Chapter 2 rough translation.For chapter 1, see https://desuarchive.org/a/thread/291191585/#q291196679This first page is just a recap.
>>291331276Nazar:âDr. Valles, to start with, I want you to follow the perpâs trace from the corpse.âVivian:âUnderstood⌠Agent Nazar.âNazar:âIn the meantime⌠how about you? Whatâd you have for breakfast, Doc?âVivian:âE? Just my standard nutrition pelletâŚâNazar:âSo basically you need energy to function.âVivian:ââŚyeah?â*Whatâs with this guy?**Heâs saying you should eat before work?*
>>291331276you killed the kuroneko thread right before I could hit someone with a bad ur mom joke while sei jingI just thought you should know that
>>291331296[Some perfectly reasonable English onscreen]Vivian:âThe cause of death was that the spare battery was damaged and overheatedâŚThe virus entered and caused the cooling device control valve to stop working.And the cooling device couldnât take the internal pressure and the hose joint ruptured.An automated attack type barrier with the objective of physically destroying the cyberbrain.âNazar:ââŚA long time ago in the military, I saw that sort of virus being used.âVivian:âYou saw it yourself? Or was it just common knowledge?âNazar:âJust keep going.âVivian:ââŚâComputer://Level C virus detected and neutralized.////Level B attack type virus detected and neutralized.//Vivian:"!The virus is full of / itâs full of viruses⌠it canât be, even the things we made in the lab are being misused!â [I'm not really sure whether she's just upset that viruses are being used for crime in general (is she stupid?) or if she's specifically saying that these are viruses her lab made.]
>>291331328Vivian:âEven though this antihacker had laid out a high level virus worthy of his status,it was neutralized in an instant. So he thought his opponent was an AI.â{Not really sure about this.}Nazar:âHe was a âwhite hackerâ belonging to a government agency.You canât find a substitute for someone like him in a rush.His last words were to make use of someone from your lab.âVivian:âYeah, but Dr. Virus, not meâŚSo what was this guy looking into when he stepped on a landmineâŚâŚHuh? Agent Nazar?âNazar:âHm?âVivian:âThis log⌠it was someone pursuing the same âvehicle thiefâ.North American Automotive Industry Cybercrime Countermeaure CouncilâŚEddie CarsonâŚâ
>>291331350Nazar:âOi! What just happened?âVivian:âSomehow a virus infected our side through him!âNazar:âA virus!?It canât beâcould they have breached the FBIâs server?âVivian:âUm⌠Agent NazarâŚI think they infected somethingâŚâ
>>291331363Vivian:âUm⌠the Farbey-boyâŚâNazar:âDoctor⌠you got a full body prosthetic, right?âVivian:â...E? Ah⌠yesâŚWhat about it?âNazar:âSoâŚThereâs no reason to hold back.âVivian:âHuh?â
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>>291331384Nazar:âShit!It thinks weâre targets to suppress!â
>>291331399Nazar:âIf I were to go up against that thing head on, it wouldnât be enough no matter how many bodies I had!â
>>291331418Vivian:â...uhnHurtssâŚâNazar:âDr. Valles!Its view is blocked!Get out of here now!!âVivian:âUnderstood!OH NO!â
>>291331428Vivian:âWhoah, whoahâŚâNazar:âIts ears!!Block its ears!!âVivian:âE-ears!? (Where!?)âNazar:âShit!Hurry up!!â
>>291331446Vivian:âI didnât know how to find something like the ears.So I just shut down every sensor type thing in the head.âNazar:âIâm pretty sure I saw a ball of fire coming out of your handâŚCan you just invade an AIâs circuits and interfere with it?Vivian:*Of course <3*ââŚwell, letâs just say for now itâs because Iâm an expert.âNazar:âThe emergency code didnât go through. What a troublesome virus.Sebot! Connect me to the emergency squad downstairs!Weâll need another hand to move the body!Oi, you listening?The emergency team!âVivian:â! Agent Nazar!âYER A GLITCH WITCH, VIVI.
>>291331470Vivian:âThat Sebot is infected too!âNazar:âDr. Valles!ââShit!ââGet over here!!Your enemyâs me!â
>>291331487Vivian:âIt- it hurts!!Hurry up and get it off!âNazar:âOofâŚ!!!Shit⌠aghhh...hh!!!Shit⌠Doctor, canât you use your ability!?My bodyâs half military grade half civilian grade, I donât have enough power!âVivian:âEe~~!?Thatâd destroy itâŚâNazar:âItâs already being destroyed enough!âVivian:"...ach!!Iâm sorry, Farbey-boyâŚ"
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>>291331515Nazar:âWhew⌠Doctor?You all right?âVivian:âYe⌠yeah.Because Iâve got a full-body prosthetic.Itâs better than a living body, I think.âNazar:âYour kneeâŚâVivian:âE?âNazar:âAh⌠it isnât locked.If the damper hydraulic automatic control werenât off, the knee would have broken.Hmm⌠so even an academic can figure out how to use it well.âVivian:âA⌠no.RatherâŚâIf youâve got a gun, couldnât you have just shot the Farbey?Youâd have been able to stop it physically.âNazar:âEh? This is a 380 ACP, it doesnât have any armor penetration.So it only could have been used to draw attention and change the Farbeyâs suppression priority.â
>>291331539Nazar:âBut it seems his eyes were only on you.So he wasnât as smart a robot as you wrote about in your âGentle Artificial Intelligenceâ paper.âVivian:ââŚWell sorry for writing such a useless paper!â*What the heck⌠he actually did read it.*Nazar:âNilakantha!âNilakantha:âYes.What is required, Agent Nazar?âNazar:âWeâre going to need for Dr. Valles to have the skills to act as an FBI Auxiliary Investigator.âNilakantha:âThe petition for elementary skill reason-induction is being submitted.The petition has been approved.Permission is limited to two subjects befitting an FBI Auxiliary Investigator for Dr. Valles to receive elementary skill reason-induction in.Dr. Valles, do you give your consent to the brain imprint?â{This word çăčžźăż (rimekomi, reason-induction) gave me a hard time, it doesn't look like one since it's formed from native Japanese elements, but it's some sort of Shirow coinage.}
>>291331580Vivian:âBrain Imprint?âNazar:âThey fill in empty regions of the cyberbrain with knowledge and experience befitting an FBI Agent, so you can act as such much more smoothly.âVivian:âAct like an Agent?Are you thinking like youâre going to make me do something like just now again!?âNilakantha:âIt is a security for the limited time in which you will be cooperating.For the sake of reducing risk, we recommend that it be performed.âVivian:âŚâŚâŚâIf thatâs soâŚIf I have the imprint, if thereâs another incident like the one just nowIâll be able to deal with it much better, wonât I?âNazar:âHeh⌠I really thought you were about to go running with your tail between your legs.âVivian:âI mean, if weâre up against someone misusing some sort of virus-wielding AI, youâll have need of my abilities, wonât you?And⌠if you really thought I was going to refuse, you wouldnât have recommended I get the reason-induction, would you?âNazar:âI donât know, maybe youâd start to hate things real quick.â
>>291331603Vivian:âNilakantha. Please give me the elementary skill reason-induction brain imprint.âNazar:ââŚAre you really sure?âVivian:âThat AI is being used for evilâitâs unspeakable! Thereâs no way I can keep quiet or look past it!Therefore, I formally pledge that I will assist as an FBI Investigator to solve this case!â Nilakantha:âUnderstood.Thus, please place your hand on the Virtual Bible and swear.âVivian: ă´ăźăšăăăç§ăăĺŠăăŚăNilakantha:âAnd so, the Brain Imprint has begun.Please wait the while required.âVivian:âWaitâŚFOUR HOURS!?That canât be right!â
>>291331617Vivian:âWell that was quite a surprise.So sudden⌠from today forward Iâm going to be an FBI Agent!What a surprise~ What just happened, I donât know~Really, until yesterday I was a desk worker!âAI://Welcome home, Vivian.//Vivian:âBut you were actually a big help. Thanks to my kneeâs damper being broken I was able to avoid a big injury!âNene://Oh, youâre welcome.But Iâm really worried~ If something had happened to Viviâs bodyâŚ//Vivian:âMm⌠but having a full body prosthetic really is better than being a normal person.âNene://No, itâs the number one most dangerous thing!We arenât superheroes!Donât try to anything impossible, okay?//Vivian://âŚYes. Iâll be careful and be okay.//
>>291331632SPINAL CORD CONNECTEDPLUG ARRAY CONNECTEDCYBERBODY REGULAR CHECKUP BEGUNNene://Oh right! I have skill data on emergency medicine and self-defense arts to give you!//Vivian:âE~ itâd be bad if you did all that for me~âNene:âItâs fine, itâs fine! While you sleep, Iâll perform the Brain Imprint.âVivian:âUnderstoodâŚThank you as always.âNene:âItâs night already over there isnât it?Today take it easy and rest your heart.âVivian:âYouâre heading to work now over there, arenât you⌠do your best.âNene:âGood night Vivian⌠until tomorrow.âVivian:âHave a good day, Nene⌠until tomorrow.â
>>291331651Bike Dyke:âKusuâŚWhen you wake upâŚâ
>>291331663Bike Dyke:âYouâre going to be ve~ry~ busy,Vivi babe <3âFinis.
Kind of hilarious writing how Vivi's magical powers are just not addressed at all.The premise of an FBI Satan ordering you to swear So Help Me God on a Virtual Bible is amusing.Apparently Vivi's... Japanese girlfriend? AI girlfriend? is named Nene, which is the main girl in Pandora in the Crimson Shell. I'm not sure if the AI she was talking to at the beginning of chapter 1 is this Nene, or if this Nene is really an AI at all.Ten bucks Vivi is already one of Motoko's cybersexfriends.
Bump?
Screw it, I'm on a roll and working from home tomorrow, I'll pull an all-nighter and get chapter 3 done so I'm up to date.
>>291333162Nazar:âOi!! Agent Valles!Wake the hell up now! Oi!!Vivian Valles!!â
>>291331276Thanks opare you uploading these anywhere else or should i just keep an eye on /a/ for future chapters?
>>291333219Nazar:âShit!If you donât wake up youâre going to get drank up by a garage kit!Get⌠upâŚDamn it! Oghaggghh!!â>>291333229Nowhere else at the moment, is there somewhere you'd recommend?
>>291333274Vivian:âŚăăâ...nâNazar:ăă!!ăăă!!âOi!! Wake up!!âVivian:ăâŚăăăâŚâOw⌠owwwwâŚâNazar:大ä¸ĺ¤ŤăââYou okay!?âVivian:âŚăďźăďźăăďźăĄăăŁă¨ăłăŹâŚăŞăă§ăăăŞăłăăŤăŞăŁăŚăăŽăââ...n?E? Ee?Wait, what⌠what the heck is going on!?â
>>291333337Blonde:âGood morning, chief!âCutman:âAh, morning.â?://Chief! Yesterday there were two new incidents of automobile robberyâŚ//Cutman:âCheck if theyâre a match with the established pattern.â?://Chief Cutman⌠the Pennsylvania state police is asking for help with the list of persons involved in the puppet suicide bombing terrorismâŚ//Cutman:âI checked the contents, thereâs no issue.â?://Chief, Agent Nazar is waiting for you in the VR meeting room.//Cutman:âUnderstood. Iâm coming now. NilakanthaâŚâNilakantha://Log-in in progress.//Vivian:âA! Good morning, chief!âNazar:âApologies for calling you away from your morningâŚâCutman:âItâs no matter. Whatâs the news?âNazar:âAgent Valles has found that âNorth American Automotive Industry Cybercrime Countermeaure Expert Advisorâ Eddie Carson from the analysis log.Cutman:âWere you able to make contact?âVivian:âNot really⌠Two weeks ago, he resigned. Apparently he was going to enter an nursing care facility.Cutman:âNursing facility?â
>>291333458Vivian:âAmber Serenity House. In Laurin Hills, Maryland. Itâs supposed to be one of the highest-ranked nuring care facilities there is.â[This town does not seem to be a real place.]Cutman:âA retirement because of age, ehâŚWere you able to get any information from his replacement?âVivian:âIt seems there hasnât been a handover.The North American Automobile Industrial Promotion Council said it had no information regarding this caseâŚâNazar:âPft. Are they hiding some inconvenient circumstance?The automobile industry wonât be promoted if theyâre doing half-assed work, eh?âCutman:ââI understand. I was up late working last night too.You two, make contact with Eddie Carson as soon as possible.âVivian:âYes sir! Weâll do it straightaway...âNazar:âThereâs no need for worry.Weâre already on our way to the site.Weâve only got one minute to arrival.Ah, no need to praise me.âVivian:ââŚIt was my ideaâŚâCutman:âHm? What is it?âVivian:â?âNazar:ââŚâVivian:âJust now⌠it shook?â
>>291333541Vivian:âKya!âNazar:âWha!?âCutman:âNilakantha!Status on their car!?âNilakantha:âThe vehicle has experienced a major impact.At present, circumstances are such that it is incapable of running.âVivian:âEe!?âNazar:âWeâre going back!!Agent Valles!!ââWhat the what!!The roofâs fell in!âVivian:âA⌠Agent Nazar!Look!!âNazar:â...whaâŚâ
>>291333617Nazar:âWeâre being attacked by a construction vehicle!?Agent Valles, dive that thingâs control system!!Make that thing stop!!â
>>291333686WHOâS THEREâŚNazar:âOh⌠oi!Hang in there!Agent Valles!Wake the hell up now! Oi!!Vivian Valles!!â
>>291333789ćŁăăéăç §ăăăăŽč ăéăăŹăăăŤďźďźďźShine on the path of righteousness,so that they do not err (1)
>>291331350Are you sure this is "Dr virus" and not Dr Willis?
>>291333926Unholy fuck, how did I keep missing that?ăŚăŁăŞăš non ăŚăŁăŤăš...I'll sudoku now, thanks for noticing.WE'VE GOT DR. WILLIS HERE EVERYONE!
>>291333863Nazar:âOi!! Wake up!!ââYou okay!?âVivian:âOw⌠owwwwâŚWait, what⌠What the heck is going on!?âNazar:âWhat the fuck are you saying!! Itâs the berserk machine!Did you find out whoâs causing it!?âVivian:âE? I donât rememberâŚMy memoryâs fragmentedâŚâNazar:âWHAT!? What the hell, did that automatic attack type barrier fuck with you!?âVivian:âWhoah! Whoah! Whoah!âNazar:âOi oi oi oi oi!!âVivian:âAgent Nazar, your armâŚâNazar:âDonât worry, this oneâs cyborg.Youâre so heavy that you threw my joint out of whack!âVivian:âWell⌠well excuse me!!It must just be poorly maintainedâŚ!âNazar:âIs this really the time to argue about this!?Youâre more worried about your weight than your life right now!?â
>>291334032Construction Worker 1:âUwaaaaa!Itâs crushed!!âConstruction Worker 2:âThis way!!Run!!!âNazar:âThe standard arm for a Horus attack drone is a 380.No matter how much it shoots, itâll be no use!âCutman:âAgent Nazar! Whatâs your situation!?Nazar:âThatâs what Iâd like to know!!Canât you get a satellite view!?â
>>291334004eh nobody cares>>291331677Oh boy, there's P-2501 again. Being a gremlin like usual.
>>291334042Cutman:âYep. Youâre right in front of Amber Serenity House.State police have been notified of the berserk heavy machine.Itâs so big you can see it from satellite.I can confirm that itâs trying to demolish the facility.Nazar. Is that machine unmanned?âVivian:âUm⌠a! I remember, itâs unmanned.But there was a trace of whomeverâs operating it remotely.âCutman:ââAlright. You two, donât move from your position.âNazar:âTheyâre finally coming?Sheesh, theyâre slowâŚâVivian:âThe Support Squad!?â
>>291334042is .380 is the US' thing in this?>shoulda brought a fuddy five drone sonnny
>>291334070Ries:âDeploy.â
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>>291334162Vivian:ăâŚăăăŻďźâI⌠is that?âNazar:ăăâŚăăăăŞă¨ăšéçćčˇäşşăŽďźĺ§ĺŚšă ăâYeah⌠they are.The three sniping master sisters of the Ries squad.âRies:ć¨çćŁé˘ăŤăĄăŠć˛šĺ§ăˇăŞăłăăŻăăźăŠăźăăŤăćĺ°âTarget.Frontal camera.Hydraulic cylinder.Crawler belt.Fire.â
>>291334208(Left my transcription in on that one.)
what is she up to?
>>291334218Ries:âTarget.Control unit.One-point time difference fire.â
>>291334264Vivian:ââŚs-so cool...â
I just wanna see Motoko eat the fattest borgars
>>291334277Ries:âTarget silenced.Standing by in support position.âCartman:âThis is no time for you two to sit around marveling.Hurry up and investigate that machine.âVivian:âAh⌠y-yes sir.âCartman:âBid the police on the scene cooperate and lock down the surrounding area.âOpeko:âYessir.â//This is the FBI Artificial Intelligence Crime Countermeasures Team.An urgent cooperation order to the Maryland police: lock down the area of the designated coordinates at once.//Maryland Police:âAy-yay-yay.âCutman:âFollowing on the FBI all-purpose humanoid robot âFarbeyââŚthis time it was an 'Infrabot' massive heavy machineâŚâNazar://Chief Cutman.//Cutman:âWhat is it.âNazar:âRight now Agent Valles is looking into the machineâs access log.From the remaining recordsâŚâVivian:ââŚgot it!The source is from the facility grounds, within a 400-yard radius!! Itâs not going through any peripheral relay devices!â
>>291334567Wait so the old folks' home attacked itself?
>>291333337I love her nervous face.
>>291334567Cutman:â!!Ries! Iâm sending you the coordinates of the surround areaâs relay antennas.Deploy the search drone and find the culprit!âRies:âSearch the surround area.SS-10, do a spiral search of all relay antennas within a 600-yard radius.Horus, continue to monitor for moving bodies from the sky.Security team, search the facility interior in four-man group.Find the culprit and preserve human life.Chief Cutman.Any more orders?âCutman:ââŚNo, I havenât any.Continue as you are.Dead-On Ries⌠wew.â>>291334612Between the Solid State Society and the Human Algorithm and now this, they should just airstrike all old folks' homes preemptively.>>291334668We know Nico-chan.
>>291334788Cutman:ââŚheâs lukewarm.â[No clue what he means by that.]Vivian:âThere was a full record of the machineâs operation, and a lot of fragments of hacking tools the culprit usedâŚI sent them to the analysis team.âNazar:âWell done.Everythingâs been a disaster since this morningâŚWhy⌠whatâs wrong?âVivian:ââŚWhen my memory was fragmented, it was by a barrier.But just now I found operation code and connective records, but there was no barrier.What do I make of thatâŚWas I being led astray?Interference in the investigation?âNazar:âDo a virus check first.Thereâs no more use for shed shell of a machine.âVivian:âShed shell?Certainly that feels right.âNazar: âThey werenât targeting us.Were they merely a thrill seeker?âVivian:âE~? The same guy who destroyed a building with a heavy machine, commited attempted murder, and interfered with the investigation? Could someone go that far?â
>>291335309Nazar:âHuh⌠maybe with such a small camera, in court you could say âI didnât know police were there~â and thereâd be no punishment.âVivian:ââŚis it like thatâŚeven though we ended up nearly being killed.âNazar:âWell, itâll probably be fine.Hey, donât make that face.While youâre alive, be cheery!Youâre not only a doctor,youâre an FBI agent.In otherwords, youâre just a hunting dog.Focus on hunting.An unexpected trouble just got in.Anyway, letâs go meet Eddie Carson and have a little chat!â
>>291335435//Second floor, room 12 clear!////First floor, room B5 clear!////Second floor, western stair passageway clear!////Second floor, room 26 clear!!////First floor, music hall clear!//Ries:âLetâs keep going.Letâs head towards the shelter over there.â
>>291335478//First floor, all clear!////Second floor, room 10 clear!//Ries:âLoose the lock.The hatch is opening.Be careful.â
>>291335500Janice:âI am the person in charge of Amber Serenity House.My name is Janice Amber.âWorker 1:âAre you okay?âWorker 2:âDid it stop?âWorker 3:âItâs dangerous here. Go over thereâŚâWorker 4:âUgh⌠it hurtssâŚâJanice:âIt looks like you only sprained it a little. Thereâs no need to worry.âNazar:âExcuse me!Are you in charge around here?Iâm Agent Nazar, FBI.Behind me is Agent Valles.â
>>291335563Janice:âMy⌠itâs a pleasure.I am the person in charge of Amber Serenity House.My name is Janice Amber.âFinis.Merry Spookmonth to all, and to all a good night!
>>291335598repeating herself huh...Anyway two things1- this is the Cradle thing from Pandora so we probably got a bunch of old people on life support doing some shady shit2- Janice's earring I'm pretty sure is a kabbalistic thing, it's the path you're supposed to take through the tree of life to reunite with GodSo I'm guessing there's some old people meditating in those Cradle things doing some shit to the Net
Nice
>>291335693I think the idea is that there are at least two Janices in different locations, viz. Janice is a standard model robot.You're likely right about what the old men are doing. Old folks' homes are always of malicious intent.
>>291338172I bet they've got some kinda rig like the Yamato spaceships in Orion with a bunch of brains connected together to bend spacetime
>>291334788>Between the Solid State Society and the Human Algorithm and now this, they should just airstrike all old folks' homes preemptively.Bring back abandoning the elderly on mountains.
>>291331276Thanks OP!
If Vivi-chan works for Dr. Willis she and 2501 are basically sisters already. So she's Motoko's sister-in-law.
>>291341256now now, Vivian's a doctor she's just a coworker.She can still be a bridesmaid I guess, it's either that or Kurutan.
>>291331328Also, if she's working for Dr. Willis, and 2501 is the culprit, it seems more likely that she really is recognising the lab's own viruses here.
>>291331276Fuck yeah, thanks bro.
>>291331328>(is she stupid?)Seems that way.
I really really hope P2501 will do the ojou laugh with her long sleevesIf they at least do that, and don't fuck anything up, then I'll be happyBonus points if her cunning plan blows up in her face Seska-style
>>291343146Kind of confused with how this 2501 has a body, and yet 2501 claimed to have never had a body before.Is she just a liar? Is this 2501 really just a hijacked body like the Puppet Master who met with Malles?
>>291343328nah pretty sure the implication is just that there never was a human bodybesides there's been quite a few retcons by now already
Do you ship Vivian with Nazar or 2501?
>>291331296Hey man, no one does well on an empty stomach.
>>291331350Does Shirow still think an AI hacker is worse than a human one?
>>291331375HOT
>>291331428Fat bitch.
>>291346911The way it reads to me, the FBI hacker decided it was an AI he was against because it was so fast. So no.
>>291331470Cute smug. Typesetter's privilege taken.
>>291331539>Because Iâve got a full-body prosthetic.>Itâs better than a living body, I think.âI agree. Shove me in a silicon suit. Fuck meat.
>>291331539>>291347520>380 ACPAlso, good subtle storytelling to reveal that he's a homosexual.
>>291331617She is too good of a girl for a Shirow manga. She needs to be corrupted.
>>291331677Not yet a woman, but still cute and evil. Thanks for the work my man.
>>291333274Dude is holding a lot of weight.
>>291347549>>291334042Given that it's come up twice in three chapters already that the FBI is ill-equipped to deal with mechanical threats, I wonder if there's someone pulling the strings to keep it that way. It reminds me of that minor plot point in End of Evangelion with Nerv being issued only small arms.>291347376She looks Scandinavian.>>291347586What do you have in mind?>>291347633At what point does she become a woman?
>>291348293>At what point does she become a woman?When she sees Motoko's fat ass and becomes fixated.
>>291333337Her reflexive scared smile is very nice.
>>291348425Vivi's hard ass is insufficient for her... >>291331632
>>291333686This is pretty fun.
>>291333863>Shine on the path of righteousness,>so that they do not errThe original sounded like some kind of religious quote, but it doesn't seem to appear anywhere else.
>>291334032Fatty Fatty!!
>>291334208>The three sniping master sisters of the Ries squad.âSounds like something from a Metal Gear game.
>>291334567I'm glad that the Americans get to enjoy their Opekos too.
>>291335435cute surprised face
>>291335598Thanks for posting.
>>291348425>>291347633>>291348293At the end of Pandora (which takes place before this) we see 2501's ghost already has boobs.Plus the new anime says she was designed with a female voice from day 1
I hope my wife shows up
>>291331677How do you know she's a dyke?
>>291352098it's P-2501, as shown on Shirow's design sheet
>>291352098She spent 90% of Pandora watching girls finger each other going "whoaaaa I wish I could do that!" It's the time-tested trope of the perverted nerd who collects ecchi material under the guise of "research"
>>291352098Because she calls her Vivi-chan with a heart and a look like that. On a motorbike.
>>291351701She's a very dedicated girl.
live