Post your work and I criticize it I'm a /beg/ who's artistic understanding is not all too high so my word should be taken with a grain of salt This is the fourth time I make this thread and I warmed up to the idea of posting my own work I'm not a crab and I will do my best to tell you what up think of your art
Thoughts? Ill be moving onto the lineart soon.Any critique is appreciated
>>7238856Thats pretty good so far anon The way sketched it up speaks of a lot of confidence in your skill. It looks very lively I don't know what that body part is called but the big muscle under the knee is quite big On the dame note it makes the legs feel shorter, maybe you should thin it out but I'm also fine with it if you leave it like that Pretty good
Posted in the other beg/int thread got no reply.Critique please.
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>>7238868Good facial study Over all you are very accurate and I like that you also try to do the lighting It's a little hard for me to tell since i can barely see where her hairline starts in the ref but I think your head is a little smaller than it actually is. But just a tiny bitYou accuracy is unfortunately a bit lacking with the ears. You didn't draw much of the details didn't smooth out the edges Her jawline In the ref is wider and rounder. You have some decent accuracy with the lips but small jaw make them look very big. Also in yours she is almost smirking I think you also drew the nose smaller But hey that's pretty good workAs for why anon didn't said anything about it in the other thread, I guess it's just because it's a study you posted with nothing inherently wrong Not many people talk about these much in general
>>7238916Nice ms.paint sketch A bit small I see you used the bucket tool to color. There is a bit of background under her arm that should be white Her boobs don't feel quite the same size. I think that they go outwards to the side that much makes them feel a tad off But yeah pretty decent. you can tell that someone has skill even if it's just a simple doodle
lemme here your wisdom oh /beg/ of insight
Reference and final sketch thoughts?
>>7240480not op but this is cute as hell. I love how soft it all looks.
>>7238916Good understanding of shapes. The expression is fantastic.
>>7240480Very cute character very nice cartoony style as wellYou seem to know what you're doing since it's so stylized with nice details here and there The only thing I feel like needs a bit of work is the skateboardIt looks a bit rushed compared to the rest of the pic Good job >>7240484It's a decent attempt anon Your accuracy is a bit lacking however with the objects but that's a hard thing to do so I understand Maybe you can try measuring out the things you try to draw For example you draw a part like the nose first and then use the nose as a basic measure on how big stuff is. Like how many noses fit into the glasses. How large is his mouth compared to nose Stuff like that.
Here's some doodles I did a few days ago. We are both /beg/ so maybe this will be easy.
>>7241157Thanks :)>>7241562Thank you /beg/ of wisdom - you're right I rushed the board I got lazy
>>7241566Very nice. Something I immediately notice is how pronounced the calves are You draw them so big they make the feet look smallThe best example is in the bottom right where even if it's a small doodle you like to show them off In general your girls are really nice. They strike very good poses. Even the girl in the middle looking to the side looks very good and believable Very alive is probably what I mean. You seem to be afraid of drawing hands haha. Or at least you can't be bothered unless you go serious on a drawing with more commitment You're pretty good for a beg anon
>>7238916Blog?
I've been trying to stop drawing characters in a void
>>7241906It's hard to tell what they're doing at first glance. Flying, walking on water I guess? You need to make the water more obvious, or draw them at a more convenient angle. The land seems too sloping and out of perspective which doesn't help.
weekend doodles
>>7238819Fuck you and your nigger thread. Anons must be really retarded if they want to be judged by a fuckingn beglet. You are all double digits faggots desu.
>>7242252/beg/lets are the closest to the average consoomer, anon. What a /beg/let see is what non-artist see, being liked by non-artist is way better than other artist or faggots like you.
>>7242263Cringiest cope of all times. Kys no-drawing trannylet.
>>7241854I don't have one
>>7242265if you were to stop sperging out for a second and think a bit you know artist make their money mainly from non-artist, other artist don't commission each other unless they are friends or really like their art. You would know this if you gotten commissions, shitter. You may continue to seethe now.
These threads sure attract some people at time. Just wished he posted his work >>7241906I honestly wouldn't like to be around giant mantises It's a very nice image. Pretty decent on perspective but I shouldn't be commenting on that desuThe girl riding the blue mantis, I think her foot twists in a sort of unnatural way. Her knees go outwards but her foot points inwards. Looks like it hurtsWhat are these swirls behind her hand btw? I don't understand what that's supposed to be The guy riding the mantis has only 4 fingers on hand I feel it's generally a good image but for my tastes it's not enough color Or at least at parts the color looks to washed out and flat contrasting with the parts that are more colorful The green mantis and girl and the blue mantis and look way more colorful than the guy and his mantis Also that most of the background is white adds to that. But an argument can be made for the background being as lacking in color not take focus away from things Over all very good
Word limit reached >>7241925Something i sort of understand for once, gatos and sexosOver all the doodles are nice but you can tell that you struggle with having the cat features being accurate For example the cat on the left it's snout goes way to much down resulting in the mouth looking derpy. You also didn't seem to know how to draw the fur on the side of the head Cat on the bottom left has also a very thin snout and one of the eyes is angled to much on the side as if it were a rabbit It looks to me that you get it right once you have reference with a easier angle. Middle right cat looks therefore the best but the angling of the eyes needs some refinement Middle left cat has not so good anatomy The chest seems to go down all the until the feet suddenly appear. The cat has no shoulders and her left leg is missing it's knee, while the right leg has the knee but in a position that is way too far infront of the body The other animal doodles aren't bad, I just think the elephant mouth looks weirdThe scantly clad anime girls look miles more competent Very nice cuviture. Good anatomy I would say. Just pure coomer candy Good work
what about me?
>>7242738What about you? You're pretty good, but you aren't here for this non answer The poses the people strike are very good The more alive something feels the better You have good way of drawing complex faces as you do with simple. You certainly developed two styles that you can switch around freely You are drawing comics aren't you? I have not much to say because I fear I'm just not there yet to give more critic than you'd like and deserved Very good job
>>7242733thanks for the feedback broI'm trying to get better at fur
Your critiques seems actually fun to read at. I did this doodle quickly before going to sleep only to engage in this thread, sincerely. I believe you should be able to critique this one well.
>>7238819attention whore thread made by a nodraw who wants to find excuses to procrastinate instead of drawing... MANY SUCH CASES!
>>7243043Is this a monkey girl? Also what is she pointing at?You did the meme pose in a quick doodle At first glance it looks like you aren't that much skilled but it honestly takes a lot of effort to get the perspective on the arm to look like this I think though that the hand is a little small, especially the thumb Furthermore I think the bangs could look a little, what would you call it, dynamic? Just not flat is what I'm trying to say The background is, well it's a background. You can tell it's supposed to be a hill Simplistic but the doodle was made quickly Good job
>>7242770I don't draw comics, but thank you, its a tremendous compliment.
>>7243043That's right. I'm really hyper /beg/. So I'm still very inconsistent with everything I do. I'm trying to fill this entire sketchbook using just ballpoints for now to see if I improve my lines confidence but it seems like I just got to draw faster instead.I doodled the meme pose in particular because I wanted to draw the face in a closer perspective than my earlier drawings on this sketchbook. But lookig now later, I noticed also that I maintained the eyes size the same than before lol. Also, drawing hands on small scale because I truly suck on this. >Furthermore I think the bangs could look a little, what would you call it, dynamic? Yeah. I haven't though well on this one at night and realized it just as I finished.>I think though that the hand is a little small, especially the thumb Interesting. I was trying to make it even smaller at start. I suppose I got something wrong with the perspective in this so.>Is this a monkey girl?No, but I have a quick ugly monkey doodling from yesterday also. Did this during job morning meeting. I think I should stop doodling stuff in 10 minutes and come back trying to draw for longer...
>>7243308Something that i did when I started out drawing was that I also like you used a ballpoint, but to be honest I was just too lazy to buy a pencil back then I did take some simple fanart of stuff and just tried my best to get it as accurate as possible. I also didn't do a bunch of scratchy lines but instead tried to contain it all in one lineYou can get alot of good lines in with different thickness if you retrace the lines a few times Foe example of you would try to draw and eye you can go over the iris boarder a few times to make it appear darker, the pupil you fill out completely and for the actual iris you try to press as lightly as possible on the paper and go over it a few times until it has your desired amount of color
