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>ISEKAI-LESS EDIT
Isn't that just fanfiction?
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>END OF CH 1
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>>287594027
This was an experiment to see if I could remove the isekai element and have the story function without it. Feedback welcome.
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>Feedback welcome.
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>>287593651
>Isn't that just fanfiction?
It's a fanedit.
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Tough crowd
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but like why
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Needs elf butt
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>>287594094
but why
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>>287594094
>Isekai replaced with a pointless amnesia plot
>Pilot is dropped into the world and immediately and effortlessly kills three ships of space bandits that happen upon him
>Main character doesn't give a shit about his amnesia anyways
>Mystery box of why his ship data was deleted will probably get an explanation but not a satisfying or plot important one and just serves for him to be as much as a blank slate as possible
You really just weakened the story with this edit. I mean this manga already looks like garbage by both art and what I can only assume the original plot was. But this is even less than garbage, it's nothing.
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>>287595123
why are you so fucking negative all the time?
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>>287595123
>I can only assume the original plot was
its fine, MC is not the only one in that situation and it explained later how that happened
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>>287595067
Why not?
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>>287595860
>he needs to be explained how not to be a faggot
Faggot.
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>>287595309
>Wants feedback
>Gets not the most positive feedback but it's at least detailed in how Anon didn't like his experiment
>Gets mad
Would you rather he call you a faggot and tell you to KYS instead
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>>287594094
>>287595309
Kill yourself, faggot.
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>>287596005
Different anon.
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wtf
why
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>>287593248
You did a great job OP. You made the "x would be better if it wasn't an isekai" posters collectively look like retards. For that alone you deserve some respect.
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>>287596077
?
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>>287593248
>>287596077
>samefagging out of desperation
Really pathetic. Worse than moral reversal.
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>>287596070
Got bored and decided
>why not?
So I made an edit.
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>>287596126
You know what's even worse? Your reading comprehension.
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>>287596141
>Got bored and decided
Have you tried reading isekai? Stupid faggot.
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>>287596174
Meds
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>>287596192
>begs for attention
>REE WHY ARE YOU MAD
Why are you so feminine?
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>>287594094
>de-isekaiing isekai slop that has no business being isekai in the first place
This is the basedest thing I've seen on /a/ in years, and I love you like a brother, OP.
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>>287594094
Nice samefagging, schizo.
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Thanks
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>>287595311
You don't have the right to like or be indifferent towards isekai. Isekai is pure cancer nine times out of ten. Without even having read the original, I can already tell that the isekai plays no substantial role in the story and was just added in because it's reflexive at this point.
>portal isekai
Decent
>body hijacking isekai
Cancer 100 times out of 100. There has never been a body hijacking isekai that wouldn't have been better served as a simple time travel regression.
>reincarnation isekai
Nearly as bad as body hijacking and treated the same almost as often. Again, completely unnecessary.
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>>287596369
Didn't read, fuck off lmao.
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>>287596077
>>287596126
>>287596070
>"x would be better if it wasn't an isekai
X would be better if it wasn't isekai.
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>>287596435
You did read. You're not laughing. You're crying over at reddit.
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>>287596440
>isekai...BAD!
Yawn, tourists hating on popular things for attention. Many such cases!
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>>287596454
>Y
Stopped reading there! Cry me a river!
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>>287596474
Listen newfag, I was posting in otome isekai threads before your shitty isekai general was ever even a thing. The people who hate isekai are the ones who've read a lot of it and understand how completely pointless it is every single time.
Nobody legitimately likes isekai. They like the cliches that come with it:
>cheat skills
>generic fantasy worlds
>harems
>revenge fantasies
>second chances
>fore-knowledge
>empire building
The isekai is the least important aspect of isekai.
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>>287596474
https://youtu.be/_CIYR_XgBSY
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>L
LMAO didn't read! Cry more! Isekai GOOD!
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>>287596593
Did read.
Still crying.
Still posting on reddit.
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>>287593248
Why can't it just start as a story about a fuckin mercenary in the space? What adds the fact he's reborn? Connections with previews life wouldn't brought up anyway. This detail is so insignificant and stupid, is it necessary to make people self insert? It's useless anyway because for how much the reader tries, he would never be him anyway, they will remain fuckin losers who will keep dreaming to be like *generic isekai MC* sorrounded by pussy and who gets to live fantastic adventures, while they will just keep living their shitty retarded life.
Again, why in the actual fuck does this bastard has to be necessarily isekaied?
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>>287596394
>You don't have the right to like or be indifferent towards isekai. Isekai is pure cancer nine times out of ten.

Cry harder, faggots like you don't get to decide what others can or can't enjoy.
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>D
>>287596623
>ablooo blooo bloo!
Well just become Japanese and write a better novel, you pissy faggot!
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>>287596635
Yes, we do. I'm so glad the isekai bubble finally burst and shoelacer series fucked it in the ass. I'll take all the shoelacers in the world over another isekai cancer.
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>>287596695
>Yes, we
Tourist detected, get fucked. 60 more years of isekai!
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>>287596394
Isekai in itself is not inherently bad, it just happens to be associated with a preponderance of awful writing habits. Taking the isekai element out of a slop story won't stop it from being slop.
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>>287596828
Your face is a preponderance.
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>>287596828
It's the opposite: the slop is fine. The slop is why everyone is here. It's the pointless isekai hook that's weighing it down. Why does the protagonist need to be a fat NEET on the inside? It's barely even referenced after the first chapter, and he basically just acts like the fantasy character he's embodying anyway.
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>>287596931
>Why does the protagonist need to be a fat NEET on the inside? It's barely even referenced after the first chapter
That's a writing issue, not an isekai issue. There are plenty of isekai that make the premise an integral part of the story, and that is because the authors are actually decent.
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>>287596931
Your face is pointless, retard.
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>>287596931
If you're fine with slop as long as it delivers the goods, then I don't see why the presence of one more clumsy plot element matters at all. Especially if it's as insignificant as you say. Just settle in for the schlock.
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>>287597640
>bro just admit you're reading shit!
Your face is shit.
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>>287597640
Because my enjoyment of a series is based around how much I can respect the main character and I can't respect fat NEETs.
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>>287597961
Good thing MC doesn't stay fat or neet in isekai! You'd know if you actually read any, retard!
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>>287596828
>Isekai in itself is not inherently bad, it just happens to be associated with a preponderance of awful writing habits. Taking the isekai element out of a slop story won't stop it from being slop.
this ,
the problem really is that the hook is a low hanging fruit more than anything.
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>>287594094
Kek based. Still sucks because the MC looks like shit though.
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>MC looks like shit though.
You look like shit, faggot. Imagine jugding man by his looks. What a femoid!
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>>287597674
Anon did admit exactly that and I took him at his word.
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>>287598187
>isekai...BAD!
Yes, your face is shit, gentlemen!
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>>287595123
>>Isekai replaced with a pointless amnesia plot
If this were a real series, it wouldn't be pointless. It'd be one of the major subplots for the entire story. Meanwhile, the MC being isekai'd is entirely pointless. It has no relevance to anything other than him kNowInG tHinGs frOm tHe oRigInaL gAmE.
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>stranger in foreign land is pointless for exposition drop
You should kill yourself!
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>>287593248
>[ISEKAI-LESS EDIT]
Holy obsessed Batman!
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>>287593248
>see, this gimmick is pointless and you can freely remove it
>*remove it and it doesn't work*
>er, um, it still doesn't work because *excuse excuse*
Imagine being an isekai hater lmao.
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>>287598469
Sorry, beige schizo just wanted my attention specifically today, and he knows I love Space Merc series. The other day he posted westernshit futa ripoff of that series, pretending he have never heard about original lmao.
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>isekai-less edit
That term alone means you suffer the same problem that many other mangaka and readers have about this genre, and the reason we only get the same shit over and over: isekai literally means "another world". Yes, usually associated with a fantasy medieval world, or a victorian age yuri romance, but in the end applies to any different world. So if the concept is "MC travels to another world", even if he does it via spaceship, THAT already is an isekai, a very sci-fi based one, but an isekai nevertheless
You may call it semantic autism, but it matters. You should have said "removing the usual cliches from fantasy slop nowadays" and we would have understood. But you ended up mixing things and the result was a really boring chapter.
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>>287598469
Virtually every single one could be desekai'd with a throwaway line:
>Sometimes I get the feeling I know what's going to happen, like God Himself is putting visions in my brain.
There, I just saved your entire genre.
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>>287598797
>make it even dumber for the sake of de-isekaiing it
But.. why?
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>>287593248
Why can't it be a manga about a space mercenary? Why does it have to be iselai? What is wrong with japan
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>>287598905
It's an isekai space mercenary.
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>>287594094
not bad. Now make an edit that puts him in the "Escape Velocity" game universe, piloting a Starbridge.
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>>287598874
1. So you can focus on enjoying the MC without constantly having it in the back of your mind that he's really a disgusting virgin otaku.
2. So you can focus on enjoying the story without constantly having it in the back of your mind that this is just some video game/novel world you ultimately can never take seriously.
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>>287594094
isekai element alludes to matrix simulation of reality / explains the uncanny AI support who control worlds in these galaxies and the tension between AI and humanity
>OP wants to be a mega faggot and remove that element from the entire story
Like everyone has said you are an absolute retarded faggot
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>>287599498
No, it doesn't. There is no greater thought behind isekai logic.
>Why do all these fantasy universes have stats and menus?
Because the faggot-ass isekai audience claps and squeals "JUST LIKE MUH VIDYA GAMES."
>Why is there an entire universe that existed as a story on Earth?
Because it's an escapist fantasy for the pathetic, self-inserting isekai audience.
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>>287599478
What the hell is a "novel world"? Not every isekai is based on being isekai'd into a video game or an existing fantasy novel. That's like one specific subgenre.
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It is also the one series that fully embraces the isekai trope giving him Ichigo tier gifts. Literal OP snowflake just all the power undiscovered. The only biggest retarded sub plot is the cola with the MC too brain to link carbonated drinks = carbon dioxide to his research for fizzy drinks.
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>>287599582
Didn't he find not!DrPepper, which is not what he wanted, since he wants CocaCola?
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>>287596394
But man hijacks a girl and then the first thing he does is masturbating is top tier, isekai of the year material. Bonus point if the girl's mind still exist
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>>287599559
you can't just no it doesn't to someone who has read the series moron.
on one of the AI planets the AI overseer which acts as a butler type for human vacationers takes an interest in the theory of reality just being a simulation. His AI maid is also fully supportive of him because of his uncanny taste and explanation of Earth when she creates a hypothesis of his origins.
The isekai trope actually gets used in this story because it is obvious the guy has no associations yet is a skilled as fuck pilot and uncanny understanding of some elements in the universe. The story is enjoyable slop that gives him decent challenges at his OP power level / reasons to use an ability or combination of them. He is already at max bio engineered level while being esper tier gifted.
You being a faggot removing stuff because you haven't bothered to be interested in the material is a you problem. You fucked up this time weakening the story because it wasn't a generic attachment to the story faggot
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>>287599645
it's all super dumb, 'almost' with the male mercenary fucks every girl that boards his ship trope.
It should actually be rewritten any single girl that joins a single male mercenary trope which makes sense, like a going to someones home on the first date kind of thing. since his home is like a million+ to be able to fly into space + dock / etc.
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>w-write it yourself...
I have a better idea, why don't you kill yourself for this poor ass coward answer? If you have nothing to say, just stay quiet
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>>287595067
Sounds based in theory if it works
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>>287599654
name ONE (1) isekai that does this
the small handful that do go for genderbender make it utterly inconsequential past like chapter 5 and worse yet the boy turned girl is basically asexual
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>>287593248
So this is that series where author played various sci fi games and it's supposedly influenced by those games?
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>>287596571
native isekais suck because they demonstrate a refusal on the author's part to cater to easier self insertion in exchange for less suspension of disbelief. the story will be a turnoff one way or another at a greater rate than isekai proper.
good luck to the shit-stirring op if he actually intends to adapt the rest of it, because this series makes a ton of callbacks to the mc's old way of life, which also served as the main source for his hypercompetency. this troon chose the wrong series to make his point. probably ashamed of ximself for enjoying an isekai.
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>>287598469
i think the lesson here should be that the issue with most stories is that they are gimmicks without any substance,
you remove the gimmick and you reveal there wasn't really anything underneath.
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>>287598701
is futurama an isekai?
it ticks a lot of the boxes but for some reason bringing this up pisses people off.
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>>287593248
What about the MCs retarded bugman obsession with cola and living a slow-life? Kind of hard to work around that.
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>>287596571
>The isekai is the least important aspect of isekai.
its like the hook though , isn't it?
it's like the thing they try to lure someone into reading their stuff, so i guess isn't the problem that with isekai that there is so much investment sunk into the lure that the rest of the story has to work around the lure sometimes to its detriment
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>>287601512
>I have a better idea
That's impossible. You killing yourseif is already an unbeatable idea. Isekai...GOOD!
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>>287599478
Why do you have this garbage at the back of your mind? Nowadays there are more MC who were working members of society on Earth rather than virgins otaku, Space Merc is the one. And it's not a game world, if you have actually read the series - you'd know the reason people like MC end up in that universe.
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>>287602450
the virgin otaku thing is hyperbole, i think the issue at hand is these kinds of stories obsession with making the mc "relatable" to its target readers
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>>287602626
>the issue
There is no issue, you've hallucinated it.
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>>287602303
>cola
If Earth exist in setting (like its our future) it's fine
>living a slow-life
I'm not sure if it can work in any space setting with or without isekai aspect
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>>287602303
>wanting familiar foods & drinks in a foreign land
>wanting a detached house
>retarded obsession
Uh-huh.
>>287602777
>If Earth exist
Why does it have to? MC is from Earth. He wants his cola.
>not sure if it can work in any space setting
Just go down to a planet and create a colony. Here's your slow life.
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>>287602724
its very limiting, it forces the writer to to have work around with having the main character have the same modern life experiences as the reader, with the story plot and character interactions having to warp around that fact to justify why a person like that is involved in a fantastical story.
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>>287603044
Oh nyooo~! Nyot the modern person in fantasy land! Anything but that! We hate fun here!
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>>287603044
it also reveals laziness on the writer's part, and frankly kind justify the isekai=bad association,
I mean if a writer isn't willing to even invest a modicum of effort of trying to come up with a compelling mc and instead defaulting to the cookie cutter "tried and true" isekai premise, why wouldn't one also assume the writer wouldn't just default to the same low hanging fruit and tropes for the rest of the story in order to get people to read his slop?

so yeah if someone is writing an isekai story, more likely than not they are a lazy writer just following the path of least resistance to get the same story beats.
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>>287604209
>it also reveals laziness
Stopped reading there. Any non-GPT generated isekaiBAD shitposts? Stop necrobumping btw.
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>>287602346
>n-no u...
isekaitard last braincell ultimate defense
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>>287602342
No, the hook is the power fantasy. There's a reason that time travel regression and isekai are talked about in the same threads.
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BASED!!
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>>287604281
>isekaitard
>>287594094
>This was an experiment to see if I could remove the isekai element and have the story function without it. Feedback welcome.

Glad you're done pretending this thread isn't a bait shitpost.
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>>287602047
this is screwed up but i was reincarnated
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OP is autistic, but there is a point to be made that if you can swap out the isekai premise for an amnesia premise and basically nothing changes, then it was a superfluous element. The thing to keep in mind is that this doesn't make the amnesiac version better. It's just indicative of the level of contrivance the author is operating at to get the ball rolling. It's also worth keeping in mind that this isn't actually super common. Most slop isekai does engage with its premise at least superficially with the MC having preconceptions or genre awareness, or using his modern knowledge to invent shit.
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>>287604503
OP doesn't fucking know that MC being familiar with some of the elements of the universe that was molded by higher-dimension incursions, are plot points of that series. Amnesia wouldn't be able to explain how does MC have this knowledge.

So not only OP is autistic, he's a faggot to boot, too.
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>>287604668
>. Amnesia wouldn't be able to explain how does MC have this knowledge.
maybey this is a case of fact being stranger than fiction but real life Amnesia does in fact work like this.
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>>287604778
Yes anon, real life amnesia lets you know information that nobody else in the world discovered yet.
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>>287604296
>power fantasy
that's not necessarily always the case though, I mean it feels like it sometimes, but only because the author has to come up with some contrivance to justify some random guy from the modern earth having a bunch of knowledge and skills out of nowhere instead of giving him an actual backstory explaining it.
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>>287604790
i mean in the sense of knowing things without fully understanding why you know it.
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>>287604839
Don't know why you brought it up then because isekai MC having exclusive information about the setting are common plot point.
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>>287604668
Yeah, like I said it's not actually that common that you can totally replace it and I'll take your word for it that's the case with this story. But the point I'm trying to make is more general and there definitely are stories where it's entirely forgettable that it was an isekai to start with. It's a legitimate criticism that such a major foundation for the main character is so easy to discard. It gives off the feeling that the author (or maybe just the editor) chose to make it an isekai just to get put on the shelf, rather than for actual narrative purpose.
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>>287604877
You saying that doesn't make it any less common. It is very common. >>287604857 Didn't read the rest of your drivel.
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shit is boring after he got invincible psionic ship
stop advertise it faggot
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>>287604909
Stop pretending that you read it. MC didn't even get it yet in LN, which author has a habit of changing.
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>>287604935
>only read ln
>waahh waahh how can people know things that happen in wn
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>>287594094
Not giving a shit about the amnesia is the worst part. Maybe remove the amnesia, make him conceal his identity on purpose by giving him a background, like he's on witness protection or something like that. That still doesn't explain why he has the strongest ship or why no other ship is as good, if someone built that, they could build more, so maybe he witnessed the murder of the builder.
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>>287604894
I think you misread my post. I'm actually agreeing with you. Perhaps my phrasing was unclear.
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>>287594094
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>>287605035
>only read ln
Nobody said that. LN improves upon WN just like in minecraft WN MC powercreep was unbearable, but was fixed in adaptation.
>know things that happen in wn
You aren't reading shit except this thread. You will not be able to answer anything about the series outside of osmosis you got here.

So pipe down shitter, it's going to be discussed even more when anime comes out. Save your tears and snot until then.
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I remember an interview with the guy making the pause button isekai. The reason he went for isekai is he doesn't need to explain the setting, he can just go "it's an isekai" and start the adventure without wasting time (nor needing the literally skills) to build up the world. /blog
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>>287605148
Especially if you are new writing novels, it's an easy way to make your protagonist interesting from the get go. Writing isekai is as much a cheat as the MC's powers are.
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>>287605148
>start the adventure without wasting time
couldn't you do that without isekai, drop someone in the middle of a story and build the background purely from show dont tell?
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>>287594094
you are AI
An Indian
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>>287605186
>JUST show don't tell entire setting lore and exposition to explain framework MC and world operate by
just buy a house energy
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>>287605139
>the faggot ln reader think only him read the series.
lol
lmao
kek
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>>287605186
>show dont tell
honestly sometimes i like to start anime right in the middle and just piecing together the background from the story an interaction moving forward, for some reason doing this pisses people off.
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>>287605214
yes? has isekai slop rotted your brain to the point you literally can't even imagine this?
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>>287605230
I've read WN several times. That's how I know what had changed and what was improved in LN. It's painfully obvious that you don't read anything. But you are welcome to beg me for attention some more, like a feminine bitch you are.
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>>287605259
Yes what? Yes amateur writers writing web novels as a hobby, should all be able (and obligated) to do this? Kill yourself, pseud shitter.
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>>287604909
His ship was still invincible before he got lighthawk wings. And he only used it once in actually combat so far and at only half power. He has to now go demolish an entire Belbellum fleet.
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>>287594094
I'm interested in the amnesia plot
Also its pretty clear a lot of stories have to use isekai as a pretext to get into their established genre, other wise they won't get greenlit
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>>287605352
He fought Belbellum fleet without psyonic upgrade, as part of mercenary corp, from an ambush, both in WN & LN. And he is not going to be fighting them again anytime soon: he will be off to solve shady noble shit as part of dowry to Serena' noble household. Probably reigning in their vassals who are too friendly with space pirates. Which is why his escort fleet with Lucinda & Chris in it, were attacked by suspiciously large and well-organized pirates while being on their way. Those "pirates" Hiro fought with half psyonic Krishna power. That's where WN at is right now.

Maybe you have misread the part where MC said he COULD fight entire Belbellum fleet on his own now, not that he WOULD.
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>>287605352
There are difference of invincibility between back then he couldn't do anything but runaway against a pirate lady with 10 ships and now he can solo a military fleet.
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>>287604909
His ship was invincible from the start, lol
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>>287606196
>His ship was invincible from the start, lol
No it wasn't. Where did you get that shit from?
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>>287606196
lol >>287605935
if he is so invincible he wouldn't need runaway back then after elf planet arc.
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>>287606196
so it was boring from the start
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>>287605199
Reincarnation isekai is objectively shit, and you are an objectively shit person for enjoying it.
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>>287607117
>>287606196
So now you're just going to talk out of your ass AND samefag, got it.
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>>287605184
>interesting
not interesting, just relatable, some way to allow the reader to connect with the world.
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>>287606196
>title screen
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>>287607165
>uh, hun-uh!
So interesting to reader, got it.
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>>287606283
>>287606377
>>287607157
>>287607121
>>287607208

25ch of the manga, stopped at the dumb mech vs worms, not gonna read 4 more vol for some mild challenge to start.
The only good point was him fucking the girls.
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I can understand if it's MT, tanya, honzuki, or whatever, but I never thought I'd see such heated arguments over a mediocre isekai harem smutshit with an OP MC like we've seen a million times before. That a case of having read a ln for the first time in your life or something?
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>>287607157
boring boring slop from start the finish
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>>287607632
Space Mercenary isn't smut though? He does have sex with his harem, but it's literally all fade to black scenes and things like "Oh you are making fun of me getting a prostate exam? Prepare your butt for tonight" talk.
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>>287607632
It's the series that can make space harem a thing and we get a bunch of them from now on.
But they hate that it's isekai and isekai gets the credit so they do shit like this.
>pic rel was the space mecha savior but flopped
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>>287607632
The space isekai are just that few.

This is no different than the low tier harem invincible fantasy stuff videogame derivative.
Like, this thing may lack most of the "stats/skill" fuckery but he's clearly in a tutorial area mmo, with op whale dlc ship and forced waifu events.
The space setting do not feel real or elaborate.
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>>287607820
and why should they?
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>>287607245
No one is interested in reading about a disgusting loser who never once tried to fix his life, suddenly getting all his wishes fulfilled . . . except for self-inserting fucks, who happen to be isekai's main audience.
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>alt edit
The previous pages are skipped. Only the first 2 count.
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>>287605781
He stated he could take on the entire Empire Gateway Fleet if he had to by himself. That is a giant flag. And he still needs to get vengeance for Neve. Trust me. Every time he gets another OP power up, he will get to use it in some spectacular way. That pirate attack was just a dress rehearsal. And with the Princess is aboard with that ridiculous edict it will be even more screwed up.
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>>287593630
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>>287593900
This >>287593820 is skipped.
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>>287610632
>>287594027
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>>287607632
People treat novelty of it being space setting and story being good automatically and are defensive about it. Plus most people ITT are isekai fags and haters probably didn't notice this thread
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>>287607431
Concession accepted.
>muh STAKES!
>>287607632
>heated arguments
One schizo begging for attention and getting his shit pushed in.
>>287607654
What finish, threadreader? It's not finished.
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>>287608777
>No one is interested
Well that's just not true, you made it the fuck up, schizo!
>>287610034
>MC is going to fight entire fleet
>trust me
Nice argument, source is your ass though.
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>>287610727
>People treat novelty of it being space setting and story being good automatically and are defensive about it.
Have you tried shitposting less, faggot?
>I S-SWEAR IT-T-S N-NOT G-G-GOOD!
>5K stars on Kakuyomu
>80K bookmarks on Syosetsu
>Adapted to LN: 16 volumes
>Adapted to Manga
>Adapted to Anime
>muh popularity irrelevant!
More relevant than your worthless opinion.
Yes, faggot, it's good. Kill yourself.
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>>287608355
Should what?

Being a wish fulfillment thing is no excuse for being so basic and uninspired.
Hell the girls being "cute girl saved from debt slavery", "dumbass ELF GIRL IN SPACE adventurer(mercenary)" and i suppose he will get the "officer (knight captain) girl".
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It's still crap
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>>287611101
Your face is basic and uninspired. Fun things do not have to be original to be fun, you retarded contrarian pseud.
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>>287611213
>It's still crap
Your face is still crap.
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>>287611081
I didn't need help to prove my point
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>>287611699
>all those people are WRONG
>I am RIGHT
>there'll be no proof!
Blow your head of lmao. Nobody will miss you!
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What's the context for making this thread, actually?
Did OP get called a faggot in the isekai general?
Did he get called a faggot on reddit?
Something has to be the reason why OP decided to do this thread.
And considering we're on 4chan, it has to be something incredibly dumb and pathetic to have made him so angry.
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>>287611870
>Something has to be the reason why OP decided to do this thread
>>287594094
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>>287611870
>>287605297
>But you are welcome to beg me for attention some more, like a feminine bitch you are.
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>>287611899
>feedback welcome
>immediately told to kill himself by 5 anons
>melts down for 200 posts
Kill yourself.
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>>287611870
>What's the context for making this thread, actually?
Isekai is objectively bad.
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>>287612172
>objectively bad
Your face, BMI and breath are.
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>>287612025
>melts down for 200 posts
I literally posted screenshots proving it wasn't me. Nice try.
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speaking of
is there a good modern space opera anime /manfa
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>>287612379
Congrats, you learned to inspect element!
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>>287612416
>you learned to inspect element
The hell does this even mean?
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>>287612414
No, Elevens don't play enough space games to warrant their interest in writing right now. Lute being an exception.
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>>287612239
You're as pathetic as your favorite isekai hero.
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>>287615022
>continues to beg for attention like a woman
By all means, continue, little bitch.
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>>287615073
>continues to provide attention like a femboy bitch
Isekai is shit. You know it's shit. If you didn't, you wouldn't bother replying. This thread hits a nerve for you.
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>>287615603
Didn't read, good bitch though.
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>>287612530
So any Stellaris influence in his story? Or it's just space elves?
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What a completely fucking pointless endeavor. Hiro's entire personality and motivation as a character is rooted in the fact that he's from Japan. You're actively making the series worse by removing that. And with a fucking amnesia plot, of all things. Never cook again.
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>>287616564
>Hiro's entire personality and motivation as a character is rooted in the fact that he's from Japan.
Sounds like really cool and interesting MC
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>>287616651
Glad you've seen the light, anon. Hiro IS interesting and cool.
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>>287616113
The entire universe seems like the state of one of his Stellaris games. Hyperlanes for travel, with some large gateways for some shortcuts that are mega structures.
Fighting Crystalline space monsters is common for the early part.
Starting location is an Empire that previously fought and lost against some AI machines they built but are allowed to pretend to run things still as the AIs became human shippers.
In the WN he recently visited something along the lines of a psyonic fallen empire who spends all their effort fighting the extradimensional creatures that are invading as they accidentally almosted ended the universe a few centuries earlier by messing with the Shroud too much. This is also why Isekai men keep falling down dimensions and ending up in the universe.
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>>287617564
This is so fucking retarded. Winking at the isekai doesn't somehow justify it.
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>>287618487
>This is so fucking retarded
Why? There are multiple avenues of "isekai" in Stellaris, both in and out. Making another universe or going to a different dimension, are available gameplay goals. Beings falling in from other dimensions is one of the Crisises. Is that all "winking at the isekai" too?



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