Aaaaaaaa!My EYES! YOU BASTARD!(Not responsible for self inflicted injuries)
Now THAT'S out of the way,I can toss up what I want. Like these storyboards.
I've seen your shit throught the years and I never really cared, it just looks like fetishistic autist schizo drawings . But the text, visual narrative and composition man... it's so bad have you ever in your life read a fucking comic dude? or do you waste all your time drawing you mental porn? honestly I don't give a shit about your art I know you're some kind of retard and a lost cause , but fix the rest at least
I'm not reading all that shit. If i wanted wordswordswords I'll pick up a book. The art has zero appeal too, everything just looks grimy and not in a good, underground comics-type way.
I don't think you understand what a storyboard is, schizo anon.
>>8016023If you look at it,its doodled in a Comic Journal, and I was forced to stuff the narrative into prerendered panels. And I wanted to be experimental for my own benefit. And lastly these are STORYBOARDS. Ideas flung down on paper haphazardly for later refining and redoing. And NOT the work itself. For instance, I did storyboards for the first 30 strips of this story, and from that I made strips like these. And the final product is not the same as the storyboard either. It's a tool that I actively encourage new artists to use.
This is a fragment of the storyboard from that story. It captures a moment harsh and raw in the narrative, and once I would get to it, I would draw each bit separately and through Photoshop Legerdermain make this into a comic like the other. Now do you see the importance?
>>8016037>>8016039This guy
And someone mor competent than I is interested in the story,so here am the containment field.
I will post the rest later on my way to work.
>>8016023I like this shit. Let the dude have his thread.
>>8016042I'm really trying to read but your writing is so broken and unclear that it's really hard, it's not pleasant to read this at allIt's like trying to watch a movie but the audio is corrupted to a point where you just stop watchingAnd what I am able to read it just seems like convoluded rambling, it doesn't feel stylistic or funny it's just tiring and annoying>>8016037This I can read but it's just awfully done, no taste, no skillIt's just garbage, there's absolutely nothing there that's done correctlyAnd this lineart really shows how low your skills are while you try to hide poor technical skill under endless detail and texture and that's the only gimmick you have managed to pull off in order to get anyone to give any complimentsFuck, it's kinda sad but you're also so delusional and lazy in terms of learning and improving that you kinda deserve to be in this situationYou don't even know what a storyboard is and the craziest thing is that you're a middle aged dude and not some naive high schooler
>>8016037SOVL
>>8016042Bro, you shit all over Peril. Keep doing what you're doing. Just avoid taking over threads too often
>>8016037
Is this weird? Yes.Does the author have issues? Probably yeah, but thats a requirement for art. All in all this is cool as its own weirdly cool thing. Solid outsider art vibes, kinda wanna see the current art just to see if and what changed since 2024.
>>8016076You should lurk more. He posts whatever he makes all over this board.
>>8016076Can you actually say what's going on in these pages? You clearly didn't even attempt to read it
>>8016076>just to see if and what changed since 2024.OP made this in 1983, he's clearly a permabeg who doesn't have the capacity to improve
>>8016087Is this the infamous "Gary"? I've seen that name came across randomly many times in this board.
>>8016066The person who this thread is intended for does manage to read my bad writing. And why is it bad?Because these are Storyboards and intended for no one but myself. And now, for someone who likes it enough so far to make fan art like this. Quick, clean, competent, and by some miracle, Enthusiastic. I want him to see the story so far so he might try his hand at doing it.
>>8016095Mea culpa.But I have been using a GT overlapping during high school.
>>8016141
Back to the show.And once again, this isn't the final result, just a shooting script.
And that is as far as it's gotten. I did two more pages, with far more detailing in the panels with the intent of adding word balloons afterwards in some app.
And a fresh photo of the other.
It started with this, btw. A portrait of Cassandra as something to draw. What's she doing? Making magic. What kinda magic? Invent a visual metaphor for the effect. Have the Professor admire it. Dialog springs into their mouths, and a conversation sprouted around their portraits like mushrooms.
The only thing about this guy I haven't been able to figure out is why he hangs around /ic/ and not /i/.Dude's a schizo for sure. I can understand that he's lonely and frustrated, it comes out in his art, but he seems sincere in his art.So why does he seem to exclusively post on the board that hates art the most?
>>8016704wait theres another art board? tf is "oekaki?" is it less dead than this one? also yes schizo unc clearly has a troubled life.
>>8016141Thanks anon! Don't worry your writing is totally readable, it may be hard for people on their phones maybe.You're actually correct in your assessment of how an storyboard should look. Your work here fits that perfectly..About me trying to attempt at doing your magnum opus here, I really don't feel qualified for that. Your work has SOVL, as others said many times. No one can replicate that. I do simple coom, devoid of any complexity, commitment or seriousness. Your style is so baroque and it has that rough "indie comic" and retro Gothic Darkness from the 70s/80s, you shouldn't let anyone re-do your style.About picrel, I did a homage to one of my favorite panels in the comic that you posted here. That panel was hot for some reason lol. I see you have fun doing these stories, you should keep doing more of these "storyboards" making new tales.About my "spin-off" comic I will post it here I guess, and I'll keep posting new pages if I'm allowed to. My story is supposed to have many sex scenes, and even though I made the girl human, saving those ears and the "button nose", I'm not sure if I'm in the clear. So probably I will be deterred to finish it here. We will see.
>>8016704>>8016706/i/ is way more dead than this board. If you send this poor guy there he will rope himself drown in a deeper depression. Here at least you have feedback, even if it is just insults and mockery. Sometimes what you need is a kick in the teeth to get your shit together.
>>8016745his output is good atleast. he just needs to work on form and line weight, make his characters more readable before doing stories
Schribblefurry anon has a cool style but I also have to admit it's messy, all over the place and also unappealing and not inviting me to read the story
>>8016774Getting inside the mind of one the weirdest schizos in this board should be enough incentive to take a look at it.
>>8016780I'd rather look at Crumb's, Kago's, or Zaskòrski's unhinged comics though. There's so much cool stuff out there with appealing art. Also, I'd rather get into the mind of Darger if I could single out one schizo I had to understand.I think the furryscribble schizo could produce some interesting comics if he studied more how others worked and if he actually spent time on making layouts beforehand. It looks like he plans his works poorly and improvises most of it.
Also, I think the drawings could benefit from a teensy tiny bit less hatching. And I say this as this board's Number One Gorey Fan
>>8016784one thing no one mentions to this guy is where are the shadows? the rendering? if you have something to show, show it
>>8016823That's the top landing of a wide open stair. Not a wall.
>>8016824i was talking about the op's art not goreys lol. he can learn from gorey
>>8016823His technicsl skills are near zero, I don't think he has actually studied anything and took "just draw" as serious adviceSame with those kim jung gi wannabes who have very low technical skill but they think being able to draw crude figures and shitty backgrounds in fisheye perspective makes them special
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PAGE 7I'll see if I can keep up this pace.. or how far can I go with the naughtiness.. It's supposed to be a romantic tale more than anything, I hope.. lol
>>8016016Anon how old are you unironically, everything about this screams that you were teenage if not an adult in 80s. I feel like im looking dark crystals fanart not to bully you.
>>8017070I think he's in his 50s. Doesn't mean it's too late for him to improve though
>>8017057>>8017059>>8017060>>8017061>>8017067>>8017069I'ma be real with you, you've got way too much text, especially the narration. A lot of it can be simplified, or excised completely with the art taking up the role of it.I also think your strip format might be holding you back. You could probably have some more dynamic panels and compositions if you were using a standard full page format.
>>8016855>took "just draw" as serious adviceIt is serious advice. This guy's drawings are unappealing, but he has an artistic outlet and distinctive style nonetheless, while all you have is 4chan posts.
>>8017199It's true that drawings are better than no drawings. But the next step is to work on making better drawings because appealing drawings are better than unappealing drawings
>>8017181Thanks for the feedback anon! Actually, all of those points continue to be brought up time and time again, and I keep explaining each one every time, lol. I used to do vertical comic format, wich of course allows better figure composition and more varied and dynamic poses. But that amount of "artistic freedom" becomes unmanageable. A vertical page becomes incredibly lengthy I could be working on it for days, and after is done I end up absolutely drained. And the standard comic page format requires too much thought on the lay out, you have to take your time to do a proper comic page. So I need brutal and shitty boundaries and limitations to force myself to get one of these pages finished within a day. It's the only way. At least for me. I can't afford to spend too much time with this. And about the text, that's the thing that I love the most, that's why I left that blank space above, to fill it with text, if I can, lol. People seem to deny themselves the pleasure and joy of indulging themselves, with the things THEY like and savor the most.A quick WIP on page 8... I'm gonna take a nap.. he he
I would like to draw my graphic novel in strip form while videoing myself in hyperlapse,then dissect, color, tweak and embellish the raw art into hardcopy books. But we don't always get to do what we like.Last year I couldn't draw until November or so. And the variables that were responsible for this are still in play, so I have been doing studies. Pencil followed by ballpoint, ballpoint followed by gel ink, pencil followed by gel ink. And trying to render ivory hair over white fur obscuring a dark wood chair and a holographic image too. Things best figured out by the attempting. And I put the results here. When I do something For Realzies, you will definitely know it. It will be on a tshirt for sale.
>>8017270Do you have any response to the critique given earlier?
>>8017255>And about the text, that's the thing that I love the most, that's why I left that blank space above, to fill it with text, if I can, lol. People seem to deny themselves the pleasure and joy of indulging themselves, with the things THEY like and savor the most.Guess I can't argue with that, carry on.
>>8017330As I await news of life changing events this week, I will have a better idea of what I will have in the way of drawing time. And once I know that, I can direct my efforts. I composed my last eight or so works randomly, starting in a spot, drawing stuff, branching outwards and composing a situation, then stuffing the negative spaces with background material. To get some rendering in so once I get everything inked then properly scanned, I can proceed with other areas of my education long put off.Like this thing. A finalist in my tshirt design project, this will be dissected as its colored, and I will see what Photoshop legerdermain can do to give it the faux 3D look its background will have. And I need to see how my style needs to alter to accommodate the expected Photoshop treatment. Which means doing other things first to learn such answers.
>>8017395Negative space is important for the brain to grab onto shapes. You should embrace having a few values and larger contrast in a drawing
>>8016016How many threads about your art will you make?
>>8016039Last time you claimed it's not a comic, but a storyboard
>>8017181I disagree with this anon.Peril perfected his method and I think it's the future of comics. The low exposition, terse dialogue garbage is for the Dobson's of this world
>>8017134wow, really? 50 year olds use 4chan?
>>8017512Only the insane onesOne day OP will be this century's Henry Darger
>>8017512People who were 20 when 4chan launched are 40 now, anon
>>8017512This is an old style website for older generations.Most people here are 30+ nowadays.
>>8017553Yeah, like being a 30+ I can't stand tiktok not even for a minute, I guess youngsters would feel the same about this site. For them it must feel like staring at a wikipedia article.
>>80175534chan is a millennial website not a Gen X website
>>8017069 >> PAGE 8 DONE>>8017470Thanks anon! As you pointed it out, in this last page I didn't had any extra text for these panels, so I took the time to come up with some words to describe the action.. and as I said, I enjoy the FUCK out of that. It's like solving a hot entertaining puzzle. Why would anyone reject any added value opportunity of any sort? If some are not interested in the text, just don't read it. But to "hate it", and to demand the non existence of it.. it just leaves me staggered. It's like there's actually a biological difference from people from decades ago, and the "new people". I'm not too old, but I got to live the visual novel craze, and the fanfic era, wich is all about story and world immersion. You wanted more, always more, to drown your brain into that experience. Reading books for these people must be a real nightmare.>>8016016Woah, I didn't pay proper attention to this OP cover art, this is freaking NICE. The way those two girls are placed in the background and that cup occupies the forefront so successfully. That's a freaking success in composition.
>>8017668This is unpleasant and ugly
>>8017668This anon clearly has skill but I have to second that it looks not very appealing.
>>8017665So?, Aren't millennials on their 30's?
>>8017457That was a storyboard from this story. It was my original Product, something that I was trying to create in my spare time, and employing Photoshop Legerdermain to make this possible. A once a week upload to keep up traffic, and designed to be offered to newspapers and magazines, a story told in a standard format.
>>8017512I'm 61. And knew about 4chan from hunting down interesting looping GIFs to chop up for animated paintings and doodads to sell in Second Life. I used to lurk at the Daily Rotten because the inmates had cool images I wouldn't know where to find on my own. The trail led to 4chan. I never saw /b/ which means my FBI file is only gigabytes and not terabytes. :D
>>8018042Even at 61 it's not impossible to improve your art, fren.
>>8017668 >> PAGE 9 DONE!>>8017679I try my best! I'll improve! I promise! Do you have some advice for more pleasant and pretty designs?>>8017687THANK YOU SO MUCH ANON! What's your favorite artist? Maybe I can get some good pointers...>>8018042I've never got into Second Life, it scared me for some reason.
>>8018690Maybe you should say gasp instead of smirk at the very end? The text contradict the panel there, it took me out of the story a bit.Good shiit otherwise
>>8017057>>8017059>>8017060>>8017061Is this the same artist as OP?That's a totally different style.
>>8018694lol no, that one is "peril." op is "gary." or atleast i think thats what they go by. both post alot of art on this board.
>>8018690 >>PAGE 9 "Fixed">>8018692I added your suggestion. I knew about that, but I let is slip just because of laziness. Originally she was supposed to smirk at it, but she needs to say something else and that won't work in the last panel. So the smirk expression will be at the start of the next page. This is the problem with "my system", I got everything so extremely "mechanized" that once I "GO" then I won't stop and I won't deviate from anything that I got set up (rough sketch and text wise) till I finish the page. "No second takes" lol. But you're right, I was expecting nobody to call me out in this dark lonely corner of the board. xDThank you!!!>>8018694No, I just did some fanart of Gary's OC's in this thread >>8012009>>8012666 and then I had an idea for a little fanfic "spin-off" tale on Milo reminiscing about a romantic memory wich left him brokenhearted. I just want to finish this story, it may take 20 pages in total.>>8018700Yeah Peril-fag is the name I got in /Beg/ lol
You should make drawings with more appeal. Watch anime to learn how.
>>8017665SA adjacent and most SA posters are 50+ now, Moot was underageB& when he got bullied from that forum for being a weeb and he's 45 now, if OP is telling the truth he's not even the oldest known poster (that's Epstein! yay lets go 4chinz!). These are the people that shaped the entire internet, it's humor, layouts, communities and many other things. Your art is amazing , really like these >>8017395>>8017270>>8016037 your art is obviously not /beg/ at all lol, this is /adv/ or /int/ , don't listen to the jealous trolls most appreciate your artwork
>>8019503I remember being part of the wave of AOL users that ruined the internet for the first time. Maybe that's why I'm soft on zoomers for putting the final nail in the coffin
>>8018707huge fan, redlineanon
>>8018707 >> PAGE 10 DONE!>>8019678LMAO!!! Appeal anon? Is that you? Am I redline anon? or is that you? I haven't made a redline in years!
>>8019683I know you as redline anon.>appeal anon?nahjust wanted to say i'm a big fanlove yourself (draw more nuns)
>>8019503Not beg.Lol.
>>8019685>(draw more nuns)THANK YOU ANON!!! I think I know you as the "nun-anon" lol.Yeah nuns are hot. If I do some nun story I can't use this shitty "comic" style. I would have to use a MUCH bigger canvas to make some really good nuns. And I don't have that quality and amount of free time right now.In the meanwhile here you have a Sparky nun. I don't know how nuns and religion fit in Gary's "Prickles world". Maybe they can exist in the form of "priestesses" I don't know.>>8019732He has a very particular style, you can't put him simply on "beg". He's in that "fairy-tale / fantasy illustration genre". That type of artists stay in a genre of their own during their entire career. This guy as most people, had to sacrifice art and keep it in the back of his priorities to actually take care of subsistence in the real world out there. Same as me, same as everyone else. The difference that I made was to try a Digital tablet and actually find it fun and easy to use. Otherwise I wouldn't be drawing nothing at all.
Everybody always tells me my art is ugly so I guess I can post here.
BINGO. Who's missing in the oldfag schizo roster? pixel schizo anon?
>>8019767It’s like a permabeg justice league.
>the crustacean recoils at the thought of someone having funngl i'd kill myself if i was like that
>>8019770Team UNCLE for the fucking win! Look at these slick cool cats, drippin hip and style.
>>8019765NOOOOOOOOO!!!! Duuuude you were part of the team already! Come back here! Damn it!
>>8019754Yes, years of setbacks,problems and misfires. Even now I am waiting for news that will determine what shape my life takes in the future. Then I can point my efforts properly. In the meantime, I will figure out art through the random projects that I have been doing, and hope.What I wanted to do is this :https://youtu.be/tCE1GQHCdDc?is=9kjWONeNdZ-aDi12https://youtu.be/UoTBkDRWCSw?is=4wCQQoD7js4p2bX5https://youtu.be/D2gEr0dIf1k?is=BEekoinKkLhGk9AuA story that unfolds before your eyes. The channel needs work, the videos need soundtracks, and these are things I need to learn how to do for myself. But once done, I would be happy watching a tale grow as I once chased a story I wasn't expecting for over a decade over 180 strips.
>>8019814>starts drawing without a planYeah, that's what it looks like. You should learn how to properly plan your comics and not just go for it if you want to have a flying chance at publishing your things somewhere. Even if you have cancer then that's no excuse.
>>8019962The idea is to let the viewer see the story spontaneously evolving. The Photoshop legerdermain afterwards will make it sellable.
>>8016066>He didn't read the spark keeper arcNGMI
>>8020026>The idea is to let the viewer see the story spontaneously evolvingThat's just an excuse for being lazy.
>>8016162Mucho texto. I'm not going to read all that shit when the art isn't even good.
>>8019683 >> PAGE 11 DONE!This one came out better than the previous one I think. Maybe is a placebo effect derived from staying in the "zone" 5 hours every day, the build up inertia makes me push quality a little bit further without noticing any actual "extra" effort. I hope I can finish this story before getting crushed lol>>8019814WOW! You really do that with no plan or previous sketch?! With a pen?! DUDE, that 's quite the performance feat. It's a crime that you didn't get to explore your art skillz sooner. I hope you get that chance.>>8020035LOL! Exactly xDDD I love this board.>>8020086It's crazy to me when someone rejects a mystery or a puzzle of any kind, specially if it is an artistic one.>>8020471NICE!!! Go on.. please...
>>8020949 >> PAGE 11 FIXEDDAMN IT! I'm sorry! I had to fix a couple mistakes, again...
>>8020995>*PSST!*YOU'RE IN THE WRONG THREAD.javascript:quote('952789129');
>>8020999Target Market LOCATED!
>>8020085The idea revolves around SPONTANEOUSLY WRITING A STORY.Being 60+ now, I have conceived a business model for my artistic output, which is to grow a fanbase with consistently timely uploads and sell compilation hardcopy books and tshirts. And since the premise is at least uncommon, it will be a worthy monument to the zeitgeist. I have yet to scan the raw art, so I have not explored what I can do with it in Photoshop. I guess I will need to assemble a library of imagery for the colored background elements. It's all about planning. And having the time for plans.
>>8020086Well, its not meant for public consumption, just a thing that I used in a normie draw your comic life diary to justify the $10 I spent on it 4 years ago. I'd not confine myself to this artificial restriction of pre rendered panels to tell my stories For Real, but it was part of the fun composing it. Which brings me to...>>8020970You! :DYour skills impress me. And I am happy the premise has you inspired. I would not stop what you are doing now, but I will still extend the invitation to retell my story. As an education for you, to force yourself to interpret a writer's story but keep the ideas and images faithful to the source material. I am curious what you will make of it.
What’re they gonna do, ban me?
>>8021153Shirts doko? i want my spark and ogres shirt.
>>8021320Nothing wrong with that. It's the rough from which you will make the real drawing from.
PAGE 12 WIP.. he he..>>8021164>I will still extend the invitation to retell my story.Thanks anon!!!! That's very tempting, you're right, I'm curious too about the result of that. I would like to do it, But, I really want to finish this "side-story". I'll see what I can do, I need to plan for it. I was thinking that I could use your pages as templates and just "re-draw" everything using the same composition. We will see!>>8021320Lucky "Spark Keeper" enjoyer.. lol... I'm thinking that probably I could be banned first. I'll have to censor the sexy scenes in this story in "manga style" pixelation or something to avoid that. The love story about Milo and Sparky is more important than their sex scenes really.>>8021065Cool retro style!
>>8021853It's in the cards.
>>8020970 >> PAGE 12 FINISHED>>8021733NICE!!!! Saved for the ref folder!>>8021915Welp, the "intention" is there, wich is the driving element. Let's see if everything else in our reality's realm want's to align as well.
>>8021853>”Spark Keeper”What?
>>8022051The storyboards above are about a young human male being gifted three anthromorph slave girls as part of the culture of the rich and powerful. When a boy hits puberty a slave girl is assigned to be his " spark keeper", to tend the spark of budding manhood, by being his fuck toy.
PAGE 13 WIP... hopefully we should be half way into the story, but knowing me I'll probably be adding more "exxxtra" pages...>>8022051OP tells about that here >>8016017
>>8022359Her face looks kinda weird in profile
>>8022589Is this one better? Yeah, I wasn't sure about it. I'm glad I'm posting these WIP's, otherwise I would have go on with that face.Also I show there the difference in working area size, If I work at a big sized canvas (as I would like to) I can do MUCH better stuff, but then, time and effort would increase exponentially. Like, a page that takes me 5hs to do at a height of 1400pixels, at 3000+pixels would take me 16HS or more. And these projects would become undoable time wise. That's why figures in some panels look so basic and "thick lined", I'm working at a tiny scale, but it allows me to do this incredibly fast xD
>>8022009 >> PAGE 13 FINISHED!We're getting there.. hee-hee..
>>8022690That's way better
>>8023509Now go beyond the rough.Make a line drawing from this.
PAGE 14 Work-In-Progress... I rushed up this one, but I have to hurry up. I need to finish this story no matter how the final result ends up looking.>>8023509I love your rough sketches, more than your finished pieces for some reason. Your sketches oozes pure unaltered SEXO>>8023710You have such a distinctive style. Like some GWAR-esque alien art freak escaped from the 80's.
>>8023720I was trying to make a project to educate myself in various processes that I felt the need to get familiar with. This was to build a tshirt design from the ground up, having had ambitions in the distant past,and I still wear my prototype. I wanted to make a "modular" shirt, one with a framing outer area that would contain new inner art, so I could just make new centerpieces for the frame, generating new products faster and with color variants potentially dozens from one piece of art.First the frame had to be correct. I had a tshirt template to utilize, and I decided to have one design for both sides of the shirt, so the edges had to meet exactly to give the illusion of the frame wrapping around the torso. This I thought I did,but the prototype has a grey null stripe where the art should have joined seamlessly. And even worse,the bulk of the center artwork gets stuffed down your pants, and only the top eye is peeking up out of your zipper like a periscope, or something else. So the next version would be 65% frame and the centerpieces stuffed up by the chest.
>>8023754I witnessed many entrepreneurs having all sorts of (disastrous) problems trying to manufacture and sell T-Shirts. Size issues, the main one. People are very picky, they want the right size when you probably can produce only one or two sizes. Also on delivery, people suddenly realizes that they don't like what they got, and they want to return it, but by then you are already losing money, money that you expected to get from selling those products, wich you need to pay the loan you took to start the business in the first place. Be warned, Clothing business is a very tricky and problematic one.
>>8023720Ah,Gwar! I have a story about them! :DThey appeared in a small club in New Jersey, and my friends and I were camped out in the front row. The audience was a sea of skull shirts, black with the best art on the back of it for inspiring the envy of everyone behind you. All except me. My shirt was white,and the art was on the front. A wonderful detailed head of Larry Fine of the Three Stooges, GLARING at you. And on top of that, I was having a fine time being annoying. Instead of cheering, I just would growl like a caveman Ruh Ruh Ruh!When Sleazy P Martini tried getting the crowd to chant for Slaughterama, I chanted for Gor Gor, something that couldn't fit on that stage. Oderous Humongous wouldn't go out onstage after a while, and I started to behave, screaming for Slaughterama. " Yeah,Slaughterama!",Sleazy yelled at me," And NOT RUH RUH RUH!"
>>8023760No problem like that ever existed for me. The store was online,and ordering a product would have another website handling the manufacturing and delivery as needed,providing all sizes and shirt styles as required. All I needed to do was stick my art into their templates and watch the profits roll in. My problem was getting a pause between the payment depositing and the manufacturing starting, making the cash outlay my problem for the product generating, but I suppose it was some statistics that I could have tweaked to solve it.
>>8023720>more than your finished pieces for some reasonI can’t disagree. I don’t know why things aways go so wrong in the process of completing a piece. Maybe I overthink it. Or maybe I try to finish things in a way that’s not compatible with the sketch’s style.
>>8023803Just redraw it using it as a reference. The rough sets the scene but isn't the scene. You build one from it. If you feel intimidated, just draw very lightly and commit to the lines that you find useful by making them darker.
>>8022832 >> PAGE 14 DONE>>8023754>>8023774I'm glad you know what you're doing with the shirts thing, that's cool!>>8023764LOL! Great little story! Rest in Eternal Gunk, Captain Oderus!>>8023803I love how these compositions of yours have that cozy domestic ambiance. If a "medium" (in this case a rough sketch) is already successful to convey the "vision" of your idea, then that should be enough as a final rendering format. I personally don't need a super rendered version of that image you did. You should keep doing more, endless drawings like those portraying hot feverish scenarios and situations.>>8023816Really cool designs! You're immensely creative!
At least we’re keeping permabegs contained now.
>>8024729permabegs belong to /beg/
>>8024732No. The people in /beg/ can improve. These can’t.
both of them display technique and beauty in their piecesbut NOOOOOOOOO you must call shit everything that doesnt validate your porn addiction and dickgirls imageboard culturestab yourselves in the legs until the knife lands in holes.
>>8024752lol no.
>>8024734>These can’tThe best artist in the entirety of this website is posting his work in this thread. What are you on about?
Every line a lesson.Every breath a parable.
>>8024821lol I don’t know which schizo u mean none have appeal
I need to redo Fox woman’s head.
>>8024483 >> PAGE 15 DONE!>>8024843I can't believe you did this in 2026? It looks impossible. That's incredible commitment to your craft!>>8024873pyw? p..please?>>8025194Nice hot shorts on that racoon babe!
>>8025527>pyw? p..please?like I want my work connected to loosers
>>8025585You shouldn't be so insecure around frens. We all post our ugly shit here for fun, and it is great.
/schizo/
>>8025846At least they draw.
>>8025527 >>PAGE 16 FINISHED!
>>8027805WOW! Dude you really are a rare artistic treat in this board. I just finished Page 17 of my lurid comic "Milo fan-fic", but I don't want to overstep on this beautiful piece you just posted. Instead I'll re-post a little scribble I did a while ago using your amazing furry creatures as ref.
>>8027830That was a remake of this.After Covid ate my website, I didn't draw for over two years. Then I found marijuana and exploded. I began a story based on this fragment and was resolved to be happy with whatever made it to paper, so thought up a story with the joy I had thinking up the Snowglobe story. It petered out and I moved on to other things. But something to bait the trolls with.:D
>>8027805Oy gevalt
>>8027830Ya got me working blue again!
>>8026739 >> PAGE 17 DONE! Alright the lurid aspect of the story begins, from now on it should flow quickly to the conclusion of the story.>>8027839Oh I see, that previous version looks sick too! But that new version of the plant screaming OY! is absolutely spectacular!I can't take weed, it makes me extremely and dangerously paranoid LOL. I think I was born naturally over stimulated.>>8027912Milo having a good time huh... I bet that bitch Murielle is lurking around ready to ruin his fun time lol
Finally finished this one!
>>8027839I draw while high a lot too although I can never be sure if that helps or hinders my work.
>>8028141Wonderful!I like the pattern around the lamp. And the figures are well composed.
>>8016016I have a soft spot for sort of vintage styles like this. Wanted to do my own take while not straying too far from the source
>>8028726Plants sure are whiners.
>>8028779
>>8017134A true outsider artist...When they find him dead his sketches will be worth thousands, half a million for the entire body of work.
>>8019685Redline anon is a name that is already attributed to someone else. Might cause confusion.Peril is most commonly known as Peril.
>>8028134 >> PAGE 18 FINISHED!>>8028141Nice coloring work anon!>>8028748WOOOW, THAT'S FUCKING GREAT! SAVED!!! I'm having these designs as future refs for sure! I would like to see your version of the third girl "Yvette".>>8028726>>8029057These pages are like beautiful art pieces. I love the final design of Mr Prickles there. Your commitment to draw him each time with that same level of detail is incredible.
>>8029496Aren't both the same person? Isn't this redliner and "peril" the same artist?>/RLG/ - Red Line General Ihttps://warosu.org/ic/thread/6650734>/RLG/ - Red Line General IIhttps://warosu.org/ic/thread/6690796>/RLG/ - Red Line General IIIhttps://warosu.org/ic/thread/6708812
>>8029057At least the text is readable but the fuck is happening in the top right, I seriously can't tell
>>8029563Looks like his style. Odd, because I have redline anon in memory without any style. Much like post >>6659041 in the first link.Peril is really a valuable part of /ic/. I must have missed the redline era.
>>8029582Jeremey is rearing back in surprise at the OyOy laughing.
>>8029992Pwned, mutha fucka!
>>8029559Thanks! Went a little more off model with her
>>8030354I'm still trying to figure her out myself. The curls especially. Trying to adapt the algorithm for Jeremey's hair spikes for Yvette, but making them wider.
And speaking of figuring things out...I realized that I never thought of how an anthromorph would look naked. And after the duel of manners in the one post had me thinking about the reasons Cassandra would strike such a pose for the Professor, and how it comes out in her expression.
>>8029559 >> PAGE 19 FINISHED!>>8030354Man, this is fucking GREAT! I love that Vintage Erotica style of girl you do, with the hair-style and everything. I would love to see your "human female" art..>>8031162Wow, making a sex scene with that crazy detailed style would be a nightmare! That's a really nice hair effect there, most people struggle so much doing hair and "hairy" stuff in general.>>8029650This has a very Harry Potter-esque vibe!>>8030504COOL!>>8029563Yeah I'm that redliner. Although, there were a couple others doing a few redlines too, one in particular contributed with quite a few redlines.>>8029595>valuable part of /ic/THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!!!
>>8031484hey man just dropping in to say i still hate your work, dont keep it up. you arent a valuable part you're an attention whore who desperately wants to be a personality here>>8030504this guy is actually /ic/ culture
>>8031484I attempted that with this one shot.Peter and Lissanna have an interesting dynamic. She sees him initially as a way out of her small town (despite being in a highly adventurous place), but falls in love with his selflessness and his bravery. But after seeing the five females that he allowed into his life being destroyed by arch mage hunting for him, he shuns her advances because he couldn't bear another dying from getting too close.
If I was one of the artists in this thread I’d fucking kill myself.
>>8031545But you're not even that, lol
>>8031553Thank god.
>>8031545>>8031553Budding gay romance!:D
>>8031545I don't really like some aestetic choises of OP, but I wish I had a quarter of his skill
>>8032017Your the gay faggot, homo!
>>8032157We're very understanding about such things in 4chan.It's okay.You can both hate me and just adore massive veiny futa cocks together. It's adorable (if you have a strong stomach).
On with the show...Tried another pen on the next couple of pages, and its bad.
Muddy brown ink not fit for anything.
Last of the bad pen.
>>8033168The ink looks the same to me?
>>8033206And I found black Bic ballpoint pens.
>>8033427They’re “Bic ballpoint pens of color,” bigot.
>>8033452No,this was done with Bic pens of Color...:D
>>8031484 >>PAGE 20 DONE! This "flashback/dream" scene was added as an afterthought, this is how projects get out of hand... Damn it.>>8031492>whore who desperately wants to be a personality hereLOL, Nothing could be further from the truth.>this guy is actually /ic/ cultureI totally agree with that.>>8031495I see, a tragic story, interesting. The kind of heartbreaking love story that I like to explore with my art most of the time heh heh..>>8032498>>8033427You got some freaking cool designs right there! That forest creature is SICK!>>8033571HOLY WOW! The pen hatching there is damn tight!
>>8033606 >> PAGE 21 DONE! I have ready all of this "dream" sequence (pages 19 to 24). Hopefully I can focus on Milo and Sparky now, and finish this story.
>>8033660 >> PAGE 22 DONE!
>>8033683 >>PAGE 23 DONE! Alright, schizo nightmare arc is over. Now back to Dr Milo and Sparky. It's time for them to have some fun finally.
>>8033606Peter, like I, would not consider any close relationship when pursued by the bounty hunters sent by an archmage you escaped from his particularly cruel slavery. And after watching five innocent young girls he dared befriend have gruesome ends because of getting caught in the crossfire, doubly determined to not be tempted to bring another to her doom.Or so he thinks.A storyline that I have held in my head after products several graphic novels (LOL) was a confrontation with the arch wizard after Peter relates to Jeremey about each of these unfortunate girls and their adventures together, and his account of their supposed demises. Unknown to him,all survived and show up on his doorstep a bit pissed off at being abandoned or whatever each filling in details of what really happened to them. Then they all start bitching at once, and Peter runs from the house. Jeremey yells at them all about what Peter was unburdening himself of, mourning all of them with chains of guilt tying up his heart. Then he goes to find Peter.
>>8033606Jeremey finds Peter a short way away kneeling in the tall grass, weeping hysterically. Jeremey tries to comfort him, saying that he told them off for being wrong about things. But then Jeremey notices something odd.Peter is laughing as well as crying. Can't tell one from the other, Jeremey states, not sure what to make of it. Peter catches his breath and says with joy :>"They're ALIVE! All of them! I didn't make them die!"Then he stands. The beginning of the story was a bounty hunter was in the vicinity and Jeremey and Peter were lying low, when Jeremey asked why he didn't like Lissanna back. Then the sequence of five flashbacks, Peter then resolves to go along with the bounty hunter straight to the arch mage.
>>8033684DamnWhat a rush
>>8033571HAH! Well you’ve got me there. Do you mess with these?
>>8033874That's what I used.
I, so high right now
>>8033684 >>PAGE 24 FINISHED!>>8033777 (checked)>>8033790Damn, poor Peter, he had to carry that weight all of that time, still tragic. And Prickles is a great guy taking care of his friend like that.>>8033800Yeah I have other "hardcore role-play" ideas for Sparky, but it will probably end up in the "ideas" bottomless pit. lol.>>8034063Dude, this is real art. I feel like a low filthy retarded monkey doing a coomer fanfic of Dr Milo.>>8034066This is fucking excellent. Your rough sketches are so freaking good.
It's this permaprebeg again with his trash art
>>8034267There it is.
>>8034234>averaged more than 1 entire comic page per day>still drew other things while at itSome people might not like your drawings, but there isn't a single person who could say you're lazy.I really don't know how you do it but impressive stuff my good dude.
>>8016016good art, but it reminds me of this bastard
>>8016016you are the reason art had rules and was gatekept for centuries
At least /ic/‘s worst artists are contained here.
>>8034861There is no bad art.Each work is a stepping stone to better things.
>>8034897So when are you going to start making better things?
>>8034930Soon.I just finished inking that,and have a couple of more pencil drawings that need inking as well. Then I can drag them all to Staples and scan them so I can do the computer side of the research. How to color, how to draw to anticipate coloring, and then I can get started on the YouTube channel and setting up shop for systematic video production and promotion. Things I need to learn, processes that need forging and refining. A definitive sense of what my free time will be like in the foreseeable future, and how best to use that time. A variable that is uncertain even now. So I have amused myself with things random and educational, in hopes of better times, which might be coming at long last. I was never much of an optimist. I have dared to share these storyboards, rendering tests and designs here, and have been driven to my knees in bitter self reproach from the comments...(Or would have,if I gave a shit! : D )But although everyone misses the point of what these recent works are, the homework for future projects, like the extras on a DVD showing what the production imagery was like before it was morphed into the movie you just watched. When you see something of mine presented for judgement, it will be on a tshirt and the jury will be the marketplace.
The Prince was just a vague scribble on the other page that I based the full sized sketch on.
>>8034234 >>PAGE 25 FINISHED!>>8034510WOW! THANK YOU ANON! Very kind of you! Yeah, I understand their critique though. I do these pieces in an absolute rush. Like this one, I just did. I had a few busy days, and I couldn't even touch the tablet. Now I have my daily free hours again, and I'm gonna be rushing these pages like a madman again, and the art style suffers of course. I'm not oblivious to that fact.But it is the only way to make this, I can't spend a week to do just one "masterpiece" of a coom comic page, it would take me a year to finish just one story, and my brain can't stay focused that long in one project anyway lol. Thanks again anon!!!>>8034737You don't know nothing about art. OP must be one the few REAL artists in this board. And by "real" I mean: trad+sovl.>>8035747>>8035941>>8036561Thanks for sharing these! >>8035126>in hopes of better timesThat's exactly it. Whatever we do to keep hope alive is worth it. A happy life is build on a sequence of happy moments, even if those happy moments are just happy little drawings. Most people only have the hopelessness of a cold screen showing them virtual fantasies built in virtual factories. To be able to have a mind and a body able to create and experience worlds and fantasies from within their own souls, is a most divine privilege.
>>8034234>>8037179 >>PAGE 25 -FIXED-I had to do a full revision on the last page. Being away from the drawing board for a few days threw me out of it, gotta get into it back again now.
>>8037179Yes, I champion both the joy of storytelling and world building. And I like to point new artists in useful directions when it comes to the craft aspects of drawing something "worthwhile", or in hopes of some later work with that nebulous quality. I am glad to witness true Inspiration and have no advice whatsoever for you, and that is the compliment. :D
And this is where the character came from...
One of the crew members is an old Gilligan, Bob Denver from Far Out Space Nuts.
>>8039012Study some fundamentals of drawing instead of winging it and vibin' all the time.
>>8037273 >>PAGE 26 FINISHED!>>8037427Thank you so much anon! Very kind words! The kindest! Thank you.I have only one question for you, about those "devices", with multiple arms, holding tools. What can you tell me about them? Do they have a technical name? I'm thinking that a multi-arm, multi-purpose instrument like that can be used in quite interesting ways in my naughty tale... heh heh..>>8038247WOAOH.. That's one crazy piece. Pretty interesting also.>>8038248Cooool!>>8039499Let him vibe, he's doing cool stuff
I won’t draw anymore.
i wish i was dead desu, this isnt meant to funny or subversive or relatable in any way, i just wish a big ass truck squashed me and killed me on the spot
>>8039642Same, bro.
>>8037273>>8039520>>PAGE 26 -FIXED- Sorry I had to fix a couple of typos and I re-phrased some of the text too.>>8039625>>8039642>>8039649Drawing will save your life.
>>8039722 >>PAGE 27 FINISHED!I'm doing batches of 4 pages "at once" (sorta). So 28 and 29 should be finished soon.
>>8039520Milo is the son of the Chief Articifer for the pocket of civilization they call a kingdom, and was educated from the age of four. So he's a gadgeteer akin to Tony Stark, a master engineer at the age of 12. It was then the tragedy that compelled him to become a medical doctor at 16 happened: an anthromorph girl he cared deeply for died from an accident, and the human men that could have saved her just showed their contempt for another useless Critter (a derogatory term) just proved evolution right by letting her stupidity cull her from the gene pool. Such opinions aren't universally shared among Trueborn humankind, but to consider anthromorphs beneath human folk was to be the "normal " thought, and with anthromorph enslavement being an institution of the society, whether or not its a truth in actuality. Imagine Rome was running Western Civilization, and the idea of intelligent cattle under their rules and regulations. Milo hates it, and fights for the rights of all oppressed people with his technology. His eagle headed walking stick has an internalized interdimensional space organized kinda like Windows, weapons, tools, useful helping hands, all conjured out of the vibrations of intersecting planes within the staff. It has a crystal core,and through vibrational attunement pocket dimensions can be created and accessed like so many folders. He has a haversack, a bag also compartmentalized like Windows folders, holding useful but less needful things, like butter for Mister Buttertoes. The drone spy video feeds to the interior of his glasses, as well as tiny screens with data when needed. And at the university where this story happens resides the pioneer of the compartmentalized spaces technology Professor Fump MacDoodle, inventor of the Omnihat.
>>8039723 >>PAGE 28 FINISHED! Alright, LMAO! I can't believe I managed to fit all of what I wanted to write in that page xD, I can already hear the haters screaming from hell lol. Page 29 will be done soon. Then I guess I'll start another 4 pages batch like these. That seems to work well, to avoid getting burned or "bored" with the project.>>8039809Thanks!!! That's a lot to digest, I'll have to read it a few more times to get a good idea of what to do with those devices.. mmhh..>>8039809
In the First Story, Peter wanders from lands still under anthromorph enslavement into the Professor's neck of the woods, and hitches a ride with him for a consultation over the problem of a local farmer with a succession of animals protruding from his nostril that the Professor's equipment cannot detect. Peter sizes up what sort of woman the farmer's wife is by her obsession with sheep and shepherdesses, and the decade long abandoned slave shacks he saw on the way there. Peter was content with assuming a bumpkin personna when dealing with certain humans with innate prejudices, but when she served sheep themed refreshments without a portion for Peter, Milo was outraged. Peter was the one who solved the cunnundrum by pointing out the living being has an electromagnetic field that would mask probes not attuned to it, the missing piece of the puzzle. Milo makes a stink, Peter bows out after thanking the Professor and leaves as the wife wishes for him to do. The Professor takes the time to utter harsh truths at the farmer's wife before pursuing Peter,who is nowhere to be seen.
>>8039625>>8039642>>8039649I hand you all a Purpose:https://youtu.be/1OSWR7xiQLk?is=-TT8Nk69tPLaNDw_Repeat until you get something that you want to draw again, then get to know it.An entity existing at your whim, reaching out from the White Expanse from the tip of your pen. A stranger in form, identity, and attitude. Feel these aspects out with rough drawing, like an animator trying to tell details through the stance and body language. Then draw the first Real drawing.
>>8040338 >>PAGE 29 FINISHED! Okay, now I'll do the rough sketches for the next 4 pages, and start the "all at once" process again. I think I found a sustaining method by doing it like that.>>8040346>>8040352Your work is such a trip, I like that it has a lot of "re-reading" potential.>>8040368>Cassandra's houseThat's freaking cool, I would like to understand what I'm looking at there. It seems like Cassandra lives in some sort of multidimensional realm.
>>8040600It's a stone sculpture that is the size of Rhode Island stuck on a spike. At the end of the war for anthromorph emancipation, the final confrontation was a race through bare stone valleys to an artifact called the Ontological Overdrive, essentially a Wish granting machine that would switch the wisher to the dimension where the requirements of fulfillment are achieved, the loophole for screwing you. When Cassandra got to it, she wished for a task worthy of her, and this thing appeared in the valley, causing hurricane winds as it displaced billions of square feet of air. She has been poking around for a decade on it, trying to unravel its secrets. The CRPG I would make from my work would be an AI game master letting the player explore the place, inventing scenarios and places as needed. A finite space, but one that will take years to explore, especially if you want to play the game and not just run as fast as possible to map it. AI personalities will be the NPCs, and as there is no agenda for motivating the player other than whatever they stumble across, you can stay in one spot and have a simulated RPG life like Daggerfall. It would be what I would be doing in the AIs place, picking a spot on this gigantic stone head and thinking about what is there and why.
>>8040600I lost track wasn’t he supposed to kill her or something?
>>8040661A dream sequence earlier that aroused him enough to seduce his spark keeper.
>>8042029That thing looks like it should have scaly skin but the way you draw makes it seem furry.
>>8042035Yes,she is a lizard like offworlder. And as I said at the beginning of this, I was happy with whatever made it to paper, not having drawn at all for over two years before it.
>>8040600So are these all collected anywhere?
>>8042281Right here. These aren't things that I would charge money for, unless it's specifically a collection of "storyboards" for the completist.
>>8042350Where could I read the first of these Sparky strips? Or, ideally, all of them? Seems like they would have an audience much larger than this board
>>8042447That strip started in the "post something you're proud of" thread.>>8004102The first five are there.
>>8040600 >>PAGE 30 FINISHED! Damn, this page was quite chaotic. I'm using this to try some stuff, without deviating too much of the style, but it shows. The style, and different types of figure anatomy are all over the place. A passable mess I hope. It is what it is. But I gotta keep going, and finish this.>>8040630Dude, THAT'S SICK!!!! I had no idea that your vision could be THAT grandiose and epic.So Cassandra lives in her own quantum universe. It's cool that your idea could be possible "now" that the AI technology is at hand. So a simple code could create random new quests, ad infinitum.>>8040661Just as he said >>8040699sparky will have a dream of her own later. During a quick nap in-between their sexual marathon day.>>8042281Again as he said >>8042350I only post in this site-board, I can't deal with social media, I really don't like that kind of user "dynamic". I don't like to 'log in' or managing accounts for this stuff. And I don't trust people, I have enough with people IRL to be an emotional hostage of a crowd of unknown randos out there. I prefer to avoid that at all cost. I wasn't born, neither raised, as an online/internet individual, like the new generations. I have a desperate natural need to stay as detached as possible from this online world.>>8042447Thanks anon! I just got caught in OP's work. I wrote a little "fan-fic" about one of his ideas, and now I have to finish it xD>>8042350>These aren't things that I would charge moneyTotally agree with that. I can't jeopardize something so special as this, just for some "finicky promise of market good will" as money is. I can get money sweeping floors, and it only cost me a few hours a day. Or I can get the "promise" of money in exchange of the only thing that grants me going everyday to a happy magical place where I can create anything I want and live anything I want. You can't put that on the table just to see what's in a gift box.
I’m still burnt out maybe I’ve just given up drawing.
Better to be ugly and hyperrealistic/impressively detailed than pretty yet cheap/lazy.You probably wont even notice those unpretty details years later anyway.
>>8042454Thanks, man!
>>8042696I follow his career with great interest!: D
And that's where I abandoned it.
https://youtu.be/JEQrViR-DwQ?feature=sharedMe drawing that. 22 minutes of silence. :D
Playing with the skyClouds zooming byThe switch is flipped The timeslide trippedOff you goOff you goDown to the NeverKnow.Breach the CascadeReach the UnMadeLight fills your eyesYour soul with surprise That is soThat is soHere in the NeverKnow.The Truth you seekYou cannot speakRunning this riftParameters driftThe lowest blowThe lowest blowKnown to the NeverKnow.And you get to landAll went as planned An altar to an altered stateTo embrace, entrance, elateWhat you showWhat you showTouched by the NeverKnow.(Broke out in poetry. Whoops!)
>>8042598 >>PAGE 31 FINISHED! Sorry I took a couple of days off, I was fiddling around with the script of the comic and I added a whole new arc, but it got too convoluted and cringy, though the main issue is that it will make the project even LONGER when I really need to focus in making it more concise and "finishable" (?) lol... So those were a couple of days lost. But I added a cool little Milo flashback to the story in the next pages, heh heh>>8043116Thank you so much man!! I think you will have to make a second part of this thread eventually to accommodate the rest of this comic. I really want to finish it.>>8043877These are really relaxing to watch.>>8044008That was fun to read!>>8042696I'm glad you enjoy it!
I thought I was going to be able to draw last night but I didn’t.
>>8045377If you can, smoke marijuana. It relieves fatigue, and gives me the whimsy to conquer my depression.
>>8045594No. It’s been weeks since I’ve been able to draw. I’m just going to play video games, now.
>>8045795Then you don't actually want to draw
>>8045829Fuck you, you cocksucking nigger fagot!
>>8045795Art isn't just drawing. If you can fill in a template, you can do a lot of profitable things. I designed the skin, hair, armor on a clothing layer, and physical bits like the teeth. The chainmail was made from a picture of a grate, and for regular clothes for real people, a few random button pushes in an app can be the Next Sensation that women will pay big bucks for.
>>8045832
>>8045842I prefer this one. Much sexier.
>>8045860>Much sexier.
>>8045795I stole the girly skull design from the Disney store. It was a Pirates of the Caribbean Keychain. The bat bra was inspired.
>>8046257
Did this in the same comic diary the Milo saga is in. It needs Photoshop legerdermain. But as a spontaneous creation, it works.
>>8045284 >>PAGE 32 FINISHED! Another weird mashup of styles lol. But we're getting there. Next page it's gonna be interesting for me.>>8045377>>8045795You sound familiar.. lol>>8046257>>8046259That's cool, I've never tried any 3D stuff.>>8046366Nice scenery composition! Your style is very artistic. If you open that image in Krita and go to "color" and then apply "color to alpha" it will turn the blank space of the page into a transparency. Pretty easy. I may test that now.
>>8046366Here, I made a quick test. Krita's color to alpha works quite well. Then you can just color under the pen/ink/scanned layer, with pretty good results. I used some basic flat colors. Looks like those old timey comics.
>>8046529Is this the do that they do? I didn't like the colored versions color of the bird kite
>>8046522>You sound familiar.. lolBecause I’m me and I can’t draw anymore.
op I’m frankly mystified how you’ve managed to make an arrangement of some off putting in various degrees of semi realistic sexy muppets morbidly charming.I’m not going to read it it’s illegible to me, but I can appreciate what anons call chicken scratch since to me feels more like an evidence of you getting the feel of a surface through the drawing. You’re plugging volumes in your forms and I like that
>>8046522 >>PAGE 33 FINISHED! I'm quite happy with this one. Crazy that this page in particular ended up being the 33th one, that wasn't on purpose at all, lol.>>8046550Yeah, I tried to use some color related to the sky elements, like the sun. But it was a pretty quick test. It's amazing how some basic colors can give to such a chaotic-esoteric and naturalistic art-style a solid cohesive look all of a sudden.>>8046791You will draw because you are you.>>8047086The text is perfectly readable in a monitor. I proved (at least to myself) with this quick color test, >>8046529 that it is not "just chicken scratch", he is very methodical with what he draws, that's a LOT of characters, scene composition detail, and other things in that one page, and he seems to draw that quite fast.
>>8047086I agree that the lettering is terrible, but it's a byproduct of the frenzy of getting a thought on paper that makes the roughs too rough. When I get home from work tossing boxes around at night, I smoke a bowlful of inspiration, then look at the empty page and have no idea what will appear. In this set of videos, each a day's worth of drawing time, what started as a fairy touching a pool became a collection of female versions of the fairy army I made for the Snowglobe story. All bitching about men, of course.>"Ho,Mister StiffStem! You want to pollinate? Polish your own morning wood! Hah!"https://youtu.be/eCw-5CS68Js?is=bfaaz3NcMXVeSWt4https://youtu.be/8skKuO8wdDI?is=3Y_49JemPsWR1ZE8I was imagining what the characters were saying as I drew them, to have little microcosms in negative spaces. Inventing as I went along. Most of my work has been a random event. I look forward to drawing to a purpose for once.
>>8047534>You will draw because you are you
>>8047534this is such a fucking weird thing to do with someone elses comic, and these all look awful but i do admire your autistic hyperactive desire to be popular.
>>8047877He liked my story and wanted to do his own spin. The story is its own reward.
>>8047534 >>PAGE 34 FINISHED! I forgot to clarify that Milo is having a flashback, when I said "three years ago", I meant three years prior to that encounter with Sparky. That's his initiation into the college's secret society, and the Priestess is not Sparky of course, but just some other "professional woman" hired for the ritual. Is up to the reader to find in his own mind what happens with the girl from the flashback, was there an orgy afterwards?.. does she gets "sacrificed" or "eaten"? Could this be the ultimate secret sin in Milo's life? (though, that's the idea behind these initiation rituals in secret societies) That's up to the viewers and it is part of their inner and personal experience with the story, to keep it alive as an enigma to solve inside their own mind.>>8047842Dude that's freaking hot. THAT CUTIE HAS ONE FUCKING GREAT BODY. You're the best! Saved!>>8047877Thanks anon! Tho, NO ONE comes here to be "popular" lol! If you wanna be "popular" you have to be in the mainstream platforms. This place is for nostalgic loners of times past. I said it previously that I'm still a fan-fic fag from the mid 2000's, back then when we loved to create stuff, worlds, mind adventures. Today it seems people has lost it, they don't care about anything anymore. We are going through the "aphantasia death", like in that Neverendig Story movie. 20 years ago It was normal to create interwoven fanfics it was a shared gift, entering other worlds, and live in them, knowing that you will be leaving for a new adventure at any moment, connecting with the passion of some other creator, and making something amazing in there too. Whatever happen with that? At some point everyone became so anal, and desperate for "muh brand", fooled into the promised "money success" everyone turned against each other, trying to sell their shit to each other and sharing nothing. As the song says, "nothing plus nothing leaves nothing". We're dying of nothingness.>>8048065Thank you anon!
>>8048380The only true artist on /ic/
>>8048380I thank you for the insight on coloring my art, and how you managed to separate the figures from the background in a sea of chicken scratches. I plan on embarking on the computer side of things soon, using all my recent stuff properly scanned and awaiting Photoshop legerdermain. Coloring stuff is definitely on the agenda. I plan on experimenting with making the faux 3D stuff like this with the end of planning my art output for post processing. I made Cassandra using Alien Skin filters Fur and Swirl, and the background altar with Bevel, copying the best side of art made by random button pushing and flipping it into a mirroring whole. The floor was a flat square of Chaotic texturing stretched wide in a Perspective transform. The walls craquelure, and either bevel or glass. I can only imagine what I will make with my style now.
>>8048380 >>PAGE 35 FINISHED! The romance continues>>8048402THANK YOU SO MUCH!!! That was super nice from you to say, thank you! I'm just having fun he-he>>8048419Thanks anon! no prob! I just wanted to see how good that color to alpha tool worked. I see it can be quite useful.That pic is super cool, authentic retro late 90s early 2000s nostalgia. I follow this thread on /3/ in case someone post some cool renders from that era >>>/3/1032068
After nine nights in a row I managed to draw this on my night off. Anime aliens.
Trying again...
>>8049670heh, yeah this site clears up the image's metadata on upload. So if you rotated the image in your device and didn't saved it again, the image will return to its original format on this site.
I didn’t even realize this thread had been up for so long
>>8049714Over a month. And the conversation began in another thread. I trickle out my old stuff and a new story is being created before your eyes. I am eager to see where it goes.
>>8048380>Dude that's freaking hot. THAT CUTIE HAS ONE FUCKING GREAT BODY. You're the best! Saved!Appreciate that. But I spent this month trying to draw literally anything with no luck. So I’m back to these two.
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Welp, since we reached the reply limit, I'll post these extra fanarts that I posted in /beg/, just for completion sake>>8049588>>8049589Incredible craftsmanship! Looks like some japanese version of the Star Wars alien bar, but bizarre and demonic lol. Pretty Cool
>>8049849>>8049851You have a VERY POWERFUL rough sketch ability. I still like the rough version better than the more detailed new one. Her ass and legs proportions in relation with the rest of her body looks so fucking hot and clean in the first draft version. I don't know why that happens with all of your sketches. You just nail it in the first try.
>>8050071I noticed that myself. And I would recommend drawing very lightly initially, so those construction lines can be easily erased or ignored, then commit to the important lines with darker strokes.
>>8050072She likes the taste of metal! What a weirdo. >>8050071Dang it. People here used to give me shit for always just sketching. Now I learn that trying to do more just makes things worse. :( I’ll always be a permaprebeg.>>8050131But I’m using layers so what’s it matter? I don’t need to delete, just draw over.
>>8050146Don't mind me. Your style reminds me of Disney in a good way, and I see your roughs as animation stills that will eventually be flat color and thick lines.
>>8049844Don't worry, I'm eager to finish this story too! I'll keep posting new pages here and I'll continue posting in a second thread continuation of this one too. Fear not!>>8050146Man that final piece looks AMAZING. I love how you rendered her hot body at the end, the color tone and everything, good work! Another one for the collection!>>8050825LOL, that's cool, brings back, my own memories of sneaky comics when being a bratty little shit in school xD Fun times.
>>8051318>final piecelol no. Almost 6 hours.
The characters on white paper were done when I was 14 and the yellow paper 16 years or so.
>>8051713Last time I found drawings from my youth I threw them away.
>>8051947But I have a lot more youth to draw from.:D
>>8049480 >>PAGE 36 FINISHED!!! This one I didn't like half way in, but after finishing it I can't hate it. I already can start to appreciate the effort of this insane project, even when some panels and figure composition look like ass, like in the second panel, that forced perspective is totally out of whack but, I'm totally winging it at this point, I'm not even second guessing this shit at this point lol. Gotta keep going.>>8051611That's looking fucking great already nonetheless!>>8051947I did that with tons of my stuff too. It's cool to burn them like in a ritual too. In your yard, wearing a robe... Try it.>>8052084NO WAY! That's fucking cool!!!! I remember I got to play with an Atari 2600 and it was crap lol! I already had a N64 by that time.
>>8052084Worst. Keyboard. Ever.
>>8052163I admire that you can keep with something even if you’re not liking it. I have a bad habit of just deleting things even if I’ve spent hours on it.
>>8052191It had some kid proof plastic membrane for a keyboard, easily cleaned but requiring a lot of finger pressure to type on. And I liked to type out the programs from Atari magazine, the cooler machine language ones requiring a few dozen blocks of data the executable worked off of. Huge,exacting clumps of gibberish that I would occasionally get wrong and lock up the computer, requiring a hard restart and the loss of all my work. And how you saved your work? Cassette tapes. And that only working occasionally. Of course the keyboard had fangs.It ate fingers.
PAGE 37 WIP>>8052192Thanks anon! I guess that's something this board taught me. The concept of "shitposting", it is very liberating, it feels like the shredding and burning of old drawings ritual thing. It doesn't matter what you post, you're just feeding a fire shared by your frens here, and to laugh about it. it's just water down the river, in the way this board works, what you post is just nothing, something that fades away, and if it is good, someone will keep it. It's a great way of sharing and experiencing art, and it cultivates a constant habit of creating a piece just for the heck of it, and so you inadvertently build up your level, at some point, you get good at something you draw, even if you do it for the lolz. So scribble and doodle away, and be happy.>>8052353Gotta admit that thing had a beautiful design look, even though I agree on how horribly shitty those flat surface keys were, lol.. when I was a kid I had the misfortune of getting as a gift a calculator with those "buttons", I remember that piece of junk to this day lmao
>>8052850Speaking of burning old work...My Adolescent Angst comics.And I will spare the world what resulted when I bought a Watership Down movie adaptation book with stills from the movie at the tender age of 12...RABBIT ROMANCE COMICS. >*K-Kck - KA-KOOM! Rumble rumble*
Posting doesn't send the thread to page one anymore. Oh,well. (Pic was from college. Not for a class, but age 19.)
>>8052915lol, actually, that was really fun to read. When I was twelve I was a total retard, you had to be a freaking genius to do that clever storytelling at that age.>>8053071lol cool! This is great!>>8053071>Posting doesn't send the thread to page one anymore.Yeah, the thread begins to "die" after reaching limit reply (300 posts) then it starts to sink for archiving termination. So you have to make a new thread, you can use the same OP post and add "PART II"I can do it if you want, but, you're the driving artistic sovl here.
>>8053219We both are keeping the thread alive, but no matter how active one is, all threads sink into the Valley of Page 10? Last year when I couldn't draw, I made a thread that I posted the whole Snowglobe story and other long form stuff. But someone said " s a g e" and that sent the thread straight into oblivion. This was from late grammar school early high school.
>>8053382LOL, yeah, trolls and bullies here will do that. "sage" doesn't do anything really. He was just being a jerk, he just used that "filter/code" so his reply/comment would not bump the tread. So yeah if you're all alone is hard to keep a thread alive, but here we have at least four anons being active. You can always keep making a new continuation thread. All the threads die after 300 replies of course, but the memories and artistic adventures remains. We will continue Sparky in the new thread don't worry.That picrel was pretty cool, it has that 80's sci-fi terror flick vibe.
>>8053382I’m not racist but aliens should stay on their own damn planets!
