I am going to become the newest schizo, watch me.

The patreon well is dried up. Ain't nobody going to read your story.

>>24686797
>The patreon well is dried up.
why is the line going up and right on basically every major story?
webfic is just getting more popular. only 2 months ago RR had a freak of nature 0->25k overnight success. never before seen
if i could buy stocks on RR I very much would, is all im saying

>>24686815
Can't help but notice ya'll be talkin about RR when I'm talkin patreon.

>>24686819
no I was talking about webfic patreons, of which rr is a common but not only hosting site
silly goose

>>24686823
You say that then you lack sources. Biggest cope.

>>24686823
Name any hosting site comparable to rr when nobody here mentions them

>>24686797
> The patreon well is dried up.
Not true.
> Ain't nobody going to read your story.
True.

>>24686653
>You could read the manga instead if you want.
And miss out on bouncing animated titties?
Dang now that we're talking about it I kinda want to stop rewatching Index.

>Consider the implications of a guy who was seemingly held back to hit on girls he has a strong advantage over by exploiting an advantage he's not aware of himself
The story has followed the MC for quite some time now so I don't think readers will come to that conclusion.
>By that logic she might think that he was abusing his status once she knows, correct?
Well she thinks he's lower status than her, he's certainly not as wealthy. The way I'm writing it (or trying to write it) is that she sees him as beneath her, but then it turns out she's actually struggling for the first time in her life and he's really kind and helpful even after she was rude to him. They get to know each other better, and work together for a bit, and then he asks her out on a date; her family sends a chaperone with them. So there shouldn't be any sense of coercion to any of it, but I'll keep an eye out during editing.
>However be wary of having the suspension bridge effect resolve all tension, people are more cynical to that these days.
Are they really? Damn. Well part of it is that he does in fact save her life, but it's not like she leaps into his arms. I'm going to have her decide he's worth serious consideration for a relationship, and then both their guardians come together to discuss if it's a good match.
>I will stress that the MC reacting like that may be a turnoff to readers
Probably, but I'm planning a sort of snap back where he loses his composure because he's smitten, and then five minutes later class starts and she looks over to see she's not even on his mind anymore and he's in full work/study mode, and when she asks him a question about the study material he's capable and smooth about it.
>This will help explain WHY the MC loves huge tits so much to the reader
He's just never been in that kind of close proximity to such a beautiful, attractive girl before. Big tits are only part of her charm, although they are a big part.
>you need to figure out a way to make the tits matter in a narrative context
Well the trouble I was having was in describing them in a way that wouldn't upset RR mods, given the age. So I figured a poetic passage praising her beauty, including her big tits, would work.
>but you need to prepare to explain why those breasts initially attracted him at some point.
He's a 17 year old male. But also he's never seen a girl his age with breasts that large so they kinda catch him off guard in a big way.

I'm partially anchored on her character having large breasts as an attempt to be on the edge. Obviously the safe play would be to have her be 20 years old, emotionally mature, confident, medium unremarkable chest, feminist icon. I could even have her shave the side of her head! But big boob girls need representation too.

>>24686825
graphtreon.com
BTFO, how embarrassing
>>24686827
webnovel.com is easily in the same ballpark as rr
ao3 completely utterly dwarfs both in pure traffic, but most of it is fanfic

>>24686830
Hold on.

Were you that guy who said you were going to write for the isekai contest but backed out and said you'd switch to RR?

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>>24686620
Holy shit dude that book is creativity poison. You literally don't need that. Not saying it's bad or unhelpful to everyone but damn most people need help with their dialogue tags and maintaining consistent tense, not understanding dramatized vs undramatized narrators and how they influence the telling of a story. You'd be better served re-reading your favorite book and then trying to mimic what that book does.

Pic rel is more creativity poison although it's actually really freaking good at helping me learn to use words gooder

>>24686659
It's not so much that any particular site will make you famous if you post short stories to it; it's that it can't hurt. Just throw them up on Royal Road.

I suppose if you want a real shot at an algorithm boosting you, consider doing a dramatic reading, make it a video, and put it up on youtube. Someone will listen to it as an audiobook while doing laundry or something.

>>24686853
No, my book's not isekai. I'm the guy who refuses to link his story here because I'm a paranoid schizo.

>>24686846
>webnovel
Chinesium with very special requirements, that's it

>>24686861
And? Didn't say I recommend posting there, but it gets more monthly traffic than RR and some authors there are making nuts money. It's undoubtedly on equal footing

>>24686868
Stupid question here, if you failed in RR, what's stopping people from trying again in WN if it doesn't get popular?

>>24686891
nothing
but webnovel has even more trash tastes and meta than rr, if you can believe it

Any of you guys writing some gay fiction? if so tell me about it and link it

>>24686857
Okay, the way you talked about him being from a foreign land threw me off.

Now to be brief, the overriding issue most people could have is that he's got a two year age difference over her and he's 17, almost 18, while she's 15. Audiences are weird like that, especially if as you said they've been following him for some time already only to see him go AWOOGA for the first fat tits he's seen in his life.

As for tips on how to describe her chest when she's a 15 year old and you're attempting to publish on royalroad which takes an extremely dim view to anime romcom shenanigans in the first place, they don't exist. That's all. Those are your options if you want to keep the current setup: Either avoid mentioning exact ages or be very vague about her chest area.

You should really avoid mentioning the age thing. It's not being on the edge, you're throwing yourself into a pit. By the way, I know you were making a facetious comparison but 20 year olds are plenty capable of being busty emotional babies that look and act the same way as a 15 year old. There's no need to change anything except a number. Trust me, I've read a ton of Korean isekai that does it. I've seen college students in real life act like highschoolers. It does make the character more pathetic to still be wailing like teenagers in their twenties but not only is it realistic, you avoid the headache of RR mods coming down on you for age.

>>24686868
They share the same footing. If you have a webnovel that doesn't fit into that meta you're screwed

>>24686913
>make the character
characters*
minor spelling mistake.webm

>>24686913
>only to see him go AWOOGA for the first fat tits he's seen in his life.
That's why I was looking for ways to describe it poetically lol.
Unfortunately avoiding ages isn't possible for plot reasons. I could change the age outright, but then I'd have to change a lot of the plot and character arcs.
I understand that mods can get twitchy, but this is squarely in the realm of romeo and juliet laws, and there's no sexual contact at all until after marriage (again, when she's eighteen).
I guess I'll double check the TOS and rules to see if there's anything explicitly against it.

>>24686960
>Sexual exploitation and abuse are prohibited:
>1. Pedophilia, or stories involving sexual activities with underage characters or individuals under the age of 18, are prohibited. When there is Sexual Content involving characters, there can be NO indication or implication that the characters are, or appear to be, under the age of 18. Situations in which this may be ambiguous (differing speeds of maturity, altered flows of time, mismatch between age and appearance, etc.) must not include Sexual Content in any form. Even fictional species need to be mature both by the standards of their species AND in human terms.
I'm pretty sure I'm in the clear based on I'm intending to be extraordinarily clear they're not banging, not even secretly, not even off screen.
But I still want the heroine to have big tits.

>>24686960
Fortunately I'm sure you could figure out a way to avoid mentioning ages or making it an issue without disrupting the plot. I say that in the tone of a royalroad moderator.
>Romeo and Juliet laws
Now you're sexualizing both minors!
But no, really, remember that doesn't apply everywhere.
>There's no sexual contact at all
Then what is he stammering over? Where is he looking that makes him awkward?
You've seen enough Japanese anime about high schoolers to know even they give a reason for it. Without a reason, there's no bite to his reactions.

>>24686983
Read it very carefully. Sexual Content, in capitals, encompasses a lot more than simply sex. Sex appeal is absolutely a part of "sexual exploitation". It doesn't mean that they'll enforce it that way but you should ask a mod before you commit to this. Sometimes it's better to ask for permission than forgiveness. This is one of those times.

>>24686853
There's more than one?

>>24687004
My knee-jerk reaction is that a description of a character's beauty in poetic language isn't sexual content but I'll think about this. Even though I'm writing the chapter tomorrow, my backlog is huge and I have months to refine and think about it.

I can't believe we live in a world where fictional characters can't breast boobily around as they please.

Don't fuss over the rules. You can just change it later if and when you get caught, or simply not bother if you aren't reaping bank by that point.

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>haven't updated a story in weeks despite the usual update is once a month
>already have this one (possibly autistic) reader who DMs me when the story will update once more again
Do I respond to this? Or do I just keep updating silently?

I was going to introduce myself and share my story after lurking for a couple weeks, but it's not at all relevant to the current conversation.

>>24687074
Interacting with needy readers just isn't fun. I'd say ignore him and update as needed, pretend you don't know how to access the message system.

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>>24687087
do it anyway, homo. I'm DEMANDING you to.

>>24687052
There's fussing over the rules and then there's underage characters.

>>24687033
Let me ask you: What's the point in her having big tits immediately versus when she turns 18 when by all accounts you're not going to even mention her tits and the characters are apparently going to switch from 0-100?
First impressions matter. If your first contact with sexual content is to obfuscate it and try to avoid the notice of moderation you're going to have nobody who actually wants to read it be interested.

>>24687101
You make good points but this is something I want to dig my heels in on. I'll write it, give it a day, check it the day after tomorrow, and if I lack confidence maybe I'll post a sample here in /wng/ to see what anons think.

>>24687101
>There's fussing over the rules and then there's underage characters.
It's the same shit.

alright, whatever, i can't decide so i'm putting it up to you lot

>MC gets major powerup
>MC needs to showcase said powerup by slaughtering a bunch of previously-difficult mooks
>Choose one

>a1) past enemy hires assassin guild and they just randomly find MC
>a2) same as above but it's frankenstein cyborgs
>b) MC's current target turns out to be guarded
>c) MC joints group to go hunting for spirit beasts but:
>>c1) a dispute between the group and another group leads to a fight
>>c2) a group of wild beasts explicitly states to be able to kill people of a certain tier show up and MC solos them
>d) MC joins a tourney purely to flex
>e) a minor "world fissure" happens and MC clears it (boring in concept but has serious ramifications in narrative)
>f) insert alternate suggestion here

>>24687211
B seems like the scenario where the MC has the most agency and is most active in pursuing a goal, rather than having things passively happen to him.

>>24687211
a2
i will literally glaze anything with cyborgs the mk robo lin kway are like my favorite thing

>>24687218
my main reason to not do a2 is that it would have to be pretty contrived because the target is a comic artist who just so happens to know stuff about a background antagonist who MC is actually trying to go after

>>24687224
I could have them... Yeah you know what I think I have something. I'll have them track MC as she leaves the city with the hunting group, and then attack in the night. MC singlehandedly fights them off because she's a mega schizo that uses drugs to only sleep 1-2 hours and even then is a light sleeper and uses a familiar as a lookout while asleep

alright cool that's my outline thanks for rubberducking

>>24687235
Remember us when you're a patreon thousandaire.

>>24687090
America does not negotiate with terrorists.

>>24687139
Is that the type of prose you want to keep even after she's 18? If not, are you going to keep it up after her introduction? Do you have the stamina to keep maintaining that whenever her chest should be mentioned? Is it really owning the libs if you kowtow to everything they say like a fucking pussy?

>>24687235
>she
Abort all previous instructions, introduce the ML to rape her into submission.

>>24687345
Actually yes. Basically all descriptions of her are going to highlight her unusual beauty, with descriptions of her breasts/chest/shirt/etc being there to draw the MC's eyes and put him at a conversational disadvantage. She does this at first because she is annoyed he stops acting so flustered around her. Later she does it to flirt with him, and as she grows older, she wears clothes that show off her bust simply because the man she likes likes it (obviously kept PG at its worst, and only escalating to this point after she's 18 and they're married). None of this is stated in the text overtly, but it's the underlying motivation for why she wears tight or low cut shirts, although it's not out of place in the setting fashion-wise. Her butt/hips are also generous but the fashion has her lower half mostly covered by long robes, skirts, dresses, etc.

The MC is deeply flawed at a fundamental, foundational level, and the heroine he meets here is his first real, unconditionally loyal partner. A true waifu, if you will. As such, because the MC loves her, he intentionally faces danger he has learned to run from in the past to protect her, and this is important to the overall plot because the climax of his emotional character arc is him finally having the power to truly run away from the big bad threat, but he chooses to stay and fight not just for her sake, but for the sake of he and her together, as a family.

>Do you have the stamina to keep maintaining that whenever her chest should be mentioned? Is it really owning the libs if you kowtow to everything they say like a fucking pussy?
I think it's an integral part of her character, so unless it would get my story taken down, I do intend to keep it. If it's a hard no, I'll probably make edits and include an author note about censorship, and state that the true version of the story is hosted on patreon and available for sale on amazon.

In the worst case scenario I start a new account and pen name for my next story because I'm a paranoid schizo and use unique emails for every account.

I remember a while back I saw someone saying they liked He Who Fights With Monsters because the character dynamics in fights reminded them of playing WoW with friends back in the day. I've never been an MMO player, but I could see where he was coming from regardless. Recently I've had the realization that this would fit a story I've had in the back of my mind much better than the approach I had been using despite my idea not having any litrpg elements.
Can anyone recommend stories that give them a similar feeling so I can do some reading for research?

I hate Isekai stories that start out with meeting god or some equivalent. It makes everything that happens after that feel low stakes.

>>24687520
But anon, how else is the mc going to get those 5 free wishes + OP system + being born in the richest most powerful family in the world + the biggest dick in the realm?

>>24687520
>>24687538
I agree, and he should just realize he has a cheat skill. There can be a scene where it activates due to a pressing need, or he can simply realize he has a power. Absolutely zero need to have a justification for how he got it.

transmigration > isekai

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>>24687258
>Halal Hero?! I Was Killed In A Cave And Woke Up With Powers!! A Certain Al Qaeda Chief's Journey Begins Anew!

>>24687556
Yes, YES!
And he should complain about it a lot! He should be calling it garbage and useless at every opportunity, specially when it just saved his ass and is obviously overpowered

>>24687452
>that the true version of the story is hosted on patreon and available for sale on amazon.
>underage female heroine
>patreon
>amazon
lol
Anon.
You're joking right now, right?

>Reincarnated as an Aztec. Now I have to lose my virginity before I get sacrificed to the Gods!

>>24687520
>>24687538
>>24687556
>>24687571
Can you "people" name a single fucking isekai that actually meets these standards that someone actually knows of? You're awful brash when you think /isekai/ isn't watching.

>>24687520
I hate that in all media, removes all the stakes. I never make gods real in my worlds, just as in real life. I saw a cringy youtube video yesterday from a christcuck or similarly tarded individual who critisized religion in fantasy that it wasn't real blabla. Yeah no shit, the last thing you want to read about is christcucks in fantasy, it's enough seeing it shoehorned in in american movies and tv shows.

>>24687587
cope

>>24687596
Shalom rabbi

>>24687587
I'm the original complainer. My standards aren't that high. I just think that certain tropes, like meeting gods at the start of the story, make the rest of the story feel like there are no stakes. If you're going to want a character to meet a god, but keep the stakes then it has to be something like in Cultist of Cerebron. The MC meets a god (eventually), but he's clearly deferential. The god doesn't explain everything and the MC feels like he's in danger just by interacting with the god.

>He Who Fights Monsters
Another example that works well. MC got isekai'd and there was no exposition dump on how it happened. MC had to figure it out himself.
>Death March
The anime was garbage though.
>Max lvl archmage
>Jackal Among Snakes
>Arcane Emperor
>Descend
>Black Iron's Glory
>Destroyermen
>>24687596
I actually watched that video a few days ago. I thought it was interesting because later in the video he talks about how you could make religion appear more interesting in a story. I don't find that particularly important, but maybe someone does.

>>24687101
>There's fussing over the rules and then there's underage characters.
I wish we were now like Japan and didn't get our knickers in a bunch over this. It's fictional written content.

>No, you don't understand, I MUST sexualized underaged girls!

teenagers who are under the age of consent fuck. Highschoolers younger than 17 fuck. Kids be fuckin. There are real kids in the real world having sex right now. What the fuck is wrong with writing a character of a similar age wanting to fuck? Why does it matter. Fuck off.

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Anyone else here also write non-litrpg, progression, portal fantasy, or isekai novels?
This my "first post" in a /wng/ thread, though I've been around for about exactly a year. I'm more of an RR forum user.
I am not taking the suggested route with RR. (I have 2 preface chapters before my content.) I am planning / have been writing a bunch of volumes under the same fiction.
Here is my fiction.
>https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/93079/keygemin
It is a sky pirate fantasy universe, floating islands, technology powered by magic, and gemstones that turn into creatures.

>>24687990
>Anyone else here also write non-litrpg, progression, portal fantasy, nor isekai novels?
Should have specified non / nor. An exclusive list of all of those things.

>>24687990
>>24687993
yes, I do. What about it?

>>24687995
I was just curious how many people there were that did, given how prevalent it is. Sort of view /wng/ as largely optimizing stories for RR viewership (and later KU). The last thread was about min-maxing.

>>24687999
there's a few different people who talk about different things. We once had a list of novels written by people here. There are some sci-fi and traditional fantasy stories.

>>24688001
>We once had a list of novels written by people here.
Might not be a bad idea to do that again. Probably, wouldn't be hard to set up a google form or something.
>There are some sci-fi and traditional fantasy stories
I see quite a bit more sci-fi / cyberpunk around, than traditional fantasy novels. That aren't in the webnovel format and have hard endings.

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>take interest in this litrpg thing that a saw around a few times
>saw the book "the wandering inn" recommended here and elsewhere.
>decided to see what I was getting into...
How the fuck is this series so insanely long, like how? Is it really that good to justify the time investment?

>>24688036
Maybe if you're into bug-fucking

>>24688040
Are you kidding or is this also a book of fetish eroticism?

>>24688036
the wandering inn is fucking trash and everyone reading it is brain damaged. also this >>24688040

Why do warriors wear bikini armor, but mages don't wear bikini... robes?

>>24688059
Because warriors have higher armor class.

>>24688059
Warriors can probably shrug off the cold just fine but probably dislike being a sweaty mess in summer fighting, they don't mind showing off their bodies because they're fit
Mages are crusty old nerds that hate the sun

>>24688036
Those that like it *really* like it, everyone else thinks its either meh or trash. It's what every wn author aspires to, a large active community that throws patreon money at them. It also helps being autistic and can constantly churn out 10k words a day.

>>24688046
Romance is a very small part of the story and very little is explicit, but what romance it has is very off-putting for a lot of people. Some people don't like the monster guy/girl fucking, some people don't like the massive age gaps in a lot of the romances, proper age gaps too, none of those 70 year old Elven teenagers. I thought Japanese and Chinese WN's desensitized me to a lot of that, but even I was put off when 90 year old Granny El started robbing the cradle. It says something for how off the authors view of romance is when the goblin rape slaves draw less criticism from readers than the "normal" couples

>>24688090
> is very off-putting for a lot of people
You mean one, maybe two, spegs in this general. Normal readers dgaf.

>>24688092
>Normal readers

>I will not read anything that has less then it's first volume/book finished
>I will not read anything with LGBT themes/characters
>I will not read anything with multiple protagonists/POV's
>I will not read anything that starts with a prisoner arc
>I will not read slow-burn progressions
>I will not read anything centered around underdeveloped females doing 'cute' things
>I will not read anything with that aludes to an anime trope in its title.

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>>24688113

>>24688113
I'll let you know when I have the first volume finished.

>>24688113
Why are you here if you don't enjoy reading?

My book has a single POV chapter for each individual character (that I care about) as a flashback and then a 'what are they doing now' after separating from the MC

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>>24687990

>>24688116
>2025
>Needing glasses
Also why do so many 'authors' look like this?
>>24688117
Cheers senpai
>>24688122
I actively follow and periodically patreon 20+ different RR fictions so I am uncertain what you are on about.

>>24688059
Mages that dress down to where they show bare skin wear leotards + capes, bodycons or other attire where top and bottom are connected.

It's because bikinis are youthful and playful rather than refined.

>>24688113
And you're telling us that why?

Unless you are operating off of video game logic why AREN'T wizards and mages dressed up in armour and have actual weapons

Just read the first part of The Crow and the Rabbit.

Shits wack. I like the dark fantasy theme but it's obvious both the plot and characters are lacking. Also why is Ferene suddenly a whore? She just bangs everyone she meets. Or atleast thinks about banging everyone she meets.

I really don't like that.

Also the other characters are super boring.

Can you guys give me your top fantasy(preferably dark fantasy) we novels? I'm really struggling to find something worth reading.

I've read the following:
LOTM - super boring cultivation chinkshit.


TWI(up to book 3 dont like lizardfucking), the world and the writing was very good.

Shadow slave - the beginning was cool and i finished it just because of that, otherwise writing is lacking


Mother of learning - emotioneless dogshit with no payoff


I've tried reading Cradle but it's obviously cultivation chinkshit and the world is boring as fuck.

Please give me something good.

>>24688131
Every character in my story has a flashback dream sequence told from someone else's pov and the narrator may or may not be unreliable

>>24688151
The usual logic is that metal gets in the way of their magic. It's like they are wearing a Faraday cage.

>>24687101
>>>24687052
>There's fussing over the rules and then there's underage characters.
not that it relates here but I wrote a lengthy piece intended for Literotica once. It was a lesbian titillation thing. I didn't think it was perverted to have them meet in high school I intended it to be sort of sweet. Scrapped the project when I read the literotica rules.

>>24687345
I vote for gratuitous boobage in the story. Flowery booba language and all.

>>24688155
Didn't I recommend you Practical Guide to Sorcery the last time you posted this?

>>24688169
You did, and i forgot about it. Cuz i was curious about The crow and the rabbit.

I'm gonna go check it out now thanks.

>>24688151
They have better things to do than lift weights all day

>>24688092
I don't think those people who are fine with normal human girl being pegged by emotionless bug are normal anon.

Though the feeling of disgust is somewhat lessened by the fact that the bug takes no physical pleasure from that and is basically a sex toy. Though that brings up other concerns regarding the author.

The novel would be way better if there was no interspecies fuckery going on. It literally did not bring anything to the story besides lingering disgust for me.

>>24688155
worthless post

>>24688184
what?

>>24688175
Just 30 minutes of exercise a day increases your quality of life, physical health AND cognitive function. Any intelligent wizard would do it.

>>24688189
see >>24688184

>>24688192
You mad i didn't like your book or what?

>>24688197
You mad i didn't like your post or what?

Why are we getting raided?

>>24688180
> I didn't like a few paragraphs in a 16m word story.
stop being a pussy. either drop the series if you're that much of a snowflake or stop whining.

>>24688201
I already dropped it two weeks ago. I am free to hate on it though. If someone told me there's lizardfucking and bugfucking i wouldn't even start reading it and wasting my time.

So i'm spreading awareness.

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>>24688009
>Might not be a bad idea to do that again. Probably, wouldn't be hard

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>>24688202

>>24688204
you are very sensitive for someone calling others a pussy.

>>24688205
nah, I just think you're an idiot.

>>24688190
>Just 30 minutes of exercise a day
will not help you wear armor. Or, well, wearing it is easy enough. Doing anything in it is another story.

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anyone else reading this?

>>24688210
Yes it is very regrettable such good writing had to be ruined by meaningless hookups and interspecies relationships.

No need to be so defensive about it.

>>24688155
Guild Mage - slowish weak mc start but picks up in both progression and world building.

Six Souls - gods chosen champions death match and despite the copy pasted deities its bretty gud with only a couple of plots stumbling points later on.

Violent Solutions - Autistic/malfunctioning brobot gets isekai'd, takes a bit to find his way and powers, but when he do there be blood. Well even before that there be blood, there is just blood.

>>24688146
i want to read things that conform to those rules.
>you could write things that conform to those rules.

>>24688155
FFF-Class 'Unlucky Antagonist'

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what are our thoughts?

>>24688353
>animal sidekick
yikes

So if you want to really get big, you have to come up with something comical and reddity, relatable to americans, like "I opened a drive-thru car wash in another world but since there aren't cars, I wash dinosaurs lmaooo"?

>>24688363
no thats eastern slop meta, retard. not rr

>>24688360
NTA but
>le ebin goofy animal sidekick
cringe reddit slop
>completely played-straight cool ass animal companion, especially some edgy shit like a panther
based

And then, the fated moment arrived.
Escorted by a maid, [heroine] crossed the threshold and entered the classroom.
[MC] was struck dumb, and his mouth fell open.
Glossy black hair cascaded in waves past her shoulders, framing the porcelain skin of her face, neck, and collarbone. Onyx jewels sparkled in place of her eyes, decorating either side of her delicate snub nose. A slight jawline and full, pouty lips set between slightly round cheeks gave her a lingering cuteness even as she was clearly growing into a gorgeous young woman. She was petite, half a head shorter than the maid next to her, and she wore a loose off-white blouse with short puff sleeves and a low neckline and a long, ruffled dark-grey skirt ending just above her ankles. Her small feet were clad in eye-catchingly shiny, polished black leather loafers. Her clothing, though loose, couldn’t hide her generous curves, a body type that [MC] had never seen in his home village before.
She was the most beautiful woman [MC] had ever seen, and from that moment on, he never had eyes for any woman but her.
As [MC] could do nothing but stare, rooted to the spot, she cocked her hip and placed a hand on it and sighed loudly—revealing sparkling, perfectly white teeth between her rose-pink lips.
“Ugh, there’s no more seats left!” She turned her gaze onto the Smith, narrowing her eyes and producing the slightest furrow in her brow.
“You there, foreigner. Give me your seat.”


How does this read as an introductory description?

>>24688407
The arrogant noble and cool black-haired beauty can't be the same character. It's a conflict of aesthetic conventions.