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Would like to know if I've done it all wrong and needed to redo it.
1. Superimposed line(1/2)
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Superimposed lines(2/2)
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2.Ghost lines
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Oops, wrong Pic, that's the ghost grid.
This is the ghost line
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3. Ghost grids (1/2)
>>7439434
Ghost grids(2/2)
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It's all wrong, redo it.
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That's all. Please help me verify my drawing homework.
Did I do a good job? Please offer me criticism and guides to improve my skills!
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>>7439431
>>7439438
I'm not sure what you were instructed to do, but I would say to make each line in one clear stroke instead of going over it umpteen times. If it's a long line and you can't do it in one stroke, pick up and then resume where you left off, so it still looks like one stroke. Go slowly.
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At first made me think that sai permabeg decided to try traditional
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>>7439450
HAHAHAHAHA savage.
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I remember when I would think these kinds of posts were shitposts
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>>7439431
Very funny
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>>7439431
Looks alright, carry on. Feathering was a bit strong in places in >>7439433, was that your 1st page, or the 2nd one? If 1st, then there's been progress fron there to the pic in the OP; if that was your 2nd page, it looks like you lost focus due to the tiring monotony of this assignment. Repeat these once in a while or as a warmup if it helps you control your pen better. Literally just carry on with the next lecture and assignment. Is it a Dynamic Sketching course by chance?
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>>7439441
Although I agree with you, OP was definitely tasked to go over these lines repeatedly. It's the first task in Dynamic Sketching video courses, though I can merely guess it's the course OP is taking. The superimposed lines are supposed to look much cleaner and neater and without feathering, but bruteforcing it before proceeding will definitely make a person burn out.
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>>7439858
2nd, my arm just started g
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>>7440109
etting tired.
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0/10
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>>7440399
1/10



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