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11/20/24(Wed)23:44:00 No.23982127
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Anonymous 11/20/24(Wed)23:44:00 No.23982127
Rate my poem /lit/
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Anonymous
11/20/24(Wed)23:48:05 No.23982133
Anonymous 11/20/24(Wed)23:48:05 No.23982133
I like how it rhymes.
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Anonymous
11/20/24(Wed)23:50:05 No.23982137
Anonymous 11/20/24(Wed)23:50:05 No.23982137
I'm not a big rhymer but your rhythm seems a bit all over the place. Also many of the rhymes you're going for don't really fit, like wonder and colder, more and raw etc.
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Anonymous
11/20/24(Wed)23:50:35 No.23982138
Anonymous 11/20/24(Wed)23:50:35 No.23982138
>>23982127
It's simple but earnest. Hang onto it for a few years, and rewrite it now and again. Thanks for sharing.
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