Shit on Me. Give tips and advice. Reddit won't accept me. Just a sketch.
>>7439522Lurk more retard.
>>7439522that penis looks awful
if only you had grinded 5000 floating loomis heads...
>>7439522no
>>7439522rotate your shit nigger
I swear to God if this uploads the wrong way again. I don't know how to change the aspect ratio on this phone. I added a string for his cock just because
>>7439522this doesnt deserve its own thread
>>7439522Your draws are a shit
>>7439522>>7440002It's hideous and it's even worse when properly rotated
>>7440002I like the shading, and the linework is pretty clean. The anatomy is obviously a bit wonky, the right leg and the pelvis specifically. Can't quite get a read on the dude's pose either. Still, charming and has personality.
Now, as a true test of skill, who here is brave enough to DTIYS?
>>7439522nouse reference and come back in the /beg/ general
I rotated the image for you, you're welcome.Anyway, I feel like this pose is inherently doomed, sorry. The way she is balancing on his leg and shoulder looks like she will fall at any moment. If you're just beginning, I suggest copying some good poses others have made first, instead of trying to make up your own, since you need a much higher skill level to do that. I noticed, that you did not draw the man's body continuing in between her thighs? I assume this is because you wanted to avoid the space looking too cramped. Again, that is a problem of the pose you have designed. If you really want to make your own poses now, try quickly sketching them out first to see any obvious problems. Try several thumbnails and pick out the most appealing idea.You drew the hair the same way lots of beginners do - drawing every single strand. That's not a good way to draw hair, because it looks really busy and unappealing. It's better to suggest the volume with shapes, instead of trying to put in as much detail as possible. Search up "how to draw hair" on YouTube, and you will find lots of tutorials telling you the same thing. First big shapes, then a bit of detail for style.Find some method to structure the head, you clearly need some structure there. I suggest the loomis method, ubt there are many other methods if you look for them. They feel a bit awkward to use at first, but as you get used to it, it really helps. Supplement that with some studies - look at skulls, draw pictures of real heads, thing like that. Just as a tip, I reccommend giing your characters more space in the back of the head, the man's head especially looks like he doesn't have space for his brain. Again, you can just search "how to draw heads" and pick out what works best for you.Erotic art is pretty unforgiving for bad anatomy, so I commend you for your bravery. Good luck!
>>7440975I tried learning rawing anatomy from mikeymegadraws on YouTube and it's really cartoonish style. I'm gonna try what you said tonight and see if it turns out any better.
>>7440724Thank you I needed that. I'm pretty ashamed honestly i just wanted feedback so bad for my effort
>>7440975Yeah I tried way too hard of a pose for my first one but i just wanted to try drawing two people fucking so bad and it's really difficult to make it not look awkward for me. Can anyone suggest some easier poses for two people doing sex?
>>7439522Almost everything is fine you just need to work on anatomy.
>>7441214You are lucky. There are many reference videos online of people having sex. Just look at some of those and copy down what looks appealing.
>>7441267Forgot about the billions of pornographic content available, that's just too icky for me. 2d only lol. I'll do some research.
>>7440975I tried again using some of the tips just real quick, still no lessons or references used but just more practice. I plan on watching some videos and using references tomorrow when I'm less tired. This one looks much less awkward in my opinion though. I'm on my cellphone so I don't know how to rotate the image. It's oriented normally on my side of things.
Fixd the upside down penis
Someone is going to find this and wonder about you
>>7441434I was thinking the exact same thing but I mean what's the worst that can happen. Maybe they'll appreciate my creativity
>>7441469Idk erotic art is one thing but it just feels different when it's (no offense) middle school drawings of analingus or bdsm. We all gotta practice at some point tho ig.
>>7441481Hopefully ill improve more in the following year but yeah l can definitely see how cringe inducing it is right now.
>>7441481I don't care about impressing anyone so of someone sees they'll know I like to draw erotic porn sometimes. Whatever. The fact that it isn't high quality is the most embarrassing part.
