compositional exercise.pls rate.
Values/10
>>7220037Depends on how you will color it could be 10/10 could be ass.
>>7220037left handed?
>>7220037way too clutter, there is nothing guiding my gaze, but it look like triangle on top of a rectangle. I would leave a single flower and use the stems and ferns to guide the eye towards said flower.
0 already for asking a rate on something without values, colors, or weighted lines
>>7220037reminds me of this guy I used to know, forgot his name, crims? crips? crispy? chrysanthemum?
>>7220037The lines are way to same-y, I don't mean the thickness, but the way you drew then they all are wobbly; long ; disconnected on the same exact way. Also too many tangents. It could look pretty with colors and values, but don't always rely on just that.
>>7220037Try to use higher levels of detail as dark space and lower levels of detail as white space. The eye is led towards whatever creates contrast
>>7220037what are some composition exercises? how can I grind composition like you'd grind perspective or anatomy?
>>7222271read grid systems for graphic design, breaking the grid and read something about the rules of ornamentation.also reverse engineering beauty, design for hackers, has chapters on composition.
>>7222271Go to https://film-grab.com/Pick out scenes you like.Create thumbnail sketches.Refer to this playlist if confused about how to thumbnail.https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLO3lb45Pht_2sUdYuvA_DZ4hV69n8ru7Z This is a good video on composition basicshttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=te9Efr1VT9U
>>7220039>>7220044>>7220048>>7220075>>7221819>>7222142>>7222146>>7222271The people on /ic/ filter out every 6 months, don't they? This guy has been posting the same image and thread multiple times over the past decade, as a meme
