The pitch bible just leakedhttps://litter.catbox.moe/kz71q6.pdf
>>143353382Just in time as the series dies.
>>143353382Should of just been a TV special.
>>143353382Glad they changed those googley eyes.
>>143353382The Style and Tone section actively makes it clear this show had zero vision of its own did it? Execs just wanted "popular shows that sold billions" and expected it would work just with that, right? Jesus.And I was curious to looking at this but knew it was going to be a let down, now it's almost completely a shitshow I don't even wanna touch.
>Season 3HAHAHAHAHAHA
>>143353382didn't it leak at the very beginning of the series hype???
>>143353929yeah so obviously just picked basic sci fi animation, also nothing like any of them as not a single laugh was gotten out of me. I feel it lived off horny anons for a long time I remember the daily threads, and simping whenever you said the show was average at best.
>>143353942Wow was that a long shot. Them planning to reveal that in a theoretical season three is some really bad planning.
>>143353942Thinking this show would last three seasons was incredibly ambitious
>>143353942I like how a major plot twist got spoiled in this leak but nobody even responded because literally nobody gives a shit about this show.
>>143353942>>143355963>HAHAHAHA they planned aheadUhhhh.... good? Better than making up shit as you go along because you killed/redeemed everyone interesting like TGAMM.>>143356259I thought it was pretty interesting. Maybe give people who aren't terminally online like yourself time to check out the thread? We aren't Cartoonshi's personal army, so we have no reason to mindlessly bash this show.
>>143355365No it isn'tMost shows write all the eggs in the season one basketFigures the one time they plan things out, the show gets cancelled
This was the canon ending anyway:https://exhentai.org/g/2730404/a5e357bfe5/
>>143353942Gonna be interesting to see when the season (series) finale drops if they keep in the AC plot twist or if they excise it since they know the show isn't getting renewed (or if it even was still planned given how different some of the other bibles are from the finished product)
>>143356589>>143357191They planned out one single sentence worth of plot. It's not that noteworthy.
>>143353929That's just how pitching goes.
>>143356589>>143357191"we won't find out the real answer until season 3" is code for "we haven't actually come up with anything yet, we'll think of something in five years"
>>143356589>Uhhhh.... good? Better than making up shit as you go along because you killed/redeemed everyone interesting like TGAMM.He means just like how Moon Girl planned for 4 seasons, Disney being Disney was actively asking for this to backfire on them because it's retarded to think even more than 1 season would be possible to expect out of this shit company.
>>143353942>AC is the bad guyReally going for the most boring possible option huh
>>143358228I mean, that's still not a bad strategy. Things can change over the course of a few years, they introduce new characters/plots/elements that effect the original idea, and so on. But its whole depended on the writer, and I'm not too confident in HOI's writers admittedly.It's like how GRRM gave D&D and outline for Game of Thrones, and they were on point for most of the parts already covered by the books, but when they tried to finish connecting the plot points themselves, the show ended up with one of the biggest collapses in television history.
>>143358357Yeah, I’ve been hearing that Kevin Yee’s episodes are mid.
>>143356589Still getting shitcanned in three weeks
>>143358462just like cartoonshi's account was
>>143358515Literally who
>>143358462Kicking a show like this when its down seems shittyIt wasnt the best but its not something i feel deserves the downfall it got either
>>143358651>Kicking a show like this when its down seems shittyThat's all people have been doing for two years with owl show and molly
>>143357958Yeah, my sister used to work for Scott Burnett Productions and was informed that whenever pitching to Fox everything absolutely had to be phrased as "It's Like X meets Y" or else the studio execs would get confused and freak out.
>>143353382This looks AI generated.
>>143358740It's text
>>143353382I genuinely want to know who at disney saw fucking gender bent rick and morty and was like "yep, this deserves a series"
>>143358760And the text looks AI generated.
>>143358515Lol fuck that sell out
>>143358799It doesn't have a single original idea and simply relies on what's popular or trendy. That's evident in all the pictures. I get saying something is like X meets Y can help convey your point, but this is way overkill. There's not an ounce of soul or any aspirations to try to make something good or unique. It's one of the worst series bibles I've ever seen... and it got a fucking show. At least it was only 1 season, but that slot could've gone to someone who aspired to make something they could be passionate about.
>>143358865>t's one of the worst series bibles I've ever seenyou are either underage or exaggerating badlyim not kanner's severe autistic like you so them making a reference to rick & morty doesnt bug me at all
>>143358835How?
>>143353382This is not the pitch bible but a writers' guide, the pitch had no original art and all the characters were white.
Scott's original design looks a lot better. Doesn't look like some random 40 year old Asian man acting like a teenager. Original Hailey I'm on the fence about, she looks cuter but a little too "CalArtsy"
>>143358891Show me some worse bibles then. I don't care that it references other work, thats common in bibles. It's that it does it constantly through the entire Bible, and is afraid to establish any legs of its own to stand on. There's also several instances of telling rather that readers coming to the conclusion themselves by reading the descriptions. It can't effectively communicate that these are "real characters" so it has to outright tell us that they are, and if thats the case, they absolutely aren't.
>>143353382>dtva is in such shambles that the only “new” content we have is old show bibles
>>143358894Everything feels generic and something an AI would write if you asked it to write a show bible. I know it's not because it's from 2021, but it feels that way.
>>143358962>>143358984I feel there is something you really hate about this show and its pitch bible that nobody else here is seeing.Hurry up and say Andrea's dad's name so I can figure out you're just Murrlogic.
>>143353942>>143356589>>143357782Tbf I don't think you're meant to reveal a lot of lore and plot twists in pitch bibles
>>143356589>Maybe give people who aren't terminally online like yourself time to check out the thread?Been six hours now, still not a whole lot of attention.
>>143359001Amphibia revealed a lot in their own pitch bible as well. The stuff that didn't get revealed is the stuff that was obviously changed as the show was in development (ie Marcy mainly)
>>143358997No cause if he was Murrlogic he would’ve brought up AC or Hailey’s Mom
>>143359001Molly all but gave away the final plot twist in its pitch bible, which was openly posted during the first season.
>>143359003Well, for starters, there is a whole other thread about the leaks, and this thread seems to be picking up steam now that the official one is reaching bump limit.
>>143359001It did give away the main villain, which is ostensibly meant to be a twist
>>143358997>You just hate it because alterative motives or something personal!No anon, I'm pointing out why its shit because it's shit. Nothing more, nothing less. Sorry if you like this dreck but that's my thought on it.
>>143359001A better idea would be to make people very curious and come up with their own theories of what it would amount to. Which could of course be explained in the show if picked up.
>>143359057>alternative motivesYou mean ulterior motives I take it, retard?
>>143359030>>143359053o lol nvm then
>>143359096starting to realize every critic of this show is stupid as shitHailey was literally too intelligent to win
>>143359096>You made a typo! l gotcha.If that's the best you've got then I suspect you're triggered over my opinion. Perhaps you are connected to the show and I hurt your feelings?
>>143359136there are several people here being critical of this show, its just their criticism is a lot less retarded than "lol its shit" and "lol did things pitch bibles do all the time!"sorry it took a /co/ thread for you to realize you aren't as smart as you've been told all your life.
>>143359170But I explained why the Bible was shit. What you haven't done is explain why you thought it was good or give me a Bible that's worse than this. >lol did things pitch bibles do all the time!What the fuck are you even talking about?
>>143353942So Hailey doesn’t even need the list and could just simply beat AC’s head in with a brick
I like all these shows and I liked Hailey's On It so I'd say they did a decent job
>>143358960https://twitter.com/owlphibia/status/1783698777393582358Here is more animation from the test pilot
>>143359347they shouldve keep Hailey's green eyes
>>143353942>pitch bible doesn't even use a concept drawing of the main villain, just a fucking picture of young sheldoni know what pitch bibles are. i know they take images to set a tone of style and personality, but the other characters at least had art of said character AND pictures of people/pre-existing dynamics as examples
>>143353667an original disney channel animated movie would be pretty cool. and i mean completely original, not a movie for an already existing tv show. i don’t think that’s ever been done before but i also imagine it’d be too expensive for them to care.
>>143359413i think the creators* came from a live-action sitcom background. they probably can’t draw, and i guess, didn’t know or didn’t want to pay anyone who could.i hesitate calling them creators because this bible, to me, kinda confirms that was just a bunch of executive ideas mushed into an idea they thought would generate an audience. they failed.
>>143359509Even MS Paint pitch bibles can get picked up to series. If they had a fun vision they were actually passionate about, they had no excuse not to try a scribble.
>>143358960>>143359363>>143359347I really like the style in the pilot. It's so similar to the actual show's style but doesn't trigger the uncanny valley feeling I get from the actual show. The pilot made me watch to watch the show. The first episode on YouTube reminded me why I don't watch the show.
>>143360297it looks worsethey have potato heads
>>143353382I'm on it!
I miss KristineThis week's episode is her return right?
>>143353382Can someone upload the pitch bible?
>>143361592Hailey's On it! (I Will NOT Kiss Scott Federman) Pitch: https://litter.catbox.moe/2nu30m.pdfHailey's On it! (I Will NOT Kiss Scott Federman) Pitch 2: https://litter.catbox.moe/kz71q6.pdfHailey's On it! Pilot: https://litter.catbox.moe/1lzp93.mp4
>>143361592>>143361592Ah shit they all 404'd...
>>143361612Re-upload them.
>>143361569The fat instagram aw ? She is the worst character of this fucking show and one of them is a farting flamingo.
>>143357191It is when most shows from Disney aren't guaranteed a third season.
