792 I'm pretty sure it's ounen-mouhitsu
>>287281401>41: "In Frapam's own way, they've been impacted by finding themselves unable to move when the twins were in danger, and by Nna-chan's selfless devotion".unfortunately this one changes the balance in the text bubbles too much. I do agree it reads more fluently though.
>>287279617they are awful, sosu,
>>287278321"Letter of unwritten lies"?
>>287282330that's different from being unable to write lies, it means that the piece of paper can tell what you're lying about?!unwritten =/= unwritablewell, there you go, I would agree with Paper of unwritable lies
>>287282330No fibbing notepad
>>287282378Paper of truths? I think this is the simplest and sounds best
>>287282476Also good
>>287282476No Cap Pad
>>287278166Seeing both groups risking their lives so easily for each other yet keeping all important info to themselves for risk of betrayal is fascinating to watch.
Scrap of paper on which you find yourself unable to write anything you know to be untrue
>>287281138Well at least they don't seem malicious
>>287283019pleeeeaaaase tlanon I beg you pleeeaaaase put this instead
>>287278722>it hurds someone post the Vueko Spurdo meme
>>287282133This is correct >>287282207 it was ounen-mohitsu
>>287278766I didn't appreciate how spooked Yata looks when looking at the raws. This really must be very dangerous.
