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Finally found a brush that makes digital fun
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>>7854173Goddamn I suck at anatomy
>>7854219Beg gtfo
>>7854281These are just old drawings
>>7854173Here’s something newer
>>7854266Touched it up a little
The lighting is bothering me..
>>7854397Why you drawing school girls anon?
reeposting in hopes of getting some of that good good critique
>>7854426I really like this and don’t have much to say critique wise especially since it so stylized and I only know so mic about color theory. However the nose…well it doesn’t look like a nose. I think you should find a way to balance stylization and anatomy better in that sense, the same way you did with the hands, which look good
>>7854426And also try not the merge the hands together like you did on the left most one (in the pic) always draw the individual fingers
>>7854291Any critiques of this shit? Does it still look beg?
>>7854455Yeah it's beg I can understand why you don’t see that, because it takes time for your eyes to adjust and recognize the real skill gap and the actual issuesDo more gesture drawings
>>7854464>>7854455You're both begt. a fellow beg
>>7854464How do I build the skills to detect begness ?
>>7854475Keep drawing, draw from pictures and draw from other drawings
>>7854477You got a point. When I look at previous drawings from years ago that I thought were pretty nice they disgust me. Shame you can't detect begness immediately . It would help out if you point out the flaws too
>>7854426Ignore the other guy, never draw individual fingers
>>7854481>never draw individual fingers???
Been autistically drawing soldier dudes for my worldbuilding project the past couple of days.
>>7854399>girl
>>7854485the armour design reminds me of something but I can't remember what exactly and it's bothering me immensely
>>7854601Eldar I imagine. At least that's what it reminds me of
>>7854606Eldar have admittedly been a partial influence on the look of these dudes though I have tried to make them distinct enough. Other influences are from Warframe, Guyver, Baoh, Evangellion and what have you.
>>7854601bonemold armour
>>7854441Love her>>7854485BasedDo you have any examples of what a gang, militia or 'private contractor' groups look like in your setting?
>>7854885I haven't done images in the style of these faction infographic stuff like this>>7854485 for gangs and non major factions of the setting yet, but when I am done with the major factions I intend to depict gangs, commoner militias and what not as well in a similar format. The closest thing to a sort of private contractor type of thing I have drawn are these characters I drew few years ago though these were mostly me trying to design a bunch of characters I could potentially use for telling stories in the setting. The designs of these characters are also up for a bit of a refresh as well as they look a bit off and kind of bad to me these days. I also need to expand the roster to make the merc company concept work better as in this one there are to few combatants.
been using a folder for a sketch book, so far i haven't noticed any difference but ain't doing too bad
>>7854861that was it
>>7854885thanks
>>7854485New dude to the roster
>>7854596Consider me invested.Please post more drawings of the character
>>7854213Needs something else. Not sure exactly what.
>>7854397The background is lit more harshly than her.she needs more contrast. Here's a quick edit.
>>7855770I guess it works. It's still boring
>>7854288Thats not new. You posted that a couple weeks ago.
>>7855788The groid has no sense of time
>>7855788It’s newer than the other drawing that I posted. If you actually read the thread you would know that. I haven’t posted >>7855699either
>>7855801Says the one keeping up with how much a stranger online posts their art
>>7855951Thank you for not disputing my statement
Art Trade i had pending since early december, i was able to finish it at last. A friend requested me to draw her Oc with Zero
working on anotha propa orky fella
>>7856168Cool Kommando
Just began drawing last summer; looking for critique on some pictures of my OC.1/4
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>>7856225They all look pretty good but try to switch up the facial expression as well as giving the armor more form as well as shading along those forms instead of just making it all the same value. Since it’s armor doing that can communicate the texture better.
>>7856225She's got a big ass ugly fuckin SCHNOZBut other than that, she's just got a lot of shit on her armor that's gonna make it tiring to draw. Try drawing her a bunch and see how it simplifies over time.You're doing good lad.
>>7856339>>7856341Thank you anons. Face is definitely the hardest part for me but these are still much better than when I started. I like the eyes a lot but nose and mouth are the worst for me along with hands. I like her armor design for now but I will definitely try to make it more conforming.Here's a final work in progress of her silencing a demon.
Watch LIVE as the artist tries and fails to draw water in two tone.Got some mixed feelings on this. Really loving the line work, and I think the environmental composition is interesting, but the eyeline is a bit too high and puts too much focus on the background rather than on the central characters. I'm trying to mix art styles here between my more realistic, stark style and something much more cartoony and exaggerated for the angel, but I don't think I delivered on it as well as I wanted to. The posing hiding the foot that's presumably holding the man up on the edge of the peer isn't good either - that's a pretty important part of this pose. I wonder if the whole thing wouldn't have been better if it was shot from the opposite angle, from the bay looking up at the two. It'd give a dynamic feeling to the angel hovering above the water while the man sits on the edge turned to the viewer with slight disgust, rather than here, where it kind of looks like you just turned over a rock and found a bunch of bugs having a party. I also think, if I were a more experienced artist, I could have handled the shadows on the water better to make it feel more like a body of water, especially near the bottom of the page, but I'm very afraid of spending too long on it, zooming out, and realizing it's way too detailed and is distracting from the focal point of the image some place between the two character's heads.What does /draw/ think?
>>7856427Study perspective a bit anon because you did a good job with the part of the sword that’s stabbing them in the throat but the upper half isn’t pointing in that same direction
>>7856580Impressive
>>7856596Thanks anon
im working on a little project, if you could tell me which 2 boy designs are the WORST I would appreciate it.
>>7856722Half of them don't look like boys, so are you asking which are the worst designed AS boys, or which are the worst looking?
>>78567227th (2nd in the bottom row) and 10th.
>>78567221, 5, 7, 8 are girls, fix it.4 is the worst one overall.
I have no fucking sense of appeal no matter what the fuck I do please dear lord help me. I consume art I like. I consume gay ass cartoons. I consume the new hip and with it art to no avail.
>>78567221 and 4
I want to play d&d
>>7857968 >>7856580really cool
i scanned a bunch of loosely related drawings and redrew them together but I don't really know if i can actually string them together in a way that makes sense.
>>7857920love this
>>7858667Really fun use of perspective >>7857920You have appeal, just make the face a bit bigger. Nice rendering too>>7857968Love these>>7858705Thanks anon. Nice profile, who is it? It gives me Whiplash vibes>>7858710There’s a clear theme and they make sense. I like the style but believe your anatomy could use a touch up, I think you could do a lot more with what you know as of now
>>7858686Good drawing. Maybe work on using line weight more effectively tho
>>7858736>I like the style but believe your anatomy could use a touch up, I think you could do a lot more with what you know as of nowyeah i shouldve used more references but too late now
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"Mom's apple pie, the Fourth of July- SHE WAS A HOOKA"
>>7858686Could I instead interest you in a game of DCC?
>>7858894sovlfvllReminds me of old yugioh cards
>>7860405Huh, I actually see that now
>>7860405thanks so much this is where it's at right now
