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"terrible copy/paste job" edition >>24722983
"High School Girlfriend" edition

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Anonymous 09/14/25(Sun)13:32:02 No.24723201>>24723345 >>24731766

theme: https://youtu.be/-a3SIjNKHHg?si=ZY7H0wKGOTLBr9Xp
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At least you tried, anon
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How strict is Wattpad with their content guideline enforcement?
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>>24742684
Nice links you got there, fagget.
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I can never think of stories or plots. I can write. I can write from nothing but the results always go nowhere. It's a mental block but I don't know how to get around it.
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>>24743189
easy, stop being a fag and go out
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Does a barbershop have customers or clients?
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Does "pointed confusion" make sense?
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>someone read 176 out of 385 pages of my book on kdp
Fuck... That guy dropped it. I'm a failure of an author
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What do you think of a short preface right before the Prologue kicks in for a fiction story? Something like pic related, that's like one or two paragraphs worth, to put the reader into the setting without using exposition in dialogue or narration later on.
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>>24743324
I can't believe KDP lets you see your customer's home address
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I wrote a section of a chapter like two months ago and left on a very important bit a dialogue where one character was supposed to reveal something important to the others. I forgot what it was. It literally ends with them about to tell them and it just cuts off like pic related. I have no idea where I was going with it.
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im sure this has been asked a thousand times before but when do start getting good? how can i get better faster. i already read and write bunch, what can i do?
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>>24743324
So you get more/better feedback from KDP than here? Why haven't I signed up yet?
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>>24743474
KDP is a publishing service. Most writers wait until after they get feedback to publish.
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>>24743393
You're probably already good, but you're unsatisfied because what you want to become is great, which is a fool's errand compared to becoming the best you can be
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>"please read our latest issue to get a sense of what we want"
>read the latest issue
>all of it is shit
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>>24742684
What are the best softwares for designing a book cover? I need a free alternative to Illustrator or something.
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>>24743694
Photoshop. And oddly, paying someone on 4chans art board. They're desperate for money. So even $20 can get you something decent to work with
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>>24743485
Getting feedback is impossible, so it's best to just publish
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>>24743226
Contrary to popular belief going outside doesn't just manifest plots in yout head.
>>24743694
>>24743720
Photopea is just Photoshop online for free.
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I gave my book to 10 "friends" for feedback and none of them bothered to read it.
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>>24743756
No shit. Nobody wants to do a 7 hour miserable homework assignment, you're obnoxious for even asking
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The trick to getting people to read your stuff is simple: just write stuff people want to read
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Nobody wants to read anything anymore
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>write a new sentence or tweak an existing sentence
>have to reread the sentence
>have to reread the paragraph
>have to reread the group of paragraphs in which that paragraph lies
>have do it all over again just to be safe
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>>24743325
I would like it. I honestly don't think it can even be a negative. This is probably some unfounded worry caused by overthinking the little things. Your story will not flounder because of this.
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>>24743325
>Hmm how do I make certain things about the world clear to the reader? I could show these things through dramatic action, but that would require an ounce of creativity and trust in the reader's ability to read.
>I know! I'll just frontload all the exposition instead; that's sure to set the stage for an interesting read.
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What do you guys think of my nonsense philosophy?



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