Now that the dust has finally settled, how would you have fixed the ending?
>>288100990Copied the ending of Muv Luv Alternative.
>>288100990Besides having Eren fully commit to wiping everything out, you need to give the survey corps better reasons for opposing him and wanting to kill him. I can buy Armin and Levi turning but the others need better motives. From a reader perspective, yeah he’s committing the greatest act of evil but from the pov of paradis, he’s getting rid of the titan curse and making sure they have no enemies for eternity. He’s killing two birds with one stone.
Eren becomes Hokage and is acknowledged by everyone.
>>288100990I don't care.I don't give a shit about AoT after the basement reveal and genre change.
>>288100990>How would you change perfectionBrowns always wanna insert their opinon where it's not wanted.
>>288101110The tonal shift part-way through was actually one of the things I liked most about the show. It really made you feel the change in perspective the people on Paradis felt.
>>288100990>the dust has finally settled you make this thread every other week
>>288101643This is the first time I've ever made this thread.
>>288101078I mean, 50% of the story their enemies were fellow Eldians, killing everyone but his race in no way ensures peace forever.
>>288100990The story would have been so radically different after chapter 105 that I can't even conceive of an ending similar or even related to the one we actually got
Post your fav ship.
>>288100990The problem is thinking it's just the ending that needs to be fixedThe ultimate problem is the entire layer half of the story was a mess of inconsistent tone, pacing, and mismanaged audience expectationsBecause theoretically everything it was doing should have worked and been absolutely geniusBut it did all of that by breaking promises it had made to the audience
>>288102043I hate shipfags so I'm a suspect to say this, but there really aren't any good ships in AOT lolMaybe Gabi and Falco?
>>288101659oh, okay. alright then, let me rephrase it:this thread is made every other week.its really just beating a dead horse by this point
>>288102104>>288102104This.People focus too much on the ending, for good reason desu, but even before it the story was already showing several cracks and issues that ended up leading to what we got in the end.
>>288102104>promises it had made to the audience?
>>288102104>>288103407Agreed, hence why I said this >>288101947Most people just realized how shit it was a bit late but after Liberio everything sucks
>>288101090Anon this isn't Bleach.
Armong winning more
>>288103440Fuck, how do I explain this to someone that doesn't write...When you're telling a story, tension and satisfaction and all of that, those things that you want to make the audience feel that will make for an enjoyable story, the vast majority of that comes from establishing a precedences and expectations and the like by showing them something that implies something else about the way the story is going and gets them to want that thing, or to be worried about the possibility of that thing, or whateverSo there doesn't necessarily have to be a moment where it's explicetly stated, for example, "this character dies in the end" but you can tell the story in such a way that the audience feels that they are owen that character's death because you have essentially "promised" that it will happen. Or if you make that character likable and make the audience feel attached to them, then the promise becomes a threat, a thing that they don't want to happen but are expecting, which makes them afraid of it. Then, if you handle it right, you can make breaking that promise feel like a big relief, or a gift to the audience. It's all about managing expectations and knowing what promises you're making and what ones you have to keep and what ones you have to break
>>288101078Maybe make it about the avengers doing a rescue mission and leading survivors to the island.
>>288104761Good post anon. Going in caps folder
>>288106665>caps folderCaps? Am I stupid? What is a caps folder?
>>288106705probably some screencaps
>>288100990Wouldn't change anything, I like the idea that autoritarians are insecure manchildren.
>>288100990I make Eren even more of a cuck showing explicitly sex scenes with him watching as a bird and also revert the flash forward of the nuke back to the mangas original where it looks like it could have been 5 years later
I posted this text on another IB a while ago and i'm going to repost it:>should have ended in Season 3The great mystery of the basement would have been revealed, the origin of the Titans would have been explained, but the way Ymir acquired her powers would have remained unresolved. Furthermore, the author planned to end the anime with a finale similar to that of the movie “The Mist”: likely everyone, or almost everyone, would die, and at the last second, Eren would use the Coordinate in the same way as in Season 2, but this time by touching Zeke and after most of the soldiers were killed. If I were to rewrite the story, it would go like this:>there would be only 7 TitansI’m eliminating the Cart and the War Hammer; I’ll explain throughout the text.>Hardening would be a power of the Female Titan, and Eren would be devoured instead of Annie remaining inside the crystalI would eliminate the plot device of the hardening serum, as well as the WH, which is something I dislike for two reasons: powers that are absurd even for the universe itself, and the fact that, despite being so powerful, it isn’t with one of the warriors (what’s the point of giving the strongest Titan to the Tybur family if it would never be used?)>Ymir would be controlled by the Coordinate during Season 2, instead of going voluntarily with Reiner and BertholdtNo particular reason, I just felt that the explanation for her going was merely a plot convenience so that Marley wouldn’t be revealed too early. The reason for this would be that the founder can control the shifters, but the nobles are immune, just as they are already immune to memory erasure (The warriors would be descendants of nobles who remained in Marley)English is not my native language, please forgive any grammar error.1/2
>All the warriors would be killed in ShingashinaReiner blown up, Bertholdt devoured, and Zeke by Levi.>The power to transfer consciousness into the Titan’s body would be exclusive to the Armored TitanBut constant use of it would cause loss of control over the Titan, which is why Reiner wouldn’t try to cover his mouth with his hand to block the Thunder Spear from Mikasa>Armin will be killed from ColossalThis would eliminate yet another plot armor.>The Cart would be replaced by the JawAnd the explanation for why he didn’t go to the front lines alongside the Armored was because he had only recently received the Titan; he would be the only one to escape from Shiganshina alive.2/2
>>288100990you also die, so i get to stop hearing about it
>>288100990Armin should had been a girl and be the main love interest of Eren
>>288108707Why
>>288100990Commit to Eren being the villain.
>>288102043The yuri ship
