Aaaaaaaa!My EYES! YOU BASTARD!(Not responsible for self inflicted injuries)
Now THAT'S out of the way,I can toss up what I want. Like these storyboards.
I've seen your shit throught the years and I never really cared, it just looks like fetishistic autist schizo drawings . But the text, visual narrative and composition man... it's so bad have you ever in your life read a fucking comic dude? or do you waste all your time drawing you mental porn? honestly I don't give a shit about your art I know you're some kind of retard and a lost cause , but fix the rest at least
I'm not reading all that shit. If i wanted wordswordswords I'll pick up a book. The art has zero appeal too, everything just looks grimy and not in a good, underground comics-type way.
I don't think you understand what a storyboard is, schizo anon.
>>8016023If you look at it,its doodled in a Comic Journal, and I was forced to stuff the narrative into prerendered panels. And I wanted to be experimental for my own benefit. And lastly these are STORYBOARDS. Ideas flung down on paper haphazardly for later refining and redoing. And NOT the work itself. For instance, I did storyboards for the first 30 strips of this story, and from that I made strips like these. And the final product is not the same as the storyboard either. It's a tool that I actively encourage new artists to use.
This is a fragment of the storyboard from that story. It captures a moment harsh and raw in the narrative, and once I would get to it, I would draw each bit separately and through Photoshop Legerdermain make this into a comic like the other. Now do you see the importance?
>>8016037>>8016039This guy
And someone mor competent than I is interested in the story,so here am the containment field.
I will post the rest later on my way to work.
>>8016023I like this shit. Let the dude have his thread.
>>8016042I'm really trying to read but your writing is so broken and unclear that it's really hard, it's not pleasant to read this at allIt's like trying to watch a movie but the audio is corrupted to a point where you just stop watchingAnd what I am able to read it just seems like convoluded rambling, it doesn't feel stylistic or funny it's just tiring and annoying>>8016037This I can read but it's just awfully done, no taste, no skillIt's just garbage, there's absolutely nothing there that's done correctlyAnd this lineart really shows how low your skills are while you try to hide poor technical skill under endless detail and texture and that's the only gimmick you have managed to pull off in order to get anyone to give any complimentsFuck, it's kinda sad but you're also so delusional and lazy in terms of learning and improving that you kinda deserve to be in this situationYou don't even know what a storyboard is and the craziest thing is that you're a middle aged dude and not some naive high schooler
>>8016037SOVL
>>8016042Bro, you shit all over Peril. Keep doing what you're doing. Just avoid taking over threads too often
>>8016037
Is this weird? Yes.Does the author have issues? Probably yeah, but thats a requirement for art. All in all this is cool as its own weirdly cool thing. Solid outsider art vibes, kinda wanna see the current art just to see if and what changed since 2024.
>>8016076You should lurk more. He posts whatever he makes all over this board.
>>8016076Can you actually say what's going on in these pages? You clearly didn't even attempt to read it
>>8016076>just to see if and what changed since 2024.OP made this in 1983, he's clearly a permabeg who doesn't have the capacity to improve
>>8016087Is this the infamous "Gary"? I've seen that name came across randomly many times in this board.
>>8016066The person who this thread is intended for does manage to read my bad writing. And why is it bad?Because these are Storyboards and intended for no one but myself. And now, for someone who likes it enough so far to make fan art like this. Quick, clean, competent, and by some miracle, Enthusiastic. I want him to see the story so far so he might try his hand at doing it.
>>8016095Mea culpa.But I have been using a GT overlapping during high school.
>>8016141
Back to the show.And once again, this isn't the final result, just a shooting script.
And that is as far as it's gotten. I did two more pages, with far more detailing in the panels with the intent of adding word balloons afterwards in some app.
And a fresh photo of the other.
It started with this, btw. A portrait of Cassandra as something to draw. What's she doing? Making magic. What kinda magic? Invent a visual metaphor for the effect. Have the Professor admire it. Dialog springs into their mouths, and a conversation sprouted around their portraits like mushrooms.
The only thing about this guy I haven't been able to figure out is why he hangs around /ic/ and not /i/.Dude's a schizo for sure. I can understand that he's lonely and frustrated, it comes out in his art, but he seems sincere in his art.So why does he seem to exclusively post on the board that hates art the most?
>>8016704wait theres another art board? tf is "oekaki?" is it less dead than this one? also yes schizo unc clearly has a troubled life.
>>8016141Thanks anon! Don't worry your writing is totally readable, it may be hard for people on their phones maybe.You're actually correct in your assessment of how an storyboard should look. Your work here fits that perfectly..About me trying to attempt at doing your magnum opus here, I really don't feel qualified for that. Your work has SOVL, as others said many times. No one can replicate that. I do simple coom, devoid of any complexity, commitment or seriousness. Your style is so baroque and it has that rough "indie comic" and retro Gothic Darkness from the 70s/80s, you shouldn't let anyone re-do your style.About picrel, I did a homage to one of my favorite panels in the comic that you posted here. That panel was hot for some reason lol. I see you have fun doing these stories, you should keep doing more of these "storyboards" making new tales.About my "spin-off" comic I will post it here I guess, and I'll keep posting new pages if I'm allowed to. My story is supposed to have many sex scenes, and even though I made the girl human, saving those ears and the "button nose", I'm not sure if I'm in the clear. So probably I will be deterred to finish it here. We will see.
>>8016704>>8016706/i/ is way more dead than this board. If you send this poor guy there he will rope himself drown in a deeper depression. Here at least you have feedback, even if it is just insults and mockery. Sometimes what you need is a kick in the teeth to get your shit together.
>>8016745his output is good atleast. he just needs to work on form and line weight, make his characters more readable before doing stories
Schribblefurry anon has a cool style but I also have to admit it's messy, all over the place and also unappealing and not inviting me to read the story
>>8016774Getting inside the mind of one the weirdest schizos in this board should be enough incentive to take a look at it.
>>8016780I'd rather look at Crumb's, Kago's, or Zaskòrski's unhinged comics though. There's so much cool stuff out there with appealing art. Also, I'd rather get into the mind of Darger if I could single out one schizo I had to understand.I think the furryscribble schizo could produce some interesting comics if he studied more how others worked and if he actually spent time on making layouts beforehand. It looks like he plans his works poorly and improvises most of it.
Also, I think the drawings could benefit from a teensy tiny bit less hatching. And I say this as this board's Number One Gorey Fan
>>8016784one thing no one mentions to this guy is where are the shadows? the rendering? if you have something to show, show it
>>8016823That's the top landing of a wide open stair. Not a wall.
>>8016824i was talking about the op's art not goreys lol. he can learn from gorey
>>8016823His technicsl skills are near zero, I don't think he has actually studied anything and took "just draw" as serious adviceSame with those kim jung gi wannabes who have very low technical skill but they think being able to draw crude figures and shitty backgrounds in fisheye perspective makes them special
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PAGE 7I'll see if I can keep up this pace.. or how far can I go with the naughtiness.. It's supposed to be a romantic tale more than anything, I hope.. lol
>>8016016Anon how old are you unironically, everything about this screams that you were teenage if not an adult in 80s. I feel like im looking dark crystals fanart not to bully you.
>>8017070I think he's in his 50s. Doesn't mean it's too late for him to improve though
>>8017057>>8017059>>8017060>>8017061>>8017067>>8017069I'ma be real with you, you've got way too much text, especially the narration. A lot of it can be simplified, or excised completely with the art taking up the role of it.I also think your strip format might be holding you back. You could probably have some more dynamic panels and compositions if you were using a standard full page format.
>>8016855>took "just draw" as serious adviceIt is serious advice. This guy's drawings are unappealing, but he has an artistic outlet and distinctive style nonetheless, while all you have is 4chan posts.
>>8017199It's true that drawings are better than no drawings. But the next step is to work on making better drawings because appealing drawings are better than unappealing drawings
>>8017181Thanks for the feedback anon! Actually, all of those points continue to be brought up time and time again, and I keep explaining each one every time, lol. I used to do vertical comic format, wich of course allows better figure composition and more varied and dynamic poses. But that amount of "artistic freedom" becomes unmanageable. A vertical page becomes incredibly lengthy I could be working on it for days, and after is done I end up absolutely drained. And the standard comic page format requires too much thought on the lay out, you have to take your time to do a proper comic page. So I need brutal and shitty boundaries and limitations to force myself to get one of these pages finished within a day. It's the only way. At least for me. I can't afford to spend too much time with this. And about the text, that's the thing that I love the most, that's why I left that blank space above, to fill it with text, if I can, lol. People seem to deny themselves the pleasure and joy of indulging themselves, with the things THEY like and savor the most.A quick WIP on page 8... I'm gonna take a nap.. he he
I would like to draw my graphic novel in strip form while videoing myself in hyperlapse,then dissect, color, tweak and embellish the raw art into hardcopy books. But we don't always get to do what we like.Last year I couldn't draw until November or so. And the variables that were responsible for this are still in play, so I have been doing studies. Pencil followed by ballpoint, ballpoint followed by gel ink, pencil followed by gel ink. And trying to render ivory hair over white fur obscuring a dark wood chair and a holographic image too. Things best figured out by the attempting. And I put the results here. When I do something For Realzies, you will definitely know it. It will be on a tshirt for sale.
>>8017270Do you have any response to the critique given earlier?
>>8017255>And about the text, that's the thing that I love the most, that's why I left that blank space above, to fill it with text, if I can, lol. People seem to deny themselves the pleasure and joy of indulging themselves, with the things THEY like and savor the most.Guess I can't argue with that, carry on.
>>8017330As I await news of life changing events this week, I will have a better idea of what I will have in the way of drawing time. And once I know that, I can direct my efforts. I composed my last eight or so works randomly, starting in a spot, drawing stuff, branching outwards and composing a situation, then stuffing the negative spaces with background material. To get some rendering in so once I get everything inked then properly scanned, I can proceed with other areas of my education long put off.Like this thing. A finalist in my tshirt design project, this will be dissected as its colored, and I will see what Photoshop legerdermain can do to give it the faux 3D look its background will have. And I need to see how my style needs to alter to accommodate the expected Photoshop treatment. Which means doing other things first to learn such answers.
>>8017395Negative space is important for the brain to grab onto shapes. You should embrace having a few values and larger contrast in a drawing
>>8016016How many threads about your art will you make?
>>8016039Last time you claimed it's not a comic, but a storyboard
>>8017181I disagree with this anon.Peril perfected his method and I think it's the future of comics. The low exposition, terse dialogue garbage is for the Dobson's of this world
>>8017134wow, really? 50 year olds use 4chan?
>>8017512Only the insane onesOne day OP will be this century's Henry Darger
>>8017512People who were 20 when 4chan launched are 40 now, anon
>>8017512This is an old style website for older generations.Most people here are 30+ nowadays.
>>8017553Yeah, like being a 30+ I can't stand tiktok not even for a minute, I guess youngsters would feel the same about this site. For them it must feel like staring at a wikipedia article.
>>80175534chan is a millennial website not a Gen X website
>>8017069 >> PAGE 8 DONE>>8017470Thanks anon! As you pointed it out, in this last page I didn't had any extra text for these panels, so I took the time to come up with some words to describe the action.. and as I said, I enjoy the FUCK out of that. It's like solving a hot entertaining puzzle. Why would anyone reject any added value opportunity of any sort? If some are not interested in the text, just don't read it. But to "hate it", and to demand the non existence of it.. it just leaves me staggered. It's like there's actually a biological difference from people from decades ago, and the "new people". I'm not too old, but I got to live the visual novel craze, and the fanfic era, wich is all about story and world immersion. You wanted more, always more, to drown your brain into that experience. Reading books for these people must be a real nightmare.>>8016016Woah, I didn't pay proper attention to this OP cover art, this is freaking NICE. The way those two girls are placed in the background and that cup occupies the forefront so successfully. That's a freaking success in composition.
>>8017668This is unpleasant and ugly
>>8017668This anon clearly has skill but I have to second that it looks not very appealing.
>>8017665So?, Aren't millennials on their 30's?
>>8017457That was a storyboard from this story. It was my original Product, something that I was trying to create in my spare time, and employing Photoshop Legerdermain to make this possible. A once a week upload to keep up traffic, and designed to be offered to newspapers and magazines, a story told in a standard format.
>>8017512I'm 61. And knew about 4chan from hunting down interesting looping GIFs to chop up for animated paintings and doodads to sell in Second Life. I used to lurk at the Daily Rotten because the inmates had cool images I wouldn't know where to find on my own. The trail led to 4chan. I never saw /b/ which means my FBI file is only gigabytes and not terabytes. :D
>>8018042Even at 61 it's not impossible to improve your art, fren.
>>8017668 >> PAGE 9 DONE!>>8017679I try my best! I'll improve! I promise! Do you have some advice for more pleasant and pretty designs?>>8017687THANK YOU SO MUCH ANON! What's your favorite artist? Maybe I can get some good pointers...>>8018042I've never got into Second Life, it scared me for some reason.
>>8018690Maybe you should say gasp instead of smirk at the very end? The text contradict the panel there, it took me out of the story a bit.Good shiit otherwise
>>8017057>>8017059>>8017060>>8017061Is this the same artist as OP?That's a totally different style.
>>8018694lol no, that one is "peril." op is "gary." or atleast i think thats what they go by. both post alot of art on this board.
>>8018690 >>PAGE 9 "Fixed">>8018692I added your suggestion. I knew about that, but I let is slip just because of laziness. Originally she was supposed to smirk at it, but she needs to say something else and that won't work in the last panel. So the smirk expression will be at the start of the next page. This is the problem with "my system", I got everything so extremely "mechanized" that once I "GO" then I won't stop and I won't deviate from anything that I got set up (rough sketch and text wise) till I finish the page. "No second takes" lol. But you're right, I was expecting nobody to call me out in this dark lonely corner of the board. xDThank you!!!>>8018694No, I just did some fanart of Gary's OC's in this thread >>8012009>>8012666 and then I had an idea for a little fanfic "spin-off" tale on Milo reminiscing about a romantic memory wich left him brokenhearted. I just want to finish this story, it may take 20 pages in total.>>8018700Yeah Peril-fag is the name I got in /Beg/ lol
You should make drawings with more appeal. Watch anime to learn how.
>>8017665SA adjacent and most SA posters are 50+ now, Moot was underageB& when he got bullied from that forum for being a weeb and he's 45 now, if OP is telling the truth he's not even the oldest known poster (that's Epstein! yay lets go 4chinz!). These are the people that shaped the entire internet, it's humor, layouts, communities and many other things. Your art is amazing , really like these >>8017395>>8017270>>8016037 your art is obviously not /beg/ at all lol, this is /adv/ or /int/ , don't listen to the jealous trolls most appreciate your artwork
>>8019503I remember being part of the wave of AOL users that ruined the internet for the first time. Maybe that's why I'm soft on zoomers for putting the final nail in the coffin
>>8018707huge fan, redlineanon
>>8018707 >> PAGE 10 DONE!>>8019678LMAO!!! Appeal anon? Is that you? Am I redline anon? or is that you? I haven't made a redline in years!
>>8019683I know you as redline anon.>appeal anon?nahjust wanted to say i'm a big fanlove yourself (draw more nuns)
>>8019503Not beg.Lol.
>>8019685>(draw more nuns)THANK YOU ANON!!! I think I know you as the "nun-anon" lol.Yeah nuns are hot. If I do some nun story I can't use this shitty "comic" style. I would have to use a MUCH bigger canvas to make some really good nuns. And I don't have that quality and amount of free time right now.In the meanwhile here you have a Sparky nun. I don't know how nuns and religion fit in Gary's "Prickles world". Maybe they can exist in the form of "priestesses" I don't know.>>8019732He has a very particular style, you can't put him simply on "beg". He's in that "fairy-tale / fantasy illustration genre". That type of artists stay in a genre of their own during their entire career. This guy as most people, had to sacrifice art and keep it in the back of his priorities to actually take care of subsistence in the real world out there. Same as me, same as everyone else. The difference that I made was to try a Digital tablet and actually find it fun and easy to use. Otherwise I wouldn't be drawing nothing at all.
Everybody always tells me my art is ugly so I guess I can post here.
BINGO. Who's missing in the oldfag schizo roster? pixel schizo anon?
>>8019767It’s like a permabeg justice league.
>the crustacean recoils at the thought of someone having funngl i'd kill myself if i was like that
>>8019770Team UNCLE for the fucking win! Look at these slick cool cats, drippin hip and style.
>>8019765NOOOOOOOOO!!!! Duuuude you were part of the team already! Come back here! Damn it!
>>8019754Yes, years of setbacks,problems and misfires. Even now I am waiting for news that will determine what shape my life takes in the future. Then I can point my efforts properly. In the meantime, I will figure out art through the random projects that I have been doing, and hope.What I wanted to do is this :https://youtu.be/tCE1GQHCdDc?is=9kjWONeNdZ-aDi12https://youtu.be/UoTBkDRWCSw?is=4wCQQoD7js4p2bX5https://youtu.be/D2gEr0dIf1k?is=BEekoinKkLhGk9AuA story that unfolds before your eyes. The channel needs work, the videos need soundtracks, and these are things I need to learn how to do for myself. But once done, I would be happy watching a tale grow as I once chased a story I wasn't expecting for over a decade over 180 strips.
>>8019814>starts drawing without a planYeah, that's what it looks like. You should learn how to properly plan your comics and not just go for it if you want to have a flying chance at publishing your things somewhere. Even if you have cancer then that's no excuse.
>>8019962The idea is to let the viewer see the story spontaneously evolving. The Photoshop legerdermain afterwards will make it sellable.
>>8016066>He didn't read the spark keeper arcNGMI
>>8020026>The idea is to let the viewer see the story spontaneously evolvingThat's just an excuse for being lazy.
>>8016162Mucho texto. I'm not going to read all that shit when the art isn't even good.
>>8019683 >> PAGE 11 DONE!This one came out better than the previous one I think. Maybe is a placebo effect derived from staying in the "zone" 5 hours every day, the build up inertia makes me push quality a little bit further without noticing any actual "extra" effort. I hope I can finish this story before getting crushed lol>>8019814WOW! You really do that with no plan or previous sketch?! With a pen?! DUDE, that 's quite the performance feat. It's a crime that you didn't get to explore your art skillz sooner. I hope you get that chance.>>8020035LOL! Exactly xDDD I love this board.>>8020086It's crazy to me when someone rejects a mystery or a puzzle of any kind, specially if it is an artistic one.>>8020471NICE!!! Go on.. please...
>>8020949 >> PAGE 11 FIXEDDAMN IT! I'm sorry! I had to fix a couple mistakes, again...
>>8020995>*PSST!*YOU'RE IN THE WRONG THREAD.javascript:quote('952789129');
>>8020999Target Market LOCATED!
>>8020085The idea revolves around SPONTANEOUSLY WRITING A STORY.Being 60+ now, I have conceived a business model for my artistic output, which is to grow a fanbase with consistently timely uploads and sell compilation hardcopy books and tshirts. And since the premise is at least uncommon, it will be a worthy monument to the zeitgeist. I have yet to scan the raw art, so I have not explored what I can do with it in Photoshop. I guess I will need to assemble a library of imagery for the colored background elements. It's all about planning. And having the time for plans.
>>8020086Well, its not meant for public consumption, just a thing that I used in a normie draw your comic life diary to justify the $10 I spent on it 4 years ago. I'd not confine myself to this artificial restriction of pre rendered panels to tell my stories For Real, but it was part of the fun composing it. Which brings me to...>>8020970You! :DYour skills impress me. And I am happy the premise has you inspired. I would not stop what you are doing now, but I will still extend the invitation to retell my story. As an education for you, to force yourself to interpret a writer's story but keep the ideas and images faithful to the source material. I am curious what you will make of it.
What’re they gonna do, ban me?
>>8021153Shirts doko? i want my spark and ogres shirt.
>>8021320Nothing wrong with that. It's the rough from which you will make the real drawing from.
PAGE 12 WIP.. he he..>>8021164>I will still extend the invitation to retell my story.Thanks anon!!!! That's very tempting, you're right, I'm curious too about the result of that. I would like to do it, But, I really want to finish this "side-story". I'll see what I can do, I need to plan for it. I was thinking that I could use your pages as templates and just "re-draw" everything using the same composition. We will see!>>8021320Lucky "Spark Keeper" enjoyer.. lol... I'm thinking that probably I could be banned first. I'll have to censor the sexy scenes in this story in "manga style" pixelation or something to avoid that. The love story about Milo and Sparky is more important than their sex scenes really.>>8021065Cool retro style!
>>8021853It's in the cards.
>>8020970 >> PAGE 12 FINISHED>>8021733NICE!!!! Saved for the ref folder!>>8021915Welp, the "intention" is there, wich is the driving element. Let's see if everything else in our reality's realm want's to align as well.
>>8021853>”Spark Keeper”What?
>>8022051The storyboards above are about a young human male being gifted three anthromorph slave girls as part of the culture of the rich and powerful. When a boy hits puberty a slave girl is assigned to be his " spark keeper", to tend the spark of budding manhood, by being his fuck toy.
PAGE 13 WIP... hopefully we should be half way into the story, but knowing me I'll probably be adding more "exxxtra" pages...>>8022051OP tells about that here >>8016017
>>8022359Her face looks kinda weird in profile
>>8022589Is this one better? Yeah, I wasn't sure about it. I'm glad I'm posting these WIP's, otherwise I would have go on with that face.Also I show there the difference in working area size, If I work at a big sized canvas (as I would like to) I can do MUCH better stuff, but then, time and effort would increase exponentially. Like, a page that takes me 5hs to do at a height of 1400pixels, at 3000+pixels would take me 16HS or more. And these projects would become undoable time wise. That's why figures in some panels look so basic and "thick lined", I'm working at a tiny scale, but it allows me to do this incredibly fast xD
>>8022009 >> PAGE 13 FINISHED!We're getting there.. hee-hee..
>>8022690That's way better
>>8023509Now go beyond the rough.Make a line drawing from this.
PAGE 14 Work-In-Progress... I rushed up this one, but I have to hurry up. I need to finish this story no matter how the final result ends up looking.>>8023509I love your rough sketches, more than your finished pieces for some reason. Your sketches oozes pure unaltered SEXO>>8023710You have such a distinctive style. Like some GWAR-esque alien art freak escaped from the 80's.
>>8023720I was trying to make a project to educate myself in various processes that I felt the need to get familiar with. This was to build a tshirt design from the ground up, having had ambitions in the distant past,and I still wear my prototype. I wanted to make a "modular" shirt, one with a framing outer area that would contain new inner art, so I could just make new centerpieces for the frame, generating new products faster and with color variants potentially dozens from one piece of art.First the frame had to be correct. I had a tshirt template to utilize, and I decided to have one design for both sides of the shirt, so the edges had to meet exactly to give the illusion of the frame wrapping around the torso. This I thought I did,but the prototype has a grey null stripe where the art should have joined seamlessly. And even worse,the bulk of the center artwork gets stuffed down your pants, and only the top eye is peeking up out of your zipper like a periscope, or something else. So the next version would be 65% frame and the centerpieces stuffed up by the chest.
>>8023754I witnessed many entrepreneurs having all sorts of (disastrous) problems trying to manufacture and sell T-Shirts. Size issues, the main one. People are very picky, they want the right size when you probably can produce only one or two sizes. Also on delivery, people suddenly realizes that they don't like what they got, and they want to return it, but by then you are already losing money, money that you expected to get from selling those products, wich you need to pay the loan you took to start the business in the first place. Be warned, Clothing business is a very tricky and problematic one.
>>8023720Ah,Gwar! I have a story about them! :DThey appeared in a small club in New Jersey, and my friends and I were camped out in the front row. The audience was a sea of skull shirts, black with the best art on the back of it for inspiring the envy of everyone behind you. All except me. My shirt was white,and the art was on the front. A wonderful detailed head of Larry Fine of the Three Stooges, GLARING at you. And on top of that, I was having a fine time being annoying. Instead of cheering, I just would growl like a caveman Ruh Ruh Ruh!When Sleazy P Martini tried getting the crowd to chant for Slaughterama, I chanted for Gor Gor, something that couldn't fit on that stage. Oderous Humongous wouldn't go out onstage after a while, and I started to behave, screaming for Slaughterama. " Yeah,Slaughterama!",Sleazy yelled at me," And NOT RUH RUH RUH!"
>>8023760No problem like that ever existed for me. The store was online,and ordering a product would have another website handling the manufacturing and delivery as needed,providing all sizes and shirt styles as required. All I needed to do was stick my art into their templates and watch the profits roll in. My problem was getting a pause between the payment depositing and the manufacturing starting, making the cash outlay my problem for the product generating, but I suppose it was some statistics that I could have tweaked to solve it.
>>8023720>more than your finished pieces for some reasonI can’t disagree. I don’t know why things aways go so wrong in the process of completing a piece. Maybe I overthink it. Or maybe I try to finish things in a way that’s not compatible with the sketch’s style.
>>8023803Just redraw it using it as a reference. The rough sets the scene but isn't the scene. You build one from it. If you feel intimidated, just draw very lightly and commit to the lines that you find useful by making them darker.
>>8022832 >> PAGE 14 DONE>>8023754>>8023774I'm glad you know what you're doing with the shirts thing, that's cool!>>8023764LOL! Great little story! Rest in Eternal Gunk, Captain Oderus!>>8023803I love how these compositions of yours have that cozy domestic ambiance. If a "medium" (in this case a rough sketch) is already successful to convey the "vision" of your idea, then that should be enough as a final rendering format. I personally don't need a super rendered version of that image you did. You should keep doing more, endless drawings like those portraying hot feverish scenarios and situations.>>8023816Really cool designs! You're immensely creative!
At least we’re keeping permabegs contained now.
>>8024729permabegs belong to /beg/
>>8024732No. The people in /beg/ can improve. These can’t.
both of them display technique and beauty in their piecesbut NOOOOOOOOO you must call shit everything that doesnt validate your porn addiction and dickgirls imageboard culturestab yourselves in the legs until the knife lands in holes.
>>8024752lol no.
>>8024734>These can’tThe best artist in the entirety of this website is posting his work in this thread. What are you on about?
Every line a lesson.Every breath a parable.
>>8024821lol I don’t know which schizo u mean none have appeal
I need to redo Fox woman’s head.
>>8024483 >> PAGE 15 DONE!>>8024843I can't believe you did this in 2026? It looks impossible. That's incredible commitment to your craft!>>8024873pyw? p..please?>>8025194Nice hot shorts on that racoon babe!
>>8025527>pyw? p..please?like I want my work connected to loosers
>>8025585You shouldn't be so insecure around frens. We all post our ugly shit here for fun, and it is great.
/schizo/
>>8025846At least they draw.
>>8025527 >>PAGE 16 FINISHED!
>>8027805WOW! Dude you really are a rare artistic treat in this board. I just finished Page 17 of my lurid comic "Milo fan-fic", but I don't want to overstep on this beautiful piece you just posted. Instead I'll re-post a little scribble I did a while ago using your amazing furry creatures as ref.
>>8027830That was a remake of this.After Covid ate my website, I didn't draw for over two years. Then I found marijuana and exploded. I began a story based on this fragment and was resolved to be happy with whatever made it to paper, so thought up a story with the joy I had thinking up the Snowglobe story. It petered out and I moved on to other things. But something to bait the trolls with.:D
>>8027805Oy gevalt
>>8027830Ya got me working blue again!
>>8026739 >> PAGE 17 DONE! Alright the lurid aspect of the story begins, from now on it should flow quickly to the conclusion of the story.>>8027839Oh I see, that previous version looks sick too! But that new version of the plant screaming OY! is absolutely spectacular!I can't take weed, it makes me extremely and dangerously paranoid LOL. I think I was born naturally over stimulated.>>8027912Milo having a good time huh... I bet that bitch Murielle is lurking around ready to ruin his fun time lol
Finally finished this one!
>>8027839I draw while high a lot too although I can never be sure if that helps or hinders my work.
>>8028141Wonderful!I like the pattern around the lamp. And the figures are well composed.
>>8016016I have a soft spot for sort of vintage styles like this. Wanted to do my own take while not straying too far from the source
>>8028726Plants sure are whiners.
>>8028779
>>8017134A true outsider artist...When they find him dead his sketches will be worth thousands, half a million for the entire body of work.
>>8019685Redline anon is a name that is already attributed to someone else. Might cause confusion.Peril is most commonly known as Peril.
>>8028134 >> PAGE 18 FINISHED!>>8028141Nice coloring work anon!>>8028748WOOOW, THAT'S FUCKING GREAT! SAVED!!! I'm having these designs as future refs for sure! I would like to see your version of the third girl "Yvette".>>8028726>>8029057These pages are like beautiful art pieces. I love the final design of Mr Prickles there. Your commitment to draw him each time with that same level of detail is incredible.
>>8029496Aren't both the same person? Isn't this redliner and "peril" the same artist?>/RLG/ - Red Line General Ihttps://warosu.org/ic/thread/6650734>/RLG/ - Red Line General IIhttps://warosu.org/ic/thread/6690796>/RLG/ - Red Line General IIIhttps://warosu.org/ic/thread/6708812
>>8029057At least the text is readable but the fuck is happening in the top right, I seriously can't tell
>>8029563Looks like his style. Odd, because I have redline anon in memory without any style. Much like post >>6659041 in the first link.Peril is really a valuable part of /ic/. I must have missed the redline era.
>>8029582Jeremey is rearing back in surprise at the OyOy laughing.
>>8029992Pwned, mutha fucka!
>>8029559Thanks! Went a little more off model with her
>>8030354I'm still trying to figure her out myself. The curls especially. Trying to adapt the algorithm for Jeremey's hair spikes for Yvette, but making them wider.
And speaking of figuring things out...I realized that I never thought of how an anthromorph would look naked. And after the duel of manners in the one post had me thinking about the reasons Cassandra would strike such a pose for the Professor, and how it comes out in her expression.
>>8029559 >> PAGE 19 FINISHED!>>8030354Man, this is fucking GREAT! I love that Vintage Erotica style of girl you do, with the hair-style and everything. I would love to see your "human female" art..>>8031162Wow, making a sex scene with that crazy detailed style would be a nightmare! That's a really nice hair effect there, most people struggle so much doing hair and "hairy" stuff in general.>>8029650This has a very Harry Potter-esque vibe!>>8030504COOL!>>8029563Yeah I'm that redliner. Although, there were a couple others doing a few redlines too, one in particular contributed with quite a few redlines.>>8029595>valuable part of /ic/THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!!!
>>8031484hey man just dropping in to say i still hate your work, dont keep it up. you arent a valuable part you're an attention whore who desperately wants to be a personality here>>8030504this guy is actually /ic/ culture
>>8031484I attempted that with this one shot.Peter and Lissanna have an interesting dynamic. She sees him initially as a way out of her small town (despite being in a highly adventurous place), but falls in love with his selflessness and his bravery. But after seeing the five females that he allowed into his life being destroyed by arch mage hunting for him, he shuns her advances because he couldn't bear another dying from getting too close.
If I was one of the artists in this thread I’d fucking kill myself.
>>8031545But you're not even that, lol
>>8031553Thank god.
>>8031545>>8031553Budding gay romance!:D
>>8031545I don't really like some aestetic choises of OP, but I wish I had a quarter of his skill
>>8032017Your the gay faggot, homo!
>>8032157We're very understanding about such things in 4chan.It's okay.You can both hate me and just adore massive veiny futa cocks together. It's adorable (if you have a strong stomach).
On with the show...Tried another pen on the next couple of pages, and its bad.
Muddy brown ink not fit for anything.
Last of the bad pen.
>>8033168The ink looks the same to me?
>>8033206And I found black Bic ballpoint pens.
>>8033427They’re “Bic ballpoint pens of color,” bigot.
>>8033452No,this was done with Bic pens of Color...:D
>>8031484 >>PAGE 20 DONE! This "flashback/dream" scene was added as an afterthought, this is how projects get out of hand... Damn it.>>8031492>whore who desperately wants to be a personality hereLOL, Nothing could be further from the truth.>this guy is actually /ic/ cultureI totally agree with that.>>8031495I see, a tragic story, interesting. The kind of heartbreaking love story that I like to explore with my art most of the time heh heh..>>8032498>>8033427You got some freaking cool designs right there! That forest creature is SICK!>>8033571HOLY WOW! The pen hatching there is damn tight!
>>8033606 >> PAGE 21 DONE! I have ready all of this "dream" sequence (pages 19 to 24). Hopefully I can focus on Milo and Sparky now, and finish this story.
>>8033660 >> PAGE 22 DONE!
>>8033683 >>PAGE 23 DONE! Alright, schizo nightmare arc is over. Now back to Dr Milo and Sparky. It's time for them to have some fun finally.
>>8033606Peter, like I, would not consider any close relationship when pursued by the bounty hunters sent by an archmage you escaped from his particularly cruel slavery. And after watching five innocent young girls he dared befriend have gruesome ends because of getting caught in the crossfire, doubly determined to not be tempted to bring another to her doom.Or so he thinks.A storyline that I have held in my head after products several graphic novels (LOL) was a confrontation with the arch wizard after Peter relates to Jeremey about each of these unfortunate girls and their adventures together, and his account of their supposed demises. Unknown to him,all survived and show up on his doorstep a bit pissed off at being abandoned or whatever each filling in details of what really happened to them. Then they all start bitching at once, and Peter runs from the house. Jeremey yells at them all about what Peter was unburdening himself of, mourning all of them with chains of guilt tying up his heart. Then he goes to find Peter.
>>8033606Jeremey finds Peter a short way away kneeling in the tall grass, weeping hysterically. Jeremey tries to comfort him, saying that he told them off for being wrong about things. But then Jeremey notices something odd.Peter is laughing as well as crying. Can't tell one from the other, Jeremey states, not sure what to make of it. Peter catches his breath and says with joy :>"They're ALIVE! All of them! I didn't make them die!"Then he stands. The beginning of the story was a bounty hunter was in the vicinity and Jeremey and Peter were lying low, when Jeremey asked why he didn't like Lissanna back. Then the sequence of five flashbacks, Peter then resolves to go along with the bounty hunter straight to the arch mage.
>>8033684DamnWhat a rush
>>8033571HAH! Well you’ve got me there. Do you mess with these?
>>8033874That's what I used.
I, so high right now
>>8033684 >>PAGE 24 FINISHED!>>8033777 (checked)>>8033790Damn, poor Peter, he had to carry that weight all of that time, still tragic. And Prickles is a great guy taking care of his friend like that.>>8033800Yeah I have other "hardcore role-play" ideas for Sparky, but it will probably end up in the "ideas" bottomless pit. lol.>>8034063Dude, this is real art. I feel like a low filthy retarded monkey doing a coomer fanfic of Dr Milo.>>8034066This is fucking excellent. Your rough sketches are so freaking good.
It's this permaprebeg again with his trash art
>>8034267There it is.
>>8034234>averaged more than 1 entire comic page per day>still drew other things while at itSome people might not like your drawings, but there isn't a single person who could say you're lazy.I really don't know how you do it but impressive stuff my good dude.
>>8016016good art, but it reminds me of this bastard
>>8016016you are the reason art had rules and was gatekept for centuries
At least /ic/‘s worst artists are contained here.
>>8034861There is no bad art.Each work is a stepping stone to better things.
>>8034897So when are you going to start making better things?
>>8034930Soon.I just finished inking that,and have a couple of more pencil drawings that need inking as well. Then I can drag them all to Staples and scan them so I can do the computer side of the research. How to color, how to draw to anticipate coloring, and then I can get started on the YouTube channel and setting up shop for systematic video production and promotion. Things I need to learn, processes that need forging and refining. A definitive sense of what my free time will be like in the foreseeable future, and how best to use that time. A variable that is uncertain even now. So I have amused myself with things random and educational, in hopes of better times, which might be coming at long last. I was never much of an optimist. I have dared to share these storyboards, rendering tests and designs here, and have been driven to my knees in bitter self reproach from the comments...(Or would have,if I gave a shit! : D )But although everyone misses the point of what these recent works are, the homework for future projects, like the extras on a DVD showing what the production imagery was like before it was morphed into the movie you just watched. When you see something of mine presented for judgement, it will be on a tshirt and the jury will be the marketplace.
The Prince was just a vague scribble on the other page that I based the full sized sketch on.
>>8034234 >>PAGE 25 FINISHED!>>8034510WOW! THANK YOU ANON! Very kind of you! Yeah, I understand their critique though. I do these pieces in an absolute rush. Like this one, I just did. I had a few busy days, and I couldn't even touch the tablet. Now I have my daily free hours again, and I'm gonna be rushing these pages like a madman again, and the art style suffers of course. I'm not oblivious to that fact.But it is the only way to make this, I can't spend a week to do just one "masterpiece" of a coom comic page, it would take me a year to finish just one story, and my brain can't stay focused that long in one project anyway lol. Thanks again anon!!!>>8034737You don't know nothing about art. OP must be one the few REAL artists in this board. And by "real" I mean: trad+sovl.>>8035747>>8035941>>8036561Thanks for sharing these! >>8035126>in hopes of better timesThat's exactly it. Whatever we do to keep hope alive is worth it. A happy life is build on a sequence of happy moments, even if those happy moments are just happy little drawings. Most people only have the hopelessness of a cold screen showing them virtual fantasies built in virtual factories. To be able to have a mind and a body able to create and experience worlds and fantasies from within their own souls, is a most divine privilege.
>>8034234>>8037179 >>PAGE 25 -FIXED-I had to do a full revision on the last page. Being away from the drawing board for a few days threw me out of it, gotta get into it back again now.
>>8037179Yes, I champion both the joy of storytelling and world building. And I like to point new artists in useful directions when it comes to the craft aspects of drawing something "worthwhile", or in hopes of some later work with that nebulous quality. I am glad to witness true Inspiration and have no advice whatsoever for you, and that is the compliment. :D
And this is where the character came from...
