Villain editionPrevious Edition: >>42546552 Fauster's Story Archive: https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1XiJRe1NWl_kIoWsHssZ27BMV7bZAe1jgX59-dWggYkA/Uh-hmmm's Prompt Archives:https://ponepaste.org/1046Have a broken Pastebin link? Replace pastebin.com with poneb.inRemember:not to save anything of value on Pastebinignore all attempts at early new threadsThread question: What would be your ideal location for a first date?
>>42596447>TQWherever the mare wants to take me, as long as we get to spend time together
>>42596447Thread Question: sugarcube corner that should set the mood perfectly.
>>42596447>Thread questionIf that mare can't guess which specific spot and what specific dish I'm feeling like having today, I'm not putting out sorry not sorry
>>42596566This is why we should normalize hitting colts again
>>42596652Some of them like that.
>>42596447TQ: wine bar
>>42596447Her favorite coffee shop, brisk Sunday morning, talking about hobbies and interests, just getting a vibe for each other
what a cute hoers this is
>>42596984Copper Top is such a cutie, I wish she'd arrest me
>applebloom wants to join (You), Big Mac, Spike, and Discord in your weekly O&O night>applejack unhappy that her little sister is interested in such a nerdy, unmarely hobby as opposed to properly marely things like applebucking and digging holeswat do?
>>42597834Convince Big Appul to join in by telling her how much she and Little Appul and Bigger Appul would bond.
>>42597703>"For the last time, being "bratty" is not illegal.">"It's just annoying."
Stop bumping the thread with your shit skin level post. I just want to talk about how Trixie spanks my bottom.
>>42598190then talk about it then
>>42598295>then bloody then talk then about then it then then thenLmao.
>>42598316if you don't like my grammar then why don't you do something about it then? Then, but then again, I doubt you'd really want to then
>>42598324Don't hurt yourself, Ranjit.
imagine... having sex with fillies (with no legal repercussion because you're the fairer sex). I think that'd be a nice green. I'd write it if I was confident in my character writing skills
>>42598619Yeah I always wanted to write something like that too not with fillies but with older teenage mares but I have the writing prowess of a walnut.
>>42598652you have now reminded me of the little oneshits of green thumb anon with his sequoia-sized orange tree. thank you for thathttps://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/34242678/#q34253434https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/34242678/#q34253877https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/34242678/#q34253954https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/34242678/#q34254580
Well look at here, Anon is trying to buy power tools at the Equestria Wheel again.Didn't we tell you that you'll hurt yourself with those tools.Why don't you go back home to your herd and stay in the kitchen.
>>42598805>"I'M TRYING TO REBUILD MY KITCHEN AFTER THAT RAINBOW BITCH DEMOLISHED IT FIGHTING THE LAST MONSTER OF THE WEEK, YOU STUPID CUNT! NOW TAKE MY BITS AND SELL ME THAT CIRCLE SAW!
>>42598805NO! I'm a strong and independent man who don't need no mare!!!
>>42597998>A colt coming onto you this hard>Being too stupid to take the shotDo mares really live like this?
>>42598929yes? why is that a problem?
>>42598940>E-galsWho is this bitch so I can egg her house
Despite Trixie being a Stacy, she lives in a wagon/trailer. How does that make sense in RGRE?
>>42598954She's a broke Stacy
>>42598929How was she supposed to know that the colt coming up to her and asking to get cuffed to a bed and fucked silly meant he liked her?
>>42598329Yes, it's still shit.
>>42599571Do not insult the cinnamon roll that is Sun-dad
>>42599571Nobody cares about your opinion, faggot. Fuck off back to your shithole if you don't like RGRE greens.
>>42599802>>42599809dumb colts... taking the bait... correction is needed!
>>42598954Colts will literally overlook anything if the mare is a gigastacy.She could be a foal raping murderer and they wouldn't care.
>>42600047>foal-raping murderernot to be a generic stallion, but if a mare was a foal-raping murderer I'd let her do anything to me without resistance
>>42597998Annoyingly sexy?
>>42600114Colts like you should be tossed into the nirik pit
>>42600192oh noooo, not the blazing hot kirins ahaha don't toss me into the pit of hot oriental mares oh nooooo
>>42598954Female equivalent of bad boy drifter with a motorcycle
>once celestia realizes that hyoomans will go extinct once anon passes away she goes from breaking into anon's house to ask if he's made any friends yet to breaking into his house to ask if he's found a marefriend yet>anon is not amused by celestia unwittingly emulating his mother to a T>cadance will be even less amused to learn her auntie is muscling in on her turf
>>42600360Shonen-style anime fight between Celestia and Canedense for the right to control Anon's barren love life
>>42600360How do I tell her I'm far too autistic to fall in love?
Goddamn, she's so sexyI love a mare in uniform...
>>42600360Grabbing Celestia's ass firmly
Stallions are good for two thing and that's cooking and sex.
>>42601341Your stallion can cook?
I keep thinking about how horrible spousal abuse would be in the RGRE setting>Get a marefriend>Nice at first but she quickly becomes abusive>Begins beating you in a regular basis>Wants to expand the herd>Invites all of her abusive friends to join>You don't get a say in this matter>You are now living with 4-5 mares that beat you on a regular basis>Trying to escape or ask for help will probably result in you getting beaten to deathWhat can you even do in that situation?
>>42601373They're not abusive they're just misunderstood
>>42601373I can fix them
>>42601373I have the power of friendship AND anime on my side! With that I will be able to reform them
You buncha' lil Timmy's>Ooh watch out for those marshmallowy soft hooves, they leave boo boos!
>>42600360>Celestia & Condense join forces, brainstorm how to prevent the extinction. And by brainstorm, I mean they ask Twilight.>Twilight points out that to form a minimally-viable stable population of hyoomans they'd need about ten thousands of 'em.>Good thing there's a certain mare specializing in popping out offspring like you wouldn't believe...>Be Chrysalis.>Be confused.>When did these crazy ponies start providing mares with state-mandated alien coltfriends?..
>>42601526>If hyoomans didn't act like endless wellsprings of love Chrysalis would be insulted>She absolutely doesn't go along with it because her new husband likes brushing her mane and polishing her chitin every day
>>42596479Currently working on a green that starts there instead of something like a barBonus points if there's a party going on
>>42601681>a party>not started by, held by, or affiliated in any way with panko pohow does she react?
>>42601754she makes it so that she's affiliated with it, whether they want it or not
>>42601759>they thank ponko for offering, but politely decline and want to do their own little thing>without herwat do?
>>42601765>The colts think they have a choice when it comes to The PinkCute
Where would a femcolt fit in RGREquestria? Is he considered maresculine? Is that just the norm for stallions? Something else entirely? What do you guys think?>Inb4 faggot
>>42601754>>42601759>Be Pinkie Pie>Trotting back home from your overnight visit to Cheese Sandwich>By Celestia that colt can party>As you get closer you notice the distinct sound of music coming from that direction>As Sugarcube Corner comes into view, you spy the lights on while ponies chat around near the entrance>internal gasp.mp3>Did your friends throw a suprise party for you?>That's just like them>Although they could do with learning how to hide it better>Excited to join in, you begin bouncing over to join the party>Just as you're about to enter the doorway however...>*WHAM*>The door slams in your face as you fall back onto your haunches>A couple of the ponies outside look over before going back to their conversations"Owie... What happened?">As you look up you see a monster of a mare standing in front of the doorway>She's dressed in a suit jacket and turtleneck sweater, her eyes covered by a pair of tinted sunglasses with an earpiece poking out from one of it's sides>Her red, slicked back mane frames her cream-colored muzzle as it contorts into a drown >"Name?">She states bluntly, looking down at you with all the regard of a piece of litter"Uh Helloo~? Pinkie Pie? Party pony extraordinaire? Surprise party guest of honor?">You grin at the mare extra wide>This must be a super exclusive surprise party if they have security>You trot in place as she takes out a clipboard and begins flipping through it before looking back at you>"You're not on the list. Beat it">...what?"Okay um, whatever your name is—">"Dick Bouncer">pog.jpeg>You fail at suppressing a giggle as you laugh at whatever horrible parent chose that name>Her frown deepens"Okay, *ahem* Dick Bouncer *giggle snort*, you might want to check your list again, cause I am abso~positiv~ilutely on there">"If you're not on the list, you don't get in. Now move along">She didn't even look again!>The teats on this mare"That's ridiculous! I *LIVE* here, why am I not on the list!?">She steps forward threateningly, chest puffed out as you recognize the height difference between you two>"Are we gonna have a problem here?">oopsie>You probably pissed her off laughing at her name>Momma raised a hugger, not a fighter>You back away from the doorway"Nonono, no problem here! Guess I'll just be on my way...">You take off around a corner as you lose sight of her>Phew! That was a close one>That Dick Bouncer must be the jerkiest jerk of all of dicksville>But...why wouldn't you be on the list?>They couldn't have a party without inviting the best party pony in Equestria, right? >You shake those thoughts out of your head>Of course not! It's at your house after all>With newfound determination, you start to formulate a plan of how to sneak insideThat's all for now, but what will Pinkie do next? Will she evade Dick Bouncer's giant plot? Who could be having a party at Sugarcube corner without her? Is this story going to have any RGRE? That's up to (You) to decide!
>>42602036I want to be Dick Bouncer's eyecandy stallionfriend
>>42602036kinda rude that the cakes didn't let peenki pa know ahead of time that they were renting out SCC and that she'd need to find another place to stay for the night
>>42602089You know I wasn't keen on it at first but as I keep seeing her in my mind I want to go commission some art of her absolutely destroying a stallion in the bedroom by riding them. I didn't describe it but she would have a beauty mark on her muzzle, be wearing dark red eyeshadow, and her cutie mark would be something like the no entry red circle with a line through it
>>42602124She sounds pretty fucking hot ngl. I'd let her boss me around in public.
>>42602036I'm sure pinkie pie knows a back entrance to the sugar cub corner.
>>42602036she should break through a window
>>42602036Someone was able to set this up without her knowing. They're probably very dangerous.
>>42602036Wow, I bet even Caramel and that redneck window washer pony got in
>>42602374>>42602375Part 2:>be Pinkie Pie>You decide that fighting that dick of a bouncer isn’t worth it>Though you’re sure a shot from your party cannon would’ve settled things>Instead, you remember Sugarcube Corner has a back entrance>Dark alley? No problem. You’re a party pony, not a scaredy pony >You weave through the shadows and arrive at the back door>As you feared though, the back entrance is locked up tight>Of course it is>If only you hadn’t lost your spare key in that kite flying accident…>Looking for another way in, you follow the sound of music around the building>A high window sits slightly ajar and you recognize it as the one that leads to the bathroom“Jackpot!”>Pushing a loose trashcan under it, you carefully slide open the window before jumping through>*FWOMP*>Or you would have, save for the fact that your backside wasn’t so generously plump“Oh come on! Curse these-*grunt*-fat flanks! Why don’t they make-*shuffle*-windows like these-*creak*-pony sized?”>You make a mental note: only half a baker’s dozen cupcakes per day>Starting tomorrow>With a satisfying pop, you squeeze through and land on the floor with a thud>Ow.>Before you can recover, you realize you’re not alone>Leaning against the sink is a stallion you don’t recognize>His eyes look you over as a smug grin takes over his face>”What was that about fat flanks?”>Oh horseapples>With a face more red than pink, you scramble to pull yourself off the floor“F-fat flanks? What flanks? I don’t even have flanks! I’m just a pony! In a bathroom! With a colt! Pleasedon’tgetthewrongidea!”>Digging yourself deeper with every word you decide the best course of action is to just apologize profusely while praying he doesn’t start screaming>Instead though, he laughs while moving closer>”It’s okay sweetheart, I was about finished anyway. And I KNOW how much you mares want to get into a party like this one~”>His hoof lifts up your chin, amusement still evident in his voice>He leans in>”And take it from me—some stallions like their mares on the ~thick~ side”>With a wink, the stallion unlocks the bathroom door behind you before sauntering off back to the party>You’re left stunned, confused, and *evidently* aroused>Just what kind of surprise party is this?!>Splashing some water on your face from the sink, you decide to try and discover that for yourself>Open the bathroom door>Music and lights cover the dancefloor as stallions and mares talk, dance, and eat>But mostly stallions>Very attractive stallions>It was time for detective Pinkie to crack this case>Before you can go upstairs however, you notice a certain annoying somepony blocking the way upstairs>None other than Dick Bouncer>She’s talking to another well-dressed mare>Celestia dammit, is her special talent blocking plot progression?!>You need a plan>You think of what to do…What next Anons?(Pinkie flag for better tracking)
>>42603025Kill. Wait nevermind that's stupid an irresponsible. Throw something from the bathroom to draw Dick Bouncer's attention away from you so you can sneak past her.
>>42603025Blend in with the crowd, observe for a bit, and sneak upstairs if an opportunity arises on its own.
>>42603025Fuck that colt. Everything else can wait.
>>42603025>>If only you hadn’t lost your spare key in that kite flying accident…that's a fucking ben franklin reference, isn't it?
>>42603025You do have that super secret Pinkie cave in the basement where you keep all your stuff. Maybe get in there to find something useful.
>>42603047>>42603346Part 3:>be Pinkie Pie>Thinking of a plan for how to sneak past Dick Bouncer>Lightbulb.png>You need a distraction>Blend into the crowd as you make your way over to the snack table>Nothing distracts you more than cupcakes—so these ought to work>Line up your shot to knock over some drinks near the stairs>dice+1d20>[1] ; Critical Fail!>The cupcake soars through the air>And lands directly on Dick Bouncer’s head>Her head snaps around immediately, fury leaking from behind her sunglasses>”WHO THE BUCK THREW THAT?”>record scratch.mp3>The music dies>Ponies freeze>Suddenly you find yourself singled out>Eyes lock on you in recognition>”YOU!”“Haha… surprise?”>You’re so bucked>Bouncer launches herself towards you like a heat-seeking missile>You take the opportunity to start running”Can’t we talk this out? I think that cupcake looks good on you!”>”RAAAAAAH!”>Whatever thoughts she might have had have devolved into fury>She’s swinging wildly, you’re just barely dodging>Ponies are scrambling to get out of the way as the party turns into chaos>Well, this certainly was a distraction>Time for Plan B>You dive behind the main counter and press the secret button behind the cupboard>To the Party Cave!>A trapdoor opens up beneath you>You drop as Bouncer lunges>It snaps shut as you’re sent sliding down into the darkness beneath the floors of Sugarcube Corner to your party planning HQ>That was way too close>The lights flicker on as you land in a pile of pillows“That meanie-pants needs to learn how to take a joke! But at least I’m safe now. Thank you, emergency escape route number seven!”>You catch your breath>Time to investigate! >You check your supplies>Balloons, streamers, frosting tubes>All untouched>Hmm… suspicious>Doesn’t seem like anything was missing>This must have been an outside job>Then you spot it >The calendar on the wall>Your trip to see Cheese was highlighted in glitter and doodles>It ended in today’s date for your return>But wait>You squint as you re-read the calendar>That’s TOMORROW’S date>You came back a day early >Which means this party wasn’t scheduled for your return >It was scheduled for when you were still gone>DunDunDUUUUN“Wait a minute! If I wasn’t supposed to be back yet, then that means… somepony planned this party without me on purpose!”>Your chest begins to tighten>But who planned this party?>And why didn’t they want you here for it?>Thoughts crowded your headspace>But you knew what you had to do>To get to the bottom of this, you need to go to the top>Your eyes move to the ladder that led back up to your bedroom>Looks like you’re crashing this party whether they like it or not>You climb the ladder>Voices echo from the other side>Somepony was in your room!>You peek out cautiously to see…Sorry for the delay! Will probably pick this back up tomorrow. Any more ideas?
>>42603217Call it "classical inspiration"
>>42603820>surprise! it's actually Princess Celestia herself who hosting a party with Equestria's hottest stallions in one of the best barkeries she knows (she's here for the cake and dick)
>>42603820>This must have been an outside jobkek
>>42603820>Any more ideasSomehow Gummy did it, I just know it
>>42603820Well whoever is throwing this party knows you're here now. You were kind of loud. Hopefully the twins are safe from Bouncer. Anyway, whoever is having fun in your room is about to have more fun when you burst in.
>>42603820It's the Cakes making a few more twins
>>42604114god damnit that's funny
>>42604371>>42604463Fortunately for them, the Cakes decided to take the twins on vacation while Pinkie was on her trip. But they probably (for the better) don't know what's going on in their business tonight
>>42603820Can I comfort a raging Dick Bouncer while she fumes about Pinkie getting away?
>>42604513>Cup Cake gets so pissed she breaks out her old mafia connections>Carrot's fw
>>42604522Currently working so going to throw all the Dick Bouncer fans a bone while you wait. Thank me later, Anon>Be Anonstallion>Helping ponies clean up the mess caused by some mare chasing another around the party>You didn't think things would go this way when you received that mysterious invitation in the mail>Speaking of which>Said mare is now sulking over a drink while presumably her boss chews her out>You feel a bit of sympathy for her>When she isn't charging around like an angry minotaur>She's actually pretty cute>You decide to approach her>When her boss storms off, you slide into the seat next to her"Hey, everything okay?">She gives you an annoyed look>"What do you think, colt? I lost my cool and let that pink bitch get away. Not to mention the scolding.">She downs the last of her drink>"I swear if I ever see that pony again I'll—">She slams her hooves on the table as she tries to calm her breathing"Hey hey! Enough of that!">You grab her hoof and try to soothe her"I don't know what she did to upset you but you're obviously really upset about it. I'm sure you can find a healthy way to release some of that pent-up anger?">She stares at you for a few seconds before breaking into a laugh>"Hahaha! You're alright, colt. Easy on the eyes, too. Most stallions would be running away by now.">Her grin turns mischievous>"Tell you what, join me for a drink and we can talk about it all you want. That sound good?">You smile>This is good progress!>You knew there was a good mare under all that outrage"Sure, I'd like that">You wait at the table while she fumbles back with some drinks>You clink glasses as you start to yap>She's surprisingly funny as she tells you about her past experiences of dealing with drunk mares and rabble-rousers>You find yourself giggling>Your face feels flush>Wait, was the room always spinning like that?>Her previously happy expression changes to something more... predatory>"Huh, guess it's kicking in already. Not surprising considering how much I put in there">There's no way>This bitch ROOFIED you!>You try and get up to leave but find yourself falling forward>Right into her awaiting hooves>She wastes no time forcefully shoving her tongue in your mouth as your met with the taste of alcohol and cigarettes>"You should count yourself lucky, I don't pick just any colt to be my personal bucktoy for the night">You weakly protest as you feel her marehandle your limp body over her shoulder>"All that talk about pent-up stress? I could tell you were begging for a piece of this.">Dammit>This is why you shouldn't be nice to strangers, Anon>Too many rapists>Bringing you up the stairs, she ducks into an open room and tosses you on the bed>"I never mentioned my name, did I? It's Dick Bouncer">Her evil grin widens as she pins you to the bed>Even without being drugged you would have been no match for this earth pony's strength>"I'll teach you tonight why I live up to that title">rape
>>42604784It's okay when Dick Bouncer does it because she's a 9/10 Trixie. Also>implying she'd need to drug me
>>42604784If only there's a stronger mare can knock out this rapest try to have her way with us.
>>42600197>>42600192Where is this nirik pit? So I can go make sure no one is climbing back out of it and totally not go check it out myself.
This is my first RGRE green so hopefully you guys like it:>Be anon>Prince of unicornia>At least you were>You are soon to be the spoils of war>It was too late to escape, you can hear them outside your bedroom>The marebarians>The door breaks open as two earth ponies enter>They tower over you, easily twice as big and heaven knows how many times stronger than you>As a prince you were never forced to work out and you were never taught any defensive spells>You're sure your mother regrets that decision>"There you are, colt. We can do this the easy way or the hard way. The choice is yours" one of the mares say>Her coat is wine red and her ruffled mane is bone white>"Come on colt, just walk along and nopony gets hurt" the other mare says>Her coat is white and her curly mane is dark brown>You back yourself into a corner of the room>"The hard way it is" The red one mutters before biting your mane and dragging you out>You flail with all your strenght but it's useless>She doesn't even flinch when you strike her>"ANONYMOUS!" you hear as you enter the throne room>It was your mother's voice>Her legs were tied together>Her horn was cracked>By her side was the leader of the marebarians>Her coat was golden and her curly mane was crimson>She was wearing your mother's crown with a wide grin on her face>The two mares escorting you begin ripping off your tuxedo before pinning you down>"LET HIM GO!" your mother screams with pure, unfiltered desperation>"Why would I? I have the loveliest piece of meat in this kingdom and you expect me to just let him go?">She laughs as she walks up behind you>"You're delusional if you think he isn't going with me">You feel her hoof touching your ball bra>"The king must have been a wonderful stallion if this is how his sun turned out">She rips off your ball bra and begins fondling you, much to your mother's horror>Tears begin to stream down your face"Please... not in front of her...">"Your wishes are orders, my prince">She laughs as she stops molesting you>She unsheaths her sword as she approaches your mother>Realization hits you and your mother at the same time"STO-">Your words die in your mouth>She...>Through the heart..."mom...""Mom!""MOM!">Something inside you breaks>You've never cried as hard in your entire life>At some point you stop struggling altogether>Everything becomes a blur as you are taken to your new home
>>42605326from an objective standpoint, not bad. the content isn't really my cup of tea (anonstallion, outright cruelty, murder) but it is rgre enough. my recommendation is to get into the habit of using proper capitalization and grammar, even for greentext. Periods are your friend.as for typos that I found:>It was too late to escape, you can hear them outside your bedroomtwo related, but independent clauses. if you want to use a comma you need to use 'and' after it "and you can hear them", or use a semicolon "to escape; you can hear them...">if this is how his sun turned outson*your greenline and blackline is spot on, and properly follows whomever has the current PoV, so good job there.7/10, good first green
>>42605326>Be anon>Spoils of war>It's been a few weeks since you were taken in by the marebarians>Forced to live with your captors >Your hooves are shackled >Your horn has a magic supressing ring>At least you have a bedroom of your own>It's more of a prison, really>The door opens>She enters>Bone Marrow>Out of the three you hate her the least>She's kind to you>Compared to the other two that is>"Hey anon, I have something special for you. Just don't tell the others.">She pulls something out of her saddlebags>It's a bottle full of liquor>"I was thinking you and I could share it, what do you think?">Your jaw clenches but you nod>She sits by your side and offers you the bottle>You grab it and begin to drink it>It burns your throat but you don't stop>She has to pry away the bottle from you>"Heh, didn't expect the prince to be an alcoholic.">Of course you want alcohol; you are fucking miserable>She drinks what is left of the bottle>You can feel it>The pleasant numbness of alcohol>You also begin feeling something else>Heat. So much heat>You can't think straight>"How are you feeling, my prince?""What... what did you do?>"I gave you something to make you feel better. It's nothing special, really. Just some liquor mixed with aphrodisiacs.">"I know you hate it whenever we force you to rut us but it doesn't need to be unpleasant.">She pins you down with ease>You are forcibly kissed by her>Harder than diamonds>"Here, let me show you...">Your face is pressed against her chest; all you see is the white of her coat>Like many times before you are forced inside her>It feels different>It feels GOOD>She feels tighter than ever before>Your hips begin moving on their own >You don't care that she's your captor>You don't care that she is raping you>You just want to feel more...>Your body is shaking>Your head hurts>You are a sweaty mess>You don't care>All you care about is eating out Bone Marrow's ass>"Good colt..." she moans softly>"We can do this again another time, how does that sound?""That sounds wonderful.">You go back to eating her out>If you can feel like this again maybe this place would be bearable
>>42605728>eating out Bone Marrow's assWish I had that picture of a puking cat.
>>42605326>>42605728Brutal. Twilight probably read this part of the history book several times.
>>42605865>"Gee, Twilight, you seem to really like learning about Equestria's Dark Ages. What's got you so interested?""Uh, the uh, um...Swords are cool?"
>>42605728>Be anon>Slut>It's been a year since you've been taken by the marebarians>At least you think it's been a year>You don't know>You don't care>It didn't take long for the secret between you and Bone Marrow to come out>It only made things better>You get booze and aphrodisiacs on a daily basis>A small part of you still hates your captors but you have learned how to tune it out>All for the sake of pleasure>A sudden hoof to your cheek snaps you out of your thoughts>"Come on colt! If you want a piece of me you'll need to beg for it!">Your vision was blurry but that golden coat will never leave your mind>The mare who murdered your mother in front of you>The mare who took everything from you>Gilded dagger>You wanted her to drown you in pleasure but a small part of you still remembered>You glared at her and she began to laugh sadistically>She strikes you once again, harder this time>"What's the matter with you? You forgot the meaning of words?">She strikes again and you get knocked to the floor>Her hoof is about to crush your skull"I... I want you! I want you to use me!">She releases her hoof>"Good colt...">She pulls you in for a kiss>Her breath reeks of alcohol and tobacco>It fully overwhelms the taste of blood in your mouth>You are pushed to the floor again and receive your reward>The sheer pleasure you feel is almost enough to make you forget>But it's not enough>It's never enough...>Be anon>Future ruler of unicornia>For the time being you're just a little colt>Most importantly today is your birthday>Your mother is a very busy mare but today she will spend the entire day with you>You're so excited you woke up before sunrise>You peek out from your bedroom door>The halls are empty>Perfect>Sneaking towards your mother's bedroom you open the door >She's not there>Why isn't she in her room? She's supposed to be asleep>"Nice try Anonymous, but you underestimate how early royal duties begin.">You quickly turn around to see your mother behind you>Her coat is white with the slightest hue of green>Her emerald eyes, albeit tired, are filled with love towards you>Her precious son>"Of course, my only duty for today is making sure that the prettiest colt in the kingdom is happy on his special day.">You rush in to hug her and she wraps her hooves around you>It feels so nice>So warm>So... wet?>You pull away from the hug and see a gaping, bloody hole in her chest>"What's the matter, Anonymous? I thought you'd like to see me after so long.">Her eyes are completely lifeless now>"Come here my son, it's rude to keep me waiting, you know?">You wake up with tears in your eyes>Why?>Why can't you just forget everything?
>>42606127"So what happened next Twilight?">"Oh that's when the great swooping happened.""Pegasus.">"You got it. Like a horde from the skies, they raided the earth pony marebarians. The poor prince was very unlucky."
>>42606127>You hear screaming outside your bedroom door>It brings back memories>Not the good kind>The door breaks open and the intruder enters>She was a bat pony but something was clearly wrong about her>Her eyes were lifeless and her body was covered in deep cuts>She wasn't breathing nor was she bleeding>Your new foalnapper was an undead>"My lady demands your pressence as soon as possible. Do not resist," she says in a deadpan voice>You know better than to fight and so, you follow her>Outside your bedroom lies the lifeless bodies of your captors>Even though they deserved it you can't help but mourn their deaths a litte>You don't even know why>As soon as you step outside the undead pony grabs you and begins to fly away>After hours of uninterrupted flying she finally lands at the top of a tower in the middle of nowhere>Going downstairs you find who you assume to be your new captor>A unicorn mare with a dark purple coat and black mane>Even though she wasn't as big as the marebarians she was still very much taller than you>"You're finally here. Good to see they didn't rough you up too much," she says calmly, though you can hear a tinge of excitement in her voice"Who are you?">"My name is Vita Nova. Just a humble necromancer that is in need of an assistant. And you, Anonymous, are just what I'm looking for.">You don't want any of this>Even peasants know better than to work with necromancer>Then again you don't have much of a choice, do you?"Why me?">"Because the unicornian nobility has unmatched magical talent. Even you hold that trait, believe it or not. It would be a waste not to put it to good use.">"Besides, I'm planning to revive a very special somepony. One that I'm sure you'll want to see alive again.""What do you mean?">She smirks>"Follow me.">She leads you into a chamber>It's mostly empty except for the coffin in the middle>She urges to take a peek>Inside there is...>No...>This can't be happening>Inside the coffin there is your mother>The blood in her chest is all dry and her eyes barely have any color in them>"What do you think? Preserving her body was a pain in the ass but it was worth the effort.">You open your mouth and then close it>For several minutes you are without words"H-how am I supposed to help you in reviving her?">She grins in response>"Did you know that a lot of necromancy rituals involve 'the seed of life'?">Instinctually, you begin to harden>"Good colt."
>>42606315Well this has taken a turn.
>My first RGRE fic guys.>Devolves into smut in the second post.Everytime...
>>42606315>Be anon>Personal assistant of Vita Nova>You're mostly in charge of providing her with 'the seed of life', though she is also teaching you the basics of necromancy>You are also, very much her slut>The lines tend to blur together quite often>Currently rutting Vita Nova inside a ritual circle>The lack of booze and aphrodisiacs make it a downgrade but you don't dare say it out loud>"Faster!">You comply as best as you can but your legs are getting tired>"I said faster!" "I... I can't.">Her horn begins to glow and you are enveloped in her magical aura>Your hips begin moving on their own>It hurts but your body doesn't stop moving>Your heart feels like it's about to explode>You cum inside her and she lets you go>A white flame appears in the middle of the circle which she collects in a flask>"Good colt. With this I think we're ready to revive her>Your eyes widen"You really think so?">"Of course," she says smugly>"You should clean yourself up first. You're in no shape for a family reunion.">You nod and head towards the bathroom where undead servants await you>They are sapient>You know they are sapient>They pretend they aren't so they can force themselves into the bathroom with you>They forcibly scrub all of your body against your will>Their hooves always take their time in cleaning your balls>Back when you were a prince this would be unacceptable>Now it just feels natural to get touched all over by mares>At least the undead ponies are cute in their own sort of way>They eventually let you out of the bathroom>You look for Vita Nova>She's outside your mother's chamber>She locks eyes with you"Did you do it?">She nods>You're about to enter when suddenly she stops you>"Before you enter I just want to warn you that she... may be a little different from what you remember.""What do you mean?">"Being brought back from the dead changes ponies. It's still her but what she went through changed her just as much as you.""What's different about her?">She smiles>"That's for you to figure out.">You enter the room>She's standing in the middle>The hole in her chest has healed>Her eyes, while lifeless somehow were filled with love and something else>Something sinister"M-mom?"
>>42606391>>42605326Honestly I tend to prefer the hint of adult content rather than just devolving into rape and murder for plot progression. I care nothing for these characters from just a few lines of dialogueALSO, announcing the color of a pony in every line immediately after their introduction is a big nono. Pulls you right out of it. The timeskip was also unnecessary but I see what you were going for there. Overall there's more porn in here than plot, but if that's what you're going for, fineI give it a 4/10
>>42605925Twilight is a sex fiend >>42606127Also this is dark.
>>42606522I am interested, in how the meeting with mom will go
>>42606522Is she going to rape him
>>42606391I kind of got the impression that it's actually another anon that's writing that. Could be wrong, though.Funny, and here I already created a whole different scenario to how it might continue from the point his mother got killed.
>>42606762Yeah, I can't wait for page 11.
>>42606522Some real sword and sorcery shit.
>leave bed chambers>hear a colt talking>day ruined
>>42607526it's those that talk the most that give the best head
>>42606522>"Anonymous!">She rushes in for a hug>"My sweet, sweet Anonymous...">"I thought I would never see you again.""I missed you too mom.">You reciprocate the hug>"When I was about to die I realized something. I realized that being a queen didn't bring me joy.">"You were my one true source of happiness.">Her hug begins to tighten>"I didn't know how much I loved you until now.">"But it's alright. We can make up for lost time now.">She lets go off the hug and kisses you>In the lips"Mom!?">"It's alright Anonymous. This is just the ultimate way of loving somepony. Don't you love me?""I do, but not like this!">Her horn flares up>You are pinned to the floor with her magic>"Now, now. I don't want you throwing a tantrum.">Part of her magic begins touching you down there>It feels good>Way too good>You begin to harden>"Your father always loved when I did that," she says with a giggle"Please, stop!">You begin to cry>She gets on top of you>You are pulled into another hug as you are forced to rut her>Your head is firmly pressed against her chest>It reminds you of when you were a little colt>"No need to cry Anonymous. Those monsters took you away from me and used you for pleasure.">"But you are safe now. Everything will be alright.">"Because we're finally together again.">She comforts you as her hips move gently up and down>You stop crying at some point>You feel at peace>You feel loved>You get it now. It doesn't matter if this is wrong>This is the purest form of love there is>You cum inside her as she kisses your forehead>"Ready for another round?">You nod...>Be anon>Vita Nova's apprentice>Also mama's precious colt>Both of you are learning the art of necromancy>Mom is a natural at it>Perhaps because she is an undead herself>You are still Vita Nova's slut but you make sure to give mom plenty of love too>And some of the undead servants>Does that mean you're technically in a herd?>Your mom sure thinks so>She's even talking with Vita Nova about getting new herdmates>Undead of course>You don't mind that>Taking revenge on the marebarians sounds pretty nice>Getting new herdmates as a result is a plus>Overall things are looking up for you>And who knows? Maybe you'll wind up being a ruler in due time as well>You sure are excited about the futureThe end.
>>42607729Thanks, that was terrible. So bad that I'm tempted to take the premise and rewrite it.Also, the word "barbarian" came about because Romans couldn't understand their language, and it sounded like they were saying "bar bar". Therefore, marebarian language sounds like them saying "mare bar mare bar mare bar"
>>42607809More green is always good, but I am sad that I was right about the rape. Sigh Like really i kinda understand it for the other chapters but that last one just makes it seem, hollow>>42606844
>>42607729I enjoyed reading your green, so great work on that!
>>42607729Some real twisted stuff here Anon. Glad you wrote it.
>>42607896This green has been the most midless fun I've had while writing in a good while. Glad you enjoyed it
>>42607912*Mindless
>>42607729well there's not much room for development in stories as short as these, but you could probably stand to linger on the feelings a little more.the incest ending was very out of left field.
>>42607870I will say i did enjoy it
>>42607526>Good day, we detest colts>Greetings from Kazakhstan
>>42607526Talking about your tiny butt.
big mare needs a big hat4u
