>"I heard what you said about my story. If you want to keep your balls you're gonna have to make it up to me, and I mean really put in some work for it."
>if you want to keep your ballsIs there one ballbusting anon that posts this shit or are there a whole lotta you? Should you have a general for it?
I haven’t read it.Should I?
>>41812004its okaysome parts are really good, some parts are comically awful, and the whole thing is overwhelmingly autistic
>>41811993Nice horse, boop, save and pet.
>>41811998It's not a glimmerfag situation, she canonically destroys your balls as a reflex.
>>41812008Is there an abridged version with just the sex and violence without some bullshit story filler?
>>41811993>*quicksaving...*Your story is shit. No, I haven't read it.
>>41811993Sorry, BJ. I'm 32.That would be -12 in your book.
>>41812235It's really not. It's rule of cool and therefore cringe at times, but other than that good
>>41812389Not -11? Wasn't it 21?
>>41812476Hitting 21 means you've reached your retirement date. So the 21 exists only temporary until the deed is performed, making it basically -1.
>>41811993her name is literally blowjob looool
>>41811993She needs booping and correctional cuddles.
>>41812008what!? a fallout x mlp fanfic is autistic ? imagine my shock>>41812137anon it's 1.7 million words, and all of it is sex, rape, child rape, child sex, death, raping dead mares. raping dead *fillies*. and all of it *is* the plot lmao. i read it all and it's all good. absolute kino. but it insists upon itself so fucking much. if i ever get absolutely ridiculous free time. i would re read it again, and pick out chapters that are filler. that don't really matter to overall plot. of which there are hundreds of thousands of words. my gut with zero scientific backing says. we could probably get this down to 500k to 650k words.
>>41811993Blackjack likes her own story? What is this out of character bullshit? She'd beat the shit out of Somber if she could.
>>41812640Maybe less "likes her story" and more "doesn't want to be made fun of
>>41812642You think she doesn't? It's much easier for me to imagine her laughing at the bullshit in her life together with me than getting offended by things out of her control like a bitch.
>>41812710Half-heartedly at most. She had some serious issues due to how fucked up everything was for her
>>41812710she had all her limbs nailed to a plank and gang raped, with them then cutting off all her limbs. not to mention all the terrible deaths of her friends? like p21 dies to give them like 30 seconds of time to escape the moon. rampage is perpetually suffocating up there if i recall correctly. even if she could take it on the chin for herself, she would fuck somber with his own dick for the stuff done to her party.
>>41811993This is out of character, she would never say something like that.
[Terrifying Presence] The only thing you'll be keeping are pieces of your forelegs after I am done beating you to death with them. <Attack?[Barter 22/50] Hey now, surely we can settle this with a game of poker, right? I'll even throw in a a few bottlecaps!>[Speech 35] I have heard worse stories than yours. But I have heard plenty better. What makes yours any different than the many others out there that don't rely on all the blood, gore and sex that yours seems to be filled with? What exactly did I say about your story? I've never seen anything like you around here. ->>41812622For the record, I never read this character's story. Read much of the original FoE and a few spin offs, but apparently it has something of a reputation. If you were to cut out all the gratuitous sex and violence that added nothing to the story, how much would actually be left of the work? FoE was decent for what it was, and it helped set a trend for further crossovers back in the 2011-2014 era. But beyond that, this story it mostly a mystery. Come to think of it, I haven't seen much from that fandom in a while. Is it even still alive?
>>41811993[Agility 8] I'm a sick Chuck, I like a quick fuck.
[Lady Killer] Did it hurt when they ripped your legs off?Works for the female perk too
>>41812885project horizons is leauges better written and more popular I'd say in general than vanilla. at least in certain circles. the sex is a core part of the story, it's like saying the sex is unnecessary in game of thrones. youre not saving reading time by cutting it out, the "filler" is well written and develops some of the characters really well. but could be gotten rid of as it doesn't go to the overall plot, and doesn't introduce material nessary to the story. i read a lot. especially of the fandoms works.just about everything worth reading (within my interests) i have read. millions and millions of words. i can say without a doubt foe ph, is the best written story in the fandom. don't take retards opinion of it seriously, most of them can't fucking read. just go read it or listen to it.
>>41812957Craftsmanship-wise, as in writing skill PH is the best, which is not saying all that much because FoE is pretty bad in that regard. As an ESL I could write something better than the original fic when it comes to writing style. Also note Blackjack is: A cyborg, a cyber-alicorn, an actual chosen one and Princess Luna. This is a Newgrounds coolfic when it comes to how the MC is treated inbetween torture porn sessions. (Also not Littlepip was essentially a side character in her own story) as the "Lightbringer" is much less than what she actually does.
>>41812885There's not a lot of violence or sex to remove, it's mostly the plot itself, which is very convoluted and has a fuck ton of places and characters. There's a particularly big amount of flashbacks in the form of memory orbs and hallucinations. Also the main character's perpetual misery counts for a sizeable amount of the book, there are entire chapters dedicated to her fucked up mind.
>>41812752And in light of all of this, Lacunae was the one who suffered the worst fate of them all.
>>41812807Didn't she happily threaten a stallion to rip his nuts off in a confrontation? I think it was one of the bat ponies.
>>41813147You mean that she wasn't really herself by the end? Neither was she beforehand.
>>41813175>You mean that she wasn't really herself by the end? And that she died completely because of it. She's the only pony who doesn't even have a soul at the end because of her unusual state. She's dead dead. Whereas everyone else is just afterlife dead.
>>41812982simply discounting these things without knowing how they unfold in the story is highly retarded. it's called fantasy, it's meant to be unrealistic. twilight is a magical prodigy born into wealth, taken under the wing of the god of her world, given incalculable power. with all the magical elements for that worlds super weapons just happening to live in the same small village. this doesn't make the story inherently bad if executed well. ya know what? fuck you, you don't get to enjoy my wifes story. you get to read my little dashie and nyx and whatever other slop there is.
>>41813214Hey, hey calm down anon. This was genuine criticism from a genuine place of sympathy. I love BJ and Project Horizons to. The style roasting was about the original FoE. I genuine love this story, no need to defend your waifu's honor.
>>41812957>>41812982>>41812984Guess I'll have to check it out. I've been recently going through my old catalog of works from the 2011-2013 era that I never got around to finishing or reading. I've heard about Project Horizons by reputation, but I was busy reading into other works at the time. I'll go into it with an open mind and see how things turn out. I am curious if the work sticks strictly by the Season 1 fanon that was typical of the era. The period of 2011 to early 2012 was something of a cultural time capsule when the mystery about Equestria was at its highest, when the sky was the limit when it came to coming up and building upon conjecture and speculation that gave the early fandom the oomph it needed to propel it into the cultural zeitgeist of the time. If I remember correctly, Fallout Equestria stuck by the S1 iterations of characters like Luna and the like to the very end, an anomaly among such works considering quite a few fics of the era retroactively turned themselves into a pretzel trying to accommodating canon that... Well, blew a Megaton sized hole in the fanon they utilized. Their attempts to "fix" themselves barely added anything to them at best, and often just was to the fic's detriment. I am *still* running into works of the 2012-2013 era that describe both unicorn and alicorn Twilight in the same fucking paragraph. Is it really too much to ask for a damned work to stick with one and commit? But that's a rant for another thread. As long as the work isn't misery porn for the hell of it, I'll check it out. Maybe it'll even have some juicy gryphon fanon I can poach from to incorporate into my own work that's been sitting on the backburner for a while now.
>>41813160Yeah, but that's a different situation. She was traumatized from rape and if I remember correctly, the stallion was making advances. Here she's coercing anon to do something for her pleasure because he trash talked her life story. It's nonsense, she's supposed to be a forgiving, selfless being akin to Jesus.
>write good 20 chapters of a fanfiction>read PH>you made male Blackjack that succumbs to the horrors of the wasteland instead of being a hero>rope
>>41813265He was literally gambling themed too wtf anons
>>41813221lets us know when you cum for the first time to blackjack lewds anon.
>>41813221No, Fo:E uses S2 Luna.
>>41813618Hmm. I'll have to do a double check on that. I read the Google Docs version back in the day, and saw more than a few pieces of fan art using the S1 version of Luna. I'm going to take a wild guess with the author probably updated their works to match canon since I last read it. If it's the Fimfic version, authors usually seem to provide updated works to suit the then canon of the day. I'll have to hunt down the Google Docs version for both to see if there's been any changes since I last read the former. It's just one hell of a whiplash when going back to read old time capsules and see clumsy attempts to fix in the new canon of the day. Half of those old works wouldn't even be able to pass on the current premise if attempted in the modern day. Oh well. I am positive that the original Fallout Equestria was primarily based on the S1 side of things, if nothing else. Anyway, I'll get to reading. Let's see what this old work has to offer.
>>41813677To me what's even more interesting is that Fallout Equestria was based on FO3, in fact it came out in a similar timespan as NV, which was barely playable at release and I've seen conflicting claims on Kkat being Russian and that being a shitpost. The former would mean Kkat couldn't have played NV before beggining to write the fic, otherwise it's still fairly likely. Which is amazing, because NV is regrettably the most wanked Fallout game and everyone insists that it's the "proper" Fallout game.
>>41813677I want to beat the one on the left to death.
>>41813899Kkat strikes me as a Bathesda fan boy.He probably didn't play New Vegas because it makes Bathesda look bad.
>>41813225>and if I remember correctly, the stallion was making advancesDifferent bat stallion. You're thinking of Stygius, the mute one (who actually got her laid). The pony she 'offered' to unball was the older lord of the castle.
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>>41813899It was based on the first three Fallout games with some references to the Wasteland games as well.
>>41814263You okay there, buddy?
>>41813967Canterlot was literally just Dead Money.
>>41815207Not really. It was literally just a toxic cloud. It can't really be Dead Money without Elijah or the prize inside.It's clealry mostly FO1 + FO3, the NV elements are clearly an afterthought. Caesar's legion basically doesn't have any presence in the actual story, for one.
>>41811993What kind of faggot submissive complex do you need to have in order to like this uber dykeshit, OP?
>>41815250Blackjack isn't a dyke, retard.
>>41815259So a pretty big one?
>>41815262Stop using me for your fantasies, faggot.
>>41815259Blackjack was literally raised to see stallions as brainless fuckmeat without a mind of their own. 90% of men see women that way and are cobsidered straight. She is too much of a sex addict to care for who she's banging with
>>41815372This. She'd fuck everything with a pulse. Though I wouldn't put it past her to bone a ghoul too.
>>41815372>>41815700And you're telling me a school teacher wrote this?
>>41815701Of course.
>>41815701Who else?
>>41815247Do you have autism, by any chance?
>>41815701Truly. One with known psychological issues. He admitted that much himself.
>>41815865No, absolutely not. Why?
>>41815247i never played 3 desu uwu. honestly i didn't even realize how much in vanilla was jist straight ripped from fallout until i started playing new vegas and realized all these factions and things were just straight from there. but honestly i only played nv and then later fallout4 because of project horizons and vanilla. so i think it's a fair trade.
>>41815933Conisdering FoE is in vast majority 3 you'd be in for a ride
>>41815910Liar!
>>41815943t. never played 3 or read FoE
>>41815946I am telling only the truth.
>>41815977The whole enclave affair, chasing a retarded doctor, The Pitt being very similar to the one part of storyline with Red Eye (I believe), Arbu, the focus on slavers, I could give you tens of examples.Meanwhile Fallout 1 has literally only the fact that a Master standing exists, if you stretch it the founding of the NCR. Gawd isn't even that similar to Tandi. And then you have literally the Ceasar's legion as an offscreen killed-off faction. It's 1+3 with some NV sprinkled in
>>41816024>Meanwhile Fallout 1 has literally only the fact that a Master standing exists, if you stretch it the founding of the NCR.>It's 1+3 with some NV sprinkled inYou mean it's 3 with some bits from the other games sprinkled in.
>>41816128Eh it's has significantly more 1 than NV, it didn't feel fair to treat them the same way
>>41811993ah, this fic... read it many a year ago. it had me in the first half, but then I made the mistake of finishing itamazing how a poorly handled ending can absolutely ruin the rest of a storysometimes I get the temptation to revisit, but then I remember how it all ends and I just don't want to invest the time to read 2 million words just for inevitable disappointment
>>41816745To be fair it's hard to write worthy ending for such a long amazing story. Kind of like the Song of fire and ice
>>41816752Not killing everyone in depressing ways would have been a start. But that was always to be expected from somber, I guess.
>>41816752I can understand that, but this one felt like... you have to TRY to make it this badwhy spend all that time developing p21, making so much progress on their relationship, just to have him die in the most contrived bullshit way possible? a tragic twist could work, but it wasn't even a good or earned death, from what I recall
>>41816769>>41816757Somber explained that the story is about BJ's suffering to save the world, all other characters are inconsequential, that's why they all die so BJ can suffer as much as possible.
>>41816790>deconstruction of Christ's storyFucking megalomania much?
>>41816823christs story was allready self indulging. this is fine to use the same elements. plus pretty sure bj would let me eat the cum out of her pussy. i dont think jesus would.
>>41816823>It helps the reading of Horizons if you understand parts of it were writen through a theological deconstruction. Blackjack as the maiden of stars is a deconstruction of Christ. The Eater of souls is the original sin that arrived millenia ago, twisting others to evil and to serve its own ends. The Legate is the devil, consumed with pride and hatred for a world that has no place for him, casting aside things that truly matter like family. Blackjack's clone is like the wandering Jew, forced to travel forever for the punishment of trying to redeem the entire world. Ultimately, Blackjack can not save the world by dying for it, she can only annul the original sin and hope that the world chooses to do better as she wanders through it.
>>41811993should i start reading it just for her?
>>41817307Yes. She is a pretty amazing character, all things considered.
>>41817307No. She is a pretty shitty character, all things considered.
>>41817307Cheers. She's a pretty drunken character, all booze considered.
>>41815701>a story about a bunch of horny jailbait left to stew in their own hormoneswrite what you know, eh?
>>41817307Maybe. She is a pretty average character, all things considered.
>>41817512I think that's more describing Pip rather than Blackjack though. She's the small mare.
>>41816128Kkat a shit
>>41818175consider black later litterally becomes a teacher for a bunch of 12 year olds and spends dozens of chapters justifying why its okay to fuck them. and then on the flip side the kids struggling with their desire to fuck *her* ...idk, mans kinda has it on point.
>>41818674Why do you think Somber stopped being a teacher? So far we have a tranny (Kkat) and a pedophile (Somber) which you can tell from their works quite clearlyDid anyone here read heroes? What could we get from that? Or Murky Number Seven, I read it but don't remember much.
>>41818674Anon, are you meaning to tell me you wouldn't struggle with your desire to fuck Blackjack if you were around her? That's faggotry.
>>41818715no obviously. like we all know kids struggle with sexual desires for adults especially teachers because we all *were* kids. having a good teacher is like having a mother or father figure that you pretty much see as much as your real parents but they typically only encourage you because they are there to teach you, not parent you. so you never get grounded by them or something. it makes really confusing emotions, especially when you're going through puberty. this can totally be written about and explored. its just clearly done in a pornographic way here. which even that I'm fine with. but it's written so poorly (again by another person not somber, unless it's his alt).>>41818712murky suffered for me some of the hardest stagnation of any story. it felt like he kept trying to escape, and failing, over and over. it was also getting hard to picture the prison in my mind. didn't feel like i was conceptualizing it right. so eventually i dropped it. heros was okay, but it just didn't capture me. so i dropped it half way through. nothing captured me like blackjack. shes a groomer, pedophile, sexist and would ruin my life. but I'd still lick the cum from an entire gang bang out of her pussy. no homo.
Murky's my little buddy
>>41811993No problem, just gonna need some hoofcuffs, a blindfold, and lotsa potions
>>41818755>again by another person not somber, unless it's his altit's his girlfriend, or at least she was
>>41819116>Somber wrote a bajillion words of a pony sex story and has a girlfriend What's your justification?
>>41819116theres no shot. that has to be fake? the only thing that makes me even remotely believe it, is the clear difference in quality of the two stories. hers has terrible... well everything. a bit hyperbolic but it's all so blasé and mediocre. it just feels like a whole, my girlfriend goes to a different school so you can't meet here but shes taking me to prom, kind of feel. >>41819205she got pregnant so i had to abort her. kept the kid though. I'm turning them into the perfect kid all tiger mom style.
>>41819491Anon, was he supposed to post pics of her for you to believe? It's not that unlikely. Grown people usually have partners.
>>41818674Was that all in Speak or something? If so, you can just disregard that. Doesn't matter if it's Somber approved or not.
>>41819491I'm pretty sure that's real, Somber doesn't strike me like the kind of guy who would fake shit like this. Here's one bit of evidence.
>>41819530>/me noms heartshine and cuddlesgood he didn't notice her fucking bulge and pounce on herReally, when I read shit like this I am doing my best to not act like my high school self and make a fucking four page essay consisting only of insults and swearwords
>>41819548that sounds just as autistic and retarded just in the opposite direction... so of course i pretty much did the same thing in highscool. >>41819501yes.>>41819499yes. onlyfans now, unless shes ugly. it's not the having a girlfriend thing. its the, having a girlfriend, whose into ponies and wants to write an obtusely long story with his oc's where she makes her a pedophile.
>>41819789She also claims to be a therapist. Seems fitting since Somber is mentally ill.
>>41820005The failed teacher and the cracked therapist. A match made in heaven.
