Come one and all to the meta-writefag and help raise the quality of MLP fanfiction! Featuring: Celestia, the Barbarian!ITT: The woes of inbreeding, good HiE remains elusive, it's okay to do the most awful things imaginable if you feel bad about it afterwards, the moon, shitpost summaries, unintentional troon comedy, Celestia manipulates events so Anon never reincarnates in Equestria, gigaslut virgins, pone vidya, raising your brother's rapebaby, you need a doctorate to fuck horses, getting triggered, anon learns about women's degeneracy, the signs of SS&E's faggotry, so much SEEEEEEEX, Twimom, I must mention genitals in my comfy SoL story, PaaL just ain't worth it, Holiday writing, pony migration, Rarity is a terrible mom, and a 47k long Terminator crossover.>/fimfic/ Secret Book ClubThe one hundred and forty third books are Tower of the Fallen Star and Succession:https://www.fimfiction.net/story/2432/school-dazeIf (You) want to participate, read up to and including "Chapter 7: Mad World" by December 14th.Past bookclubs: https://ponepaste.org/11255>Recommended stories:Tired of authors crossing over a dozen IPs? Fed up with downer shipping? Well, we've compiled the best of the worst in order to bring you our absolute average!New Starter Kit - http://mlpficreviews.org.uk/starter/Old Starter Kit - http://i.imgur.com/vuTA7EN.png (embed)>Common fic abbreviations used by the thread:https://ponepaste.org/7317>A list of reviews made by the Anons in this thread:http://www.mlpficreviews.org.ukUse the commands ">review <story link>" and ">discuss <story link>" to add reviews to a story.Userscript for extra features: https://ponepaste.org/8619>An in-depth writing guide for beginners:https://eznguide.neocities.org/>Additional material for authors:Rhorse's Horse Behavioral Notes - https://ponepaste.org/932Politics and the English Language - https://www.orwell.ru/library/essays/politics/english/e_polit/Vhatug's tips for anatomically correct clop - https://poneb.in/g4VpEg4fSetting a story in motion - https://youtu.be/ufO8LbwTdu0Purdue Online Writing resources: https://owl.purdue.edu/owl/index.html and https://owl.purdue.edu/owl/subject_specific_writing/creative_writing/writers/index.html>Can you pre-read my story?Post it on Google Docs or HackMD with comments enabled and give us a link.>Various reviews and riffs:Fillyanon's Bookshelf - https://ponepaste.org/5555Notkickass222urmom's Reviews - https://pastebin.com/u/notkickass222urmomIHeartShinzakura's Reviews - https://ponepaste.org/user/IHeartShinzakuraAppleanon reads fics - https://poneb.in/wmGX7FPmDeluxe Big Master Review List - https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1z9Bz7UnEbxo-svlXa2tV49PJkP-yFuR7pRXiBUn-IeUA Guide to Rational Fics - https://files.catbox.moe/3jzrfm.pngThe Royal Canterlot Library's Top 16 Fanfics - https://royalcanterlotlibrary.net/top16/Previous Thread: >>42848680
First for best duo!Enjoy this conveniently packaged Tuna: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/144948/the-princess-of-books
>>42866133Dang. Missed an embed...
>>42866134Third for best trio!
>>42866156Damn I can't believe Twilight got her pregnant lesbians
>fic is 99% ai written>apparently very little human intervention>still dies
>>42866296>still diesWell yeah?
>>42866306For human-written fics I can understand, since writing a chapter is a lot of work, and people get busy, or lose motivation after months/years on the same project. But with ChatGPT doing most of the work, you'd think they'd be more likely to keep going to some kind of reasonable conclusion.
>>42866320Why would a writer that uses chatGPT for everything care about what they pump out? At least human writers put some effort while AI writers just like playing pretend until they get bored
>>42866320They're already incredibly lazy, you're surprised they're lazy in other ways too?
>>42864604>Why do we need the fishbowl?For the grimdark. No, really. The author said in the comments the original inventor of the spell explicitly made it malicious because there's no rational reason to make a spell that inefficient and impractical. Now, why no one in a thousand years ever tried to improve the efficiency is a different question.
>>42866133>The one hundred and forty third books are Tower of theYou fucked that up OP
>>42866794I fuck up a lot of things.
>>42866296>train an ai on fimfics>train it so well it starts canceling its own fics partway through
>>42867074>starts writing inane blogposts on its own
>>42867057Why does the moon have craters like that
>>42867074Like an AI needs help being convinced to kill itself.
>>42867261>cratersAnon, I...
>>42867261It’s from my penis wenis (:
>>42867261>pointing out luna's celluliteRIP Anon
>>42867405But Celestia is the fat princess!
>Rarity is a terrible momLike we needed confirmation on that.
>>42867261>not recognizing lunar mariaThey're just moon phase themed
>>42867905Her name's Luna, not Maria
>>42867961Well, Maria was also in space for most of her life so it's an understandable mistake.
>>42867961I liked Lauren's original plan of calling her Selena.
>>42868003You mean Selene?
>>42868309If you die in battle during a full moon this is the first thing you see after btw.
>>42868314>full moonAnon, I...
>>42868332It takes a while to die, okay?
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/583749/the-river-the-woodsI want to like this, I do. But holy fucking SHIT it badly needs a proofreader
>>42868521Be the change you want to see in the world.
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/387047/farmer-bruener-has-some-poniesI decided to start reading this again after dropping it several years ago since I noticed that the author was still updating it extremely slowly. The biggest problems with it are 1 Trying to focus on to many characters and 2 which is partly downstream of 1 having the story be paced such there isn’t much time in which we see the characters develop relationships with eachother. leaving the interaction that are shown feeling somewhat hollow and unbelievable. From what I’ve read so far there’s together between the humans and ponies over a dozen sorta main characters which all can go several chapters between appearances and then only get a scene in which they are in with a few thousand words at max in which a given characters dialogue is only a little fraction of that. The story is also just kinda boring, since it’s mostly characters that aren’t particularly deep or fleshed out and that the reader hasn’t had much time to get invested in interacting in a context and plot that has not been established and presented to the reader in a manner that inclines them (or at least me) to be particularly invested in what happens in it.
>>42868589>The story is also just kinda boringA 200k PiE fic hasn't gotten to the "feds find out there's aliens" part of the plot yet?
>>42861466>https://www.fimfiction.net/bookshelf/600138/now-reading>(This is your one week warning!)>review is slated for the 22nd
>>42868682He just wants to make sure we know.
>>42868681That’s some early chapter. I don’t remember precisely and I don’t care enough to go check what one it was. So far in the plot the affair is being handled locally and interpersonally by the state governor and other local forces and individuals that happened to come into contact with the ponies early. At first it seemed like the author was setting up the federal government or at least the fbi as an antagonistic force since they wanted to take the ponies away but then the problem was mostly resolved.
Bump
>>42869002Say that to my face, you fucking son of a bitch.
>>42869002
>>42869002Look at her go!
>>42869356I used to do that a lot as a toddler.Any good stories about the Princesses being kids?
>>42869488Bug on a Stick. Without the epilogue.
>>42869488https://www.fimfiction.net/story/390701/bedtime-for-princessesThis, I guess?
>>42868589I have decided to drop the fic again out of spite.
>>42869911You should continue it out of spite
