Previous Thread (#127.1) >>41354520https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/41354520Learning to be shameless.>What is this thread about?This thread is dedicated to stories that have clear dominate and submissive roles; both with and without consent.>What exactly is welcome in this thread?A wide variety of stories are welcomed here; from non-consent and sexual slavery, to abusive manipulation and psychological domination, to maids and extortion, and even healthy consensual relationships with BDSM role-play elements.Other variations are welcome as well, so long as they are complementary to the domination/submission focus of the thread.
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Before anyone asks, the 4 posts above fits 3000 characters, but for some reason if I tried to post anything longer than 1000 characters the spam detection kicked in.
>>41443631>spoilerThats odd, maybe its giving false positive becausemost of the text still remained the same ?Still, thanks for updating the whole OP ! Nice Tavi image you picked as well.
So how has everyone been during these past weeks ?It really felt like the general needed a break.>>41443617Out of curiosity OP, which /sim/ lurker are you ? Are you the write anon who wrote that Acessory green ?
>>41443661I saw a few other Anons having issues with OP texts. I don't think its the "most of the text the same" issue, as this wasn't a problem previously, nor it is a problem with most threads. The text must have hit some word combination which triggered the spam detection. I posted it in 1k sections, because if I tried to merge any of the sections it detected as spam even in the regular posts. OP posts and regular posts have slightly different spam rules.>>41444054>Out of curiosity OP, which /sim/ lurker are you ?An anonymous one who likes to comment. Not a writefag.
Oh shit, we back?I'll have something done before the weekend.
So guys, what are your thoughts on assexual doms? Do they bring something interesting to the table ?
>>41444509Get the whips! Whip the writefag!
Bumping for ideas involving our nurse.
>>41444509Fuuuck yes
Just to bring an idea to talk about regarding the rubber story setting.What would you guys think of a temple/church place where slavery wasnt allowed to happen ? Something equivalent to the medieval churches that would act as a sanctuary for ponies, specially nobles who gave up their claims and possessions to become monks ( willingly, by exilement, or coerced by their family members) in exchange for safety against the cuttthroat politics of the nobility, or in the story's case, the constant threats of enslavement by rivals to obtain the pony's wealth and possessions.
Well what do the lurkers want to talk about to pass the time ? Until the weekend arrives at least.Maybe Tavi being led to the low end by someone other than Vinyl for a change?
>>41448901Vinyl being led by Tavi!
>>41449257You mean VInyl being corrected into becoming a good girl ?
That nigga better follow through. I can't take much more of this.
>>41450102Rushing stories out of a writer doesnt usually make them come out good.
>>41450102>>41450323We got other writer anons who might show up soon, like the guy who made the rarity/octavia green in the last thread.
She even makes Tirek her slave.
When the Kirin matriach has to appease whoever is ruling over Equestria.
>>41451462What if she and the other villains were contained in a different place other than Tartarus ?>>41444054
>>41454316she will make a wonderful pet
Love this classic one.https://derpibooru.org/images/32907?q=wonderbolts%2C+gagDoes anyone know of any stories that tried this rookie cumdump idea ?
>No Red Eye/slave Littlepip green.
Just to do a headcount, how many are lurking here in the thread? I dont know how many of the frequent anons still havent noticed the general popped up again.>>41449257Its not really the focal point of the story, but have you ever read this one ?https://www.fimfiction.net/story/46933/lgie-op-24
>>41458035>storynot yet
bump
Okay. I wanted to do a Cadence scene since it was taking too long to get to the point, but it didn't make sense to do hers without finishing off the stuff about the Empire being broke. So... I just did both.>Shining Armor had never had to hire anypony before.>He’d always been able to promote from a known and tested pool of ponies.>Pulling somepony out of the public and giving them a task was entirely novel.>He’d approached the task with trepidation, knowing all too well it was going to be a challenge.>He had no experience with the task, and worse, the ponies of the Empire just didn’t like him very much.>And to top it all off, he really didn’t have any idea what he was signing them up for.>Loathe as he was to admit it, his upbringing had left him rather disconnected from the public.>Not to the same degree as his sister, of course. He’d had a job, and a rather demanding one at that.>But still, he didn’t understand what it was like to be a commoner.>Having been THE head of the guard, he’d experienced what he hoped was far more pressure than most had to deal with.>But he didn’t really understand what occupied the thoughts of most ponies.>How could he hope to?>He was never one of them.“Hay, you! Want a job? We pay at the end of every day, and- oh. You’re pretending you can’t hear me. Okay.”>They were so close.>So PAINFULLY close.>And yet, it still lay just out of reach.>The deadline to make their first shipment was approaching painfully quickly, and their chance to stand on their own hooves was threatening to slip away.>He needed workers, and FAST!>But…>Nopony was interested.>He approached the next pony he saw on the streets.“Want a job cutting crystals? We pay in bits!”>”What makes you think I don’t already have one?”“Well, probably because I recognize you from the dole registry. You’re unemployed.”>”Oh. Well, in that case… bite me.”>What the hay was wrong with them?>At this rate he wasn’t going to->No, there’s no point in worrying about that.>Deal with it when- err, if it comes.>For now, he had to stay focused.“Hay, you! Want a job?”>”Doing what?”“Cutting and boxing up crystals.”>Several ponies turned to walk away in perfect unison.>That was arguably the best reaction he’d gotten to date.>”Whatever you’re doing, it can wait.”>He knew that voice.>His day was suddenly MUCH worse.“Senator Tiger Eye.”>The pony who’s main contribution to society was making constant movements to exile Shining Armor and his family.“To what do I owe the displeasure?”>”I wouldn’t have signed it if I’d known.”…“Huh?”>”Are you deaf too, or just stupider than I’d previously suspected?”“I’m mostly surprised. The bill that nearly killed the Empire. Are you admitting to having signed it?”“All of us did. Well, except Howlite.”>Garnet lied!>And Shining didn’t know why he was surprised.
>>41462827“How can you be so sure the other two signed it?”>”I’ve known them longer than you. Jasper and Garnet both were promised what they wanted. They wouldn’t have cared what else was in there once they saw their prize. And… I’m no different. I didn’t payattention, because I thought it would claw back some of our dignity.”“In what way does that mess make us dignified!?”>”It doesn’t. But the part I was shown by your assistant-”>Shining’s eyes shot wide open.“Which assistant?”>”Rock Salt.”“I don’t have an assistant by that name…”>”They weren’t a bug, I checked.”>Worrying.>”And I’ve known them for a few years now. I actually met them before you.”>VERY worrying.>”The stuff they showed me was a proclamation of how Equestrians such as yourself are dirty and we needed to set ourselvesapart. A call for independence! I thought… It doesn't matter what I thought. I failed.”“So you didn’t want this to happen.”>”We’re CRYSTAL. We have INTEGRITY. We’re not going to violate our treaties!”>He spoke with fury and conviction, as though that wasn’t exactly what Jasper had been pushing for all along.“Hm…”>He’s actually being honest from the looks of things.>That could be useful.“Something tells me Rock Salt is never going to show up again, but if they do I need you to tell me.”>”If I see them again, I'll break their legs and question them myself!”“Good enough. Thanks for your honesty in this matter. This place would work a lot better if more ponies were like you.”>He waited patiently and stoically.>Shining couldn’t help but wish the wretch would leave.>Sure, he was being useful, but that didn’t mean they were suddenly friends.>But he just wouldn’t leave!>Awkward minutes arduously dragged on.“Did you have anything more to tell me?”>”No.”>Huh.>He’s probably waiting to find out what the repercussions are for all this.>If he was to be taken at his word, his goal had been to insult Equestria.>Not exactly noble, but far from the greatest crimes.>And the bill had ostensibly been created by Shining Armour himself, so he couldn’t exactly claim it was insubordination or treason.>Was gullibility a crime?>He couldn’t afford to let this go totally unpunished. They had to learn to READ things before signing them!>But he couldn’t have them thinking it was wrong to come clean.“Thanks for being the first and possibly only one to admit to having been involved in that mess. I’m sure you’ll be more careful in the future. Getting tricked like that is… humiliating. Dangerous, too.”>He wasn’t exactly happy with that reply, but it was all he could think of off the cuff.>At the very least, he was highlighting how this worked contrary to Tiger Eye’s goals.“You’re dismissed.”
>>41462832>He set back to work desperately trying to hire ponies.>And his frustration only grew.>He couldn’t for a second imagine that this would be a problem back in Equestria.>With the sheer number of ponies he’d asked, one would expect at least ONE of them to have taken it.>And that was before accounting for the extraordinary levels of poverty in the Empire.>Why were they not EAGER to get a chance at changing things up?>There was something just WRONG with them->”Have you no pride?”>Tiger Eye again, standing on a literal soapbox.>Where did he even get it?>”Have you all forgotten what it means to be CRYSTAL?”>He addressed a nearby crowd, shouting more than speaking.>”This is a DISGRACE! We are NOT beggars! Or at least I didn’t THINK we were! Imagine my shock when I see my compatriots turn up their nose at the chance to claw back some of the dignity that has been stolen from us!”>”What, you think this is dignified? It’s just labour.”>”WHO SAID THAT? Just because it’s not martial? Because it’s not administrative? Because it’s not BUREAUCRATIC?”>“We’re not labourers! We’re warriors!”>”You’re BUMS!”>”That stuff is meant to be done by the tributaries!”>”WHAT TRIBUTARIES? The world has moved on, and it has no use for the likes of you! You’d rather live off the alms given to us by Equestria! You depend on the PITY of our lesser!”>He was quite literally foaming at the mouth.>“To be CRYSTAL used to mean something! We were admired! ENVIED! Do you think we still command even a fraction of that respect?”>They didn’t.>They were a curiosity. A novelty.>They might someday be considered friends by Equestria as a whole, but the notion that they’d be envied of all things was laughable.>”Do you believe that when Equestrians think of us, they feel small? Do they feel weak? They don’t think about us at all, except maybe as a relic. We’re just a footnote in their history. And because of YOU, that’s all we’ll ever be.”…>He wasn’t exactly wrong.>”I have never been more disgusted by my kin. No, you’re not my kin. You’re my burden. We’ll regain our pride DESPITE you. And don’t you dare for a SECOND think I’ll forget this. The Empire doesn’t needpeople without dignity.”>He flashed a rude sign before jumping off his soapbox and approaching the prince.>”What do I need to do?”“Wait. Are you offering to help?”>”Are you deaf or just stupid?”“Mostly surprised.”>Wait.>Didn’t they just have that exact exchange?“Uh… Go to the dilapidated warehouse near the train station and talk to the foreman.”>”Which dilapidated warehouse? That doesn’t narrow it down much.”
>>41462837“The one that’s been propped up enough to not be a hazard. You’ll know it because it’s not covered in warning signs.”>”Okay. And what is it that we’re actually doing?”“Cutting, testing, and boxing crystals.”>”I don’t have any experience.”“On site training. They’ll get you up to speed.”>He set off without so much as another word.“Wait. You think they’re resisting because it’s undignified?”>”You wouldn’t get it.”“Correct, I wouldn’t. Just like how they’ll never understand what it means to be Equestrian.”>Tiger Eye scoffed at him.>”I don’t want to take away their identity, and I don’t want to wound their pride. How can I avoid that?”>”Your presence is a greater indignity than you can imagine. Consider dying.”>Harsh.>But still, this was a huge stride in the right direction.>Celestia’s advice was taking on new meaning yet again.>Governance wasn’t about defeating your opponent, nor outmanoeuvring them.>It was about WIELDING them.>He thought he’d understood when he forced Garnet to help, and yet, there was still more to it thanmere coercion.>This one, as wretched as he may be, WANTED to help.>Their goals aligned, and though they seemed to have different motivations, they could still work toward the same end.“If you were trying to get ponies to help out with this, how would you do it?”>”I’d talk about the sabotage. I’d ask if they wanted a chance to show the bugs we’re too strong to be broken by such tricks.”“We don’t actually know it was changelings yet.”>Though it was almost definitely changelings.>”I’d ask them if they were content living off the scraps Equestria throws at us, and if they want to show the world that we’re still the best there’s ever been.”>He’d frame it as an act of defiance.>Was it really so simple?“Well, show me how it’s done.”>He followed Tiger Eye from a respectable distance, watching and listening as they went.>And to his surprise, it was kinda working.>Sure, most were still turning him down, and he had more than a few heated exchanges of words.>But some ponies were showing interest.>Others even agreed to help.>And within a few hours, they had their workforce.“I can’t believe it. I’ve been working at that for DAYS. Thank you.”>Tiger Eye didn’t reply.“I’m an outsider-”>”I had noticed.”“And I need help understanding what it means to be Crystal.”>He seemed almost pleased by the request.>“We’re numerically small, and come from a hostile and desolate land. And yet we were quite possibly the world’s first superpower. We have a unique identity all our own, and we worked tirelessly to preserve it despite our numerical diffidence.”
>>41462840”So you compete with other powers.”>“No. There was no point in comparing ourselves to outsiders since there were no outsiders who could compare! We compete with ourselves, always trying to be more than we ever had been before. While all the other tribes of ponies were fighting with each other and splitting over tinier and tinier differences, we stood together, proud and strong. And because we stood up for each other, we wound up better off as individuals too.”“That’s not the impression I got today.”>”That’s because they’ve forgotten who they are. I had too, for a little while. When we returned, it was… jarring to see Equestria of all places had become such a mighty nation. I remember when they were tiny and largely irrelevant. Were it not for the sisters, nopony would have even known the name. But now? We couldn’t imagine ever becoming as grand as them. It was humiliating and discouraging. But then we discovered Earth. The Imperium were the ones who found us, and they come from the Isle of Man. A tiny, irrelevant dot that stands tall on the world stage. There are several other nations I’ve learned of that, despite having vanishingly few citizens, accomplish amazing things. We don’t need to be big to be mighty. And if THEY can do it, we can do it better.”…“I need to talk to Twilight. Thank you again.”>He took his time heading to the palace, trying to organise his thoughts.>Unfortunately, he’d always been a fast walker.>His head was still a mess when he’d arrived.>He briefly considered waiting until he had everything straightened out, but that was a waste of time.>Twilight had always been good at helping him think things through.>He gently knocked upon her door.>”Oh, come on! I mean, come in!”>He entered to find her flush, and sweaty.“Oh no, Twily! Are you sick? Have we been pushing you too hard? I should go, you need your rest-”>”No, no. It’s okay. What can I do for you?”“Are you sure? You look terrible?”>”Oh. Well, you know how it is. I just can’t seem to get comfortable! Yes, that’s it!”>She was behaving strangely.>He’d have to keep an eye on her.“I need your advice. I needed to hire 20 ponies, and I just couldn’t do it.”>”Is this for that trade agreement with Earth?”“Yeah.”>”Oh dear. That’s pretty important! We’d better get out there-”“Already done. Tiger Eye just… yelled at them for a while. He berated and shamed them.”>”And that worked?”“Yeah! I mean, not perfectly, but it got the job done. He persuaded ponies that wouldn’t give me the time of day. Hay, one pony signed up without even being told they’d be paid!”>”You’re trying to figure out why it worked. Or more specifically, what he was offering that you weren’t.”
>>41462843“Kinda. I know that it was dignity or pride or something along those lines. But it’s not how I understand these things at all. Sometimes I forget just how different they are from us.”>Slightly different blood, radically different history.>It should be no shock they’re different.>But he was having trouble understanding a central part of their spirit.“They kept saying dignity, but I’m not sure that’s the word I’d use. The way Tiger Eye talks, it’s like his dignity comes from being better than others.”>All that talk about how they weren’t envied anymore.>About how they were dependent on their lessers.>Maybe it was a mistake to project these traits onto everypony else, but he couldn’t help but wonder…>Did they NEED competition?“He said that they didn’t bother comparing themselves to others, but I don’t think that’s true. He has this burning need to assert primacy.”>”I know that look.”>What look?>”You’ve got all the pieces to this puzzle, you’re just not sure how they fit together.”“I’m not so sure I’ve got all the pieces.”>”You do. Trust me, I’ve seen that face a thousand times.”>It wasn’t the most persuasive argument, but Twilight had a tendency to be right.“Alright. Let’s start from the beginning. I don’t understand the crystal ponies. I tried offering them money, but they weren’t interested. Tiger Eye offered them some twisted interpretation of pride, and did pretty well. Whatever it is, they value it as much as if not more than material wealth.”>”It’s not dignity, and it’s not pride. It’s something similar. Something related to their culture, something that we don’t really get.”>The two sat in silence for a few minutes.>Twilight eventually fetched a dictionary and began to flip through it, seeking the perfect word.>But it was Shining Armour who eventually broke the silence.“Honor. Why didn’t I see it before? They’re the EMPIRE, although the face of it has changed a few times, it’s always been a martial society.”>”Noun. High respect, great esteem. It fits.”“Traditionally, this would have come from placing one’s self high on the social hierarchy. Being part of the mechanism of state would help with that, even if it was just a rank and file militia. They were still putting themselves above the outsiders, even if they never wound up being needed. Asking them to toil at the request of myself, an outsider, to make things for other outsiders, all with no barrier to entry so that they’d be associating with the lowest in society- I hurt their sense of honour.”>Tiger Eye had two strategies.>Either say they were showing themselves to be better than Changelings, or better than Equestria.>Either way, he promised honour.“Okay. We have a hypothesis. He’s just reflecting the Crystal’s need for honour, but he’s being excessive. Now we need to test it.”
>>41462850>”Wait, did you say excess? Hmm… Why do soldiers fight?”>It was Shining Armour’s time to recognize a look.>Twilight had figured something out.>She just wanted a quick sanity check.“There are a lot of reasons. Do you want specifics, or-”>”The most primal answer, please.”“Well, a good soldier fights because they love what’s behind them. But sometimes it’s because they hate what’s in front of them. Of course, some do it for glory- oh.”>Noun.>High renown or honour.“Glory or honour, Tiger Eye. Plunder or wealth, Garnet. Hatred or wrath, Jasper.”>How did Howlite fit in?>Maybe he didn’t need to?>”Cadence told me that you’d gotten rid of a lot of the old leadership. Why not these ones?”“They’re too influential.”>“Which means they’re not universally hated. If everypony disagreed with them, it would be easy. It’s starting to look like you have these senators because they’re actually speaking to the desires of the ponies.”>It was plausible.>That implied some VERY bad things, though.>They’d have to find healthy ways to handle Jasper’s desires.“There’s a LOT of speculation here, we should start with public opinion surveys.”>”I’d be happy to organise that! But there’s actually… one more thing that needs to be studied. One more excess. Or rather, two closely related ones. You mentioned that one motivation is love.”>Cadence!>”Ever hear of the rape of the Sable ponies?”>Everypony who went through the academy knew about that.>It had been a stark warning about how easily those who wielded power could become corrupted and selfish.>And…>It made some sense!>Cadence was BARELY crystal at all, but she WAS the descendent of their royals!>She had that incident with the amulet, but might there be more to this than a mere magical artefact?>Was her incredible lust based on desire for more than he’d realised?“If we think the senators got there because they represented some buried desire of the public, Cadence would need a different explanation.”>”Does she? Not every piece needs to fit.”>True.“You’re the one that brought it up though.”>”Just as a curiosity. The pattern is there, but it’s probably just noise.”“I still think we should include it as a data point.”>”I don’t. She got there because she’s related to princess Amore, not because she represents the public.”>True.
>>41462855“But Princess Amore was almost universally liked. We can assume that she represented them reasonably well.”>”And Cadence is BARELY related to her. There’s no reason to assume they’re similar.”>She was right.“I STILL think we should include it.”>”Why? It’s icky.”>If only you knew, Twily.“You think you know the royal guard because you grew up around the palace. You’re wrong. That’s them being on their best behaviour; put them under enough stress and get them far enough away from watchful eyes, and they change. Just because Cadence doesn’t represent them doesn’t mean they aren’t similar.”>This wasn’t going to match perfectly, of course.>They weren’t ALL soldiers.>And even if they were, they’d be different from the Guard.>But military life was a big part of their culture.>He had to respect that, and be mindful of it.>He had to try and understand them, and talking to them would only get him so far.>The soldier angle was a good starting point.
Scene change!>>41462861>Cadence was sitting alone in her room, mulling over a stack of papers.>She sat under bright lantern light, wearing a green tinted visor, and chewing on her quill.>It was going to be tight, but it should just barely work out.>Then, quite suddenly, there came a gentle knock on the door.“Come in, Shiny.”>That was his timid knock.>He’s worried about something.>Cadence shoved aside her project with a pout.>It would have to wait until he was straightened out.>Such was her duty.>Cadence got up from her chair, and after a quick glance around saw there was only one.>She sat on the floor to make the seat available to her beloved.>It was-“Oh. Hello, Lovelace. I wasn’t expecting you so soon.”>”Cute hat.”>She sounded frightened.“Thanks! Did you know that you knock just like Shiney when he’s scared?”>”Is now a bad time? Maybe I should come back later, and-”“Oh, no, it’s actually perfect! We got the factory working today, just barely, and we’re a bit ahead of schedule for making our shipment.”>”Should you be telling me this?”“It’s not exactly a secret. The long and short of it is we can proceed with the planned budget, which means I know what I’m working with. Which means I should be able to place an order. We won’t need it soon, so there’s no rush- I’m actually not certain who it’s for just yet.”>”Oh, that’s a relief. What do you need?”>That was a sudden change of mood.>What is she afraid of->Oh.>Right.“Are you STILL sore?”>”YES!”“But that was a month ago!”>”We are NEVER doing that again!”“Aww! But it was really fun!”>”Nuh-uh. Not a chance. Never again, I SWEAR you won’t even THINK of touching me, not in your LIFE!”…>”For two weeks.”“I’ll try to be gentler next time.”>”Who’s the mark?”>Cadence couldn’t help but smirk.“Garnet.”>Lovelace took half a step back as her jaw slowly descended.“Yeah.”>”You’re trying to enslave my landlord? Do- do you think she’d like it?”“Not a chance. This one isn’t matchmaking, and it’s not charity.”>It was revenge.“Whether she knew what she was signing or not, she attacked MY family-”>Cadence stomped the ground, struggling to contain her anger.“And MY kingdom, she’s not just walking away from that!”>”Cadence, I’ve known you for a LONG time, and I’ve never seen you like this! Are you okay?”“Of course I am!”>She didn’t attempt to hide the rage in her voice.>”You only have four emotions. Happy, goofy, playful, and horny. Where’s THIS coming from?”“She attacked my family! Of course I’m angry.”>”You’re supposed to be the princess of love, not rage!”“How could I claim to love them if I don’t hate somepony who tried to destroy them?”>”I… guess?”
>>41462866“You’ll understand someday when you have foals. She needs to be neutralised, but I don’t want to spill any blood”>There were better fluids to spill.>”Look. You’ve got good reason to be angry, but I still think you should reconsider. Maybe wait a while to calm down. You’re all emotional.” “No need to worry about that. She’s still untouchable; by the time I have an opportunity I’ll have had plenty of time to calm down and think it through.”>”I… okay, that’s actually a really good answer.”“Look… I said earlier that I was placing an order. That’s a bit of a lie. I need a friend right now.”>It didn’t take long for Lovelace to be standing next to Cadence, trying to comfort her.“You’ve known me since back when I was normal.”>”You were never normal, and that’s okay.”“You know what I meant. I need somepony to help keep me grounded. Shiny won’t do it since he’s convinced himself he’s not good enough for me. He’s scared of chasing me away. Twilight won’t do it since she’s too meek to even talk about this stuff. I’m counting on you.”>”Of course.”“Let me know if you ever think I’m going too far.”>”I thought you went too far a long time ago-”>Cadence’s heart felt like it had turned to ice.>”And I was wrong. I’ve talked to them, and they’re happy.”>That wasn’t the problem.>The problem was that Lovelace hadn’t spoken up.>She couldn’t be counted on for hard truths.“Why didn’t you say anything?”>”Because I trust you.”“But-”>”No, shush. I want you to think about that for a while. I TRUSTED you when you declared you were going to have an innocent pony abducted from their home and raped by a stranger. I trusted you when you said it was for the best. And I trusted you when you started to make a habit of it.”>It was a rather unusual pep talk.>”And the reason WHY is because you’ve got a good heart. The Cadence I know isn’t capable of evil.”“I’m not so sure about that…”>”Well, I am. You can make mistakes, which is why I want you to think this through, but I know for a fact that no matter what happens, your heart will always be in the right place.”“I guess…”>”No, no guessing. THINK about it. You announced that you were going to start abducting and raping ponies, and I STILL believed in you. Hay, I SUPPORTED you, even though it made me feel terrible. Do you think I’d have acted like that had anypony else in the whole world said the same thing?”“But what if I’m wrong about this? About everything?”>Twilight’s accusation only hurt because it rang true.>”Then you change your plans and try again. That’s like, how science works!”>That might have been a bit of a stretch!>”Now, tell me what your plan was.”>Well…
>>41462869“It’s a different arrangement than usual. It’s supposed to be a punishment after all, and a really bad one. We effectively make her state property and let everypony have their way with her.”>”Public cum dump?”“It’s an important role for society, but it makes you undesirable for marriage. Garnet’s already useless for marriage though. I can’t think of any stallion that would want to live with THAT.”>”It’s not the weirdest idea you’ve ever had. What standard of living would she get?”“I don’t know.”>”How long would she serve this role?”“I haven’t figured that out yet.”>”How many hours a day?”“Not sure.”>”What happens if somepony gets too rough with her?”>Cadence shrugged.>”You, like, haven’t thought this out at all?”“I didn’t think we could afford it until a few hours ago. There’s no point in figuring this all out if we can’t do it anyway.”>”What’s there to afford?”“Security, training, apparel, we’d need some way for ponies to make reservations, some checks and balances in place to prevent this from damaging relationships or stopping them from forming, we’ve got to maintain her health and appearance- oh, we’d probably need to teach her how to apply makeup properly to hide that permanent scowl-”>”Okay, there’s lots of stuff. But this sounds a lot more high class than what I was imagining.””How so?”>“I thought you were just going to stick her in the stocks and see what happens.”“Oh, not at all! The ponies deserve better, this would be a high quality service!”>”Oh. It’ll never work.”“But-”>”How would you keep her from biting?”>Hm.>”I TOTALLY get it. Having a bunch of sluts out there you could use whenever would be fun! And, like, you don’t like her. But you’re trying to do two things at once, and it’s going to be super hard. You need to think with your head instead of your holes. Is sex a punishment?”“Of course not! But here I am turning it into one… I see the problem. Well, I’ll just have to make sure she likes it.”>”But then ponies will TRY to get punished so they join her.”“That’s preposterous.”>”I’m not sure what that word means.”“Nopony would EVER want to do something like that! Mares want husbands and masters, not just endless sex!”>Lovelace’s expression was somewhere between condescending and exasperated.“What?”
>>41462873>”How is it that you of all ponies don’t realise what a lack of dick does to a mare?”>Well->”I sell relief to mares that are celibate despite their best efforts.”“They don’t fuck, and that’s not by choice?”>There ought to be a word for such a terrible fate!“That makes this program even more important! They need relief!”>”Trust me. The moment word gets out about this program, there will be mares TRYING to make you angry so you sign them up.”>That was almost impossible to believe.>But Lovelace had been a long time confidant.“O… okay. I trust you.”>She couldn’t deny her heart was broken.>But maybe it was for the best.>The whole thing was ill conceived in the first place.Alright. That part about how ponies would try to sign up the moment word got out?Word gets out, and somepony tries to sign up.I think I can tie both Rarity and Twilight into this development. Hopefully I’m right, else this is a massive diversion that doesn’t really progress the story.We need to pick a pony. One who is so desperate for cock that they’ll abandon all notions of dignity for it. Keep in mind that we will NOT own this pony, though we will almost certainly use them. Don’t select somepony you don’t want to share.Don’t hesitate to suggest somepony unusual. The worst that can happen is I say “no”.
>>41462879>One who is so desperate for cock that they’ll abandon all notions of dignity for it.Some context as to why they reached that point would help in finding a fitting character, but I guess you would work out the circunstances after choosing one of the suggestions ?What about Limestone ? Her face always goes well with a scowl.https://derpibooru.org/images/2005229
>>41462942I originally envisioned it as a marecel who had given up on other means, but we're not at all stuck with that.Limestone thinking she's too unlikeable or something could work. Or maybe she damaged Holder's Boulder by accident and had to leave. We're flexible here.
>>41463733>marecel who had given up on other meansNow you're making me think of Moondancer for the role. Which also sounds perfect for helping giving Twilight the extra push she needs.>Limestone thinking she's too unlikeableI was thinking of something like that, with her being the barely noticed fourth sister and all.
bump till i read it
>>41464039>her being the barely noticed fourth sister and allOr maybe she has a resting bitch face and/or attitude that always made her too unapproachable.
How do you avoid her questions about the suspicion that you are keeping ponies captive?
>>41465670Hypnotize her.
>>41462879I think I have to suggest this one as well because I cant think of a better example of an unwilling candidate who wouldnt be approachable because of her attitude, specially against stallions who she sees as beneath her as far as Cadence is concerned.
>>41466129Older mare who's spent their entire life on their career worried that they'll die a virgin and desperate to enjoy themselves before they get too old. Has no clue how to date and doesn't go for casual hookups. Decides that if she's going to slut it up, she's going to do it right.I think I like it.
>>41462879Man two things:First Shiny has to deal with a lot of disdain for not be a Crystal Pony, this part show how it adds to his feelings of not being enough for Candance.Second the punishment for Garnet and the explanation of Lovelace about how the lonely mares of the empire are going to demand to be used... that really must hurt the Alicorn of Love view of the world.Passing of that...Well I suggest Moon dancer and Bon Bon/Sweetie Drop. The first for being an acquiented of Twilight to push her by seeing an equal on knowledge being turned and twisted by her desire.Bon Bon/Sweetie Drop is more like if the Crystal Ponies find an equestrian spy without the orders of Celestial or Luna.
>>41466410You make it sound like she would be already set on throwing away all that self image and pride she keeps holding on to without some coercive circumstances involved to help give her a new view on things.And speaking of circumstances, is there something stopping Cadence from changing the type of duration, living standard, etc depending on the mare that got sentenced ?>>41462879At this point she must be thinking that the mares who want to get sentenced might have to give up something they still value to make this an actual punishment.>>41467133>Bon Bon/Sweetie DropYou thought of her to bring a lesbian mare into the story ?
>>41465732She is an earth pony. She will easily resist your tricks.
What threats would make these two submit immediately?any is not accepted as an answer, despite its being show canon
Is that edit anon still around ?
>>41471247Mannequin edits, why didnt I ever think of that ? I wish I could find examples from other races.Oh and nice gag choice on that one. Panel gags are always hot, and the more straps their get over the face the better they look.
>>41464039Moondancer would be a good fit, but again, I'm open to all suggestions. I'll have to pick kinda soon since I can't proceed without knowing, but I'll give people a bit more time to weigh in.It wouldn't be hard to make it about Limestone either, if that's what people would prefer. There would just be different problems to overcome.>>41465206It could be funny having Cadence trying to take the edge off of Limestone's attitude only to fail miserably.>>41466129>>41466410Harshwhinny is a really interesting candidate. I hadn't thought of her when planning this out, but she fits. Albeit for different reasons.>>41467622It's going to take a lot of convincing for Cadence to accept any volunteers for this program. She wants ponies to fuck, yes, but she also wants them to have stable relationships. Demanding some form of sacrifice would make sense.And I don't believe there would be anything forcing Cadence to honor an original agreement. Granted, she's probably going to exaggerate how bad it would be since she's trying to deter them.>>41467133I try very hard to strike a good balance between smut and story, and hearing that you understand the struggle I've set up for Shining is really good for the ego. Thank you.Taking Sweetie Drops would be pretty dangerous, especially if she's not a volunteer. Celestia may be supporting them, but imprisoning a federal asset like that has consequences. Never mind the fact that Sweetie Drops is probably pretty dangerous on her own.
>>41471764Just for the sake of offering a non-pony suggestion, what about a gryphon who could never fit in her homeland and much less in equestria, no matter how much she tried ?
>>41472633Ooh! There's a fun idea.
>>41471247holyshit i love tailwraps
>>41472633Second.I'd attach a compelling argument, but I don't want to compress it that much. https://ponerpics.org/images/2629067
܂>>41462879>Not to the same degree as his sisterHeh.>Nopony was interested.He is doing something completely wrong.>don’t have an assistant by that name…Seems like a few ponies need to be thrown into cells.>work a lot better if more ponies were like youMoments earlier he opened with "what do I owe the displeasure to".>You’re dismissed.Exercising authority! Good!>quite literally foaming at the mouthI did not expect the commoners to be this.>or just stupid?Sometimes. A lot of times.>Consider dying.Heh. At least he is honest.>WANTED to helpOr to be seen as a pioneer in the new order.>We don’t need to be big to be mightyBut they do need to stop fighting themselves..>find her flush, and sweatyBig bro interrupting.>something that we don’t really getBut if Shining manages to use it, he will be in a much better negotiator.>toil at the request of myself, an outsider, to make things for other outsidersSo this is why Anon does not gets paid?>start with public opinion surveysTo which they will receive no proper answers.>include it as a data pointCadance is reduced to a data point.>not because she represents the publicIn secret every crystal pony is a lust driven animal.>We are NEVER doing that again!This is new. Need more details!>Happy, goofy, playful, and horny.Isn't all four just horny with a twist?>but I don’t want to spill any bloodSo don't rape her with a dildo large enough to cause bleeding. Got it.>make a habit of itRarity and Anon needs to meet a few other couples.>let everypony have their way with herThe hard part will be convincing any commoner to do that.>Okay, there’s lots of stuff.All those points are in relation to protect whoever is using Garnet, none of it is for the protection of Garnet.>How would you keep her from biting?Ask Anon to remove her lower jaw.>Is sex a punishment?Ask Shining.>not just endless sex!Look who is speaking.>so you sign them upThe Crystal Empire will be known as the red light district.Thanks for the update!
>>41473722Wont even post a spoilered part of it ?I only had the "not fitting" reason in mind when suggesting her. Although now Im also thinking of how bringing a foreign race into the public property experiment could bring some interesting reactions from the nationalistic clique of the Empire>>41462837
Gabby seems pretty popular. Of course, I don't know how much samefagging is happening. I'll assume it's minimal, though.Anyone else want to weigh in?
>>41471764Good point, it would bring more trouble to the empire.Well in that case why not Trixie or Gilda in case of need another species.
>>41471247very nice
>>41475567Believe me if you want but I suggested 3 of the options so far, with all the limestone posts being mine.>>41462942>>41464039>>41465206>>41466129>>41467622>>41472633>>41474389
>>41476213Wait no, that was 4 suggestions. Anyway, just wanted to clear that up on my part.
>>41471195In the past, people just posted their ideas and requests and the edit anon picked them up at some point. Maybe try that?
>>41480080There's an edit anon was working on something inspired by that image. Just wanted to see if he's still around after the weeks long hiatus of this general.https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/41341005/#41341617But I wouldnt mind thinking up a request if you or someone around is taking them.
I WAS going to go with Gabby, but she feels too innocent to corrupt like that. Sorry if you were rooting for her; apparently there are lines I'm not comfortable with. That's honestly a surprise to me.
>>41482742But thats what makes the idea so appealing !
>>41482742Don't you have enough characters to juggle with already?
>>41483107A few too many, yes. I'm trying to shelve some, and if I don't blow it this will tie in directly to Coco and Twilight.
>>41483139What about re-using a few? Getting a noble to submit under Anon.
>>41475567Late suggestion for Milky Way.
>>41484812no.
What kind of relationship do those two have indoors ?
>>41486008Zecora plays being a pet? I don't know.
>>41475567No one mentioned this case, but what if you had a real freak of a masochist mare who wants to experience an actual slave treatment to crave her huge submissive needs ?You could ask why couldnt she just get a master for herself to do this, but what if she was also avoiding having any type of attachments that could ruin the disposable view she wants others to have of her ?
>>41475567>GabbyI don't think she has anything to do in the empire.
>>41486537Anithing different from that ? Just to bring something new to the table.
>>41491975none in the past 3 years
>>41492835I meant the more recent writers who have been here in the past threads, like Manic and other anonymous ones.
>>41491975>>41492835I might. Came back after a long absence to find my unfinished /sim/ green is now my most viewed on ponepaste.
>>41494435Which one ? Im trying to see where I can check the most viewed stories.
>>41494435>I might.A lot of writefags lurk, but are too embarrassed to start writing again or something.
>>41495492I mean, yeah. Writefagging is a major timesink and hard to sustain long-term. There have been posts legitimately pissed that I gave up on the story. So unless I plan on committing to it for a while, it becomes kind of a sore subject. Sorry >>41494581.
>>41495627>SorryCome on anon have more faith in me. I've seen enough stories being dropped midway to realize how inspiration and interest are things you cant expect to be eternal. And you need those to make a good story anyway, no matter how many angry horny anons want it to continue.But seriously just give more hints to it, it might be something I never read.Is it by any chance the caveman anon story ?
I want to talk about cracked master/slave pairings. What are the most wild ones you ever thought of, and what made them "kinda work" in your mind ?
>>41495854I didnt even talk about the one I posted. No misteries about why Harshwhinny would like it, she desires control and excellence, and having a young moldable mare to work on would be even better in her eyes.As for Rainbow, I dont know how to put into better words, but her archetype and the element she's related to just seems to scream that she could harbor a secret compulsion to prove her obedience and loyalty towards a really demanding dom. Not the arbitrary sadist type, but definitely not one who would ask little of her for a reward.
>>41471195Woah, it's my comm. Glad to see it being shared around>>41480137And I look forward to seeing more of this!
oh hey, SIM is back… Maybe I should write something—
>>41498231Maybe. Got any ideas in mind ?
>>41498279Not necessarily… I have been wanting to explore some medical play/do something medical related however, and pinkamena has always been a favorite of mineMaybe I can figure out something with those two?
>>41498297A secret basement where she plays nurse when the pinkamena personality pops up ? Maybe that happens during her heat ?
>>41498331Well… My dick certainly digs the idea, that’s for sure. Maybe she gets all her violent fantasies on (You) when in heat, thus giving the reason for the pinkamena personality to show up, and by proxy, give her the opportunity to be a sadistic bitch of a “nurse”. …I’m already getting some ideas! Thanks random anon, I’ll probably manage to jot something down, if not a little snippet.
>>41498380But before I leave… have a latex ponk for your troubles
>>41497129Yeah I am using this as the cover image for the new mind control thread
>>41498391Just what I like.Hey anon, what if she dragged some poor soul to be her unwilling assistant ?
Any thoughts on slavery being a custom of the hippogriff royal family ?
>>41498391latex ponk IS trouble
>>41501828She wants to make her friends have the same fucked up tastes she has.And while that doesnt happen she plays with some captives in her secret clinic.
>>41443617>thread is called Submission is Mandatory>most anons don't submit anything to the threadhow
>>41504664Its hard to get the lurkers here to engage in something.
>>41504664such is life
So what do the lurkers feel like talking about ?
>>41506239the penis go inside the pony vaj
>>41507098Has anyone ever tried writing Ember being paraded as a prisoner by one of the corrupted princesses ?
Nice use of carousel bondagehttps://derpibooru.org/images/3456101
>>41508127I was thinking of doing something with dragon tamer Anon, I did not have much of an idea other than mind control.But for an evil, equestia maybe Anon has powerful magic, nothing compared to the princesses but a lot more than normal creatures, and from there uses tension between the princesses to grow his own power.Like leaking information that one princess is trying to capture ember, now the other has to prevent that or the first one will have more power.All the while Anon gets more and more influence and power
>>41510713I think I remember reading this idea. Was it to you that I suggested that the dragons could have something of an natural impulse to obey whoever that managed to conquer them ?
>>41490934Who's submitting here?
>>41512078No one, a tamed kirin would need a special suit to keep their flames contained.
No dying just yet.
>>41513273Is there something coming soon ?
>>41510890yes that was meOn an unrelated note, have any of you heard about fiction.live it has some good pony storieshttps://fiction.live/mlp?terms=mlp&page=1this is the forth time I had to write this
>>41514077Is there a power absortion ability that the princesses and the anon have ? Or would they become more powerful just because they would have a powerful dragon under their control ?>https://fiction.live/mlp?terms=mlp&page=1Never seen it before. Is it one of those fiction sites where stories take branches depending on what the viewers vote ?
>>41514134I was thinking that only Anon has an ability like that.His transportation to equestrian allowed for him to gain many powerful types of magic, among them soul manipulation/magic , which allows him to gain a portion of the power of his slaves, power, depending on how submissive they are.if they submit completely its like adding their power onto anons, like he gets all of their power, added to him but the slave loses nothing. so in the context of ember anon has all the dragon powers.He would also have a lot of ritual magic and unique tools that would help him train slaves, however well a lot more powerful than most creatures, he would be nothing compared to a tyrant alicorn, one of the sisters I am thinking luna starts using him, to train hard to break cunts, training royalty of other nations, rebel leaders, and upstart nobility, eventually the other sister celestia notices, and starts using him as well to humiliate and threaten nobles maybe add a bit of racism esspially in canterlot, this way nobles are worried not just about being slaves, but being a slave to a savage pony eating monster if they fuck up.Anon gets to decide if he sides with one of the sisters, after all the sisters are constantly trying to enslave each other only to break free, and turn the tables of their sibling; maybe Anon could convince one of the sisters to let him handle the taming, if they succeed Anon will have one of the tyrant sisters and their magic after that he will be stronger, then his Patreon, and then he can tame her as well. either sister has escaped slavery to many times to think Anon can hold them for long anywayor maybe he plays a middle ground building up his forces, growing stronger and stronger with each conquest, the tyrant sisters underestimate him and you know the rest
>>41512180I don't think latex would be it.
>>41514560Would Ember be with him during all this scheming build up ? Cause Im wondering why you are thinking of dragons so much in your idea since it seems to encompass any possible species. Would she be the breaking point that gets things going for anon?>but the slave loses nothingWhy that compromise ? Is it so they are not aware of anon's power ?>after all the sisters are constantly trying to enslave each other only to break freeI feel like you could do something interesting with the slavery rules in this Equestria. Maybe the diarchy is fractured and each princess is trying to assert their claim on equestria as a whole by literally claiming posession of the other one ? Is it a world where rule by the strongest is law, and asserting control of your rival is the lawful accepted way of solving conflicts ? At least in the nobility and above I mean.
>>41498391The first victim of Pinkamena's mission to make hardcore fetish freaks out of her friends.
>>41518487Why does AI have such an easy time with latex ? It cant be just because of sample amounts.
>>41519236
>>41519815Can it do a goth Octavia ?
>>41520190ask in the ai thread i just got it from there
Any edit anons who could liven things up ?Harshwhinny could use a dom outfit here.Or maybe a sub outfit, with a posture collar and a complementary ball gag strap hanging around her neck.
Last bump from me tonight.
Any safe images that show twilight in a sexy position.
>>41526222what, you are worried her brother comes and beats you?
>>41526222This maybe ? Not sure how "safe" you want it to be.Had to resize from the original source.https://derpibooru.org/images/3032371
>>41527702Just something that won’t get you banned from 4 chan
Reminder the Coco needs to get her behind absolutely roasted red as a raspberry with a paddle until she's squealing, sobbing, and begging for mercy and promising to be an obedient good girl, the BEST girl
>>41528773>Years under Suri's treatment made Coco unable to feel at ease without somepony keeping her on a leash.
>>41528607This one comes with more than just a sexy pose.
Last post from me tonight. Still waiting to for the rubber story to continue, sensory deprived kirins cant come soon enough.
>>41530764I could use a story like that. A former slave who was so degraded by her previous owner that she cant stand her own image anymore.
Im surprised no one posted this one here yet.
>>41536572god I wish I was twilight
>>41535553off by 2
>>41537958Vinyl admiring her piercing work on Tavihttps://derpibooru.org/images/1548588
>>41537958>>41538424Would marking her marefriend be something that really turns on Vinyl ?Or would she like it more for the ruining aspect ?
In case this thread dies soon, do we make another one in a few days or right away ?
>>41540651What about not letting it die?
>>41541027If the anons engaged more it would be easier.
Which pony are spilling your seed for at the end of this Locktober ?For me, it's princess Celestia
>>41542258That depends, which pony is getting the best kinktober art ?
>>41542258Nice edit by the way. Any chance of making another one with Celestia and a golden chastity cage ?
Speaking of chastity, any opinions on magic penis strapons ?https://derpibooru.org/images/3453645
Maybe this request will interest one of the lurking edit anons.Could someone add a shiny paddle to this, floating with Celestia's magic ?>>41446862
>>41544443>off by oneNo.
don't die thread
>>41544443Didnt notice I almost had a quint. Still though, an off by one has to be worth enough to give that latexed behind a corrective tool.
>>41546979Its hard to find Spitfire stuff where she looks vulnerabe like that.Does she get disciplined by Celestia herself anytime the Wonderbolts make a mistake ?
Quick bump before I run out of power.
No one wants to talk about anything. How about some Rara ? She's a good ice breaker.
>>41542927>>41542258Or Luna with an elaborate moonsilver one. And without a visible lock - the material itself fusing or unfusing according to her will.>>41543424They're pretty hot. Especially if they let the wearer feel the touch like it's their actual penis (even if dulled), while also feeling the tight cage.
>>41552498its not the 1800s anymore, fridges don't run on ice anymore
>>41553096>>41542927I didn't make the image, just found it in the archive
>>41552498
>>41553096What if the length of the magical rod was tied to how aroused the owner is ?
Any stories with slave athletes ?
>>41555843why the gas mask?
>>41556125Breath control is a very effective way to keep pegasi in check. Also its a very common kink among them.
>>41556280but why the filter?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E20jsywkLaY
>>41556862I dont know what to come up for that part, maybe its there to add something to the air that comes in ? Or to remove any smell from the air and make the pegasus more dependent on their eyes for orientation ?
Serious question here. I'm about to commission a more detailed version of this image, so i would like your input about the possible pose or action. Or maybe those should stay the same? Personally i'm leaning towards her standing in wind, her billowing cloak set aside just enough to show us her rubber face and genitals (at the very least). Any other recommendations you guys have?
>>41557820Oh hey you're back ! I remember you getting interested in the cloaked idea.>input about the possible pose or actionI had two more ideas besides that that one which I talked about in a latex thread.https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/41194615/#41245562That anal one could look really good if done from underneath so you could see all the pierced goods, and maybe teats if you want to include that. Or it could be a sideways view to show her grunting, pleasured face with more details, with a corner panel showing the hidden action.>her billowing cloak set aside just enough to show us her rubber face and genitalsAs a sideways view where her rump would be turned just enough to get a peek ? There are plenty of cloaked zecora images you could look up as reference.
>>41557952Thanks for the suggestion. I'm not sure about adding another character (it adds to the price, and i would prefer putting more details on her), but maybe possible anal action can be done with dildo. Do you think her genitals should be pierced shut, or just decorated with piercings?>plenty of cloaked zecora images I plan to check out those, ideally with a good angle for visible genitals.
>>41557820>>41557952Oh and by grunting pleasured face I mean something akin to this >>41516528with her eyes closed in effort as she's trying to reach her hard earned climax with what little she has available to work with.>>41558029>maybe possible anal action can be done with dildoCould be with a big one, which also reminded me or another good posehttps://derpibooru.org/images/3238748Or it could be a floating dick with some veins.>Do you think her genitals should be pierced shut, or just decorated with piercings?Pierced shut to only give her a few options to work with.Maybe just a pierced but not completely closed clit ? I know full chastity is hot but the idea of anal not being enough and having to rub herself to really get off is sounding a lot hotter.
>>41558051>reminded me or another good poseNow that's a really cool pose! So your suggestion is that she should be attempting to pleasure herself? Not escaping or traveling, etc. ?>pierced but not completely closed clit Well considering how she looks like, i think her clit should get some decorative piercing at the very least, no idea how it should look like yet.
>>41558124>attempting to pleasure herself?Yup. Maybe her new role forced onto her by the tribe didnt give her the right to bear any children, and a barely uncovered clit piercing was all the consideration they had for her pleasure in this. >decorative piercingLots of examples of that on derpi, although a lot of them use hanging stuff which might not fit with Zecora's piercing.I cant find any examples of this, but what would you think of a half circle or crescent moon clit shield covering, with the top part being uncovered ?
>>41558124>>41558415Had to make a half assed example on mspaint but it would be something like this, with only the upper part being touchable.
>>41558686First thing that came to mind after seeing this is that there could be tiny magical tendrils teasing her on the exposed part. Still, it would be easy to implement and considering that only the top part of her clit will be uncovered she may have a really hard time attempting to rub it with her hoof.>>41558415>all the consideration they had for her pleasure in this. It should be less about consideration and more about functionality If it was done like this, it was done with purpose in mind. Maybe it was supposed to be an eye-candy, and her visible clit will be latexed like the rest of her body. Or maybe it was about them being able to drip aphrodisiacs and other potions on it. This brings another question, should her pussy and anus (piercings on anus?) be covered in latex as well? And how should her mouth be done, after all in the original arts we could see a golden zipper, or a ballgag under latex.
>>41559326You know, there was an alternative approach I also thought up during that latex thread, where she would have more spiked piercings like those on her back covering her genitals,along with maybe a spiked shield to cover her clit. Outward ones of course, that would make her pussy unnaproachable to any male, to match the dangerous beast theme.Not that Im vouching for this one over the other but its something you could consider too for a possible mix.>should her pussy and anus (piercings on anus?) be covered in latex as well?Definitely, her backside should match the theme. As for the anus, it could have some beads around it, with some dock piercings as well. Kinda like a more developed version of what was added to that part in thishttps://derpibooru.org/images/3284902>how should her mouth be donePersonally I would pick either a good attempt at her biting her latex covered lips during the effort, with maybe some teeth showing up. Or pick the covered ballgag if the first option doesnt manage to look good. I dont know how hard that would be and you would be better asking the artist on that part.
>>41559326>eye-candyA sapphire gem to complement her shield ? Maybe placed at the middle of the golden moon >>41558686 ?Or part of a ring that punctures through the clit and the base of the shield ?https://derpibooru.org/images/3305276
>>41559514Honestly when i think about it, some details may be lost since the genital area will be a bit obscured by the dildo she may be squatting over, so i have no idea how many piercings will be visible.We'll see what the artist can do. But the dangerous-looking piercings will surely be explored to see if they look good.>attempt at her biting her latex covered lips Just so i understand it right, you're suggesting that her mouth is sealed and she's trying to bite through it? Or simply biting her lips?Also, should her crotchboobs be bigger with large teats? Pierced too of course.
>>41559631If you want to go with the squatting idea then it will have to be a front view to not miss anything.>mouth is sealed and she's trying to bite through it? Or simply biting her lips?I was only thinking of her biting her lips or just making a grunting gesture with her mouth like in the squatting pick but now Im curious about the sealed mouth. Would it look good if it was something that shows stretching like in here >>41516528 ?
>>41559631Oh and about her crotchboobs, I dont know how big you mean. Something on the milky way level would make them steal the focus too much.Medium sized might look best ? A bit bigger than the proportional size ?
>>41560412>>41560346Honestly anon, I think the crotchboobs size should be up to you. All Im saying is that they probably shouldnt be huge.
>>41560346Hey, thanks to the provided idea, i'm now inclined to pay for two arts with her. One with her as an escaped slave where she is partially obscured by a tattered cloak, the second would be her trying to anally pleasure herself like you suggested. I honestly hope that the results will be good enough to inspire people to co-fund more of these.
>>41560789Sweet ! Im glad I could find someone who also liked this concept. And that escaped slave idea was too good to not make an art of as well.>honestly hope that the results will be good enough to inspire people to co-fund more of these.That would be great if it happens, I remember the images on derpi getting a good amount of favorites even if they barely had any comments. That would mean there are people who are liking but dont know how to approach it?I wonder if I can find a writer anon who would want to write a short on either of these situations. Or maybe about an anon freeing a cursed idol who will grant him power to help take over equestria. Kind of like a Lelouch/CC partnership but with sex powers and a horny masochist assistant.
>>41560789Hey anon, in a completely separate scenario from the tribe context, what's you opinion on it being a Pinkamena experiment ?>>41498391
>>41561273Can you describe it a bit more? As far as i understand it's about Pinkie forcing this upon others. Still, it's a possibility.
>>41562335Well like that anon said way back >>41498380, she would have these depraved types of fantasies and tastes that would manifest along with her second personality. And the idea would be that this second personality would have a plan to make her friends learn to enjoy the same type of stuff to "help" her nicer side not be alone, even if she doesnt know about it. And along the way a certain zebra might have found out about this dark side and got kidnapped and turned into pinkamena's unwilling helper in the secret clinic, with a new permanent look added to her in the process.
>>41562409I see, thanks for the explanation. It kinda reminds me of the old ideas that involved Nightmare Moon as Zecora's owner.With Pinkie i just don't see clearly how would she manage to dominate Zecora to such level, no active magic after all so this would need to be figured out.Still, i am of the opinion that any idea should be used if it is better than the previous one, and i am still putting together the commission request so there is time to alter it. Like hell, her owners can be the CMC trio for all i care if the idea would be good enough.
>>41563504>how would she manage to dominate Zecora to such levelThe idea was that she would have already woken up inside a cage with the new look. As for whats keeping her there, it could be a mix of heavy use of locks, lingering concern for Pinkie, heavy initial shock from being disfigured like that, and maybe a veiled threat in bringing Applebloom into this ?This would be getting kinda complex though, I was mostly picturing Pinkamena turning Zecora into a masochist pet who can only use e-stim piercings to really off.
Who’d hate ball worship and ball sniffing the worst, how would the master make the time they spend doing it worse what’s the worst or most degrading position or addition to make the time miserable. Any needed equipment or modifications for the slave nose /snout or body Should they be allowed oral air during these sessions?
>>41563874>Hetero optionApplejack>Gay optionGallus
>>41563504Hmm just to go back to a previous idea and make it tribe related.What if the escaped slave had a bounty on her, and got found out and captured by Tempest and her crew during the invasion ?https://derpibooru.org/images/3033677It could be the inside of the ship with her tied up like that, the charm that was hiding her true appearance broken next to her, and some exposition dialogue from Tempest showing up somewhere in the panel.You could spice it up with her electricity being used on the piercings to stimulate the gagged, angry captive.
>>41563805Not a bad idea, but the problem is that it sounds like Pinkie is acting on her own here, meaning that if Zecora is discovered she may most likely get rescued. Unless of course Pinkie manages to corrupt her friends, but it seems like they will meet similar fates. On the other hand with the tribe, such enslavement is basically baked into the society as normal, so no rescue would happen.Not gonna lie though, Zecora being turned into a hardcore masochist that can cum only from strong e-stim (and ideally with permission only) is hot idea. >>41563956Heh, and this is why i'm hoping the arts will inspire people into co-funding this, because what you're describing is basically a plot development. Personally i think this idea is for a third or fourth picture of this "set" and will definitively require a follow-up. . Heck, if i had enough cash i would order her suiting process too.
>>41564066I get what you mean, it needs to be somethingHeck, you could even extend this plot if the curse was involved. Each time the escapee zebra finds refuge with someone, she ends up corrupting that person and becoming their plaything through blackmail/force/etc, and either manages to escape or end up being sent to a different fate to escape from. >hardcore masochist that can cum only from strong e-stim (and ideally with permission only)Man there could to be some way to insert e-stim into the tribal lore. Maybe an enchanted gem that gives her bean a zap that grows stronger the longer she keeps touching the uncovered part ? >>41559540Something that activates only when she tries touching herself without someone fucking her ? Or the opposite, as to discourage her from focusing on her pleasure while she's being used ?
>>41564185>I get what you mean, it needs to be somethingForgot to complete that. I needs to be something that forces her situation using the entire context instead of just one person.
>>41564066>suiting processHow do you figure that could be shown ? Lying shackled to a slab ? Cuffed while standing on two legs in a X style ? Hanging cuffed to a pillar/totem as part of a marking ceremony ? https://derpibooru.org/images/817914>>41564795Should Rarity be a doll collector ?
>>41564909>Should Rarity be a doll collector ?Don't you mean should Rarity be a collectible doll?
>>41564185You're correct, part of the appeal of this scenario is that everything is stacked against Zecora and even her friends will soon want to hold her leash. Heck, Pinkamena may be the result of the curse taking hold.>some way to insert e-stim Gems are obvious, but what if the suit itself was cursed to torment her if no owner is available?It can also keep her horny and zap her if she tries to touch herself, or more likely it will train her this way to be a masochist. >>41564909Honestly i would imagine the process as a ritual, with her being held in the air by some ethereal golden shackles with the suit and piercings floating around her, maybe with some ghostly faces here and there too.Huh, maybe her suit can even be posessed, hence the curse.
>>41563894Interesting! Any reason or story narrative or quick synopsis haha?>>41563874Gotta say rarity! Or princess celestia, royal and snooty slave having to suffer musky balls
>>41565822Sounds like a finnicky logic, but it feels like she wouldnt be a fan of degrading acts that dont involve the dick in some way. As in she would hate being stuck just sniffing the stallion's balls, but wouldnt mind worshipping his cock.Does it make sense ?As for Gallus, I mostly suggested him thinking of size mockery. He keeps being reminded of how stallions have a much bigger junk than his anytime he walks behind one with their balls hanging out.I wouldnt imagine him liking being stuck having to worship that mockery right up his face.
>>41565628>Pinkamena may be the result of the curse taking holdThat would be a good idea, her being the most dangerous curse outcome out of all the mane 6.>the suit can also keep her horny and zap her if she tries to touch herself.Sounds like the piercings should be the conduits to whatever magical energy the suit has. And some of those could vibrate as ocasional reminders.>more likely it will train her this way to be a masochist.Learn to get self pleasure through pain or give in and find an owner.And whenever the piercings enter a "harsh" reminder mode where she almost falls on her knees in teasing agony, she'll need the pain to regain her focus.>her being held in the air by some ethereal golden shackles with the suit and piercings floating around her, maybe with some ghostly faces here and there too.Huh, maybe her suit can even be posessedA paranormal take ? Would it be something related to a temple role then ?
I want to read a story with a fumbling Diamond mistress who is still learning how to control those three.
>>41565202>Rarity be a collectible dollFor who ?
>>41566989some snobby, rich mare. fleur or spoiled perhaps?
>>41566197Honestly, all of your speculations sounds like a great art idea, i may do something with the e-stim in the second art maybe, at least if i figure out the details. >A paranormal take ? Maybe a little bit. After all Zecora used shamanism and alchemy in the show, so i would imagine that her tribe would use such arts for the suiting and enslaving. Who knows, that old idea about her being a living relic from a long forgotten past may have some merit with this.
>>41567268I was thinking of a different personality for a change. Someone on the egotistical side who sees the unicorn as more of a play thing/ possible trophy wife rather than a partner.
>>41567282Do you plan to put some description for the two pieces ? Or would the exposition be entirely visual ?
this looks something like what Rarity could wear in public
>>41567268>Rarity being given the faceless toy treatment while her little sister receives the best upbringing their rich benefactor could give her
>>41567282Just as an alternative, I was wondering if the latex ouldnt be a liquid concoction which spread across zecora after she was pierced during the ritual, as if the piercings were the binding agent that marked the new idol. Although that takes out the fun of her being stapled to an already made outfit.>do something with the e-stim in the second art maybeIf you add that it might require a mixture of pain and pleasure on her face to make it apparent that its being an obstacle to reach her climax. Unless she was already too self trained at that point to bother her much.
Last bump from me tonight. Wondering who RapeApe picked for the story.
>>41569174I wish I was as fast as I used to be.Also, why is the post delay FIFTEEN MINUTES now?
>>41569800>15 minutesDont tell me 4chan put that stupid anti spam thing on /mlp/ as well.
>>41569802they did...it was annoying when the thread creation was delayed 5 minutes but now its even annoying to make single posts
>>415698864chan is dying
>>41570220appearently its supposed to>>41568252seems fitting for the element of generositymakes me wonder how the other elements could be abused>loyaltyfollowing her friends into slavery?>friendshiplots of slavefriends!>honestybetraying her friends who escaped and telling her owner where they are hiding>laughtertickletorture?
>>41570408>appearently its supposed tohuh? userbase is pretty stable
>>41570408>loyaltyOvervalues obedience ?
>>41568364>liquid concoction A neat idea, but i would have suggested it differently. As it spreads, it would "eat" her fur leaving her basically permanently depilated (for hygiene ), and once the rubber suit is on the liquid would work as an adhesive. So even if her staples get removed, she will still be stuck in her new skin. As for the e-stim, well drawing pain and pleasure shouldn't be that hard, especially with huge dildo in her ass. It will look natural.
>>41570408Maybe Pinkie becomes a nymphomaniac who sees pleasure as the ultimate fun bringer, regardless of how its brought onto her friends.
>>41571297Cursed idol scenario aside, there was another idea I had where this was a ritual to mark the widows of deceased zebra princes and chiefs, who then had to become chaste concubines of the new ruler until their death. A fate Zecora would be trying to escape from after she sneaked out of the palace in a stolen cloak.