idk, the anatomy feels kinda off but i cant put my finger into it
Very wide shoulders Even a beg like me can tell. But I like the artstyle. It is cute.
>>7355031The anatomy is alright considering this is a highly stylized drawing. The only thing that looks notably wrong to me is how stiff the pose is.
>>7355031Real blocky and stylized. Her pose is very unambitious. Hard to gauge your level of anatomical knowledge. Most of her anatomical features are hidden by clocthing with the exception of one hand. I think what you may be asking is "does my drawing appear proportioned like a human female" which is an odd thing to ask because it is clearly meant to look cartoonish.
>>7355031Kind of reminds me of Antonblast for some reason.Blog? That's a really neat style.
>>7355031a 3/4 view should have more foreshortening on the left side, unless that's the intentional effect you are going for.right now it lacks all depth and the body appears flat. you could also try drawing your lines to a VP but that may clash with your intent for the piece idk.
>>7355031anatomy is fine the pose is just stiff
>>7355031next zoomer i see drawing this stupid fucking spike eyelash shit dies. im not going to kill them, theyre just going to die. thats how this works. huh op you unna stannin what im saying, you dumb bitch?stiff as fuck btw. back to your book
>>7355031I'd put my finger into her
>>7355031you will never and should never aim to be shen. I will admit he is kind of getting it as of late, but (you) can do better.
>>7355221Let him do his style studies, crab
>>7355031Do gesture drawings
>>7355031You have to step out of your comfort zone if you want to grow. Your style focuses on the silhouette so make the it more interesting. Why Draw someone standing doing absolutely nothing? It's the most boring safe thing you can do. What is her personality? Standing at attention? Keep going anon you'll get there.
>>7355031Anatomy's fine, stylized as it is, it's just an optical illusion where the braid covered the shoulder joint just so, that it looks kinda wonky.Also she reminds me of Robin from Wolfwalkers in a passing way.
i colored it
>>7355119Thanks, i dont have a Blog but i do have twitter and artstation id you are interested.
>>7355143Thanks, it was just an anatomy practice, the pose looks stiff on purpouse. I previuslt did this draw that is less stiff
>>7355221whot he hell is shen
>>7355286Thanks for your words, i sometimes try to go outside my comfort zone but i admit i should do it way more often.
>>7356266>>7355031looks good if not a bit stiff
>>7355031Move the arm on our left forward and the arm on our right back.
>>7356268"Blog" is just a way to ask for your socials, anon lol. Now hand over that twitter, I want to give you a follow.
>>7356296sure thanks :Dhttps://x.com/AK_M3M0
>>7355031Tried something different with Power from chainsawman
>>7356353It looks like you're afraid of drawing anything more than characters stiffly positioned in voids. Try messing with perspective more, drawing detailed backgrounds, and drawing characters doing interesting things.What kind of art do you like? Do you have any artists that you look up to? If so, tell us so we can give you tips about how to reach their level.
>>7356270bike cuck
>>7356429Ohhhh i get it now. Besides that meme ive never saw that guy again
>>7356398Yeah you are certainly right. I noticed it. One of the artist i aspire to is Ennuikalart,and, well, Hirohiko Araki by an extension.
>>7356833Forgot to mentions this are one of the few artworks of mine that i could find that arent just completly stiff standing
>>7356833tried to do something more dinamic
>the pose is a bit stiffso what is anon supposed to do? Just not draw that pose ever? Where is the list of forbidden poses you can't draw? what if anon wanted tehm to stand exactly like that? The failure was in his initial thought? His primal desire to draw someone standing at attention? >>7356398WHAT INTERESTING THINGSHOW AM I SUPPOSED TO THINK OF DRAWING DYNAMIC POSES IF I CAN'T VISUALIZE?I STAND LIKE THIS IN REAL FUCKING LIFE!!! I AM STIFF IN REAL LIFE! IM FUCKING SELF AWARE IN THIRD PERSON AND UNCOMFORTABLE AS FUCK ALL THE TIME
>>7357342an actual NPC lol
>>7357344so you think its okay to laugh at autistic people?
>>7357346you're not autistic lol
>>7357342kek. you're that permabeg greysketch schizo that keeps posting straight shit no matter how many redlines and guides are thrown at. even worse than the most cancerous crab by virtue of wasting good-natured people's effort. take the L and suicide now.
>>7356353>>7357270i struggle with stiff / similar poses and draw in void backgrounds. the lack of background is because I don't care for it, like I actually want it to be pretty girl in void, but it seems I don't have a natural tendency in me to do poses. I spent effort trying to figure it out on various occasions and still don't know why i so often just... don't do them?Originally, I didn't know how to, (like not knowing certain angles), but the thing is I physically know how to draw most angles now, and drawn good posey poses before, and yet I shrimply just do not do it as default for some reason.My best guess is that deep down i don't fundamentally care to do it, even if I wish I would and think the results would be better. I definitely find the idea of going out of my way to consciously try and pose annoying, and it isn't essential to the kind of thing I like to draw. when I draw lewds for example, I am much much more posey.
not the author btw lel...
>>7355031>permabeg cartoony style>anatomyExcuse me, what? Lmfao
>>7357420kys
>>7355031You still draw better then me
>>7356353still trying. And yeah im doing the /dad/ thingie
>>7357415damn i feel you lol. i identified with almost everything you said.
i feel like you're doing something slightly wrong thats messing you up, and if you fixed it everything would fit a lot better. 1: can you show me how you do your construction and guidelines? (especially the default kind you do for stiff drawings.) Your problem probably isn't what I think it is, but just in case. 2: There is a paper-like flatness to your heads and limbs in a lot of your drawings. kind of reminds me of dont starve. >>7358289 doesn't have this problem, so you're capable of 3D.One solution is find a good 3D shape for the head. (you can use sketchfab for 3D models as a ref if you want btw.) 2nd solution is practice finer angles of head. Like do 45 view, then the angle between 45 and front view, and inbetween that between, etc. to however much gradient you want. its nothing crazy, but the study does help a little if you are stuck to very specific angles.maybe you are trying to be too geometric? like... too shapey? obviously to an extent its your style, so idk.
>>7358359it reminds me of this eye i used to draw. I thought of constructing an eye out of arcs like this, because i had trouble making the lashes thick, so i figured this method would be a good solution, cuz its very quick and easy to do, and its kind of unique. 3 arcs very quick, don't even need to lift the pen off the page to do it.it seemed like a rly good and clever method, but i eventually noticed that for some reason whenever I used these eyes, i just usually didn't like the result. I never overtly thought it looked bad or anything, i only noticed because I pay very close attention to my success rate, and realized it none of the drawings I used it in were ones i ended up liking, so i stopped using it. it was a subtle thing to notice.
kind of fun to try it again
>>7355031Well for starters, she's clearly missing her legs from the knees down
>>73583551:Mi construction line are this, tho i normally make it a little more detailed, this example in particular is kind of old since i normally delete my sketch lines when i finish a drawing.2: Yeah i noticed it too. One of my inspirations is the artist Funamusea and the style of pantyandstocking anarchy, so its probably also because of that that it feels so flat. I also tought of making a 3d models of the head but i always get lazy and never did it xDD I should do it
>>7358359Yeah som people told that beforee too. That part of the reason i did a couple of draws trying to be more curvey but i didnt get far
>>7356271Replaces those roses Unless it's intentionally jarring. It which case good job all around
the style is good i guess but i personally dont like it. My advice: forget about this style for a week. Draw figures and gestures for a while, something that is out of your comfort zone. Go back to this after that and something will change.
>>7358674oh this one is good, if it was all like this you'd have no problem. Also again, I feel ya, im the same way. im utterly incapible of doing something I don't care about. The trick is to find a way that is compatible with what you want, so you're not compromising. doing what you love is the only way that works, trying to force yourself always just fails in practice, so need to catch yourself so you don't waste your resources on stuff you don't love, it will just fail and be a waste. I accept that I am just a picky artist like that, anyways.for example, i used to not like drawing guys, only cute girls, until i tried drawing them cute but still guyish. Turns out its actually quite fun, and I love drawing guys now and do it for fun. I never do backgrounds, but I love spooky things, so i want to learn spooky trees and stuff. see how I think? its not about loving what you hate, but finding something you love, so you can do new things through that.I was a picky eater growing up, i tried to overcome it and forced myself to eat foods i hated the taste and texture of. Forcing made me able to accept strange textures and can easily endure trying new foods like a normal person now. However, when I stopped forcing myself, the only foods i kept eating were just the ones I found tasted nice. in all my forcing, not once have i ever come to like a food unless I already found it tasted good, repeated eating never made any bad taste turn into good taste. really, I just learned how to do adjust the bad foods into a way that I would naturally like it - like putting carrots in strong soup stock for good flavor, y'know, to make it the way I like it. that and well, there were a lot of things that actually tasted good i just never tried, or could easily get over. Like mustard just tastes like sour... its such a non-issue, and sour can improve things, yet kid me avoided it, haha. Fruits tasted good but i couldn't eat because of texture, so getting over texture was all I needed.
>>7359059hmmm yeah i get you. I should try as you say, i ahv e this page of sinamic poses random and stuff, i should try it. thanks for all your words
>>7358674I did this now
>>7359192Here is also the body structure i did for this one
>>7359192>>7359193Looks like you forgot to draw her foot :BBut other than that, neat synthesis of anatomy and stylization.
>>7359192>>7359193getting kinoIf you're feeling unsure about making the figure dynamic (you probably will, it takes lots of experience to get most intended poses well), start with a single action line defining the figure at full length, and build on top of it
>>7355031Honestly I can barely tell who this is supposed to be without color.
>>7359278xDDD actually i didnt but i realized it didnt make sensa considering the pose
>>7359192Still trying stuff
>>7355031Looks like you watch too much hazbin. Get your own style. Its fine to have a few things you take from a style but everything?
>>7360087That doesn't look like hasbin at all you stupid retard>>7359993What marker brush are you using for the lines? Tell me pretty please?
>>7359568It actually makes sense, your lower leg + foot is longer than upper legIf you fold it that way, your feet would show, like in the sketch
>only generic /beg/tier charactersngmi
>>7360087My style is influenced by funamusea works dud
>>7360127whatever this thing is called
>>7359993funamusea bitch, ive done lot of poses ive never di before, i feel like im gettin better desu. I hope so at least
>>7361653another one for today. I didnt went all that original on the pose, it was more to just fun around
OP, would you draw Dynamite Annie from Antonblast just for kicks? Im curious to see how it'd look on your style cause I feel it would suit her like a charm.
>>7362062Sure! I can do that tomorrow :D
>>7362062Tried to do a good pose but im not wuite happy with it
>>7356266Your artstyle makes me happy
>>7363488thank you so much :DDDDD
>>7363473"mom mom mom mommy mom mom mom mom mom"
>>7360087Reminds me of Nomura's jagged style during his Shibuya phase with TWEWY
>>7364498did this for another thread lol
>>7359192Based as fuck, keep going anon.
>>7365659:DDDDD
>>7365516rad old dude (not my oc)
>>7366653did this
>>7368824it's good, but maybe i wouldn't make the arms exactly a straight line since the arms looks more stylized than the body nowNot that important i guess
>>7368824simple
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>>7372384Dude its that fucking monsterface?
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