I don't know if this goes here but idk, roast me gentle, i am new in this
>>453164If you hadn't told me what it was supposed to say, I would have no clue what it was saying. Take this idea completely back to the drawing board. I think utilizing Roman columns is cool but not how it was used here. Good luck.
>>453164The lettering is kind of cool, quirky and odd but still mostly legible...but the placement of "Roma" works totally against it making sense and is just too much.The capital O works too even though it's a different typeface but the U isn't really helping things .... I would suggest laying it all out straight in a single line and then tweaking individual elements you think *really* need to be weirder
>>453168thnk for the tips ;)
>>453164ass
>>453164This sucks but you clearly have the vision and tools to make something beautiful. Keep at it
