Lets say the Last and Boruto get retconned from cannon and the story is paced back in 699.How would you fix the mistakes made by the ip
>>287927783>no aliens would be a good start.
>>287927783Probably just expanding more of the world building is beneficial with making other nations and conflicts but the power scaling needs to get toned down.
>>287927783As if Bort is the biggest problem with Naruto. The redo should start at least before the arrival of ayy lmaos.
>>287928307How could you retcon the war arc ?? And kage summit.
>>287928395You can't. That's why I said a "redo" instead of "retcon". And to be honest, the starting point must be much, much earlier than the Kage Summit.
>>287927783>699Its already too late, the damage is irreversible by then
>>287927783I'll never understand how someone can seethe about Boruto for over ten years just because someone on the internet told them to.
>>287927783The Last was fine, Madara Uchiha in his entirety was not. Pain should have been the ultimate final boss.
>>287928922Dude not even the official Naruto/Boruto YouTube channel cares about boruto they post more naruto part 1 and shippuden content than NNG
Redo The Last, except instead of Hinata needing to break a gigantic Tenseigan orb for some bizarre reason, she has to awaken the Tenseigan in her own eyes, and obtain her own Six Paths Chakra Form. That way we get a Six Paths battle couple with Naruto and Hinata vs Toneri.
>>287929129Something like this and also give sasuke more scenes.
>>287928962Pain should have been the ultimate final boss.And sage mode should have been peak power level.
>>287928307The ayys were made during the last kaguya was never stated as an alien but as a god or spirit
>>287929129How about not making any romance look at how successful oda is for not creating cannon pairings in his manga.
>>287929535But romance was still an element in some of the arcs in One Piece. Whole Cake Island, especially.
>>287927783>699A little bit too late.It would have redeemed much of the manga if Kishimoto just let Guy mutual-kill Madara, and had the rest of the ending unfold the same way (maybe without Sasuke getting pardoned for his horrible crimes). The Guy thing is really what makes it totally thematically incohorent with itself. The narration even makes a big deal out of how Madara wanted to be proven wrong, how hyped he was about how strong Guy was, proving that efforts of individuals mattered, that incremental progress could be made regardless of genetics or prophecy, and the world of shinobi wasn't truly cursed to create eternal suffering. But in the end Kishimoto sucks cocks, and he couldn't let it happen. So Naruto is a big fat hypocrite, Neji died for nothing, and that's that.
>>287929713Neji shouldnt have died and guy and tsunade should not be alive by the standards of the manga and its main story.
>>287929778Yeah, it's because one benevolent übermensch can sacrifice himself for the people while another benevolent übermensch comes in and heals the tryhard. The little guy can't really change anything and shouldn't really be there, but the big guy cares for the little guy, how nice. This is effectively advocating for absolute monarchy because you just need the tyrant to be a nice guy and it will work out.
>>287929660Was it with the main protagonist?
kill sasuke and replace him with a space alien
>>287929872With one of the main protagonists of that arc, Sanji, yes. There's also romance in Kuma's backstory, it serves part of his regret towards his partner Ginny. And romance was the primary fuel for the God Valley Incident. So Oda's written it plenty of times in his stories.
>>287927783I would end the story with Boruto's dad's manga and not make a Boruto
>>287927783The biggest mistake happened when the Zetsu retcon happened. But anyway, 700 now shows his wedding with Hinata, his inauguration and the timeskip with his family (now with like 10 kids cause why not).Then a slice of life show with the family messing about.
>>287927783Naruto, Hinata and Sakura have the hardest threesome in history giving us Fireforce.
>>287929713>Neji died for nothing,No since he wasn't forced. That was his whole thing. Wanting control.
>>287929778So how would you do it in the naruto verse in your own way desu
>>287930149Based
>>287929511Huh, I never watched The Last, but I have a vivid memory of it being established in the main series. But you are rigth. odd.Nevertheless, my point still stands. All this shit with Kaguya, Black Zetsu, Asura and Indra reincarnation are absolute nonsense and need to be removed.
>>287929033Sounds like you're coping to me
>>287927783you need to redo everything starting Kage summit at least
>>287931255You mean immediately after Pain. There was so much potential for different team ups, missions or relationship development funding the village's repair.
>>287931117There is no such thing my statement is proven even beyond doubt just like the chinese gatcha game only focuses on naruto shippuden rather than boruto.
>>287927783I just want more missions between an older team 7 that is all
>>287927783
>>287927783Let the story end there and focus on supplementary content. There are multiple ninja world wars, different countries, a bunch of kage and who knows what else left to explore. Instead of a sequel they could have made a prequel or a simple side story set elsewhere in the world. This would also be an opportunity to return to the actual ninja stuff over giant mech/kaiju nonsense. Focus more on puppetry, insects, dogs, weapon summoning, etc. instead of just having people nuking mountains with energy balls.
>>287931117>Sounds like you're coping to me
>>287927783Make a series set in the same universe but on a different part of the planet far away from the five great shinobi nations.
>>287927783Easy.
>>287929535>Wan Pissers already trying to take romance out of other mangaKill yourself, you retarded faggot.
>>287933221That would be hilarious, but Kishimoto hates women, so none of them are ever allowed to accomplish anything.
>>287932210Wtf
>>287932964based
>>287927783>>287929713I'd also do that and have Guy die for real taking Madara out.And then I'd have it revealed that the whole entire story was just a Tsukuyomi 13-year-old Itachi was casting on Obito after he used Izanami on him.It was all just a story Obito created in his mind after Itachi set the Tsukuyomi to auto pilot.https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JvWnrxzQMG4
>>287927783>detailed, sharp, and highly stylized facial features>that flat ass hairDoes Araki really?
>>287927783Story started going to shit with the timeskip. Everything after that was a parody of itself.
>>287927783Narutofags are so fucking pathetic.
>>287927783What is this?
>>287927783Nice try, pinkshitfagIt's been 12 goddamn years. Move on with your fucking life!
>>287930996>make a manga about breaking free from your destiny>in the last third retcon in that everything that happened so far was in accordance to a prophecy and everyything after is also according to said prophecy except the very last moment where neither of them kills the other and instead both survive for a goodie two shoes ending
remember to marry your mom
>>287941552Bleach actually did it
>>287933924>Sakura becomes Hokage by process of elimination because the men on her team who are more qualified can't/won't take the positionNot that different from Tsunade.
>>287941674>>287941552what a strange coincidence
>>287927783The last is fine, boruto and the 350 filler episodes don't exist.
>>287927783Naruto becomes hokage at like 19. Sasuke becomes Konohagakure's first lady. They dig up Hidan and give him curse seals, then make him perform rinne rebirth on Danzo and Hiruzen.All the conspirators of the Uchiha massacre go to trial for genocide. Hiruzen has to spend the rest of his days at the orphanage with Kabuto atoning. The others are executed. Hiruzen's stone face is replaced with Itachi's.Via surrogates and cloning the clan revival comes along. Sasuke gets to restore the Uchiha like his stated intention in his introduction to team 7.The next generation grows up being taught the real history instead of pure propaganda. Their relation to the system is de-romanticized. Shinobi protect an economic zone for the wealthiest people, the fire daimyo in their case, and the merchant class relies on shinobi discretion. Shonobi are not tools, they are a necessary niche and performing that role allows them to keep a history and culture intact. It's a profession, not your fate from birth. And you have to be like 15 to take the chunin exams now.
>>287942630Is sasuke a fem
>>287942630Why not revive neji
>>287942694No.
Remove Sasuke from the scene through temporary exile punishment.Something something unstable ambiant chakra to nerf the shit out of Naruto and overall powercreep.New arcs : Chuunin exams 2, Jonin exams, Hokage selection arc.No more Uchihas holy fucking shit, fucking jews that over took the story, Senjus lore, complete dismissal of the moon shit.No more Akatsuki, that shit is done with, pivot from battle shonen to geopolitics, with Naruto now being the strongest ninja trying to rise from big retard to political figure that can fight.
>>287942630>Deromanticizing the idea of a child soldierLame.>Female SasukeBased.
>>287942630>Their relation to the system is de-romanticized. Shinobi protect an economic zone for the wealthiest people, the fire daimyo in their case, and the merchant class relies on shinobi discretion. Shonobi are not tools, they are a necessary niche and performing that role allows them to keep a history and culture intact. It's a profession, not your fate from birth. And you have to be like 15 to take the chunin exams now.Wait, all that just to keep everything the same, except now they're a bit more aware of the exploitative system they're serving?
>>287942711The manga reiterates again and again that child soldiers fed to a meat grinder is the main flaw in the system via Zabuza, Nawaki, Madara and Hashirama's dream of protecting the youth, Itachi being on the battlefield at 4 which traumatized him. Bort era Naruto doing nothing about this is such a bizarre choice that makes him seem like a total slave to an institution when he has leverage to change things.
>>287927783Sad thread
>>287942965Without propaganda and shaming people can engage with the shinobi life without oppressive expectations. They can be genin for awhile and if they only vibe with medical jutsu they can become a doctor only without having to go on missions. Or join the intelligence division similarly. They could be expected to help during crazy events but there would be more civilians with shinobi utility and also more from a civvie background applying to become ninja. Only those who are truly qualified in skill and maturity become chunin and beyond.
>>287942980All the manga says is that real child soldier upbringing has never been tried.
>>287942702It would be too awkward when Naruto and Sasuke get together instead of Naruto and Hinata.
>>287927783Just leave it to end at shippuden
>>287943373Why just have neji perform incest with hinata ???
>>287941552Exactly
>>287927783>cannonNarutards keep self-reporting themselves as brownoids to this day
>>287938363It's kino
>>287946167Yea bro just marry your mom.
>>287927783You'd have to go back to the end of the legendary Sanin arc to fix the "mistakes"
>>287946243>typos make you a brownoid
>>287942630The gay shit and the Uchiha wank ruin what's otherwise a very kino hypothetical. And since when could Hidan perform rinne tensei?
>>287927783I would call it naruto conquest or Naruto siefuku.This would be a seinen and not your teenage shonen battle manga.>The main theme. Natural law or nature’s strength beats technological advancement/ political alternatives and >Plot line draft.Among the five great nations all have merged to one country in politic and in resource, there is no separation or distinction ever since the 4th gnwBut far away there is another country that is extremely advanced in technology in culture and in use of chakra that desires to start negotiations and foreign relations with five great elemental lands.>conflict.It comes in that after the elemental nations gain the trust of the the metropolis country , they're real intentions come in as they see how regressed and distant they are to technological advancement almost questioning the ordeal of child soldiers and brutal warfare that they begin to fear the shinobi world for its lust for power.So the metropolis nation plans a psynop by commiting a political assasination killing the tsuchikage onoki and framing the hidden leaf.this stirs conflict and distrust between the leaf , the cloud and the sand with the cloud and the mist since the sand and leaf were originally the strongest of alliesthe question here is suspicion of sasuke being behind this while the elders fear that is a probable cause.All the while more intel is gathered by spy's from the advanced foreign nation and they ploy another assassination attempt and kill the hidden leafs two elders and some of the feudal lords now it is heavily questioned if sasuke is still corrupt.Thats the first part of the beginning of the series trying to weed out the bad while uncovering the truth that it was indeed the foreign nation’s doing.>enough mass for world building and plot demand.
>>287927783NTR to the worst girl.
>>287929129I'd say make Toneri one of the junior branch Hyuga who's very salty that he's never gonna be the head of the clan, basically Neji 2.0 except of being angry he's very creepy towards Hinata in the beginning, either because he's genuinely in love or trying to weasel his way into Hyuga leadership through her. Then he betrays them all and ascends to godhood through some ancient bullshit they've found in some abandoned temple and Hinata has to put him down in the end. Maybe sprinkle some sad bullshit throughout about how he wasn't all bad and the clan made him this way. Basically make the Hyuga curse and sins of the past the main themes and such.
>>287948062Naruto: Sons of Liberty.
>>287948260Would love to see what kojima would do with the naruto verse.
>>287948062Whats your power scaling like ??
>>287948388Only people i would trust with the naruto franchise.
>>287927783https://archiveofourown.org/works/84158436/chapters/221923166I actually wrote a fanfic about it; it's a political drama where everyone is a terrible person. It transposes feudal logic to the world of Naruto. If you know Spanish or use an automatic translator.
>>287948812Who's Ino's babydaddy?
>>287948962Naruto, in the story, becomes too corrupt and a womanizer because he believes it's best for everyone. From being a great hero, he becomes a slave to the political system.
