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>The Traitor
Periodic reminder to always skip the first episode of Gungrave.
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>>287993225
No, don't say that in a flashback!
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>>287993344
...But everything changed when the knife-ears attacked.
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>>287993392
...Still warm?
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>>287993427
Still warm.
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>>287993477
Now in the present, he's surrounded by enemies and dead allies, with his scheme exposed, and a sword at his throat. CAN HE MAKE IT?
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This arc was too long.
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>>287993582
Mafia's a job...
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>>287993617
>got his knife up
Weird transition, but IT'S ON
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>>287993674
No damage from smashing through the brick wall
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>>287993584
I disagree, it just felt too slow and uninteresting at the beginning and too fragmented in character focus at the end. I wonder if, had the last 4-5 chapters focused on each of the 3 or 4 'settings' evenly within each chapter' (zig, mafia chick, dork elf, witchu smashing shit), it would have felt smoother. Also having very little Witchu in it, very little focus on her's and Zig's partnership, has made it feel a bit like a slog. The mafia are kind of the least interesting faction and characters.
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>>287993712
He's keeping up pretty decently with Isana's lightning mode.
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There's not a single likeable character in this shit.
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>>287993862
>wtf where's the guy who makes the :O face then goes EHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
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>>287993889
Jogging ftw
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>>287993983
Is ogre

(not last page)
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>>287993983
this is why you always gotta wear your cool guy shades
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>>287994040
>the others were just chilling and letting her handle it
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>>287994076
Oof
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>>287994098
Who was in the wrong here?

End chapter.
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>>287994117
Enjoy your elf immigrants, you italians!
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Still gotta resolve the Witch part of this arc, unless her wrecking the storehouse was the end of her part.

Either way, time for clean up and Elicia resolution
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>>287994117
He did nothing wrong. Literally.
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Isana is best girl.
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>>287993218
>The Witch and the Mercenary
>no witch or mercenary in sight
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I will never understand dump threads where the OP puts "witty" comments with every single page
It's reddit as fuck
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>>287994704
2nd panel on the left side! >>287993582
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>>287994040
I liked the callbacks to what she's learned from Zig. This could've been a tougher fight if she ran low on gas.

>>287994117
>nobody wants the bow

>>287994425
>time for clean up
I was just thinking about that with all the bodies they left there. What are we paying these mafia for, eh? Does the city have jannies for the uninhabited areas?
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>>287994117
bunch of fucking knife-ears come and take your turf away and rest of your buddies play ball with them? yeah he did nothing wrong
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>>287994943
Weren't the elves just hanging around their own spot and just defending themselves?
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>>287994967
no they carved out like 1/3 of two other pre-existing mafia territories in the city
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>>287994751
It's either that or samefagging as a commenter after dumping.
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>>287994997
My mistake. Either way, you always kill a traitor before an enemy.
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>>287994751
It's called chapter dumping with plausible deniability against capricious jannies, you fucking newfag.
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Ooh, early, fuck yeah been waiting
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I hate that I have to wait again for more goodness. Nice for Isana to have a moment where she's being the menace she's supposed to be rather than jobbing to show everyone how OOOO SCARY Zig is
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>>287994943
If you think about it, the others were the true traitors all along.
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>>287993821
>Zig could smell it the whole time and knew that's why he was number one
Isana not totally fucking up for once
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>>287994098
OOF
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>>287995067
When is the last time a janny has deleted a dump thread, you dumb nigger.
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>>287994117
Thanks, OP.
The guy who betrayed his dudes to avenge his dudes, of course
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>>287995255
jannies are retarded crybabies who have more mood swings than a discord full of troons who accidentally activated their video feed
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>>287995255
You wanna be the one to find out?
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>>287994425
Tf is Elicia gonna do?
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>>287993392
I really like the samurai elves in this, not sure why. Maybe it's because they come across more shinsengumi-ish than full-on samurai.
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>>287995328
wants her stick back at the very least
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>>287993584
I liked it. I like how there are multiple power groups within the city, some legitimate, some not, and none has really pulled ahead. One of the things that makes it feel a bit more real than the usual fantasy slop.
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>>287995362
I guess Zig's gonna have to stick it to her
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>>287994288
>Enjoy your elf immigrants, you italians!
If only Yurop was blessed with elfgirl immigrants instead of subjected to what it actually gets.
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>>287995342
They're more like ninjas
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>>287994701
Witchu is cute and for Zig. White Lightning Dork us super cute and for me!
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Do you think that was the invisible guy Vanno was talking to before?
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>>287995180
Zig is genuinely scary though, and the manga does a pretty good job showing that it's genuine.
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>>287995294
Capped that important post, btw
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>>287995342
Isana being cute, hot, bullyable and fun really helps.
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>>287996251
No neck tattoos, so probably not.
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>>287996495
>guy
I bet it's another woman for the Siegbowl
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>>287996493
Has there been some explanation already for why Isana is the only dark elf?
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>>287996104
Siasha seems a little frustrated.
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>>287997049
Her mom was a race traitor, obviously.
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>>287997049
Oh my god Anon, you can't just ask why she's dark. But no, it hasn't come up. I assume she's not alone, but I haven't kept track. If it's her on this page >>287993392, it was neat to see her in a different outfit.
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>>287997071
Harlots are trying to take HER man (research subject of interest)
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>>287996767
I bet it's the first woman Zig will actually kill
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>>287997071
Sia is massively sexually frustrated, yes.
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>>287993477
The boss does not understand the human heart...

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>>287995436
I liked Bazalta getting more development as a frenemy faction. Makes it more personal if there's another conflict with Jinsu-ya down the line. Both have seen Zig's value and threat level now as a free agent.
>the absolute state of Cantalera
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>>287993392
around elves...
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>>287994040
This motherfucker can't write a goddamn even fight to save his life, what a fucking waste of a decent villain too
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>>287994117
The Elves, they came in tried to take over and killed a bunch of his men. He tried to strike back but got no support from his orginization. But this is a mid to low tier slop fantasy series so cute girls get away with bullshit anyone man but the MC is worthless trash
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>>287998657
lol
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>>287998683
>anyone man but the MC
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>>287993225
fun
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Didn't Vanno know who was behind the kidnapping already?
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>>288000713
He had suspects that he was able to prove with the kidnapper bodies, but apparently his list wasn't complete.
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Finally Zig and Sia reunite next chapter
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Cute thinking face
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>>287995180
Isana getting TWO good fights after so long was a treat, yeah.

>>287998657
Hey, he did better than the drug-amped Agresha squad leader. But we've known for ages that Bazalta can't take her in a straight fight.
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I think the problem with this arc is that it's way too convoluted and lenghty for what ammounts to essentially a filler sidestory that doesn't particularly develop the main cast. I think it would have worked better if it was divided into 3 "episodes" (zig hired as bodyguard after lunch/fight with drug enhanced humans + witch adventures/showdown with elicia and the traitor) spread out inbetween sasha and zig's exploration, it would have been a more welcome change of pace.

Elio being taken care off right away is also a missed opportunity. He would have been a more interesting character had he decided to escape after isana blocked his inv sword (showing her growth), as a known antagonist that works in the shadows yet is forced to start from scratch, but the writer clearly wanted to wrap up the whole thing and move on.
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>>288005100
Elio's goal of fixing Bazalta became pretty much impossible once he got outed. Even hiding in town would be hard. I think he'd just GTFO if he wanted to live, at that point.
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>>288005100
? how small is your brain
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>>287997379
It seems like that would compromise her combat effectiveness. Zig and her should figure out some way to take care of it.
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The writing in this series is mid at best, the scenario is just fun (when it's not guild related). Expect more of the same stuff (mainly Zig being a Gary Stu).
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>>288005936
>It seems like that would compromise her combat effectiveness
No, Sia being a jealous and frustrated virgin with no sexual outlet for her half-concious lust for Zig, apart from innocent petting, is a driving force behind her combat abilities. She's not a cool, collected, proficient fighter like he is (although she's fast improving); she's at her most powerful when she's angry and wild and directing that vaguely in the direction of her enemies.

But yeah, that aside they should definitely have sex.
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>>288006050
He has plenty of personality and defined character, he's not a 'gary stu'. You're just misusing that term because he doesn't conform to your apparent notions that a character has to be some kind of deconstruction or flawed underdog or ridiculously quirky guy, rather than a level headed and overwhelmingly competent one, to be an actual character/good character. You might say I am putting words in your mouth but that's what I infer from your post, if I am wrong about your opinions then explain them.
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>>288006243
>No, Sia being a jealous and frustrated virgin with no sexual outlet for her half-concious lust for Zig, apart from innocent petting, is a driving force behind her combat abilities
Suddenly it makes sense why she conjures giant stone hands.
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>>288006297
And why she calms down (after the initial shock) and is satisfied when he dangles her. She wants to be manhandled by his big hands.
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>>288006050
I could agree on mid, but mid is an improvement on the usual fantasy isekai/native isekai. This actually just reads like a fantasy story, similar to what you'd find in an average fantasy novel in the West, but maybe a little more low-stakes and episodic. I think that puts it above a lot of its competitors. (Although, if it were released as a Western novel nowadays, Siasha would certainly be the protagonist.)

Zig is fine as a protagonist: he's very strong but much less of a Gary Stu than someone like Kvothe or Rand al'Thor. He has strengths due to not being from the continent of the story, like a heightened sense for magic, but weaknesses too: he can't use any magic at all, and it's only his overwhelming combat experience that lets him compete with the freaks here. Having him be entirely martial also contrasts with the entirely magic Siasha, and a big draw in the story is having them both interact with this cutthroat, bloodstained world outside but then be very tender and cute with each other.

Yes, it's a 6/10 or whatever. But the average fantasy slop manga is like a 3/10. The author is getting better at executing his ideas in fight scenes too.
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>>288006290
No, like he is always right about everything and immediately gets everything perfect about a situation. Also despite being a mercenary they never make him really morally gray either (like killing innocents or anything), his enemies are kinda cartoonishly bad guys most of the time (racists and child smugglers etc). It's Kirito level retardation when the elves get mad he kills one of theirs in the other city too, forced as fuck drama. For the record I like overpowered characters and everything, it's just he doesn't really make any true mistakes and kinda handles everything effortlessly.

>>288006357
His strength and magic sensing is not because he's from the other continent, he was still the only one from there who has the ability to smell magic (hence why he only survived). Still a long while to go before that gets explained.
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Are we ready to talk about the problematic age gap in this manga yet?
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>>288006518
Ironic shitposting is still shitposting, anon. Be a better man.
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>>288006518
It's not a 'problematic' until Witchu loses it and he wakes up one morning with her straddling him and going for a kiss.
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>>288005414
The next goal would have been to oppose jinsu-ya and to take over basaltha if they showed weakness, obviously.
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>>288007709
The problem with that is really the same problem as they first encountered with Jinsu-ya, which is that there are about three top killers on the elf side that the mafia has no credible way to defeat by force.
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>>288006518
300 year old witches DESERVE 21 year old Mercs
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>>287994117
>we need to kick out the immigrants but still keep importing tons of cocaine and fentanyl
It was never going to work out for him.
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>>288009664
>the damn immigrants FORCED me to smoke pounds of flocka and fent so I could fist fight them
italians are weird
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thanks for delivering as always
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>>287994117
Thank you for posting!
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>>288009664
Kind of a reverse don corleone.
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Imagine how horny and jealous Siasha will be now that she hasn't shown up for like 4 chapters and Zig has been around other women.



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