It's been a while since it was dumped, I'm going to dump chapters 7, 8, 9 and 10.
>>287866670It's actually a good start. Remember this kid was an assassin who just joined after doctor Kino helped his grandpa for some time.
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>>287866670This definitely improved as it went on
>>287866717New jrpg party member joined
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>>287866838*faints*
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>>287866893Good advice
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>>287866967Yummy!
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>>287867017>You got Sanji
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>>287867067Good advice 2
>>287867094Reminder Kino as Bugs Bunny laughAnyway Chapter 7 FIN------------
>>287867127*Chapter 8 START*God Hand is a good game btw
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>>287867219Holy shit!
>>287867248dog mode
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aside from the apple man later on, feels like every characters needs to put 50% more into their shtick. doctor needs to be goofier, girl needs to be more money pinching or whatever, boy needs to be more wild etc
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>>287866670Thank you for doing this, Anon. That being said, it encouraged me to subscribe to Jump+, so it was kind of a win.
>>287867446Holy RABBIT
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>>287867499Beautiful sea>>287867354I feel like the mangaka is still trying to find his own style but yeah maybe it would be more popular doing that>>287867455You're welcome!
>>287867546I didn't know that, cute
>>287867354Yeah that might help a bit
>>287866698imo, Shuli is the most promising character so far. Individually he has the most room to grow, and relation-wise he can hold differing views on conflicts while also putting Dr. Kino in a mentor role.
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>>287867663Damn
>>287867699Chapter 8 FIN------------This was a sad chapter compared to the most positive previous one>>287867600Yeah, it's like instead of following a mc who follows a sensei, we follow a sensei and we are given the second pov of an apprentice, kinda like Komatsu and Toriko
>>287867745*Chapter 9: An arrogant doctor*
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>>287867864damn, Kino just gave her the Shinpachi-retort
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>>287867889>I rabu Pieck poster flashbacks
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>>287868049Damn
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>>287868096*Hugs*
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>>287868192Cute
>>287868216Chapter 9 FIN------------------Sad flashback chapter but with a nice ending in the present!
I think I will be asleep by the time this dump reaches the end of the most recent chapter so I'll just give my thoughts on it nowI'm so fucking sick of polygamyslop in jump
>>287868241*Chapter 10: Miracle Man*Also CP, rip AH and Kinato *cries*
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>>287868337Now you know where the little girl went. Remember Kong wanted to use his daughter as a donor for his heart (he is heartless lmao)
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>>287868547ENTER: The antagonist
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>>287868596We battle manga mode now
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>>287868693HE SAID IT
>>287868717Chapter 10 FIN--------------------A rival finally appeared!>>287868251Mmm maybe I should have dumped this sooner, should I dump the rest?
>>287868735ye why not
>>287868735>should I dump the rest?NTA but the next few chapters have been the high point of the manga so far imo.
>>287868780>>287868791Ok then! Sorry for not dumping it sooner!-------*Chapter 11: Groping in the Darkness*
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Sorry for anons that like this series but I'm 99% this is getting axed
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Kinato is better
>>287868961I like his Squall outfit *frog pepe punches*
>>287868956I'm lukewarm on the series. the premise is better than the execution.Well all know only Roku and Sorachi will survive.
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>>287868999>RokuHahaha
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>>287869045Mudada>>287869040I-it won't get axed!
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>>287869116Like my husbando from Kengan
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>>287869277Chapter 11 FIN---------------DON'T TRY THIS AT HOME KIDS
>>287869301*Chapter 12: Overload Haiji*
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>>287869301>>287869316>Literally Toki
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>>287869568Kinda dark stuff for Jump
>>2878695913 WIVES>3 WIVES3 WIVES
>>287869635Holy shit GEEZER
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>>287869736Those fingers feel SO GOOD
This feels like something that would happen to vash the stampede
China is sexy in a way, I read under doctor for she
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>>287869780Chapter 12 FIN-----------------Diagnosis? Vampire
>>287869808*Chapter 13: High Speed*
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i think it's the better series of its batch but that only makes it generally bland. this rock hard assassin was a pretty neat short arc tho.but i think the start should've been snappier, skip chapter 2, make the triad arc shorter and dedicate a proper chapter to shuli's backstory.really what he needs is learn proper act structure, there's a reason it's a true and tested formula.>>287869808like, this page made me feel something. there is some sauce underneath it all. something kinato and ah are completely missing desu
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>>287869870Eat apples, kids
The doctor from chapter 1 should come back, he'd unironically save the series probably.
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>>287869946Really cool page. Fighting capoiera like using your sword legs while eating an apple is pure kino
>>287869870i wonder if maxell will become a mainstay, he's kinda neat
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>>287870000Kino numbers >>287869984Agree
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This is missing the hot blooded element. It's lacking passion.
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>>287869666Making him that old was a great choice.
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>>287870194Naruhodo
>>287870218ORA ORA ORA ORAFINGERED!Chapter 13 END---------------Next one is the last one that was released
>>287870344*Chapter 14: Way of Life*
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>>287870438Bye xenoblade wives
>>287870476Oops
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>>287870555BRUZZA!
>>287870572kyaaaah
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>>287870671Mangaka definitely watched Unbreakable movie with Bruce Willis
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>>287870653>that curvy silhouettewhat the fuck
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>>287870818>Oh no, not being super strong, love longer and have 3 lovely wives, the horror!!Chapter 14 FIN---------------------So we are up to date now, and it looks like this arc is over. Next, new arc and constantly fearing Saito's axeDid you rike it?
>>287870105It's the doc's facial expressions, or rather lack of them, even in a life or death situation with his organs working at 10x capacity he just looks mildly bothered. It distances us emotionally from the battle.I get that being calm and collected is in his character, but in that case the art needs to pull more weight in how it renders his features.
>>287870861>Did you rike it?i think it's better than its batchmates but that isn't saying much. Alien is entirely carried by oga himself and has no substance whatsoever otherwise, Kinato is actual narou shoelace trash.sadly i can't see it live much longer
>>287871158I knew Headbutt was kill when ogre freed his sister from the pod and she didn't seem affected by the experience at all. Emotional stakes felt nonexistent.
>>287871336He needs more experience/better editor. Though it should have introduced human Mei way sooner
>>287871336>Emotional stakes felt nonexistentthat's the entire manga, really, oga gets infected by a weird parasite and he's got nothing to say besides "huh, guess it made me stronger"? not even his friends comment much on it.even oga just kinda seems too aware he's the protagonist of a manga, it doesn't even feel like he's worried about his town or his family, like he knows everything will go well. there's no shred of doubt or insecurity. i get he's a showman but there's a limit. and even if he's supposed to be a retarded meathead his friends should cover for his relative flatness
>>287870861Thank OP
why the fuck did they give NOT-vash stampedo sister-wives?
>>287873472Because mcs can't be based now only side characters
>>287873472I'm convinced somebody at weekly jump editorial is obsessed with the idea of multiple wives, you barely ever see it in jump+ but it's all over the magazine
>>287875848>to-love runder doctor
>>287870861Thanks for the dump, op but I don't think I ever read it afterward since it got nothing to offer other than people fight.>>287871634Getting an experience/better editor is like % 0.01% SSS gacha.
>>287875848Yeah I have the same impression. Either a haremfag or worse, a 3DPD polyfag
>>287870861Thanks. I hope Chiwa and Shuli get to be useful next arc.
>>287870861Thank you for posting.
>>287877155It's axed
Why does saito love this?
